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[冇其他語句可以代替到我有幾心急]
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Mod request :D/

[Oni]
02:11:770 (307) - please make the same as 01:01:370 (1), or make it same as here, just dont leave it different.

01:12:370 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - just some suggestions - maybe make it like kdd kdk kdD K D(image, imo this fit the pitch of vocal and the instrument behind better.
02:22:770 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) -
03:33:170 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - same as this two

01:21:770 (93,94,95) - imo dkd would be better, as i would put this 6 sentence into front(1,3,5) and back(2,4,6) group, the sound at the front group among the 3 sentence is actually the same with different pitch, so i would make them the same. (i originally don't want to say this, but i found you did this in muzu, and i thought this is better.)
02:32:170 (95,96,97) - ^
03:42:570 (371,372,373) - ^

03:12:370 (235) - delete? as this note have no vocal and can emphasize the sound on k better

04:04:770 (480) - k?

[Muzu]
00:16:370 (57) - imo change it to k and add d at 00:16:570 fits the melody better.

01:12:370 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - same as oni

02:07:170 - add d here

02:11:770 (264) - same as oni

02:47:970 (127,128,129) - i prefer making like oni -> k d d

[Futsuu]
02:11:770 (198) - actually to me it's same as the "start" as the first part... but if you really dont want to change just ignore me orz

[Kantan]
looks good~

good luck :D
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NewibornCLivee wrote:

Mod request :D/

[Oni]
02:11:770 (307) - please make the same as 01:01:370 (1), or make it same as here, just dont leave it different. fixed

01:12:370 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58) - just some suggestions - maybe make it like kdd kdk kdD K D(image, imo this fit the pitch of vocal and the instrument behind better. It sounds better~
02:22:770 (52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62) -
03:33:170 (327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337) - same as this two

01:21:770 (93,94,95) - imo dkd would be better, as i would put this 6 sentence into front(1,3,5) and back(2,4,6) group, the sound at the front group among the 3 sentence is actually the same with different pitch, so i would make them the same. (i originally don't want to say this, but i found you did this in muzu, and i thought this is better.) fixed
02:32:170 (95,96,97) - ^
03:42:570 (371,372,373) - ^

03:12:370 (235) - delete? as this note have no vocal and can emphasize the sound on k better fixed

04:04:770 (480) - k? fixed

[Muzu]
00:16:370 (57) - imo change it to k and add d at 00:16:570 fits the melody better. fixed

01:12:370 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - same as oni fixed

02:07:170 - add d here fixed

02:11:770 (264) - same as oni fixed

02:47:970 (127,128,129) - i prefer making like oni -> k d d fixed

[Futsuu]
02:11:770 (198) - actually to me it's same as the "start" as the first part... but if you really dont want to change just ignore me orz

[Kantan]
looks good~

good luck :D
Thanks for your mod~ :D
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我以為Nardo都慢我又慢添._.
我加速先
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Added Jik's Oni. (16 Sep, 2013)
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Hi~

[General]
    1. d (don)
    2. D (Big don)
    3. k (kat)
    4. K (Big kat)
      I'm weak in English.


    [Kantan]
      1. 03:18:970 (133) - del?
      2. 04:04:770 (234,235) - add Finish?


      [Futsuu]
        1. 00:50:170 (149) - del
        2. 00:53:370 (156,157) - move 00:53:570 and 00:53:570 (157) - del "or" 00:53:370 (156,157) color change?
        3. 02:03:770 (172,173) - color change?
        4. 03:48:170 (239) - add d
        5. 04:02:970 - add d
        6. 04:04:770 (286,287) - add Finish?


        [Muzukashii]
          1. 00:16:970 (60) - del
          2. 00:27:970 (103) - k
          3. 01:05:770 - add d
          4. 01:18:570 - add d
          5. 01:31:570 (117) - d
          6. 01:51:170 (188) - k
          7. 02:16:170 - add d
          8. 02:28:970 - add d
          9. 03:21:970 (231,232) - d ?
          10. 03:26:570 (248) - add d
          11. 03:39:370 - add d


          [Oni]
            1. 00:16:570 (74) - k
            2. 00:35:970 (166) - k
            3. 01:07:270 (22) - d
            4. 01:51:170 (217) - k
            5. 03:02:070 - add d
            6. 03:21:970 (275,276) - d?
            7. 03:41:670 (366) - d


