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Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky

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Fycho
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年7月17日 at 13:40:16

Artist: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori
Title: Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size)
Source: Minami-ke Tadaima
Tags: みなみけ ただいま ED Ending happy623 Sun Rainbow
BPM: 168
Filesize: 11833kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (2.73 stars, 101 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 273 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 347 notes)
  4. Rainbow's Normal (4.27 stars, 147 notes)
Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size)
Download: Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size) (no video)
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#2
みなみけ ただいま Ending
急接近ラッキーDAYS
623's Easy by happy623
Rainbow's Normal by Sun Rainbow
Hard&Insane by me
Last edited by Fycho , edited 78 times in total.
happy623
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happy623
SOFAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Fycho
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happy623 wrote:

SOFAAAAAAAAAAAAA
wwww
popner
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节奏上没有大问题，有一些小地方可以提升，例如Insane 00:43:078 (1,2,3) - 这种地方，我倾向于有一点节奏变化： http://puu.sh/3jHWb.jpg 如果一定要抓白线鼓音的话，长滑条用折返滑条替换也比较好

排列上建议AR-1看一看overlap以及spacing，AR9会掩盖很多此方面的问题。

你自己做的diff Kiai必须一致。

整体结构没有问题。对于新人图来说，是找一找mod就能rank的程度了。


Edit: clap可以用drum的hitnormal.
Fycho
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popner wrote:

节奏上没有大问题，有一些小地方可以提升，例如Insane 00:43:078 (1,2,3) - 这种地方，我倾向于有一点节奏变化： http://puu.sh/3jHWb.jpg 如果一定要抓白线鼓音的话，长滑条用折返滑条替换也比较好

排列上建议AR-1看一看overlap以及spacing，AR9会掩盖很多此方面的问题。

你自己做的diff Kiai必须一致。

整体结构没有问题。对于新人图来说，是找一找mod就能rank的程度了。
Thanks~ :)
EmingK
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Orz._.
Nice song and god mapper
star~
smallboat
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smallboat
路過 已DL :)
thzz
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thzz
Hey~

I could get enough time earlier than I thought :D
As it was unsettled which I should do (testplaying or modding), I mod yours.

[General]
  1. "Minami-ke" in tag should be removed, because of duplication with Source.
[623's Easy]
  1. 00:09:328 (2) - add whistle.
  2. 00:23:078 (1) - add finish on head.
  3. 00:34:506 (1) - ^
  4. 00:45:935 (1) - add clap on head.
  5. 00:46:649 (2) - ^
  6. 01:25:935 (1) - How about removing this and put some objects during 01:27:363 - ~ 01:29:506 - ? Because there're many sounds, only putting a spinner is much boring for me.
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:363 (1) - rhythm suggestion. Following vocal is better imo.
    image
  2. 00:22:185 (3) - add finish on tale.
  3. 00:33:613 (3) - ^
  4. 00:40:578 (2) - add clap on head. (and remove whistle)
  5. 00:42:006 (2) - ^
  6. 01:25:756 (5) - change to Circle. There's no sound at 01:26:113 -
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:470 (1,2,3) - Equalize spacing or stack all of these.
  2. 00:14:149 (4,5) - These are different sound as 00:14:506 (1,2,3,4) - . (The latter is vocal, the former is none.)
    I suggest using slider to make different pattern.
    image
  3. 00:17:542 - add note to follow vocal.
  4. 00:33:613 (3) - add clap on head and tale.
  5. 00:34:506 (1) - add finish on head.
  6. 01:25:756 (5) - change to Circle. There's no sound at 01:26:113 -
  7. 01:29:506 (6) - ^ (01:29:685 - )
    Then, How about moving 01:29:328 (4,5,6) - to center of field. (it means x:256 y:192)
That's all :)
I'm surprised as your map is pretty good...
Fycho
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Cah-m wrote:

Hey~

I could get enough time earlier than I thought :D
As it was unsettled which I should do (testplaying or modding), I mod yours.
SPOILER
[General]
  1. "Minami-ke" in tag should be removed, because of duplication with Source. Fixed
[Hard]
  1. 00:17:363 (1) - rhythm suggestion. Following vocal is better imo. Fixed
    image
  2. 00:22:185 (3) - add finish on tale. Fixed
  3. 00:33:613 (3) - ^ Fixed
  4. 00:40:578 (2) - add clap on head. (and remove whistle) Fixed
  5. 00:42:006 (2) - ^ Fixed
  6. 01:25:756 (5) - change to Circle. There's no sound at 01:26:113 -Fixed
[Insane]
  1. 00:01:470 (1,2,3) - Equalize spacing or stack all of these. Fixed
  2. 00:14:149 (4,5) - These are different sound as 00:14:506 (1,2,3,4) - . (The latter is vocal, the former is none.)Fixed,and I changed some patterns
    I suggest using slider to make different pattern.
    image
  3. 00:17:542 - add note to follow vocal. I think this should follow the drum not the vocal
  4. 00:33:613 (3) - add clap on head and tale. Fixed
  5. 00:34:506 (1) - add finish on head. Fixed
  6. 01:25:756 (5) - change to Circle. There's no sound at 01:26:113 - Fixed
  7. 01:29:506 (6) - ^ (01:29:685 - ) Fixed
    Then, How about moving 01:29:328 (4,5,6) - to center of field. (it means x:256 y:192)OK,but I changed the coordinate
That's all :)
I'm surprised as your map is pretty good...Thank you~
Thank you very much for modding~ :)
ban15_old
ban15_old
啊咧咧

节奏没问题，打也是没问题，比如hard 1PC SS= =只是和歌曲的配合程度有点问题

第一次mod=。=
insane
00:08:435 (2,3) - delete
00:14:506 (1) - ^
00:17:363 (1) - 可以移动到00:17:542 -
00:18:792 (1) - delete
00:21:292 (1) - ^
00:25:756 (6,1) - delete不删除也没问题= =
00:33:078 (1,2) - 这两个其实没什么问题=。=感觉这里加这种滑条很奇怪
00:43:078 (1,2) - 建议合并
00:51:470 (9) - delete
01:10:220 (1) - ^
01:10:399 - 加note
01:10:578 - ^
01:11:113 - ^
Fycho
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ban15 wrote:

啊咧咧

节奏没问题，打也是没问题，比如hard 1PC SS= =只是和歌曲的配合程度有点问题

第一次mod=。=
insane
00:08:435 (2,3) - delete 意义不明啊0.0删了就不完整了
00:14:506 (1) - ^同上
00:17:363 (1) - 可以移动到00:17:542 - 这里跟鼓音，而不是vocal
00:18:792 (1) - delete不能删
00:21:292 (1) - ^同上0.0
00:25:756 (6,1) - delete不删除也没问题= =
00:33:078 (1,2) - 这两个其实没什么问题=。=感觉这里加这种滑条很奇怪
00:43:078 (1,2) - 建议合并跟鼓音而不是vocal不用合并
00:51:470 (9) - delete 不行，否则不完整了
01:10:220 (1) - ^同上0.0这里有鼓音
01:10:399 - 加note 不跟vocal
01:10:578 - ^不随vocal
01:11:113 - ^其实这些你可以自己加了然后试试会发现非常别扭0.0
Thank you for modding
happy623
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happy623

