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Laura Shigihara - Zombies on your Lawn

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Hoplite_old
26 posts
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Hoplite_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on miércoles, 24 de junio de 2009 at 23:16:33

Artist: Laura Shigihara
Title: Zombies on your Lawn
Source: Plants vs Zombies
Tags: Plants, zombies, brains, sun, flower
BPM: 105
Filesize: 7409kb
Play Time: 02:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Chomper (3,94 stars, 206 notes)
  2. Doom Shroom (4,62 stars, 260 notes)
  3. Peashooter (3,31 stars, 199 notes)
Download: Laura Shigihara - Zombies on your Lawn
Download: Laura Shigihara - Zombies on your Lawn (no video)
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What are ya' gonna do when tha zombies coma afta' you?
From Plants vs Zombies soundtrack.


11/06/09 - SacroiD's, Matma_Rex's and tieff's fixes added. Changed Easy to Peashooter.
12/06/09 - Added Chomper and Doom Shroom difficulties. Fixed mrtn's and SacroiD's changes.
13/06/09 - Fixed sesito71's and Agkaemon's changes.
24/06/09 - CheeseWarlock fixes done.
Last edited by Hoplite_old , edited 15 times in total.
fufe
284 posts
Joined September 2008
fufe
Failed import. Checking the song folder i only got the osz. Full submit?
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

fufe wrote:

Failed import. Checking the song folder i only got the osz. Full submit?
D'oh! Should be fixed now.
SacroiD
30 posts
Joined June 2008
SacroiD
Nice selection for a beatmap! :D

Easy:
[1:34:380] (5) Fix spacing there,it's confusing.
[2:10:666] (orange and red combo) Select them and move with grid 1/6 3 spaces back in the timeline, because is not good like you've got there.

In general, the beatmap is cool, but you use a lot the whistle, change bit with claps, or at the end of some combos, put finish sounds.
Good luck! :D Star'd!
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

SacroiD wrote:

Nice selection for a beatmap! :D

Easy:
[1:34:380] (5) Fix spacing there,it's confusing.
[2:10:666] (orange and red combo) Select them and move with grid 1/6 3 spaces back in the timeline, because is not good like you've got there.

In general, the beatmap is cool, but you use a lot the whistle, change bit with claps, or at the end of some combos, put finish sounds.
Good luck! :D Star'd!

Nice fixes, thanks. Kudos.
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Use soft hitsounds.
Make mp3 louder.
And make more difficulties, of course.

00:26:85 (7,8,9) - make it a slider.
00:33:428 (x) - add a note here, it's "We".
00:36:28 (8,9) - slider?
00:42:28 (2) - too far from 1.
00:43:99 (1) - too far from 6.
00:46:85 (10) - too close to 9.
01:09:14 (2) - make it go right to left.
01:09:99 (1) - remove the spinner, map the ending when they say something, place a break here.
01:21:71 (6,7,8) - make it a slider.
01:47:71 (1) - too close to 10.
02:10:00 (x) - place a note here, add it to next combo.
02:16:85 (7) - make it slider or add two notes after.
02:23:142 (x) - add note.
02:25:71 (7,8,9) - slider?


Starred anyway.
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

Matma Rex wrote:

Use soft hitsounds.
Make mp3 louder.
And make more difficulties, of course.

00:26:85 (7,8,9) - make it a slider.
00:33:428 (x) - add a note here, it's "We".
00:36:28 (8,9) - slider?
00:42:28 (2) - too far from 1.
00:43:99 (1) - too far from 6.
00:46:85 (10) - too close to 9.
01:09:14 (2) - make it go right to left.
01:09:99 (1) - remove the spinner, map the ending when they say something, place a break here.
01:21:71 (6,7,8) - make it a slider.
01:47:71 (1) - too close to 10.
02:10:00 (x) - place a note here, add it to next combo.
02:16:85 (7) - make it slider or add two notes after.
02:23:142 (x) - add note.
02:25:71 (7,8,9) - slider?