            [Jik's Oni]
              1. 00:23:570 (92) - k
              2. 00:48:970 (236) - del?
              3. 02:08:070 - add k


              Good Luck~ :D
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y o u j o wrote:

Hi~

[Kantan]03:18:970 (133) - del? umm...no, I want to follow the vocal~
04:04:770 (234,235) - add Finish? It sounds good~

[Futsuu]00:50:170 (149) - del fixed
00:53:370 (156,157) - move 00:53:570 and 00:53:570 (157) - del "or" 00:53:370 (156,157) color change? fixed
02:03:770 (172,173) - color change? good~
03:48:170 (239) - add d fixed
04:02:970 - add d fixed
04:04:770 (286,287) - add Finish? fixed

[Muzukashii]00:16:970 (60) - del fixed
00:27:970 (103) - k umm...I want to follow the pitch of the vocal there.
01:05:770 - add d fixed
01:18:570 - add d fixed
01:31:570 (117) - d fixed
01:51:170 (188) - k no change, the reason is same as above
02:16:170 - add d fixed
02:28:970 - add d fixed
03:21:970 (231,232) - d ? umm...nope.
03:26:570 (248) - add d fixed
03:39:370 - add d fixed

[Oni]00:16:570 (74) - k fixed
00:35:970 (166) - k It sounds nice~
01:07:270 (22) - d fixed
01:51:170 (217) - k same as Muzu
03:02:070 - add d great~
03:21:970 (275,276) - d? no change
03:41:670 (366) - d fixed

Good Luck~ :D
Thanks for your mod~ :D
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y o u j o wrote:

[Jik's Oni]
    1. 00:23:570 (92) - k No, because if this is changed, the others also have to change but don't want to change the set
    2. 00:48:970 (236) - del? Same
    3. 02:08:070 - add k
    Ok,thanks
Thanks for modding!
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Hi Nardo~~~ ~n~///
Taiko Mod from chat ~n~!

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:570 (48) - Chnge K
  2. 00:19:370 (67) - d and 00:19:470 (68) - Del
  3. 00:45:770 (174) - Del
  4. 00:48:770 (186) - Del Big note ....?
  5. 00:53:370 (202) - Del
  6. 01:35:170 (131) - move 01:34:970 (131) - and chnge k
  7. 01:37:370 (139,140) - Change coler ?
  8. 01:41:570 (153) - move 01:41:370 (153) - (Bass sound)
  9. 01:47:370 (175) - Del
  10. 01:47:970 (178) - Change k
  11. 01:56:170 (208) - move 01:55:770 (207) - :3
  12. 02:04:170 (236) - Del
  13. 02:05:570 (241) - Del Big
  14. 02:07:970 (250) - move 02:07:770 (250) - and 02:08:170 - add d?
  15. 02:08:970 (255) - Del
  16. 02:31:370 (78) - d and 02:31:470 - add d
  17. 03:00:770 (167) - Change d
  18. 03:17:770 (214) - Del
  19. 03:21:370 (228) - Change d
  20. 03:31:170 - 03:31:270 - add d and 03:32:170 (275) - Del
  21. 03:56:170 (365) - Del
  22. 04:03:770 (391,392,393) - kkk or ddk?


[Oni]
  1. 00:06:870 (28,29,30) - dd K
  2. 00:12:570 (53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdk
  3. 00:14:770 (64) - move 00:14:970 (64) -
  4. 02:00:470 (257) - move 02:00:670 (258) - and 02:00:770 (259) - k
  5. 02:25:770 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - kddddk or kkddddk ?
  6. 03:01:170 - ~ 03:01:570 - kdddk



Sorry Checking Muzukashii and Oni ...
But good map :3 fun >n<//

Good Luck :3
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toara_fict wrote:

Hi Nardo~~~ ~n~///
Taiko Mod from chat ~n~!

