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Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls
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[Hikki Style]
00:35:67 (5) - Remove note and add note here 00:35:81 (x)? Try it.
00:35:96 (1) - Remove note?
01:56:01 (2) - Spasing?
02:02:35 (9) - New combo?
02:07:69 (6) - Not sure about this, but... new combo?
Awesome map, song and custom stuff.
Starred.
00:35:67 (5) - Remove note and add note here 00:35:81 (x)? Try it.
00:35:96 (1) - Remove note?
01:56:01 (2) - Spasing?
02:02:35 (9) - New combo?
02:07:69 (6) - Not sure about this, but... new combo?
Awesome map, song and custom stuff.
Starred.
love the song <3
i think 2,510 Offset works better, but ill leave that up to you to see which works best
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
[HIKKI STYLE]
01:55:58 (1,2) - Spacing. These are too close together
02:02:36 (9) - New combo?
thats all i got so far. nice map. love the streams
won't star just yet. ill wait for the other diffs to arrive
[EDIT] oh damnit tieff already mentioned the problems i found x_x
nevermind, guess you'll have to wait until the other diffs are done to get something useful from me (unless you found my offset useful)
i think 2,510 Offset works better, but ill leave that up to you to see which works best
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
[HIKKI STYLE]
01:55:58 (1,2) - Spacing. These are too close together
02:02:36 (9) - New combo?
thats all i got so far. nice map. love the streams
won't star just yet. ill wait for the other diffs to arrive
[EDIT] oh damnit tieff already mentioned the problems i found x_x
nevermind, guess you'll have to wait until the other diffs are done to get something useful from me (unless you found my offset useful)
Everybody's watching me... so, let's get started!
Normal
[00:36:005] (2, 6, 7, 8) claps on 7th and 8th, finish on the others
[00:39:402] from here until 00:43:612 , try to set sounds like this: whistle-finish-whistle-finish and so on (whistle on ALL the slider!)
[00:46:950] set finish instead of claps on 4th; use them for 2nd...
[00:47:587] try a slider instead of this tricky spinner...
[00:48:973] (2, 4, 2, 4) use claps for the orange beats, finish for the yellow ones!
[01:00:137] move the orange series to che center of the screen
[01:05:949] (7) on this slider, where there aren't any sounds, whistle!
[01:44:567] whistle (or finish) on all the red series
[01:47:916] (4) finish here (and on the next 5th yellow beat)
Keep up the GOOD work!
I'll mod the other mode later...
Meanwille... Star'd!
Normal
[00:36:005] (2, 6, 7, 8) claps on 7th and 8th, finish on the others
[00:39:402] from here until 00:43:612 , try to set sounds like this: whistle-finish-whistle-finish and so on (whistle on ALL the slider!)
[00:46:950] set finish instead of claps on 4th; use them for 2nd...
[00:47:587] try a slider instead of this tricky spinner...
[00:48:973] (2, 4, 2, 4) use claps for the orange beats, finish for the yellow ones!
[01:00:137] move the orange series to che center of the screen
[01:05:949] (7) on this slider, where there aren't any sounds, whistle!
[01:44:567] whistle (or finish) on all the red series
[01:47:916] (4) finish here (and on the next 5th yellow beat)
Keep up the GOOD work!
I'll mod the other mode later...
Meanwille... Star'd!
Topic Starter
Done most of above. Thanks for looking.Lokamp wrote:
Everybody's watching me... so, let's get started!
Normal
[00:36:005] (2, 6, 7, 8) claps on 7th and 8th, finish on the others
[00:39:402] from here until 00:43:612 , try to set sounds like this: whistle-finish-whistle-finish and so on (whistle on ALL the slider!)
[00:46:950] set finish instead of claps on 4th; use them for 2nd...
[00:47:587] try a slider instead of this tricky spinner...
[00:48:973] (2, 4, 2, 4) use claps for the orange beats, finish for the yellow ones!
[01:00:137] move the orange series to che center of the screen
[01:05:949] (7) on this slider, where there aren't any sounds, whistle!
[01:44:567] whistle (or finish) on all the red series
[01:47:916] (4) finish here (and on the next 5th yellow beat)
Keep up the GOOD work!
I'll mod the other mode later...
Meanwille... Star'd!
Note to Lokamp: Select the beats in question and copy paste to the post for correct times D:
Lol, this is epically awesome, and I think the hitsounds are fine.
-starred-
-starred-
new diff, new mod.
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
i guess my offset was wrong after all, since 2,482 works much better, at least on Normal anyway
[NORMAL]
i think for all the spinners except the last 2, the beats come in too early after them for a normal diff. i'd recommend deleting the beat just after.
for example:
^
before
^
after
i'd recommend doing that for all of the beats like this. the last 2 spinners you can probably get away with since its the end of the song.
apart from that, i can't find anything. good job
and since thats the last diff from you, you can haz star now
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these
i guess my offset was wrong after all, since 2,482 works much better, at least on Normal anyway
[NORMAL]
i think for all the spinners except the last 2, the beats come in too early after them for a normal diff. i'd recommend deleting the beat just after.
for example:
^
before
^
after
i'd recommend doing that for all of the beats like this. the last 2 spinners you can probably get away with since its the end of the song.
apart from that, i can't find anything. good job
and since thats the last diff from you, you can haz star now
[Normal]
hitsound nazi GO!
