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Aqua Timez - Alones

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ztrot
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ztrot
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, July 31, 2009 at 4:50:16 PM

Artist: Aqua Timez
Title: Alones
Source: bleach
Tags: Bleach aqua times O.B.T. obt animask
BPM: 95.17
Filesize: 17084kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. animask's Normal (4.23 stars, 146 notes)
  2. DJPop's Easy (1.99 stars, 83 notes)
  3. Mafiamaster's Insane (4.99 stars, 293 notes)
  4. Starrodkirby86's Hard (4.92 stars, 226 notes)
  5. ztrot's Hollow (4.5 stars, 170 notes)
Download: Aqua Timez - Alones
Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Plz rebubble My falut
I fixed Our skin
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Ryuukun
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RaisTF
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RaisTF
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Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
We didn't even finish the voting for the 2nd beatmap yet though.
I'll mod this later~
ztrot
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ztrot
kirby here some of the stuff for SB





Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
For Easy, possibly lower the overall difficulty a little bit.

For Normal, raise the overall difficulty and hp drain a little bit. Also redo break.

For Hollow, redo break.
00:33:96 (5) - Move closer to 4.
00:59:49 (3) - Add a finish sound to the beginning

For Hard, redo break. Love the symmetry.

For Insane, 01:21:87 (5) - Make it symmetrical to 4.

Coming along great~
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Zodiark1020
This map is really good :D

~OBT's Easy~
00:20:72 (1) - spinner too short for easy? I'd move it 2 white ticks later (00:22:926)
00:53:03 (3,4) - move those two up, at the correct spacing
00:55:55 (3,4) - ^
01:02:96 (2) - add a note at the correct spacing between this and the slider's end :P
01:05:79 (1) - the beginning of this, whistle
01:06:42 (repeat of slider) - whistle

~OBT's Normal~
00:14:10 (5) - remove finish from the end
I post a screenshot to let you understand how to fix 00:20:72~ 00:21:66

~OBT's hollow~
Nothing wrong particularly.

~OBT's Hard~
00:16:93 (4) - if you want, remove finish in the end, and put it at the next beat, [00:17:56 (1)]

Good map, really
StaR

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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
Oops I did double post, sorry
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
[Easy]
00:45:30 (3) - Finish on end of slider?
00:56:97 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 claps in a row? It's only my opinion, but... I don't like that.
00:56:97 (1) - Finish instead clap. Really, it fit more.

[Normal]
00:20:72 (5,6) - Speed change on normal? Sound cool, but...
00:36:79 (x) - Add note with finish.
00:56:97 (1) - Finish on start?

[Hollow]
00:30:96 (6) - Add another return?
00:46:88 (1,1,2,3,4) - Too many claps.
00:50:35 (4) - Add finish on end instead clap.
01:18:40 (2) - Clap?
01:20:92 (2) - Same as above.

[Hard]
00:12:84 (3) - Remove clap. Really.
00:18:51 (4) - Clap?
00:35:85 (1) - Wtf? Slider shoud return here 00:36:16 and end here 00:36:48!

[Insane]
Good work!
00:07:79 (5) - New combo? Becouse of jumps... But not sure about this.
00:10:31 (4) - Same as above.
00:12:84 (6) - ^
00:36:79 (11) - Finish instead whistle?
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Mafiamaster does this look good~?
EDIT : I don't know what you were intending on doing but I made a tree lol~

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Starrodkirby86
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Hard].osu
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:20:72 (5,6) - Speed change on normal? Sound cool, but... Oh don't worry the slider start and end are too close to each other to miss once you get the slider start. ( You don't even need to move after you click the slider start )
00:36:79 (x) - Add note with finish. Hmm I liked the pause before the next combo...not sure about this one
EDIT : Yeah not adding this...unless more people agree...
00:56:97 (1) - Finish on start? Oh sounds great...I'll add it to the other slider too
Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Normal].osu
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ztrot
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ztrot

tieff wrote:

[Hollow]
00:30:96 (6) - Add another return? It was ment to be that way
00:46:88 (1,1,2,3,4) - Too many claps. the claps go with the song lower the hitsound and you'll see
00:50:35 (4) - Add finish on end instead clap. ^
01:18:40 (2) - Clap? thanks i didn't see those
01:20:92 (2) - Same as above.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Easy]
00:11:57 (1,1,1) - Just a suggestion but maybe finishes on the beginning of these?
00:36:16 (3) - Finish here too?
00:42:15 (1) - Slider whistle isn't so good here... ( if you want it there still...at least make the volume softer for that part )
00:42:15 (1) - Finish on the start of this instead?
00:54:44 (1) - Finish?
01:00:43 (3) - I personally don't like whistles for this one...sounds better as on soft...
01:03:59 (1) - Finish
01:04:53 (1,2,3) - Whistles all of them
01:08:94 (2) - Doesn't sound right...add an extra note or make a slider or something...before the next slider anyways
01:12:10 (1) - Click on the slider start and add a finish there so it goes on every other repeat starting there
01:15:88 (3) - Finish?
01:19:03 (2) - Same as....the one for 01:08:94
01:21:55 (2) - ^ taking out the whistle would be the best solution
01:22:18 (1) - Finish start of this

[Hollow]
00:07:79 (3) - Whistle...hitsounds might be copying my difficulty a bit here...so I'll try to alter it a bit
(since you copied me anyways...but then again I was the one that told you to do it...hmm...lol anyways...)
00:09:05 (1) - You went to claps now....
00:02:75 (2) - Ya know what...add a clap here then
00:05:27 (2) - ^
00:07:79 (3) - ^
00:12:84 (2) - ^
00:15:36 (2) - ^
00:30:49 (3) - Take out clap on (2) and add here
00:32:85 (1) - No clap here...
00:33:01 (2) - Clap go heeere
00:34:59 (6) - Clap 2nd repeat
00:36:16 (3) - Clap beginning of this and take out clap at end but keep finish
00:37:74 (3) - Clap?
00:38:05 (5) - Clap beginning of slider finish at end
00:40:26 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Clap every other circle starting from 2
00:41:52 (9) - No clap but finish on ending
00:42:47 (1,2) - Clap Clap...Clap lol clap on 1,2 lol I like this one
00:44:36 (4) - Finish
00:44:83 (6) - ^
00:59:49 (3) - Finish at beginning of slider
01:02:48 (2) - Copy finish pattern to ... the part of the song that you mapped that sounds like this one
01:04:22 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ consistent pattern of hitsounds please
01:18:40 (2) - Clap?
01:20:92 (2) - ^
okay maybe not those claps

[Insane]
Looks fine to me.

[Hard]
Looks fine too

No...I actually got too lazy to look at insane and hard...but they seem good anyways.
Mafiamaster
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animask wrote:

Mafiamaster does this look good~?
EDIT : I don't know what you were intending on doing but I made a tree lol~
I guess I moved the beat on accident, but it was suppose to be an upside down star thing. Flipped from 00:15:04 (1,2,3,4,5,6)
blissfulyoshi
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Normal].osu

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Hollow].osu
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Insane]
00:29:23 (11) - Slider whistle?
00:31:75 (11) - ^
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Insane].osu
GabrielRKF
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Starrodkirby86
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Download the following items into your Song Folder.

http://up.ppy.sh/files/white.png

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Hollow].osu

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Hard].osu

Jarby
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Jarby
Normal:

01:06:42 (1) - The spacing here is confusing.
01:27:23 (4) - Change to fancy slider or spinner with a mute ending.

Hollow:

00:27:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:77 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:49:40 (4) - Add new combo.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
Normal

00:21:50 (6) - It just feels so wrong coming that early.

Insane

00:23:55 (9,10) - Underspaced, I want to let it slide because it's part of a pattern. but honestly its like running down a hill and the hill suddenly levels out and then resumes its steep slope causing you to fall off balance and tumble down the hill.

