yurunneram wrote:

Haru :3 HELLO!

yurunneram's Modding

EASY

00:17:556 (4) - Stack not perfect → Fixed. like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1243051

00:26:173 (1) - Extend by half a beat → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1243222

00:52:024 (4,1) - this is so much nicer → Fixed.

NORMAL

00:56:174 (3) - Blanket nicer? → Fixed.

Can't mod hard :< or insane :<< gomen

Wheeeeeeeeeeee~

lazy mod, dun give kudos → doesn't matter. you check some problems. and i fixed this. decisively reason- you tried first mod this beatmap.

You have been modded out by Yurun Ceroia Neram~

jonathanlfj wrote:

so uhh the beatmap is corrupt for me when i tried to download it, i did some tweaking and was able to extract the files, but you might want to confirm if others are having the same issue

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

jonathanlfj's Modding

[General]
i think the osz corruption is due to a file called "__ - normal-hitclap2" (yes it has 2 extra underscores and the dash) in the osz, not sure where it came from but you probably want to check if you have that in your local map folder and delete it → okay! (it's copy files. it's my mistake. removed)
the timing at 01:05:110 is a bit off; add a red line at 01:05:145 and then restore the timing with another red line at 01:05:748. make sure to resnap everything! → nice. i don't know how thinking this fact

[Easy]
00:04:471 (2) - might want a finish on the end to catch the cymbal crash → Fixed.
00:26:173 (1) - sounds more fitting if you ended this at 00:27:290; also add a finish on the start here → fixed, but.. umm, it's too hard? well- i don't know. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259465
00:32:397 (2) - the rhythm difference here is somewhat hard to grasp for a newbie player; make this a slider ending at 00:32:876 instead → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259470
00:36:386 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.
01:00:003 - add a note here to cover for the vocals → Fixed.
01:02:876 (2) - use this rhythm instead, covers the down beat at 01:03:195: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259509

SPOILER

01:05:748 (1) - finish on start → Fixed.

[Normal]
00:04:312 (3,4,5,6) - could use some whistles here so it doesnt sound too blant; i would add it on 00:04:312 (3,6) → i missed. i'm already fixed this mod, but... umm where is my whistle sound?.. Fixed.
00:22:024 (2) - lower this a bit, would flow better with 00:21:387 (1,3) (e.g. x:228 y:164) → Fixed.
00:42:290 - this should be covered with something; you can add a note here or use a 1/2 slider and then delete 00:42:450 (3) → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259528 you find nice sound. Fixed. ah. but i think hard rhythm? umm..
01:02:876 (2) - use a 3-point slider here for a more natural curve → http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259532
01:09:418 (3,6) - you can add whistles here too → Fixed.

[Hard]
use HP6, fits the overall note density of this diff better → Fixed.
00:10:056 (2) - should have a finish on the start here to match the cymbal in the music → Fixed.
00:23:620 (1,2) - use a better blanket here will make it look a lot nicer → like this! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259559
00:33:354 - i would add a note here to catch the drum roll → change this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259581
00:42:290 (1) - NC here is not really necessary; if you want to keep this then move the next NC to start on 00:43:088 (2) instead → remove NC '1' note
00:45:003 (1,2) - this would fit the music better if you used a rhythm like this: → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259586

SPOILER

01:00:641 (8) - NC here since combo is quite long → Fixed.
01:05:110 (4) - uhh break this into 3 notes? would fit the drum pattern in the music nicely (or repeat slider or anything else that covers 01:05:269) → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259605 and changed some rhythm. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259632
01:09:737 (7) - clap with sliderslide? the clap is skipped over at 01:09:897 → umm. fixed sliderslide. (but it's bad sound?.. i don't know.)
01:15:163 (6) - i would add a NC here to emphasize the finishing pattern → fixed, and changed some axis http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259638

[Insane]
00:05:269 (6) - the stacking here is quite flow breaking; i would place this at somewhere like x:200 y:164 for a nice circular flow → Fixed.
00:10:056 (3) - finish on start → Fixed.
00:13:407 (8) - NC here, combo is way too long → Fixed.
00:25:216 (6,7) - try ctrl+g on this, would give a more interesting flow for playing → nice.
00:28:727 (1) - forgot clap on end → Fixed.
00:33:833 (5) - add a NC here, remove the one at 00:36:067 (1) and add one onto 00:36:386 (3); this way its neater and fits the music better → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259691
00:42:290 (5,1,2) - these 3 should be the same color since they belong to one jump → 00:42:450 (1) - remove NC
00:52:663 (11,12) - try moving these two like this, flows much better imo: → it's pretty

