doriko - Romeo and Cinderella [Osu|CatchTheBeat] · forum

Garven

osu! Alumni

Joined January 2010

Garven 2014-09-06T20:16:59+00:00

Hey Accel, I never checked back since you didn't reply to the mods. Satellite wants to check on this, but we're wondering what's going on with your end of things. Please reply and he will continue where I left off with this set.

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-09-06T20:30:03+00:00

Garven wrote:
Satellite wants to check on this

=w=

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

jonathanlfj 2014-09-11T04:06:14+00:00

i was supposed to check this too ><
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-09-11T11:36:17+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
i was supposed to check this too ><
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了

好的

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-09-11T14:46:40+00:00

每天都有BAT送上门来
我怎么没有这种待遇
哭哭哦

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-09-12T07:45:47+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
i was supposed to check this too ><
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了

OMG pro

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-09-13T04:10:26+00:00

normal

4522

11:27 -Google-: ._.
11:27 Sellenite: .-.？
11:29 -Google-: 内个0 0求问能有空扫一眼一个Normal么._.
11:30 -Google-: 看看有没有什么脑残错> <
11:30 Sellenite: 好
11:31 Sellenite: link
11:31 *-Google- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/340285 doriko - Romeo and Cinderella [Troogle's Normal]]
11:31 -Google-: 主要是昨晚remap过了._.
11:31 -Google-: 不知道有没有什么疏忽的
11:31 -Google-: http://puu.sh/bwNbn/a1d6fc6244.osu
11:32 Sellenite: 不过这是v+的歌，我只能粗略看一下
11:34 -Google-: 麻烦啦> <
11:34 Sellenite: 00:24:978 (1) -
11:34 Sellenite: 滑条头N的fin
11:35 Sellenite: 主要是你的滑条速度太快了...
11:35 Sellenite: spread可能会有问题
11:36 -Google-: ._.诶
11:36 -Google-: 但是星级还是很低哦0 0
11:36 Sellenite: 0.0
11:37 Sellenite: 00:52:684 (1,2) -
11:37 Sellenite: switch NC
11:38 -Google-: k
11:38 -Google-: 主要是这种滑条。。有点纠结
11:38 -Google-: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:38 -Google-: 这种情况下
11:38 -Google-: NC下载那里。。
11:38 -Google-: *在
11:38 Sellenite: dabaixianba
11:38 Sellenite: 大白线吧
11:39 Sellenite: normal整齐点好
11:39 Sellenite: 都是大白线NC
11:39 -Google-: 但是有的地方会有点丑._.
11:39 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:39 Sellenite: 01:04:507 (2) -
11:39 Sellenite: switch
11:40 Sellenite: 容易读
11:40 Sellenite: 重音NC就够了
11:40 -Google-: 好
11:40 Sellenite: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:40 Sellenite: 01:22:684 (1,2) -
11:41 -Google-: 嗯啊。。我琢磨琢磨NC
11:42 Sellenite: 02:18:801 (1,2) -
11:42 Sellenite: 02:33:801 (1) - 我觉得这个转盘
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 在这里开始比较好
11:43 -Google-: 0.0
11:43 -Google-: 33801?
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 -
11:43 -Google-: 01:07:507 (1) -
11:44 -Google-: 但是这里不也是挤这的嘛;w;
11:44 -Google-: 那我这里也改掉
11:44 Sellenite: dui
11:44 Sellenite: 对
11:44 Sellenite: 也是一样
11:45 Sellenite: 02:48:801 (1,2) -
11:45 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:54:448 (1,2) - 虽然节奏变了但还是统一一下吧
11:46 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:56:742 (1) - 取消NC
11:46 Sellenite: 02:57:448 (3) - NC
11:47 Sellenite: 03:24:272 (4) -
11:47 Sellenite: 让他停在蓝线上
11:48 -Google-: 。。。
11:48 -Google-: 我错了
11:48 -Google-: 应该在红线上的
11:48 Sellenite: 恩
11:49 Sellenite: 03:32:037 (2) -
11:49 Sellenite: 03:31:860 - 滑条从这里开始吧
11:49 Sellenite: 1/2听上去有点怪
11:49 Sellenite: 因为你这段都是跟歌词的
11:50 -Google-: 好的
11:50 -Google-: 这段我再下一下节奏
11:50 Sellenite: 03:42:625 (4,5) - 这个可以合成一个奇葩滑条ww。或者转盘
11:50 Sellenite: 你这样节奏就断了
11:51 Sellenite: 03:47:742 (1,2) - switch
11:51 Sellenite: 03:51:095 (9) - NC
11:52 Sellenite: 04:02:389 (8) -
11:52 Sellenite: NC
11:53 Sellenite: 04:07:860 (1,2) - switch
11:53 Sellenite: 04:10:331 (1,2) - ^
11:53 Sellenite: 04:13:684 (8) - NC
11:54 Sellenite: 04:24:978 (3,1) - swicth
11:54 -Google-: 啊。。等等
11:54 -Google-: 刚chongxiajiezoude
11:54 -Google-: 重下节奏的
11:54 Sellenite: 0.0
11:54 -Google-: 那个。。什么叫做断了？
11:55 Sellenite: 你听背景音
11:55 Sellenite: 满速
11:55 Sellenite: 那是一段连续的，但你分成两个部分了
11:55 -Google-: 嗯。。。
11:56 -Google-: 但是我强调最后一拍qwq
11:56 -Google-: *想
11:56 Sellenite: 你喜欢就行
11:56 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:56 Sellenite: 这没什么大的问题，只是个人看法
11:57 Sellenite: 恩应该没什么东西了
11:57 Sellenite: 主要还是滑条太快加tick太多..我觉得好难
11:59 -Google-: qwq
11:59 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:59 -Google-: 谢谢啦
11:59 -Google-: 你可以po一个IRC log www
12:00 -Google-: 主要是简单hard也不简单啦
12:00 Sellenite: 恩，不过你有些地方一会跟歌词一会跟鼓
12:00 -Google-: 所以说这个做的应该不会有spread的问题
12:00 -Google-: 对。。
12:00 Sellenite: 嘛总体应该没问题吧ww

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-09-13T04:18:24+00:00

Garven wrote:
[Normal]
I wouldn't use any claps until after the music picks up at 00:13:684 - Right now they don't fit the song much at all.
Also in general, the clap usage feels very mechanical. It's almost all beats 2 and 4 no matter what. Try to accent important parts of the song with the claps instead of just following every snare hit in the song.
00:04:154 (2,4) - These beats feel unneeded. Remember, this is a really slow part to the song, and this is a Normal. You don't have to be hitting the beat every possible moment.
00:08:037 (5) - New combo should be here
00:10:860 (5) - ^
Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
The rhythm work also feels a bit plain. You get it at times, then you break into a plain metronome beat. I remapped a bit of the first kiai 01:11:390 - to help give you some ideas for rhythms to use and hitsounds to try.
See if you can get the map out of the slump it's in.
I have remapped the most of the kiai and also the hitsound..hopefully it's better now

Also I find some mods towards the new-versioned normal. Hopefully it reached the RC rules about the mods.

