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0_o wrote:
Normal
00:08:96 (x) - Add a beat?
00:11:95 (1) - It ends in an awkward spot, try the next red tick?
00:17:16 (6) - Shorten to red tick
00:34:68 (3) - ^
00:40:64 (3) - Shorten to red tick
00:55:180 - break not necessary
01:02:447 - The end of the chorus is a really weird place for a break...
01:40:27 (3) - Shorten to red tick
01:44:18 (2) - Just make this a hitcircle
02:11:20 (1,1) - Make the first one end 1/2 later, and the next one start 1/2 later
02:43:53 (6) - This slider sounds weird since the words "place-me-with" are 3/4 apart each, while "with-you" is 1/2 apart.
03:06:36 (1) - End 1/2 sooner
03:16:79 (1,1,1) - This is mean for Normal, I would take out the hitcircle and make these like the (fixed) spinners at 02:11:20 (1,1).
Hard
00:03:00 (1,2,3) - Looks sort of awkward, make it symmetrical?
00:22:75 (7) - Sounds weird I would shorten it 1/2 + add a hitcircle
00:23:87 (1) - Lengthen 1/2
00:25:36 (1,2,3,4) - This works better mapped to the "woah oh oh etc." part imo
00:46:79 (3) - Lengthen 1/2
00:51:26 (3) - Move back 1/2 (you are mapping to the lyrics here, so keep it that way)
00:59:83 (2) - Meh it kinda works, but it's weird when the rest of it is mapped to the lyrics
01:02:261 - bad break again
01:08:96 (x) - Put a slider here, it's where the guitar starts soo...
01:13:81 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders are kinda dumb, they would work a lot better as hitcircles (largely spaced circles at that ^_^)
01:25:92 (x) - Add a hitcircle
01:43:25 (1) - Start this 1/2 sooner
and do the same changes for the first chorus as the next one...
02:26:48 (2) - New Combo
02:31:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Again, the notes on blue ticks don't make any sense
02:35:42 (1,2,3,4) - This seems boring for such an intense part of the song
I don't really like the patterns with the long sliders in this part, it's the most intense section of the song, so it should be the most intense section of the map. More 1/2 streams would work better imo.
02:43:25 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same complaints as before
and same comments on the chorus
woo FF5
whoops, my bad, I'll try that again.Metroid wrote:
02:31:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 - They are part of the song...
They ARE with the guitar :/0_o wrote:
whoops, my bad, I'll try that again.Metroid wrote:
02:31:32 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8 - They are part of the song...
That section would play much better if you only put beats on the rhythm of the guitar; it's the most intuitive part to sync to at that point, and right now the 1/4 hitcircle pairs just don't go with it. There isn't even a beat on the final note of the guitar part (a blue tick behind 7)
I noticed a lot of things because I know this song so well, making me have preset ideas on how it should play/sound. I really do think (most) of my suggestions would help, but hey, not my map ^_^
haha I already started mapping some of it Though I really don't know how long it will take (or if it will actually get done at all) so don't wait on me.Metroid wrote:
Also, If you really want your ideas in my map.. Why not make your own difficulty?