Starred anyway.
Thanks, these are great improvements. All fixed, MP3 volume amplified, soft hits and next difficulty is being made.
Also, I've changed Easy to "Peashooter". Normal will be "Chomper" when thats done. Thanks for your support ^^

Kudos.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Decreasу sample volume, please.
Hitsounds suggestions. You don't need to do this, but...

00:20:57 (3) - Whistle/Clap.
00:21:99 (6) - ^
00:25:14 (3) - ^
00:26:57 (6) - ^
00:29:71 (3) -
00:31:14 (6) - ^
00:34:28 (4) - ^
00:35:99 (8) - Remove slider, add note here, then add slider here 00:36:28 (x) and end it here 00:00:36:85. ^^
00:38:14 (1) - This slider should start here 00:37:99 (red) and end here 00:38:85 (white)
00:58:57 (4) - New combo?
00:58:57 (1) - Normal hitsounds here? Becouse of zombie vocal.
01:04:57 (2) - Slider should stars here and end here 01:04:85.
01:15:14 (2) - Maybe finish on end of slider?
01:19:99 (2) - Finish here?
01:24:57 (3) - ^
01:33:42 (x) - Add note here.
01:41:71 (10) - Left a bit. Sorry for nazi.

Starred. ^^
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
SacroiD
30 posts
Joined June 2008
SacroiD
Ok, tryed Doom Shroom difficulty, and I just didn't like it much, let's try to fix it!

-Well, first, the beatmap starts fine, until [00:41:139], I don't understand that timing there, if you want to follow the beat, that's wrong, if you want to follow the singer, you're also wrong! The singer says "You wan't to bite" differently, change it.
-[00:45:428] (1,2,3) - again...
-[00:48:428] (2) - You don't follow anything.
-[00:48:626] (3) - move it a bit back to beat with the "just" that the singer says.
-[00:50:285] (6,7,8,9) - Delete beat number 8.
-[00:54:428] (3,4,5,6) - Why so many beats?
-[00:59:428] (2,3,4) - Doesn't match with anything, try timing it again.
-[01:03:285] (2) - Delete number two, much better.
- [01:07:868] (2)- ^.
-[01:12:857] (1,2,3) - What?? That's so fast, that doesn't match the zombies...
-[01:15:142] (1,2,3) - Delete 2.
-[01:16:571] (5,6,7)- Same but with 6.
-[01:19:428] (1,2,3) - ^
-[01:19:428] - ^...
-[01:19:428]- Take out 5! :P
-[01:19:428] - Delete 9...
-[01:32:928] (1,2,3) - Delete 2.
-[01:33:697] (5,6,7,8) - Modify all this part, moving the slider here.
-[01:37:610] (3,4,5) - Move these here.
-[01:53:428] (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - No reason to put this so fast.
-[01:57:999] (1,2,3,4) - Take out number 2.
-[02:03:428] (2,3,4,5) - Take 3 and 4 out.
-[02:09:714 (and after there)] - I think you are going too fast here, delete 1 in middle of two, and it's muuch better. I know it's much easier, but if you put this like that of fast, It's not cool.

Make these changes, they will help a lot this difficulty :)
mrtn
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Joined March 2008
mrtn
I recommend upping the volume of the song by 5-10 dB. Audacity can do that for you :)

[Peashooter]
00:47:14 - just remove the break :p
00:56:29 - insert break
01:00:86 - break
01:05:14 - break
01:18:57 (8) - new combo
01:51:14 - break
01:55:71 - ^
02:00:85 - ^
02:04:86 - ^

starred :)
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old
Thanks, mrtn and SacroiD. Fixed a lot of your stuff. Kudos!
hyperluigi
69 posts
Joined October 2008
hyperluigi
Good Job.