00:33:94 (8) - hidden under 7 and the whistle sounds ick
00:39:13 (8) - remove clap and for the next pattern replace all whistles with claps
00:46:92 (2) - clap
00:48:94 (2) - remove finish
00:55:86 (1,3) - clap
00:56:73 (4) - middle hit should be clap, not finish
00:57:88 (1) - finish
01:00:19 (1,3) - whistle
00:59:61 (7) - finish
01:04:80 (5,6) - whistles
01:05:96 (7) - make the middle hit clap only and remove whistle from last hit
01:10:00 (2) - finish
01:11:44 (6) - remove whistle
01:11:73 (1) - finish
01:14:90 (4,5) - claps
01:16:63 (2,4) - finishes
01:27:74 (1) - finish
01:31:92 (3) - clap
01:32:50 (1) - finish-clap
01:33:36 (2,5,6) - claps
01:34:80 (7) - make all hits whistles
01:36:54 (3,4,5) - end of 3, 4, and start of 5 should be finishes
01:39:42 (7,8) - finishes
01:44:04 (8) - finish
01:45:19 (2,3) - whistles
01:46:34 (1) - de-whistle the end
01:50:96 (1) - finish
01:53:27 (1) - whistle
01:55:57 (1) - clap
01:57:88 (1,3) - claps and de-clap 4
02:02:50 (3) - clap or finish
02:09:42 (1,1) - hitsound
02:13:17 (2,3) - claps
02:22:26 (1) - finish
01:42:02 (4) - clap second-to-last hit
gawd one difficulty of this is enough withhold kudosu if you want to
hitsound nazi GO!
00:33:94 (8) - hidden under 7 and the whistle sounds ick
00:39:13 (8) - remove clap and for the next pattern replace all whistles with claps
00:46:92 (2) - clap
00:48:94 (2) - remove finish
00:55:86 (1,3) - clap
00:56:73 (4) - middle hit should be clap, not finish
00:57:88 (1) - finish
01:00:19 (1,3) - whistle
00:59:61 (7) - finish
01:04:80 (5,6) - whistles
01:05:96 (7) - make the middle hit clap only and remove whistle from last hit
01:10:00 (2) - finish
01:11:44 (6) - remove whistle
01:11:73 (1) - finish
01:14:90 (4,5) - claps
01:16:63 (2,4) - finishes
01:27:74 (1) - finish
01:31:92 (3) - clap
01:32:50 (1) - finish-clap
01:33:36 (2,5,6) - claps
01:34:80 (7) - make all hits whistles
01:36:54 (3,4,5) - end of 3, 4, and start of 5 should be finishes
01:39:42 (7,8) - finishes
01:44:04 (8) - finish
01:45:19 (2,3) - whistles
01:46:34 (1) - de-whistle the end
01:50:96 (1) - finish
01:53:27 (1) - whistle
01:55:57 (1) - clap
01:57:88 (1,3) - claps and de-clap 4
02:02:50 (3) - clap or finish
02:09:42 (1,1) - hitsound
02:13:17 (2,3) - claps
02:22:26 (1) - finish
01:42:02 (4) - clap second-to-last hit
gawd one difficulty of this is enough withhold kudosu if you want to
[Normal]
00:37:69 (5) - 4 squares up.
00:38:27 (6) - 3 square to the left.
00:47:64 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ...
01:07:11 (1) - 3 squares up. Looks better.
01:09:42 (1) - 3 squares down. Looks better.
01:11:73 (1) - No JUMPS on normal maps.
01:13:03 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ...
02:31:63 (1) - ^
02:34:66 (1) - Finish and not clap imo...
[Hikki Style]
00:39:42 (1) - Move this here -> 00:39:28 (1) ... And fix spacing.
01:35:38 (1) - Too close from 01:34:95 (1)
01:36:54 (1) - Too close from 01:36:10 (1)
01:52:55 (5) - This slider is hidden.
02:34:80 (1) - You add finish here, so, fix 02:34:66 (1) This on NORMAL.
Good map, Take my star :3
00:37:69 (5) - 4 squares up.
00:38:27 (6) - 3 square to the left.
00:47:64 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ...
01:07:11 (1) - 3 squares up. Looks better.
01:09:42 (1) - 3 squares down. Looks better.
01:11:73 (1) - No JUMPS on normal maps.
01:13:03 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ...
02:31:63 (1) - ^
02:34:66 (1) - Finish and not clap imo...
[Hikki Style]
00:39:42 (1) - Move this here -> 00:39:28 (1) ... And fix spacing.
01:35:38 (1) - Too close from 01:34:95 (1)
01:36:54 (1) - Too close from 01:36:10 (1)
01:52:55 (5) - This slider is hidden.
02:34:80 (1) - You add finish here, so, fix 02:34:66 (1) This on NORMAL.
Good map, Take my star :3
Topic Starter
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Thanks for modding.osuplayer111 wrote:
[Normal]
00:37:69 (5) - 4 squares up. Intentional.
00:38:27 (6) - 3 square to the left. ^
00:47:64 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ... Tested with lower rank players to be fine.
01:07:11 (1) - 3 squares up. Looks better. *
01:09:42 (1) - 3 squares down. Looks better. *
01:11:73 (1) - No JUMPS on normal maps. 1.0x spacing is a jump?
