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ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi

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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 14 luglio 2009 at 0.01.56

Artist: ON/OFF
Title: Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi
Source: Vampire Knight
BPM: 132
Filesize: 8553kb
Play Time: 01:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Armin's Normal (4,51 stars, 174 notes)
  2. Hard (4,81 stars, 245 notes)
  3. Normal (3,99 stars, 135 notes)
Download: ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi
Download: ON/OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st serious beatmap going for rank.

Requests of mod and comments, please ^^
Now just needs mods/BATs
Last edited by Zodiark1020 , edited 94 times in total.
Yumiko
505 posts
Joined September 2008
Yumiko
Come hai scritto anche nel post, il problema principale di questa mappa è lo spacing, ma il timing sembra davvero buono, soprattutto perchè è la tua prima mappa D:

Usa il distance snap! E' fondamentale per un buono spacing. Attivalo dalle opzioni a destra del pannello compose e cliccando su alcuni cerchi vedrai che la loro posizione verrà cambiata. Quella posizione è esatta.
Il mio consiglio è di usarlo a 0.9x (ne modifichi il valore tenendo premuto alt), per non sconvolgere troppo la posizione di tutti i cerchi. Con il DS attivato, controlla la posizione di TUTTI i cerchi e gli slider.
00:16:48 (1) - qui toglierei il new combo, il alternativa puoi metterlo al circle precedente
00:19:43 (6) - new combo
00:20:11 (1) - togli il new combo
00:57:16 (4) - <- esempio di spacing sbagliato
01:01:93 (5) - accorcialo alla linea bianca
01:03:29 (6) - spostalo sulla linea rossa prima
01:18:98 (1) - accorcialo alla linea bianca
01:21:70 (3) - sposterei questo sulla linea bianca dopo e fare iniziare lo spinner su quella rossa dopo (alla fine accorcerei lo spinner alla linea bianca prima)
01:30:57 (1) - dopo aver accorciato lo spinner lo sposterei sulla linea rossa prima
01:31:02 (2) - lo sposterei sulla linea bianca prima


Hai potenziale come mapper, come ti ho già detto :D Continua così :D
Lokamp
2,530 posts
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Lokamp
Great... Another Italian map!
Let's turn on my mod-mode... (another TERRIBLE joke, Lokamp...)

Normal
[00:11:713] (4, 4) end these two sliders with a finish
[00:20:543] (4, 5) claps over there!
[00:23:751] (4) finish here
[00:37:830] (3) whistle here
[00:42:957] (1) add a "micro beat" in the slider here (I don't know the exact name yet...)
[00:47:587] (4, 4) set whistles (or finish) on all these sliders
[00:54:543] from now until the last spinners, try to set normal sounds instead of soft ones!
[00:55:114] (2, 1, 3) clap on the start of the blue slider and on 1st red beat; plus, split the red slider into a beat (previous slider's start) and a little slider (starting from 00:57:456 and ending to previous slider's end) (simple, isn't it? :? )
[00:58:771] (2, 4) start these sliders with claps!
[01:01:543] (4) finish here
[01:06:071] pretty STRANGE this slider, isn't it? try to change it in something else!
[01:09:611] (2, 4, 6) claps for 2nd slider's start and for the 4th beat; finish on 6th
[01:11:975] (1) another "micro beat" inside this slider around here
[01:13:273] (3, 5, 6) claps on the sliders's start; finish for the beat
[01:18:965] pretty STRANGE this slider, too (lack of ideas? I understand you...)
[01:31:025] I'll say this in Italian: che senso ha questo slider in fondo?

Star'd!
Zodiark1020
160 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Lokamp wrote:

Great... Another Italian map!
Let's turn on my mod-mode... (another TERRIBLE joke, Lokamp...)

