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Haru - Withered Leaf (Instrumental)

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Cyclone
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, August 22, 2009 at 12:41:01 AM

Artist: Haru
Title: Withered Leaf (Instrumental)
Source: Touhou
Tags: Perfect Cherry Blossom Chen Touhou
BPM: 107
Filesize: 4495kb
Play Time: 03:39
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.6 stars, 496 notes)
  2. Sir Minelli's Normal (4.1 stars, 368 notes)
Download: Haru - Withered Leaf (Instrumental)
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For Nexy's project.

Chen's theme.

Quite repetative (see: Bookmarks), but I think I managed to do alright.

Thanks to Sir Minelli for [Normal]. Few changes made by me though.

I can't come up with an easy either. Hopefully these 2 difficulties will suffice. Moved to pending.
Last edited by Cyclone , edited 10 times in total.
anonymous_old
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When playing I didn't feel like it was too repetitive.

Star.

Personally I don't like the bright red combo colour. Maybe a dark green or muddy yellow (like parts of the sky in the background) would be more suitable.

03:21:88 (7) - One grid space up, I think.
03:26:64 (6) - New combo? Fine as-is though.
Cyclone
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strager wrote:

When playing I didn't feel like it was too repetitive.

Star.

Personally I don't like the bright red combo colour. Maybe a dark green or muddy yellow (like parts of the sky in the background) would be more suitable.

What I mean is, I could have copy-pasted the same loop 3 times and all the notes would have still fit (and make a pretty boring map)

As far as the colors go, I really don't like to base my colors off the background too much, since it'll just blend in and be hard to see. I DO like to base them off whatever characters may be themed though. See below:


So yeah. Red, Green, White, and.. well i started to do brown after her hair, but found maroon to be a better color in this case >_> Though i guess i could add in yellow... (more of a gold though i guess..) EDIT: alright, I changed the colors a bit.



03:21:88 (7) - One grid space up, I think.
03:26:64 (6) - New combo? Fine as-is though.
Took 1st, not 2nd.
anonymous_old
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Made a little storyboard. Use it if you'd like.

http://liranuna.com/strager/b/withered- ... yboard.zip

One problem: the desaturation doesn't continue after the song is fading away, so the background pops back into its normal self. Not too appealing, but I don't know how to fix it.
Cyclone
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I may use that SB, but i'll have to tweak it a bit.

Also, normal's going to be a paaaaaaaaaaaaain to make without it being completely mind numbing... i have no idea how to do it...
Sir Minelli
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Sir Minelli
I think the offset you are looking for is: 8.970
Try to confirm this though, because currently i'm at my job, and internet here sux. So i lag a bit when playing.

[Hard]

00:47:11 (7) - match it with previous slider
02:06:18 (11) - new combo


That's all for the moment.
Currently mapping normal. I'll post it so you see if you like.
I liked the song.
Sir Minelli
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Sir Minelli
Here you go~

Download: Haru - Withered Leaf (Instrumental) (Cyclone) [Sir Minelli's Normal].osu
Sir Minelli
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Sir Minelli
Edited previous uploaded difficulty.

Easier now, take a look~

Download: Haru - Withered Leaf (Instrumental) (Cyclone) [Sir Minelli's Normal].osu
tieff
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tieff
I know, it's WIP, but I like song...

[Sir Minelli's Normal]
01:05:05 (7,8) - Spacing?
02:10:94 (4,5,6) - Maybe too hard for normal... Replace this triple note with slider?
03:07:02 (5,6,7) - ^
03:15:99 (3,4,5) - ^
03:26:64 (4) - Whistle on end of slider? Becouse of high note...
03:27:48 (6) - Whistle?

Starred, yeah. Fun to play.
Cyclone
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Shinxyn
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I don't know if this'll be of any help...

Normal-
01:05:05 (7) - remove slider whistle or add to 00:47:11 (7) (since they're pretty much the same thing), but I'd prefer remove
02:16:83 (8) - please change the last clap to finish (since the claps halt for a bit) or add some claps in the no-hitsound gap
02:25:80 (1) - end on the blue tick please?
03:26:64 (4) - remove slider whistle please
03:33:93 (2) - ^
The volume for the last soft section should be lowered
I can't say I like the soft clap and whistle mixes, but they're okay. More like, there's more claps than whistles, so why not just stick with one, or mix both equally.
I'll make a seperate extreme nazi mod-
00:41:22 (4) - lower a tick (then fix next part's spacing)
00:47:11 (7) - right a tick
00:59:17 (4) - same as 00:41:22
01:47:11 (12,13) - left + down a tick
02:07:86 (1,1) - please lower stack leniency (cuz you can notice this during play)
02:14:31 (1,2,3,4,5) - right a tick
02:22:44 (4) - right a tick


Hard- Hmm I can only nazi~
00:47:11 (7) - can I just nazi and say "nudge this left with grid snap off, to place perfectly under (4) and on top of (8)
00:56:64 (9) - up a tick~
01:03:65 (4) - down a tick (so it's equal in distance compared to (1,2)
01:05:06 (7,8,9) - ^ if so, then move this bunch down
01:26:92 (6) - left a tick
03:11:22 (3) - I just felt there should be a clap on the first beat of this slider..
03:20:20 (3) - ^
03:21:32 (6) - I know this sounds like 03:12:34 (6), but please remove the clap at the end, since the clap makes it seem like the music continues that way
I like Sir_Minelli's soft audio sections more... maybe apply to hard, too?
Like Normal, please decrease the volume for the last (or for Hard... "only") soft section, its too loud compared to the music
Redo Break

I think theres a lot of places where there should be new combos, but oh well >_<
Honestly, I feel that the normal-clap needs to be customized... just... the sound needs to be held longer.. maybe softer, too..
-I'll work on a Spinner and maybe comboburst if you'd like~~-
GladiOol
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KatanAnime
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I think both normal and hard are well made :P but its just me :D Star
Cyclone
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Fuck the graveyard. Updates made.
ztrot
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ztrot
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
tieff
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tieff
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Cyclone
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I hope my change to hard will suffice. It's not exactly what you said, but it fits better in context to the music IMO.

Changes were also made to normal.

Just for the record, before tieff even posted i made changes for ztrot's post, blah blah blah who cares anymore.
tieff
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tieff
Bubbled.
ztrot
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Sleep Powder
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[Beatmap Comments]

[Hard]
I liked this beatmap~
It wasn't hard to follow and the patterns weren't boring at all.
I can't really think of anything bad about it.
The only bad thing I could say was that the stacked notes were a bit weird but that isn't a big deal.
Good Job~
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