Hi :3/ here is your M4M
o3o -> must be fixed
o3o -> normal things
o3o -> comments/suggestions
[General]
o3o -> must be fixed
o3o -> normal things
o3o -> comments/suggestions
[General]
- hackSL diff have a different offset,keep it same in all diffs owo don't forget to resnap all later
- 00:38:915 (1,2) - the spacing is wrong here
- 00:57:990 (5,6) - consider to replace this 2 circles with a slider since from seeing the diff is really easy so this is somehow called ''hard''
- 01:06:661 - consider to start a spinner here
- 01:19:146 (2,3,1,2) - what about to doing it like this:
- 01:22:268 (3,1,2) - what about to doing this pattern like:
- 01:23:656 (2,1) - what about to doing a better blanket here?
- 01:38:915 (2,3,4) - don't like really much the flow here, what about to do it:
- 01:42:383 (5,1,2) - and after something like: / because personally i don't like how you placed the circles:
- 01:45:158 (4,1) - what about doing a blanket here?
- 01:53:828 (2) - what about to place it like:
- 02:07:701 (2) - i know you can do a better blanket for the prev circle and second thing about 02:07:701 (2,1) - the spacing is wrong
- 02:15:158 (5) - a little overlap with 02:13:077 (3) - but is not a big problem imo
- 02:29:551 (1,2) - i think a slider here is better
- 02:34:753 (3) - place it like:
- 02:38:916 - place a NC here since it follows a spinner o3o
- 00:12:210 (3) - what about to place it like this to improve the flow:
- 00:27:470 (1,2) - i think is will be better if you do a blanket here
- overall in the diff are many parts where the flow is missing like: 00:51:054 (3,4) - i dunno what to suggest how tofix it but i think you should relook the diff and make so,that somehow all notes follow a line,because atm is not really so :/
- 00:55:563 (2) - stack it with the slider
- same suggestion as easy to place a spinner here: 01:06:661 -
- 01:41:690 (5,1) - minor thinglittle overlap i think if you move one of this some grind you'll fix it
- 01:45:505 (1) - stack it with the slider
- 02:17:065 (3) - this slider looks abit ugly ;_;
- 02:17:065 - add a NChere since it follow a spinner
- 00:33:193 (3,4) - try to give a better line to this 2 circles
- 00:37:875 (5,6,7) - this can confuse really much i'll suggest to do something like: // or to stack all 3 o3o
- 00:39:609 (2,3,4) - same about here^
- 03:00:940 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:03:021 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:04:235 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:04:755 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:05:969 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:07:356 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:08:570 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:09:784 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:10:304 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:10:651 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:10:998 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:11:171 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:12:385 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:14:119 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:14:813 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:16:200 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:16:894 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:17:067 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:18:628 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:19:148 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- 03:20:362 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:20:709 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:20:882 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
- 03:21:229 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
- AR 8 is better imo but not in all parts ò.ò hmm try it out
- i think is better to end with a spinner this diff too
- 01:46:200 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
- 01:30:245 - i don't like reallymuch the stream form .w. same about 02:59:031 -