Shizuku Aoisaki /Yuka/ Koko - Beware the Umbrella Left Here · forum

KokoroStudiox3

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Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-05-11T00:30:19+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Wednesday, August 05, 2015 at 3:39:09 PM

Artist: Shizuku Aoisaki /Yuka/ Koko
Title: Beware the Umbrella Left Here for Decades
Source: Touhou
Tags: alacat LunarSakuya Iemitsu PunkDirtyChannel Kikuo Happy Undefined Fantastic Object Rule Garden 3R (C78, 2010) eLtigreXXx 東方Project
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6313kb
Play Time: 04:24
Difficulties Available:

Hard Collab (3.52 stars, 666 notes)
Insane Collab (3.74 stars, 808 notes)
Normal (1.95 stars, 335 notes)

Download: Shizuku Aoisaki /Yuka/ Koko - Beware the Umbrella Left Here for Decades
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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normal by me done
Insane collab
00:00:237 - 01:16:522 - by me done
01:16:951 - 02:48:022 - alacat done
02:48:237 - 04:17:379 - by LunarSakuya done
Hard collab
00:00:237 - 01:16:522 - by me
01:16:951 - 02:48:022 -by me
02:48:237 - 04:17:379 - PAN
SB by Cloudchaser

Last edited by KokoroStudiox3 2015-08-05T22:40:34+00:00, edited 132 times in total.

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2013-06-29T03:09:30+00:00

sry for the delay orz
hope its ok!

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-06-29T06:07:35+00:00

nice *o*

update

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2013-11-23T07:28:14+00:00

http://puu.sh/5qExC.zip

:3

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2013-11-23T07:44:43+00:00

*.* UPDATE

happyface104

1 post

Joined August 2011

happyface104 2013-12-08T07:06:13+00:00

luv this

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-01-12T19:23:08+00:00

Here's your SB!

http://puu.sh/6iGyv.rar

btw, there are unsnapped points, take a look to them.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-01-12T21:49:23+00:00

Cloudchaser wrote:
Here's your SB!

http://puu.sh/6iGyv.rar

btw, there are unsnapped points, take a look to them.

ok gracias

oies pero no se muestra el sb en el mapa o:

Cloudchaser

2,327 posts

Joined May 2012

Cloudchaser 2014-01-12T22:09:23+00:00

eLtigreXXx wrote:
Cloudchaser wrote:
Here's your SB!

http://puu.sh/6iGyv.rar

btw, there are unsnapped points, take a look to them.

ok gracias
oies pero no se muestra el sb en el mapa o:

Borra el archivo osb y agrega esto a la diff collab
http://puu.sh/6iT0B.txt

Cosmolade

1,289 posts

Joined December 2012

Cosmolade 2014-01-14T23:42:06+00:00

Hello~
Mod request :3

[General]

Reduce the kia time.
btw, This map is so cute! (* °∀°)b

[Normal]

Good.

- 00:06:251 (6) - NC
- 00:19:965 (5) - ^
- 00:29:393 (6) - ^
- 00:40:536 (5) - ^
- 00:47:393 (5) - ^
- 01:12:251 (4) - ^
- 01:48:679 (5) - ^
- 01:57:679 (5) - ^
- 01:59:822 (1) - Move to 02:00:036

- 02:40:965 (8) - NC
- 02:41:822 (9) - Extend to 02:42:251
- 03:03:679 (6) - NC
- 03:31:536 (4) - ^
- 03:56:822 (5) - ^
- 04:03:679 (4) - ^

[Collab]
So much jumps4me

- 00:23:608 (2) - Too far
- 01:20:179 (4) - ^
- 01:21:679 (6,7,8,9) - Confusing pattern
- 01:25:322 (6,7,8) - Far
- 01:34:965 (4,5,6,7) -Confusing.
- 01:39:251 (6) - Far
- 03:43:964 (7,8,9,10) - Confusing.
- 04:17:393 (1) -Umh... maybe, move the circle to the center?
- 04:17:460 (1) - Move the spinner to red tick
--

btw, Good Luck (✿╹◡╹)ﾉ☆.｡₀:*ﾟ✲ﾟ*:₀｡

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-01-15T02:11:06+00:00

Cosmolade wrote:
Hello~
Mod request :3

[General]

Reduce the kia time.
btw, This map is so cute! (* °∀°)b
[Normal]

Good.

- 00:06:251 (6) - NC sip
- 00:19:965 (5) - ^ sip
- 00:29:393 (6) - ^ sip
- 00:40:536 (5) - ^ aqui no creo que sea nesesario :3
- 00:47:393 (5) - ^ sip
- 01:12:251 (4) - ^ sip
- 01:48:679 (5) - ^ sip
- 01:57:679 (5) - ^ sip
- 01:59:822 (1) - Move to 02:00:036 sip
- 02:40:965 (8) - NC sip
- 02:41:822 (9) - Extend to 02:42:251 sip
- 03:03:679 (6) - NC sip
- 03:31:536 (4) - ^ sip
- 03:56:822 (5) - ^ sip
- 04:03:679 (4) - ^ sip

[Collab]
So much jumps4me

- 00:23:608 (2) - Too far no se juga mal :3 lo puedo asercar un poco mas
- 01:20:179 (4) - ^
- 01:21:679 (6,7,8,9) - Confusing pattern
- 01:25:322 (6,7,8) - Far
- 01:34:965 (4,5,6,7) -Confusing.
- 01:39:251 (6) - Far
- 03:43:964 (7,8,9,10) - Confusing. no creo yo cuando juge esta parte la pase sin problema para una insane yo creo que esta bien
- 04:17:393 (1) -Umh... maybe, move the circle to the center? pues quedaría muy serca de la nota anterior y creo que ai esta bien la nota
- 04:17:460 (1) - Move the spinner to red tick bueno yo creo que el spiner deveria comenzar desde el tick blanco pero como ai un sonido ai se agrega la nota i el spiner se pega lo mas posible
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btw, Good Luck (✿╹◡╹)ﾉ☆.｡₀:*ﾟ✲ﾟ*:₀｡

toybot

1,067 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2014-02-02T12:46:25+00:00

#modreqs
nice map
is it just going to be 2 difficulties, or will you/someone map a hard to fill the gap?
EDIT: im noob and didn't update for cosmolade's mod, sorry e.e

[General]
it's all good ^^

[Normal]
00:22:536 (6) - suggest new combo there since new measure
00:23:393 (1) - if do ^, then remove nc here
00:24:465 (5) - add nc
00:31:108 (3,4,5,6) - center?
00:39:679 (4,5) - having whistle sliderslide on those two sliders doesn't sound pleasing and clean, remove?
01:13:536 (5) - move somewhere else? like x424 y136, somewhere in that area
01:31:108 (1) - nazi, but move one grid to the left, or to x48 y80? using grid 3
01:35:393 (2) - again, sliderslide sounds out of place.. consider remove?
01:53:393 - no hitsounds? D: hitsound it like 00:36:251
02:08:393 (3,5) - add clap
03:00:679 - add note? and maybe rearrange the note after to be more equal distance
03:37:965 (1) - add finish at head?
04:04:108 (3) - clap
04:07:108 (3) - yay more whistle slide

