Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Cast - Heavenly Lover (T · forum

Teara

osu! Alumni

814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2013-06-29T18:23:49+00:00

Sorry for the very late recheck.

Good Luck!

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-06-30T06:46:24+00:00

Go! GO! P A N

orioncomet

osu! Alumni

2,684 posts

Joined May 2009

orioncomet 2013-06-30T07:32:35+00:00

Why there's no romanised artists name?

EDIT: mod

[Hinsvar's Lover]
00:20:540 (3) - Missing clap at the very end of slider repeat?

[Hard]
00:04:040 (2,3) - I don't really like this kind of slider in a "Hard" diff, it's like a hidden silder. http://puu.sh/3rF5v.jpg
00:27:665 (1) - ^ http://puu.sh/3rF86.jpg
00:58:790 (5) - Hard to tell spacing on a "Hard" diff, imo. the spacing look very alike with 00:57:477 (1,2,3,4) when it's on different beat. I'd suggest you to change spacing of (2) (3) (4) to be a bit closer to each other.

[Betsu's Normal]
00:47:165 (3) - Missing clap at middle of slider?
00:49:977 (3) - Maybe make it like this for a better reading http://puu.sh/3rFj9.jpg and move 00:51:102 (5) - a bit so it won't be hidden under (3)'s. and also careful of spacing with the next note [00:51:477 (1)]
00:53:727 (2) - Fix slider a bit so it's more readable, like ^
01:09:477 (4) - Do you mind -5% volume on the slider tick here?
01:20:540 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Not going to add hitsounds?

[Easy]
-1 AR since SV is too slow.
00:28:790 - Suggestion maybe add a note here?

แรงค์ให้ไม่ได้อ่ะ Hard ดิพมันแบบโน๊ตมองยากเยอะ

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-06-30T08:29:52+00:00

orioncomet wrote:
Why there's no romanised artists name? I'm wondering about that too.

[Hinsvar's Lover]
00:20:540 (3) - Missing clap at the very end of slider repeat? Nope; I don't think this spot needs one. I'm following the instrument that sounds like... a ringing bell? So yeah, it's completely intentional.

Thanks for modding anyway

Oh, and, again, the artist is wrong orz

It should be "Ishihara Kaori, Sakura Ayane, Taketatsu Ayana, Oogame Asuka & Hidaka Rina". Takada Kyou is the one that handles the music composition and arrangement, while Suzuki Hiroaki... Huh?

I have to admit that the correct artists are long though... :\

Well, that's it I guess o.o

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2013-06-30T08:35:21+00:00

try to fix all , i hope i not wrong

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
ArtistUnicode:Takada Kyou, Suzuki Hiroaki
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar この中に１人、妹がいる！ Studio Gokumi p_a_n
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-07-06T03:59:33+00:00

P A N, Let upload again. Maybe The map is wrong, I can't dowload it

MacDonald2

8 posts

Joined June 2012

MacDonald2 2013-07-13T02:11:16+00:00

เมื่อไรจะได้เล่น 555

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-07-23T03:20:18+00:00

finally artist fix!!

Vicho

887 posts

Joined May 2009

Vicho 2013-07-23T03:29:45+00:00

Isn't better if you put as artist: "Nakaimo Cast" ? 0.0

P A N

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Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-07-23T04:50:34+00:00

Vicho wrote:
Isn't better if you put as artist: "Nakaimo Cast" ? 0.0

ok :3 change

Backstep

1,007 posts

Joined September 2009

Backstep 2013-07-29T12:47:27+00:00

เดี๋ยวก็แรงค์แล้ว -w-

P A N

2,349 posts

Joined December 2011

Topic Starter

P A N 2013-08-04T00:04:48+00:00

Artist/tags fixed

Frostmourne

osu! Alumni

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Joined November 2009

Frostmourne 2013-08-04T00:12:57+00:00

Mapper has been waiting for a month, so I'm here to bubble this.
Rechecked and this should be good enough.

@orioncomet ผมว่า Hard ก็โอเคนะครับ = = แต่ว่าบางทีมันก็อ่านยากอยู่พวกลงเส้นฟ้าแต่คิดว่าคงไหว

Mythiax

637 posts

Joined August 2012

Mythiax 2013-08-04T01:58:56+00:00

go P A N! I'll eat you when ranked \:D/

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2013-08-04T02:13:55+00:00

go PAN I eat you in the morning /me hides

P A N

2,349 posts

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-08-04T10:08:06+00:00

thanks all :O

Oyatsu

1,909 posts

Joined December 2012

Oyatsu 2013-08-04T10:30:51+00:00

Wow! After a long time. Go! Go! PANDA~

P A N

2,349 posts

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-08-04T14:25:55+00:00

Oyatsu wrote:
Wow! After a long time. Go! Go! PANDA~

ty ><

xHappy-

443 posts

Joined May 2012

xHappy- 2013-08-06T14:50:48+00:00

ขอให้โชคดีกับการ Rank map 2 นะครับ พี่ปัง ^^
Good Luck

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2013-08-14T05:35:52+00:00

It's been a while since this was bubbled

Can't do much about it though. I'll see if I can bug people about it

As a note, and don't change this until you get a BAT to look at this, so you don't lose your bubble, but could your remove the underscores from the tags? I know you want to link names together and all, but this can cause issues for people who may not put the artist name in correctly (ie. Typing "Ayana Taketatsu" instead of "Taketatsu Anaya"), or people who make things more convenient by typing just one part of the name (Which I commonly do).

