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Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl

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lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, July 20, 2009 at 11:50:31 PM

Artist: Liverne
Title: Beloved Tomboyish Girl
Tags: cirno 9 touhou baka
BPM: 140
Filesize: 3879kb
Play Time: 03:15
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.88 stars, 459 notes)
  2. Normal (4.49 stars, 385 notes)
Download: Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl
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Don't worry this song only vaguely resembles cirno's theme.

I'm gonna drop animasks difficulty for now(sorry) and any further SB effects I felt just got in the way like ice shattering.
Last edited by lukewarmholiday , edited 21 times in total.
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
blissfulyoshi
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Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
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lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
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lukewarmholiday

blissfulyoshi wrote:

01:17:41 (1,2,3,4) - I really disliked how 1,2 and 3,4 greatly differed from 5,6 and 7,8
.
Last 2 are only ones spaced differently
Faust
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Joined January 2009
Faust
Hm..for a pretty relaxing song,some notes made me panic a little. I personally liked what you did on the freezing and the thawing. It was fantastic though I felt some notes were placed way too far. Im giving this a star either way. Also,it seems alot of people like beatmapping Liverne's songs nowadays.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
I need more specifics, like replays. so I know what people are getting hung up on.

And who said relaxing songs need relaxing maps
SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi~!
[Normal]
  1. 00:49:56 (4,5) - Align with (2) and then 00:50:20 (1) with it,
  2. 01:26:204 - Really long break
[Hard]
  1. 00:31:02 (2,3) - Not well stacked by few pixels,
  2. 00:37:88 (2,3) - 1 pixel off :<,
  3. 01:05:31 (2,3) - Same here,
  4. 01:55:13 (2) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
  5. 02:01:98 (2) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
  6. 02:06:70 (1) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
  7. 02:08:84 (3) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?.
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I must say: beatmap is very well made and song is cool ^^.
Of course -ed.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
# 01:55:13 (2) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
# 02:01:98 (2) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
# 02:06:70 (1) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?,
# 02:08:84 (3) - Maybe cut it by 1/2 and put a repeat on?.
No, but I guess Ill turn up the volume on the slider tick
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Caution, may contain nazi modding...

Normal
00:34:56 (3) - Add a finish?
00:41:41 (3) - Same as ^.
00:52:98 (1,1,2) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
01:06:70 (1) - This is not spaced to the end of the 6 slider beforehand.
01:10:13 (1,2,1) - Not spaced.
01:15:70 (1) - Not spaced to the slider beforehand.
02:27:48 (1,2) - Not spaced to the 1 beforehand.
02:31:13 (1) - Not spaced to the slider beforehand.
03:15:27 (2) - Make this a pure horizontal flip of the 1 as it's right now touching the oncoming stack yet the 1 isn't

Hard
03:04:02 (5) - Make this a pure horizontal flip of the 2.
03:14:41 (1,2,3) - A little too large of a jump for a duel hitcircle combo 1/2 after this, make it smaller so the player can jump to the next combo please?

starred' for lack of non-nazi errors.
KogureKun
7 posts
Joined April 2009
KogureKun
10/10 would star again
Ryuukun
476 posts
Joined December 2008
Ryuukun
~
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
yeah nice song! :)
I love it
LuigiHann
Resident Skinner
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LuigiHann
I like the light storyboard. There's a checkbox in the Storyboarding tab of song setup so you can turn off "letterboxing during breaks," which will disable the black bars that, at the moment, kind of spoil the surprise of the SB. Also, is it too much to ask for some ice cracking effects during the breakdown of little flashes, followed by ice shards flying away at the big flash? It'd be more work but it'd be great.

[Normal]
-I think you could decrease the circle size a notch here. It's pretty crowded, especially at the beginning. It'd be easier to read if the circles weren't so large.

