1. Resize BG to 1366x768.
2. Romanized title: "Nekurojikaraizu"
   You don't need to use capital letter except the beginning of the word.
3. (maybe) Add source: Touhou
   I don't know about this. If this is not from Touhou, I'm sorry.

1. 00:08:005 (5) - hmm...I think that kick slider shouldn't be used in Normal.
2. 00:32:711 (3) - NC
3. 00:36:562 (2) - 1 grid down, 00:36:882 (3) - 1 grid right
4. 01:03:375 (3) - 1 grid down
5. 01:06:101 (1) - stack with 01:03:375 (3), and I don't like this slider shape.
   
   change like this?

   
6. 01:10:272 (4,1) - align the height?
7. 01:13:480 (3) - NC
8. 01:15:405 (6) - stack with 01:13:159 (2).
9. 02:32:095 (3) - change to slider(02:32:095 ~ 02:32:399)
10. 02:35:750 (4,5) - too far
11. 02:53:431 (green line) - This isn't needed.
12. 02:57:281 (2,4) - align the height
13. 02:58:885 (6) - change to smooth curve?
14. 03:05:302 (4) - This is not good in Normal.
15. 03:06:907 (1,4) - align the height
16. 04:07:547 (3,1) - a bit far
17. 04:31:050 (green line) - move to 04:31:130.
18. 04:47:975 (1) - kick slider is not good in Normal.
19. 04:54:392 - KIAI TIME's end is here?

1. 00:02:872 (2,3,4,5) - keep DS constant.
2. 00:39:128 (6) - 1 grid right?
3. 01:07:544 (4,6) - align the height
4. 01:21:662 (2,4) - ^
5. 01:23:426 (1) - Object's end is out of screen.
6. 01:23:426 (1,2,3) - keep DS constant.
7. 01:41:234 (3) - 1 grid right
8. 01:47:169 (3,4) - align the height
9. 01:52:303 (3) - 1 grid right, 01:52:463 (4) - 1 grid down
10. 02:46:051 (4,5) - change rhythm like this.
    
11. 02:36:663 (1) - This is not snapped.
12. 03:37:386 (1,3) - align the height
13. 03:58:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep DS constant
14. 04:06:906 (4,6) - align the height
15. 04:31:050 (green line) - move to 04:31:130.
16. 04:32:895 (3) - add circle
17. 04:38:510 (8) - 1 grid down, 04:38:670 (9) - 1 gird right
18. 04:39:312 (2) - move to (X:144,Y:208).
19. 04:46:210 (2,3) - replace 2 and 3. flow is better.
20. 04:49:740 (3,5) - align the height
21. 04:51:825 (1) - change to smooth curve?
22. 05:02:414 (5) - ^

K_rent wrote:

As I mentioned I am a complete noob at modding others maps, I probably won't find much. :/



[Hard]
The hit sounds are pretty quiet you put a lot of work into them too make them heard. I'll consider fixing this later.
That being said you did place a lot of notes to keep the hit sounds going and it makes some awkward places for notes. Its really hard to tell what beat you are following because it jumps around a lot from the hit sounds adding to the drums, to the lead and back to drums etc. Its the one hit notes that go off the current beat to add to the drums that seem out of place. These two really stand out.
1:28:400 (2) Nope.
2:59:687 (2) Fixed.

It seems a bit hard for a hard difficulty, possibly consider making it insane? That's why there is no insane. Some hard difficulties are made REALLY hard (inb4 DJPop's Kanbu)


[Normal]
I really can't find a lot, it plays really smoothly.
1:59:363 (4) - Seems off time, the sliders before are following the lead lyrics and this note is just out there as a hit sound, my instincts tell me its following the singer and then it just feels not in time. Its a better example of what I was talking about in the hard difficulty. Eeeeh nope, it can follow either the song or the vocals, depending of the mapper's style.


Other than that its super solid from my point of view.

Very well made, I like it a lot! Hopefully you can get more input from more experienced people. Good luck in the future~ Thank you!

asaink wrote:

hi, for M4M.
This is all suggestion, so feel free ignore.but, please tell me why it is no change.I can't mod about hitsounds sorry...

[General]

1. Resize BG to 1366x768. Fixed.
2. Romanized title: "Nekurojikaraizu"
   You don't need to use capital letter except the beginning of the word. Fixed.
3. (maybe) Add source: Touhou
   I don't know about this. If this is not from Touhou, I'm sorry. Like the idiot I am, I forgot about the Touhou tag. OTL

[Normal]

1. 00:08:005 (5) - hmm...I think that kick slider shouldn't be used in Normal. Changed to a different pattern.
2. 00:32:711 (3) - NC Fixed.
3. 00:36:562 (2) - 1 grid down, 00:36:882 (3) - 1 grid right Fixed.
4. 01:03:375 (3) - 1 grid down Fixed.
5. 01:06:101 (1) - stack with 01:03:375 (3), and I don't like this slider shape. I DON'T EVEN KNOW HOW THAT SLIDER ENDED UP LIKE THIS TBH. Maybe a bug.
   
   change like this?