Code

osu file format v13

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92,152,237448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,264,237801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,292,238154,2,0,L|282:292,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,348,238507,2,0,L|324:348,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,276,239037,2,0,L|464:276,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,284,239566,6,0,P|312:328|256:336,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,292,240272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,240625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,104,240978,2,0,P|176:48|88:36,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,241860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,160,242037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,272,242389,6,0,P|76:308|161:293,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,243272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,243448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,260,243801,2,0,L|484:261,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,300,244154,2,0,L|448:298,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,184,244684,2,0,L|473:119,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,184,245213,6,0,P|377:104|306:64,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,169,246095,2,0,L|234:170,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,225,246625,2,0,P|243:293|162:310,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,244,247507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,247860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,248037,6,0,P|194:67|260:58,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,248742,2,0,L|372:100,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,249272,2,0,P|377:225|401:287,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,332,249801,2,0,L|344:332,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,250331,2,0,P|187:311|164:260,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,250860,6,0,P|112:128|35:97,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,208,251742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,260,251919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,324,252272,2,0,P|236:340|304:295,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,212,253154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,253331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,92,253684,6,0,P|422:60|367:49,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,254389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,254742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,188,255095,2,0,P|126:248|203:285,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,255978,2,0,L|319:161,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,140,256507,6,0,P|456:217|427:294,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,308,257389,2,0,L|256:300,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,257919,2,0,P|73:245|48:168,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,68,258801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,88,259331,5,4,0:0:0:0:
332,180,259683,2,0,L|307:230,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,212,260213,2,0,L|166:259,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,164,260742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,128,261095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,220,261448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,261801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,280,262154,6,0,P|332:255|364:153,1,224,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,263213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,263566,6,0,L|148:102,2,84,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,264272,2,0,L|370:96,2,84,8|4|8,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,264978,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,264,265331,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,265684,2,0,L|344:144,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,266389,2,0,P|404:328|464:316,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,204,267095,2,0,L|492:148,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,204,267801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,268154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,112,268507,2,0,L|140:132,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,268860,2,0,P|128:194|180:211,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,269566,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,172,269919,2,0,L|368:116,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,232,270625,2,0,P|502:284|484:336,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,268,271331,2,0,L|396:212,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,272037,6,0,P|289:288|308:236,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,272742,2,0,L|444:140,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273448,12,4,275389,2:0:0:0:

Kvantuma Rozo

70 posts

Joined April 2014

Kvantuma Rozo 2014-10-30T06:11:54+00:00

所以什么时候能rank

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-10-30T08:20:10+00:00

Kvantuma Rozo wrote:
所以什么时候能rank

怕今年也没戏

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,479 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-11-03T11:39:41+00:00

你说着“好的”但是缺没有去reply嘉文最后一个mod，什么都不改的话至少把理由回一下，这样ignore mods两个多月算什么? 别说你自己也不想rank吧。回复完了去“主动”找Satellite/jonathanlfj 就行，不要辜负他们的好心。永远这样今年明年后年也rank不了...

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-03T12:20:41+00:00

Fycho wrote:
你说着“好的”但是缺没有去reply嘉文最后一个mod，什么都不改的话至少把理由回一下，这样ignore mods两个多月算什么? 别说你自己也不想rank吧。回复完了去“主动”找Satellite/jonathanlfj 就行，不要辜负他们的好心。永远这样今年明年后年也rank不了...

于是你是特别来说给谁听的呢？我没有回复就代表我没改吗？你又怎么知道我没有找他们呢呵呵，不送。

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-11-05T05:33:04+00:00

[Easy]

00:35:566 (3) - The sound of the down beat should respond. So let's do reverse already once.
00:40:507 (4) - When you do it blanket becomes better more neatly.
img
00:42:625 (2) - If it is symmetric placement,please do fix this place.
00:51:801 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
00:53:213 (1,2) - Same as above.
01:04:507 (1) - add Finish add whistle and Addition : S. You forget to perform it.

01:05:566 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - 01:05:566 (3,4) - Stack at this place is unfavorable. and 01:10:154 - Make 1/1 slider too fit this place. Try this code from 01:05:566 (3) - ~ 01:12:625 -

172,52,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,108,65919,2,0,B|76:176|136:224|136:224|124:276,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,67331,6,0,P|256:352|312:328,1,120
386,271,68390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,271,68742,2,0,B|376:224|376:224|436:176|416:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,70154,6,0,B|308:76|324:136|324:136|296:124|260:128,1,180
172,92,71566,6,0,B|144:148|172:220|172:220|138:253,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:21:448 (2,1) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. and 01:21:448 (2) - add Finish on slider head and end. I think fit try this.
01:24:272 (2,1) - You must not disturb distance snap to make symmetric placement.
01:32:742 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Same as part 01:21:448 (2) - this one ?
01:51:095 (1,2,1,2) - e.eh? Why do you not use distance snap? about x1.6
02:01:683 (2,3,1) - This stack is very dangerous. Try an arrange like this.
img
02:10:860 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
02:17:919 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - here.
02:26:389 (1) - No need New Combo. Remove it.
02:35:566 (5,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.
02:47:566 (2) - add Finish on slider end.
03:34:154 (1) - add Finish better.
03:38:389 (1) - Same as above.
03:45:448 (1,2) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here.
04:26:390 - Same as above.

[Troogle's Normal]

00:13:684 (1) - Why do you start spinner at this place? I think that it does not fit it to put spinner here. Try an arrange like this.
00:34:154 (2) - I think that it is a slider of strange form. Try this ? If you are changed. Please correct the later part by yourself.
img
```
220,24,34154,6,0,B|132:70|173:168|173:168|68:181|74:276,1,336
```
00:45:448 (1) - This is too too short spinner. It is not preferable in the Normal diff. Please change it in this way.
00:53:213 (1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
img
00:55:507 (5) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. and More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.
img
00:59:742 (2) - Not too fond of the straight flow too here. Let's bend a little for flow !
img
01:01:154 (4,2) - Same as above.
img
img
01:21:448 (4) - add Finish on slider head. and additions : S ?
01:21:978 (5,6) - This spacing is really awkward. Try this rhythm.

01:25:154 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It is the suggestion of many flows. Try this code.