[Muzukashii]
  1. 00:13:570 (48) - Chnge K no change
  2. 00:19:370 (67) - d and 00:19:470 (68) - Del umm... remain unchanged, I want to follow the consecutive drum hits.
  3. 00:45:770 (174) - Del fixed
  4. 00:48:770 (186) - Del Big note ....? fixed
  5. 00:53:370 (202) - Del no change
  6. 01:35:170 (131) - move 01:34:970 (131) - and chnge k It's better~
  7. 01:37:370 (139,140) - Change coler ? fixed
  8. 01:41:570 (153) - move 01:41:370 (153) - (Bass sound) um... no change
  9. 01:47:370 (175) - Del no change
  10. 01:47:970 (178) - Change k Ok~
  11. 01:56:170 (208) - move 01:55:770 (207) - :3 fixed
  12. 02:04:170 (236) - Del fixed
  13. 02:05:570 (241) - Del Big no change
  14. 02:07:970 (250) - move 02:07:770 (250) - and 02:08:170 - add d? good~
  15. 02:08:970 (255) - Del fixed
  16. 02:31:370 (78) - d and 02:31:470 - add d Ok~
  17. 03:00:770 (167) - Change d fixed
  18. 03:17:770 (214) - Del no change
  19. 03:21:370 (228) - Change d no change
  20. 03:31:170 - 03:31:270 - add d and 03:32:170 (275) - Del added, but not deleted due to the presence of vocal.
  21. 03:56:170 (365) - Del fixed
  22. 04:03:770 (391,392,393) - kkk or ddk? um... no change


[Oni]
  1. 00:06:870 (28,29,30) - dd K no change
  2. 00:12:570 (53,54,55,56,57) - ddkdk changed to ddkkd~
  3. 00:14:770 (64) - move 00:14:970 (64) - Ok~
  4. 02:00:470 (257) - move 02:00:670 (258) - and 02:00:770 (259) - k fixed
  5. 02:25:770 (63,64,65,66,67,68,69) - kddddk or kkddddk ? changed to kkddddk~
  6. 03:01:170 - ~ 03:01:570 - kdddk good~



Sorry Checking Muzukashii and Oni ...
But good map :3 fun >n<// Thanks~

Good Luck :3
Thanks for your mod and star~ :D
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M4M for queue

[General]
:idea: Maybe another bg for <Guest Oni>, just for reverse consistency
:!: General mismatch of difficulty level. Refer to authentic sets or OnosakiHito's guide on suggested descriptors t/152263

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Kantan = 5★ Futsuu
:idea: Innovative dangling 1/2 patterns, but mixed coloring may prove a bit too hefty for typical Kantan standards.
00:10:770 (19,20,21,22,23) and similar - Large for emphasis. The "Hey! Hey!" shouts are very energetic parts that deserves more attention. Also applies to all diffs.
02:11:770 (158,1) - Borderline misuse of denden.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Futsuu = 5★ Muzukashii
:idea: Too hefty for typical Futsuu standards.
00:19:370 (56) - Bad use of drumroll. Returning does not reflect in actual gameplay.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Muzukashii = 5★ Oni
:!: This is already the most the song can pull off wrt. to the complexity context. Any more than this easily constitutes as overmapping.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8★ Oni 8★ Guest Oni
:!: General ambiently overmapped.
:!: <Guest Oni> Abuse of 2-2s in Go-go Time, without suitable recognition from the music.
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tetsutaro wrote:

M4M for queue

[General]
:idea: Maybe another bg for <Guest Oni>, just for reverse consistency fixed
:!: General mismatch of difficulty level. Refer to authentic sets or OnosakiHito's guide on suggested descriptors t/152263

[Kantan] Perceived difficulty rating: 5★ Kantan = 5★ Futsuu
:idea: Innovative dangling 1/2 patterns, but mixed coloring may prove a bit too hefty for typical Kantan standards.
00:10:770 (19,20,21,22,23) and similar - Large for emphasis. The "Hey! Hey!" shouts are very energetic parts that deserves more attention. Also applies to all diffs. fixed some~
02:11:770 (158,1) - Borderline misuse of denden. It's still acceptable imo.

[Futsuu] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Futsuu = 5★ Muzukashii
:idea: Too hefty for typical Futsuu standards.
00:19:370 (56) - Bad use of drumroll. Returning does not reflect in actual gameplay. fixed, though there's no difference.

[Muzukashii] Perceived difficulty rating: 7★ Muzukashii = 5★ Oni
:!: This is already the most the song can pull off wrt. to the complexity context. Any more than this easily constitutes as overmapping.

[Oni] Perceived difficulty rating: 8★ Oni 8★ Guest Oni
:!: General ambiently overmapped.
:!: <Guest Oni> Abuse of 2-2s in Go-go Time, without suitable recognition from the music.
Thanks for your mod~
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Hi. Mod as requested on 15/09/2013. Mod may be split up since I'm allowing only 3~4h of modding a day, if split up you can already fix some of the suggestions I've pointed out. Kudo only when the mod is full. Don't forget to explain thoroughly why you've refused it.

