Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Cast - Heavenly Lover (T · forum

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-06T13:13:16+00:00

Yasora wrote:
Hinsvar's Insane Lover plz
00:03:665 (1) - change whistle in beginning with custom whistle? Done.
00:05:165 (1) - add custom whisle in beginning too, more consistent ^
00:09:477 (6) - remove this circle seems more epic just end in 00:08:915 (5) - o3o Feels weird to suddenly have a 1/1 gap here orz
00:21:665 (1) - change whistle into soft? I think the bell sound just like in 00:20:540 (3) - Done.
01:02:540 (2) - I think using soft hitclap is weird.. use normal just like 00:59:540 (3) - ^
01:15:102 (2) - move 1 grid up so align with (1)? ^
01:28:040 (2) - add whistle The instrument doesn't indicate that it needs a whistle.
that's all~
cie hinsvar sama xinely xD Oh you~

Thanks for modding~

http://puu.sh/39AoU.osu

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-06T13:13:25+00:00

thanks mod ><

Updated:
Insane
Easy
and Xinely & Hinsvar

Last edited by P A N 2013-06-06T13:17:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-06T13:14:29+00:00

Yasora wrote:
0.0

Moe Hard Moeee >////< *slapped
00:03:290 (4) - whistle in here sounds more better instead in (1), follow the instrument in music okay
00:06:290 (4) - add whistle too in beginning added
00:15:665 (1) - I guess the flow more be better if no jump in here.. just blanket (2) -> http://puu.sh/39mj6.jpg nice :3
00:19:415 (3) - sorry nazi, move 1 grid down? nazi is great, fixed <3
00:26:915 (3) - remove whistle? make the rhythm duk-duk-tak lol lol fixed
00:49:977 (3) - add finish in beginning added since this is not update =3=
that's all~
cie hinsvar sama xinely xD ditunggu Rei sama Yasora xD

Thank you Yasora

nyan

osu file format v12

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10nya

2,746 posts

Joined February 2011

10nya 2013-06-07T07:01:19+00:00

hi all~
m4m here~

[General]

add to tags この中に１人、妹がいる！ and Studio Gokumi

[Easy]

00:09:290 (1,2)- : Swap NC? It'll make player easy to see next note (because of followpoint while playing).
00:45:290 (1,2)- : ^

[Betsu's Normal]

00:15:665 (1)- : didn't hear any finish here, so remove? and because previous also next similar note is not using finish
00:21:665 (1)- : ^
00:27:477 (1)- : ^
00:28:977 (2)- : for better symmetry, move last slider point 1grid to right
00:32:915 (5)- : for consistency, add whistle to slider head
00:41:165 (2)- : try this rhythm to follow vocal better?
00:51:477 (1)- : pretty sad because you ignored heavy finish at 00:51:665. so perhaps change the rhythm like this?
01:05:165 (7,1)- : Swap NC?

[Xinely's Hard]

00:02:165 (1)- : remove nc? to make player notice about 1/2 slider jump
00:03:665 (1)- : downbeat here, remove whistle?
00:05:727 (2)- : add whistle here to follow guitar
00:10:040 : make volume 50% here, cause this part is loud while 00:12:665 is so soft
00:34:790 (3,1,2) : to follow vocal here, try this rhythm?
00:39:477 (4)- : how about remove circle here and make slider (3) 00:39:196 length until 00:39:477 ?

[Insane]

00:10:790 (4)- : because slider 00:09:665 (1) is curved, how about make this slider curved too / copy paste slider 1 to here. like this perhaps?
SPOILER
00:32:540 (3)- : you can make 4 circle stream here tough to follow music~ like this perhaps?
SPOILER

[Hinsvar's Lover]

2.40 sv wtf damn stop killing player /runs
00:32:540 (1,2)- : same suggestion as Insane tough, you can make 4 circles stream here
00:44:915 (5)- : remove circle, music sound stopped at 00:44:727 and it start again at 00:45:102

good luck everyone ~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-07T07:13:48+00:00