8,312,85154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,360,85331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,344,85684,6,0,P|201:277|278:246,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,328,86566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,340,86742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,252,87095,2,0,P|478:170|420:111,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,87978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,88154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,88507,6,0,P|93:145|95:227,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:33:625 (2) - Changed this rhythm.
01:38:389 (1,2,3) - more better flow.
img
02:01:684 (4) - Overlap. You must be changed another pattern.
02:09:095 (2) - Please distance check.
02:28:684 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
02:47:566 (3) - add Finish on slider head. and additions : S ?
02:50:213 (3,4) - Changed this rhythm.
02:56:742 (5) - Move 02:56:566 - here.
03:00:095 - add note
03:00:625 (2,3) - more better flow
img
03:27:978 (5,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this.
03:39:625 - add note
03:33:625 (5) - Overlap. Changed another patterm.
03:36:625 (6,1) - more better rhythm.
03:56:213 (5) - more better flow.
03:58:154 (4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me and Overlap. Try this rhythm.
04:03:801 (4,5) - Overlap. please changed another pattern.
04:19:154 - add note

Sorry Late. and Sorry. Easy and Troogle's Normal needs more work. (please gets 3~5mod)
Looks Weice's Hard and Apple and rui's Insane are fine to me. (I do mod by the next check!)

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-05T09:57:39+00:00

Satellite wrote:
[Easy]
00:35:566 (3) - The sound of the down beat should respond. So let's do reverse already once.
00:40:507 (4) - When you do it blanket becomes better more neatly. fixed
img
00:42:625 (2) - If it is symmetric placement,please do fix this place. fixed
00:51:801 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please. fixed
00:53:213 (1,2) - Same as above. change the rhythm
01:04:507 (1) - add Finish add whistle and Addition : S. You forget to perform it. fixed
01:05:566 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - 01:05:566 (3,4) - Stack at this place is unfavorable. and 01:10:154 - Make 1/1 slider too fit this place. fixedTry this code from 01:05:566 (3) - ~ 01:12:625 -
172,52,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,108,65919,2,0,B|76:176|136:224|136:224|124:276,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,67331,6,0,P|256:352|312:328,1,120
386,271,68390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,271,68742,2,0,B|376:224|376:224|436:176|416:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,70154,6,0,B|308:76|324:136|324:136|296:124|260:128,1,180
172,92,71566,6,0,B|144:148|172:220|172:220|138:253,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:21:448 (2,1) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. and 01:21:448 (2) - add Finish on slider head and end. I think fit try this.fixed
01:24:272 (2,1) - You must not disturb distance snap to make symmetric placement. fixed
01:32:742 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Same as part 01:21:448 (2) - this one ? fixed
01:51:095 (1,2,1,2) - e.eh? Why do you not use distance snap? about x1.6 fixed
02:01:683 (2,3,1) - This stack is very dangerous. Try an arrange like this. fixed
img
02:10:860 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. ummmm...no change
02:17:919 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - here.fixed
02:26:389 (1) - No need New Combo. Remove it.fixed
02:35:566 (5,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.fixed
02:47:566 (2) - add Finish on slider end.fixed
03:34:154 (1) - add Finish better.fixed
03:38:389 (1) - Same as above.fixed
03:45:448 (1,2) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. sorry, no change
04:26:390 - Same as above.
fixed

Sorry Late. and Sorry. Easy and Troogle's Normal needs more work. (please gets 3~5mod)
Looks Weice's Hard and Apple and rui's Insane are fine to me. (I do mod by the next check!)

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-11-06T00:47:29+00:00

and sorry. Easy diff Can you changed slider velocity 0.6 is too low. please change 0.8. because Normal diff SV1.12 for mapset balance...

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-06T05:28:40+00:00

Satellite wrote:
and sorry. Easy diff Can you changed slider velocity 0.6 is too low. please change 0.8. because Normal diff SV1.12 for mapset balance...

oh..... Looks like I need to remap again...? If I change to 0.8.

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-11-06T06:06:23+00:00

Accel World wrote:
Satellite wrote:
and sorry. Easy diff Can you changed slider velocity 0.6 is too low. please change 0.8. because Normal diff SV1.12 for mapset balance...
oh..... Looks like I need to remap again...? If I change to 0.8.

Probably Easy slider velocity 0.6 -> Normal slider velocity 1.12 is diffspread very large imo.
It is possible even to change SV of Normal diff. Please call me once again if you do not want to change it

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-06T07:22:28+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Probably Easy slider velocity 0.6 -> Normal slider velocity 1.12 is diffspread very large imo.
It is possible even to change SV of Normal diff. Please call me once again if you do not want to change it

remapping now

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

4,298 posts

Joined July 2011

[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2014-11-06T08:14:37+00:00

ez:
00:50:389 (1) - 我觉得不要叠起来比较好吧拉开就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2209028
01:10:154 (4) - new combo呀
02:08:742 (2) - 不好看重新拉一下
clap不好听最好换个custom音效

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-06T09:47:02+00:00

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
ez:
00:50:389 (1) - 我觉得不要叠起来比较好吧拉开就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2209028 可是ds不允许怎么办
01:10:154 (4) - new combo呀 fixed
02:08:742 (2) - 不好看重新拉一下 fixed
clap不好听最好换个custom音效

伤心啊，不知道用什么音效

Citrus

744 posts

Joined January 2011

Citrus 2014-11-06T12:56:01+00:00

I难度的PreviewTime改成70154
[Easy]
00:25:683 (2) - not snapped
00:37:683 (3) - ^
02:13:683 (1) - ^

00:41:919 (1) -

01:22:860 (1) - 包得好看一点
01:27:095 (3) - ^
03:28:860 (2) - ^
03:36:978 (1) - ^

02:22:154 (1) -

这样浪漫一点

360,252,142154,6,0,B|336:324|251:321|251:321|187:267|218:197,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

音效方面，soft-clap和soft-slidertick的声音太轻了，建议换一个；这首歌用24Clap就可以了，SB闪光的地方加Finish

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-06T13:19:09+00:00

thou bad wrote:

I难度的PreviewTime改成70154
[Easy]
00:25:683 (2) - not snapped fixed
00:37:683 (3) - ^ fixed
02:13:683 (1) - ^ fixed

00:41:919 (1) -
01:22:860 (1) - 包得好看一点 fixed
01:27:095 (3) - ^ fixed
03:28:860 (2) - ^ fixed
03:36:978 (1) - ^ fixed

02:22:154 (1) -
这样浪漫一点 fixed
360,252,142154,6,0,B|336:324|251:321|251:321|187:267|218:197,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
音效方面，soft-clap和soft-slidertick的声音太轻了，建议换一个；这首歌用24Clap就可以了，SB闪光的地方加Finish

[ Joey ]

390 posts

Joined May 2013

[ Joey ] 2014-11-07T02:57:34+00:00

Hi Accel! ~m4m~

Easy
00:02:390 - Why didn't you map this part?

