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Topic Starter
-White

TritoBandito and -White's Beginner Mapper Feedback Queue

Get feedback on your map from ranked mappers!

THIS IS A FEEDBACK QUEUE, NOT A MOD QUEUE: IF YOU WANT TO IMPROVE, THIS IS THE PLACE TO BE, BUT IF YOU ONLY WANT MODS, YOU SHOULD LOOK SOMEWHERE ELSE
Rules

1. Beginner Mappers only!
We will not be modding things like metadata, spread, etc. While these aspects are undoubtably important for ranking a map, our goal is to improving you as a mapper, not improving the map.

2. Be Open to Feedback and Prepared for Criticism
We are not here to tell you that your map is amazing. We're here to help you improve. That usually includes some hard truths.

3. No 'meme', 'aim-training', obnoxiously difficult 10*+ jump spam maps, etc.
If you didn't genuinely try your best to make a map and/or aren't genuinely trying to improve, we genuinely won't (and can't) help you.

4. Your map must be finished.
This may seem silly, but there are a lot of aspects of maps that are okay in isolation but problematic when put into the context of the rest of the map. A verse being difficult often doesn't make sense if the chorus is really easy, for example. Do note, however, that hitsounds are not required (we don't recommend you hitsound your first maps), nor will we likely give feedback on them if you do have them.
About us

Check our profiles!
TritoBandito
-White
How can I trust you?

Both Trito and I have ranked maps and have been mentored in the past. I myself am a mentor for the Community Mentorship Program and have mentees of my own. We're both very familiar with the ranking process, mapping standards, and a variety of mapping styles. See our profiles for more information!

Preferences

We're both open to most things, but vocaloid is a huge plus!
All mapping styles are welcome!
Requesting Process

Step 1: Link your map

Step 2: Include any other information you want us to consider when looking at your map.
Did you attempt a gimmick? Did you attempt to copy a style? Is there a specific aspect of the map you want us to focus on, such as rhythm or patterning? Anything that would help us tailor our feedback to what you were trying to do.

Step 3: Tune in to the stream or watch the VOD to get your feedback.
In order to get through as many requests as possible in an interactive, fun way, we'll be handling all feedback through scheduled feedback streams roughly every 2 months (maybe more frequent depending on demand, let us know). Information on the stream and schedule will be updated below as appropriate, as well as in a post on this thread.

Step 4: Profit


We may seem intimidating but we're both super chill and we genuinely want to see all of you become top-tier mappers. If you ever have questions, want feedback, or just someone to talk to, you can always send us a DM (discord, website chat, in-game).

Be sure to check out the Community Mentorship Program and apply as a mentee if you're looking to learn from a vetted and experienced mapper! Applications for mentees open on December 25th!
DeletedUser_10883764
FEELTHEPAIN
beatmapsets/1517114#osu/3105810
nm
main question: is this map rankable after a few improvements?
Minecraft s
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1476010#osu/3028754

discussion page modding and discord text both ok

trying to aim for rank but i feel like theres a lot of problems with this
Size89foot
beatmapsets/1516598#osu/3104658

aiming for ranked

also please comment on hitsounds too
DrSuk
beatmapsets/1518298#osu/3108025
Think I'm ok-ish at rhythm, just wanna check placement isn't too terrible. Thanks.
Dinotronik
beatmapsets/1463818#osu/3070936
Discussion modding ig
Would like any opinions on my insane and hard diffs
100God
beatmapsets/1484713#osu/3044763


discuss through page modding / discord

Want to make visual appealing maps that can be loved or ranked but its not my main focus

My Main focus is just to improve my mapping ability
RoseYoshino
melleganol
beatmapsets/1511513#osu/3095009
discuss through page modding
I want to fix flaws in my mapping and be able to rank =)
BaRho80
beatmapsets/1516418#osu/3104352
Discussion through page modding
I'd like for this map to get ranked, but it's not a big goal of mine. I'm wondering mainly how to improve my jumps and make them flow better.
ZevinLevin
beatmapsets/1488003#osu/3050533

Voice chat if possible, otherwise discussion page is fine.

Main gimmick is use of perfect overlaps for similar/same sounds.
gay women kiss
beatmapsets/1518668#osu/3108726

Discussion through page modding

I just want to see if there's any major flaws or not and maybe aim for ranked
Fisch
beatmapsets/1517186#osu/3105981

Discussion page modding or Discord text are both ok

I'm not aiming for rank since this is my first map, I mainly want to get better as a mapper
Hakk
beatmapsets/1506931#osu/3086527

discussion page for modding most things is fine, also discussion through discord is ok too.

i mainly want to improve this/improve as a mapper, so anything is fine
-Sabao-
beatmapsets/1261834#osu/3075559

discussion page modding

thank you
Shinobu24s
beatmapsets/1391319#osu/2872847

Discussion on modding page/discord text/voice all ok, your preference tbh

This is my first map attempt for ranked but honestly not aiming for rank anymore

I just would like to know how expierienced mappers see this map/style idk and how I could improve it

Thanks in advance!
[Yoshino]
Currently have no ranked map, many diffs need to be modded! Because I want this map gets ranked someday. (You can mod any diffs you want)
Thanks for your big help :)

I prefer discussion page modding, so i can give you lots of kudosu.
>> beatmapsets/1514140#osu/3107120
Senzubean328
beatmapsets/1456531#osu/2993637

I would prefer discussion page for feedback, thanks alot
aundy
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1497392#osu/3102286
modding page and discord both works fine!

i want to get some feedback on the overall maps (including gds) and what can be improved more!
Gorou
im new mapper plz mod my map
Topic Starter
-White

Wanpachi wrote:

im new mapper plz mod my map
ur maps are too doomed, cant help
DaRKMaRoWaK
beatmapsets/1448748#osu/3056677

Discussion page modding

Thanks! ^.^
Mylonad3
beatmapsets/1513086#osu/3097979

I used a lot of time making this map and it's just my second time but i really wanna get this map loved/ranked.
Feedback would be fine anywhere, Thanks!
joshiehehe
beatmapsets/1330991#osu/2761983

NM
I'd like to receive feed back through the discussion page.
I tried going for linear streams into jumps. Wondering if this would be alright or just needs to be fixed to help the map flow smoother.