[Collab]
eLtigreXXx
00:09:893 (1,2) - ctrl+g? or rearrange the circles
00:27:679 (1) - was expecting a finish here, instead of 00:29:393 (1)
00:51:893 (6) - NC?
01:01:751 (2) - bring closer to (3)
01:05:822 (2) - clap at head?
01:08:393 (4) - maybe put 4 in the middle of (1) and (3) instead? since the jump would probably better between (4) and (5), since the key goes down by a larger scale. like this:

SPOILER

but you might want to keep triangle, so idk
01:15:893 (4,5) - stack perfectly, then move it a little closer to the (1) to keep that effect
alacat
01:49:751 (6) - move to around x328 y172? or more equal distance, looks neater
01:52:536 (5) - remove clap and maybe replace with whistle?
02:06:036 (1) - remove nc? the music sounded unfinished, so probably best without a new combo
02:11:608 (4) - stack on (5)
LunarSakuya
Your part sounds less hitsounded and a little more boring, consider adding more hitsounds?
03:36:251 (1,2,1,2) - maybe move these two combos farther apart, or more to the sides? larger distance, and
03:36:251 (1) - add whistle
04:17:501 (1) - i don't know but maybe hitsound the spinner with sections so that the sound created while spinning goes down in volume along with the music?, since you can easily hear the music die down, but spinner sound increases in sound, so make same instead

sorry for nazi mod, lol
Good luck !

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-02T20:08:21+00:00

toybot wrote:
:) #modreqs
nice map
is it just going to be 2 difficulties, or will you/someone map a hard to fill the gap?
EDIT: im noob and didn't update for cosmolade's mod, sorry e.e

all done

[General]
it's all good ^^

[Normal]
00:22:536 (6) - suggest new combo there since new measure
00:23:393 (1) - if do ^, then remove nc here
00:24:465 (5) - add nc
00:31:108 (3,4,5,6) - center?
00:39:679 (4,5) - having whistle sliderslide on those two sliders doesn't sound pleasing and clean, remove?
01:13:536 (5) - move somewhere else? like x424 y136, somewhere in that area
01:31:108 (1) - nazi, but move one grid to the left, or to x48 y80? using grid 3
01:35:393 (2) - again, sliderslide sounds out of place.. consider remove?
01:53:393 - no hitsounds? D: hitsound it like 00:36:251
02:08:393 (3,5) - add clap
03:00:679 - add note? and maybe rearrange the note after to be more equal distance
03:37:965 (1) - add finish at head?
04:04:108 (3) - clap
04:07:108 (3) - yay more whistle slide

[Collab]
eLtigreXXx
00:09:893 (1,2) - ctrl+g? or rearrange the circles
00:27:679 (1) - was expecting a finish here, instead of 00:29:393 (1)
00:51:893 (6) - NC?
01:01:751 (2) - bring closer to (3)
01:05:822 (2) - clap at head?
01:08:393 (4) - maybe put 4 in the middle of (1) and (3) instead? since the jump would probably better between (4) and (5), since the key goes down by a larger scale. like this:
SPOILER
but you might want to keep triangle, so idk
01:15:893 (4,5) - stack perfectly, then move it a little closer to the (1) to keep that effect

sorry for nazi mod, lol
Good luck !

thanks

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-02-03T13:42:41+00:00

Thanks modding

http://puu.sh/6Iu0K.zip

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-03T18:19:43+00:00

thanks update

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2014-02-05T03:14:29+00:00

Fixed all, thanks ^^

under hitobjects:

SPOILER

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KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-05T07:22:19+00:00

update

Winek

888 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-02-06T08:43:49+00:00

Hullo.

Map 9 out of 25.

So here is my mod. I changed modding style to be more organized o3o
Mod Right here

Sorry, it's kinda short. Butyour map itself is really good.
Blue Is Normal, Red is Collab.
You can also modify the document, as anonymous, And answer in "Your Anwer" row to say waht you fixed or not. If you don't want to, no problem. But please just tell me if you don't want to, so i can rapidly close it before scumbags come destroying all of it.

So btw, *star* ~~to get rid of some kudosu~~ Because it's really great.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-06T18:30:00+00:00

thank

Yoeri

433 posts

Joined March 2012

Yoeri 2014-02-10T21:14:03+00:00

god damn it zexous

mp3 quality is a bit bad? I can't hear it very clearly at the moment and it might just be the percussion, but yeah.
Pending Beatmaps? I doubt the Collab is easy enough to be considered a Hard and Normal isn't Easy enough either.

[Normal]Pretty nice map, just a bit of aesthetics to complain about.

Up the OD and HP a bit, they're too low for a Normal.
00:00:233 (1) - Unsnapped.
00:19:108 (4,1) - Not a very good blanket.
00:21:465 (5,1) - ^
00:40:536 (5,6) - These aren't exactly parallel, if that's what you were aiming for.
00:47:393 (5,6) - ^
00:49:536 (1,2) - Blanket please.
00:49:965 (2) - Clap on return.
00:51:679 (4) - ^
00:53:393 (1,2) - Either blanket or put (2) perfectly in the middle.
01:01:536 (2) - Maybe start this slider 1/1 later?
01:17:393 (1,3) - Could be parallel.
01:23:822 (7,1) - Blanket maybe?
01:31:108 (1) - Finish on start.
01:40:108 (5,1) - Blanket is a bit messy.
02:13:965 (1,2) - Not perfectly parallel.
02:19:108 (3) - Clap on start.
02:20:822 - Breaktime here feels extremely random and forced. If you're going to have extra breaktime, put it at 01:53:393 - 02:07:108.
02:46:536 (5,6) - Blanket?
02:47:822 (6) - Clap.
02:53:393 (4,5) - Kind of messy blanket.
02:55:751 (2,3) - ^
02:58:965 (4,5) - ^
03:00:679 (7) - Clap.
03:01:965 (3) - Finish on start.
03:24:251 - Remove claps until 03:30:251? Would fit the music more, but I guess they're not too bad this way.
03:33:251 (8) - Make this line up with (6) and (7).
03:35:822 (2) - Same as before, maybe start it 1/1 later to catch the start of the drum fill. Also remove clap from end.
03:48:679 (3) - Clap on end.
03:51:679 (1) - Curve looks weird.
03:58:108 (4,1) - Blanket?
03:58:536 (1) - Clap on end.
04:02:608 (2) - Remove clap on end and put it on (3).
04:05:393 (1) - Finish on start.
04:07:108 (3) - Clap on end.
04:08:822 (1) - ^
04:13:322 (4) - Clap on return.

[Collab]Really fun map.