I'll try bugging BATs about looking at this, since 10 days is a LONG time for a bubble to be left without any more mods

Also don't kudosu this unless you really want to

. Not sure if tags are worth giving 2 kds over :3.

P A N

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-08-14T12:59:51+00:00

CDFA wrote:
It's been a while since this was bubbled

Can't do much about it though. I'll see if I can bug people about it

As a note, and don't change this until you get a BAT to look at this, so you don't lose your bubble, but could your remove the underscores from the tags? I know you want to link names together and all, but this can cause issues for people who may not put the artist name in correctly (ie. Typing "Ayana Taketatsu" instead of "Taketatsu Anaya"), or people who make things more convenient by typing just one part of the name (Which I commonly do).

I'll try bugging BATs about looking at this, since 10 days is a LONG time for a bubble to be left without any more mods

Also don't kudosu this unless you really want to . Not sure if tags are worth giving 2 kds over :3.

ah ok, i will remove the underscore :3 ty

those

3,136 posts

Joined November 2010

those 2013-08-15T03:03:11+00:00

[General]

18.2mb for 90 seconds of music and video leaves me speechless.

[Insane]

00:39:290 - Um.
00:46:040 (1) - Starting here hitsound pattern gets wonky. Seeing how you used the same sample as the section before, you should continue to use this on beats 2 and 4 instead of 1 and 3 like you have now.
01:24:102 (3,4) - The current hitsounding totally gives away that you initially intended to reverse the current (3,4) but for some reason you reversed them (maybe to increase difficulty or something). It totally doesn't fit here. Just let it flow naturally.

[Hard]

00:33:665 (1) - Space this to 1.33x, since the slider velocity is 0.75x. This improves the transition since it maintains the distance spacing from before (75% of 1.33 is 1) while the slider velocity changes.
1. In fact, in this section I recommend you use 1.33x spacing as your main spacing. Just strategically use sliders when you want the certain phrasing to be played slower, and use circles to maintain consistent spacing.
00:34:790 (3,1,2,3,4,5) - 00:52:602 (2,3,4,1,2) - The way these objects are just touching each other makes your mapping look very amateurish. It's a result due to the combination of the slider velocity and distance spacing that you've chosen. Refer to the italics above.

Just keep your fixes local if you want to keep your bubble status and wait for the ranking BAT member to have a look at what CDFA and I have written here.

P A N

2,349 posts

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Topic Starter

P A N 2013-08-15T04:36:45+00:00

thanks those, i have fix it all in local and CDFA suggestion

Hinsvar

osu! Alumni

3,789 posts

Joined December 2011

Hinsvar 2013-08-15T13:31:35+00:00

Hi there.

Xinely asked me to take care of her diff, so uh.

Did a lot of things on the slowdown part. Should look fabulous now (hopefully).

Hard!

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 59106
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.33
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

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TitleUnicode:Heavenly Lover (TV Size)
Artist:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Cast
ArtistUnicode:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru! Cast
Creator:P A N
Version:Xinely's Hard
Source:Kono Naka ni Hitori, Imouto ga Iru!
Tags:ending betsuto xinely hinsvar この中に１人、妹がいる！ Studio Gokumi p_a_n Ishihara_Kaori Sakura_Ayane Taketatsu_Ayana Oogame_Asuka  Hidaka_Rina
BeatmapID:252918
BeatmapSetID:93554

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:2

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P A N

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P A N 2013-08-17T05:38:01+00:00

updated

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2013-08-21T06:27:58+00:00

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Oyatsu

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Oyatsu 2013-08-21T10:57:11+00:00

Re-go go!

Breeze

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Breeze 2013-08-23T09:38:55+00:00

[General]

Maybe you should use "この中に1人、妹がいる! Cast" as artist but not just romanised

[Insane]

I feel AR8 fit this diff. better

Only this, let me know how you think about it

P A N

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P A N 2013-08-23T11:48:43+00:00

Breeze wrote:
[General]
Maybe you should use "この中に1人、妹がいる! Cast" as artist but not just romanised
[Insane]
I feel AR8 fit this diff. better
Only this, let me know how you think about it

all fixed, thanks Breeze :3