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Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls

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SteRRuM
678 posts
Joined October 2008
SteRRuM
Hi!
[Normal]
  1. 01:15:77 (1) - Align vertically with (5),
  2. 01:38:27 (5) - Align with slider's end - (5),
  3. 02:31:63 (1) - Maybe too short for Normal?.
[Hikki Style]
  1. Diff. is OK!
Also, cool spinner :D !
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
* - Done.
* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
* - Left unchanged.

SteRRuM wrote:

Hi!
[Normal]
  1. 01:15:77 (1) - Align vertically with (5), *
  2. 01:38:27 (5) - Align with slider's end - (5), *
  3. 02:31:63 (1) - Maybe too short for Normal?.*
[Hikki Style]
  1. Diff. is OK!
Also, cool spinner :D !
Thanks for looking. :)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
heres my diff. took longer than i wanted but here it is

Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
Added. :)
mosluv
748 posts
Joined December 2008
mosluv
';..;' Rawr use this BG: http://image-fast.com/image/0415740eaa4d/mario.png

Normal:
Redo the break. I hate the hitsounds >;o!

Hikki Style:
Redo the break.

00:49:80 (4) - Clap.
00:51:54 (3) - Clap.
00:52:11 (5) - Finish instead of whistle.
01:36:97 (4) - Move right a bit. Too far from 3.
02:19:80 (11) - New combo.

Doomsday's Insane:
Redo 2nd break.

01:54:40 (1) - Finish instead of clap.
02:03:63 (1) - ^
02:34:64 (1) - Shorten to red tick.

I would mod even more of Doomsday's Insane, but it's way too fast for me and I mod by playing. Here's a star 8-)!
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Nexy wrote:

';..;' Rawr use this BG: http://image-fast.com/image/0415740eaa4d/mario.png Why? o-o

Normal:
Redo the break. * I hate the hitsounds >;o! *sux2bu D:

Hikki Style:
Redo the break. *

00:49:80 (4) - Clap. *
00:51:54 (3) - Clap. *
00:52:11 (5) - Finish instead of whistle. *
01:36:97 (4) - Move right a bit. Too far from 3. *
02:19:80 (11) - New combo. *

I would mod even more of Doomsday's Insane, but it's way too fast for me and I mod by playing. Here's a star 8-)!
Lmao xD
Thanks for looking. :)

Took a while. D: Sick. :<
Takuma
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1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
- Hikki Style:
01:17:50 (6) - I'm iffy about this. The spacing between (5,6) is spaced away like 1/2, but (1,2,3,4,5) have a much larger spacing than that. It's confusing, but I'll leave the decision of changing up to you.
01:35:38 (1) - A somewhat similar problem as above.
01:36:54 (1) - ^
02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god, please. No.

- Doomsday's Insane:
Ugh, those streams look so troublesome.
But that's really all I can complain about, to be honest.

Starred!
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Takuma wrote:

- Hikki Style:
01:17:50 (6) - I'm iffy about this. The spacing between (5,6) is spaced away like 1/2, but (1,2,3,4,5) have a much larger spacing than that. It's confusing, but I'll leave the decision of changing up to you.
01:35:38 (1) - A somewhat similar problem as above.
01:36:54 (1) - ^
02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god, please. No.

Starred!
Done/changed. Thanks for modding~ :D
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Get rid of the red combo colour, it looks nasty. I'm not sure about the spinner, the way the star spins is hard to recover from in gameplay.

Normal
00:35:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how to fix it, but these notes are very wrong. I kept getting 50s and misses.

Hikki Style
00:25:43 (1) - Finish on the new combo notes like this
00:30:05 (1) - Why does the spacing suddenly get closer here?
00:40:14 (4) - Clap?
00:40:43 (1) - Finish?
00:41:30 (4) - Clap?
02:22:69 (1,2,3) - The sudden change in spacing makes these look a lot quicker.

Doomsday's Insane
That's better! PERFECT.

Have a star given only because of Doomsday's Insane which is awesome.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
Giving this map some needed attention.