That's all I got for moderation, so Ill shoot a star at you.
Shinxyn
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Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Updated...
...don't dis the x2 slider it was fun

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Normal].osu
Shinde
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Shinde
Easy
Nothing I think.

Normal
00:21:66 (6) - half beat later? I dunno about this note.
01:04:85 - Note here?
01:06:74 - ^
I dunno about the squiggly sliders. Some feel a little sloppy.

Hard
00:05:98 (1) - Dunno about shape.
00:12:52 (1) - Copy pastaa this for 2?
00:25:79~ - Font looks a little messy for Kirby's difficulty picture, iuno.
00:27:18 - (1,2,3) - 1 down some, 2 up a little, then switch 1 and 2 on timeline so it's like back and forth instead of square thing? Same suggestion for 9,10,11. There are like 2? other instances where you could do this if you want but there was another note in them I believe so I dunno if this advice applies there too.
00:44:36 (4) - Up a little.
01:19:03 (5,6,7,8) - I'm thinking switch 5 and 6,7,8's placement. If you do I think you have to add a new combo so yeah.

Hollow
00:02:43 (1,2,3,4) - Shape feels a little wierd. Same for next 1,2,3,4. Another time at 1:18:09. Something like how you did it at 01:20:61 looks good.
00:31:75 (7) - Iuno about this curve.
00:50:35 (2) - ^

Insane
I have no complaints. Mm, this felt really good.

Yeah I'm a little confused. I updated some maps after I looked over them, thinking it was because I saved some stuff, and then some things weren't there so, if I said anything that doesn't make sense or you've updated since, just ignore me.

That said, other than like 2 or 3 things between all 5 difficulties, everything felt really good for me. The flow of like all the difficulties was pretty good. Uhhh, I hope I'm not forgetting anything. Bleach skin is crazyy. Is that on the osu!me skin lists cause I thought I saw it somewhere else and I like it.

So anyways. Star'd.
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
No i made the SB myself.
Its not a skin, its only a SB
Shinde
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Shinde

Ryuukun wrote:

No i made the SB myself.
Its not a skin, its only a SB
Who made the hitcircle and hitcircleoverlay and hpdrain bar and stuff then? o.o; It looks good.

Also, I was playing through some more and looking stuff over trying to think of some suggestions.

Normal :
00:55:86 (4,5) - Consider switching these two's placement. I just think with how the previous slider is, having to reach back for the 4 then go right to the 5, then go left for the next 1 feels just slightly wierd. Switching them seems more in flow. Uh, if you wanna do that then same at 00:53:34 (4,5)

Hard
00:52:71 through like 00:56:65 - Attached a pic. This part felt a little wierd, though the symetry's really nice. Take a look and try it out and see if you like it. Slider placement's all up to you.
00:54:29 - Note here right in the middle? Wasn't really in the picture so.


Yeaaah I'm liking this a lot. This song's grown on me. Popping some kudosu stars your way. I'm pretty much done here, looking forward to when it gets ranked. D;

Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Fixd~

Download: Aqua Timez - Alones (ztrot) [OBT's Normal].osu
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun

Shinde wrote:

Ryuukun wrote:

No i made the SB myself.
Its not a skin, its only a SB
Who made the hitcircle and hitcircleoverlay and hpdrain bar and stuff then? o.o; It looks good.
i made everything.
Lilac
Elite Mapper
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Lilac
Just wondering, for 100. Can it be shikai? It's at a lower rate then bankai but you get the idea...

I don't mod really hard or insane difficulties so let's just stick with the easy ones for the time being.

[OBT's Easy]
00:20:72 [Spinner] - Spinner may be a bit too short for easy.
00:45:30 - Since previous slider had whistle, maybe you can use whistle for that too, just leave it normal at the end of the slider.
1:24:71 [Slider] - I think you can end it with a soft hitsound or nothing at all. Sounds better. ;)

[OBT's Normal]
01:06:74 [Between 1 and 3] - Add a hitcircle there, it sounds better.
01:13:04 [6,8 and the start of slider 9] - Put claps in them. Your decision but...