00:28:154 (2,3) - I think stacks like this are hard for beginners to read properly, and it's an easy diff, so I recommend removing the stack and distance snapping normally.
00:29:919 (4,5) - ^
00:33:095 (1,2) - ^
00:38:742 (4,1) - ^
00:47:566 (1,2,1) - It's better if you lengthen all three of these sliders by a white tick. So the sliders end on 00:48:625 - 00:50:037 - and 00:51:448 - I don't really like how so many white ticks are skipped. It sounds like they are somewhat important notes to map
00:53:213 (1,2) - ^
00:58:860 (3,4,1) - ^
01:05:919 (3) - It feels better if the red anchor in this slider lined up with the clap
01:07:331 - This ryhthm fits better: http://puu.sh/cGjrg/aff3b26e86.jpg
01:10:154 (1,1) - Stack can be confusing for an easy
01:23:919 (2,3) - Ya you might want to double check with someone else if these stacks are ok in an easy, because I'm not sure
01:51:095 (1,2) - Sliders kinda ugly, i think you can make them look better
02:13:331 - Same idea as earlier with this part. I would prefer if not so many white ticks were skipped.
02:30:625 (1) - The music doesn't really call for a long slider like this
03:28:507 (1,2) - Can blanket better
04:13:331 (4) - Is this the correct clap hitsound?
04:13:331 (4) - I would consider just ending the map here

Normal
00:26:390 (3,3) - I don't really like these reverse sliders. I would just change them to 2/1 sliders http://puu.sh/cGkB7/fd98384cba.jpg
00:49:860 (4) - Remove this note
01:18:096 (2,3,5,6) - Double like there are kinda difficult for a normal
02:00:272 (2,4) - It could be an issue that slider 2 is covering the reverse arrow of 4.
02:52:507 (2,3) - Can blanket better
04:26:037 - I don't really like these clap hitsounds that start here. Consider changing them to a custom hitsound
I think this diff needs a little work on slider placement. Try to make more intersted combos

Good luck with your map!
Thanks for the m4m

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-07T06:35:33+00:00

[ Joey ] wrote:
Hi Accel! ~m4m~

Easy
00:02:390 - Why didn't you map this part? fixed
00:28:154 (2,3) - I think stacks like this are hard for beginners to read properly, and it's an easy diff, so I recommend removing the stack and distance snapping normally. no change
00:29:919 (4,5) - ^ no change
00:33:095 (1,2) - ^ no change
00:38:742 (4,1) - ^ no change
00:47:566 (1,2,1) - It's better if you lengthen all three of these sliders by a white tick. So the sliders end on 00:48:625 - 00:50:037 - and 00:51:448 - I don't really like how so many white ticks are skipped. It sounds like they are somewhat important notes to map
00:53:213 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:58:860 (3,4,1) - ^ fixed
01:05:919 (3) - It feels better if the red anchor in this slider lined up with the clap
01:07:331 - This ryhthm fits better: http://puu.sh/cGjrg/aff3b26e86.jpg no change
01:10:154 (1,1) - Stack can be confusing for an easy no change
01:23:919 (2,3) - Ya you might want to double check with someone else if these stacks are ok in an easy, because I'm not sure
01:51:095 (1,2) - Sliders kinda ugly, i think you can make them look better fixed
02:13:331 - Same idea as earlier with this part. I would prefer if not so many white ticks were skipped. fixed
02:30:625 (1) - The music doesn't really call for a long slider like this no change
03:28:507 (1,2) - Can blanket better fixed
04:13:331 (4) - Is this the correct clap hitsound? fixed
04:13:331 (4) - I would consider just ending the map here
Are you sure????

Good luck with your map!
Thanks for the m4m

thank you!

Sharlo

667 posts

Joined May 2012

Sharlo 2014-11-07T16:59:11+00:00

As request.

Easy

Close Widescreen Support.
Inherited Points:
offset 8478 Should this one be a S:C1 Sample?
offset 253331 Extra green line
01:02:742 (4,1) - blanket
01:10:154 (1,1) - Maybe a bit hard for a Easy diff lol But, well if BAT suppose it is not a big issue.
01:16:860 (4) - add circle here. When I mod the previous part I feel that your rhythm is Concentrated which make this Empty beat be weird.
02:22:154 (1) - finish on the tail
04:22:154 (1) - finish

Nice for me.

看卫星的意思好像是Normal也需要找mpd？

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2014-11-08T05:29:18+00:00

[Easy]

01:15:801 (3) - End of slider next white line

01:53:919 (1,2) - This overlap is not good in Easy. It is suggestion of the placement.

296,60,113919,6,0,P|259:128|276:205,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,42,115331,2,0,P|448:77|479:149,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,340,116742,5,2,0:0:0:0:

02:16:507 (1) - (nazi) a little overlap. flip horizontal? http://puu.sh/cHLOm.jpg
02:30:625 (1) - How about this Rhythm http://puu.sh/cHMqY.jpg
03:28:860 (2) - (nazi) sloppy this slider.
03:30:978 (X) - add note?
03:32:390 (X) - ^
04:11:919 (2) - stack is better

Good Easy diff

[Normal]

There are too too many spins this diff. You should delete some spins imo.
00:10:154 (3) - http://puu.sh/cHSqY.jpg
00:34:154 (2) - How about rhythm? bcz want to follow big sound in 00:34:684. http://puu.sh/cHSL1.jpg
00:51:801 (4) - end of slider before red line and add note 00:52:331 http://puu.sh/cHSZs.jpg
00:56:036 (1) - delete this spin? and how is the rhythm? http://puu.sh/cHTjT.jpg
01:03:095 (3) - same as 00:51:801 (4)
01:06:448 (5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/cHTA2.jpg
01:07:684 (1) - delete this spin? not match music this spin imo. and how is the rhythm http://puu.sh/cIesu.jpg
01:12:801 (3) - change reverse slider http://puu.sh/cHTRf.jpg
01:29:919 (3) - end of slider before white line and add note 01:30:448
01:30:801 (4,1,2) - feel it slightly rhythm. how about this? http://puu.sh/cHUc5.jpg
02:32:742 (5) - move to before red line and add note 02:33:448
02:33:801 (1) - same as 01:07:684
02:38:742 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeDQ.jpg
02:50:213 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeMC.jpg
02:54:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part feel strange. How about this? http://puu.sh/cIeYH.jpg
03:18:095 (3) - http://puu.sh/cIfbt.jpg
03:26:919 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/cIfh2.jpg
03:28:860 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfxC.jpg
03:45:801 (3,4,5) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfIp.jpg
03:48:272 (1,2,3,4) - How about rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfOm.jpg

Good luck[/quote]

Last edited by rui 2014-11-08T16:04:56+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-08T10:48:22+00:00

Sharlo wrote:
As request.

Easy
Close Widescreen Support. fixed
Inherited Points:
offset 8478 Should this one be a S:C1 Sample? fixed
offset 253331 Extra green line there is no green line....
01:02:742 (4,1) - blanket fixed
01:10:154 (1,1) - Maybe a bit hard for a Easy diff lol But, well if BAT suppose it is not a big issue. ummmm, no change
01:16:860 (4) - add circle here. When I mod the previous part I feel that your rhythm is Concentrated which make this Empty beat be weird. fixed
02:22:154 (1) - finish on the tail fixed
04:22:154 (1) - finish fixed

Nice for me.
看卫星的意思好像是Normal也需要找mpd？是...