SPOILER

01:01:280 (3) - delete this note, because of the way you handled 00:50:907 (4,5) its really easy to think that the same rhythm applies here and miss-hit the note → hmmmm. make sure -change too hard this part? okay-
01:04:790 (5,6) - due to the timing change mentioned before you could change this to one 3/4 slider to avoid timing confusion → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1259785
01:12:135 (6,7,8,9) - this is easier to handle if you stacked 01:12:135 (6,7) together and 01:12:454 (8,9) together, leaving 01:12:773 (10) out of the stack → Fixed.

Well thats about it from me, let me know when you are done with fixing

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright quick recheck no kd

jonathanlfj's Modding

first of all you forgot to restore the timing at 01:05:748; add a red line there and resnap everything ALL CHECK!

[Easy]
00:26:173 (1) - since you didnt end this at the place i said, shorten it to 00:26:971 instead; fits the music much better imo → Fixed. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262412

[Normal]
00:17:876 (4,1,2) - aline them properly (move 00:18:513 (1) towards bottom left) → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262501
01:04:950 (3) - due to the timing change this slider end is unsnapped (and you can't fix it unless you hack the osu code); i would recommend you remove it entirely and have a 1/2 slider starting at 01:05:145 instead → Fixed.

[Hard]
01:09:897 - unsnapped green line, resnap this preperly once you get that new red timing in here → Fixed.

[Insane]
00:33:035 (3) - you can replace this with a triplet to get that drum roll in the music → like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1262461
00:51:227 (5) - stack on 00:50:110 (10)? → Fixed.
01:04:790 (5,1) - hmm i meant that you could stack 01:05:145 (1) after 01:04:790 (5), something like this: → good idea!

SPOILER

just make sure you have that red line added and the unsnapped stuff sorted out

jonathanlfj wrote:

alright everything looks fine on my end, good luck on your first rank!

Bubbled~

Zeroarg wrote:

go, this song needs a ranked mapset.

[Navy] wrote:

버블!축하드려요 ㅋㅋ

Zeroarg wrote:

It'll take ages until my version get ranked.

btw jonathanlfj, It's ok to have the (TV Size) in the title? I didn't found any official OST with TV Size version in it.

W h i t e wrote:

드디어! 축하드립니다 ㅎㅎ

Zero__wind wrote:

good job
the map is much better now
I still remember the time whe I modded this ;w;

toara_fict wrote:

GO GO GO~~!

Lou-kun wrote:

Easy Desu!~ o w o

00:01:599 Add Note? :3
00:02:876 ^
00:04:152 ^
00:06:067 ^
00:06:705 ^
Decrease Kiai time ( ~ o n o ) ~ → i don't know this sentence.

Insane Desu!~ o w o

00:20:269 since they are streams, Can chu please make them closer like this :3? → umm, but it's not pretty ;w;

00:48:993 D-doesn't match with the song ; n ; → umm. i know. (maybe you said change 1/2 slider) but not bad........ not bad.
00:55:056 Add note? :3 → pass. i heard some hitsound this part 00:55:056 / but vocal end at 00:54:897
01:15:801 distance note from the spinner? :3 → dosen't matter!

Hard Desu!~ o w o

01:15:801 Distance note from spinner? :33→ dosen't matter!

reyder wrote:

reyder's Modding

General

First problem happens right in the beginning: 00:00:482 (1,2,3) - These notes do not start on a long line, or a measure start, I don't know if this could mess up your map or not but it does seem it'd be best to start on a measure start, try to change it, I'm not a genious with offset but I'm sure you can figure this out, but I don't think it'd be completely bad for your map, if it seems to work well do this for all difficulties! → doesn't matter! it's nice offset(setting) also, i asked to BAT. (and some people.) it'll be alright.

