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BeautifulDay - V3

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wmfchris
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 26 June, 2010 at 0:33:04

Artist: BeautifulDay
Title: V3
Source: O2Jam
Tags: Beethoven Virus O2Jam Saturio al2e10 climbb65588
BPM: 160
Filesize: 2841kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. AL2e10 Hard (4.97 stars, 438 notes)
  2. Climbb's vivace (4.26 stars, 289 notes)
  3. CryStyle (4.97 stars, 493 notes)
  4. Easy (1.92 stars, 94 notes)
  5. Lento (3.5 stars, 198 notes)
  6. Taiko (4.78 stars, 775 notes)
Download: BeautifulDay - V3
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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A nice song seems remix again from Beethoven Virus, a well-known remix by Banya.

Lento - Easy
Climbb's vivace - Hard
CryStyle by Saturio (Thanks to my GF :D)
Taiko - A simple taiko difficulty comparing to RL's :P
AL2e10's hard - by al2e10
Easy - phqdtc

p.s. they're vocab. from classical music to express speed and mood
Lento -- very slow
Vivace -- lively

Changelog:

1/6/09 Background Recovered.
3/6/09 [Lento] made, [Andantino] remade, [Allegro] and [Vivace] sightly changed.
4/6/09 offset corrected, added [SaT Mix]
soft/normal fixed
26/6/09 Working on again after exam. Added Lento's sound and edited Sat Mix. Want to use another mix instead of Allegro because their difficulty is too similar.
7/7/09 [Andantino]'s sound added and some fixed in Allegro. (easier!)
12/7/09 BPM and offsets changed, thanks kioukiou :D
14/7/09 fixed the resnapping problem, thanks al2e10.
29/7/09 added a new difficulty from al2e10, and prepared to delete [Allegro]
12/8/09 Deleted [Allegro], will fix others later.
14/8/09 Difficulty name changed, req. by Saturio.
27/8/09 Sorry that I'm too slow Orz. Fixed something.
12/9/09 Added [Taiko], finished half.
30/9/09 Fixed and change difficulty by al2e10.
17/10/09 Sounded [vivace]. I think all is finished.
19/10/09 Re-mapped [Andantino], thanks SOGA.
8/11/09 fixed taiko.
29/11/09 Fixed all difficulties, thanks kirby! (fixing background...)
1/12/09 deleted Andantino since there're too many difficulties...
3/12/09 fixed according to modding, thanks Pasonia and AnGeIL!
29/12/09 Before the end of the year I'm here to update this again with some changes to al's hard and vivace.
2/1/10 Fixed according to abalee. Thanks!
3/1/10 Fixed the soundings of [Lento]. Thanks to Saturio!
5/1/10 Fixed some according to xierbaliti, thanks!
12/1/10 Added SB by quintitem :D
14/1/10 Fixed by beat4you.
5/2/10 Fixed partially by yaya!
19/2/10 Fixed by kirby!
4/3/10 Fixed by lepidopodus!
30/3/10 Rejected to be rank since H I I I I, ease Lento, thanks climbb65588 to remap vivace to be hard.
8/4/10 Added [easy] by phqdtc.
4/5/10 Fixed by Vikon and Al-azif =D
21/5/10 Fixed by abalee~
26/5/10 Fixed by Remmy~
12/6/10 Fixed by minyeob~
25/6/10 Fixed by osuplayer111~

(Enjoy :D)
Kitty McWittles
[All Difficulties]
At the very beginning make the volume start out low and gradually increase it to around 50%, which you should use for the rest of the map (Hard samplesets - not soft)
Also there isn't much variation, seems more like [Hard], [Slightly Harder] and [Still A Little Harder], really need to lose one of these for a true Easy/Normal

[Allgero]
Minor thing, it's Allegro*
I'm not sure how to say this but it just seems off in places... I averaged ~40ms late in test

[Vivace]
01:05:31 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14) - Either add a hitcircle between 1 and 2 or delete 8
Topic Starter
wmfchris
Thanks... But I want to to ask seomthing...
Is it offbeat just in [Allegro]* ?