Thanks for mod~

rui wrote:
[Easy]
01:15:801 (3) - End of slider next white line fixed
01:53:919 (1,2) - This overlap is not good in Easy. It is suggestion of the placement. fixed
296,60,113919,6,0,P|259:128|276:205,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,42,115331,2,0,P|448:77|479:149,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,340,116742,5,2,0:0:0:0:
02:16:507 (1) - (nazi) a little overlap. flip horizontal? http://puu.sh/cHLOm.jpg fixed
02:30:625 (1) - How about this Rhythm http://puu.sh/cHMqY.jpg fixed
03:28:860 (2) - (nazi) sloppy this slider. what is sloppy....?
03:30:978 (X) - add note? fixed
03:32:390 (X) - ^ fixed
04:11:919 (2) - stack is better
fixed

Good Easy diff thank you rui~

Kodora

Kodora 2014-11-08T12:18:03+00:00

Modding easiest diffs as requested

[Easy]

*Biggest circle size isn't really recommended for anything, and such huge circle size doesn't fit calm pace of map. Please consider raising it by 1 tick (CS3)
*Raise AR by 1 tick to improve readability - 2 feels too slow, considering note density here.
*This diff have so many 1/1 stacks - they aren't recommended as for easiest difficulty, considering how fast BPM is. Althought they are consistent, i afraid that they might be too hard as for the easiest diff - can you please re-consider their usage here? >.<

00:02:390 (1) - Add whistle to tail follow vocals
00:02:390 (1,3) - Can you please re-space them a bit please here to avoid this overlap? It didn't looks well here
00:04:507 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals
00:06:978 (4) - I'd remove whistle from here & add it to head of next slider
00:08:037 (1) - Whistle to head of slider
00:10:860 (1) - I'd remove clap from here & leave just hitnormal - sounds better for me
00:28:507 (3) - Add whistle to the head of slider follow vocals
00:29:919 (4) - Whistle
00:30:272 (5) - Finish to tail
00:33:448 (2) - I don't think that this 4/1 repeat-slider is really works well with music - making long sliders for dropping difficulty isn't really works well, and makes this part sounds plain. Try to correlate this part with music more, something like this:

SPOILER
00:37:684 (3) - Whistle to head
00:39:095 (1) - ^
00:41:919 (1) - Missed finish on head
00:42:625 (2) - Missed whistle on repeat
00:44:742 (1) - This spinner feels too fast for easiest diff - beginners needs time to react on spinners, so making it such short isn't really works well for Easy. How about replace it with slider?
00:52:507 (4) - Missed finish on head
00:58:860 (3) - Lol, old linear slider XD Hovewer, i think it'd flows much better as just regular curved one.
01:00:272 (1) - and make this one just simple liear - for better flow:

SPOILER
01:10:154 (1,1) - Such slider overlaps are too confusing for beginners to be used at easiest diff - they would be very hard to read, especially considering low AR. Try to make it more clean here, for example something like this:

SPOILER
01:14:390 (1,3) - Re-space them please to avoid overlap
01:15:801 (3) - Here should be finish on head too, for consistency
01:18:272 (2) - This semi-hiden note might be confusing for beginners. Try to re-arrange placement a bit so it'd be more clean:

SPOILER
01:18:625 (3) - Finish follow vocals
01:20:037 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle
01:22:331 - Sounds very empty without a note here :<
01:27:095 (3) - Finish to head follow vocals
01:29:919 (3,1) - ^ (to both)
01:31:331 (1) - ^
01:53:919 (1,2) - Finishes instead of whistles sounds much better for me
01:56:742 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
01:59:566 (1) - Same as 00:33:448 (2) -
02:03:801 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals
02:06:625 (3) - ^
02:08:037 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
02:10:154 (4) - Whistle follow vocals
02:18:625 (3) - Missed finish on head
02:19:331 (1,3) - Such overlaps are too hard to read for beginners; fully hidden notes shouldn't be used on Easiest diffs. Can you please move it a bit down so it'd be more visible?
02:24:272 (3) - Needs whistle on head
02:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head
02:33:448 (3) - Missed finish
02:34:860 (3) - Remove finish and leave just hitnormal - it doesn't fits here
02:46:154 (1) - Needs finish on head follow vocals
02:47:566 (3) - end this slider at 02:48:625 - and add clap to tail so it'd mach music better
02:53:213 (3) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals
02:57:448 (1) - ^
03:29:919 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals
03:31:331 (1) - ^
03:32:742 (3) - ^
03:33:801 - Feels empty without note here
03:35:566 (3) - Needs whistle to head follow vocals
03:36:978 (1) - ^
03:38:390 (3) - ^
03:53:919 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle
04:02:390 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
04:05:213 (1) - ^
04:08:742 (2,3) - This 1/2 feels so random, considering that you followed drums here all the time. Make it regular 1/1 as you did it before
04:12:272 (3) - Needs finish
04:16:507 (1) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals
04:18:978 (4,1) - This feels kinda counter-flow - how about ctrl+g at 04:19:331 (1) - and re-arrange placement for the next note?
04:26:390 (1,1,1,1,2) - This was so empty ;_; Usually end of map should be most powerful & challenging part - in your case it looks very empty, which is just unfitting song :< Can you please make it harder a bit?

Overral needs more work at hitsounds and rhythm - too much 1/1 lthough whole map - try to bright more variety at rhythm to make it more interesting.

[Troogle's Normal]

*Shouldn't it be -Google-'s Normal due to username change? (If no, fix the storyboard cuz it wrotes "Beatmap by -Google-")
*CS3 feels really big & unfitting to the overral calm pace of map - can you please raise it by 1 tick? 4 would look here much better, imo

00:13:684 (1) - Nah, this spinner comes totally out of place & doesn't even follows song well. Just unify breaks with other diffs please.
00:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head
00:45:448 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal - even auto barely gets 4000, that'd be simple too hard for beginners. Just replace it with slider please.
00:48:448 (2,3) - for all next doubles like these (00:49:860 (5,6) - 00:51:272 (2,3) - and all similiar ones though the map) - they better looks and plays as perfectly stacked, can you please stack them so they'd looks better?
01:12:625 (2,3) - Can you please stack this note with head? That'd make this part easier to catch.
01:14:389 (1,3) - Please don't to this at Normal diffs - such stacks would be pretty tricky for beginners, and there is high chance for them that they'd misread it. This can be solved easily; just unstack it tiny bit, so this note would be more visible - something like this:

SPOILER
01:30:978 (1) - Missed finish on tail
01:52:154 (2) - Incorrectly snapped slider: it should be snapped like this if you wants to follow drums properly:

SPOILER
01:54:978 (2) - Same as above
01:56:213 - Feels weird that you're ignoreing trong drums here, and it might confuse beginners as well - what about add short 1/2 slider to solve it? something like this:~

SPOILER
02:01:684 (4) - Repeat of this slider is almost hidden by hitburst from 02:00:272 (2) - which would be very confusing for beginners - can you please move it a bit away so it'd be move visible?
02:02:389 (1) - missed finish on head
02:47:566 (3) - Needs finish on head follow vocals
02:48:801 (5,1) - They plays better as stacked
02:54:448 (5,1) - how about make it as 1/2 slider instead of 2 notes so it'd be more beginner-friendly?
03:17:566 - 03:28:111 - Ah, this section sounds so empty almost without hitsounds - can you please add some soft-whistles follow vocals during this section?
03:37:331 (1) - This should be 1/2 slider to be consistent with your previous rhythm
04:05:213 (1) - Finish to head follow vocals

Good luck!