Normal
[00:11:713] (4, 4) end these two sliders with a finish
[00:20:543] (4, 5) claps over there!
[00:23:751] (4) finish here Personally, I dnt like it with finish
[00:37:830] (3) whistle here Here too, i prefer with normal hitsound
[00:42:957] (1) add a "micro beat" in the slider here (I don't know the exact name yet...) I don't know what do you mean
[00:47:587] (4, 4) set whistles (or finish) on all these sliders
[00:54:543] from now until the last spinners, try to set normal sounds instead of soft ones! Prefer soft...
[00:55:114] (2, 1, 3) clap on the start of the blue slider and on 1st red beat; plus, split the red slider into a beat (previous slider's start) and a little slider (starting from 00:57:456 and ending to previous slider's end) (simple, isn't it? :? ) I understood only something and I modified just that
[00:58:771] (2, 4) start these sliders with claps!
[01:01:543] (4) finish here
[01:06:071] pretty STRANGE this slider, isn't it? try to change it in something else! It's ok to me :P
[01:09:611] (2, 4, 6) claps for 2nd slider's start and for the 4th beat; finish on 6th
[01:11:975] (1) another "micro beat" inside this slider around here Don't understand what are micro beats.
[01:13:273] (3, 5, 6) claps on the sliders's start; finish for the beat
[01:18:965] pretty STRANGE this slider, too (lack of ideas? I understand you...) I think it's ok this too...
[01:31:025] I'll say this in Italian: che senso ha questo slider in fondo? XD, it seems it's useless...right

Star'd!
Thanks for hitsounds matter, see ya^^
happy30
Featured Artist
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happy30
The beatmap is using 0.8x spacing as well as 1.0x spacing, you could better just choose 1 and respace the map.
Also, the circles are kinda small for a normal.

00:33:98 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - Use finishes more rarely please :<
00:50:34 (1) - End this 1/2 earlier or later? dunno
00:52:61 (5) - Remove finish
01:15:11 (1) - Should start 1/4 later ~
01:22:38 (1) - Should end on the blue tick
Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
DJPop
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DJPop
omg, mv is too big D=

- vdo offset is -400.
- go to 00:54:662 and set as preview time. (Timing > last option)

~Normal~
00:16:48 (2) - move ending point over (3)
00:19:43 (1,2,3,4,5) and more - I suggest to use spacings like previous pattern
00:22:38 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
00:24:88 (1,2,3,4) - from now, you can use these spacings
00:38:75 (1,2,3) - spacings are too close
00:52:38 (4) - move 1/4 backward
01:00:79 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:11:48 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:12:84 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:21:70 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note

Download: Vampire Knight MV.part1.rar
Download: Vampire Knight MV.part2.rar

Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Cool map, and nice song

Star ;)

actually i'm mapping the same song too.
but the full version.
i was thinking if u want to add it as a new diff?
tell me what u think.

check it out, to see if u like it.

here's the .mp3
ON-OFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi

Download: ONOFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (Lizbeth) [Lizbeth's Version].osu
Zodiark1020
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Topic Starter
Zodiark1020
Uhm, I think it's not possible, .mp3 is different and i cant fix my map to your mp3, sorry.

If we work on separate ways, it's better, cya and sorry again :(
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
ok no problem... ;)

cya!
Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020

DJPop wrote:

omg, mv is too big D=

- vdo offset is -400.
- go to 00:54:662 and set as preview time. (Timing > last option)

~Normal~
00:16:48 (2) - move ending point over (3)
00:19:43 (1,2,3,4,5) and more - I suggest to use spacings like previous pattern
00:22:38 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
00:24:88 (1,2,3,4) - from now, you can use these spacings
00:38:75 (1,2,3) - spacings are too close
00:52:38 (4) - move 1/4 backward
01:00:79 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:11:48 (1) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:12:84 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note
01:21:70 (2) - spacing is too close, move it further from previous note

[attachment=1:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part1.rar[/attachment:572c8]
[attachment=0:572c8]Vampire Knight MV.part2.rar[/attachment:572c8]
Fixed ^^
Andrea
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Andrea
[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ?
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal.
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better.

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) -

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Normal]

00:15:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:25 (1) - ^
00:17:16 (3) - New combo.
00:17:16 (3) - Maybe align with end of slider (2) ? I think it's good how it is, I dunno why
00:22:61 (2) - Too close from (1)
00:51:48 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:27 (4) - Move this here -> 00:52:38 (4)
00:53:07 (1) - Spinner too short for a normal. What do you think to end it on 00:53:980?
01:01:93 (5) - Too close from (4).
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from (6).
01:22:38 (1) - Start this spinner here -> 01:22:84 (1). Sound better. Isn't there too much time without anything before spinner? I don't know, I fixed it anyway o.O