*Star*
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Peashooter:

01:19:337 Haz nuevo combo en 2

Chomper:

00:44:154 Nuevo combo en 5
01:45:376 Nuevo combo en 6

Doom Shroom:

00:43:283 El slider 4 acortalo un poco porque no suena bien así.
00:44:075 Nuevo combo en 5
00:49:102 2 y 3 estan mal timeados. En la barrita de tiempo de arriba ponlos al mismo nivel.
01:04:313 El slider 6 acortalo un poco
01:13:134 4 y 5 juntalos un poco mas en la barrita de tiempo de arriba.
01:35:919 Acorta un poco el slider 1
01:43:395 Acorta un poco el slider 3



Luego acabo
Hoplite_old
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Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

sesito71 wrote:

Peashooter:

01:19:337 Haz nuevo combo en 2

Chomper:

00:44:154 Nuevo combo en 5
01:45:376 Nuevo combo en 6

Doom Shroom:

00:43:283 El slider 4 acortalo un poco porque no suena bien así.
00:44:075 Nuevo combo en 5
00:49:102 2 y 3 estan mal timeados. En la barrita de tiempo de arriba ponlos al mismo nivel.
01:04:313 El slider 6 acortalo un poco
01:13:134 4 y 5 juntalos un poco mas en la barrita de tiempo de arriba.
01:35:919 Acorta un poco el slider 1
01:43:395 Acorta un poco el slider 3



Luego acabo
Gracias, sesito; fixed. Fue de gran ayuda =D
Agka
680 posts
Joined January 2009
Agka
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

Agkaemon wrote:

[Peashooter]
00:35:99 (8) - looks weird spaced versus 00:35:42 (6,7) -
00:37:14 (10) - a bit more to the right :3
00:41:14 (2, 3, 4, 5) - align to 00:41:14 (1) and if necessary 00:43:42 (6) should be aligned too.
02:26:28 (8) - spacing
02:26:85 (9) - alignment after changing 8

[Chomper]
01:15:14 (1) - non consistent spacing?
01:37:42 (2) - ^
01:45:14 (5) - ^

[Doom Shroom]
00:26:85 (7) - weird spacing
00:34:57 (5) - slider timing feels weird
00:48:35 (1) - move to red beat ( left )
00:48:64 (2) - move to white beat ( left )
00:48:92 (3) - move to red beat ( left)
00:59:78 (3,4,5) - check timing
01:12:85 (1,2,3) - unnecesary stream ( this should be fixed )
01:29:14 (5) - doesn't feel part of the triplet
01:58:85 (3) - spacing doesn't indicate triplet
02:19:35 (2) - check timing
02:24:71 (4,5,6) - don't do this a jump.


I think this map still needs work. I can't give it a star just yet.

When you're ready for it, PM me.
Thanks a lot! Those were indeed great fixes. I just disagree with
[Doom Shroom]
02:19:35 (2) - check timing
I don't see anything wrong with it :S Have you double checked that?

Again, thanks. Kudos!
chel007
26 posts
Joined February 2009
chel007
nice beatmap
CheeseWarlock
osu! Alumni
1,185 posts
Joined May 2008
CheeseWarlock
Your use of samplesets is simply grating. You suddenly change to loud hitsounds during the quietest, slowest part of the song. Aaaargh.

The spacing is pretty iffy. Are you using Distance Snap? For a beginner it's usually a good idea to keep it on. The times when the spacing is tricky, it feels unintentional and random.

Doom Shroom has a break at 00:47:57() for some odd reason. Get rid of it.
Hoplite_old
26 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
Hoplite_old

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Your use of samplesets is simply grating. You suddenly change to loud hitsounds during the quietest, slowest part of the song. Aaaargh.
This is odd because another modder suggested I should put those loud samplesets there. As it's contradictory, I don't know what to do, really. I feel they are fine like that.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

The spacing is pretty iffy. Are you using Distance Snap? For a beginner it's usually a good idea to keep it on. The times when the spacing is tricky, it feels unintentional and random.
Yes, I had Distance Snap on the whole time. I'll take another look at the patterns and see if I can position them better.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

Doom Shroom has a break at 00:47:57() for some odd reason. Get rid of it.
Ridden of.

Thanks for the advice, kudos.
NoHitter
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Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Doom Shroom
0:58:642 - 01:01:214

The rhythm here sounds ankward.

Try moving the (2) Slider back by a little.

From : 0:59:571
To : 0:59:499

It sounds better.

Starred

Edit: Didn't notice that this was in the graveyard. . .
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