01:13:03 (1) - This spinner is too hard for a normal map ... Tested with lower rank players to be fine.
02:31:63 (1) - ^ ^
02:34:66 (1) - Finish and not clap imo... Forgot to do this.
[Hikki Style]
00:39:42 (1) - Move this here -> 00:39:28 (1) ... And fix spacing. *
01:35:38 (1) - Too close from 01:34:95 (1) :<
01:36:54 (1) - Too close from 01:36:10 (1) :<
01:52:55 (5) - This slider is hidden. *
02:34:80 (1) - You add finish here, so, fix 02:34:66 (1) This on NORMAL. *
Good map, Take my star :3
Some suggestions ^^'
Normal:
00:35:96 (2,4,6) - move both to previous red tick (2 1/4 ticks back)
00:36:54 (3,4,5,6) - why is spacing between 3,4 and 5,6 different?
01:28:75 (3) - add hit?
Hikki style:
00:37:11 (7) - I think you should delete this
00:47:35 (5) - too close?
Star~
Normal:
00:35:96 (2,4,6) - move both to previous red tick (2 1/4 ticks back)
00:36:54 (3,4,5,6) - why is spacing between 3,4 and 5,6 different?
01:28:75 (3) - add hit?
Hikki style:
00:37:11 (7) - I think you should delete this
00:47:35 (5) - too close?
Star~
Topic Starter
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Thanks for looking.RaisTF wrote:
Some suggestions ^^'
Normal:
00:35:96 (2,4,6) - move both to previous red tick (2 1/4 ticks back) *
00:36:54 (3,4,5,6) - why is spacing between 3,4 and 5,6 different? It gets wider as it goes round. :\
01:28:75 (3) - add hit? *
Hikki style:
00:37:11 (7) - I think you should delete this *
00:47:35 (5) - too close? 0.5x snapped :\
Star~
let's see =]
//NORMAL//
01:11:73(1) - too far from (6)
01:18:511(7) - back 1/8?
02:30:050(1) - 1/8 forward
this is every thing that i saw .__.
the song is great n i saw anything bad on your skin
love it *star*
_________________________________________
my pending beatmaps:
Witches - There She is (step 1)Star Priority +7
FLOW- GardenStar Priority +6
//NORMAL//
01:11:73(1) - too far from (6)
01:18:511(7) - back 1/8?
02:30:050(1) - 1/8 forward
this is every thing that i saw .__.
the song is great n i saw anything bad on your skin
love it *star*
_________________________________________
my pending beatmaps:
Witches - There She is (step 1)Star Priority +7
FLOW- GardenStar Priority +6
Topic Starter
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* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
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Thanks for looking.roxkyuubiforever wrote:
let's see =]
//NORMAL//
01:11:73(1) - too far from (6) *
01:18:511(7) - back 1/8? *
02:30:050(1) - 1/8 forward *
this is every thing that i saw .__.
the song is great n i saw anything bad on your skin
love it *star*
Hi!
[Normal]
!
[Normal]
- 01:15:77 (1) - Align vertically with (5),
- 01:38:27 (5) - Align with slider's end - (5),
- 02:31:63 (1) - Maybe too short for Normal?.
- Diff. is OK!
Topic Starter
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* - Left unchanged.
* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
* - Left unchanged.
Thanks for looking.SteRRuM wrote:
Hi!
[Normal][Hikki Style]
- 01:15:77 (1) - Align vertically with (5), *
- 01:38:27 (5) - Align with slider's end - (5), *
- 02:31:63 (1) - Maybe too short for Normal?.*
Also, cool spinner
- Diff. is OK!
heres my diff. took longer than i wanted but here it is
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
';..;' Rawr use this BG: http://image-fast.com/image/0415740eaa4d/mario.png
Normal:
Redo the break. I hate the hitsounds >;o!
Hikki Style:
Redo the break.
00:49:80 (4) - Clap.
00:51:54 (3) - Clap.
00:52:11 (5) - Finish instead of whistle.
01:36:97 (4) - Move right a bit. Too far from 3.
02:19:80 (11) - New combo.
Doomsday's Insane:
Redo 2nd break.
01:54:40 (1) - Finish instead of clap.
02:03:63 (1) - ^
02:34:64 (1) - Shorten to red tick.
I would mod even more of Doomsday's Insane, but it's way too fast for me and I mod by playing. Here's a star
!
Normal:
Redo the break. I hate the hitsounds >;o!
Hikki Style:
Redo the break.
00:49:80 (4) - Clap.
00:51:54 (3) - Clap.
00:52:11 (5) - Finish instead of whistle.
01:36:97 (4) - Move right a bit. Too far from 3.
02:19:80 (11) - New combo.
Doomsday's Insane:
Redo 2nd break.
01:54:40 (1) - Finish instead of clap.
02:03:63 (1) - ^
02:34:64 (1) - Shorten to red tick.
I would mod even more of Doomsday's Insane, but it's way too fast for me and I mod by playing. Here's a star
!