Insane
00:06:705 (6,7) - These notes are sort of a bit weird, I suggest taking a look at them and maybe making a different pattern, since they could be a bit confusing. → understand. but maybe it's playable pattern (played this beatmap with some people. he(/she) said "ok")

There weren't really any flaws with this map, I thought it was very fun and amazingly good for your first map, kudos to you sir/ma'am (idk your gender)

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 왤캐 버블 맵에 모딩이 와요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

1. 이지에서는 뉴콤보를 왠만하면 일관성있게 넣으시는걸 추천드려요
2. 00:52:024 (4) - 이지에서는 다소 헷갈릴수있는 패턴인거 같은데요, 흐름에 맞게 이런으로 고치시는게 어떨까요?

1. 00:08:620 - 여기 슬라이더틱에 굳이 클랩 소리를 넣을 필요는 없어보여요 좀 이상하게 들리기도하네요
2. 01:04:153 (1,2) - 이건 진짜 운으로 찾은건데 ㅋㅋㅋ 1ms 언스냅이네요

1. 하드도 틱레2 추천드려요
2. 몇몇 힛사파트만 인세인 참고하셔서 고쳐주시면 될꺼같아요

1. 개인적으로 틱레이트 2가좀더 박자감있는거같아요
2. 00:08:301 (1) - 앞쪽에 클랩?
3. 00:09:259 (2) - 이건 지워주시는게 좋을거같구요
4. 00:24:897 (5,8) - 이 2개 슬라이더 "각각" 반대로 하면 플레이하기에 좀더 적합해질거같아요
5. 00:36:386 (3) - 제 생각엔 클랩이 슬라이더의 끝부분이아닌 리핏 애로우쪽에 들어가야 배경 드럼음하고 맞는거같아요
6. 00:37:184 (5) - 뒤쪽 클랩 지워주세요, 이유는 위와 같아요
7. 00:37:503 (6) - 일관성때문에 피니시 넣어주셔야할듯
8. 00:39:099 (4) - 이 노트같은 경우에는 이전 1번노트하고 스택시켜주시는게 좀더 플레이하기에 좋은거같아요
9. 00:57:769 (11,1) - 피니시 넣으실때 실수를하신건지 아니면 의도된건지는 잘 모르겠는데 그래도 1번 슬라이더에 피니시 넣는게 음악하고 더 잘 어울려요
10. 01:01:599 (4) - 여기 노트에 점프를 주는것보단 그냥 디스탠스를 지키시는게 어때요? 음악상 이 노트가 없다면 보컬이 강조되는느낌이라 좀 더 나은 느낌을 줄수있는데, 애석하게도 드럼 소리가 있어서 노트를 넣는건 좋은데 (물론 점프도 충분히 어울리긴 하지만) 1.0으로 배치하셨다면 그래도 좀더 노래와 어울렸을거라고 생각해요
11. 01:13:407 (1) - 여기는... 말로 설명하기가 좀 힘들어서 코드로 드릴께요 (힛사)
    
    SPOILER

    72,120,73407,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,204,73566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,56,73726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    220,72,73886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    276,236,74205,2,0,P|324:208|356:160,1,87.4999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,156,74524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,32,74844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,92,75003,1,0,0:0:0:0:

HelloSCV wrote:

1달 차기전에 다른 뱃이 모딩할줄 알았는데 ㅋㅋ 제가 운이 없었죠... orz 전부다 팅팅!

HelloSCV's Modding

[Easy]

1. 이지에서는 뉴콤보를 왠만하면 일관성있게 넣으시는걸 추천드려요 → 뉴콤보 세팅이 정말 정말 정말 정말 어렵네요. 수정 완료.
2. 00:52:024 (4) - 이지에서는 다소 헷갈릴수있는 패턴인거 같은데요, 흐름에 맞게 이런으로 고치시는게 어떨까요? → 헷갈릴수도 있군요. 그렇네요... 수정 완료. 그 뒤에 슬라이더&노트들도 위치들을 수정.

[Normal]

1. 00:08:620 - 여기 슬라이더틱에 굳이 클랩 소리를 넣을 필요는 없어보여요 좀 이상하게 들리기도하네요
2. 01:04:153 (1,2) - 이건 진짜 운으로 찾은건데 ㅋㅋㅋ 1ms 언스냅이네요 → 이런걸 어떻게 찾으시죠...????????