Normal:
-Kiai suggestions made in Insane stand.
-In general, you've used spinners that are far too hard for this difficulty.
-00:30:48 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:38:27 (6) - Replace the Finish with a Clap.
-00:37:11 (4) - Replace the Whistle with a Clap.
-00:37:69 (5) - New Combo mark goes here (spacing rules).
-00:38:27 (6) - Clap goes here, not a Finish.
-00:39:13 (8,1) - Hitsounds should be like this: Whistle, Finish
-00:40:00 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:40:57 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:41:15 (4) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:41:73 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:42:30 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:42:88 (3) - There only needs to be a Finish on this.
-00:47:64 (1) - Too hard for Normal. Even then, it needs a Finish, not a Clap.
-00:49:80 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-00:50:09 (5) - Add a Clap.
-00:52:11 (5) - Remove the Whistle, add a Finish.
-00:53:84 (3) - Remove the Finish.
-00:55:00 (5) - ^
-00:58:17 (2) - Add a Clap.
-00:59:32 (6) - ^
-01:00:48 (2) - ^
-01:01:34 (5) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:03:65 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:04:80 (5) - ^
-01:05:96 (7) - Replace the Finish with a Whistle.
-01:11:44 (6) - Add a Clap.
-01:13:03 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-01:32:50 (1) - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.
-01:41:73 (1) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:47:93 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-01:49:80 (4) - Put a Finish on the endpoint.
-01:50:96 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-01:51:39 (2,3) - This part doesn't flow quite right. Change it.
-01:55:57 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-01:58:46 (2) - Add a Clap.
-02:00:19 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-02:05:96 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:11 (7) - Remove the Finish, add a New Combo mark.
-02:07:69 (9) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:98 (10) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint, add a Finish.
-02:18:65 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:19:80 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:20:96 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:27:30 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:28:17 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.

Hikki Style:
-Spinners here are difficult to recover from.
-00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Any reason as to why this isn't spaced the same way as before? The 3,4 spacing is awkward compared to the other 4 instances of this rhythm before them.
-00:35:81 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:42:74 (1,1) - I disagree with the single clicked beat in this instance. Spinner only, please, and have it end in the same place but start where the clicked beat was.
-00:48:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I disagree with all of the added hitsounds here. It frankly sounds better here with none.
-00:55:43 (1,2) - Remove the Claps.
-00:55:86 (3) - Clap goes on the starting point.
-00:56:30 (4) - Clap is the only thing that goes here.
-00:58:75 (3,4,5,6) - Remove the hitsounds.
-01:00:48 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:01:05 (6) - ^
-01:01:34 (7) - Finish goes here.
-01:10:72 (1) - ^
-01:30:77 (1,2) - Remove these Claps.
*-01:37:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - There's just something I don't like about it, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Oh well.
-01:46:78 (2) - Remove the Finish.
-01:47:93 (5) - ^
-01:50:53 (8) - Add a Clap.
-01:52:11 (4,5) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:54:42 (7) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:55:57 (1,2) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:59:47 (9,10) - Whistles go here.
-02:00:19 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-02:12:88 (3) - Add a Finish.
-02:14:47 (6) - This repeats three more times than it needs to. Fill in the other three beats with three clicked beats, the first of which having a new combo mark and continuing the same hitsound pattern you established. Or use this:
1st beat = normal
2nd = clap
3rd = clap
4th = normal
5th = normal
6th = clap
7th = normal
8th = clap
-02:15:62 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:16:49 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:23:27 (3) - ^
-02:24:42 (6,7) - Remove the Finishes.
-Look at Doomsday's Insane for the kiai suggestions I made.

Doomsday's Insane:
-Streams: my only real structural concern. Holyjesusaretheytough.
-00:26:13 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:26:56 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:39:116 - There REALLY needs to be a beat here.
-00:52:09 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish, extend by 1/1, reinput the break.
-01:42:28 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:42:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here, remove the Finish. (I suggested the combo number changes because of 5,6, really, but it still looks cooler if I change 3 as well).
-01:46:18 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:54:40 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-02:00:60 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:01:03 (1) - ^ and remove the Clap.
-02:01:32 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:03:63 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish.
-02:20:94 (1) - ^
-02:21:66 (2,3) - Add Claps.
-02:32:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream's spacing annoys me more than the rhythms of the other stream.
-02:34:64 (1) - Kiai looks dumb here.
-I suggest kiai from:
01:11:712 to 01:18:491, and other parts like it (except possibly the first chorus? Up to you).