Topic Starter
Thanks for looking.Nexy wrote:
';..;' Rawr use this BG: http://image-fast.com/image/0415740eaa4d/mario.png Why? o-o
Normal:
Redo the break. * I hate the hitsounds >;o! *sux2bu D:
Hikki Style:
Redo the break. *
00:49:80 (4) - Clap. *
00:51:54 (3) - Clap. *
00:52:11 (5) - Finish instead of whistle. *
01:36:97 (4) - Move right a bit. Too far from 3. *
02:19:80 (11) - New combo. *
I would mod even more of Doomsday's Insane, but it's way too fast for me and I mod by playing. Here's a star
Lmao xD
Took a while. D: Sick. :<
- Hikki Style:
01:17:50 (6) - I'm iffy about this. The spacing between (5,6) is spaced away like 1/2, but (1,2,3,4,5) have a much larger spacing than that. It's confusing, but I'll leave the decision of changing up to you.
01:35:38 (1) - A somewhat similar problem as above.
01:36:54 (1) - ^
02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god, please. No.
- Doomsday's Insane:
Ugh, those streams look so troublesome.
But that's really all I can complain about, to be honest.
Starred!
01:17:50 (6) - I'm iffy about this. The spacing between (5,6) is spaced away like 1/2, but (1,2,3,4,5) have a much larger spacing than that. It's confusing, but I'll leave the decision of changing up to you.
01:35:38 (1) - A somewhat similar problem as above.
01:36:54 (1) - ^
02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god, please. No.
- Doomsday's Insane:
Ugh, those streams look so troublesome.
But that's really all I can complain about, to be honest.
Starred!
Topic Starter
Done/changed. Thanks for modding~Takuma wrote:
- Hikki Style:
01:17:50 (6) - I'm iffy about this. The spacing between (5,6) is spaced away like 1/2, but (1,2,3,4,5) have a much larger spacing than that. It's confusing, but I'll leave the decision of changing up to you.
01:35:38 (1) - A somewhat similar problem as above.
01:36:54 (1) - ^
02:18:36 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - Oh god, please. No.
Starred!
Get rid of the red combo colour, it looks nasty. I'm not sure about the spinner, the way the star spins is hard to recover from in gameplay.
Normal
00:35:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how to fix it, but these notes are very wrong. I kept getting 50s and misses.
Hikki Style
00:25:43 (1) - Finish on the new combo notes like this
00:30:05 (1) - Why does the spacing suddenly get closer here?
00:40:14 (4) - Clap?
00:40:43 (1) - Finish?
00:41:30 (4) - Clap?
02:22:69 (1,2,3) - The sudden change in spacing makes these look a lot quicker.
Doomsday's Insane
That's better! PERFECT.
Have a star given only because of Doomsday's Insane which is awesome.
Normal
00:35:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - I don't know how to fix it, but these notes are very wrong. I kept getting 50s and misses.
Hikki Style
00:25:43 (1) - Finish on the new combo notes like this
00:30:05 (1) - Why does the spacing suddenly get closer here?
00:40:14 (4) - Clap?
00:40:43 (1) - Finish?
00:41:30 (4) - Clap?
02:22:69 (1,2,3) - The sudden change in spacing makes these look a lot quicker.
Doomsday's Insane
That's better! PERFECT.
Have a star given only because of Doomsday's Insane which is awesome.
Giving this map some needed attention.
Normal:
-Kiai suggestions made in Insane stand.
-In general, you've used spinners that are far too hard for this difficulty.
-00:30:48 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:38:27 (6) - Replace the Finish with a Clap.
-00:37:11 (4) - Replace the Whistle with a Clap.
-00:37:69 (5) - New Combo mark goes here (spacing rules).
-00:38:27 (6) - Clap goes here, not a Finish.
-00:39:13 (8,1) - Hitsounds should be like this: Whistle, Finish
-00:40:00 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:40:57 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:41:15 (4) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:41:73 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:42:30 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:42:88 (3) - There only needs to be a Finish on this.
-00:47:64 (1) - Too hard for Normal. Even then, it needs a Finish, not a Clap.
-00:49:80 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-00:50:09 (5) - Add a Clap.
-00:52:11 (5) - Remove the Whistle, add a Finish.
-00:53:84 (3) - Remove the Finish.
-00:55:00 (5) - ^
-00:58:17 (2) - Add a Clap.
-00:59:32 (6) - ^
-01:00:48 (2) - ^
-01:01:34 (5) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:03:65 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:04:80 (5) - ^
-01:05:96 (7) - Replace the Finish with a Whistle.
-01:11:44 (6) - Add a Clap.
-01:13:03 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-01:32:50 (1) - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.
-01:41:73 (1) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:47:93 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-01:49:80 (4) - Put a Finish on the endpoint.
-01:50:96 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-01:51:39 (2,3) - This part doesn't flow quite right. Change it.
-01:55:57 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-01:58:46 (2) - Add a Clap.
-02:00:19 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-02:05:96 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:11 (7) - Remove the Finish, add a New Combo mark.
-02:07:69 (9) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:98 (10) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint, add a Finish.
-02:18:65 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:19:80 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:20:96 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:27:30 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:28:17 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
Hikki Style:
-Spinners here are difficult to recover from.
-00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Any reason as to why this isn't spaced the same way as before? The 3,4 spacing is awkward compared to the other 4 instances of this rhythm before them.