[General]
I recommend increasing by 20-30% the timing points. The song is very loud compared to the loudness of the hitsounds.

[Kantan]
  1. As tetsu stated, the 1/2 are a little bit off the level of Kantan for a big part of them. Some are acceptable but need some fixes.
  2. 00:07:970 (13,14) - For example, there's no real reason (beside the guitar) to leave that 1/2 since the song is pretty straightforward as a whole. If you delete it, that will create a 2/1 gap, which is recommended for such difficulties.
  3. 00:14:370 (26,27) - ^
  4. 00:20:770 (38) - Change to don, since there's only a kick. If you applied this, add a kat here : 00:21:170 - Snare. It will make the whole portion a little more consistent.
  5. 00:22:370 (40,41) - There, since the song offers only a triple kick, either keep 40 only (to create a 2/1 gap), or change 41 to d.
    If you applied the second option, you may want to put a gap here: 00:23:570 (43) - .
  6. 00:25:570 (47,48) - Double don, since there are only kicks here.
  7. 00:26:770 (49) - Nudge it a beat backwards? It really sounds a lot nicer than what it is now.
  8. 00:28:370 (53,54) - Even though it respects the lyrics pretty much, better not leave that. The whole section is calm, so there's no need for a 1/2. You may keep a note to move here: 00:28:770 -
  9. 00:29:570 (56) - Don here. You know why, I think. (Should be obvious regarding all the other color changes)
  10. 00:31:770 (61,62,63) - You may keep that, but it's quite risky. New players might get confused with that change (which reverts to 1/1).
  11. 00:33:570 (65) - 66 and 67 being really nicely done, I recommend deleting this note to leave a small gap so people can hit the kk without getting confused.
  12. 00:37:570 (74) - Nudge it a beat forward, the snares are very strong here. Add a k, too.
  13. 00:41:170 (81,82) - Only leave the kat, this is not the best way to put eighths, here.
  14. 00:43:970 (88) - Same here.
  15. 00:45:570 (91,92,93,94,95,96) - I'm pretty sure this rhythm can be simplified. Actually, I am certain of it. To me, the best is to use the don rhythm only, the kats are only too superficial imo.
  16. 00:48:770 (100) - onwards: The song uses another rhythm that implies the speed is halved, maybe follow the rhythm here instead?
  17. 00:55:170 (114,115,116,117,118) - Not the best rhythm to use, you better stick to 1/1 here since your pattern mainly follows vocals and drums.
  18. 00:58:770 (123,124,125,126,127) - ^
  19. In the first kiai, the 1/2 are following mainly vocals. if you really want to keep them, change them to double kat, so it will stay easy enough. Else, make a simple dkdkdkdk..d pattern in 1/1 and add breaks. In blue are mods for the kiai, not regarding your choice. They may be disregarded if you've chosen an option. You may apply them if you deem them nice enough, though.
  20. 01:08:370 (14,15) - 1. I recommend inverting notes. The current pattern makes the snare consistency loosen a bit.
  21. 01:12:570 (24) - 2. You should move that 1/2 before, and kat it.
  22. 01:14:370 (29,30,31) - 3. If possible, emphasize more the crescendo.
  23. 01:18:970 (39) - 4. Same as 2 above.
  24. 01:19:570 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47) - 5. Change the rhythm, it's more suitable for a Futsuu as it is now.
  25. 01:24:370 (54,55) - 6. kd, snare consistency
  26. 01:27:570 (62,63) - 7. ^
  27. 01:28:770 (64,65,66,67,68) - 8. Keep it simple, three kats spaced by 2 beats are enough!
  28. 01:32:970 (73) - kat, and nudge it 1/2 forward, so you can have a snare mapped.
  29. 01:37:170 (80,81,82) - I think you can simplify it a bit.
  30. 01:39:170 (85,86) - ^ (Actually it's the same as the beginning)
  31. 01:45:970 (96) - Make it consistent with the snares!
  32. 01:47:970 (101,102,103) - This pattern sounds odd, replace it to something simpler? Also, add some more 2/1 gaps.
  33. 01:51:570 (108,109) - Same, this 1/2 isn't so much fitting.
  34. 01:54:970 (116,117) - See @00:31:770.
  35. 01:55:970 (118,119,120,121,122,123) - Keep a simple rhythm, here.
  36. 01:59:170 (127) - onward, the song goes slower. (It's like the first quarter of the song, so you know what to do.)
  37. 02:05:970 (142,143,144,145) - This pattern, although vocal-fitting, will confuse a bit players. Keep it to the drum, if possible.
  38. 02:09:170 (150,151,152,153,154) - This pattern is not suitable for a kantan. Change it to something simpler!
  39. Kiai 2 should follow the same rhythm as Kiai 1. Since it's a copy-paste of Kiai 1, my suggestions stay the same. If you are going to make different patterns between K1 and K2, answer to the above mods in blue with the ID. (1->8)
  40. 02:48:770 (79) - Make a long roll, stopping a bar after? Since you're mapping to a vocal, this vocal is held.
  41. 02:51:170 (80,81,82,83,84,85) - Since the song is half-sped here, you might consider the perceived speed instead of the actual speed. Make them all 2/1?
  42. 02:53:570 (85,86,87) - I think making them dons will create more consistency with the fact that those three are lo-pitched.
  43. 02:58:370 (94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - You may put a 2/1 gap at note 4 or 6, but it's not a must.
  44. 03:01:570 (101,102,103,104,105,106,107) - ^
  45. 03:04:770 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121) - You have to change this. The current pattern is way too hard for a Kantan. My recommendations:
    1. 03:07:970 (116,117,118,119,120,121) - should be a three note D D D instead, where the notes are placed here: 03:07:970 (116) - , 03:08:570 (118) - and 03:09:170 (120) - . It will emphasize this part a little bit better.
    2. 03:04:770 (108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - here, only 111 may be deleted. that will make a kkd ddkdD pattern.
  46. 03:16:970 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132) - It's a bit way too hard for a typical Kantan. Keep the two first notes, the rest will need a drastic change however.
  47. Kiai 3, same comments as Kiai 2 and 1. The end also will be modded the same way as the part following the 2nd Kiai, so not much to say again.