Cah-m wrote:

Hey~

[General]
  1. "Minami-ke" in tag should be removed, because of duplication with Source. fixed
[623's Easy]
  1. 00:09:328 (2) - add whistle. fixed
  2. 00:23:078 (1) - add finish on head. nope, I think its no need for it :?
  3. 00:34:506 (1) - ^ same as above
  4. 00:45:935 (1) - add clap on head. well, I put whistle instead :D
  5. 00:46:649 (2) - ^ same as above
  6. 01:25:935 (1) - How about removing this and put some objects during 01:27:363 - ~ 01:29:506 - ? Because there're many sounds, only putting a spinner is much boring for me. fixed
GoGo Fycho http://puu.sh/3lj5a.rar
thanks 8-)
Spring Roll
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Spring Roll
神麻婆你好www。这里是很久以前说的mod。（其实已经忘了叫我mod哪只了，就挑了这个
全部只是建议哦

623’s Eazy
滑条形状很销魂，看的我要高潮了，好评
然后发现easy很完美额0 0就这么跳过吧。。 :P


Hard
00:22:720 (4) - 咦这个4好没存在感，加个finish如何？
00:43:078 (1) - Ctrl+G？
00:48:792 (2) - 00:49:149 (3) - 这两个也分别Ctrl+G？
01:11:649 - 加个note


Insane
00:08:970 (2,1,2) - 这些错位是故意的么？
00:11:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 空气人梗吓尿
00:13:792 (3) - Ctrl+G，然后移到（216,6）？
00:26:828 (5,1) - 这两个stack一下



mod不动，感觉都很好没什么说的（其实我这人不喜欢找别人茬）

以上。

hope this helps。
Fycho
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Spring Roll wrote:

SPOILER
神麻婆你好www。这里是很久以前说的mod。（其实已经忘了叫我mod哪只了，就挑了这个
全部只是建议哦

623’s Eazy
滑条形状很销魂，看的我要高潮了，好评 623是妹子，看到这句会有什么想法我来问问她0.0
然后发现easy很完美额0 0就这么跳过吧。。 :P


Hard
00:22:720 (4) - 咦这个4好没存在感，加个finish如何？加了个clap，前面3有finish再加感觉略吵
00:43:078 (1) - Ctrl+G？这样就不FLOW了，而且和后面间距也大
00:48:792 (2) - 00:49:149 (3) - 这两个也分别Ctrl+G？不能理解，这样破坏梗了0.0
01:11:649 - 加个note跟的vocal，有个停顿;w;


Insane
00:08:970 (2,1,2) - 这些错位是故意的么？这也算是风格？的确是故意的，这样在打的效果上显现出来会比stack好XD
00:11:828 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - 空气人梗吓尿XD简单小梗而已
00:13:792 (3) - Ctrl+G，然后移到（216,6）？原来这样感觉还好=。=
00:26:828 (5,1) - 这两个stack一下故意的^^


mod不动，感觉都很好没什么说的（其实我这人不喜欢找别人茬）

以上。

hope this helps。
Thank you for modding~
OEvil
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OEvil
Mod request from my queue

[All Difficulties]
General

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [623's Easy] : Ending happy623
- [Hard] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623
- [Insane] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623

Tags
- Consider adding "みなみけ ただいま" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Ending" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "ED" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "623" to all of your tags

[623's Easy]
Edits:
- 00:33:078 (3) - Ctrl + J and replace it in the same place

[Hard]
Edits:
- Dude it is Hard not Insane AR: -1 , CS: -1
- 00:05:399 (4) - Make the #2 repeat Sound on 5%
- 00:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - Add NC on all of them better with rhythm
- 00:11:292 (1) - Add NC
- 00:47:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a good formation using them
- 01:06:292 (1,1,1) - Add NC on each one of them
- 01:28:078 (1) - Move to {x:188 y:91}.
- 01:28:257 (2) - Move to {x:255 y:60}.
- 01:28:435 (3) - Move to {x:324 y:91}.
- 01:28:792 (1) - Move to {x:448 y:192}.
- 01:28:971 (2) - Move to {x:367 y:192}.
- 01:29:149 (3) - Move to {x:287 y:192}.
- 01:29:328 (4) - Move to {x:206 y:192}.
- 01:29:506 (5) - Move to {x:126 y:192}.

[Insane]
Nice Diffculty
happy623
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happy623

OEvil wrote:

Mod request from my queue

[All Difficulties]
General

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [623's Easy] : Ending happy623 fixed
- [Hard] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623
- [Insane] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623

Tags
- Consider adding "みなみけ ただいま" to all of your tags fixed o/
- Consider adding "Ending" to all of your tags fixed o/
- Consider adding "ED" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "623" to all of your tags Its no need for it since I can search the map by typing 623

[623's Easy]
Edits:
- 00:33:078 (3) - Ctrl + J and replace it in the same place nope;w; the music is going up instead of going down at that time
thanks for modding /o/
http://puu.sh/3o7Yk.rar
Fycho
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OEvil wrote:

Mod request from my queue
SPOILER
[All Difficulties]
General

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [623's Easy] : Ending happy623
- [Hard] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623
- [Insane] : みなみけ ただいま ED happy623

Tags
- Consider adding "みなみけ ただいま" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "Ending" to all of your tags Fixed
- Consider adding "ED" to all of your tags
- Consider adding "623" to all of your tags

[623's Easy]
Edits:
- 00:33:078 (3) - Ctrl + J and replace it in the same place

[Hard]
Edits:
- Dude it is Hard not Insane AR: -1 , CS: -1 It is Hard not Normal
- 00:05:399 (4) - Make the #2 repeat Sound on 5%It is not necessary
- 00:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - Add NC on all of them better with rhythm I think no
- 00:11:292 (1) - Add NC ^
- 00:47:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a good formation using them Good formation?For example?
- 01:06:292 (1,1,1) - Add NC on each one of them
- 01:28:078 (1) - Move to {x:188 y:91}. It is OK now
- 01:28:257 (2) - Move to {x:255 y:60}.
- 01:28:435 (3) - Move to {x:324 y:91}.
- 01:28:792 (1) - Move to {x:448 y:192}.
- 01:28:971 (2) - Move to {x:367 y:192}.
- 01:29:149 (3) - Move to {x:287 y:192}.
- 01:29:328 (4) - Move to {x:206 y:192}.
- 01:29:506 (5) - Move to {x:126 y:192}.