BAT-starred.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday

Mogsworth wrote:

Doomsday's Insane:
-Streams: my only real structural concern. Holyjesusaretheytough.
-00:26:13 (3) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-00:26:56 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. done
-00:39:116 - There REALLY needs to be a beat here. done
-00:52:09 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish, extend by 1/1, reinput the break. done
-01:42:28 (3) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-01:42:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here, remove the Finish. (I suggested the combo number changes because of 5,6, really, but it still looks cooler if I change 3 as well). done
-01:46:18 (4) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-01:54:40 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish. done
-02:00:60 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. done
-02:01:03 (1) - ^ and remove the Clap. done
-02:01:32 (2) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-02:03:63 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish. done
-02:20:94 (1) - ^ done
-02:21:66 (2,3) - Add Claps. done
-02:32:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream's spacing annoys me more than the rhythms of the other stream. replaced them with sliders.
-02:34:64 (1) - Kiai looks dumb here. removed
-I suggest kiai from:
01:11:712 to 01:18:491, and other parts like it (except possibly the first chorus? Up to you). i don't think it fits too well. seems like a random spot for kiai to me. i've put Kiai 02:14:02 to 02:27:57 though

BAT-starred.
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Mogsworth wrote:

Normal:
-Kiai suggestions made in Insane stand. Doesn't fit right there imo.

Hikki Style:
-Spinners here are difficult to recover from. I don't like the result when I change them.
Did most of the things mentioned.

Thanks for modding~ :)
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
blue text = nazi mods

Normal:
01:18:51 (7) - offscreen
01:32:50 (2) - align with 1?
02:11:73 (1) - make a refelction of the yellow 1

Hikki:
00:29:61 (3,4) - align with 00:27:30 (3)
00:47:35 (5) - I don't like how this touches the score bar
01:06:54 (11) - slightly offscreen
01:07:98 (3) - make the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:08:27 (4) - new combo for the jump
01:09:13 (6) - make the same distance from 5 as 4 is
02:02:35 (1,2) - slightly offscreen
02:16:49 (1,2) - the spacing between 8 and 1 and 9 and 2 is slightly smaller here than the spacing in the rest of the combo

Doomsday:
01:52:38 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
02:21:95 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 1,2
02:28:44 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
02:31:03 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1

You probably do not need to fix the off screen stuff I mentioned.

Great map. Star.
Mogsy
osu! Alumni
3,450 posts
Here since the beginning
Mogsy
I'd still suggest putting kiai time in somewhere that makes sense. The ending was just not a good place. :P
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

blissfulyoshi wrote:

blue text = nazi mods

Normal:
01:18:51 (7) - offscreen
01:32:50 (2) - align with 1?
02:11:73 (1) - make a refelction of the yellow 1

Hikki:
00:29:61 (3,4) - align with 00:27:30 (3)
00:47:35 (5) - I don't like how this touches the score bar
01:06:54 (11) - slightly offscreen
01:07:98 (3) - make the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:08:27 (4) - new combo for the jump
01:09:13 (6) - make the same distance from 5 as 4 is
02:02:35 (1,2) - slightly offscreen
02:16:49 (1,2) - the spacing between 8 and 1 and 9 and 2 is slightly smaller here than the spacing in the rest of the combo

You probably do not need to fix the off screen stuff I mentioned.

Great map. Star.
Changed what I thought was needed.