I think I'll take a break right now since I don't know what's awaiting me (actually it's 16:00 and I'm hungry)
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我来咯~~~啊哈哈~

General
D=Big Red
d=small red
K=Big blue
k=small blue
打?的有待斟酌= =

Kantan
00:54:370 (100) - k
02:00:770 (122) - k
发觉kantan好多在红线上= =总感觉特难的感觉-.-?

Futsuu
00:06:370 (20) - k
00:08:970 (27,28) - k d
00:34:370 (101) - k
00:52:370 (153) - k
01:37:970 (98,99) - d k
02:00:570 (164) - delete?
02:03:770 (172) - delete?
02:47:970 (88,89) - k d?
03:07:170 (132) - d
03:19:770 (159) - k
04:02:770 (278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - kdk??

Muzukashii
00:16:770 (59,60) - k d?
00:19:370 (67,68,69,70,71) - 唔...5连打已经可以放在这了吗= =?
00:24:770 (90,91) - k d?
00:35:970 (136) - k
00:38:370 - add d
01:16:570 (59) - d
01:27:170 (102) - k
01:53:770 (199) - k
02:05:170 (238,239,240) - kkk ....
02:55:970 (149,150) - d d?
04:00:170 (380) - k
04:03:970 (395) - k

Oni
00:20:170 (91,92,93) - k d d?
00:32:770 (148) - k
00:56:770 (267) - k
02:43:170 (140) - k?
03:22:370 (280,281,282) - k k k
03:48:970 - add k
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Snowy Heart wrote:

我来咯~~~啊哈哈~

General
D=Big Red
d=small red
K=Big blue
k=small blue
打?的有待斟酌= =

Kantan
00:54:370 (100) - k umm...no
02:00:770 (122) - k I follow the vocal here. Pitch is same as 01:59:970 (121)
发觉kantan好多在红线上= =总感觉特难的感觉-.-?

Futsuu
00:06:370 (20) - k no change
00:08:970 (27,28) - k d changed to d d
00:34:370 (101) - k no change
00:52:370 (153) - k no, vocal having same pitch as 00:51:970 (152)
01:37:970 (98,99) - d k I followed the snare drum here.
02:00:570 (164) - delete? I tried to map the instrument sound here so as to make a contrast to the first quarter of the song.
02:03:770 (172) - delete? ^
02:47:970 (88,89) - k d? umm...no
03:07:170 (132) - d fixed~
03:19:770 (159) - k no change
04:02:770 (278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286) - kdk?? The background is dull at 280,283 and 286...