- t e n n y a - wrote:
hi all~
m4m here~

[Xinely's Hard]
00:02:165 (1)- : remove nc? to make player notice about 1/2 slider jump stanza
00:03:665 (1)- : downbeat here, remove whistle? consistency, i always put whistle in downbeat if isn't use finish
00:05:727 (2)- : add whistle here to follow guitar added
00:10:040 : make volume 50% here, cause this part is loud while 00:12:665 is so soft nice, fixed
00:34:790 (3,1,2) : to follow vocal here, try this rhythm?
it's okay imo
00:39:477 (4)- : how about remove circle here and make slider (3) 00:39:196 length until 00:39:477 ? nope, but change but not like that hehe
good luck everyone ~

Thanks 4 mod beb <3

update

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
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TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar
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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-07T12:08:41+00:00

thanks tennya for modding

@xinely & hinsvar I add tags on your diff too :3 maybe update it
updated:
Easy
Insane
Hard
and Normal..

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-07T13:24:41+00:00

add to tags

lol what is this (on the Tags column)

- t e n n y a - wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lover]
2.40 sv wtf damn stop killing player /runs Wait for a 198 BPM 2 SV map! *runs*
00:32:540 (1,2)- : same suggestion as Insane tough, you can make 4 circles stream here ...Are you trying to make this diff crazier than before? Added anyway~
00:44:915 (5)- : remove circle, music sound stopped at 00:44:727 and it start again at 00:45:102 I'm following the subdued vocal here. That also explains why am I stacking that circle below the next one.
good luck everyone ~

Thanks for modding

http://puu.sh/3ajck.osu

HelloSCV

3,490 posts

Joined April 2011

HelloSCV 2013-06-07T15:35:21+00:00

as m4m

Easy

00:56:914 (1) - move this spinner to 00:56:727 - here?

Betsu's Normal

00:32:915 (5) - soft whistle on start
00:52:415 (3) - ^
01:05:165 (7) - NC, 01:05:540 (1) - delete NC

Xinely's Hard

00:07:977 (4) - finish
00:31:790 (1,2,3) - i think this anti-jump may cuase confusing to players they appeared suddenly and i don't think that part needs such that anti-jumps :/
00:57:477 (1) - finish on start
00:58:790 (5) - ruduce 1 repeat feels much better imo
01:12:477 (4) - NC for consistence
01:23:915 (3,1,2) - please use 0.5x DS since you used it before and it fits well with song
01:27:477 (3) - maybe NC

Insane

00:32:071 (4) - maybe need a note here
01:05:540 (9) - add NC ,01:05:727 (1) - delete NC
01:15:477 (3) - NC ( like 01:03:477 (1) - here )
01:23:165 (1) - finish on start

Hinsvar's Lover

00:07:977 (1) - it will be much better if you make this part like http://puu.sh/3alRp.jpg this
00:30:665 (1) - soft whistle on start
00:40:415 (3) - missed whistle?
01:15:477 (1,2) - reverse rhythm
01:18:477 (5,1) - ^

Good luck~ ( already got lots of mods lol )

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-08T03:05:01+00:00

HelloSCV wrote:
Hinsvar's Lover

00:07:977 (1) - it will be much better if you make this part like http://puu.sh/3alRp.jpg this Doesn't seem to have any difference. Heck, I'm sure enough the rhythm I have now is better.
00:30:665 (1) - soft whistle on start Okay.
00:40:415 (3) - missed whistle? ^
01:15:477 (1,2) - reverse rhythm I'm following how the stanza goes, and it feels weirder if they're reversed anyway...
01:18:477 (5,1) - ^ ^

Good luck~ ( already got lots of mods lol )

Thanks for the mod

http://puu.sh/3aLD8.osu

Also, Xinely fixed everything except the last thing on SCV's mod.

Xinely's diff

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Heavenly Lover (TV Size.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar add to tags この中に１人、妹がいる！ Studio Gokumi
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-08T06:43:43+00:00

At last, I can upload now! so
I update all diff because mod and fix the tags too.

orioncomet

osu! Alumni

2,684 posts

Joined May 2009

orioncomet 2013-06-13T14:47:28+00:00

What a big video flie lol no audio, 1:30mins and.. 15.5 MBs >.>

[Hinsvar's Lover]
- It's an okay diff, but I don't really like random solft whistle here and there... Some parts were like missing sound.
00:08:915 (5) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap?