The hitsounding on alacat's and LunarSakuya's parts is considerably more vibrant than on eLtigreXXx'. You should try to make them more similar.
00:13:322 (2,3) - Claps and both starts and ends.
00:16:858 (4) - Sounds better without clap.
00:19:965 (3) - I can see why this is Normal sampleset, but it's rather inconsistent to use it here.
00:25:536 (2) - Clap.
00:30:893 (1) - clap on return.
00:32:822 (4) - Make this symmetrical please.
00:36:251 (11) - Finish.
00:42:679 (4) - Clap.
00:48:251 (7) - Ctrl+g for cool flow thingy.
00:49:536 (4,5) - Claps.
00:55:965 (3,4,5) - I'd unstack these because unusual rhythm.
00:59:822 (4,1) - Blanket please.
01:04:108 (1) - Clap on start.
01:09:679 (3,4,5) - Unstack?
01:13:108 (1,2) - Change to triples or point (1) to the bottom left and (2) to the bottom right.
01:16:965 (1) - Clap.
01:30:251 (4,5) - I see where this is coming from but the flow would be so much better if (5) was turned around.
02:18:679 (6) - Ctrl+g please.
02:19:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - Switch claps and whistles around.
02:32:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:54:036 (4) - Ctrl+g?
04:08:608 (7) - Normal sampleset sounds completely random.
04:17:501 (1) - Hitsound volume 30% maybe?

Last edited by Yoeri 2014-02-10T21:16:51+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Lust

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Joined January 2013

Lust 2014-02-10T21:16:42+00:00

Is this map WIP or pending? If you are having two difficulties, one cannot be insane.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-11T17:13:36+00:00

i need hard diff ;.;

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-11T18:25:23+00:00

Yoeri wrote:

god damn it zexous

mp3 quality is a bit bad? I can't hear it very clearly at the moment and it might just be the percussion, but yeah.
Pending Beatmaps? I doubt the Collab is easy enough to be considered a Hard and Normal isn't Easy enough either.

[Normal]Pretty nice map, just a bit of aesthetics to complain about.
Up the OD and HP a bit, they're too low for a Normal. fixed
00:00:233 (1) - Unsnapped. fixed
00:19:108 (4,1) - Not a very good blanket.
00:21:465 (5,1) - ^
00:40:536 (5,6) - These aren't exactly parallel, if that's what you were aiming for.
00:47:393 (5,6) - ^
00:49:536 (1,2) - Blanket please.
00:49:965 (2) - Clap on return. ok
00:51:679 (4) - ^ok
00:53:393 (1,2) - Either blanket or put (2) perfectly in the middle.
01:01:536 (2) - Maybe start this slider 1/1 later? ok
01:17:393 (1,3) - Could be parallel.
01:23:822 (7,1) - Blanket maybe?
01:31:108 (1) - Finish on start.ok
01:40:108 (5,1) - Blanket is a bit messy.
02:13:965 (1,2) - Not perfectly parallel. ok
02:19:108 (3) - Clap on start. ok
02:20:822 - Breaktime here feels extremely random and forced. If you're going to have extra breaktime, put it at 01:53:393 - 02:07:108.ok
02:46:536 (5,6) - Blanket?
02:47:822 (6) - Clap.ok
02:53:393 (4,5) - Kind of messy blanket.
02:55:751 (2,3) - ^
02:58:965 (4,5) - ^
03:00:679 (7) - Clap.ok
03:01:965 (3) - Finish on start.ok
03:24:251 - Remove claps until 03:30:251? Would fit the music more, but I guess they're not too bad this way.ok
03:33:251 (8) - Make this line up with (6) and (7).
03:35:822 (2) - Same as before, maybe start it 1/1 later to catch the start of the drum fill. Also remove clap from end.ok
03:48:679 (3) - Clap on end.ok
03:51:679 (1) - Curve looks weird.ok
03:58:108 (4,1) - Blanket?
03:58:536 (1) - Clap on end.ok
04:02:608 (2) - Remove clap on end and put it on (3).ok
04:05:393 (1) - Finish on start.ok
04:07:108 (3) - Clap on end.ok
04:08:822 (1) - ^ok
04:13:322 (4) - Clap on return.
ok
[Collab]Really fun map.
The hitsounding on alacat's and LunarSakuya's parts is considerably more vibrant than on eLtigreXXx'. You should try to make them more similar.
00:13:322 (2,3) - Claps and both starts and ends. ok
00:16:858 (4) - Sounds better without clap.ok
00:19:965 (3) - I can see why this is Normal sampleset, but it's rather inconsistent to use it here.
00:25:536 (2) - Clap.ok
00:30:893 (1) - clap on return.ok
00:32:822 (4) - Make this symmetrical please.ok
00:36:251 (11) - Finish.ok
00:42:679 (4) - Clap.ok
00:48:251 (7) - Ctrl+g for cool flow thingy.ok
00:49:536 (4,5) - Claps.ok
00:55:965 (3,4,5) - I'd unstack these because unusual rhythm.
00:59:822 (4,1) - Blanket please.
01:04:108 (1) - Clap on start.ok
01:09:679 (3,4,5) - Unstack?
01:13:108 (1,2) - Change to triples or point (1) to the bottom left and (2) to the bottom right.
alacat c:
01:16:965 (1) - Clap.
01:30:251 (4,5) - I see where this is coming from but the flow would be so much better if (5) was turned around.
02:18:679 (6) - Ctrl+g please.
02:19:108 (1,2,3,4,5) - Switch claps and whistles around.
02:32:822 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
03:54:036 (4) - Ctrl+g?
04:08:608 (7) - Normal sampleset sounds completely random.
04:17:501 (1) - Hitsound volume 30% maybe?

update

thanks

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-02-18T07:47:11+00:00

From My Modding Queue

My modding is All Suggestion

[Before Modding]

You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example :http://puu.sh/70Hdq.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/70HdT.jpg )
This will help you making your map's quality higher

[Normal]

00:00:251 (1) - it needs little change like this http://puu.sh/70Hfi.jpg
00:32:822 (7) - How about make a diamond
00:43:751 (3,4) - Check the distance snap
00:51:251 (3,4) - ^
01:13:108 (4) - better move x=336 y=184
01:13:536 (5) - ^ x=408 y=104
01:21:465 (2,3,4) - DS Check
01:29:393 (3) - move to x=232 y=334
03:27:679 (1) - DS Check

Good Luck~

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-02-18T17:26:12+00:00

Neta wrote:
From My Modding Queue

My modding is All Suggestion

[Before Modding]
You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example :http://puu.sh/70Hdq.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/70HdT.jpg )
This will help you making your map's quality higher
[Normal]
00:00:251 (1) - it needs little change like this http://puu.sh/70Hfi.jpg
00:32:822 (7) - How about make a diamond ok
00:43:751 (3,4) - Check the distance snap fixed
00:51:251 (3,4) - ^fixed
01:13:108 (4) - better move x=336 y=184fixed
01:13:536 (5) - ^ x=408 y=104
01:21:465 (2,3,4) - DS Checkfixed
01:29:393 (3) - move to x=232 y=334fixed
03:27:679 (1) - DS Check
Good Luck~

thanks

P A N

2,353 posts

Joined December 2011

P A N 2014-05-06T13:51:59+00:00

Done.