[Insane]
Nice Diffculty
Thank you
Zero__wind
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small stuffs for Hard
和之前Insane里面说的一样 whistle的频率要提高
00:27:006 (4,5) - 这个离前面的距离比离后面的还要远 不太舒服 一般来讲 从slider到circle的间距比从circle到slider的间距略大一些移动会比较流畅 比如00:05:935 (2,3,4) - 这个就比较不错
01:11:649 - 这一拍重音被空出来了非常不爽=。= 仅供参考 :arrow: http://puu.sh/3pruO.jpg
01:17:899 (2) - 建议拆成 circle+1/2 slider来保持你的3连clap的节奏一致性 http://puu.sh/3prx4.jpg
01:25:578 (4,5) - 稍微离前面远一点 这里憋得慌 距离1.3x挺好 像01:24:863 (2) - 这里一样
就这些

and irc for Inasne ↓
SPOILER
01:03 *Zero__wind is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/264364 Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size)]
01:16 Zero__wind: bg里左边这妹子表情够奇葩=。=
01:16 Fycho: 颜艺
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:04:506 (1) - finish
01:17 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/264364 Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size) [Insane]]
01:17 Fycho: ok
01:17 Zero__wind: 刚才改了音效mod？我觉得还是落了很多
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:05:220 (2,4) - whistle
01:18 Fycho: 我音效上还基本小白的
01:18 Zero__wind: 就听呗
01:18 Zero__wind: 或许你耳机不好……
01:18 Fycho: 这些whistle 我是故意没加的
01:19 Zero__wind: t/131632 去抢个q
01:20 Fycho: 话说其实我想把兄爱那歌放上去
01:20 Zero__wind: 呃
01:20 Zero__wind: 反正 有精力的话 一起弄也没啥不可以的……
01:20 Zero__wind: 我之前3张pending一起弄呢
01:21 Fycho: 可以三张一起post?
01:21 Zero__wind: 不是这个意思……
01:21 Zero__wind: 当然只能1张……
01:21 Zero__wind: 我是指3张都再找mod 在更新 这样
01:21 Zero__wind: 有些人喜欢一段时间专注一张 搞完一张再搞下一张
01:22 Fycho: 那我也就基本一首一首搞了
01:22 Fycho: 我已经post了这首歌了
01:23 Fycho: 又掉了
01:23 Zero__wind: 嗯……
01:23 Fycho: go on吧
01:24 Zero__wind: 00:06:292 (2,4) - 和00:07:006 (7) - 头上 加w
01:24 Zero__wind: 00:07:899 (3) - 这个不用w
01:25 Zero__wind: 00:07:899 (3) - 建议方向左下
01:26 Zero__wind: 这样和后面的方向是顺着的
01:26 Zero__wind: 你现在的位置的话00:07:899 (3,1,2) - 不太爽
01:28 Zero__wind: 00:20:042 (6,1) - 有点近 建议调整00:20:042 (6) - 的位置 反正你现在这个位置也不是为了遮挡
01:28 Zero__wind: 那么它的位置是比较自由的
01:29 Zero__wind: 比如挪到(52,136)
01:29 Zero__wind: 让6到1的连线与横轴的角度小一点 你之前那个位置基本是竖着上去的
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:21:649 (1) - 可以finish
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:21:828 (2) - clap
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:22:006 (3) - clap换成whistle
01:31 Zero__wind: 我疯了 我挂个VPN
01:31 Zero__wind: 我发的消息你收到哪一条？
01:32 Zero__wind: 我发的消息你收到哪一条？
01:32 Zero__wind: 好了现在我到韩国了……
01:32 Fycho: 比如挪到52136
01:32 Zero__wind: 哦
01:32 Fycho: 后面一句都没
01:32 Zero__wind: 让6到1的连线与横轴的角度小一点 你之前那个位置基本是竖着上去的
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:21:649 (1) - finish
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:21:828 (2) - clap
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:22:006 (3) - clap换成whistle
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:22:899 (3,4) - clap
01:34 Zero__wind: 00:25:935 (1,2) - 这种地方没必要不叠好吧
01:34 Zero__wind: 00:25:756 (6,3) - 这个也是
01:35 Fycho: 为什么没必要啊
01:35 Zero__wind: 如果你是故意为了移动一点距离的话……
01:35 Zero__wind: 这个距离太小了……
01:35 Fycho: 不stack效果还好
01:36 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3o5wl.jpg 考虑大概弄到这么远
01:37 Zero__wind: 和00:26:828 (5,1) - 这个的感觉差不多
01:38 Fycho: 恩._.
01:38 Zero__wind: 00:30:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序改成154326如何 纯属个人意见
01:41 Zero__wind: 00:33:613 (3) - 类似这种走向如何 http://puu.sh/3o5Hn.jpg
01:42 Zero__wind: 00:34:506 (1) - 这部分起 如果以曲子为准的话 whistle和clap不是像你这样规律性加的
01:42 Zero__wind: 不过我不否认像你这样加也是可以的
01:42 Fycho: 那应该以音乐为准?
01:43 Zero__wind: 不不不 我没说过
01:43 Zero__wind: 这个都可以
01:43 Zero__wind: 这是加音效的两种不同方式
01:43 Zero__wind: 一个是合曲 一个是另创音轨
01:43 Fycho: 感觉BPM减半 如果按音乐
01:43 Zero__wind: 不 不是规律性的
01:43 Zero__wind: 按曲子走的话
01:43 Zero__wind: 00:34:863 (2) - 头上的whistle应该移到尾巴上
01:44 Zero__wind: 00:35:220 (3) - 头上的whistle应该换clap
01:44 Fycho: 背景每根3白线加 听了下
01:44 Zero__wind: 00:35:578 (4) - 头上的whistle移到尾巴上
01:44 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:44 Zero__wind: 所以这个都是看自己意思
01:46 Zero__wind: 00:48:524 (2) - 这个应该也是clap
01:46 Zero__wind: 只有3和4是低音
01:48 Zero__wind: 我真是服气 挂个VPN都挂不稳
01:48 Fycho: 消息你看到,了吗
01:48 Zero__wind: 没
01:48 Zero__wind: 你现在显示我是China还是Korea
01:49 Fycho: korea
01:49 Zero__wind: 呃那成
01:49 Zero__wind: 继续 我刚才说到哪里……
01:49 Zero__wind: 大半夜的网络还这样……真实#$%^&*
01:50 Fycho: 我刚才说这连打是单独加的
01:50 Zero__wind: 00:48:435 (1,2,3,4) - 这个？
01:50 Fycho: 你可以开mute music听下
01:50 Fycho: 恩
01:50 Fycho: 对
01:51 Zero__wind: 为什么这样呢？
01:51 Fycho: 这样有过度
01:51 Fycho: 这样听起来好点 觉得
01:51 Zero__wind: 我是建议00:48:524 (2) - 这一个 改成clap 和1一样
01:51 Zero__wind: 34不变
01:52 Zero__wind: 打鼓的时候也是两下两下会比较正常的…
01:52 Zero__wind: 曲子本身的话 2那个时间点也比较像clap
01:53 Fycho: ok
01:53 Zero__wind: 01:02:185 (3) - 这个的距离是为了不让01:01:649 (1,4) - 接触么
01:54 Zero__wind: 个人感觉01:02:185 (3) - 这里有点过远
01:54 Zero__wind: 不太舒服
01:54 Fycho: 三句每个间距逐渐提升
01:55 Zero__wind: 嗯 我只是说这一个局部 01:02:006 (2) - 和01:02:185 (3) - 之间
01:56 Fycho: 间隔太远了吗
01:56 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:56 Zero__wind: 01:02:185 (3,4) - 假设你保持01:02:185 (3,4) - 之间的间距1.0~1.1
01:56 Fycho: 再近的话就真没什么难点了 这图
01:56 Zero__wind: 01:02:006 (2,3) - 建议间距在2.2~2.3 这个样子
01:56 Zero__wind: 如果你要说为什么……我没法解释……
01:57 Zero__wind: 我自己重新摆了感觉了一下=。=
01:57 Zero__wind: 01:01:649 (1) - 它的位置相对还是比较灵活的 可以让它往上一些 这样相对的01:02:185 (3,4) - 就可以一起往上一些
01:58 Zero__wind: 你甚至可以让01:01:470 (6,1) - 两个一起往上一些
02:00 Zero__wind: 01:09:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个角度不太好
02:00 Zero__wind: 按你现在的摆法 其实我一开始以为你要顺时针， 后来发现我反了
02:01 Fycho: 散点小跳
02:01 Fycho: 可以把2改一下
02:01 Fycho: 滑条
02:01 Zero__wind: 01:09:506 (2,3,4) -
02:01 Zero__wind: 不不不 主要问题在这里
02:02 Zero__wind: 01:09:685 (3) - 的位置让移动角度太小了 建议简单放blancket位
02:02 Zero__wind: 其实那都不算很好
02:02 Zero__wind: 我觉得最好是01:09:685 (3) - 放到(248,220)这一带
02:03 Zero__wind: 到底要和滑条接触多少你自己定
02:04 Zero__wind: 或者你想变化小一点 哪怕你让01:09:685 (3) - 稍微高一点 到（328,208）这样 都会舒服很多
02:04 Zero__wind: 01:11:649 (1) - finish
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:12:363 (4,6) - whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:078 (3) - 头上whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 和开头一段完全一样的
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:792 (5,7) - whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:435 (4) - 头上whistle
02:06 Fycho: 恩
02:06 Zero__wind: 啊 不这么说了 总之就是曲子本身的whistle频率是很高的
02:06 Zero__wind: 1拍一个
02:07 Zero__wind: 01:18:078 (5,6,7) - 的移动不太舒服
02:07 Zero__wind: 01:18:435 (6) - 建议扔到01:17:363 (3) - 上面去
02:08 Zero__wind: 或者或许你可以试试6不动 01:18:792 (1) - 反向
02:10 Zero__wind: 我指的是大概这样 后面的东西略微调整 http://puu.sh/3o6Wr.jpg
02:10 Zero__wind: 嘛 这种建议完全是随自己喜欢
02:11 Fycho: 恩
02:11 Zero__wind: 01:21:113 (6,7,8) - (408,128) 如何
02:13 Fycho: 不好了
02:13 Zero__wind: 01:23:613 (3) - 角度更大一些比较舒服 http://puu.sh/3o742.jpg
02:13 Zero__wind: 哦哦
02:13 Fycho: 那样跳起来不美观了
02:14 Zero__wind: 还有就是最后最后那几个跳 多几个finish
02:14 Zero__wind: 没了
02:15 Zero__wind: 然后hard
02:15 Fycho: 好
02:15 Fycho: Hard留着post吧 明天我期末考..
02:15 Zero__wind: ok