Thanks for modding~ :)


Mogsworth wrote:

I'd still suggest putting kiai time in somewhere that makes sense. The ending was just not a good place. :P
I don't feel it fits anywhere except the end tbh.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Revived!
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
map is too complex to mod for me. therefor, i'll only star it for now :)  
WyndII
777 posts
Joined October 2008
WyndII
All the diff are fine except in hard:
01:49:23 (4,5,6,7) - I think this is illegal.
02:34:809 - Kiai D:

Also cool map and skin~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Normal:

dont know what to mod here because i dont fully understand the style you map it but:

01:46:34 (1) - this slider here is a bit wrong i think it sounds better for me if you start it at 1:46:31 and end 1:46:70

hikki style:

02:20:38 (5) - sound better if you end at 2:20:963
02:26:01 (6) - this is not part of the melody you follow here

doomsday:

01:12:14 (2) - maybe end a clap sound to make this part not silent
02:01:03 (3) - clap sound here
02:26:56 (1) - i have the feeling the spinner starts half a beat too early and 1 circle is missing
02:27:86 (1) - the section with the spinner after this is wrong. 4 beats on white ticks and the spinner 3 beats long
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Hanyuu wrote:

02:26:01 (6) - this is not part of the melody you follow here
hmmm ok

Move the (6) to 2:26:15

maybe?? =w=
I still think it sounds better as it is. Thanks though. ^^;
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
MoonFragrance
[Normal]
01:14:90 (3,4) - IMO, you should place it right space because it is 'Normal' difficulty
01:47:21 (2) - spacing
01:53:27 (1) - maybe spacing?
01:57:88 (1) - ^
02:06:39 (5) - spacing
02:09:42 (1) - ^

[Hikki Style]
00:25:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, making them to have same distance between them is better
00:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:28:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:33:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:42 (6) - spacing
02:25:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:26:30 (1,2,3) - ^

[Doomsday's Insane]
Nice.




Nice map :D Starr'd
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Hikki~
01:02:93 (2) - Move closer to 1's endpoint.

Doomslay~
Change offset to 2,502. Then resnap. The notes are quite early atm.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

MoonFragrance wrote:

[Normal]
01:14:90 (3,4) - IMO, you should place it right space because it is 'Normal' difficulty
01:47:21 (2) - spacing
01:53:27 (1) - maybe spacing?
01:57:88 (1) - ^
02:06:39 (5) - spacing
02:09:42 (1) - ^

[Hikki Style]
00:25:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, making them to have same distance between them is better
00:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:28:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:33:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:42 (6) - spacing
02:25:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:26:30 (1,2,3) - ^

Done what was needed.
Thanks for looking.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Hikki~
01:02:93 (2) - Move closer to 1's endpoint.
Done. Thanks for looking. ^^
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde
I was hitting the notes a little late, but that might just be me sucking this morning. Unless you were considering tweaking the offset, disregard this.

Normal
Nothing.

Hikki Style
01:38:992 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just thought this part was a little confusing with the placement and spacing.
01:49:665 (7) - This slider was a little confusing due to the underlap.
02:27:886 - You have three sets of notes between spinners that you could space a little further each time if you wanted.

Doomsday's
Nothing. T_T 208 BPM Doomsday Insane goodness. Ow my hand.

Looks solid, so here have a star.
Lesjuh
Elite Mapper
2,442 posts
Joined October 2008
Lesjuh
Normal:
00:39:42 (1) - Space this beat closer to (4). I recommend not using jumps on Normal difficulties.
01:11:73 (1) - Space closer to (6). Same reason as above.

Hard:
01:49:66 (7) - Make this slider visible

Doomsday's Insane:
Seems all fine (Ouch! 208 BPM streams D:)

That's about it guyz
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
* - Done.
* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
* - Left unchanged.

Shinde wrote:

Normal
Nothing.

Hikki Style
01:38:992 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just thought this part was a little confusing with the placement and spacing.*
01:49:665 (7) - This slider was a little confusing due to the underlap.*
02:27:886 - You have three sets of notes between spinners that you could space a little further each time if you wanted. * Not sure why I didn't think of this.

lesjuh wrote:

Normal:
00:39:42 (1) - Space this beat closer to (4). I recommend not using jumps on Normal difficulties. *
01:11:73 (1) - Space closer to (6). Same reason as above. *

Hard:
01:49:66 (7) - Make this slider visible *
Thanks for modding guys~
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Awesome and fun map.