SPOILER

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TitleUnicode:十年置き傘にご注意を
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188,124,231245,2,0,P|228:132|264:120,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,56,231673,6,0,P|400:40|472:112,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,168,232316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
472,252,232530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,276,232745,5,2,0:0:0:0:
472,252,232959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,172,233173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
408,304,233387,2,0,P|376:344|272:328,1,160,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,252,234030,2,0,L|252:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,234459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,144,234673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,96,234887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
128,56,235102,5,2,0:0:0:0:
16,136,235316,2,0,P|8:184|20:224,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,284,235745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
136,228,235959,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,236173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
248,236,236387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
300,308,236602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
364,248,236816,5,0,0:0:0:0:
452,260,237030,1,2,0:0:0:0:
352,160,237245,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,180,237459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
428,116,237673,1,2,0:0:0:0:
348,76,237887,1,4,3:0:0:0:
348,76,237995,1,4,3:0:0:0:
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228,160,238530,6,0,P|188:116|196:44,1,120
196,44,238959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,83,239173,2,0,L|440:68,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,124,239816,2,0,P|504:168|488:220,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,268,240245,2,0,L|352:264,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,260,240673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,260,241102,5,0,0:0:0:0:
164,200,241316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
216,328,241530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,296,241745,2,0,P|60:264|48:216,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,144,242173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
92,72,242387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,40,242602,2,0,P|224:40|260:72,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,132,243030,2,0,L|280:224,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,300,243459,1,2,0:0:0:0:
376,328,243673,5,0,0:0:0:0:
448,280,243887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
448,280,244102,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,192,244316,1,2,0:0:0:0:
464,192,244530,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,244745,1,2,0:0:0:0:
432,108,244852,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,108,244959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,44,245173,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,76,245387,6,0,P|240:88|168:56,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,32,245816,2,0,L|152:120,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,200,246245,1,4,3:0:0:0:
156,200,246352,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,260,246566,1,4,3:0:0:0:
92,260,246673,1,8,0:0:0:0:
36,192,246887,1,2,0:0:0:0:
4,276,247102,2,0,P|24:320|60:344,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
136,340,247530,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,200,247745,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,340,247959,2,0,L|268:336,1,120
271,336,248387,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,276,248602,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,100,256316,5,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,176,256959,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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256,192,257387,12,0,264030,0:0:0:0:

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-05-06T19:19:33+00:00

nice

update

Want 2 Buy Avon

264 posts

Joined February 2014

Want 2 Buy Avon 2014-07-29T16:15:55+00:00

Hi Hi, from my modding queue~ <3
[Insane Collab]
00:19:102 (4) - the harsh curve at the end makes it look strange, I'd change the shape of it
00:20:816 (4) - ^
00:31:959 (6) - you could blanket the 5 better
00:46:530 (1) - could blanket the 2
01:04:102 (1) - could blanket 01:04:530 (2) - a little better
02:20:602 (9,1) - I dun really like the overlap of this
02:23:816 (5) - could blanket 02:23:173 (2) - better
02:41:387 (3) - could blanket 02:42:030 (4) - if you wanted it to
02:49:959 (1) - could blanket a little better
03:27:245 (1) - could blanket better
03:46:959 (2) - ^
That's all I could find, Good luck with the map~ <3

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-07-29T18:11:59+00:00

Xellie wrote:
Hi Hi, from my modding queue~ <3
[Insane Collab]
00:19:102 (4) - the harsh curve at the end makes it look strange, I'd change the shape of it fixed
00:20:816 (4) - ^ fixed
00:31:959 (6) - you could blanket the 5 better fixed
00:46:530 (1) - could blanket the 2 fixed
01:04:102 (1) - could blanket 01:04:530 (2) - a little better fixed
02:20:602 (9,1) - I dun really like the overlap of this is fine
02:23:816 (5) - could blanket 02:23:173 (2) - better fixed
02:41:387 (3) - could blanket 02:42:030 (4) - if you wanted it to fixed
02:49:959 (1) - could blanket a little better fixed
03:27:245 (1) - could blanket better fixed
03:46:959 (2) - ^ fixed
That's all I could find, Good luck with the map~ <3

thanks Xellie :3

Arlecchino

1,240 posts

Joined October 2013

Arlecchino 2014-08-02T02:38:22+00:00

Ya~
m4m as requested
sowwy for the late mod `^` too busy irl Orz
[General]
at least add kiai time in normal pwease :<

Normal
okay open AiMod and check distance snap,there is a trivial issue cuz you use small grid , try use tiny grid
00:06:245 (1,2,3) - this make 00:07:959 feel empty , try this potato
potato.
00:17:602 (1,2,3,4) - hueee.. try like 00:03:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - or makes sth like like this
SPOILER
00:19:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is s better than 00:06:245 (1,2,3) - but try my potato :3
SPOILER
00:22:530 (1) - this blanket can be improved.. you can move 00:22:530 (1,2) - more to left maybe at (424,184),and repaire the distance (move 00:23:387 (3,4) - )
00:27:459 (2) - okay you can keep 0.9x DS (try to use tiny grid size for repaire this issue)
00:39:459 (3) - ^
00:56:387 (3) - ahaha blanket ? like this ? , move 00:57:245 (1,2,3) - if you blanket it
01:00:245 (1) - can you make it like this ,owob i likes blanket
01:21:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - this!! okay.. how about change 01:21:673 (3) - to 1/1 slider and remove 01:22:102 (4) - ? (or you can try use previous potato :3)
01:26:816 (1) - oww yes i likes this owo,blanket? (*-* ) like this this this ( *-*),also you can stack 01:28:530 (2) - ,if you applied this mod, re-dissnap 01:29:387 (3) - (just actived distance snap and move it to right side)
01:40:530 (1) - move to (212,196) or just actived distance snap and move 1 grid to up and to right
01:45:459 (2) - remove this, and it will be the real normal diff.. i guess >w< c teehee (cuz i think the sound or beat like hard diff,so you can remove it)
01:48:030 (3,4) - this! okay i'm not pro playing Std! and i think this can more easly,maybe you can remove 01:48:030 (3) - or make 01:48:245 (4) - to 1/1 slider and remove 01:48:673 (5) -
02:25:959 (6) - move it a little bit to up ,hahaha you can make nice emot lol~
emot c:
02:26:816 (8) - and this can will be like this
02:38:173 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's good `3`)b , but i dont think so at 02:40:959 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:47:816 (6) - blanket can be improved
02:51:887 (1,2,3,4) - okay, i start thinking if you copy paste this part until end with previos part (you just repeating :<),and maybe you just make another pattern (maybe you just "ctrl + h" , "ctrl + j" or "ctrl + "<" or ">" and move it a bit or sth else :<)
okay nevermind i just need to mod it
03:25:959 (3) - blanket ?
03:37:959 (1) - how about blanketing ?
SPOILER
03:55:316 (1,2,3,4) - okay! i meet this part again `-` , and why you NC at 03:56:816 (1) - not at 03:57:673 (2) - ? ,if you NC at 03:57:673 (2) - you can remove NC at 03:58:530 (1) - and re NC at 04:00:245 (2) - and remove NC at 04:01:102 (1) - it's better i guess >w<
04:07:959 (4) - blanket pwease
SPOILER

this already good,actually you just need to repaire DS issue and i give a little suggestion to improve your map (btw i hate copy paste diff :v , its like the creator lazy mapping or lazy to make awesome pattern and flow :v)