[Insane]
00:08:071 (1) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it.
00:15:665 (1) - Hidden slider's tail ):
00:32:165 (4) - Suggestion, maybe move it a bit further from (3)? for a better spacing.
00:33:290 (8) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap?

[Easy]
- Clap on slider tick is a bit loud here, -5~10% on their volume sound better, imo.
00:09:290 (3) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it.

จริงๆก็ว่าจะบับให้อ่ะนะ แต่พลอยไม่ชอบดิพสุดท้ายเลย -*- กัสดิพอ่ะ

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-13T16:58:12+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
What a big video flie lol no audio, 1:30mins and.. 15.5 MBs >.>

[Insane]
00:08:071 (1) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it. remove
00:15:665 (1) - Hidden slider's tail ): change
00:32:165 (4) - Suggestion, maybe move it a bit further from (3)? for a better spacing. eh sorry, I make it to stack with the previous one
00:33:290 (8) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap? remove

[Easy]
- Clap on slider tick is a bit loud here, -5~10% on their volume sound better, imo. All change!
00:09:290 (3) - Clap is a bit off here, imo. maybe remove it. remove

จริงๆก็ว่าจะบับให้อ่ะนะ แต่พลอยไม่ชอบดิพสุดท้ายเลย -*- กัสดิพอ่ะ

thanks so much orioncomet >_<

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-14T12:03:47+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lover]
- It's an okay diff, but I don't really like random solft whistle here and there... Some parts were like missing sound. Can't be helped; I'm just trying to go with the instrument as close as possible.
00:08:915 (5) - Clap is a bit off here, maybe remove clap? Removed and made it a Soft whistle.

Thanks for the mod

Also, yeah, I'm sure enough the artists are wrong...

Takada Kyou is the one who composed and arranged the music, while Suzuki Hiroaki... idk.

The artists/performers are Ishihara Kaori, Sakura Ayane, Taketatsu Ayana, Oogame Asuka, and Hidaka Rin o.o

It's pretty damn long though lol

http://puu.sh/3fsxD.osu

P A N

2,346 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-15T11:02:07+00:00

argHHHHHH wHy I cant updateeeee :'(

yeah finally, I can update my beat map (at my school) gogo!

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-06-23T12:04:06+00:00

Call me back once fixed/denied.

[General and Metadata]

Inconsistency in Tags

[Betsu's Normal]

00:53:165 (1,2) - This is very confusing for a normal. Please consider making (2) blanket with (1)

[Xinely's Hard]

00:38:915 (2,3,4) - These would make for an awesome mini jump.

suggestion

[Insane]

00:32:540 (5) - Make these a stack of hit-circles maybe? the slider plays a little awkward.
00:32:915 (6) - Did you forget a whistle on the start of the slider?
00:35:915 (5) - ^
00:38:915 (5) - ^

00:44:915 - New Hit-circle at x:136 y:140 (with a whistle)? (its fits and is playable) :3

00:58:790 (5,6,7,8,1) - At the moment its really hard to see it coming, maybe try something along the lines of this ?

Suggestion

[Hinsvar's Lover]

Since your going for a very hard diff, while not up the challenge. CS 6?

00:03:665 (1,2) - This just looks ugly compared to the rest of the mapset.. Stack maybe?

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-23T12:13:29+00:00

nice idea Teara

Fixed

update

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Heavenly Lover (TV Size.).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar この中に１人、妹がいる！ Studio Gokumi
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
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P A N

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-06-23T12:30:21+00:00

Teara wrote:
Call me back once fixed/denied.

[General and Metadata]

Inconsistency in Tags

[Insane]

00:32:540 (5) - Make these a stack of hit-circles maybe? the slider plays a little awkward.
00:32:915 (6) - Did you forget a whistle on the start of the slider? I start the whistle after the 00:33:665 green line. so not change.
00:35:915 (5) - ^ fix with other way
00:38:915 (5) - ^ fix with other way

00:44:915 - New Hit-circle at x:136 y:140 (with a whistle)? (its fits and is playable) :3 sorry, I follow the strong beat so not change.