Good luck
＊ 给你凑点儿sp
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho

Zero__wind wrote:

small stuffs for Hard
和之前Insane里面说的一样 whistle的频率要提高
00:27:006 (4,5) - 这个离前面的距离比离后面的还要远 不太舒服 一般来讲 从slider到circle的间距比从circle到slider的间距略大一些移动会比较流畅 比如00:05:935 (2,3,4) - 这个就比较不错
01:11:649 - 这一拍重音被空出来了非常不爽=。= 仅供参考 :arrow: http://puu.sh/3pruO.jpg
01:17:899 (2) - 建议拆成 circle+1/2 slider来保持你的3连clap的节奏一致性 http://puu.sh/3prx4.jpg
01:25:578 (4,5) - 稍微离前面远一点 这里憋得慌 距离1.3x挺好 像01:24:863 (2) - 这里一样
就这些

and irc for Inasne ↓
SPOILER
01:03 *Zero__wind is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/264364 Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size)]
01:16 Zero__wind: bg里左边这妹子表情够奇葩=。=
01:16 Fycho: 颜艺
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:04:506 (1) - finish
01:17 *Zero__wind is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/264364 Satou Rina, Inoue Marina & Chihara Minori - Kyuusekkin Lucky Days (TV Size) [Insane]]
01:17 Fycho: ok
01:17 Zero__wind: 刚才改了音效mod？我觉得还是落了很多
01:17 Zero__wind: 00:05:220 (2,4) - whistle
01:18 Fycho: 我音效上还基本小白的
01:18 Zero__wind: 就听呗
01:18 Zero__wind: 或许你耳机不好……
01:18 Fycho: 这些whistle 我是故意没加的
01:19 Zero__wind: t/131632 去抢个q
01:20 Fycho: 话说其实我想把兄爱那歌放上去
01:20 Zero__wind: 呃
01:20 Zero__wind: 反正 有精力的话 一起弄也没啥不可以的……
01:20 Zero__wind: 我之前3张pending一起弄呢
01:21 Fycho: 可以三张一起post?
01:21 Zero__wind: 不是这个意思……
01:21 Zero__wind: 当然只能1张……
01:21 Zero__wind: 我是指3张都再找mod 在更新 这样
01:21 Zero__wind: 有些人喜欢一段时间专注一张 搞完一张再搞下一张
01:22 Fycho: 那我也就基本一首一首搞了
01:22 Fycho: 我已经post了这首歌了
01:23 Fycho: 又掉了
01:23 Zero__wind: 嗯……
01:23 Fycho: go on吧
01:24 Zero__wind: 00:06:292 (2,4) - 和00:07:006 (7) - 头上 加w
01:24 Zero__wind: 00:07:899 (3) - 这个不用w
01:25 Zero__wind: 00:07:899 (3) - 建议方向左下
01:26 Zero__wind: 这样和后面的方向是顺着的
01:26 Zero__wind: 你现在的位置的话00:07:899 (3,1,2) - 不太爽
01:28 Zero__wind: 00:20:042 (6,1) - 有点近 建议调整00:20:042 (6) - 的位置 反正你现在这个位置也不是为了遮挡
01:28 Zero__wind: 那么它的位置是比较自由的
01:29 Zero__wind: 比如挪到(52,136)
01:29 Zero__wind: 让6到1的连线与横轴的角度小一点 你之前那个位置基本是竖着上去的
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:21:649 (1) - 可以finish
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:21:828 (2) - clap
01:30 Zero__wind: 00:22:006 (3) - clap换成whistle
01:31 Zero__wind: 我疯了 我挂个VPN
01:31 Zero__wind: 我发的消息你收到哪一条？
01:32 Zero__wind: 我发的消息你收到哪一条？
01:32 Zero__wind: 好了现在我到韩国了……
01:32 Fycho: 比如挪到52136
01:32 Zero__wind: 哦
01:32 Fycho: 后面一句都没
01:32 Zero__wind: 让6到1的连线与横轴的角度小一点 你之前那个位置基本是竖着上去的
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:21:649 (1) - finish
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:21:828 (2) - clap
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:22:006 (3) - clap换成whistle
01:33 Zero__wind: 00:22:899 (3,4) - clap
01:34 Zero__wind: 00:25:935 (1,2) - 这种地方没必要不叠好吧
01:34 Zero__wind: 00:25:756 (6,3) - 这个也是
01:35 Fycho: 为什么没必要啊
01:35 Zero__wind: 如果你是故意为了移动一点距离的话……
01:35 Zero__wind: 这个距离太小了……
01:35 Fycho: 不stack效果还好
01:36 Zero__wind: http://puu.sh/3o5wl.jpg 考虑大概弄到这么远
01:37 Zero__wind: 和00:26:828 (5,1) - 这个的感觉差不多
01:38 Fycho: 恩._.
01:38 Zero__wind: 00:30:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 顺序改成154326如何 纯属个人意见
01:41 Zero__wind: 00:33:613 (3) - 类似这种走向如何 http://puu.sh/3o5Hn.jpg
01:42 Zero__wind: 00:34:506 (1) - 这部分起 如果以曲子为准的话 whistle和clap不是像你这样规律性加的
01:42 Zero__wind: 不过我不否认像你这样加也是可以的
01:42 Fycho: 那应该以音乐为准?