Hard
This is almost same as insane because,( it almost follows the rhythm of the song details,you see like 00:00:673 (3) - and 00:01:316 (5) - the reverse ,even you not add note at 00:03:673 - :v)
so.. i just suggest this
how about
[a little suggestion]
How about
00:00:673 (3) - remove this
00:01:316 (5) - change to circle and add cirlce at the tail (00:01:745)
00:01:959 (1) - 1/2 slider or 2 circle
00:03:673 - add circle here
00:07:745 (5) - change to circle
00:08:173 - add circle
00:08:816 (2) - this should be 1/1 and 00:09:245 (3) - is 1/2 maybe isnt just suggest
00:09:245 (3) - you follow the vocal here but not at 00:10:959 (3) - , okay for this part
00:10:745 (2) - added note right ? then add note at 00:11:387 - for fit with the song

ke staph here maybe you already know what i mean with this suggest (btw this hard follow the beat or the vocal?)
okay forget dat.. you can ignore what is in above
this is a actual mod,i wont change your map style anymore

00:01:959 (1) - 1/2 slider reverse ?
00:08:173 - add note ?
00:08:816 (2,3) - this! maybe i've notice it before.. how about 00:08:816 (2) - 1/1 slider and 00:09:245 (3) - 1/2 slider
00:11:387 - add note or 00:10:959 (3) - change to 1/1 slider ?
you can end the break here 00:13:102 - ?
if you follow the vocal maybe at least add 1/1 slider at 00:13:102 - and add circle at 00:13:745 - , if you not follow vocal! ignore this
00:22:530 (4,5) - 1/2 slider ?
00:26:387 (5) - [stike]1/2 slider and add 1/1 slider at...[/strike] Forget this,see the image for easy way
SPOILER
01:02:852 (1) - unsnap ? or it's 1/12 ? better snap it to white line
01:06:673 (5) - 1/2 slider ?
01:17:816 (2) - blanketing ?maybe sth like this
01:18:245 (3) - better stack properly
01:19:745 (2) - 1/2 slider ?
01:27:459 (4,5,6) - wee.. try this potato
potato..
01:38:602 (2) - 1/1 slider better i guess :3
02:18:673 (1,2) - blanket ?
woo isnt like usual you NC at here 02:20:816 (1) -
02:32:816 (4) - blanket ?
02:36:245 (1) - ^ like this ?
02:41:387 (5,6,7,8) - 1/1 slider like previous
02:44:601 (1) - khe.. 1ms earlier ,snap pwease 02:44:602
02:44:602 (1,2) - 1/2 slider
02:47:387 (6) - 1/1 slider ? remove (7) and add circle at 02:48:030 - ?
wooo i likes PAN's part... awewwewwsome owob (pattern ,blanket ,flow ,the imo is like potato (*/,\*) awewwsome)
idk why now i feel lazy after see awesome part

Insane
too lazeee.. i'll do quick scan
00:13:102 - map this
00:18:673 (3) - yea like this ? or sth like dat
00:19:423 - add circle
00:25:423 - ^
00:30:459 (5) - remove this and ctrl + g 00:30:566 (6,7) -
00:50:387 (2) - blanket like this ?
00:50:816 (3) - ^
00:56:173 - add circle
00:57:887 - ^
01:00:887 (2) - (200,312) ,so it will be blanket if 01:01:530 (4) - stack with 01:00:245 (1) - (tail) like this ?
omegad.. i feel so sleepy xD
01:06:566 - add note ?
01:09:887 - ^
01:02:816 (1,2,3) - blanket ?
01:09:245 (2) - curve in other side
alacat good job owob nice part
01:49:102 (5) - remove reverse and add circle at 01:49:423 - and 01:49:530 -
01:51:887 (2) - 2 circle ?
02:14:816 (3) - blanket can be improved
02:15:673 (1) - blanket ?
02:28:745 - add circle ?
ke sakuya part
03:00:245 (1) - 2 circle ?
03:32:173 - note here ?
03:32:816 (7) - ctrl + g ?
03:52:530 (3) - ctrl + g better flow
04:02:602 (5) - how about 1/2 slider ?

okay i feel so sleepy let me sleep..
i'm not pro at modding Std! but hope this helped..
reply my mod pwease,make my mod better further
still learning how2mod Std!
(~owo)~ 4 minutes x 3
kei... good luck with your map~

ask me in game or pm forum if there is sth wrong with my mod (wrong image or wrong timming,wrong note or sth else)
cuz i modding in Offline and i modding in half of sleep~
*runs

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2014-08-02T16:29:52+00:00

-[ Asuna ]- wrote:
Ya~
m4m as requested
sowwy for the late mod `^` too busy irl Orz
[General]
at least add kiai time in normal pwease :<

Normal
okay open AiMod and check distance snap,there is a trivial issue cuz you use small grid , try use tiny gridfixed
00:06:245 (1,2,3) - this make 00:07:959 feel empty , try this potatofixed
potato.
00:17:602 (1,2,3,4) - hueee.. try like 00:03:887 (1,2,3,4,5) - or makes sth like like thisfixed
SPOILER
00:19:959 (1,2,3,4,5) - this is s better than 00:06:245 (1,2,3) - but try my potato :3 ok :3
SPOILER
00:22:530 (1) - this blanket can be improved.. you can move 00:22:530 (1,2) - more to left maybe at (424,184),and repaire the distance (move 00:23:387 (3,4) - )
00:27:459 (2) - okay you can keep 0.9x DS (try to use tiny grid size for repaire this issue)fixed
00:39:459 (3) - ^ fixed
00:56:387 (3) - ahaha blanket ? like this ? , move 00:57:245 (1,2,3) - if you blanket it done
01:00:245 (1) - can you make it like this ,owob i likes blanket done
01:21:030 (1,2,3,4,5) - this!! okay.. how about change 01:21:673 (3) - to 1/1 slider and remove 01:22:102 (4) - ? (or you can try use previous potato :3)done
01:26:816 (1) - oww yes i likes this owo,blanket? (*-* ) like this this this ( *-*),also you can stack 01:28:530 (2) - ,if you applied this mod, re-dissnap 01:29:387 (3) - (just actived distance snap and move it to right side)done
01:40:530 (1) - move to (212,196) or just actived distance snap and move 1 grid to up and to rightfixed
01:45:459 (2) - remove this, and it will be the real normal diff.. i guess >w< c teehee (cuz i think the sound or beat like hard diff,so you can remove it)
01:48:030 (3,4) - this! okay i'm not pro playing Std! and i think this can more easly,maybe you can remove 01:48:030 (3) - or make 01:48:245 (4) - to 1/1 slider and remove 01:48:673 (5) -
02:25:959 (6) - move it a little bit to up ,hahaha you can make nice emot lol~
emot c:
02:26:816 (8) - and this can will be like this
02:38:173 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's good `3`)b , but i dont think so at 02:40:959 (1,2,3,4,5) -
02:47:816 (6) - blanket can be improved
02:51:887 (1,2,3,4) - okay, i start thinking if you copy paste this part until end with previos part (you just repeating :<),and maybe you just make another pattern (maybe you just "ctrl + h" , "ctrl + j" or "ctrl + "<" or ">" and move it a bit or sth else :<)
okay nevermind i just need to mod itfixed
03:25:959 (3) - blanket ?fixed
03:37:959 (1) - how about blanketing ?
SPOILER
03:55:316 (1,2,3,4) - okay! i meet this part again `-` , and why you NC at 03:56:816 (1) - not at 03:57:673 (2) - ? ,if you NC at 03:57:673 (2) - you can remove NC at 03:58:530 (1) - and re NC at 04:00:245 (2) - and remove NC at 04:01:102 (1) - it's better i guess >w<fixed
04:07:959 (4) - blanket pwease fixed
SPOILER

this already good,actually you just need to repaire DS issue and i give a little suggestion to improve your map (btw i hate copy paste diff :v , its like the creator lazy mapping or lazy to make awesome pattern and flow :v)