[Hard]

1. 하드도 틱레2 추천드려요 → 수정 완료.
2. 몇몇 힛사파트만 인세인 참고하셔서 고쳐주시면 될꺼같아요

[Insane]

1. 개인적으로 틱레이트 2가좀더 박자감있는거같아요 → 수정 완료.
2. 00:08:301 (1) - 앞쪽에 클랩?
3. 00:09:259 (2) - 이건 지워주시는게 좋을거같구요
4. 00:24:897 (5,8) - 이 2개 슬라이더 "각각" 반대로 하면 플레이하기에 좀더 적합해질거같아요 → 수정 완료.
5. 00:36:386 (3) - 제 생각엔 클랩이 슬라이더의 끝부분이아닌 리핏 애로우쪽에 들어가야 배경 드럼음하고 맞는거같아요
6. 00:37:184 (5) - 뒤쪽 클랩 지워주세요, 이유는 위와 같아요
7. 00:37:503 (6) - 일관성때문에 피니시 넣어주셔야할듯
8. 00:39:099 (4) - 이 노트같은 경우에는 이전 1번노트하고 스택시켜주시는게 좀더 플레이하기에 좋은거같아요 → 저 너무 변덕이 심한듯 ... 맨처음에 만들때 이렇게 만든걸로 기억하는데 보기에 이뻐서 바꾸고 지금 다시 고쳐보니 또 괜찮고.. 후. 아. 젠장.... 6번노트는 2번노트와 겹쳤습니다.
9. 00:57:769 (11,1) - 피니시 넣으실때 실수를하신건지 아니면 의도된건지는 잘 모르겠는데 그래도 1번 슬라이더에 피니시 넣는게 음악하고 더 잘 어울려요
10. 01:01:599 (4) - 여기 노트에 점프를 주는것보단 그냥 디스탠스를 지키시는게 어때요? 음악상 이 노트가 없다면 보컬이 강조되는느낌이라 좀 더 나은 느낌을 줄수있는데, 애석하게도 드럼 소리가 있어서 노트를 넣는건 좋은데 (물론 점프도 충분히 어울리긴 하지만) 1.0으로 배치하셨다면 그래도 좀더 노래와 어울렸을거라고 생각해요 → 원래는 6각형 모양으로 간격을 일정하게 찍었는데 이 맵에 점프가 후반에는 별로 없는점도 있고.... 이 패턴(짧지만)이 전 괜찮다고 생각해서.... 지금 현재가 좋은것 같아요.
11. 01:13:407 (1) - 여기는... 말로 설명하기가 좀 힘들어서 코드로 드릴께요 (힛사) → 퉁-퉁 거리는 소리에 맞춰서 clap을 넣으셨네요. 굳굳...
    
    SPOILER

    72,120,73407,5,8,0:0:0:0:
    92,204,73566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    132,56,73726,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    220,72,73886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    276,236,74205,2,0,P|324:208|356:160,1,87.4999952316285,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    260,156,74524,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    384,32,74844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
    320,92,75003,1,0,0:0:0:0:

이 모딩하고 이전에 모딩 받으신것도 전부 확인하시고 pm 보내주세요

잇츠 타임 투 랭크

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 왜 버블 팝 맵에 모딩이 와요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

NightNine wrote:

Hi, I like this song!
just a few suggestions:

NightNine's Modding

General
i prefer to use preview point at 00:42:450 or 00:52:663 → well... i don't think so.
Cb colors: (that's really doesn't mind, just my suggestion) → this color... too bright color.
[Colours]
Combo1 : 38,49,255
Combo2 : 255,255,255
Combo3 : 49,23,153
Combo4 : 204,31,0

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1349007 / http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1349008


Normal:
00:48:514 (3,4) - If try stack (4,5), i make more sense maybe http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347049 → i don't want change < 00:48:514 (3) > this slider's angle
Hard:
00:15:482 (3,4) - why not ctrl+G? → it will be alright.

Insane:
00:12:184-00:13:727 this part feels too crowd, maybe you should try to move some notes of them like 00:13:407 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347076 → ok-. but dosen't matter! it's ok

Good luck with this!

Sonnyc wrote:

Sonnyc wrote:

ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 왜 버블 팝 맵에 모딩이 와요 ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

jonathanlfj wrote:

checked the new hitsounds and stuff, seems good for me (thats a lot of green lines whoa)

Rebubbled~