I really didn't find any problems on any of the difficulties.

[Hikki Style]
Really tiny fix
02:19:66 (10) - Move it slightly upwards, so it centers more, it looks detached.

Starred.
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

NachoPiggy wrote:

[Hikki Style]
Really tiny fix
02:19:66 (10) - Move it slightly upwards, so it centers more, it looks detached.
Fixed. Thanks for modding.
Doomsday
Featured Artist
1,961 posts
Joined July 2008
Doomsday
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
^ Done and updated.
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Normal
Fine to me.

Hikki Style
01:17:50 (6) - New combo so it doesn't go against spacing as the combo beforehand is a on purpose jump.
02:34:80 (1) - in this spinner you're overusing the kiai time.
Unless you can get the two BATs that will approve and rank your map with the kiai, I suggest you remove the streaming kiai times.

Doomsday's Insane
01:16:34 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a whole combo.
02:34:66 (1) - I say shrink it down by 1/2 beat (aka to the red tick) but keeping it as is also works.

starred' and good luck on getting this bubbled/ranked
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato

Metroid wrote:

Normal
Fine to me. ^^;

Hikki Style
01:17:50 (6) - New combo so it doesn't go against spacing as the combo beforehand is a on purpose jump. *
02:34:80 (1) - in this spinner you're overusing the kiai time. *
Unless you can get the two BATs that will approve and rank your map with the kiai, I suggest you remove the streaming kiai times.
Thanks for modding.
cyanberryio
424 posts
Joined August 2008
cyanberryio
Treat all the following as suggestions.

[Normal]
01:18:22 (x) - Start slider here, and end where (7) was, of course deleting (8). (Currently feels strange without a beat there.)

[Hikki Style]
02:34:80 (Kiai) - lol still good ;)

[Doomsday's Insane]
woah! D:

Star'd cause it deserves it. :D
Hikato
444 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Hikato
I left [Normal] as it is. Sounds weird to me as a slider.
tieff
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tieff
Sorry for delay.

Backgrounds/Images should be at a maximum 1024x768 pixels, though 800x600 recommended.

Add spinner-metre.png
spinner-background.png

[Normal]
Remove kials in end of map.
00:27:02 (2,3) - Too large spacing for normal.
00:40:57 (3,4,1,2) - Fix spacing.

[Hikki Style]
Remove kials in end of map.

[Doomsday's Insane]
All cool.

Fix and I'll bubble.
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato
Changed normal, removed all kiai, resized bg and added spinner things, even though I didn't really want to.
tieff
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tieff
Bubbled.
Mogsy
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Sorry, but I'm popping the bubble. ): Fix and I'll hand it right back.

Normal:
SPOILER
-Overlapping sliders at the beginning? I'm iffy on those, personally, but if someone else mentions them, fix them.
-00:47:64 (1) - This spinner just seems to be too random. You start it at the end of a phrase that doesn't call for one (not a climactic enough spot for one IMO) and continue it into the next phrase, and that just looks and plays awkwardly. Please replace it with something else.
-01:29:90 (1) - Again, this feels like a very random spot for a spinner.
-02:00:19 (1) - ^
-02:31:63 (1) - Not a good place for one, given the fact that you've got one coming up to end the song. Please replace it with anything that isn't a spinner.
-The kiai used in Doomsday's difficulty would fit in well here. I don't see why kiai would've been removed in the first place, it didn't really bother it at all, it just would be best in the location Doomsday used it in.