Hard
This is almost same as insane because,( it almost follows the rhythm of the song details,you see like 00:00:673 (3) - and 00:01:316 (5) - the reverse ,even you not add note at 00:03:673 - :v)
so.. i just suggest this
how about
[a little suggestion]
How about
00:00:673 (3) - remove this
00:01:316 (5) - change to circle and add cirlce at the tail (00:01:745)
00:01:959 (1) - 1/2 slider or 2 circle
00:03:673 - add circle here
00:07:745 (5) - change to circle
00:08:173 - add circle
00:08:816 (2) - this should be 1/1 and 00:09:245 (3) - is 1/2 maybe isnt just suggest
00:09:245 (3) - you follow the vocal here but not at 00:10:959 (3) - , okay for this part
00:10:745 (2) - added note right ? then add note at 00:11:387 - for fit with the song

ke staph here maybe you already know what i mean with this suggest (btw this hard follow the beat or the vocal?)
okay forget dat.. you can ignore what is in above
this is a actual mod,i wont change your map style anymore

00:01:959 (1) - 1/2 slider reverse ?
00:08:173 - add note ?
00:08:816 (2,3) - this! maybe i've notice it before.. how about 00:08:816 (2) - 1/1 slider and 00:09:245 (3) - 1/2 slider
00:11:387 - add note or 00:10:959 (3) - change to 1/1 slider ?
you can end the break here 00:13:102 - ?
if you follow the vocal maybe at least add 1/1 slider at 00:13:102 - and add circle at 00:13:745 - , if you not follow vocal! ignore this
00:22:530 (4,5) - 1/2 slider ?
00:26:387 (5) - [stike]1/2 slider and add 1/1 slider at...[/strike] Forget this,see the image for easy way
SPOILER
01:02:852 (1) - unsnap ? or it's 1/12 ? better snap it to white line
01:06:673 (5) - 1/2 slider ?
01:17:816 (2) - blanketing ?maybe sth like this
01:18:245 (3) - better stack properly
01:19:745 (2) - 1/2 slider ?
01:27:459 (4,5,6) - wee.. try this potato
potato..
01:38:602 (2) - 1/1 slider better i guess :3
02:18:673 (1,2) - blanket ?
woo isnt like usual you NC at here 02:20:816 (1) -
02:32:816 (4) - blanket ?
02:36:245 (1) - ^ like this ?
02:41:387 (5,6,7,8) - 1/1 slider like previous
02:44:601 (1) - khe.. 1ms earlier ,snap pwease 02:44:602
02:44:602 (1,2) - 1/2 slider
02:47:387 (6) - 1/1 slider ? remove (7) and add circle at 02:48:030 - ?
wooo i likes PAN's part... awewwewwsome owob (pattern ,blanket ,flow ,the imo is like potato (*/,\*) awewwsome)
idk why now i feel lazy after see awesome part

Insane
too lazeee.. i'll do quick scan
00:13:102 - map this
00:18:673 (3) - yea like this ? or sth like dat
00:19:423 - add circle
00:25:423 - ^
00:30:459 (5) - remove this and ctrl + g 00:30:566 (6,7) -
00:50:387 (2) - blanket like this ?
00:50:816 (3) - ^
00:56:173 - add circle
00:57:887 - ^
01:00:887 (2) - (200,312) ,so it will be blanket if 01:01:530 (4) - stack with 01:00:245 (1) - (tail) like this ?
omegad.. i feel so sleepy xD
01:06:566 - add note ?
01:09:887 - ^
01:02:816 (1,2,3) - blanket ?
01:09:245 (2) - curve in other side
alacat good job owob nice part
01:49:102 (5) - remove reverse and add circle at 01:49:423 - and 01:49:530 -
01:51:887 (2) - 2 circle ?
02:14:816 (3) - blanket can be improved
02:15:673 (1) - blanket ?
02:28:745 - add circle ?
ke sakuya part
03:00:245 (1) - 2 circle ?
03:32:173 - note here ?
03:32:816 (7) - ctrl + g ?
03:52:530 (3) - ctrl + g better flow
04:02:602 (5) - how about 1/2 slider ?

okay i feel so sleepy let me sleep..
i'm not pro at modding Std! but hope this helped..
reply my mod pwease,make my mod better further
still learning how2mod Std!
(~owo)~ 4 minutes x 3
kei... good luck with your map~

ask me in game or pm forum if there is sth wrong with my mod (wrong image or wrong timming,wrong note or sth else)
cuz i modding in Offline and i modding in half of sleep~
*runs

Owntrolf

546 posts

Joined December 2013

Owntrolf 2014-10-30T01:09:04+00:00

Normal
Seems fine, its just that my habit just screws me over with slow songs

Hard Collab

00:20:173 (2) - Hitsound in this is louder than it is in the Insane
00:23:602 (2) - Probably would want to make it align better with 1 and 3
02:08:602 - Should have a note here because I keep missing from trying to press because I hear the beeping sound :d
02:14:173 (2) - Hard to read because of the previous combo's 5 overlaps it

Insane Collab

00:35:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - A bit hard to read because of the previous 3 being really close
01:53:602 - Probably possible to map the break with 1/1s and a little bit of 1/2 (Idontliketakingbreaks 8D)
02:41:173 (1,2,3) - 2 triplets in a row always seemed strange to me, could remove the 2
03:24:459 - Might be better to map the empty

Enjoyed playing the insane

HootOwlStar

765 posts

Joined May 2014

HootOwlStar 2014-11-03T14:44:06+00:00

Hihi from modding queue and sorry for the delay of mod so here I am #yay
Don’t mind my English and below are mostly suggestions so you can just simply ignore them if you want
And I am sorry if I am too straight and be rude during my mod
Anyway, MISSION START!!!