00:58:790 (5,6,7,8,1) - At the moment its really hard to see it coming, maybe try something along the lines of this ? I think its ok :/ and if i follow this it will ruin the next pattern imo.

Suggestion

thanks for modding :3

and about normal, I think its fine.

Hinsvar

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Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-23T12:37:25+00:00

Teara wrote:
[Hinsvar's Lover]

Since your going for a very hard diff, while not up the challenge. CS 6? Umm, I do want to make an extreme diff, but not something that everyone will tableflip and curse at. I'm aiming for a reasonably crazy and challenging one. CS5 is enough here; me setting CS6 will make this diff a trolling one. The design of the map is already suited with CS5 anyway; using CS6 won't end well.

00:03:665 (1,2) - This just looks ugly compared to the rest of the mapset.. Stack maybe? Sorry, but I can't see why this looks ugly. This one looks really neat for me.

Uh, well, I had to reject your suggestions because I don't think they will go well with how did I map my difficulty. Thanks for checking, though!

Teara

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Teara 2013-06-29T18:23:49+00:00

Sorry for the very late recheck.

Good Luck!

Oyatsu

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Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-06-30T06:46:24+00:00

Go! GO! P A N

orioncomet

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Joined May 2009

orioncomet 2013-06-30T07:32:35+00:00

Why there's no romanised artists name?

EDIT: mod

[Hinsvar's Lover]
00:20:540 (3) - Missing clap at the very end of slider repeat?

[Hard]
00:04:040 (2,3) - I don't really like this kind of slider in a "Hard" diff, it's like a hidden silder. http://puu.sh/3rF5v.jpg
00:27:665 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/3rF86.jpg
00:58:790 (5) - Hard to tell spacing on a "Hard" diff, imo. the spacing look very alike with 00:57:477 (1,2,3,4) when it's on different beat. I'd suggest you to change spacing of (2) (3) (4) to be a bit closer to each other.

[Betsu's Normal]
00:47:165 (3) - Missing clap at middle of slider?
00:49:977 (3) - Maybe make it like this for a better reading http://puu.sh/3rFj9.jpg and move 00:51:102 (5) - a bit so it won't be hidden under (3)'s. and also careful of spacing with the next note [00:51:477 (1)]
00:53:727 (2) - Fix slider a bit so it's more readable, like ^
01:09:477 (4) - Do you mind -5% volume on the slider tick here?
01:20:540 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Not going to add hitsounds?

[Easy]
-1 AR since SV is too slow.
00:28:790 - Suggestion maybe add a note here?

แรงค์ให้ไม่ได้อ่ะ Hard ดิพมันแบบโน๊ตมองยากเยอะ

Hinsvar

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Hinsvar 2013-06-30T08:29:52+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
Why there's no romanised artists name? I'm wondering about that too.

[Hinsvar's Lover]
00:20:540 (3) - Missing clap at the very end of slider repeat? Nope; I don't think this spot needs one. I'm following the instrument that sounds like... a ringing bell? So yeah, it's completely intentional.

Thanks for modding anyway

Oh, and, again, the artist is wrong orz

It should be "Ishihara Kaori, Sakura Ayane, Taketatsu Ayana, Oogame Asuka & Hidaka Rina". Takada Kyou is the one that handles the music composition and arrangement, while Suzuki Hiroaki... Huh?

I have to admit that the correct artists are long though... :\

Well, that's it I guess o.o

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-30T08:35:21+00:00

try to fix all , i hope i not wrong

osu file format v12

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TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
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Creator:P A N
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Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-07-06T03:59:33+00:00

P A N, Let upload again. Maybe The map is wrong, I can't dowload it

MacDonald2

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MacDonald2 2013-07-13T02:11:16+00:00

เมื่อไรจะได้เล่น 555

P A N

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P A N 2013-07-23T03:20:18+00:00

finally artist fix!!