   Changed, but not that pattern.
6. 01:10:272 (4,1) - align the height? Fixed.
7. 01:13:480 (3) - NC Fixed.
8. 01:15:405 (6) - stack with 01:13:159 (2). Fixed.
9. 02:32:095 (3) - change to slider(02:32:095 ~ 02:32:399) No.
10. 02:35:750 (4,5) - too far Pattern issues, so no.
11. 02:53:431 (green line) - This isn't needed. Eep, fixed.
12. 02:57:281 (2,4) - align the height Fixed.
13. 02:58:885 (6) - change to smooth curve? No.
14. 03:05:302 (4) - This is not good in Normal. Fixed.
15. 03:06:907 (1,4) - align the height Fixed.
16. 04:07:547 (3,1) - a bit far Nope. I find it okay.
17. 04:31:050 (green line) - move to 04:31:130. Fixed.
18. 04:47:975 (1) - kick slider is not good in Normal. First was bad, but this one, no.
19. 04:54:392 - KIAI TIME's end is here? Fixed.

[Hard]

1. 00:02:872 (2,3,4,5) - keep DS constant. No. Pattern issues.
2. 00:39:128 (6) - 1 grid right? Fixed.
3. 01:07:544 (4,6) - align the height Fixed.
4. 01:21:662 (2,4) - ^ Fixed.
5. 01:23:426 (1) - Object's end is out of screen. Changed to a different pattern.
6. 01:23:426 (1,2,3) - keep DS constant. No. Pattern issues.
7. 01:41:234 (3) - 1 grid right Fixed.
8. 01:47:169 (3,4) - align the height Fixed.
9. 01:52:303 (3) - 1 grid right, 01:52:463 (4) - 1 grid down Fixed.
10. 02:46:051 (4,5) - change rhythm like this.
    Nope.
11. 02:36:663 (1) - This is not snapped. ?
12. 03:37:386 (1,3) - align the height ...Fixed?
13. 03:58:563 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - keep DS constant Nope. Pattern issues.
14. 04:06:906 (4,6) - align the height Fixed.
15. 04:31:050 (green line) - move to 04:31:130. Fixed.
16. 04:32:895 (3) - add circle ...Fixed?
17. 04:38:510 (8) - 1 grid down, 04:38:670 (9) - 1 gird right Fixed.
18. 04:39:312 (2) - move to (X:144,Y:208).
19. 04:46:210 (2,3) - replace 2 and 3. flow is better. ???
20. 04:49:740 (3,5) - align the height This is probably around the 10th time I do a mistake like that. Stupid me OTL
21. 04:51:825 (1) - change to smooth curve? Nope. I like it like that.
22. 05:02:414 (5) - ^

Fixed.

I felt that this maps are good overall, but you should make more accurate about DS, coordinate and so.

Good Luck! Thanks!

YunoFanatic wrote:

Lol i cant say im an amateur modder but i mod many.. of other map so you can find many things in my modding but it is really help full btrw the mod.

NORMAL
>The circle is too big since its normal not easy Nope.
00:42:016-Place a note forcing a blanket isnt good. Fixed.
1:19:567-Add note Nope.
2:17:972-since the sound of that is a clap add a clap hitsound Nope.
3:50:542 add an spinner until 3:51:825 Nope.
So far thats only the problem in that since your map has been modded and i like the way you place your notes and timings impressive! Thanks!

HARD
> Just one thing always remember about the speed of the approach rate it might cause a problem for a user that has mouse problem sensivity
>Okay too fast slow the approach rate about 1 Nope.
01:53:587 okay since its addable of break time why didnt you ? I forgot. Fixed.
02:37:308 is not snap I guess I fixed it in a previous mod.
Love your insane! just like a pro! hmmp theres many missed place notes but i think it will work just fine just watch out for unsnaped notes might cause troubles..
Edit:
My Ways Of Modding~!
00:000:000 is highly requested
> is an oppinion
= is underrated

1. -I don't know if there's some mistakes,but your kiai time are too short at 00:09:289
   01:43:319
   04:33:858 and 05:05:301.
2. -Change a BG,I heard this size is unrankable.
3. -Use Ctrl+Shift+A to check by AI mod.

1. 01:04:289 (1) -NC? Isn't it successive?
2. 04:16:210 (1,2,3,4,5) -Smooth it.
3. 04:51:825 -Spinner here is a bit weird,you can take a change.