Normal*The NCs are not so clean so try to tidy them up. I suggest NC once for every 2 bars.
*The placement of notes could be more interesting by making the flow smoother, although it is already nice.
*There are some notes which are not following the distance snap, as a reminder.
*There are too many circles for the diff and it may be a little too hard for the difficulty, such as patterns like this. Try to increase the number of sliders.
00:01:959 (2) - Suggest move the point x:408 y:176 to x:408 y:172 to make the ends of the slider be more balance idk
00:01:959 (2,3) - Maybe convert them into a single curve slider?
00:05:387 (5) - Make the slider become natural curve
00:06:245 (1,2,3) - A little too complex for Normal diff, suggest convert the circles into a slider
00:19:959 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: move 00:20:173 (2) to x:112 y:184
00:20:816 (4) - Make the slider curve
00:28:530 (4,1) - Make them align on the y-coordinate, like this
00:30:245 (2,3) - Strange flow
00:38:816 (2,4) - Make them align on the y-coordinate
00:45:673 (2,4) - ^
00:49:959 (2,3,4) - The placement is not so nice. Move 00:51:245 (3) to x:220 y:200, together with 00:51:673 (4) to x:264 y:300
01:12:245 - Maybe placing notes like this?
01:20:387 (4) - Make the slider curve
01:21:673 (3) - ^
01:22:530 (4,5) - Move point x:296 y:348 to x:308 y:356, followed by 01:23:387 (5) to x:140 y:348
01:26:816 (1) - Move point x:292 y:120 to x:288 y:116, followed by point x:244 y:144 to x:240 y:140 so that the blanket seems more accurate
01:45:673 (2,1,2) - Make 01:45:673 (2) and 01:47:387 (2) curve and blanket the ends of 01:46:530 (1)
02:09:673 (6) - This slider is not nice, to be honest. Suggest move point x:416 y:344 to x:404 y:348, point x:428 y:328 to x:444 y:336, and point x:488 y:328 to x:488 y:340
02:16:530 (4,5) - Move 02:16:530 (4) to x:152 y:112, followed by 02:16:959 (5) to x:252 y:76
02:25:959 (6,7,8) - Make them an equilateral triangle
02:27:673 (1,2) - Make their ends align on y-coordinates
02:36:245 (2,3) - Just convert them into a single curve slider will do
02:38:816 (3,5) - Make them align on the x-coordinate
03:39:673 (3) - Suggest just make the slider straight
03:58:102 (4,5) - Blanket better
04:00:245 (1,2) - Blanket them
04:04:102 (3,4,5) - Flow is strange
04:07:102 (3,4) - Blanket better
04:09:459 (2,3) - Move them down 20 y-units
04:12:030 (5,1,2,3,4) - It’s harder for a Normal diff
04:16:530 (1,2) - Why place them? Just extend the spinner until 04:17:387 will do

There seems no serious prob for other diffs so that’s all of my mod
Find more modders for the diff and give kudos to mods, anyway
Good luck

Axarious

Former osu! Champion: 2016

333 posts

Joined May 2013

Axarious 2014-12-09T04:18:47+00:00

[General]
Yo. Needs Ctrl HJ sliders and blanket fixing.
[Normal]

00:10:959 (4,5) - Blanket fix, I suggest putting two white bend points after the red bend point.
00:26:387 (3,4) - Blanket fix. Move (4) to x:83 y:48, creates 0.89x and 0.90x distance snap.
00:38:816 (2,3,4) - I imagine this pattern would look nicer if they lined up vertically.
00:40:530 (5,6) - Same thing here, after all, these are Ctrl J's.
00:45:673 (2,3,4) - ^
00:47:387 (5,6) - Is there a reason for these to not be Ctrl HJ's?
00:55:530 (2) - Move to x:419.
00:57:245 (1,2,3) - Straighten this out.
00:58:530 (1,2,3) - Fix distance snap between (1,2) and (2,3). They're unequal at the moment.
01:00:245 (1) - Rotate 2 degrees around selection center.
01:07:102 (1,2) - Whoa there. Fix this blanket.
01:22:102 (3,4,5) - Fix distance snap.
01:33:887 (4,5,6) - Fix distance snap.
01:43:102 (3) - Move to x:331 y:236 for a better blanket with (2), but creates 0.90x and 0.88x distance snap as a consequence.
01:48:245 (3,4,5,6) - Vertically asymmetrical, maybe fix with ctrl J'ing (3,4) to make (5,6).
02:11:387 (2) - Move to x:172 y:284 to preserve 0.90x distance snap.
02:40:745 (7) - Move to x:433 y:137, creates 0.92x distance snap (important thing is that it makes ds equidistant).
02:39:459 (4) - Move to x:291 y:354 maybe, creates 0.91x and 0.90x distance snap.
02:43:530 (5,3) - Fix blanket.
02:55:745 (2,3) - What's the point of having a bend at the end of slider (2) if you aren't blanketing with it?
03:00:673 (7) - Move to x:244 y:288 for 0.90x distance snap.
03:01:745 (2) - Move to x:421 y:219 for ^
03:41:387 (1,2,3,4) - Fix blanket.
03:57:673 (2,3,4) - Straighten out and make distance snap equivalent.
04:07:102 (3,4,1) - Fix blanket between (3,4) and fix distance snap between (4,1).

[Hard Collab]

00:00:245 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is this not symmetrical? ;w;
00:05:387 (4) - Make the start and end of the slider have the same amount of curve.
00:07:102 (4,5) - Blanket fix.
00:08:387 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ.
00:18:245 (2,3) - Ctrl HJ.
00:20:173 (2,3) - Move to x:243 y:224.
00:23:816 (3,4) - Ctrl J (3) to make (4).
00:26:387 (5) - Move to x:408 y:64.
00:29:387 (1,2) - Less of a curve on (2) to blanket with (1).
00:35:173 (1) - Split up into two reverse sliders -> circle to finish.
00:50:816 (3,1) - Weird blanket?
01:01:530 (4,5,6) - Ctrl HJ.
01:05:387 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ.
01:07:102 (1) - Make the start and ending bends even.
01:11:387 (5) - ^
01:12:030 (1,2,3,4) - Sloppy pattern.
01:13:530 (8,1) - This would look nice if (1) tilted towards the left, like a "/".
01:14:602 (2,3) - Move to x:493 y:71.
01:17:387 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ.
01:25:530 (3) - Move to x:165 y:191.
01:43:959 (5) - Make the bends even.
01:47:173 (2) - Move to x:235 y:148.
01:52:316 (1) - Two reverse sliders -> circle finish.
02:04:530 (2) - Move to x:99.
02:07:102 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not symmetrical ;w;
02:09:459 (4,5) - Fix blanket.
02:14:816 (5,2) - ^
02:18:673 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ.
02:24:673 (2,3) - Ctrl HJ.
02:28:530 (5,1) - Fix blanket.
02:32:387 (3,4) - Ctrl HJ.
02:33:245 (5) - Move to x:405 y:101.
02:39:030 (3,4) - Whoa 2.84x distance snap. Inconsistent with what you followed before, also this isn't symmetrical which looks quite awkward.
02:41:816 (6,7) - 3.05x distance snap. Too large.
02:46:959 (5,6) - Not stacked.
03:03:673 (1,2) - Blanket fix.
03:07:102 (1) - Move to x:149.
03:37:102 (1,1,2) - Yay!
03:42:030 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Offcentered hexagon, but otherwise I think it's okay.
03:59:173 (3) - Move to x:267 y:86.
04:10:745 (1) - 04:15:459 (6) - I love these 5 seconds.
04:23:816 - Spinner should end here because "Insane Collab" does this. Be consistent.