Vicho

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Vicho 2013-07-23T03:29:45+00:00

Isn't better if you put as artist: "Nakaimo Cast" ? 0.0

P A N

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P A N 2013-07-23T04:50:34+00:00

Vicho wrote:
Isn't better if you put as artist: "Nakaimo Cast" ? 0.0

ok :3 change

Backstep

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Backstep 2013-07-29T12:47:27+00:00

เดี๋ยวก็แรงค์แล้ว -w-

P A N

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P A N 2013-08-04T00:04:48+00:00

Artist/tags fixed

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-08-04T00:12:57+00:00

Mapper has been waiting for a month, so I'm here to bubble this.
Rechecked and this should be good enough.

@orioncomet ผมว่า Hard ก็โอเคนะครับ = = แต่ว่าบางทีมันก็อ่านยากอยู่พวกลงเส้นฟ้าแต่คิดว่าคงไหว

Mythiax

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Mythiax 2013-08-04T01:58:56+00:00

go P A N! I'll eat you when ranked \:D/

Natsu

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Natsu 2013-08-04T02:13:55+00:00

go PAN I eat you in the morning /me hides

P A N

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P A N 2013-08-04T10:08:06+00:00

thanks all :O

Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-08-04T10:30:51+00:00

Wow! After a long time. Go! Go! PANDA~

P A N

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P A N 2013-08-04T14:25:55+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Wow! After a long time. Go! Go! PANDA~

ty ><

xHappy-

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xHappy- 2013-08-06T14:50:48+00:00

ขอให้โชคดีกับการ Rank map 2 นะครับ พี่ปัง ^^
Good Luck

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-14T05:35:52+00:00

It's been a while since this was bubbled

Can't do much about it though. I'll see if I can bug people about it

As a note, and don't change this until you get a BAT to look at this, so you don't lose your bubble, but could your remove the underscores from the tags? I know you want to link names together and all, but this can cause issues for people who may not put the artist name in correctly (ie. Typing "Ayana Taketatsu" instead of "Taketatsu Anaya"), or people who make things more convenient by typing just one part of the name (Which I commonly do).

I'll try bugging BATs about looking at this, since 10 days is a LONG time for a bubble to be left without any more mods

Also don't kudosu this unless you really want to

. Not sure if tags are worth giving 2 kds over :3.

P A N

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P A N 2013-08-14T12:59:51+00:00

CDFA wrote:
It's been a while since this was bubbled

Can't do much about it though. I'll see if I can bug people about it

As a note, and don't change this until you get a BAT to look at this, so you don't lose your bubble, but could your remove the underscores from the tags? I know you want to link names together and all, but this can cause issues for people who may not put the artist name in correctly (ie. Typing "Ayana Taketatsu" instead of "Taketatsu Anaya"), or people who make things more convenient by typing just one part of the name (Which I commonly do).

I'll try bugging BATs about looking at this, since 10 days is a LONG time for a bubble to be left without any more mods

Also don't kudosu this unless you really want to . Not sure if tags are worth giving 2 kds over :3.

ah ok, i will remove the underscore :3 ty

those

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those 2013-08-15T03:03:11+00:00

[General]

18.2mb for 90 seconds of music and video leaves me speechless.

[Insane]

00:39:290 - Um.
00:46:040 (1) - Starting here hitsound pattern gets wonky. Seeing how you used the same sample as the section before, you should continue to use this on beats 2 and 4 instead of 1 and 3 like you have now.
01:24:102 (3,4) - The current hitsounding totally gives away that you initially intended to reverse the current (3,4) but for some reason you reversed them (maybe to increase difficulty or something). It totally doesn't fit here. Just let it flow naturally.

[Hard]

00:33:665 (1) - Space this to 1.33x, since the slider velocity is 0.75x. This improves the transition since it maintains the distance spacing from before (75% of 1.33 is 1) while the slider velocity changes.
1. In fact, in this section I recommend you use 1.33x spacing as your main spacing. Just strategically use sliders when you want the certain phrasing to be played slower, and use circles to maintain consistent spacing.
00:34:790 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:602 (2,3,4,1,2) - The way these objects are just touching each other makes your mapping look very amateurish. It's a result due to the combination of the slider velocity and distance spacing that you've chosen. Refer to the italics above.

Just keep your fixes local if you want to keep your bubble status and wait for the ranking BAT member to have a look at what CDFA and I have written here.

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