p.s. I think I'll remake a more (normal) one for Andantino and a (easy)...
Maybe (easy) is called [Lento]... XD
Kitty McWittles
Well I'm not good enough to really play all the way through [Vivace], but the parts I didn't suck at seemed fine. Only timing problem I had was in [Allegro]... could just be me though ;x need a second opinion on that.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
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Saturio
offset: 875
And then change to "soft"
[Andantino]
00:27:103~00:27:666 - It is strange about this, change it to 4 circle, move '2' on the red spot add a circle on the white spot.
00:28:978 - move '7' to 00:28:884
00:30:384 - add a circle
00:30:665 - same
01:16:032 - do not need to change sound to "normal"
01:36:090 - wrong distance
[Allegro]
Wrong offset... I think this is the main problem here.
[Vivace]
Crazy map....
Wrong sound
Topic Starter
wmfchris
um....
00:27:103~00:27:666 - It is strange about this, change it to 4 circle, move '2' on the red spot add a circle on the white spot

as well as [Allegro]?
Dean
I can't offer much in the way of advice, except several spinners in [Allegro] and [Vivace] are probably too short to be ranked.
I thought it was pretty good, +star.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
thanks for star :D
yes...I'm going to edit Allegro and Vivace again after some works
Vivace is supposed to be removed (since too much complains on its difficulty orz)
and I may make 2 spinners into one... whatever
Saturio

wmfchris wrote:

thanks for star :D
yes...I'm going to edit Allegro and Vivace again after some works
Vivace is supposed to be removed (since too much complains on its difficulty orz)
and I may make 2 spinners into one... whatever
how about me?
no one talk about Crystyle T.T
Topic Starter
wmfchris
My suggestion @@
-maybe soft sound till the first break
-0:21:121 (1) not necessary...?
-0:53:927 maybe add one here...?
-2:09:475 (9) move 1/2 beat forward
-2:45:375 maybe add one here
Saturio

wmfchris wrote:

My suggestion @@
-maybe soft sound till the first break
-0:21:121 (1) not necessary...?
-0:53:927 maybe add one here...?
-2:09:475 (9) move 1/2 beat forward
-2:45:375 maybe add one here
fixed
Dean
I actually really liked SaT MiX and found no problems.
Topic Starter
wmfchris
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Saturio
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al2e10
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Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed.
dkey
star :)
al2e10
Mod again ^^

[Vivace]
00:12:110 (5) Don't put before the (4)slider
00:29:547 (13) new combo
00:35:547 (8) ^
00:45:860 (2) Don't put before the slider
01:27:110 (14) new combo
01:33:860 (9) ^also
01:50:735 (2,3,4) is disorder
01:52:235 (8) new combo

[Andantino]
00:12:110 (5) Don't put before the slider
01:45:860 (8) new combo
02:20:735 (7) new combo
02:28:610 (1) remove new combo
02:31:235 (5) new combo

[Lento]
Many roung note !!
You should be remake it ~~

I have remake my dif ~
Please check

Download: BeautifulDay - V3 (wmfchris) [AL2e10 Readom].osu
Furawa
:)
manna_old
I have played this map, it is nice
NatsumeRin
nice map~
[taiko]
00:27.297 (2) finish
00:27.391 (3) remove
00:39.860 (17) finish
00:40.610 (19) finish
00:41.360 (21) finish

and there's too many finish sound after 02:15 = =
Topic Starter
wmfchris

NatsumeRin wrote:

nice map~
[taiko]
00:27.297 (2) finish
00:27.391 (3) remove
00:39.860 (17) finish
00:40.610 (19) finish
00:41.360 (21) finish

and there's too many finish sound after 02:15 = =
fixed :D
sN0w_old
Nice map
Nickiestyer
I really enjoy the map and I really see nothing wrong. xD To my view though.

+star
Saturio
I will support you forever, Chris
Do not sad about ignorethis's V3 that was ranked.
Make your map to be ranked is the most importANT thing!!!YOU KNOW
ignorethis
encouragement~

btw you need to work on your hitsounds a bit
Starrodkirby86
*pant pant*

[Lento]:

Resnap all notes!

00:13:606 (2,3,4) - Perhaps move these a littler farther away from (5), or the other way around?
00:34:977 (8) - Suggestion~ Maybe angle this slider a little bit farther away from the (1)? If you don't like it, that's okay. ^^
00:45:475 (1,2,3,4) - This sort of spacing seems to be common. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing...it's technically wrong in spacing, but the time gap kind of makes it null. What do you think?

[Andantino]:

Looks snapped, but just in case, resnap? Haha, do what you want. It looks snapped to me.

00:49:985 (4) - Suggestion~ New combo?
01:00:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Awesome jumps here. But can you neaten it up a bit?