1. 01:23:586 (1) -That's too high...why don't you put it a little down?
2. 02:37:633 (3) -Move it a little right?
3. 02:56:639 (1,2,3) -It's a bit mess,don't you think?
4. 04:06:104 (2,3) -What about bring both two a little right to make it symmetrical?It's a bit weird.
5. 04:27:601 (5) -Ctrl+G may smooth it.
6. 04:39:633 (3) -Why don't you make a blanket here?
7. 04:51:825 (1,2,3,4,5) -You can make a little change of their position for smoother.

kocaca2009 wrote:

Well, as I'm a new mapper,the follow things I'm going to write down all are suggestions.
So...let's begin:

[General]

1. -I don't know if there's some mistakes,but your kiai time are too short at 00:09:289
   01:43:319
   04:33:858 and 05:05:301. Those are not mistakes. This is just for a pretty visual effect.
2. -Change a BG,I heard this size is unrankable. Fixed alerady before.
3. -Use Ctrl+Shift+A to check by AI mod. AI mod sucks. *shot*

[Normal]

1. 01:04:289 (1) -NC? Isn't it successive? Nope.
2. 04:16:210 (1,2,3,4,5) -Smooth it. ...Fixed?
3. 04:51:825 -Spinner here is a bit weird,you can take a change. Is it? Because I think not.

[Hard]

1. 01:23:586 (1) -That's too high...why don't you put it a little down? Fixed alerady before.
2. 02:37:633 (3) -Move it a little right? Fixed.
3. 02:56:639 (1,2,3) -It's a bit mess,don't you think? Nope.
4. 04:06:104 (2,3) -What about bring both two a little right to make it symmetrical?It's a bit weird. Fixed.
5. 04:27:601 (5) -Ctrl+G may smooth it. Nope.
6. 04:39:633 (3) -Why don't you make a blanket here? Because it's near-impossible around there IMO.
7. 04:51:825 (1,2,3,4,5) -You can make a little change of their position for smoother. Nope.

All in all ,the map you did(the notes you placed) is really great (in my opinion).Good luck! Thanks!

Losertic wrote:

Hello!

All right..... I try "first" long beatmap modding.

Modding

General

1. Pass.
   
   
   

   Normal

   1. 00:20:198 (2,1) - overlap. Nope.
   2. 01:35:619 (4,6) - ^ Nope.
   3. 02:56:318 (1,2) - ^ Nope.
   4. 03:08:190 (5,2) - ^ Nope. I do not see any problems with those overlaps.
   5. 03:10:115 (3,4,5) - Smile! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/849434 ...... And I smiled!
   6. 03:34:195 (2,3,4) - accuracy triangle Fixed.
   7. 03:47:013 (3,1) - Overlap. This one, I can understand. Fixed.
   
   

   Hard

   1. 00:08:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - maybe. it's too hard. Changed to a different problem.
   2. 00:34:957 (1,3) - Overlap. Fixed.
   3. 01:04:078 (6,7) - 02:12:998 (1,2,3,4,5) - accuracy pentagon ?????? For first one, second one fixed a little.
   4. 03:10:436 (2,3,4,5) - how about 2-4 , 3-5 mirror Ehh... No.
   5. 03:37:386 (1,2,3) - accuracy triangle No.
   6. 04:33:858 (1,2) - mirror. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/849457 That was a good idea, but distance snapping says the opposite...
   7. 05:04:660 (5,6,7) - accuracy triangle Fixed?

GrayKaiser82 wrote:

Hey Lily! M4M from your queue ~

[General]
Breaktime should be consistent. You mean, same on all diffs? Fixed, I guess.

[Easy]
00:20:198 (2,1) - An Overlap that doesn't look nice at all.. Try this > http://puu.sh/3vA2w/5423f38384.png Fixed, but the DS...
00:32:711 (1,2,3) - The (2) is a bit far away from (1), this is a Distance problem. Fixed.
01:15:084 (3,4,5) - Distance problem, move this (4) to x:268|y:176 Fixed.
02:56:318 (1,2) - Tiny overlap. Fixed.
03:01:452 (4,6) - Overlap, change the (6)'s position Fixed.
03:05:944 (5,1) - Same as 02:56:318 (1,2) - Fixed.
03:07:548 (3,4,5) - Distance looks weird. Fixed, I guess.
03:11:078 (4,5) - One grid right... XD And I am no longer smiling
03:32:280 (2,1) - Make it smoother for a better blanket > http://puu.sh/3vw1s/ab50aa0462.png Fixed?
04:43:804 (6,2) - One grid down to avoid tiny overlap Fixed.


[Normal]
00:13:620 (5,1) - Hiding the reverse arrow is unrankable, consider changing it. Fixed.
00:43:941 (6) - Add NC since going to a different pattern. Fixed.
02:49:580 (5) - One grid down Fixed.

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Great map ! Good Luck ~ Thanks!