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2014-11-08T16:03:23+00:00

mistake

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-08T16:27:04+00:00

Kodora wrote:
Modding easiest diffs as requested

[Easy]

*Biggest circle size isn't really recommended for anything, and such huge circle size doesn't fit calm pace of map. Please consider raising it by 1 tick (CS3) fixed
*Raise AR by 1 tick to improve readability - 2 feels too slow, considering note density here. fixed
*This diff have so many 1/1 stacks - they aren't recommended as for easiest difficulty, considering how fast BPM is. Althought they are consistent, i afraid that they might be too hard as for the easiest diff - can you please re-consider their usage here? >.<

00:02:390 (1) - Add whistle to tail follow vocals fixed
00:02:390 (1,3) - Can you please re-space them a bit please here to avoid this overlap? It didn't looks well here fixed
00:04:507 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals fixed
00:06:978 (4) - I'd remove whistle from here & add it to head of next slider fixed
00:08:037 (1) - Whistle to head of slider fixed
00:10:860 (1) - I'd remove clap from here & leave just hitnormal - sounds better for me fixed
00:28:507 (3) - Add whistle to the head of slider follow vocals fixed
00:29:919 (4) - Whistle fixed
00:30:272 (5) - Finish to tail fixed
00:33:448 (2) - I don't think that this 4/1 repeat-slider is really works well with music - making long sliders for dropping difficulty isn't really works well, and makes this part sounds plain. Try to correlate this part with music more, something like this: fixed
SPOILER
00:37:684 (3) - Whistle to head fixed
00:39:095 (1) - ^ fixed
00:41:919 (1) - Missed finish on head fixed
00:42:625 (2) - Missed whistle on repeat fixed
00:44:742 (1) - This spinner feels too fast for easiest diff - beginners needs time to react on spinners, so making it such short isn't really works well for Easy. How about replace it with slider? fixed
00:52:507 (4) - Missed finish on head fixed
00:58:860 (3) - Lol, old linear slider XD Hovewer, i think it'd flows much better as just regular curved one. fixed
01:00:272 (1) - and make this one just simple liear - for better flow: fixed

SPOILER
01:10:154 (1,1) - Such slider overlaps are too confusing for beginners to be used at easiest diff - they would be very hard to read, especially considering low AR. Try to make it more clean here, for example something like this: fixed

SPOILER
01:14:390 (1,3) - Re-space them please to avoid overlap fixed
01:15:801 (3) - Here should be finish on head too, for consistency fixed
01:18:272 (2) - This semi-hiden note might be confusing for beginners. Try to re-arrange placement a bit so it'd be more clean: fixed

SPOILER
01:18:625 (3) - Finish follow vocals fixed
01:20:037 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle fixed
01:22:331 - Sounds very empty without a note here :<
01:27:095 (3) - Finish to head follow vocals fixed
01:29:919 (3,1) - ^ (to both) fixed
01:31:331 (1) - ^ fixed
01:53:919 (1,2) - Finishes instead of whistles sounds much better for me fixed
01:56:742 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
01:59:566 (1) - Same as 00:33:448 (2) - fixed
02:03:801 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals fixed
02:06:625 (3) - ^ fixed
02:08:037 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
02:10:154 (4) - Whistle follow vocals fixed
02:18:625 (3) - Missed finish on head fixed
02:19:331 (1,3) - Such overlaps are too hard to read for beginners; fully hidden notes shouldn't be used on Easiest diffs. Can you please move it a bit down so it'd be more visible? I think it's visible
02:24:272 (3) - Needs whistle on head fixed
02:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head fixed
02:33:448 (3) - Missed finish fixed
02:34:860 (3) - Remove finish and leave just hitnormal - it doesn't fits here fixed
02:46:154 (1) - Needs finish on head follow vocals fixed
02:47:566 (3) - end this slider at 02:48:625 - and add clap to tail so it'd mach music better fixed
02:53:213 (3) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals fixed
02:57:448 (1) - ^ fixed
03:29:919 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals fixed
03:31:331 (1) - ^ fixed
03:32:742 (3) - ^ fixed
03:33:801 - Feels empty without note here
03:35:566 (3) - Needs whistle to head follow vocals fixed
03:36:978 (1) - ^ fixed
03:38:390 (3) - ^ fixed
03:53:919 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle fixed
04:02:390 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
04:05:213 (1) - ^ fixed
04:08:742 (2,3) - This 1/2 feels so random, considering that you followed drums here all the time. Make it regular 1/1 as you did it before
04:12:272 (3) - Needs finish fixed
04:16:507 (1) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals fixed
04:18:978 (4,1) - This feels kinda counter-flow - how about ctrl+g at 04:19:331 (1) - and re-arrange placement for the next note? I can't understand your meaning
04:26:390 (1,1,1,1,2) - This was so empty ;_; Usually end of map should be most powerful & challenging part - in your case it looks very empty, which is just unfitting song :< Can you please make it harder a bit?

Overral needs more work at hitsounds and rhythm - too much 1/1 lthough whole map - try to bright more variety at rhythm to make it more interesting.

Good luck!

Thanks for mod, kodora #:3

Satellite

3,683 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2014-11-10T03:54:37+00:00

I'll recheck soon! sorry late ;_;

(Probably posting weekend)

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-11-14T11:25:30+00:00

Satellite

Satellite wrote:
00:34:154 (2) - I think that it is a slider of strange form. Try this ? If you are changed. Please correct the later part by yourself.
Changed the rhythm here...I don't really like long sliders...
00:53:213 (1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
It as a good square T^T,Fixed anyway
01:21:978 (5,6) - This spacing is really awkward. Try this rhythm.

I really think there is a "stop" in the song and should not be linked with one slider
02:50:213 (3,4) - Changed this rhythm.

To do this I messed up the next flow T^T
03:27:978 (5,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this.

Accept the rui's rhythm
03:39:625 - add note
Don't think it's necessary..