[Hard]

00:15:34 (4) - Finish?
00:40:68 (1) - Don't start spinner on blue lines :<
00:44:09 (1) - Move this here -> 00:44:20 (1) - And shorten it by 1/4 Did it! :)
00:51:36 (1) - Move this here -> 00:51:48 (1) - Fixed ;)

Good map , you have to finish Hard. Star for you.
Fixed, thanks :D :)
MetaSlash
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MetaSlash
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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
Thanks for star :O ^^ ;)
EEeee
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Joined July 2008
EEeee
Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^
Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020

EEeee wrote:

Normal
been awhile since I said this, but its looks fine here ^^

Hard
01:01:48 (2) - spacing seems wrong here, move 1 lvl 3 grid to the left Didn't see any error or spacing problem, but i've fixed anyway :?
01:02:16 (4,5,6) - this isn't spaced at 0.8x, cause 1,2,3 are, so either space these, or just add new combo to 4, this
must be done
01:12:38 (6) - new combo, or snap it
01:21:025 () - something should be here, add a note
01:28:52 (5) - new combo
01:29:43 (8) - ^

Fixed :P
Andrea
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Andrea
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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Timing]

Bpm and Offset fine.

[Normal]

00:24:88 (1) - Too close from 00:24:43 (5)
00:38:75 (1) - Too close from 00:38:07 (4)
00:54:66 (1) - Maybe from here you can use normal sounds. I prefer soft hitsounds.
01:11:48 (1) - Too close from 01:11:02 (6)

[Hard]

00:17:616 (x) - Add a note here?
00:29:88 (7) - Whistle here.
00:53:980 (x) - Add a note here?
01:00:11 (x) - Add a note here? I prefer without anything, but i put a note over here...
01:08:07 (11) - After this circle, maybe add a spinner?
01:30:34 (4) - Too close from 01:29:88 (3)
Thanks, fixed :O
Armin
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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
Prima di tutto di metto una stella perchè la meriti proprio! :) Grazie ;) ;)
Secondo, nella Hard ho visto qualche imperfezione. Io ti elenco le cose che secondo me andrebbero da riguardare, poi decidi tu se fixarle XD
00:17:843 Togli la New combo
00:19:434 Questo circle non è allineato con gli altri
00:20:570 Dovresti annullare la new combo
00:21:934 -00:23:315 In questo intervallo di tempo nei primi tre circle rossi segui la parte strumentale e nello slider la voce del cantante. questo può confondere il giocatore. Ti posso consigliare di correggere così:
In effetti...hai ragione :P
00:22:616 Se hai corretto come sopra, dovresti togliere la new combo
01:05:798: Allinea il circle (siamo all'ordine dei quadrettini della grid al lvl3, ma l'ho notato D:) Omg nn era facile da vedere xD
01:30:571: Quest'ultimo slider secondo me (ma non sono sicuro) dovrebbe finire nella parte dove hai messo il bookmark Si^^
Piccolo consiglio: questa mappa non è tanto difficile, a meno che puoi alzi un tantino la overall difficulty. Modifica poi la forma degli sliders. Nn so, vedrò, anke se credo k la lascerò così...

Grazie del mod e della stella, grazie :)
Card N'FoRcE
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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020
[quote="Card N'FoRcE"]- Normal:
00:20:11 (2) - errore di spacing (sposta a destra)
00:33:98 (1,2,3,4) - sposta l'intera combo un po' a destra (2 o 3 quadretti)
00:38:75 (1) - errore di spacing (allontana)
00:44:88 (3,4,5) - hanno uno spacing diverso dagli slider precedenti
01:15:11 (1) - fallo iniziare 1/2 dopo
01:21:25 (2) - meglio se messo completamente sotto lo slider
01:22:84 (1) - ti direi di farlo finire 1/8 dopo, ma non è il massimo per una normal, quindi ti suggerisco 3/8 prima

- Hard:
00:40:11 (7) - storto volontariamente? Si, è storto x variare un po' :D
01:30:34 (4,5) - nuova combo al 4 e centrali nella griglia