Thank you!
DecayAnt
beatmapsets/1519465#osu/3110125
live discussions through voice chat. discord is on my userpage.
I wanna make a difficult map with a farmish style with the classic hard map vibes, a sort of mix. With this one, I tried to go with a mix of Taeyang and Sotarks with a bit of overall tech and finger control and stamina.

Step 4: Profit :)
Lynxz01
beatmapsets/1519487#osu/3110154

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Discussion page or osu dms is fine
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I'd like to know if there's something missing in my map and how far is it from being ranked, constructive criticism is appreacited<3
Westaboo
beatmapsets/1478831#osu/3096643

mostly curious about the hard dif w/ discussion page. thanks.
brain exe
beatmapsets/1506231#osu/3085307

if you have the time i'd love live feedback but discussion page is great too =D
discord preferably: brain.exe#8104

this is my first submitted map but i made lots of private trash before this lol
mdionela
beatmapsets/1509439#osu/309121

would be nice to receive more mods, since this is my first time making a map.
Using the discussion page is fine

thanks!
Essentori
Hello, open for any feedback way: discussion page, dm or Discord (including voice).

Map: Au5 - Eden (feat. Danyka Nadeau)
  1. Music genre: Dubstep, Complextro
  2. Mapset diffs:
    1. 2,41*
    2. 3,94*
    3. 5,34*
  3. Custom HS
P.S. any critique is acceptable

Thank you in advance =3
royoroyoroyo
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1518808#osu/3110157

discussion page
just wanna know if there's anything wrong or weird with my style of mapping, thank :v
eLzL
beatmapsets/1488426#osu/3072422

note : probably gonna remove hard diff, thanks
KumiDaiko
beatmapsets/1517813#osu/3107126

dunno u can consider me as new since ive been mapping for 3 months now but id really appreciate it if u mod my map
Topic Starter
-White
Updated process to include notice that only voice chat requests have guaranteed chance to be given feedback (just because it's so much easier than typing everything)
DeletedUser_13764035
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1472030#osu/3021821
NM Req
You can discuss through discord (no voice chat)
-ablaze
beatmapsets/1519346#osu/3109920

my questions: is it rankable, how i can improve siders and where can i find mappers for gd besides forum(it's very difficult to find mappers)
Z5553
beatmapsets/1396661#osu/2882458

totally cool with voice chat, preferably through discord. nothing too noteworthy to know about the map--just tried to follow the music. thanks so much for any consideration!
Afhix
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1510827#osu/3093964

discussion page is fine, I'm just looking to improve as a mapper, ty
Topic Starter
-White
bump
shenkoboz
beatmapsets/1514656#osu/3101057

discussion page works just fine, my first ever map and I think it is something off on it, thanks a lot!
Ninjaking311
beatmapsets/1518059#osu/3107630

Voice is okay with me.

Going for generic mapping style.
Yonacher123
beatmapsets/1521131#osu/3113170
discussion page is ok, i want to get this mapset ranked but optimized
KingOfNigel
beatmapsets/1520248#osu/3111442

I Dont mind any way of receiving feedback. I will do whatever you prefer.
BaRho80
beatmapsets/1521264#osu/3113420

NM

Prefer discussion page, but if a voice chat gives better quality feedback, then I'm willing to go for that instead.

Well, I'm submitting another map to this queue. In this particular map, I'm wondering how to map fast sections without resorting to stream spam. Also, the 2* is truly in a sorry state since I have no idea how to map 2*s, so advice regarding that would be appreciated as well.

Thanks!
KGlloom
beatmapsets/1520459#osu/3111857

Looking for opinions on use of space, and things making sense/readability. The map gets harder at 3rd kiai but I'm not sure if it's too much compared to the first part. Be critical please(:
Grateful
beatmapsets/1520048#osu/3111160

voice chat available but doesn't guarantee to be able to talk. discord: Naz#7648

extremely stream heavy and this is the first time I've ever tried to do hitsounding so feedback on that would be greatly appreciated!
cdwcgt
beatmapsets/1228813

I want use discuss page
My english bad so can't use voice ;W;

it is simple map and finished
Jepugga
beatmapsets/1520667#osu/3112280

Discuss page is fine, osu! DM's are fine also but unfortunately will be quite busy next week so won't be online as much. Discord DM's would probs work best besides the discuss page, and voicechat is fine while I am available. Jepugga#7289
As for the times when I am available for voice chat, probs after a week or so, and as such, I don't think modding my map will take priority, as I do realize how useful voicecomms are.

Tried to stay away from bursts and streams, going for doubles instead of triples with alt.
Trying to keep the map at most 5.5*, since I don't think I could make a harder map that's playable.
Oh also pls don't sugarcoat things as it only makes it harder to make sense what I'm being taught...
karta
beatmapsets/1421102#osu/2927143

i don't know English lol, so I'm sorry, no voice :(
however, i would not mind mods. yes, the map is not the first, but there are errors there that i myself cannot understand. something seems to be wrong in my map, and it annoys me. i want experienced people to help me with this.

i'm far from a pro, so don't get me wrong.
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