Joey

[ Joey ] wrote:
Normal
00:26:390 (3,3) - I don't really like these reverse sliders. I would just change them to 2/1 sliders http://puu.sh/cGkB7/fd98384cba.jpg
Keep for now
00:49:860 (4) - Remove this note
I don't really see why...
01:18:096 (2,3,5,6) - Double like there are kinda difficult for a normal
Hmmm...I think they are fine
02:00:272 (2,4) - It could be an issue that slider 2 is covering the reverse arrow of 4.
Nope..The slider 2 disappeared before 4 appear
02:52:507 (2,3) - Can blanket better
Fixed
04:26:037 - I don't really like these clap hitsounds that start here. Consider changing them to a custom hitsound
Sorry but I really like them > <

rui

rui wrote:
00:51:801 (4) - end of slider before red line and add note 00:52:331 http://puu.sh/cHSZs.jpg
LoL it was indeed the old rhythm but changed to decrease the *old* stars, fixed
00:56:036 (1) - delete this spin? and how is the rhythm? http://puu.sh/cHTjT.jpg
I think the length of the spin is fine..
Use the rhythm in the 2nd part of the song thx ><!
01:06:448 (5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/cHTA2.jpg
Accept but delete the note on the big white line
01:07:684 (1) - delete this spin? not match music this spin imo. and how is the rhythm http://puu.sh/cIesu.jpg
I would keep to reserve some peace before the kiai comes
01:30:801 (4,1,2) - feel it slightly rhythm. how about this? http://puu.sh/cHUc5.jpg
It was intend to follow the lyrics...
02:32:742 (5) - move to before red line and add note 02:33:448
Really a hard rhythm though...use it anyway
02:38:742 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeDQ.jpg
Changed to another form
02:50:213 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeMC.jpg
Accept the Satellite's rhythm
02:54:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part feel strange. How about this? http://puu.sh/cIeYH.jpg
Keep the current one to follow the lyrics
03:26:919 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/cIfh2.jpg
Take (3,4) and keep 5 as current one
03:28:860 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfxC.jpg
Take (2,3,4,5) and keep 6 as current one

Kodora

Kodora wrote:
*Shouldn't it be -Google-'s Normal due to username change? (If no, fix the storyboard cuz it wrotes "Beatmap by -Google-")
Nope..I choose troogle's xxx to keep consistent with all the GDs I made
*CS3 feels really big & unfitting to the overral calm pace of map - can you please raise it by 1 tick? 4 would look here much better, imo
I know it..but for the diff spread the easy have CS2 and Hard have CS4 and I think CS3 is fine.

00:45:448 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal - even auto barely gets 4000, that'd be simple too hard for beginners. Just replace it with slider please.
Even 2000 is rankedable though...Fixed
01:14:389 (1,3) - Please don't to this at Normal diffs - such stacks would be pretty tricky for beginners, and there is high chance for them that they'd misread it. This can be solved easily; just unstack it tiny bit, so this note would be more visible - something like this:
Well..no.. This was intend to add some difficuity
01:56:213 - Feels weird that you're ignoreing trong drums here, and it might confuse beginners as well - what about add short 1/2 slider to solve it? something like this:~
Nope..if so I need to keep the ds here and it's really hard to arrange
03:17:566 - 03:28:111 - Ah, this section sounds so empty almost without hitsounds - can you please add some soft-whistles follow vocals during this section?
I think this section is not that empty..
03:37:331 (1) - This should be 1/2 slider to be consistent with your previous rhythm
Keep the current one

Mods which you have but not listed above are all fixed!
Thank you all the guys

updated

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Tags:VOCALOID 初音ミク Hatsune Miku きりたんP kiritan-P apple niconico Sharlo weiren rui Troogle Twice Kurokami Weice
BeatmapID:340285
BeatmapSetID:92179

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.12
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,14060,23778
2,100001,109895
2,186119,196013
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Vocal.png",320,240
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Beatmap2.png",320,240
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Skin.png",320,240
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Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"SB\Title.png",320,240
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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Accel World

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Accel World 2014-11-14T17:13:53+00:00

ok, update google‘s normal

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Satellite 2014-11-18T09:25:08+00:00

Recheck

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Changed CS : 3
00:09:448 (1) - Remove New combo. not need New combo here.
00:33:448 (2) - add finish on slider end ?
00:41:919 (1) - Distance snapped missing. Check this
00:44:742 (1) - Overlap this slider. please changed this ?
img

01:59:213 (5,1,2,1,2) - Same as above. Try this code

104,252,119213,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,252,119566,6,0,P|120:300|308:240,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,121331,2,0,B|226:63|135:106|135:106|148:140|148:176,1,240,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,236,122742,6,0,P|112:260|152:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,208,123448,1,8,0:0:0:0:

02:23:919 (2,3) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try this pattern?
img
02:34:860 (3) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this ?
img
03:02:390 (4) - Try "Ctrl + G" ? :3

03:32:742 (3,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. code is "03:32:742 (1,2,1,2) - "this place.

suggestion

148,52,212742,6,0,P|176:100|168:164,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,213625,2,0,P|284:228|344:244,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,214507,6,0,P|436:256|384:156,1,160
356,64,215566,2,0,L|180:64,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

03:49:684 (3) - add finish on slider head.
03:53:919 (1) - remove finish on slider head.
03:55:331 (3) - add finish on slider end.
03:56:213 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah.
img
04:17:919 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
04:17:919 - finish 04:18:448 - finish 04:18:801 - whistle 04:19:154 - whistle