Muzukashii
00:16:770 (59,60) - k d? again, d k is for snare drum consistency.
00:19:370 (67,68,69,70,71) - 唔...5连打已经可以放在这了吗= =? Yes, I think pentaplet of the same colour can be applied in Muzu.
00:24:770 (90,91) - k d? changed to k k
00:35:970 (136) - k retained, strong drum here
00:38:370 - add d umm...no
01:16:570 (59) - d no change
01:27:170 (102) - k no change
01:53:770 (199) - k OK~
02:05:170 (238,239,240) - kkk .... no change
02:55:970 (149,150) - d d? fixed
04:00:170 (380) - k no change
04:03:970 (395) - k um...no

Oni
00:20:170 (91,92,93) - k d d? nope.
00:32:770 (148) - k no change
00:56:770 (267) - k ^
02:43:170 (140) - k? ^
03:22:370 (280,281,282) - k k k ^
03:48:970 - add k ^
Thanks for your mod~ :D
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I will work on the two next difficulties on Thursday, poke me this day (I have all the afternoon)
The Oni diffs will be modded this week-end.
posted
You requested me? :P

Only gonna mod the 3 lowdiffs 'cause long song. :c (also i suck at modding Onis)

General

Everything seems to be fine here.

Kantan

00:31:170 (57) - This feels as if it should be a kat, because the pitch is about as high as the note before it.

01:11:570 (22) - Maybe you could remove this to make it a bit simpler?

02:02:370 (124) - Maybe you could make this a big don to add emphasis onto this note?

02:39:170 (63,64) - Add finishes to these two for emphasis since this part has a lot of emphasis, I feel.

03:18:770 (123) - Move this half a beat back to fit with the song.

omg this Kantan is really nice <3 Bit hard, but still really nice! (why are you so good at lowdiff mapping, orz)

Futsuu

00:03:570 (9) - Maybe you could remove this, I don't hear anything that screams "put note here".

01:04:370 (5) - ^

01:17:170 (42) - ^

01:40:770 (106) - Maybe you could move this half a beat forward?

03:31:570 (193) - Maybe you could remove this?

03:32:370 (196) - Maybe you could move this half a beat back?

03:53:570 (252,253,254,255,256,257) - This pattern seems a little complex for a Futsuu, maybe you could simplify it?

04:04:570 (285) - Maybe you could remove this note since the common theme of finishers was 3 notes a beat apart, keep following it! You'll need to make 04:04:370 (284) - a finish to fit with the theme.

Again, a really nice lowdiff :D

Muzukashii

00:12:770 (46,47) - These seem like they should be finishers.

00:41:570 (159) - Maybe you could remove this?

01:01:570 (1) - This spinner's start isn't consistent with the other diffs, remove the note before, place the start of the spinner there and extend by 1/2 beat.

03:04:770 (181) - Either make this a kat or a big don.

03:57:970 (373,374,375) - You put finishers on these in previous diffs didn't you? Do it here too, for consistency :oops:

This is a really REALLY nice mapset. Keep getting mods and hopefully you'll get your map ranked soon ;)

sorry for only modding the low diffs, i was lazy -w-
posted

Dainesl wrote:

You requested me? :P

Only gonna mod the 3 lowdiffs 'cause long song. :c (also i suck at modding Onis)

General

Everything seems to be fine here.

Kantan

00:31:170 (57) - This feels as if it should be a kat, because the pitch is about as high as the note before it. fixed

01:11:570 (22) - Maybe you could remove this to make it a bit simpler? Great~

02:02:370 (124) - Maybe you could make this a big don to add emphasis onto this note? um...I think the vocal/instrument is not lound enough to make it a don here.

02:39:170 (63,64) - Add finishes to these two for emphasis since this part has a lot of emphasis, I feel. changed to K d

03:18:770 (123) - Move this half a beat back to fit with the song. um...I chose to map the snare here.

omg this Kantan is really nice <3 Bit hard, but still really nice! (why are you so good at lowdiff mapping, orz) Thanks~

Futsuu

00:03:570 (9) - Maybe you could remove this, I don't hear anything that screams "put note here". fixed

01:04:370 (5) - ^ I want to map the snare in the refrain to strengthen the beats :>

01:17:170 (42) - ^ ^

01:40:770 (106) - Maybe you could move this half a beat forward? OK

03:31:570 (193) - Maybe you could remove this? no change

03:32:370 (196) - Maybe you could move this half a beat back? umm...no

03:53:570 (252,253,254,255,256,257) - This pattern seems a little complex for a Futsuu, maybe you could simplify it? no change

04:04:570 (285) - Maybe you could remove this note since the common theme of finishers was 3 notes a beat apart, keep following it! You'll need to make 04:04:370 (284) - a finish to fit with the theme. fixed

Again, a really nice lowdiff :DThanks~

Muzukashii

00:12:770 (46,47) - These seem like they should be finishers. I think it is a bit early to emphasize these vocals in the beginning.

