forum

ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi

posted
Total Posts
59
show more
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Uhm, I think it's not possible, .mp3 is different and i cant fix my map to your mp3, sorry.

If we work on separate ways, it's better, cya and sorry again :(
Lizbeth
ok no problem... ;)

cya!
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

DJPop wrote:

omg, mv is too big D=

- vdo offset is -400.
- go to 00:54:662 and set as preview time. (Timing > last option)

~Normal~
00:16:48 (2) - move ending point over (3)
00:19:43 (1,2,3,4,5) and more - I suggest to use spacings like previous pattern
00:22:38 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
00:24:88 (1,2,3,4) - from now, you can use these spacings
00:38:75 (1,2,3) - spacings are too close
00:52:38 (4) - move 1/4 backward
01:00:79 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:11:48 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:12:84 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:21:70 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note

[attachment=1:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part1.rar[/attachment:572c8]
[attachment=0:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part2.rar[/attachment:572c8]
Fixed ^^
Andrea
[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ?
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal.
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better.

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) -

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ? I think it's good how it is, I dunno why
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal. What do you think to end it on 00:53:980?
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better. Isn't there too much time without anything before spinner? I don't know, I fixed it anyway o.O

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4 Did it! :)
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) - Fixed ;)

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Fixed, thanks :D :)
MetaSlash
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Thanks for star :O ^^ ;)
EEeee
Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

EEeee wrote:

Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left Didn't see any error or spacing problem, but i've fixed anyway :?
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^

Fixed :P
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Bpm and Offset fine.

[Normal]

00:24:88 (1) - Too close from 00:24:43 (5)
00:38:75 (1) - Too close from 00:38:07 (4)
00:54:66 (1) - Maybe from here you can use normal sounds. I prefer soft hitsounds.
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from 01:11:02 (6)

[Hard]

00:17:616 (x) - Add a note here?
00:29:88 (7) - Whistle here.
00:53:980 (x) - Add a note here?
01:00:11 (x) - Add a note here? I prefer without anything, but i put a note over here...
01:08:07 (11) - After this circle, maybe add a spinner?
01:30:34 (4) - Too close from 01:29:88 (3)
Thanks, fixed :O
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Prima di tutto di metto una stella perchè la meriti proprio! :) Grazie ;) ;)
Secondo, nella Hard ho visto qualche imperfezione. Io ti elenco le cose che secondo me andrebbero da riguardare, poi decidi tu se fixarle XD
00:17:843 Togli la New combo
00:19:434 Questo circle non è allineato con gli altri
00:20:570 Dovresti annullare la new combo
00:21:934 -00:23:315 In questo intervallo di tempo nei primi tre circle rossi segui la parte strumentale e nello slider la voce del cantante. questo può confondere il giocatore. Ti posso consigliare di correggere così:
In effetti...hai ragione :P
00:22:616 Se hai corretto come sopra, dovresti togliere la new combo
01:05:798: Allinea il circle (siamo all'ordine dei quadrettini della grid al lvl3, ma l'ho notato D:) Omg nn era facile da vedere xD
01:30:571: Quest'ultimo slider secondo me (ma non sono sicuro) dovrebbe finire nella parte dove hai messo il bookmark Si^^
Piccolo consiglio: questa mappa non è tanto difficile, a meno che puoi alzi un tantino la overall difficulty. Modifica poi la forma degli sliders. Nn so, vedrò, anke se credo k la lascerò così...