-00:35:81 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:42:74 (1,1) - I disagree with the single clicked beat in this instance. Spinner only, please, and have it end in the same place but start where the clicked beat was.
-00:48:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I disagree with all of the added hitsounds here. It frankly sounds better here with none.
-00:55:43 (1,2) - Remove the Claps.
-00:55:86 (3) - Clap goes on the starting point.
-00:56:30 (4) - Clap is the only thing that goes here.
-00:58:75 (3,4,5,6) - Remove the hitsounds.
-01:00:48 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:01:05 (6) - ^
-01:01:34 (7) - Finish goes here.
-01:10:72 (1) - ^
-01:30:77 (1,2) - Remove these Claps.
*-01:37:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - There's just something I don't like about it, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Oh well.
-01:46:78 (2) - Remove the Finish.
-01:47:93 (5) - ^
-01:50:53 (8) - Add a Clap.
-01:52:11 (4,5) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:54:42 (7) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:55:57 (1,2) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:59:47 (9,10) - Whistles go here.
-02:00:19 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-02:12:88 (3) - Add a Finish.
-02:14:47 (6) - This repeats three more times than it needs to. Fill in the other three beats with three clicked beats, the first of which having a new combo mark and continuing the same hitsound pattern you established. Or use this:
1st beat = normal
2nd = clap
3rd = clap
4th = normal
5th = normal
6th = clap
7th = normal
8th = clap
-02:15:62 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:16:49 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:23:27 (3) - ^
-02:24:42 (6,7) - Remove the Finishes.
-Look at Doomsday's Insane for the kiai suggestions I made.
Doomsday's Insane:
-Streams: my only real structural concern. Holyjesusaretheytough.
-00:26:13 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:26:56 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:39:116 - There REALLY needs to be a beat here.
-00:52:09 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish, extend by 1/1, reinput the break.
-01:42:28 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:42:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here, remove the Finish. (I suggested the combo number changes because of 5,6, really, but it still looks cooler if I change 3 as well).
-01:46:18 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:54:40 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-02:00:60 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:01:03 (1) - ^ and remove the Clap.
-02:01:32 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:03:63 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish.
-02:20:94 (1) - ^
-02:21:66 (2,3) - Add Claps.
-02:32:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream's spacing annoys me more than the rhythms of the other stream.
-02:34:64 (1) - Kiai looks dumb here.
-I suggest kiai from:
01:11:712 to 01:18:491, and other parts like it (except possibly the first chorus? Up to you).
BAT-starred.
Normal:
-Kiai suggestions made in Insane stand.
-In general, you've used spinners that are far too hard for this difficulty.
-00:30:48 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:38:27 (6) - Replace the Finish with a Clap.
-00:37:11 (4) - Replace the Whistle with a Clap.
-00:37:69 (5) - New Combo mark goes here (spacing rules).
-00:38:27 (6) - Clap goes here, not a Finish.
-00:39:13 (8,1) - Hitsounds should be like this: Whistle, Finish
-00:40:00 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:40:57 (3) - Remove the Clap.
-00:41:15 (4) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:41:73 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-00:42:30 (2) - Remove the Finish, add a Clap.
-00:42:88 (3) - There only needs to be a Finish on this.
-00:47:64 (1) - Too hard for Normal. Even then, it needs a Finish, not a Clap.
-00:49:80 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-00:50:09 (5) - Add a Clap.
-00:52:11 (5) - Remove the Whistle, add a Finish.
-00:53:84 (3) - Remove the Finish.
-00:55:00 (5) - ^
-00:58:17 (2) - Add a Clap.
-00:59:32 (6) - ^
-01:00:48 (2) - ^
-01:01:34 (5) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:03:65 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:04:80 (5) - ^
-01:05:96 (7) - Replace the Finish with a Whistle.
-01:11:44 (6) - Add a Clap.
-01:13:03 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-01:32:50 (1) - Remove the Clap from the endpoint.
-01:41:73 (1) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:47:93 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-01:49:80 (4) - Put a Finish on the endpoint.
-01:50:96 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-01:51:39 (2,3) - This part doesn't flow quite right. Change it.
-01:55:57 (1) - Remove the Clap.
-01:58:46 (2) - Add a Clap.
-02:00:19 (1) - Too hard for Normal.
-02:05:96 (4) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:11 (7) - Remove the Finish, add a New Combo mark.
-02:07:69 (9) - Remove the Finish.
-02:07:98 (10) - Remove the Whistle from the endpoint, add a Finish.
-02:18:65 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:19:80 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:20:96 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:27:30 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:28:17 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
Hikki Style:
-Spinners here are difficult to recover from.
-00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Any reason as to why this isn't spaced the same way as before? The 3,4 spacing is awkward compared to the other 4 instances of this rhythm before them.
-00:35:81 (1) - Remove the Whistle.
-00:42:74 (1,1) - I disagree with the single clicked beat in this instance. Spinner only, please, and have it end in the same place but start where the clicked beat was.
-00:48:65 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I disagree with all of the added hitsounds here. It frankly sounds better here with none.
-00:55:43 (1,2) - Remove the Claps.
-00:55:86 (3) - Clap goes on the starting point.
-00:56:30 (4) - Clap is the only thing that goes here.
-00:58:75 (3,4,5,6) - Remove the hitsounds.
-01:00:48 (3) - Clap goes here.