01:43 Zero__wind: 不不不 我没说过
01:43 Zero__wind: 这个都可以
01:43 Zero__wind: 这是加音效的两种不同方式
01:43 Zero__wind: 一个是合曲 一个是另创音轨
01:43 Fycho: 感觉BPM减半 如果按音乐
01:43 Zero__wind: 不 不是规律性的
01:43 Zero__wind: 按曲子走的话
01:43 Zero__wind: 00:34:863 (2) - 头上的whistle应该移到尾巴上
01:44 Zero__wind: 00:35:220 (3) - 头上的whistle应该换clap
01:44 Fycho: 背景每根3白线加 听了下
01:44 Zero__wind: 00:35:578 (4) - 头上的whistle移到尾巴上
01:44 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:44 Zero__wind: 所以这个都是看自己意思
01:46 Zero__wind: 00:48:524 (2) - 这个应该也是clap
01:46 Zero__wind: 只有3和4是低音
01:48 Zero__wind: 我真是服气 挂个VPN都挂不稳
01:48 Fycho: 消息你看到,了吗
01:48 Zero__wind: 没
01:48 Zero__wind: 你现在显示我是China还是Korea
01:49 Fycho: korea
01:49 Zero__wind: 呃那成
01:49 Zero__wind: 继续 我刚才说到哪里……
01:49 Zero__wind: 大半夜的网络还这样……真实#$%^&*
01:50 Fycho: 我刚才说这连打是单独加的
01:50 Zero__wind: 00:48:435 (1,2,3,4) - 这个？
01:50 Fycho: 你可以开mute music听下
01:50 Fycho: 恩
01:50 Fycho: 对
01:51 Zero__wind: 为什么这样呢？
01:51 Fycho: 这样有过度
01:51 Fycho: 这样听起来好点 觉得
01:51 Zero__wind: 我是建议00:48:524 (2) - 这一个 改成clap 和1一样
01:51 Zero__wind: 34不变
01:52 Zero__wind: 打鼓的时候也是两下两下会比较正常的…
01:52 Zero__wind: 曲子本身的话 2那个时间点也比较像clap
01:53 Fycho: ok
01:53 Zero__wind: 01:02:185 (3) - 这个的距离是为了不让01:01:649 (1,4) - 接触么
01:54 Zero__wind: 个人感觉01:02:185 (3) - 这里有点过远
01:54 Zero__wind: 不太舒服
01:54 Fycho: 三句每个间距逐渐提升
01:55 Zero__wind: 嗯 我只是说这一个局部 01:02:006 (2) - 和01:02:185 (3) - 之间
01:56 Fycho: 间隔太远了吗
01:56 Zero__wind: 嗯
01:56 Zero__wind: 01:02:185 (3,4) - 假设你保持01:02:185 (3,4) - 之间的间距1.0~1.1
01:56 Fycho: 再近的话就真没什么难点了 这图
01:56 Zero__wind: 01:02:006 (2,3) - 建议间距在2.2~2.3 这个样子
01:56 Zero__wind: 如果你要说为什么……我没法解释……
01:57 Zero__wind: 我自己重新摆了感觉了一下=。=
01:57 Zero__wind: 01:01:649 (1) - 它的位置相对还是比较灵活的 可以让它往上一些 这样相对的01:02:185 (3,4) - 就可以一起往上一些
01:58 Zero__wind: 你甚至可以让01:01:470 (6,1) - 两个一起往上一些
02:00 Zero__wind: 01:09:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个角度不太好
02:00 Zero__wind: 按你现在的摆法 其实我一开始以为你要顺时针， 后来发现我反了
02:01 Fycho: 散点小跳
02:01 Fycho: 可以把2改一下
02:01 Fycho: 滑条
02:01 Zero__wind: 01:09:506 (2,3,4) -
02:01 Zero__wind: 不不不 主要问题在这里
02:02 Zero__wind: 01:09:685 (3) - 的位置让移动角度太小了 建议简单放blancket位
02:02 Zero__wind: 其实那都不算很好
02:02 Zero__wind: 我觉得最好是01:09:685 (3) - 放到(248,220)这一带
02:03 Zero__wind: 到底要和滑条接触多少你自己定
02:04 Zero__wind: 或者你想变化小一点 哪怕你让01:09:685 (3) - 稍微高一点 到（328,208）这样 都会舒服很多
02:04 Zero__wind: 01:11:649 (1) - finish
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:12:363 (4,6) - whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:078 (3) - 头上whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 和开头一段完全一样的
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:792 (5,7) - whistle
02:05 Zero__wind: 01:13:435 (4) - 头上whistle
02:06 Fycho: 恩
02:06 Zero__wind: 啊 不这么说了 总之就是曲子本身的whistle频率是很高的
02:06 Zero__wind: 1拍一个
02:07 Zero__wind: 01:18:078 (5,6,7) - 的移动不太舒服
02:07 Zero__wind: 01:18:435 (6) - 建议扔到01:17:363 (3) - 上面去
02:08 Zero__wind: 或者或许你可以试试6不动 01:18:792 (1) - 反向
02:10 Zero__wind: 我指的是大概这样 后面的东西略微调整 http://puu.sh/3o6Wr.jpg
02:10 Zero__wind: 嘛 这种建议完全是随自己喜欢
02:11 Fycho: 恩
02:11 Zero__wind: 01:21:113 (6,7,8) - (408,128) 如何
02:13 Fycho: 不好了
02:13 Zero__wind: 01:23:613 (3) - 角度更大一些比较舒服 http://puu.sh/3o742.jpg
02:13 Zero__wind: 哦哦
02:13 Fycho: 那样跳起来不美观了
02:14 Zero__wind: 还有就是最后最后那几个跳 多几个finish
02:14 Zero__wind: 没了
02:15 Zero__wind: 然后hard
02:15 Fycho: 好
02:15 Fycho: Hard留着post吧 明天我期末考..
02:15 Zero__wind: ok