Una cosa grave e comune ad entrambe le diff è la carenza di suoni al ritornello.
Usa più "Whistle" e sembrerà già meglio.
Per ora niente stella visto che la carenza per me è grave e mi fa sentire la mappa vuota, ma appena hai risolto chiedimi di guardarla di nuovo =3 Allora mi impegnero' + negli hitsound che nella beatmap ora, grazie del e dei consigli ^^ :P

Aggiustato gli errori di spacing :)
Luxary
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Luxary
Sembra tutto ok, solo una cosa:

[Normal]
01:31:02 (2) - Troooppo corto D: Metti 20 di BPM e allungalo D:

Starred
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Zodiark1020
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Zodiark1020

Luxary wrote:

Sempra tutto ok, solo una cosa:

[Normal]
01:31:02 (2) - Troooppo corto D: Metti 20 di BPM e allungalo D: Oki grazie ^^

Starred

Grazie anke della stella :D :)
Lokamp
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Lokamp
Modding time!

Hard
[00:10:570] (3, 3, 3, 3) whistle here
[00:18:070] (3) clap here? I'm not sure...
[00:31:480] (4, 3, 3, 5) clap (or whistle) here
[01:28:070] (4, 3, 3) finish here

Well, this mode is REALLY well-organized! Star'd.
Zodiark1020
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Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Lokamp wrote:

Modding time!

Hard
[00:10:570] (3, 3, 3, 3) whistle here
[00:18:070] (3) clap here? I'm not sure... Not really useful, but...ok
[00:31:480] (4, 3, 3, 5) clap (or whistle) here I prefer whistle ;)
[01:28:070] (4, 3, 3) finish here

Well, this mode is REALLY well-organized! Star'd.
Thanks for hitsound-matter help :P
Armin
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Armin
Ciao ^_^
ho trovato un altro piccolo errore XD
vai in design e correggi l'offset del video.
analogamente con il timing , serve a determinare quando inizia effettivamente il video
posto uno screenshot. Devi modificare l'indicatore in alto a destra come nella figura per avere una giusta sincronia video-canzone. Per aiutarti puoi tranquillamente vedere i sottotitoli del video :P
Armin
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Armin
Fixed difficulty. :D

Download: ONOFF - Futatsu no Kodou to Akai Tsumi (Zodiark1020) [Armin's Normal].osu
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Armin's Normal]
00:20:11 (2) - Place a Finish hitsound on the end of the slider?
01:09:20 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why no hitsounds at all?

[Hard]
00:36:02 (7) - Finish hitsound at the end of slider?


The Note Layout and everything seems to be pretty good...
Mafiamaster
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Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 01:15:34 (1) - Shorten this 2 (1/4 ticks), so it lands on the white tick.

Armin's Normal~
  1. 00:59:88 (8) - This sounds better 2 (1/4) ticks forward. (01:00:11)
    Afterwards add a note at 00:59:88.
  2. 01:01:93 (1) - Suggestion: Remove note. Then lengthen spinner to where 1 was.
  3. 01:15:34 (1) - Same with Normal
  4. 01:23:52 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:23:75. Then shorten the end to where it was before.

Hard~
~JUST A SUGGESTION~
  1. 01:22:16 (1) - Start spinner at 01:23:75.
    Then add 5 (1/2) notes starting at 01:21:93. (Following the instrument)
Nice job.
Zodiark1020
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Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
  1. 01:15:34 (1) - Shorten this 2 (1/4 ticks), so it lands on the white tick.

Armin's Normal~
  1. 00:59:88 (8) - This sounds better 2 (1/4) ticks forward. (01:00:11)
    Afterwards add a note at 00:59:88.
  2. 01:01:93 (1) - Suggestion: Remove note. Then lengthen spinner to where 1 was.
  3. 01:15:34 (1) - Same with Normal hehe, now understood, well, did it! ~
  4. 01:23:52 (1) - Start this spinner at 01:23:75. Then shorten the end to where it was before.

Hard~
~JUST A SUGGESTION~
  1. 01:22:16 (1) - Start spinner at 01:23:75.
    Then add 5 (1/2) notes starting at 01:21:93. (Following the instrument)
I made i stream, but i dunno if it's ok

Nice job.
Thanks for star and mod. It has been really helpful! :)
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
I was planning to mod this earlier when you posted in #mod, but since someone else modded before I did, I am posting now.

