[Easy]
00:02:487 (2) - clap sound is way too loud, either find a custom hitsound or lower the volume
00:05:584 (4) - ^
00:08:681 (2) - ^
00:08:681 (2,2) - this overlap is horribly messy, change the slider so that it is either completely clear of green 2 or ends exactly on top of it
00:10:035 (2) - changing the rhythm like this is going to throw off the new player. If you are going to introduce a different timelapse between notes, use a slider for the timelapse not one of the endpoints.
00:12:552 (1) - this pattern has been used to death now. Find a different pattern.
00:14:874 (2) - again with the claps
00:17:971 (4) - ^
00:21:068 (2) - this note is hidden. Move it completely out from underneath the slider.
00:21:842 (3) - in an Easy level map, the start of a slider should always be closer to the previous note than the end of the slider to avoid slider-end confusion, which is highly prevalent among Easy and even some Normal level players
00:25:713 (1) - claps again. You know the drill. Fix all of them from here on out.
00:38:294 (1) - soultion for the timelapse problem here - make this a slider that starts on the white tick and ends where it is currently placed.
00:40:423 (1,2) - make these perpendicular pls
00:48:939 (4) - a loop this small is going to confuse new players - make a different shape
00:52:423 - kiai time during break is generally a no-no. Either map the rest of the kiai or stop it where the break starts
01:03:648 (1) - this would flow a lot better if you placed it directly underneath the previous note rather than directly to the right of it
01:05:197 (1) - fix the loop in this and make it so that with the exception of the starting hitcircle it does not overlap with the previous slider
01:08:294 (1) - ^ for overlap
01:09:842 (1) - ^ and loop
01:11:390 (1) - ^
01:12:939 (1) - ^ just the bit at the end where it curls back around
01:14:487 (1) - move this farther away to indicate that it does not continue the 1/2 between notes pattern
01:24:358 (2) - as with 00:08:681
01:26:100 (3,1) - fix the overlap
01:35:390 (2,3) - as with 00:21:068 (2,3)
01:41:584 (1,2) - ok this is tortuously boring by now. too much copy pasta in this place
a little creativity goes a long way but try to make sure that your map is still readable by people who are still getting used to the idea that sliders make balls that move
[Normal]
00:04:423 (3,4) - fix the curve of 4 so that it blankets the following 1 and then use that to derive 3
a little note here - the difference between your spacing and your slider velocity is a bit startling, and you should consider increasing the spacing throughout the map (yes i know this is a ton of work)
00:16:423 (2,3) - blankets are pretty. Use them.
00:16:810 (3,4) - if you have a pair of these, use copy+paste+flip to ensure that they both have the same curvature. It looks better AND helps the player recognize a pattern to follow
00:23:390 (3) - might want to line this up directly underneath the end of 1 to look more natural
ok this is a Normal, you are allowed to do things other than 1 note every beat. Try throwing in a triple of hitcircles. Maybe 2 pairs that catch either side of your clap pattern. Something interesting.
00:40:423 (1,2,3,4) - dont change spacing mid-pattern. Either 2 is too close to 1,3 or 4 is too far away from 3.
00:52:810 - same kiai/break problem as Easy
01:02:874 (3,4) - the first two times you do this pattern you should probably use a slider to indicate the change of time lapse as with Easy. Also making a square that isn't quite a square is driving my OCD up the wall.
01:05:197 (1,2,3,4) - no seriously try to avoid such linear patterns they look really bad if its all equilateral except one note.
01:08:681 (2,3,4) - YES LIKE THIS EXACTLY THIS IS WONDERFUL (relatively). Just make sure it makes a perfect triangle ~.~
01:16:035 (3) - the placement of this note looks bad due to a combination of overlap, not flowing out of anything, and the difference in spacing and slider velocity
01:16:810 (4,2) - ugly overlap
01:19:132 (4) - see this one actually flows
01:22:229 (4) - unlike this one
01:25:326 (3) - overlap
01:42:358 (2,3) - ^
[Hard]
ok. this is going to sound harsh but.
I know you can map more than one pattern. Please do so. Playing the exact same 1.5 second clip repeated over and over in various positions for 30 seconds is not satisfying, it is boring as shit and makes me want to stab your map with a rusty fishhook.
Also the claps are still awful just fyi
And replacing them with overly loud softwhistles doesnt help either
This is Hard. You are allowed and in fact encouraged to use ticks that are not white ticks.
01:03:068 (4,5) - see this, this is beautiful compared to the rest of the map. Now if you could just make the spacing less clusterfucky I would be so happy!
01:12:939 (1,2,3,4) - huuuuuuuurgh clusterfuck
01:33:068 (2) - any particular reason this slider is shaped asymmetrically?
01:33:842 (3) -^
01:45:068 (1,2) - perpendicular pls
01:54:745 (2,3) - at this point just fuck spacing and stack the endpoints
02:38:100 (2,3,4) - this just looks weird
please try to add a bit more variety to your map...please.....