[AL2e10 Readom]:

What's a Readom? >:

00:11:360 (4) - New combo.
00:17:735 (4) - New combo. :3
00:34:985 (2) - This actually starts 1/4 earlier. Maybe you should adjust your slider stuff? oxo
00:37:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing here is a bit confusing...(5) makes an instant jump to (6) and then slows down to (7) in such an odd way.

The volume around the end seems too quiet for this kind of song. xP

[CryStyle]:

Nice!

[Vivace]:
00:16:047 (1) - This spinner is a bit too short. Auto only scores 1000. Can you extend it or kill it? oxo
00:21:386 (1) - Same as above.
01:48:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing is bad right here. >.<
01:51:391 (6,7,8) - Same as above.
02:12:485 (1,1) - Short Spinner problems...
02:31:299 (7) - Nazi: Move this a little more down to make it even spaced with (6) and (8).

[taiko]:

Capitalize "taiko"?

02:27:485 (10,11,12,13) - Up to you, but this might be a difficult area for players with the finishes and all.

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Add a background. ^^

Come back later. >A< *faints from work* <3
Topic Starter
wmfchris
thanks kirby!
I'll fixed all of them in tomorrow here. *sleepy* :D
Saturio
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al2e10
Nachy
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Topic Starter
wmfchris

Starrodkirby86 wrote:

*pant pant*

[Lento]: all fixed!

Resnap all notes!
00:13:606 (2,3,4) - Perhaps move these a littler farther away from (5), or the other way around?
00:34:977 (8) - Suggestion~ Maybe angle this slider a little bit farther away from the (1)? If you don't like it, that's okay. ^^
00:45:475 (1,2,3,4) - This sort of spacing seems to be common. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing...it's technically wrong in spacing, but the time gap kind of makes it null. What do you think?

[Andantino]: all fixed!

Looks snapped, but just in case, resnap? Haha, do what you want. It looks snapped to me.

00:49:985 (4) - Suggestion~ New combo?
01:00:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Awesome jumps here. But can you neaten it up a bit? (I tried to move that a bit, maybe you can have a look on the new arrangement again? *v*)

[AL2e10 Readom]: (updated al's fixed version!)

What's a Readom? >:

00:11:360 (4) - New combo.
00:17:735 (4) - New combo. :3
00:34:985 (2) - This actually starts 1/4 earlier. Maybe you should adjust your slider stuff? oxo
00:37:985 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - This spacing here is a bit confusing...(5) makes an instant jump to (6) and then slows down to (7) in such an odd way.

The volume around the end seems too quiet for this kind of song. xP

[CryStyle]: (Saturio is happy :D)

Nice!

[Vivace]:
00:16:047 (1) - This spinner is a bit too short. Auto only scores 1000. Can you extend it or kill it? oxo
00:21:386 (1) - Same as above.
01:48:838 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The spacing is bad right here. >.<
01:51:391 (6,7,8) - Same as above.
02:12:485 (1,1) - Short Spinner problems...
02:31:299 (7) - Nazi: Move this a little more down to make it even spaced with (6) and (8).

All fixed! I extended the first one, complie two spinner into one for 0:21; thanks and I've found another short spinner in 1:21 and I extended that.
sorry for 1:48 which I put (3) in wrong time...


[taiko]:

Capitalize "taiko"?

02:27:485 (10,11,12,13) - Up to you, but this might be a difficult area for players with the finishes and all.

Fixed!
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Add a background. ^^

(I forgot to use a full sumission, so...)

Come back later. >A< *faints from work* <3
Pasonia
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An-Don
Red ~ meaning the tiny grid is required and it doesnt really change playing at all.. just looks more tidy (isn't that Great X3)
Purple ~ Trying to be Specific
[Lento]~
00:14:036 (4) - Not Much of a Big problem but move this note down one tiny grid square so its in line with (2,3)
00:16:023 (7) - ^^ ~ Same with this one... (are they meant to be like that o.O?) a tiny grid square :3 to line up with (6)
00:24:011 (7) - ^^ (i guess cause it looks better XD)
00:30:048 (5,6) - Now with these notes, they would be better if you move them a tiny grid square down and another tiny square to the right.
01:08:036 (2) - One again, the bottom of the slider is a little off by one Tiny Grid Square >:3 move it tiny square to the left. only the bottom part of the slider
01:57:011 (3) - Move the note so it is in line with (2) and the line coming down from (1) in the center of the
note is in between notes (2,3)

Well... Thats really all i could find so over all its great :D Just a little messy :3
Star Given :3
Forretrio
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Topic Starter
wmfchris
fixed for mods from Pasonia and AnGeIL, thanks!