-01:01:05 (6) - ^
-01:01:34 (7) - Finish goes here.
-01:10:72 (1) - ^
-01:30:77 (1,2) - Remove these Claps.
*-01:37:26 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - There's just something I don't like about it, but I can't quite put my finger on it. Oh well.
-01:46:78 (2) - Remove the Finish.
-01:47:93 (5) - ^
-01:50:53 (8) - Add a Clap.
-01:52:11 (4,5) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:54:42 (7) - Replace the Whistle with a Finish.
-01:55:57 (1,2) - Remove the Finishes.
-01:59:47 (9,10) - Whistles go here.
-02:00:19 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-02:12:88 (3) - Add a Finish.
-02:14:47 (6) - This repeats three more times than it needs to. Fill in the other three beats with three clicked beats, the first of which having a new combo mark and continuing the same hitsound pattern you established. Or use this:
1st beat = normal
2nd = clap
3rd = clap
4th = normal
5th = normal
6th = clap
7th = normal
8th = clap
-02:15:62 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:16:49 (7) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:23:27 (3) - ^
-02:24:42 (6,7) - Remove the Finishes.
-Look at Doomsday's Insane for the kiai suggestions I made.
Doomsday's Insane:
-Streams: my only real structural concern. Holyjesusaretheytough.
-00:26:13 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-00:26:56 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:39:116 - There REALLY needs to be a beat here.
-00:52:09 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish, extend by 1/1, reinput the break.
-01:42:28 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:42:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here, remove the Finish. (I suggested the combo number changes because of 5,6, really, but it still looks cooler if I change 3 as well).
-01:46:18 (4) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:54:40 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish.
-02:00:60 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:01:03 (1) - ^ and remove the Clap.
-02:01:32 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:03:63 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish.
-02:20:94 (1) - ^
-02:21:66 (2,3) - Add Claps.
-02:32:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream's spacing annoys me more than the rhythms of the other stream.
-02:34:64 (1) - Kiai looks dumb here.
-I suggest kiai from:
01:11:712 to 01:18:491, and other parts like it (except possibly the first chorus? Up to you).
BAT-starred.
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osuMogsworth wrote:
Doomsday's Insane:
-Streams: my only real structural concern. Holyjesusaretheytough.
-00:26:13 (3) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-00:26:56 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. done
-00:39:116 - There REALLY needs to be a beat here. done
-00:52:09 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish, extend by 1/1, reinput the break. done
-01:42:28 (3) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-01:42:86 (5) - New Combo mark goes here, remove the Finish. (I suggested the combo number changes because of 5,6, really, but it still looks cooler if I change 3 as well). done
-01:46:18 (4) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-01:54:40 (1) - Replace the Clap with a Finish. done
-02:00:60 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. done
-02:01:03 (1) - ^ and remove the Clap. done
-02:01:32 (2) - New Combo mark goes here. done
-02:03:63 (1) - Remove the Clap, add a Finish. done
-02:20:94 (1) - ^ done
-02:21:66 (2,3) - Add Claps. done
-02:32:77 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This stream's spacing annoys me more than the rhythms of the other stream. replaced them with sliders.
-02:34:64 (1) - Kiai looks dumb here. removed
-I suggest kiai from:
01:11:712 to 01:18:491, and other parts like it (except possibly the first chorus? Up to you). i don't think it fits too well. seems like a random spot for kiai to me. i've put Kiai 02:14:02 to 02:27:57 though
BAT-starred.
Topic Starter
Did most of the things mentioned.Mogsworth wrote:
Normal:
-Kiai suggestions made in Insane stand. Doesn't fit right there imo.
Hikki Style:
-Spinners here are difficult to recover from. I don't like the result when I change them.
Thanks for modding~
blue text = nazi mods
Normal:
01:18:51 (7) - offscreen
01:32:50 (2) - align with 1?
02:11:73 (1) - make a refelction of the yellow 1
Hikki:
00:29:61 (3,4) - align with 00:27:30 (3)
00:47:35 (5) - I don't like how this touches the score bar
01:06:54 (11) - slightly offscreen
01:07:98 (3) - make the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:08:27 (4) - new combo for the jump
01:09:13 (6) - make the same distance from 5 as 4 is
02:02:35 (1,2) - slightly offscreen
02:16:49 (1,2) - the spacing between 8 and 1 and 9 and 2 is slightly smaller here than the spacing in the rest of the combo
Doomsday:
01:52:38 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
02:21:95 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 1,2
02:28:44 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
02:31:03 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
You probably do not need to fix the off screen stuff I mentioned.
Great map. Star.
Normal:
01:18:51 (7) - offscreen
01:32:50 (2) - align with 1?
02:11:73 (1) - make a refelction of the yellow 1
Hikki:
00:29:61 (3,4) - align with 00:27:30 (3)
00:47:35 (5) - I don't like how this touches the score bar
01:06:54 (11) - slightly offscreen
01:07:98 (3) - make the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:08:27 (4) - new combo for the jump
01:09:13 (6) - make the same distance from 5 as 4 is
02:02:35 (1,2) - slightly offscreen
02:16:49 (1,2) - the spacing between 8 and 1 and 9 and 2 is slightly smaller here than the spacing in the rest of the combo
Doomsday:
01:52:38 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
02:21:95 (3,4) - make a vertical reflection of 1,2
02:28:44 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
02:31:03 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 1
You probably do not need to fix the off screen stuff I mentioned.