[Insane Collab]

00:01:959 (1) - Maybe move it over to where it would be expected in the triangle. Feels weird to stop a triangular motion to jump back and forth.
00:01:959 (1,2) - Blanket.
00:03:887 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Sloppy pentagon.
00:10:102 (2) - Move to x:234 y:15, looks smoother there.
00:17:387 (7) - Rotate -4 degrees around selection center.
00:18:245 (1,2,3) - Ctrl HJ or H these sliders, or do something interesting with them.
00:22:530 (3) - Fix the curve in this slider, it's lopsided.
00:24:245 (3,4) - Fix blanket.
00:35:173 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Map curved streams with grid snap off.
00:40:745 (5,6,7) - Remove overlap.
01:01:102 (3,4) - Ctrl HJ.
01:01:959 (5,6) - Ctrl HJ.
01:04:102 (1,2) - Blanket fix.
01:08:816 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ.
02:14:816 (3,5) - Move to x:454 y:177.
03:22:102 (1,2) - Ctrl HJ, maybe?
03:28:316 (2) - Move to x:182 y:204, maintains 1.45x distance snap and fixes blanket.
03:35:816 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Yay!
04:10:530 (1) - Rotate 3 degrees around selection center.

AnOzi Changle

119 posts

Joined July 2014

AnOzi Changle 2014-12-13T15:06:44+00:00

My English is no good
It's bad mod

[Insane Collab]
00:30:245 (3) - move to 360,52
00:30:352 - add a circle at 360,52
00:30:995 (2) - remove this circle
00:43:530 (1,2,3,4) - No beautiful
00:54:245 (3,5) - Moving near to 00:55:102 (1)
00:57:245 (3,4) - Exchange
01:22:316 (9) - farther distance
01:39:459 (7) - move to 296,344
01:48:245 (1)

I think

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340302

03:12:245

I think

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340313

03:22:102 (1) - move to 188,224
03:22:530 (2) - copy to 03:22:102 (1) and ctrl+hj
03:59:173 (2) - copy to 03:58:530 (1)

[Hard Collab]
00:20:816 (1,2,3,4,5,1)

I think

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340348
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340358
(00:20:816 (1) - copy to 00:19:102 (1) and move and ctrl+G
00:21:459 (2) - copy to (00:20:816 (1) and ctrl+HG
00:22:102 (2,3,4,1) - move)

00:26:387 (5,6) -

I think

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340390

00:50:816 (3) - bad slider
00:55:530 (2,3) - distance
01:03:887 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The stars

I think

01:03:887 (1) - 436,220
01:04:102 (2) - 488，149
01:04:317 (3) - 437,78
01:04:530 (4,6) - 353,105
01:05:173 (7) - 353,193
You can Ctrl+Shift+D
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340435

01:29:387 (1) - Blanket?
01:42:887 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Ctrl+Shift+D
01:51:673 (4) - move to 228,328
02:05:387 (3) - move to 160,148
02:10:959 (1,2) - copy the one and ctrl+HJ
02:13:102 (3,5) - ^
02:32:387 (3) - A straight line
02:32:816 (4) - copy 02:33:245 (5) ctrl+H and move

I think

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2340470

02:55:745 (1) - Don't block
03:40:745 (3,4,5,1)

you can skip this mod

03:40:745 (3,4) - Exchange
03:41:387 (1) - move to 331,75

03:42:030 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - terrible
04:07:959 (2,3,4) - Rhythm 04:06:245 (3,4,5,6)

would you like to mod my map please？
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/237864
thx in advance

rhalp10

579 posts

Joined September 2013

rhalp10 2015-05-09T10:26:06+00:00

Sorry My Queue For STDHas Been Closed I Can't Handle That Mode Anymore ..

Karen

2,864 posts

Joined August 2013

Karen 2015-08-04T10:31:29+00:00

As request.

General

Inconsistency in Tags, need to fix
Source should be 東方Project, move Touhou to tags

Normal

00:46:530 (4,5) - DS error
00:49:530 (1,2) - avoid the stack, 1/1 stack in a Normal diff is a bit difficult to read
02:59:816 (5,6) - ^ same with above
03:35:816 (2,3) - ^
01:24:245 (1,2,3) - this looks weird, try this:
SPOILER
01:29:816 - add a note? i feel empty here since here has a strong clap sound in the background
01:53:387 (9) - need finish here
03:22:530 - add a note here. i cant understand why you suddenly stop here :<
03:23:387 - ^ also
04:17:602 - add a spinner here since you added in Hard and Insane, it's better to make the end time consistent.

Hard Collab

00:00:459 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:08:816 (2) - ctrl+g this for better flow ._.
00:27:459 - i suggest to add a note here to follow the vocal.
00:36:673 - to 00:36:673 - this part is supposed to be mapped since this is a Hard, its mapped time shouldn't be less then Normal's.
03:10:959 - to 03:23:816 - ^
01:02:852 (1) - wrong snapped.
02:22:959 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing

Insane Collab

00:10:102 (2) - try stack on 00:09:245 (6) - this slider's head, then the flow would be better imo.
00:13:530 - hmm..i think this beat should be ignored, try change the rhythm here
00:30:245 (3,4,5,6) - use the same rhythm with 00:28:530 (3,4,5,6) -
00:44:816 (6,1) - enlarge the spacing here since your current spacing seems like a 1/2 rhythm.

KokoroStudiox3

1,272 posts

Joined April 2011

Topic Starter

KokoroStudiox3 2015-08-05T04:34:52+00:00

Karen wrote:
As request.

General
Inconsistency in Tags, need to fix
Source should be 東方Project, move Touhou to tags
Normal
00:46:530 (4,5) - DS error
00:49:530 (1,2) - avoid the stack, 1/1 stack in a Normal diff is a bit difficult to read
02:59:816 (5,6) - ^ same with above
03:35:816 (2,3) - ^
01:24:245 (1,2,3) - this looks weird, try this:
SPOILER
01:29:816 - add a note? i feel empty here since here has a strong clap sound in the background
01:53:387 (9) - need finish here
03:22:530 - add a note here. i cant understand why you suddenly stop here :<
03:23:387 - ^ also
04:17:602 - add a spinner here since you added in Hard and Insane, it's better to make the end time consistent.
Hard Collab
00:00:459 (2,3,4) - inconsistent spacing
00:08:816 (2) - ctrl+g this for better flow ._.
00:27:459 - i suggest to add a note here to follow the vocal.
00:36:673 - to 00:36:673 - this part is supposed to be mapped since this is a Hard, its mapped time shouldn't be less then Normal's. ok
03:10:959 - to 03:23:816 - ^
01:02:852 (1) - wrong snapped.
02:22:959 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing
Insane Collab
00:10:102 (2) - try stack on 00:09:245 (6) - this slider's head, then the flow would be better imo.
00:13:530 - hmm..i think this beat should be ignored, try change the rhythm here
00:30:245 (3,4,5,6) - use the same rhythm with 00:28:530 (3,4,5,6) -
00:44:816 (6,1) - enlarge the spacing here since your current spacing seems like a 1/2 rhythm.

all done

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