Normal:
00:14:43 (3,4) - make parallel to 1,2
00:52:38 (5,6,7) - might want to make this similar to 2,3,4 (the placement of 4 relative to 3 is slightly different than the placement of 7 in respect to 6)

Armin's:
00:27:16 (2) - might want to change this slider so it points directly toward the center of 3,4
00:40:11 (4) - nazi post: move 1 notch right (3) to make 1,2,3,4 a staight line
00:47:16 (3) - off screen, please make sure it is fully on-screen
01:22:84 (1) - it is hard to read which direction this slider goes

Hard:
00:26:25 (6) - new combo to show the change of timing in the stack
00:40:11 (7) - align with 6?
00:52:84 (7) - new combo to show the change of timing in the stack
01:28:52 (1,2) - y is spacing between here different than the spacing between 01:27:38 (1,2)

Very nice beatmap. Star.
Larto
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Larto
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:10:79 (1) - Remove New combo
00:12:61 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:61 (7) - Add New Combo
00:17:84 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:25 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:70 (2) - Add New Combo
00:32:84 (6) - Add New Combo MAYBE
00:53:07 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too short? You can try to put a jump here, but this spinner doesn't feel right
00:55:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:57:16 (15) - Add New Combo
01:02:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:05:11 (9) - Add New Combo
01:05:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:08:07 (11,1) - I'd remove 11 and make 1 start where 11 is at the moment. Plays better.
01:12:84 (2) - Add New Combo MAYBE

Feel free to argue about the New Combos, especially the MAYBE ones.

Armin's Normal:
HPDrain is a bit high imho
01:08:29 (1) - Spinner is a bit too mean for a Normal

Normal:
Overall difficulty is a bit high imho
00:17:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:84 (11) - Add New Combo
00:21:25 (6) - Add New Combo
00:22:38 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:53:07 (1) - Make a bit longer maybe

Good map
Zodiark1020
160 posts
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Topic Starter
Zodiark1020

Larto wrote:

Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:10:79 (1) - Remove New combo
00:12:61 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:61 (7) - Add New Combo
00:17:84 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:25 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:70 (2) - Add New Combo
00:32:84 (6) - Add New Combo MAYBE
00:53:07 (1) - Isn't this spinner a bit too short? You can try to put a jump here, but this spinner doesn't feel right It came something like a jump ;) I'd like if you check it...
00:55:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:57:16 (15) - Add New Combo
01:02:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:05:11 (9) - Add New Combo
01:05:79 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:08:07 (11,1) - I'd remove 11 and make 1 start where 11 is at the moment. Plays better.
01:12:84 (2) - Add New Combo MAYBE

Feel free to argue about the New Combos, especially the MAYBE ones.

Armin's Normal:
HPDrain is a bit high imho increased by 1...
01:08:29 (1) - Spinner is a bit too mean for a Normal With nothing is better, yes

Normal:
Overall difficulty is a bit high imho increased this too
00:17:16 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:17:84 (11) - Add New Combo
00:21:25 (6) - Add New Combo
00:22:38 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:53:07 (1) - Make a bit longer maybe Yeh done :D

Good map


Thanks for star ^^
Larto
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Remod:
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:53:07 (1) - There's still this short spinner while you said you fixed it in your pots.
Zodiark1020
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Larto wrote:

Remod:
Overall:
- Add the custom hitcircle colours from Normal to Hard and Easy.

Hard:
00:53:07 (1) - There's still this short spinner while you said you fixed it in your pots.
Well, ok, fixed ;)
Larto
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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
01:07:84 (6) - bpm change is unintuitive
01:31:02 (2) - ^
00:23:75 (5) - hitsound this
00:56:48 (3) - finish
01:03:29 (6) - end with a finish



[Armin]
00:01:93 (7) - hitsound this
00:03:75 (1,5) - ^
00:13:98 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
00:48:98 (2) - start with a finish
youre overusing soft whistle a bit too


[Hard]
01:03:07 (1) - unintuitive bpm change
overusing soft whistle
01:30:57 (2) - unintuitive + needs hitvolume.


popped
Zodiark1020
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Fixed everything, you were right, I hope you like it now :P
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Lokamp
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3rd time to mode! I hope this will be useful...