Grazie del mod e della stella, grazie :)
Card N'FoRcE
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
[quote="Card N'FoRcE"]- Normal:
00:20:11 (2) - errore di spacing (sposta a destra)
00:33:98 (1,2,3,4) - sposta l'intera combo un po' a destra (2 o 3 quadretti)
00:38:75 (1) - errore di spacing (allontana)
00:44:88 (3,4,5) - hanno uno spacing diverso dagli slider precedenti
01:15:11 (1) - fallo iniziare 1/2 dopo
01:21:25 (2) - meglio se messo completamente sotto lo slider
01:22:84 (1) - ti direi di farlo finire 1/8 dopo, ma non è il massimo per una normal, quindi ti suggerisco 3/8 prima

- Hard:
00:40:11 (7) - storto volontariamente? Si, è storto x variare un po' :D
01:30:34 (4,5) - nuova combo al 4 e centrali nella griglia

Una cosa grave e comune ad entrambe le diff è la carenza di suoni al ritornello.
Usa più "Whistle" e sembrerà già meglio.
Per ora niente stella visto che la carenza per me è grave e mi fa sentire la mappa vuota, ma appena hai risolto chiedimi di guardarla di nuovo =3 Allora mi impegnero' + negli hitsound che nella beatmap ora, grazie del e dei consigli ^^ :P

Aggiustato gli errori di spacing :)
Luxary
Sembra tutto ok, solo una cosa:

[Normal]
01:31:02 (2) - Troooppo corto D: Metti 20 di BPM e allungalo D:

Starred
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Luxary wrote:

Sempra tutto ok, solo una cosa:

[Normal]
01:31:02 (2) - Troooppo corto D: Metti 20 di BPM e allungalo D: Oki grazie ^^

Starred

Grazie anke della stella :D :)
Lokamp
Modding time!

Hard
[00:10:570] (3, 3, 3, 3) whistle here
[00:18:070] (3) clap here? I'm not sure...
[00:31:480] (4, 3, 3, 5) clap (or whistle) here
[01:28:070] (4, 3, 3) finish here

Well, this mode is REALLY well-organized! Star'd.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Lokamp wrote:

Modding time!

Hard
[00:10:570] (3, 3, 3, 3) whistle here
[00:18:070] (3) clap here? I'm not sure... Not really useful, but...ok
[00:31:480] (4, 3, 3, 5) clap (or whistle) here I prefer whistle ;)
[01:28:070] (4, 3, 3) finish here

Well, this mode is REALLY well-organized! Star'd.
Thanks for hitsound-matter help :P
Armin
Ciao ^_^
ho trovato un altro piccolo errore XD
vai in design e correggi l'offset del video.
analogamente con il timing , serve a determinare quando inizia effettivamente il video
posto uno screenshot. Devi modificare l'indicatore in alto a destra come nella figura per avere una giusta sincronia video-canzone. Per aiutarti puoi tranquillamente vedere i sottotitoli del video :P
Armin
Sleep Powder
[Armin's Normal]
00:20:11 (2) - Place a Finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
01:09:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why no hitsounds at all?

[Hard]
00:36:02 (7) - Finish hitsound at the end of slider?


The Note Layout and everything seems to be pretty good...
Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 01:15:34 (1) - Shorten this 2 (1/4 ticks), so it lands on the white tick.

Armin's Normal~

  1. 00:59:88 (8) - This sounds better 2 (1/4) ticks forward. (01:00:11)
    Afterwards add a note at 00:59:88.
  2. 01:01:93 (1) - Suggestion: Remove note. Then lengthen spinner to where 1 was.
  3. 01:15:34 (1) - Same with Normal
  4. 01:23:52 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:23:75. Then shorten the end to where it was before.

Hard~

~JUST A SUGGESTION~
  1. 01:22:16 (1) - Start spinner at 01:23:75.
    Then add 5 (1/2) notes starting at 01:21:93. (Following the instrument)
Nice job.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
  1. 01:15:34 (1) - Shorten this 2 (1/4 ticks), so it lands on the white tick.

Armin's Normal~

  1. 00:59:88 (8) - This sounds better 2 (1/4) ticks forward. (01:00:11)
    Afterwards add a note at 00:59:88.
  2. 01:01:93 (1) - Suggestion: Remove note. Then lengthen spinner to where 1 was.
  3. 01:15:34 (1) - Same with Normal hehe, now understood, well, did it! ~
  4. 01:23:52 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:23:75. Then shorten the end to where it was before.