Great map. Star.
I'd still suggest putting kiai time in somewhere that makes sense. The ending was just not a good place. 
Topic Starter
Changed what I thought was needed.blissfulyoshi wrote:
blue text = nazi mods
Normal:
01:18:51 (7) - offscreen
01:32:50 (2) - align with 1?
02:11:73 (1) - make a refelction of the yellow 1
Hikki:
00:29:61 (3,4) - align with 00:27:30 (3)
00:47:35 (5) - I don't like how this touches the score bar
01:06:54 (11) - slightly offscreen
01:07:98 (3) - make the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:08:27 (4) - new combo for the jump
01:09:13 (6) - make the same distance from 5 as 4 is
02:02:35 (1,2) - slightly offscreen
02:16:49 (1,2) - the spacing between 8 and 1 and 9 and 2 is slightly smaller here than the spacing in the rest of the combo
You probably do not need to fix the off screen stuff I mentioned.
Great map. Star.
Thanks for modding~
I don't feel it fits anywhere except the end tbh.Mogsworth wrote:
I'd still suggest putting kiai time in somewhere that makes sense. The ending was just not a good place.
Revived!
map is too complex to mod for me. therefor, i'll only star it for now
All the diff are fine except in hard:
01:49:23 (4,5,6,7) - I think this is illegal.
02:34:809 - Kiai D:
Also cool map and skin~
01:49:23 (4,5,6,7) - I think this is illegal.
02:34:809 - Kiai D:
Also cool map and skin~
Normal:
dont know what to mod here because i dont fully understand the style you map it but:
01:46:34 (1) - this slider here is a bit wrong i think it sounds better for me if you start it at 1:46:31 and end 1:46:70
hikki style:
02:20:38 (5) - sound better if you end at 2:20:963
02:26:01 (6) - this is not part of the melody you follow here
doomsday:
01:12:14 (2) - maybe end a clap sound to make this part not silent
02:01:03 (3) - clap sound here
02:26:56 (1) - i have the feeling the spinner starts half a beat too early and 1 circle is missing
02:27:86 (1) - the section with the spinner after this is wrong. 4 beats on white ticks and the spinner 3 beats long
dont know what to mod here because i dont fully understand the style you map it but:
01:46:34 (1) - this slider here is a bit wrong i think it sounds better for me if you start it at 1:46:31 and end 1:46:70
hikki style:
02:20:38 (5) - sound better if you end at 2:20:963
02:26:01 (6) - this is not part of the melody you follow here
doomsday:
01:12:14 (2) - maybe end a clap sound to make this part not silent
02:01:03 (3) - clap sound here
02:26:56 (1) - i have the feeling the spinner starts half a beat too early and 1 circle is missing
02:27:86 (1) - the section with the spinner after this is wrong. 4 beats on white ticks and the spinner 3 beats long
Topic Starter
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
I still think it sounds better as it is. Thanks though. ^^;Hanyuu wrote:
02:26:01 (6) - this is not part of the melody you follow herehmmm ok
Move the (6) to 2:26:15
maybe?? =w=
[Normal]
01:14:90 (3,4) - IMO, you should place it right space because it is 'Normal' difficulty
01:47:21 (2) - spacing
01:53:27 (1) - maybe spacing?
01:57:88 (1) - ^
02:06:39 (5) - spacing
02:09:42 (1) - ^
[Hikki Style]
00:25:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, making them to have same distance between them is better
00:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:28:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:33:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:42 (6) - spacing
02:25:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:26:30 (1,2,3) - ^
[Doomsday's Insane]
Nice.
Nice map :D Starr'd
01:14:90 (3,4) - IMO, you should place it right space because it is 'Normal' difficulty
01:47:21 (2) - spacing
01:53:27 (1) - maybe spacing?
01:57:88 (1) - ^
02:06:39 (5) - spacing
02:09:42 (1) - ^
[Hikki Style]
00:25:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, making them to have same distance between them is better
00:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:28:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:33:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:42 (6) - spacing
02:25:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:26:30 (1,2,3) - ^
[Doomsday's Insane]
Nice.
Nice map :D Starr'd
Hikki~
01:02:93 (2) - Move closer to 1's endpoint.
Doomslay~
Change offset to 2,502. Then resnap. The notes are quite early atm.
01:02:93 (2) - Move closer to 1's endpoint.
Doomslay~
Change offset to 2,502. Then resnap. The notes are quite early atm.
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance wrote:
[Normal]
01:14:90 (3,4) - IMO, you should place it right space because it is 'Normal' difficulty
01:47:21 (2) - spacing
01:53:27 (1) - maybe spacing?
01:57:88 (1) - ^
02:06:39 (5) - spacing
02:09:42 (1) - ^
[Hikki Style]
00:25:43 (1,2,3,4,5) - IMO, making them to have same distance between them is better
00:26:58 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:27:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:28:89 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:30:05 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:31:20 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:32:35 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:33:51 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:54:42 (6) - spacing
02:25:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
02:26:30 (1,2,3) - ^
Done what was needed.
Thanks for looking.