Hikki Style:
SPOILER
-The kiai in Doomsday's difficulty would do very well here, too. Again, not distracting at all, at least it wasn't when I tried it.
-00:35:09 (3,5) - Add Claps; consistency is a good thing.
-00:39:71 (3) - Add a Clap.
-00:40:72 (2,3,4,5) - Make this the same as the old pattern; in this case, this is accented incorrectly and thus sounds really off.
-01:34:95 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5) - The hitsounds here feel really bland and the Whistles seem really out of place, given the rest of the context.
-02:16:34 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:16:49 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Where are the hitsounds? This section feels bland without them.
-02:22:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^

Doomsday's Insane:
SPOILER
Just some hitsound suggestions and one small other suggestion~
-01:03:36 (3) - Add a Clap.
-01:04:52 (3) - ^
-01:07:98 (3) - ^
-01:09:13 (3) - ^
-01:10:14 (2) - ^
-01:45:843 - Maybe you should place a beat here, to make the triple from the previous phrase consistent? Not to mention the fact that it goes with the music and previously established patterns, so it doesn't feel awkward.
-02:05:67 (3) - ^
-02:06:82 (3) - ^
-02:10:29 (3) - ^
-02:11:44 (3) - ^
-02:12:45 (2) - ^
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Hikato

Mogsworth wrote:

Sorry, but I'm popping the bubble. ): Fix and I'll hand it right back.

Normal:
SPOILER
-Overlapping sliders at the beginning? I'm iffy on those, personally, but if someone else mentions them, fix them.
-00:47:64 (1) - This spinner just seems to be too random. You start it at the end of a phrase that doesn't call for one (not a climactic enough spot for one IMO) and continue it into the next phrase, and that just looks and plays awkwardly. Please replace it with something else.
-01:29:90 (1) - Again, this feels like a very random spot for a spinner.
-02:00:19 (1) - ^
-02:31:63 (1) - Not a good place for one, given the fact that you've got one coming up to end the song. Please replace it with anything that isn't a spinner.
-The kiai used in Doomsday's difficulty would fit in well here. I don't see why kiai would've been removed in the first place, it didn't really bother it at all, it just would be best in the location Doomsday used it in.

Hikki Style:
SPOILER
-The kiai in Doomsday's difficulty would do very well here, too. Again, not distracting at all, at least it wasn't when I tried it.
-00:35:09 (3,5) - Add Claps; consistency is a good thing.
-00:39:71 (3) - Add a Clap.
-00:40:72 (2,3,4,5) - Make this the same as the old pattern; in this case, this is accented incorrectly and thus sounds really off.
-01:34:95 (1,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5) - The hitsounds here feel really bland and the Whistles seem really out of place, given the rest of the context.
-02:16:34 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:16:49 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Where are the hitsounds? This section feels bland without them.
-02:22:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^
Did most of above I think.
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I'll rebubble if Doomsday does not want to change his difficulty, please notify me if he does not wish to.
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Doomsday

Mogsworth wrote:

Doomsday's Insane:
Just some hitsound suggestions and one small other suggestion~
-01:03:36 (3) - Add a Clap. done
-01:04:52 (3) - ^ done
-01:07:98 (3) - ^ done
-01:09:13 (3) - ^ done
-01:10:14 (2) - ^ done
-01:45:843 - Maybe you should place a beat here, to make the triple from the previous phrase consistent? Not to mention the fact that it goes with the music and previously established patterns, so it doesn't feel awkward. hmm. i guess it works. done
-02:05:67 (3) - ^ done
-02:06:82 (3) - ^ done
-02:10:29 (3) - ^ done
-02:11:44 (3) - ^ done
-02:12:45 (2) - ^ done
sorry for the wait. been away for the last week
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Hikato
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Hikato
Updated. :)
Mogsy
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Here's your bubble~ Take good care of it.
RemmyX25
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Hate to bubble pop for this...

After doing a bit of research, I do believe the artist is Macgravel

Hikki Style: and Doomsday's Insane:
Could use a fair amount of slider ticks
Hikato
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Hikato
Macgravel is the simfile maker for the song on Stepmania not the artist of the song. The .mp3 shows the artist as Mr. so I used that.

Changed tick rate to 2 on Hikki Style. I'll leave it up to Dooms' to decide if he wants the same for his.
Doomsday
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Doomsday
sure, change the tick rate to 2
Hikato
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Hikato
Done.
RemmyX25
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I've done a bit of extra lurking around, but still no luck on an official artist. :\

Here's your bubble back at least.
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