[OBT's Hard]
00:35:85 [1] - I just want to comment that the slider there can be replaced differently. Heh?

Yeah, I really like this song if you haven't noticed... Kudos to all of you for mapping it.
fartownik
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fartownik
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Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Why is my name uncapitalized ;_;
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[DJPop]
cool


[animask]
dont agree with the kiai


[ztrot]
looks good give or take the kiai


[Kirby]
freaking kiai


[mafiamaster]
kiai


k kiai removed bubble yay!

mtmcledit: bubble repair
RemmyX25
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Bubble Repair Service.
Ryuukun
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Ryuukun
will be needed soon again.
Since i'm going to make some skin changes
kino77
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kino77
Fabulous~
BTW,I love this song~
DJPop
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+Star
mrtn
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mrtn
nice map, here's a star
K2J
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(Skinning)
Don't forget to skin the decimal point, the percent sign, and the combo x. They look odd and are misaligned if you use the defaults.

[DJPop's Easy]
00:52:40 (2,3) - Since these are stacked, I'm inclined to believe they'll be similarly spaced on the timeline. However, there's a larger gap between 2 and 3 here, confusing me.
00:54:92 (2,3) - Same.

[animask's Normal]
Jammin'!

[ztrot's Hollow]
Radical!

[Starrodkirby86's Hard]
Tight!

[Mafiamaster's Insane]
Extreme!

XepherX3
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XepherX3
just a suggestion


[Ztrot's Hollow ]
[00:21:666](3) : Make this a spinner...end it at [00:24:503]<make the volume of that section to 0 and place a new one at the white tick [00:24:818] with the normal volume

that´s all i can SUGGEST

don´t pop anything cuz of this
RemmyX25
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Is there a reason why Easy uses a different offset?

Also, I think the mask as part of the 50/100/300 is a bit too much, imo.

Hey, instead of 6 1440x900 backgrounds, can't you just use one 1024x768 background and SB the names in?

You've also skinned just about everything else except spinner-spin, spinner-clear, and spinner-osu. How come? (hint: i think they should be skinned)

Starrod/Mafia's difficulties:
Slider tick rate could use a boost.

Other than that, the map looks good, but i'm not ready to rank it.
ztrot
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ztrot

RemmyX25 wrote:

Is there a reason why Easy uses a different offset? thanks he must had it that way for some reason but i check it works with my offset changed.

Also, I think the mask as part of the 50/100/300 is a bit too much, imo. Really it was fine. This skin is in a ranked map already. I think imo there is little need to change it now.

Hey, instead of 6 1440x900 backgrounds, can't you just use one 1024x768 background and SB the names in?
I tried that already. btw my skinner is not always on +map starts almost instantly no place to put the names.

You've also skinned just about everything else except spinner-spin, spinner-clear, and spinner-osu. How come? (hint: i think they should be skinned) well i can't skin very well let alone copy my friends style so that's kinda out.

Starrod/Mafia's difficulties:
Slider tick rate could use a boost. I thought they were fine.

Other than that, the map looks good, but i'm not ready to rank it.
Well I made the fixes (that are with in my power to fix means no skin changes) hope to see ranked soon :)
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
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DeathxShinigami
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DeathxShinigami
extra star.
Takuma
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Takuma
A small fix in irc then a rank!
Cyclone
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Cyclone
Hey. Images above 1024x768 are REQUIRED to be resized now. Please listen to the BATs next time. (and PAY ATTENTION BATs..)

(also, is it me or does the BPM seem slightly fast)
ztrot
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ztrot

Cyclone wrote:

Hey. Images above 1024x768 are REQUIRED to be resized now. Please listen to the BATs next time. (and PAY ATTENTION BATs..)

(also, is it me or does the BPM seem slightly fast)
Sorry cyclone had no idea that it was to big
bmp should be fine too i freaking tested this thing a trillion times
Ryuukun
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