Done. Thanks for looking. ^^Mafiamaster wrote:
Hikki~
01:02:93 (2) - Move closer to 1's endpoint.
I was hitting the notes a little late, but that might just be me sucking this morning. Unless you were considering tweaking the offset, disregard this.
Normal
Nothing.
Hikki Style
01:38:992 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just thought this part was a little confusing with the placement and spacing.
01:49:665 (7) - This slider was a little confusing due to the underlap.
02:27:886 - You have three sets of notes between spinners that you could space a little further each time if you wanted.
Doomsday's
Nothing. T_T 208 BPM Doomsday Insane goodness. Ow my hand.
Looks solid, so here have a star.
Normal
Nothing.
Hikki Style
01:38:992 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just thought this part was a little confusing with the placement and spacing.
01:49:665 (7) - This slider was a little confusing due to the underlap.
02:27:886 - You have three sets of notes between spinners that you could space a little further each time if you wanted.
Doomsday's
Nothing. T_T 208 BPM Doomsday Insane goodness. Ow my hand.
Looks solid, so here have a star.
Normal:
00:39:42 (1) - Space this beat closer to (4). I recommend not using jumps on Normal difficulties.
01:11:73 (1) - Space closer to (6). Same reason as above.
Hard:
01:49:66 (7) - Make this slider visible
Doomsday's Insane:
Seems all fine (Ouch! 208 BPM streams D:)
That's about it guyz
00:39:42 (1) - Space this beat closer to (4). I recommend not using jumps on Normal difficulties.
01:11:73 (1) - Space closer to (6). Same reason as above.
Hard:
01:49:66 (7) - Make this slider visible
Doomsday's Insane:
Seems all fine (Ouch! 208 BPM streams D:)
That's about it guyz
Topic Starter
* - Done.
* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
* - Left unchanged.
* - Changed slightly but not as suggested.
* - Left unchanged.
Shinde wrote:
Normal
Nothing.
Hikki Style
01:38:992 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I just thought this part was a little confusing with the placement and spacing.*
01:49:665 (7) - This slider was a little confusing due to the underlap.*
02:27:886 - You have three sets of notes between spinners that you could space a little further each time if you wanted. * Not sure why I didn't think of this.
Thanks for modding guys~lesjuh wrote:
Normal:
00:39:42 (1) - Space this beat closer to (4). I recommend not using jumps on Normal difficulties. *
01:11:73 (1) - Space closer to (6). Same reason as above. *
Hard:
01:49:66 (7) - Make this slider visible *
Awesome and fun map.
I really didn't find any problems on any of the difficulties.
[Hikki Style]
Really tiny fix
02:19:66 (10) - Move it slightly upwards, so it centers more, it looks detached.
Starred.
I really didn't find any problems on any of the difficulties.
[Hikki Style]
Really tiny fix
02:19:66 (10) - Move it slightly upwards, so it centers more, it looks detached.
Starred.
Topic Starter
Fixed. Thanks for modding.NachoPiggy wrote:
[Hikki Style]
Really tiny fix
02:19:66 (10) - Move it slightly upwards, so it centers more, it looks detached.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Download: Mr. - Hats, Gloves and Overalls (Hikato) [Doomsday's Insane].osu
Normal
Fine to me.
Hikki Style
01:17:50 (6) - New combo so it doesn't go against spacing as the combo beforehand is a on purpose jump.
02:34:80 (1) - in this spinner you're overusing the kiai time.
Unless you can get the two BATs that will approve and rank your map with the kiai, I suggest you remove the streaming kiai times.
Doomsday's Insane
01:16:34 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a whole combo.
02:34:66 (1) - I say shrink it down by 1/2 beat (aka to the red tick) but keeping it as is also works.
starred' and good luck on getting this bubbled/ranked
Fine to me.
Hikki Style
01:17:50 (6) - New combo so it doesn't go against spacing as the combo beforehand is a on purpose jump.
02:34:80 (1) - in this spinner you're overusing the kiai time.
Unless you can get the two BATs that will approve and rank your map with the kiai, I suggest you remove the streaming kiai times.
Doomsday's Insane
01:16:34 (1,1,1,1) - Make this a whole combo.
02:34:66 (1) - I say shrink it down by 1/2 beat (aka to the red tick) but keeping it as is also works.
starred' and good luck on getting this bubbled/ranked
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding.Metroid wrote:
Normal
Fine to me. ^^;
Hikki Style
01:17:50 (6) - New combo so it doesn't go against spacing as the combo beforehand is a on purpose jump. *
02:34:80 (1) - in this spinner you're overusing the kiai time. *
Unless you can get the two BATs that will approve and rank your map with the kiai, I suggest you remove the streaming kiai times.
Treat all the following as suggestions.
[Normal]
01:18:22 (x) - Start slider here, and end where (7) was, of course deleting (8). (Currently feels strange without a beat there.)
[Hikki Style]
02:34:80 (Kiai) - lol still good
[Doomsday's Insane]
woah! D:
Star'd cause it deserves it.
[Normal]
01:18:22 (x) - Start slider here, and end where (7) was, of course deleting (8). (Currently feels strange without a beat there.)
[Hikki Style]
02:34:80 (Kiai) - lol still good
[Doomsday's Insane]
woah! D:
Star'd cause it deserves it.