ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi · forum

Yuukari-Banteki

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Yuukari-Banteki 2009-06-19T19:15:59+00:00

[Normal]
01:07:84 (6) - bpm change is unintuitive
01:31:02 (2) - ^
00:23:75 (5) - hitsound this
00:56:48 (3) - finish
01:03:29 (6) - end with a finish

[Armin]
00:01:93 (7) - hitsound this
00:03:75 (1,5) - ^
00:13:98 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
00:48:98 (2) - start with a finish
youre overusing soft whistle a bit too

[Hard]
01:03:07 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
overusing soft whistle
01:30:57 (2) - unintuitive + needs hitvolume.

popped

Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-06-20T16:25:39+00:00

Fixed everything, you were right, I hope you like it now

Last edited by Zodiark1020 2009-06-22T10:24:30+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2009-06-22T08:46:22+00:00

3rd time to mode! I hope this will be useful...

Armin's Normal
[00:48:520] (1, 3) whistle the beat and the slider's end
[00:55:110] (3, 5, 7) start these sliders with claps or finish sounds (the 7th with a whistle)
[00:57:160] (1, 2) use finish on the beat (the sound, not the washing powder...); plus, start and end the slider with whistles
[01:09:200] From here until 01:12:730 try to follow my previous two hints (on 00:55:110 and 00:57:160)
[01:22:840] (1) in my humble opinion, an anti-clockwise circular slider isn't very intuitive, isn't it? Try to set another one clockwise...

Well, my work here is done, now it's up to you!

abalee

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abalee 2009-06-22T15:58:25+00:00

timing: i personally think it could +5~+7ms at offset. and try BPM@ 131.97(not sure, sorry

) resnap all note if you accetp my timing

Armin's normal:
00:13:29 (4,1,2,3) - spacing
00:15:11 (4,1) - spacing too ,but i thougt it's not a big problem
01:10:11 (4,5) - spacing
and i suggest to delete the useless timing setion in this difficulty.

i guess someone may post more that me

Alace

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Alace 2009-06-22T17:19:58+00:00

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Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-06-23T09:00:24+00:00

Alace wrote:
<Normal>
00:43:75 (2,3,4,5) - bad spacing
Watch out the Distance snap when you use 0.5X bpm or 2X bpm Did it ^^
IMO don`t use or use a few BPM change in normal diff(because it`s normal)

<Hard>
00:52:85 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - It`s not a really good jump patten uhm, yeh, fixed
00:52:85 (1,2) and 00:53:75 (3,4) are good point for jump (heavy beats in this song)

Thanks fixed

fuffolo

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fuffolo 2009-06-23T09:42:50+00:00

GG! Awesome map

Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-06-23T10:16:04+00:00

fuffolo wrote:
GG! Awesome map

ThAnKs for star^^

Alace

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Alace 2009-06-29T17:49:49+00:00

It is more easy to show by a picture

Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-06-29T18:43:44+00:00

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Doomsday

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Doomsday 2009-07-01T13:03:26+00:00

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[NORMAL]

there are some spacing inconsistencies in this diff. take a look through and you should notice them
other than that, seems fine

[ARMIN'S NORMAL]

00:00:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - the spacing between these are different than between the rest of the beats
01:09:68 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[HARD]

again, spacing inconsistencies. stuff like at 00:21.26, where the spacing between (1) and (2) is much smaller than the gap between (2) and (3). take a look through and fix these.

not a bad map. just little things to sort out
star'd

Takuma

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Takuma 2009-07-01T18:24:28+00:00

[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find.

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish.

Have a shiny star.

Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-07-02T18:14:35+00:00

Takuma wrote:
[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish. yeh, sounds better

Have a shiny star.

Thx very much

Armin

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Armin 2009-07-02T21:53:49+00:00

Zodiark1020 wrote:
Takuma wrote:
[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

I'm sorry Zodiark1020. I gave you a difficulty and you have changed many things, as your "suggestions". The spacing errors that Takuma report are caused by your fixes (distraction errors,I think ). So I won't mod (now) this map.

Gli errori di spacing non sono molti, ma se si correggono si deve cambiare circa il 30% della mappa. in questo momento non ho voglia di correggerlo, lo farò tra un po di tempo, ripristinando le mie vecchie cose

Armin

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Armin 2009-07-09T20:35:16+00:00

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Cyclone

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Cyclone 2009-07-11T04:54:28+00:00

Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754.

Please remember to resnap all notes.

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!

Zodiark1020

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Zodiark1020 2009-07-11T19:06:38+00:00

Cyclone wrote:
Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754. I think 3,752 is 'kay, or at least if there is a need of changin' it, i'll use 3,754

Please remember to resnap all notes. Yeh

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!

Man, thank you very much, I really needed a good timing fix

Armin

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Armin 2009-07-11T20:23:29+00:00

FIIIIIIIIX!

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Alace

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Alace 2009-07-13T14:19:15+00:00