Armin's Normal
[00:48:520] (1, 3) whistle the beat and the slider's end
[00:55:110] (3, 5, 7) start these sliders with claps or finish sounds (the 7th with a whistle)
[00:57:160] (1, 2) use finish on the beat (the sound, not the washing powder...); plus, start and end the slider with whistles
[01:09:200] From here until 01:12:730 try to follow my previous two hints (on 00:55:110 and 00:57:160)
[01:22:840] (1) in my humble opinion, an anti-clockwise circular slider isn't very intuitive, isn't it? Try to set another one clockwise...

Well, my work here is done, now it's up to you!
abalee
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timing: i personally think it could +5~+7ms at offset. and try BPM@ 131.97(not sure, sorry :( ) resnap all note if you accetp my timing ;)

Armin's normal:
00:13:29 (4,1,2,3) - spacing
00:15:11 (4,1) - spacing too ,but i thougt it's not a big problem
01:10:11 (4,5) - spacing
and i suggest to delete the useless timing setion in this difficulty.

i guess someone may post more that me :(
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Zodiark1020
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Alace wrote:

<Normal>
00:43:75 (2,3,4,5) - bad spacing
Watch out the Distance snap when you use 0.5X bpm or 2X bpm Did it ^^
IMO don`t use or use a few BPM change in normal diff(because it`s normal)

<Hard>
00:52:85 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - It`s not a really good jump patten uhm, yeh, fixed
00:52:85 (1,2) and 00:53:75 (3,4) are good point for jump (heavy beats in this song)
Thanks fixed :P
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GG! Awesome map :)
Zodiark1020
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fuffolo wrote:

GG! Awesome map :)
ThAnKs for star^^ :P
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It is more easy to show by a picture

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Doomsday
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Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing seems fine to me

[NORMAL]

there are some spacing inconsistencies in this diff. take a look through and you should notice them
other than that, seems fine

[ARMIN'S NORMAL]

00:00:12 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - the spacing between these are different than between the rest of the beats
01:09:68 (3,4,5,6,7) - ^

[HARD]

again, spacing inconsistencies. stuff like at 00:21.26, where the spacing between (1) and (2) is much smaller than the gap between (2) and (3). take a look through and fix these.

not a bad map. just little things to sort out
star'd
Takuma
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[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find.

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish.

Have a shiny star.
Zodiark1020
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Takuma wrote:

[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

[Normal]
01:22:86 (1) - I think you should end this two 1/4ths earlier and end it with a finish. yeh, sounds better :D

Have a shiny star.
Thx very much :P
Armin
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Zodiark1020 wrote:

Takuma wrote:

[Armin's Normal]
- You have some odd spacing changes here, I'm not too sure why.
00:02:62 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (6).
00:13:98 (1) - Please relocate this beat; it is too close to the previous (4).
I'm not going list all of them. Too too much. I suggest you go through the map yourself and re-distance snap everything. The majority of them shouldn't be too hard to find. I will ask him to do it...

I'm sorry Zodiark1020. I gave you a difficulty and you have changed many things, as your "suggestions". The spacing errors that Takuma report are caused by your fixes (distraction errors,I think ). So I won't mod (now) this map. :?

Gli errori di spacing non sono molti, ma se si correggono si deve cambiare circa il 30% della mappa. in questo momento non ho voglia di correggerlo, lo farò tra un po di tempo, ripristinando le mie vecchie cose :)
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Cyclone
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Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754.

Please remember to resnap all notes.

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!
Zodiark1020
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Cyclone wrote:

Cyclone's Timing Service report:

Service Date: July 11, 2009
Service Time: 12:54 AM (EDT)

1. Offset: 3,754ms BPM: 132.00
*Inherited sections omitted*

Based on my findings, the offset may need up to an additional 3-4 ms subtracted. Please use your judgment to determine what is best in the range of 3,750-3754. I think 3,752 is 'kay, or at least if there is a need of changin' it, i'll use 3,754 :P

Please remember to resnap all notes. Yeh :)

Thanks for choosing our timing service. Please come again!

Man, thank you very much, I really needed a good timing fix :P :D
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Alace
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Last request
plz kill 3 2 1 go in your diffs XD

EDIT:bubble bubble~
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Lokamp
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Finalmente, è rankata...
Congratulazioni Zodi! (Magari un giorno ci riuscirò anch'io...)
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