Good luck
＊ 给你凑点儿sp
Thank you very much~All nearly wre fixed
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
感觉还可以, 不过每次跳完空拍都叠着, 有点像dna某个时期的风格


Insane

  1. 00:10:578 (2,3,4) - 正方形好小, 这样怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836785
  2. 00:34:863 (2) - 这个往下放一点比较好
  3. 01:10:220 (1) - 这里跳得好大 不好打233
  4. 01:22:363 (4,5) - 右下角太可怕。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836795
  5. 00:48:524 (2,3,4) - 可以把这个连打放的有点弧度 然后把00:49:328 (2) - 放外面去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836801
Hard

  1. 00:01:649 (1) - 往下一格
  2. 01:07:185 (1) - 去了吧//
  3. 01:17:363 (1,2) - clap呢
Normal

  1. 00:07:363 (1) - 往右下一格。。
  2. 我感觉这两个tick加的不好.. 还不如别加, 后面有clap了再开始
  3. 01:05:220 (2) - 这个1/1就好了。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836809
Easy

  1. 滑条挺好看的
  2. 00:34:506 (1,2) - 这两个有点挤, 突出部分和(3)也配合不好, 你换个形状
  3. 01:24:328 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836812
嗯
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
久違的mod :)


整體
---------------

ok，都正確~!


Easy
---------------
ok


Normal
---------------

00:17:006 (4) - 應該可+一個note ? (+clap)
00:20:220 (1) - 後面拉到白線 +clap ?
00:22:542 (5) - 可斟酌+個note
00:32:006 (3) - ^ (+clap 可以不加)
00:51:649 (1,2,3) - 結尾 whistle
00:59:863 (6) - 可斟酌+個note
01:07:363 (2) - 結尾whistle除去



Hard
---------------
00:04:506 (1) - 綠線音量改 30 or 40 60有點大聲被蓋掉..
01:11:649 (1) - ^


Insane
---------------
00:04:506 (1) - ^ 同Hard
01:09:506 (2) - +finish
01:11:649 (1) - 音量同00:04:506

完成!
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

感觉还可以, 不过每次跳完空拍都叠着, 有点像dna某个时期的风格

Normal

  1. 00:07:363 (1) - 往右下一格。。K
  2. 我感觉这两个tick加的不好.. 还不如别加, 后面有clap了再开始
  3. 01:05:220 (2) - 这个1/1就好了。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836809 不。。我觉得这样好

嗯
Sun Rainbow
1,383 posts
Joined January 2011
Sun Rainbow

smallboat wrote:

久違的mod :)


00:17:006 (4) - 應該可+一個note ? (+clap) WHAT?
00:20:220 (1) - 後面拉到白線 +clap ?
00:22:542 (5) - 可斟酌+個note ^
00:32:006 (3) - ^ (+clap 可以不加) ^
00:51:649 (1,2,3) - 結尾 whistle
00:59:863 (6) - 可斟酌+個note ^
01:07:363 (2) - 結尾whistle除去

FIXED

完成!
http://puu.sh/3qfor.osu
Fycho
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Topic Starter
Fycho
SPOILER

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

感觉还可以, 不过每次跳完空拍都叠着, 有点像dna某个时期的风格


Insane

  1. 00:10:578 (2,3,4) - 正方形好小, 这样怎么样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836785 觉得原来比较好0.0
  2. 00:34:863 (2) - 这个往下放一点比较好OK
  3. 01:10:220 (1) - 这里跳得好大 不好打233多几PC可破，有点难度好
  4. 01:22:363 (4,5) - 右下角太可怕。。http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836795
  5. 00:48:524 (2,3,4) - 可以把这个连打放的有点弧度 然后把00:49:328 (2) - 放外面去 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836801OK
Hard

  1. 00:01:649 (1) - 往下一格 OK
  2. 01:07:185 (1) - 去了吧// OK
  3. 01:17:363 (1,2) - clap呢 FIXED

嗯
Thank you for modding
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smallboat wrote:

久違的mod :)


整體
---------------




Hard
---------------
00:04:506 (1) - 綠線音量改 30 or 40 60有點大聲被蓋掉..Fixed
01:11:649 (1) - ^


Insane
---------------
00:04:506 (1) - ^ 同Hard Fixed
01:09:506 (2) - +finish觉得没必要0.0
01:11:649 (1) - 音量同00:04:506Fixed

完成!
Thank you for modding~
happy623
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happy623

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

感觉还可以, 不过每次跳完空拍都叠着, 有点像dna某个时期的风格

Easy

  1. 滑条挺好看的
  2. 00:34:506 (1,2) - 这两个有点挤, 突出部分和(3)也配合不好, 你换个形状
  3. 01:24:328 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/836812 All fixed
嗯
感謝ww
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lkx_Shore
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[First]
为什么你叠东西喜欢用0.05x...我感觉0.1x美观多了

[Insane]
00:11:292 (1) - 不好看
00:13:792 (3,4) - 3跳到4很绕手..
01:10:756 (2,3) - 下得莫名

[Hard]
00:58:613 (1,2,3,4) - 为啥不摆成菱形，你现在这样我感觉有点难读

[Normal]
00:15:578 (3) - 不觉得很奇怪吗..
00:21:292 (2) - 放到00:20:220 (1) - 弯口中间？
00:23:078 (1) - 同，很奇怪
00:30:578 (2) - ^
00:57:542 (1) - 头finish？
00:58:078 (2) - finish?
01:05:935 (1) - 很莫名
01:21:470 (3,4) - 不觉得很怪吗..+1

[623's Easy]
00:22:542 (2) - 包好？
01:07:363 (1) - 感觉有点过度扭曲，第一部分那

[Other]
把给你做gd的人标在信息界面

Goodluck
happy623
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happy623

lkx_Shore wrote:

[623's Easy]
00:22:542 (2) - 包好？
01:07:363 (1) - 感觉有点过度扭曲，第一部分那 All fixed

Goodluck
http://puu.sh/3rJha.rar
Mod感謝 :)
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow

lkx_Shore wrote:

[Normal]
00:15:578 (3) - 不觉得很奇怪吗.. 不。。
00:21:292 (2) - 放到00:20:220 (1) - 弯口中间？ Fixed
00:23:078 (1) - 同，很奇怪
00:30:578 (2) - ^
00:57:542 (1) - 头finish？ Fixed
00:58:078 (2) - finish? Fixed
01:05:935 (1) - 很莫名 听清楚
01:21:470 (3,4) - 不觉得很怪吗..+1


Goodluck
Sun Rainbow
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Fycho
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lkx_Shore wrote:

[First]
为什么你叠东西喜欢用0.05x...我感觉0.1x美观多了

[Insane]
00:11:292 (1) - 不好看 形状稍微改了
00:13:792 (3,4) - 3跳到4很绕手..觉得还好
01:10:756 (2,3) - 下得莫名 fixed

[Hard]
00:58:613 (1,2,3,4) - 为啥不摆成菱形，你现在这样我感觉有点难读 这个也改了



[Other]
把给你做gd的人标在信息界面 OK~

Goodluck
Thanks for modding~
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All updated.
Hatori-kun
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Started to like this ending after taking a look in this map, good job!
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Hatori-kun wrote:

Started to like this ending after taking a look in this map, good job!
Thank you`w`
Jycool
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Jycool
mod from your pm

[general]
normal的节奏下的很莫名，hard做的质量很高，insane的节奏有几个地方不是很舒服，建议参考hard难度的节奏
[623's Easy]
nothing
[normal]
00:04:506 (1) - 这个音你要是抓全的话还是拉到00:04:863 - 结束再在00:05:042 - 加一个滑条到00:05:399 - 结束
从00:04:506 - 到00:07:006 - 的节奏下法推荐你这样
SPOILER
00:08:435 (2) - 移到00:08:256 -
00:15:578 - 到00:16:649 - 的节奏下法推荐，你之前下的感觉很奇怪，不合曲，因为你跟的是vocal
SPOILER
01:28:792 (3) - 尾巴去掉clap
[hard]
00:04:506 (1) - 去掉whistle，拍掌声和whistle的擦音放一起不是很协调，只放clap就够了
00:05:220 (3) - 同上
00:05:399 (4) - 同上
00:05:935 (2) - 同上
00:06:649 (4) - 同上
00:07:006 (5) - 同上
同样还有最后的那段，我就不复制了
01:08:256 (4) - 去掉note
01:20:042 (4) - 去掉note
[insane]
00:01:470 (1,2,3) - 这三个你不用刻意的摆开，系统也会自动分开成差不多这样。。。，后面也有几个这样的地方，要不就拜的开一点，还可以带flow
00:02:363 (5) - 建议换成两个单点，这个音和之前的两个滑条的感觉不一样
00:05:935 - 这里漏了拍掌声，建议把00:05:756 (1) - 这个滑条剪短一半，再加个note，hard难度这个音跟了，insane不跟不是很奇怪
00:17:542 - 这个空拍感觉意义不大，建议加note
00:25:935 (1,2) - 这两个stack感觉flow没了，建议摆开
00:56:470 - 我倒是在这里建议加一个空拍，然后把00:56:649 (2) - stack在00:55:935 (1) - 的尾巴上，然后把00:57:006 (4) - 的头也stack在00:55:935 (1) - 的尾巴上，弄一个空拍加折返跳的效果




祝rank :)
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jyc-Binggan wrote:

[hard]
00:04:506 (1) - 去掉whistle，拍掌声和whistle的擦音放一起不是很协调，只放clap就够了 我觉得还好
00:05:220 (3) - 同上
00:05:399 (4) - 同上
00:05:935 (2) - 同上
00:06:649 (4) - 同上
00:07:006 (5) - 同上
同样还有最后的那段，我就不复制了
01:08:256 (4) - 去掉note OK
01:20:042 (4) - 去掉note 这里不需要去，有个音
[insane]
00:01:470 (1,2,3) - 这三个你不用刻意的摆开，系统也会自动分开成差不多这样。。。，后面也有几个这样的地方，要不就拜的开一点，还可以带flow
00:02:363 (5) - 建议换成两个单点，这个音和之前的两个滑条的感觉不一样 差不多
00:05:935 - 这里漏了拍掌声，建议把00:05:756 (1) - 这个滑条剪短一半，再加个note，hard难度这个音跟了，insane不跟不是很奇怪 这有些变化跟着vocal比较好，clap加上了
00:17:542 - 这个空拍感觉意义不大，建议加note节奏变化1/2全下略无聊
00:25:935 (1,2) - 这两个stack感觉flow没了，建议摆开 我觉得还有flow啊
00:56:470 - 我倒是在这里建议加一个空拍，然后把00:56:649 (2) - stack在00:55:935 (1) - 的尾巴上，然后把00:57:006 (4) - 的头也stack在00:55:935 (1) - 的尾巴上，弄一个空拍加折返跳的效果 OK




祝rank :)

Thank you for modding~
wcx19911123
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as your request

[General]
lead-in set to 1000 is enough

[623's Easy]
nice diff

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:06:113 - this tick sound really odd to me, it follows nothing
00:22:542 - add a note?
I just feel this diff's rhythm is a bit mess, especially when some sliders which start or repeat at red lines

[Hard]
00:05:756 (1,2) - I suggest slider first and then circle later, rhythm would be much better
01:21:470 (1,2) - wrong spacing?
01:27:363 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the hexagon can be better

[Insane]
01:22:363 (4,5) - I think this jump can be smaller a bit..

I may give some more suggestions to Normal diff later
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wcx19911123 wrote:

as your request

[General]
lead-in set to 1000 is enough

[Hard]
00:05:756 (1,2) - I suggest slider first and then circle later, rhythm would be much better
01:21:470 (1,2) - wrong spacing?
01:27:363 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - I think the hexagon can be better

[Insane]
01:22:363 (4,5) - I think this jump can be smaller a bit..
Thank you~ All ar fixed
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
zzzz
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Rizia
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Newbie Mod :3
Mod得不好的話別給kds~~
From Forum PM
[623's Easy]
00:07:363 (5) - NC
00:08:792 (1,2,3,4) - 這正方形偏了少許

[Rainbow's Normal]
00:15:578 (3) - 聽下去感覺好怪異...可以在 00:15:935 折返 然後 00:17:006加一個circle
00:45:935 (1) - 提前在 00:48:435完? 然後可以在 00:48:792 與 00:49:149 加Note
00:58:613 (3) - 提早在 00:58:435開始?
01:22:006 這裡有音,,01:21:828 (4) - 可以轉用1/2的說