Hard~

~JUST A SUGGESTION~
  1. 01:22:16 (1) - Start spinner at 01:23:75.
    Then add 5 (1/2) notes starting at 01:21:93. (Following the instrument)
I made i stream, but i dunno if it's ok

Nice job.
Thanks for star and mod. It has been really helpful! :)
blissfulyoshi
I was planning to mod this earlier when you posted in #mod, but since someone else modded before I did, I am posting now.

Normal:
00:14:43 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
00:52:38 (5,6,7) - might want to make this similar to 2,3,4 (the placement of 4 relative to 3 is slightly different than the placement of 7 in respect to 6)

Armin's:
00:27:16 (2) - might want to change this slider so it points directly toward the center of 3,4
00:40:11 (4) - nazi post: move 1 notch right (3) to make 1,2,3,4 a staight line
00:47:16 (3) - off screen, please make sure it is fully on-screen
01:22:84 (1) - it is hard to read which direction this slider goes

Hard:
00:26:25 (6) - new combo to show the change of timing in the stack
00:40:11 (7) - align with 6?
00:52:84 (7) - new combo to show the change of timing in the stack
01:28:52 (1,2) - y is spacing between here different than the spacing between 01:27:38 (1,2)

Very nice beatmap. Star.
Larto
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:10:79 (1) - Remove New combo
00:12:61 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:61 (7) - Add New Combo
00:17:84 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:25 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:70 (2) - Add New Combo
00:32:84 (6) - Add New Combo MAYBE
00:53:07 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too short? You can try to put a jump here, but this spinner doesn't feel right
00:55:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:57:16 (15) - Add New Combo
01:02:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:05:11 (9) - Add New Combo
01:05:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:08:07 (11,1) - I'd remove 11 and make 1 start where 11 is at the moment. Plays better.
01:12:84 (2) - Add New Combo MAYBE

Feel free to argue about the New Combos, especially the MAYBE ones.

Armin's Normal:
HPDrain is a bit high imho
01:08:29 (1) - Spinner is a bit too mean for a Normal

Normal:
Overall difficulty is a bit high imho
00:17:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:84 (11) - Add New Combo
00:21:25 (6) - Add New Combo
00:22:38 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:53:07 (1) - Make a bit longer maybe

Good map
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Larto wrote:

Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:10:79 (1) - Remove New combo
00:12:61 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:61 (7) - Add New Combo
00:17:84 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:25 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:70 (2) - Add New Combo
00:32:84 (6) - Add New Combo MAYBE
00:53:07 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too short? You can try to put a jump here, but this spinner doesn't feel right It came something like a jump ;) I'd like if you check it...
00:55:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:57:16 (15) - Add New Combo
01:02:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:05:11 (9) - Add New Combo
01:05:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:08:07 (11,1) - I'd remove 11 and make 1 start where 11 is at the moment. Plays better.
01:12:84 (2) - Add New Combo MAYBE

Feel free to argue about the New Combos, especially the MAYBE ones.

Armin's Normal:
HPDrain is a bit high imho increased by 1...
01:08:29 (1) - Spinner is a bit too mean for a Normal With nothing is better, yes

Normal:
Overall difficulty is a bit high imho increased this too
00:17:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:84 (11) - Add New Combo
00:21:25 (6) - Add New Combo
00:22:38 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:53:07 (1) - Make a bit longer maybe Yeh done :D

Good map


Thanks for star ^^
Larto
Remod:
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:53:07 (1) - There's still this short spinner while you said you fixed it in your pots.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Larto wrote:

Remod:
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:53:07 (1) - There's still this short spinner while you said you fixed it in your pots.
Well, ok, fixed ;)
Larto
Bubbled
Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
01:07:84 (6) - bpm change is unintuitive
01:31:02 (2) - ^
00:23:75 (5) - hitsound this
00:56:48 (3) - finish
01:03:29 (6) - end with a finish



[Armin]
00:01:93 (7) - hitsound this
00:03:75 (1,5) - ^
00:13:98 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
00:48:98 (2) - start with a finish
youre overusing soft whistle a bit too


[Hard]
01:03:07 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
overusing soft whistle
01:30:57 (2) - unintuitive + needs hitvolume.


popped
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Fixed everything, you were right, I hope you like it now :P
Lokamp
3rd time to mode! I hope this will be useful...