00:41:570 (159) - Maybe you could remove this? fixed

01:01:570 (1) - This spinner's start isn't consistent with the other diffs, remove the note before, place the start of the spinner there and extend by 1/2 beat. fixed

03:04:770 (181) - Either make this a kat or a big don. changed to kat

03:57:970 (373,374,375) - You put finishers on these in previous diffs didn't you? Do it here too, for consistency :oops:remain unchanged.

This is a really REALLY nice mapset. Keep getting mods and hopefully you'll get your map ranked soon ;)

sorry for only modding the low diffs, i was lazy -w-
Thanks for your mod~ :D
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抱歉來晚了.....

Red : unrankable issue
Purple : strongly recommend
Black : just suggestion

[General]
  1. 檢查一下Letterbox in breaks 有沒有都取消掉
  2. Hata Aki SUNRISE 加到tag裡


[ Kantan]
  1. 00:01:370 (2) - ,00:02:970 (4) -,00:04:570 (6) - 我覺得這些note可以刪掉,新手會比較好抓節奏
  2. 00:05:970 (8) - 這個note放在這裡會增加00:06:370 (9) - 的難度,建議把00:05:970 (8) - 刪掉
  3. 00:07:170 - ~ 00:19:970 - 這裡感覺太多變化了,這樣會讓新手打起來很吃力,建議就跟著鼓放note,ex:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1006737,後面也用這個節奏會比較好
  4. 00:19:970 - ~ 00:35:970 - 這一段放太多note了www其實有很多地方可以砍掉很多note,像是00:23:570 (41) - ,00:29:970 (54) - 都可以刪掉
  5. 00:21:170 (37) - 移到00:22:770 -
  6. 00:31:770 (58,59,60) - 這個節奏太難了,移到00:31:970 - ,然後 00:33:170 (61) - 刪掉
  7. 00:33:770 (61,62) - Kantan裡應該不能有1/2 notes,把這個改簡單一點
  8. 00:40:770 (76) - 這裡應該還沒有換到下一段的感覺,移到00:41:570 - ,00:43:170 (81) - 移到00:43:970 - ,00:44:770 (84) - 刪掉,00:45:970 - 加k,00:46:570 (88,89) - 移到00:46:770 - 最後00:46:970 (89) - 刪掉finish
  9. 00:48:770 - ~ 00:55:170 - 太固定的節奏會讓譜面變得很枯燥乏味,建議把00:49:570 (94) - 和00:52:770 (98) - 刪掉
  10. 00:56:170 (103,104) - note放在紅線上會變得很難,在00:56:370 - 放一個k就好
  11. 00:59:370 (110,111) - 同上
  12. 01:03:770 (3) - ,01:05:370 (7) - ,01:06:970 (11) - ,01:08:570 (15) - ,01:10:170 (19) - 刪掉,1/2在kantan太難了
  13. 01:11:770 (22) - 移到01:11:570 -
  14. 01:12:370 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30) - 這個1/1notes感覺太長了,建議把01:13:170 (25,29) - 刪掉


Comment
這個Kantan感覺太難了,裡面放了很多1/2 notes,節奏也不太好抓,像是00:31:770 (58,59,60) -,note放在紅線基本上會很難抓節奏,建議把這個kantan改簡單一點,不然就把難度名稱改成Futsuu,其他的難度以此類推。我只有mod前面第一段,後面幾乎都大同小異,後面也要照前面的方式改喔。

[ Futsuu]

Comment
這個Futsuu已經完全不像futsuu了....反而有點像Muzu,基本上Futsuu可以有1/2 note,不過只能用kkdd的雙數串,強烈建議把難度改成Muzukashii,mod的話我先不mod,等擬修改成muzu再找我:33

[ Muzukashii]

Comment
把這個Muzu改改難一點點,然後把diff名稱改成Oni,不要改得太難喔

[ Oni]

