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Demetori - Mysterious Mountain

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lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, August 03, 2009 at 11:53:26 PM

Artist: Demetori
Title: The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain
Tags: Aya touhou
BPM: 185
Filesize: 8820kb
Play Time: 04:38
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.82 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Insane (5 stars, 691 notes)
  3. Normal (4.53 stars, 252 notes)
Download: Demetori - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Osu needs some demetori!

lihokwan's difficulty dropped at BATs request, check thread for .osu
Last edited by lukewarmholiday , edited 19 times in total.
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Dangaard
osu! Alumni
1,232 posts
Joined July 2008
Dangaard
Wow, I love this!!!

I found this map by accident, now I ended up with Demetori albums on my HDD. Thank you for this. :)
Also I think the map really suits the song well. It's great to play osu to this music, too bad there are no other Demetori maps, seems hard to map ( at least I think so, I will eventually map some songs if I'm a bit more skilled).

I guess you aim for approval with this score.
A big star for you!
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
Looks like I need to finish.

Demetori has plenty of mappable songs, some harder than others but still.

I fixed the score btw.
Drycona
17 posts
Joined September 2008
Drycona
Good map!

The only thing I can really complain about is the kai timing in normal but since that really isn't in your control I am not holding it against you.

Starred
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Awesome awesome map. I love the rush on Insane, it's just as fast as Aya herself!
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
General
MP3 needs trimming. It's 11MB which is over the 10MB suggestion.

Hard
Feels kinda slow with the slow approach speed.

00:48:84 (1,2,3) - I would spread these out (and those like it, without the 'slider hug') like 00:44:79 (1,2,3).
00:56:14 (5) - Sounds better with a Finish end.
01:11:22 (4,1,2) - Align ends.
01:27:27 (9) - Move at an angle like 01:26:14 (6,7), etc.
01:37:65 (7) - (But keep this like this.)
01:42:35 (5,6,7,8) - Align (yes, difficult).
01:43:65 (9) - New combo.
02:05:71 (1) - Part from here is pretty much everything from the start of the song, flipped. Add some more variations.
03:19:49 (2) - Would sound better starting 1/2 earlier. End at the same place.
03:25:65 (1) - Move to the right? Looks kinda weird right above (2) like that.
03:27:60 (8,9,10,11) - Move left; similar situation with (8) and (7).
04:02:79 (2,3) - New combos?
04:10:08 (4,5) - Was curve intentional?
04:20:46 (4,5) - Same.
04:36:19 (1,2,3) - Align.
04:38:14 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps please.

Insane
Moar hitsounds in some places, please.
One more break please?
Maybe lower HP drain rate?

Skipping to the middle...
03:01:98 (1) - IMO too scrunched.
03:18:19 (1,1) - These feel too early.
03:23:06 (4) - End with Finish.
03:24:52 (1,2) - Kinda empty...
03:28:57 (4) - Finish.
03:35:46 (2,3) - Replace under (1).
03:36:35 (1) - Repeat, maybe? I think it's suitable. Sounds good with Finish on both ends.
04:01:81 (3) - Note here with Finish.
04:02:79 (4,5) - New combos?
04:18:60 (3,4) - Replace under (2).
04:31:00 (11) - New combo.
04:38:63 (4) - Finish. Maybe more hitsounds for this combo.
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Quick mod

Normal:
00:45:27 (2) - make this have the same general position to1 as the the previous combo
01:19:49 (1) - align with 2
(apply breaks to both halves)
03:54:84() - get rid of this break

Hard:
01:11:22 (4) - have this end on top of the start of 1
01:13:81 (2) - " "
01:26:63 (7) - make this have the same general position to 6 as 4 has to 3
make said mods to the repeated section too
04:37:17 (4) - make parallel to 1,2,3

Insane:
01:18:03 (3) - make this a horizontal reflection of 2
01:26:63 (5) - make this have the same general position to 4 as 3 has to 2
01:37:00 (5) - " "
02:33:92 (3) - make this a vertical reflection of 1
02:46:25 (3) - make this a horizontal reflection of 2
04:20:30 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing

I get a little bored from the copying and pasting. Also, you might want to go through the map and nazi it because I found a few small errors in my quick pass. Star.
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday

strager wrote:

General
MP3 needs trimming. It's 11MB which is over the 10MB suggestion.

Hard
Feels kinda slow with the slow approach speed.