[quote]00:55:703 (8,9,10,11) - 很难看清楚 1/4 判断[/qoute]

去掉了(7)就ok了吧?
karta454515
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Saturio

karta454515 wrote:

我不會做map
但是這首歌真的很好聽^^


I will not make map, but this song really very pleasant to hear ^^


star!!~~~

加油吧...我的至愛小"楓"子xd!!努力!!
al2e10
By AL2e10's
Your [Vivace] is like many problem. Let me keep my best to help you !!

Just [Vivace]
Timing section :
On 00:00:860.
Put the Volume DOWN 4.

00:06:860 (1,5) Remvoe clap change to wistle.
00:09:110 (9) Wistle
00:10:235 (2, START) ^
00:10:985 (3) ^
00:14:360 (5) ^
00:18:485 (5, LAST) Finish
00:27:860 (7) New combo
00:31:610 (5-11) Spacing !!
00:31:891 (6) New combo
00:32:360 (8) Remove finish
00:33:110 (11) Finish
00:33:485 (1) Don't use many finish at the time !!
00:48:485 (9) New combo
00:59:360 (8) ^
01:00:860 (3) New combo
01:02:547 (1-6) Finish > None > Finish > None ...
01:06:110 (4-5) Finish
01:07:610 (11-12) Finish
01:08:360 (15) Finish
01:06:860 (8) New combo
01:08:922 (1) Remove new combo
01:17:360 (9) Finish
01:18:860 (5) Finish
01:20:360 (1) Finish
01:32:735 (6, Start) clap
01:33:110 (7) Remove & (8) remove finish ,Clap
01:37:610 (6) New combo
01:57:860 (7) New combo
02:02:360 (6) Finish
02:03:110 (9) New combo & Remove new comob
02:16:235 (10,11) Don't use 10 to colver 11.
02:24:485 (4) New combo
02:34:235 (8) New combo
02:35:360 (1) REmove new combo
02:36:297 (2) New comob
02:40:985 (1,1,1,) To many New combo !!
Saturio
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Saturio
Vivace must be higher over**** accuraccy
Topic Starter
wmfchris
but I think this voerall diff. is ok~
al2e10

wmfchris wrote:

but I think this voerall diff. is ok~
That is your think.
Not our think !!

And Give you my mod dif..
And yours ^^ ~

Download: BeautifulDay - V3 (wmfchris) [Vivace].osu

Download: BeautifulDay - V3 (wmfchris) [AL2e10 Hard].osu
abalee
设置preview time,在timing - set current position as preview那里,我建议是 26,922 ms

crystyle:
01:30:110 (5,1) - ,01:33:485 (4,1) - spacing.其实在这个OA的话改不改都行。

al2e10:
00:10:985 (3,1) - spacing.建议00:11:360 (1,2,3,4) - 整体向下移,00:10:985 (3) - 稍微再向上。
01:35:735 (2) - spacing.上移 5 grid 看起来好点。

lento:
01:27:860 (2) - 建议在音乐重音的地方才放clap...或者改成finish。

改不改都无所谓,之后请再找我,我推一推。
Saturio
[quote="abalee"]设置preview time,在timing - set current position as preview那里,我建议是 26,922 ms

crystyle:
01:30:110 (5,1) - ,01:33:485 (4,1) - spacing.其实在这个OA的话改不改都行。


All Fixed!!!!!!!!
al2e10
Topic Starter
wmfchris

abalee wrote:

设置preview time,在timing - set current position as preview那里,我建议是 26,922 ms

crystyle:
01:30:110 (5,1) - ,01:33:485 (4,1) - spacing.其实在这个OA的话改不改都行。

al2e10:
00:10:985 (3,1) - spacing.建议00:11:360 (1,2,3,4) - 整体向下移,00:10:985 (3) - 稍微再向上。
01:35:735 (2) - spacing.上移 5 grid 看起来好点。

lento:
01:27:860 (2) - 建议在音乐重音的地方才放clap...或者改成finish。

改不改都无所谓,之后请再找我,我推一推。

All fixed :D
abalee
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DeadAlready
star <3

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