[Hard]
-I really like the way this is mapped, but you need some sort of indicator of when the sliders will be slow. I suggest a glowing border around the edge of the screen that changes color from light to dark, hopefully that'd be enough of a guide without detracting from the main effect of the SB.
Sleep Powder
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Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Normal]
00:37:98 (1) - Finish maybe?
00:44:84 (1) - ^
Clean-up Tip~ 00:45:06 (2,3,4,5,6) - Clean up the spacing a bit...
01:05:41 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:31:34 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:36:27 (4) - Whistle?
02:37:13 (7) - ^
SB <3
Can I make a difficulty for this?~

[Hard]
00:31:02 (2) - Take out Clap
00:37:88 (2) - ^
00:44:73 (2) - ^
01:25:56 (3) - ^
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Zerostarry
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
[Hard]
00:31:02 (2) - Take out Clap
00:37:88 (2) - ^
00:44:73 (2) - ^
01:25:56 (3) - ^
Elaborate or recheck what you're telling me to change because I tried that and it sounds like arse.
Alace
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Alace
offset:+5ms??

<Normal>
-1 overall diff??

<Hard>
pretty good
but i like Normal`s hitsounds more
there are a bit too many claps in hard IMO

Have a star
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
Something more insane for the good players~

Download: Liverne - Beloved Tomboyish Girl (lukewarmholiday) [animask Difficulty].osu
tieff
Featured Artist
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tieff
Cirno *____* Awesome map!

[Normal]
00:27:71 (4,1) - Jumps on normal? I really like this jump, but...
00:39:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:43:78 (3,1) - Spacing?
00:51:49 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing.
00:56:85 (5,6) - Jump. =(
02:13:99 (3) - New combo?
03:15:71 (2) - Finish?

[Hard]
00:40:35 (5) - Hard to see this note.
02:20:85 (1,1,1,1) - Cool place for jumps?

Starred. I'll give you kudosu star later.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
Introducing people to jumps early puts hair on their chests, and everyone wants to be manly.

Even women.

tieff wrote:

Cirno *____* Awesome map!

[Normal]
00:27:71 (4,1) - Jumps on normal? I really like this jump, but...
00:39:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:43:78 (3,1) - Spacing? k
00:51:49 (2,3) - Nazi. Spacing. k
00:56:85 (5,6) - Jump. =(
02:13:99 (3) - New combo? k
03:15:71 (2) - Finish? k

[Hard]
00:40:35 (5) - Hard to see this note. k
02:20:85 (1,1,1,1) - Cool place for jumps? I wanted this to be more of a buildup section.

Starred. I'll give you kudosu star later.
I could make an easy if people want but cirno's normals and hards are the strongest.
tieff
Featured Artist
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lukewarmholiday
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tieff wrote:

Kudosu star!
Btw, I don't think you need east diff.
whoops, here's your kudosu
Alace
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Alace
<Normal>
00:56:85 (5) - new combo here?? poor Alace got a miss here XD

<Hard>
02:23:85 (1,2,3,4,1) - remove those caps??
02:44:31 (1) - remove clap lol

<Guest diff>
00:31:13 (1,2,3) - it doesn`t fit the song the claps sound bad
00:37:98 (1,2) - ^
And plz
remove those random claps
make a clap patten like luke`s
Jinxy
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Joined February 2009
Jinxy
I came in here expecting a childish song.
I is wrong.

This song is refreshing, you really feel like you just dived into the lake.

And I didn't find any problems either, so starred.
lukewarmholiday
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Alace
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Alace
Well
bubble time
ignorethis
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Starrodkirby86
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[Normal] is quite the difficult task for nublets. Can you consider lowering the HP drain a widdle bit?

Other than that...droolworthy. *o* Tell me what you think of my suggestion, then you'll get your heart~
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
No problem. Tis a fun map after all.
Starrodkirby86
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AHHHH SWEET SUCCESS
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
Inb4 someone gets up in arms about the break.

Starrodkirby86
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Wait...if those are her clothes lying there...SHE MUST BE NEKKID OH MY GOD GET HER

(By the way, this map really impressed me, really reminded me of the Chinese mappers :3)
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Ephemeral

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

Wait...if those are her clothes lying there...SHE MUST BE NEKKID OH MY GOD GET HER

(By the way, this map really impressed me, really reminded me of the Chinese mappers :3)
EXCEPT FOR THE 20 SECOND BREAK AAAGH

mtmcl was torn a new asshole over a 25s break in I want you, SO SHOULD YOU
foulcoon
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foulcoon
Shut up about the 20 second break already, not like its the first.
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