[Hard]
HP-1?
00:32:006 (2) - 疊在1下面如何?
00:47:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得這樣放會比較好移動
http://puu.sh/3uNCK.jpg


[Insane]
00:07:720 (2,3) - 會不會有點難讀
01:09:506 (2,3,4,5) - 可以做一個星形
01:10:756 (3) - 1/2比較好?
happy623
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happy623

Kawaiwkyik wrote:

Newbie Mod :3
Mod得不好的話別給kds~~
From Forum PM

[623's Easy]
00:07:363 (5) - NC 不了w
00:08:792 (1,2,3,4) - 這正方形偏了少許 fixed
thanks 家佑 :D
http://puu.sh/3uOMO.rar
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Kawaiwkyik wrote:

[Hard]
HP-1?
00:32:006 (2) - 疊在1下面如何? 感觉没有必要啊，叠着有点难看
00:47:363 (1,2,3,4,5) - 我覺得這樣放會比較好移動 这样移动还好0.0
http://puu.sh/3uNCK.jpg


[Insane]
00:07:720 (2,3) - 會不會有點難讀 不难读
01:09:506 (2,3,4,5) - 可以做一個星形本身是散点小跳不需要做正
01:10:756 (3) - 1/2比較好? OK
Thank you very much for modding and star~ :)
Kayano
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Kayano
[Normal]
OD+1
00:06:292 - clap，可以考虑把00:06:113 - 的clap删掉也可以不删
00:28:792 (1) - 我帮你重拉了一个滑条看上去会好点
SPOILER

216,212,28792,6,0,B|240:312|304:332|340:324|376:292|352:296|408:344,2,240
00:32:006 - 这里最好还是加一个circle吧……不然有点奇怪
00:40:578 - clap
00:41:292 - ^
00:42:006 - ^
01:01:649 (3,4) - 建议加上soft-default的whistle
pw384
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pw384
hi

[Insane]
* 01:09:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星？

* 01:29:328 (4,5,6) - 连打感觉没必要..

* 00:06:828 (5,6,7) - 这里的连打有些多余，考虑到前后的note的hitsound的话就更奇怪了，建议去掉00:06:917 (6) -

* 00:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - 我不太喜欢这么堆着一堆时间间隔很长的note

* 01:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我没看出来有什么排列梗。。这里摆一些跳是没问题，但是我更喜欢像前面一样的又好看有打得爽的跳梗（如果这里的确有排列的梗的话请quote回复我._.）

没别的好说的了._. ☆~ for this diff


[Hard]
* 00:05:399 (4) - unexpected

* 00:12:720 (5) - 和00:12:363 (4) - 包起来？

* 00:14:863 (2,3) - Ctrl+G来创造更好的flow？
（别忘了改音效）

* 01:12:899 - add a note


[Normal]
* OD应该是4啊0.0

* 00:55:935 (1,2) - 这里的滑条互相擦到的有些厉害..建议改一下(1)，防止(1)和(2)的尾部相擦

* 01:20:935 (2,3,4,5) - 感觉节奏不对，我喜欢这样的：


* 01:28:792 (3) - 前面三反，这里五反，会坑到新人的

怀疑是Normal


[Easy]
* 00:17:363 (1,2) - 这样才好玩嘛
截图

就这些.w.
Azure
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Azure
from mod req ヽ•´з`•ノ

[General]
none

[Easy]
nice

[Rainbow's Normal]
  1. so many green lines (*´ω｀)
  2. 00:32:006 +combo?
  3. 01:07:363 (2) I can hear the slider slide ?
[Hard]
  1. 00:22:542 (3) -finish
  2. 00:22:720 (4) +finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:756 (1) I like your idea in this map, but stick this with 00:05:399 (3) is better here
  2. 00:06:649 (4) move to 00:05:756 (1) slider's tail
  3. 00:11:292 (1) adjust little, like this http://puu.sh/3vszK.jpg don't press at (2)
  4. 00:14:149 (4) +whistle
  5. 00:17:185 (6) ^
  6. 00:25:756 (6) +clap
  7. 00:28:613 (6) ^
  8. 00:46:828 (2,3) exchange, if you use "ctrl+G", remember to change hitsound "finish"
  9. 00:51:470 (4) +clap
  10. 00:58:970 (6,7) adjust little, like this http://puu.sh/3vsJ3.jpg
  11. 01:02:899 (1) +clap
that's all ((●゜c_゜●))
happy623
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384059043 wrote:

hi

[Easy]
* 00:17:363 (1,2) - 这样才好玩嘛
截图

就这些.w.
fixed owo/ 感謝
http://puu.sh/3vuC2.rar
Sun Rainbow
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@384 真是233
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Fycho
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384059043 wrote:

[Insane]
* 01:09:328 (1,2,3,4,5) - 五角星？本意是两个三角跳

* 01:29:328 (4,5,6) - 连打感觉没必要..

* 00:06:828 (5,6,7) - 这里的连打有些多余，考虑到前后的note的hitsound的话就更奇怪了，建议去掉00:06:917 (6) - OK

* 00:10:399 (1,2,3,4) - 我不太喜欢这么堆着一堆时间间隔很长的note

* 01:20:220 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 我没看出来有什么排列梗。。这里摆一些跳是没问题，但是我更喜欢像前面一样的又好看有打得爽的跳梗（如果这里的确有排列的梗的话请quote回复我._.） 散点小跳而已

没别的好说的了._. ☆~ for this diff


[Hard]
* 00:05:399 (4) - unexpected 改了0.0

* 00:12:720 (5) - 和00:12:363 (4) - 包起来？ OK

* 00:14:863 (2,3) - Ctrl+G来创造更好的flow？Hard里的小跳
（别忘了改音效）

* 01:12:899 - add a note 没必要啊，后面也有空拍



就这些.w.
Thank you for mod and star~
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Fycho
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Azure wrote:

from mod req ヽ•´з`•ノ


[Hard]
  1. 00:22:542 (3) -finish
  2. 00:22:720 (4) +finish
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:756 (1) I like your idea in this map, but stick this with 00:05:399 (3) is better here OK
  2. 00:06:649 (4) move to 00:05:756 (1) slider's tail OK
  3. 00:11:292 (1) adjust little, like this http://puu.sh/3vszK.jpg don't press at (2) when this prees at(2),it looks better
  4. 00:14:149 (4) +whistleNo,if this ,the hitsounds will be a mixed
  5. 00:17:185 (6) ^
  6. 00:25:756 (6) +clap
  7. 00:28:613 (6) ^
  8. 00:46:828 (2,3) exchange, if you use "ctrl+G", remember to change hitsound "finish" why?
  9. 00:51:470 (4) +clap
  10. 00:58:970 (6,7) adjust little, like this http://puu.sh/3vsJ3.jpg OK
  11. 01:02:899 (1) +clap
that's all ((●゜c_゜●))
Thank you for modding~
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