00:48:84 (1,2,3) - I would spread these out (and those like it, without the 'slider hug') like 00:44:79 (1,2,3).k
00:56:14 (5) - Sounds better with a Finish end. k
01:11:22 (4,1,2) - Align ends. k
01:27:27 (9) - Move at an angle like 01:26:14 (6,7), etc. k
01:37:65 (7) - (But keep this like this.) k
01:42:35 (5,6,7,8) - Align (yes, difficult). e z
01:43:65 (9) - New combo. k
02:05:71 (1) - Part from here is pretty much everything from the start of the song, flipped. Add some more variations. but im lazy, I may go back and change some stuff around
03:19:49 (2) - Would sound better starting 1/2 earlier. End at the same place. k
03:25:65 (1) - Move to the right? Looks kinda weird right above (2) like that. k
03:27:60 (8,9,10,11) - Move left; similar situation with (8) and (7). k
04:02:79 (2,3) - New combos? k
04:10:08 (4,5) - Was curve intentional? I guess
04:20:46 (4,5) - Same. same
04:36:19 (1,2,3) - Align. k
04:38:14 (1,2,3,4) - Jumps please. ehh

Insane
Moar hitsounds in some places, please.
One more break please?
Maybe lower HP drain rate?

Skipping to the middle...
03:01:98 (1) - IMO too scrunched. Done
03:18:19 (1,1) - These feel too early. suggest alternative because I fiddled with em and they don't sound all that great
03:23:06 (4) - End with Finish. k
03:24:52 (1,2) - Kinda empty...moar notes the better
03:28:57 (4) - Finish. k
03:35:46 (2,3) - Replace under (1). fixed
03:36:35 (1) - Repeat, maybe? I think it's suitable. Sounds good with Finish on both ends. wha?
04:01:81 (3) - Note here with Finish. I dont like how that sounded, added a drumroll stack
04:02:79 (4,5) - New combos? k
04:18:60 (3,4) - Replace under (2). k
04:31:00 (11) - New combo. k
04:38:63 (4) - Finish. Maybe more hitsounds for this combo.k
whymeman
osu! Alumni
3,432 posts
Joined November 2008
whymeman
Some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Side Note: The map starts at 00:37:53, which is quite a while of waiting (sure you can use the skip button but still...). Just a thought, but if you are able to add some notes maybe at least 8 seconds earlier into the map if its possible.

[Normal] (Done)

Clear so far.... but some of the shapes and patterns are too similar in this map.

[Hard] (Done)

03:52:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Linked or unlinked?

Some of the shapes and patterns are too similar in this map as well. Maybe flipping it would help?

[Insane] (Done)

04:36:23 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Almost couldn't see all the notes in this stack as if the color(s) blended it suddenly. Maybe its just me...

Sticky Note: Well made map as far as I see. Though the large time gap at the start could be reduced a bit if possiable and some of the repeated patterns in Normal and Hard could be reshaped or just flip the sections with it. I'll star this map though.

(more to check...)
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Zatoichi
553 posts
Joined September 2008
Zatoichi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
James
osu! Hall of Famer
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Joined January 2008
James
random star :)
Zatoichi
553 posts
Joined September 2008
Zatoichi
enoyreve ollah

yaw eht yb, eman dab yllaer a si "lamrotaz"

Download: Demetori - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain (lukewarmholiday) [Lamrotaz].osu
lukewarmholiday
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Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
>no combo colors

quit trying to shit up my maps
Mukku
1,434 posts
Joined February 2009
Mukku
Being so awesome map, it was introduced to me by Heintsi.
Awesome
heintsi
1,126 posts
Joined January 2009
heintsi
Nothing wrong (word coming from amateur's mouth tho),
Awesome song, osu needs more touhou metal remixes, crow's claw maybe? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3oMtcygvQqY&fmt=18
have a star ^^
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
I remapped parts of normal because people cant stand one puny repeat because osu! community is BABIES
PandaCath
89 posts
Joined April 2009
PandaCath
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
lukewarmholiday
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Joined June 2008
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lukewarmholiday

PandaCath wrote:

I have issues with how closely spaced [Normal]'s notes are, because it gave me a hard time trying to judge when to hit beats.
Otherwise this map is pretty good. Starrrred.
After I finished mapping it I did too, I don't feel like remapping that though I just will make note of that for future maps.
KeePsTaY
494 posts
Joined February 2009
KeePsTaY
So nice song, and so interesting beatmap, i love it :)
Zatoichi
553 posts
Joined September 2008
Zatoichi

lukewarmholiday wrote:

quit trying to shit up my maps
My apologies.
RemmyX25
osu! Alumni
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RemmyX25
Normal:
01:20:19 (1,2) - Hate to be nazi but this just looks misaligned.
03:05:43 (6) - This is a slider. It is supposed to be either a hitcircle, or be longer to actually resemble a slider.
Also, just a suggestion - up the slider tick rate to 1