Armin's Normal
[00:48:520] (1, 3) whistle the beat and the slider's end
[00:55:110] (3, 5, 7) start these sliders with claps or finish sounds (the 7th with a whistle)
[00:57:160] (1, 2) use finish on the beat (the sound, not the washing powder...); plus, start and end the slider with whistles
[01:09:200] From here until 01:12:730 try to follow my previous two hints (on 00:55:110 and 00:57:160)
[01:22:840] (1) in my humble opinion, an anti-clockwise circular slider isn't very intuitive, isn't it? Try to set another one clockwise...

Well, my work here is done, now it's up to you!
abalee
timing: i personally think it could +5~+7ms at offset. and try BPM@ 131.97(not sure, sorry :( ) resnap all note if you accetp my timing ;)

Armin's normal:
00:13:29 (4,1,2,3) - spacing
00:15:11 (4,1) - spacing too ,but i thougt it's not a big problem
01:10:11 (4,5) - spacing
and i suggest to delete the useless timing setion in this difficulty.

i guess someone may post more that me :(
Alace
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Alace wrote:

<Normal>
00:43:75 (2,3,4,5) - bad spacing
Watch out the Distance snap when you use 0.5X bpm or 2X bpm Did it ^^
IMO don`t use or use a few BPM change in normal diff(because it`s normal)

<Hard>
00:52:85 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - It`s not a really good jump patten uhm, yeh, fixed
00:52:85 (1,2) and 00:53:75 (3,4) are good point for jump (heavy beats in this song)
Thanks fixed :P
fuffolo
GG! Awesome map :)
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

fuffolo wrote:

GG! Awesome map :)
ThAnKs for star^^ :P
Alace
It is more easy to show by a picture

Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[NORMAL]

there are some spacing inconsistencies in this diff. take a look through and you should notice them
other than that, seems fine

[ARMIN'S NORMAL]

00:00:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - the spacing between these are different than between the rest of the beats
01:09:68 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[HARD]

again, spacing inconsistencies. stuff like at 00:21.26, where the spacing between (1) and (2) is much smaller than the gap between (2) and (3). take a look through and fix these.

not a bad map. just little things to sort out
star'd
Takuma
[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).

I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find.

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish.

Have a shiny star.
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Takuma wrote:

[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).

I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish. yeh, sounds better :D

Have a shiny star.
Thx very much :P
Armin

Zodiark1020 wrote:

Takuma wrote:

[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).

I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

I'm sorry Zodiark1020. I gave you a difficulty and you have changed many things, as your "suggestions". The spacing errors that Takuma report are caused by your fixes (distraction errors,I think ). So I won't mod (now) this map. :?

Gli errori di spacing non sono molti, ma se si correggono si deve cambiare circa il 30% della mappa. in questo momento non ho voglia di correggerlo, lo farò tra un po di tempo, ripristinando le mie vecchie cose :)
Armin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: ONOFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (Zodiark1020) [Armin's Normal].osu
Cyclone
Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754.

Please remember to resnap all notes.

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Cyclone wrote:

Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754. I think 3,752 is 'kay, or at least if there is a need of changin' it, i'll use 3,754 :P

Please remember to resnap all notes. Yeh :)

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!

Man, thank you very much, I really needed a good timing fix :P :D
Armin
Alace
Last request
plz kill 3 2 1 go in your diffs XD

EDIT:bubble bubble~
Larto
Ranked!
Lokamp
Finalmente, è rankata...
Congratulazioni Zodi! (Magari un giorno ci riuscirò anch'io...)
Please sign in to reply.

New reply