Comment
把diff名稱改成Inner Oni,我之後再來看:3

[ Jik's Oni]

Comment
把diff名稱改成Jik's Ura Oni,我之後再來看:3
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I don't know how many things you changed to my Kantan mod aaaaaaaaa

[Futsuu]
  1. 00:08:370 - Here, a kat would be suitable, I don't think mapping to the background instrument is a good idea as people will ask themselves 'What is it mapped to'.
  2. 00:09:170 - Same goes here.
  3. 00:14:770 - ^ Although it would be harder to put this right to have a decently made pattern which is not too hard, since the optimal pattern would be ddkd dkdd, which is, I guess, a bit too hard for what you've wanted to make.
  4. 00:21:570 (47,48,49) - If you've wanted this to map to the piano, move 00:22:370 (49) - to the red tick before ? It sounds a bit less empty than the current you've got now.
  5. 00:23:170 - As an opening note and clearly audible kick here, why not move 00:23:570 (51) - here ?
  6. 00:24:770 (54) - Take out the kat, it would be better to focus only on the drums here.
  7. 00:25:370 (55,56) - Both notes sound a bit off (even though mapped to the vocal), might change to 1/1... I'd recommend moving 00:25:370 (55) - to 00:25:570 - and deleting 00:25:770 (56) - .
  8. 00:29:570 (65) - Change to a don, there's no real reason for it to be a kat !
  9. 00:31:770 (70,71,72) - Same comment as 00:25:370 (55,56) -.
  10. 00:37:970 (83,84,85,86) - Sounds real empty, you need to change it. I recommend a rhythm as this one: http://puu.sh/4I761.png (Cursor @ 00:38:770 - )
  11. 00:44:370 (98,99,100) - Same as above.
  12. 00:45:570 (102,103,104,105,106) - Since this rhythm is like this, why not apply somethings that makes the player perceive it in a better fashion ?
  13. 00:48:770 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117) - Same comment as in Kantan, make this flow better to the fact it slows down ?
  14. 00:56:370 - Maybe add a kat ?
  15. 00:58:370 (133,134,135,136,137) - Same comment as 00:45:570 (102,103,104,105,106) -
  16. 01:08:370 (14,15) - Invert hitsounding for a better snare consistency. I mean, you've used snares on nearly every other beat 2/4 but not here!
  17. 01:12:370 - Add a snare ?... I mean kat.
  18. 01:15:170 (31) - Should it be a Don ?
  19. 01:20:370 - Same as 01:12:370 -
  20. 01:20:770 (44,45,46) - You might want to add a snare in its middle as well. Also if you apply so, don't forget to change the pattern so it fits better.
  21. 01:27:570 (58) - Replace to a kat maybe ? It will fit better to the lyric as well as the drum. Good compromise !
  22. 01:31:170 (65,66,67) - You didn't make a good compromise to the vocal here, the rhythm is very different (the two last notes are 1/2 earlier than what you put here)
  23. 01:31:970 (67) - to 01:44:770 (95) - , take in account comments from 00:07:170 (11) - to 00:19:970 (43) - .
  24. 01:47:970 (102,103,104) - This pattern breaks the flow of the part... I'm certain you can make something better ><
  25. 01:54:770 (117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124) - This pattern is a bit off thesong, I recommend using this pattern instead: http://puu.sh/4I7UW.png
  26. 01:59:170 (129,130,131,132,133,134,135) - Same comment as in 00:48:770 (111,112,113,114,115,116,117) -
  27. 02:05:970 (144,145,146,147) - I'm lost, I don't know where I pointed this out again but.. Add a kat in it ?
  28. 02:09:170 (152,153,154,155) - , and the whole kiai, take in accounts the same comments as in the first kiai as they are similar.
  29. 02:42:370 (67,68,69) - Since it's getting calmer, maybe make it more spaaced in time ?
  30. 02:47:970 (73) - Kat, make it consistent with the lyrics if that's what you've wanted to.
  31. 02:55:170 (84) - to 03:09:370 (116) - Nice freestyle here. However one thing to point: 03:04:770 (103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - It becomes a bit too long don't you think ?
  32. 03:17:370 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131) - This is a bit risky here, try something else in this fashion ?
  33. Third kiai has same comments as it's the same. Except where you put the slider, I feel it was misplaced here. The end is the same as the very beginning (Did you run out of ideas ?)


(Why so huge? I'm really tired; let's take a break.)
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