Hard:
03:13:05 (2,1) - Eh... im not really sure about this. it seems that the spinner is too close to the hitcircle, but there are a few options. 1) take out the hitcircle, and start the spinner there instead. 2) move the spinner to start on the white tick. 3) leave it and hope other bats don't mention it as well.
03:13:05 (2,1) - ^
Also suggesting the tick rate to go up

Insane:
04:30:24 (7) - Looks badly aligned

16.8mil final score (Thanks to Auto). I don't think it can be ranked like this, but there is an easy solution. The map feels too long, so cut it somewhere.
lukewarmholiday
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lukewarmholiday
16.8mil final score (Thanks to Auto). I don't think it can be ranked like this, but there is an easy solution. The map feels too long, so cut it somewhere.
No.

Knocked it down to 14.7m

Considering border of death is like 11m, and this is clearly harder, I think 3 mil more isn't that bad.
RemmyX25
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RemmyX25
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
foulcoon
osu! Alumni
1,384 posts
Joined July 2008
foulcoon
Jesus christ when I play with current offset i get horrible accuracy.
Seems like I do best with 1,570 but I still bad acc.

Also stacking is disabled and it looks like balls. Please turn stacking up.

[Normal]
Not much to say here, other than its a big clusterfucky mess. Nothing wrong with it really I guess.

[Hard]
01:30:27 (2) - obstructed by cleared spinner..
02:58:48 (2) - same deal ^
actually you do this like 2 more times, but its lower on the grid so its not blocked so much. do what you will with it


[Insane]
02:32:70 (1) - bad placement imo
04:16:16 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - you should probably curve this around the disappearing slider so its readable

have a star because its fun
lihokwan
33 posts
Joined August 2008
lihokwan
luke:My difficulty has finished.You can tell me if you find any problem.
I think 4:38 may be too long,so I just make it to 3:12.
I hate kiai mode,so I don't use it.You can add it into my difficulty if you like :)

Download: Demetori - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain (lukewarmholiday) [lihokwan's Insane].osu
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
Alright, just got back so I'll go look at your difficulty today.
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Normal
01:07:38 (1,1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand which is that 1 slider.
01:11:27 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
02:35:59 (1,1) - Same deal as 01:07:38 (1,1)
02:39:48 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
02:50:35 (1) - Make this part of the next combo please.

Hard
No issues

Insane
Fine to me.

starred' for lack of errors and for Aya...
lihokwan
33 posts
Joined August 2008
lihokwan
Please upload this one,I fixed some problem

Download: Demetori - The Youkai Mountain ~ Mysterious Mountain (lukewarmholiday) [lihokwan's Insane].osu
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[Normal]
01:07:70 (1) - Remove New Combo
Yeah you could remove some new combos...
01:20:19 (1) - Like here...
01:21:16 (1) - and here
01:22:13 (1) - here
01:22:78 (1) - here too
Try to make them at least over 4
Maybe use some custom hitsounds from SFG's newly implemented custom hitsound library that I suddenly felt like advertising...
Mostly new combos that are the problem

[Hard]
You seem to use finishes a bit much...take some out?
Try placing finishes on every other beat or something instead?
01:22:29 (7) - Like here for example
03:18:24 (1,2) - These sliders feel a bit weird...probably the timing and length or something
03:24:57 (1) - Remove new combo
lukewarmholiday
2,148 posts
Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
The sliders in Hard are timed just like the ones in insane. maybe its the fact its after a spinner and the beginning falls on a half beat.
Eviltwin
6 posts
Joined September 2008
Eviltwin
There needs to be an easier mode than normal mode for newbies that can't finish normal mode.
Also as just a suggestion (you don't have to do this) extend the beatmap so that players also get to play the guitar opening from 0:10:333 onwards.
Good work on the beat map so far.
Looking forward to play this as a ranked map
lukewarmholiday
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Joined June 2008
Topic Starter
lukewarmholiday
Someone else can feel free to make a simple easy mode, I'm too busy on some other maps atm so it would be a while before I cranked an easy out.
tieff
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tieff
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