suggestion
```
224,136,257919,6,0,L|376:136,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,258801,2,0,P|420:196|388:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```
04:34:507 (1,2) - Why did you use the pattern different in only here? Try this rhythm.

[-Google-'s Normal]

01:06:448 (5,6) - I think that this is very dangerous. Try changed this pattern ?

img

392,168,66448,6,0,P|367:118|372:63,2,112,2|8|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,67331,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:25:154 (1) - Remove New combo here. I think not need New combo.
02:34:154 (2) - Try "Ctrl + G" ?
02:59:742 (4,5,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
03:01:684 (4) - add New combo. because please check first kiai time 01:35:566 (1) -
03:27:978 (5,1) - *sorry re mod suggestion. Do you not switch to a slider? Because a sound is prolonged.
03:33:625 (5,1) - Same ask above.
03:39:272 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
03:43:684 - add note ?
03:55:331 (3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think a melody to respond.
04:07:507 (4,5) - same as 03:27:978 (5,1) -
04:10:860 (1) - add finish on slider head.
04:18:801 (4,5,1) - This spacing is really awkward. please changed slider pattern?
04:20:742 (4) - add Nc. and 04:22:154 (1) - remove Nc. please check first kiai time 01:35:566 (1,5) -

[Weice's Hard]

HP Drain -1 for Harder this Hard and Mapset balance.
00:27:625 (9) - Move X 248 Y 200 ? I think that it is a better flow.
img
00:48:801 (6) - Distance snap mistake here. move x 76 y 112
00:51:448 (1,2) - should be changed Ctrl + G too hard this place.
01:13:684 (8) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
01:22:507 (8) - It is not preferable to use this jump in the Hard diff. please changed another pattern.
01:30:272 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
02:13:684 (1) - Remove New combo ? please check first place.
02:17:919 (4,5,6,7) - It is a too big jump. Please lower it a little more.
02:30:625 (2,3,4) - Try this rhythm.
02:34:154 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:22:507 (8) -
03:33:095 (6,7) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this.
03:36:801 (1,2) - Swap Nc here. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well.
03:39:272 (1) - Please listen here. I think this rhythm better. What's do you think ?
Really awesome Hard. I think that consecutive circle is too difficult in Hard in last kiai time. Please change some Circle to Slider.

[Apple]

rui's Insane and Apple diff same AR8.5. Apple diff let's changed AR9 ?
I suggest some mod increasing Star Diff for custom diffname If you are use "Apple" Please think in various ways.
00:08:037 (1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
00:13:684 (3) - I'm not sure. Why used strange slider ? Please changed this
00:27:978 (1) - Try move X:392 Y:272 ?

00:30:448 (8) - Try move X:172 Y:192 ?

img

172,192,30448,6,0,P|156:188|136:188,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:31:860 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm. (little a overmap rhythm) and placement suggestion.

suggestion

suggestion2

code 00:31:860 - ~ 00:33:272 -

412,124,31860,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,104,31948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,32037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,32213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,32390,2,0,L|328:76,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,184,32742,2,0,L|252:114,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,33095,2,0,L|176:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

00:45:448 (3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ?
00:48:978 (6) - Changed "CTRL + G" ? I think more better flow.
00:54:448 (4) - Try move X:220 Y;244 ? Because the sound of this place ( 00:54:625 - )is strong, I think that the one where I put a small jump fits it more

01:01:684 (1,2,3) - mmm Do you not clean it more?

img

212,244,61684,6,0,B|168:244|168:244|128:192|128:192|96:192,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,363,62213,2,0,P|61:330|92:268,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
27,161,62742,2,0,P|19:195|32:228,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

01:03:978 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - This spacing is really awkward. Please changed this ?

img

code 01:04:154 - ~ 01:05:566 -

280,32,64154,6,0,P|312:24|348:28,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,64507,5,6,0:2:0:0:
176,184,64684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,64860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,284,65037,2,0,P|356:256|428:256,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,260,65478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,264,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:

01:07:154 (6,7,8) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
01:12:272 (3) - Not much melody this jump. move this ?
suggestion
01:14:213 (1,2) - Swap, New combo here.

01:15:448 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah Try this pattern ?

img

code 01:15:448 - ~ 01:17:037 -

471,58,75448,6,0,L|404:40,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,75801,2,0,L|492:184,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,292,76331,2,0,P|436:232|408:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,76772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,156,76860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,140,77037,1,0,0:0:0:0:

01:21:272 (9) - Should be use Distance snap *1.4 better. So, moved X:244 Y:80 better.
01:21:448 (1) - add finish on slider head. and Additoons : Soft
01:32:566 (5) - Move X:208 Y:272. Because the sound of this place ( 01:32:742 - )is strong, I think that the one where I put a small jump fits it more

01:35:566 (4) - Try this my suggestion. Because rhythm is too monotonous, do you not make it hard a little more? for star rating.

348,268,95566,6,0,P|276:272|200:264,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,204,96095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,96625,2,0,L|256:128,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

01:38:037 (1) - Remove New combo. not need this place.
01:43:684 (3) - Try move X:232 Y:352 ? 01:44:390 (5) - and this too.
img
01:45:448 (6) - add New combo. you are pattern.
01:56:037 - add note this. for rhythm.
02:06:007 - add note ? for back melody. please listen this.
02:07:684 (9) - Try "Ctrl + G" more better flow.
02:09:801 (1,2,3) - Try an arrange like this.
02:11:390 (5,6) - Move X:380 Y:68 please don't overlap on slider end.
img
02:15:007 - add note ?
02:17:566 (3,4,5,6) - Really nice pattern. But too jump not fit this place. Please changed another pattern.
02:47:566 (10) - add finish and Additions : Soft on slider head.
02:48:095 (11) - Same as above.
03:02:478 - add note
03:02:742 (6) - Same as here 00:13:684 (3) -
03:22:419 - add note
03:49:684 (7) - Try "CTRL + G"
03:55:331 (7,8) - add finish and Additions : Soft on slider head.
03:56:390 (1) - Remove New combo and 03:56:742 (5) - add New combo. you are pattern.
03:59:213 (1,2) - Swap, New combo.
04:08:742 (3,4) - Changed this rhythm.
04:15:095 (6) - Try "CTRL + G" I think more better flow.
04:22:154 (1) - Try gets back melody. Because rhythm is too monotonous, do you not make it hard a little more?

[rui's Insane]

irc

11:53 Satellite: 01:55:860 (4,5) - こういうところとか
11:53 Satellite: 02:07:154 (8,9) - こういうところを
11:53 Satellite: 簡略化すれば結構sd下がってくれると思うんだけどどうなんだ・・・
11:53 rui: そんな事でいいならするよ
11:54 Satellite: ほんといいdiffだから
11:54 Satellite: あまりかえたくないけど
11:54 Satellite: こういう要素を少しずつ直してくれれば多分sdさがってくれるとおもう・・・
11:54 rui: kk
11:55 Satellite: 02:31:948 - add noteしておいて！
11:57 Satellite: ircで悪いけどもう少し指摘出してもいい？
11:57 rui: 多少ランダム製が高い気はするけどね
11:58 rui: 平気よ
11:58 Satellite: 02:45:625 (2,3,4) -
11:58 Satellite: 02:45:978 (3) - これのendだけ音かなり強くなってるからかなり違和感あるんだけど
11:58 Satellite: どう感じる？
11:58 Satellite: ３だけを単発２個に分けるときれいに聞こえるけど
11:59 Satellite: ３個連続スライダーだと　ん？ってなった
12:00 rui: 単発でいいと思う
12:00 rui: この頃多分ボーカルフォロー徹底してるから
12:00 rui: あまり後ろの音聞いてないと思うのよね
12:00 Satellite: じゃあそれお願い！
12:00 Satellite: あと全部の気合を通してのことなんだけど
12:00 Satellite: 02:47:301 (4) - こういうところ
12:01 Satellite: 音なってないovermapだと思うけど簡略化のためにremoveする？
12:01 Satellite: １番なら 01:21:184 (4) -
12:01 Satellite: ラスト　03:55:066 (4) -
12:01 Satellite: ボーカルフォローするなら不要で
12:01 Satellite: 裏の音もないはず
12:02 rui: ok
12:02 Satellite: あともう１つも同じような指摘なんだけど
12:02 Satellite: 01:36:625 (6,7) - こういうの
12:02 Satellite: リズムめっちゃむずいし
12:02 Satellite: ２番と１番とかＤＳの値一致してないから
12:02 Satellite: 読みづらいと思うんだよね
12:03 Satellite: スライダーで繋いじゃわない？
12:03 Satellite: 音伸びてるし簡単になるけど・・・
12:03 Satellite: http://puu.sh/cXXdX/4fc45b8d0a.jpg
12:03 rui: めっちゃむずいのわかる
12:04 Satellite: キープしたいなら
12:04 Satellite: DSの間隔を統一したほうがいいと思う！
12:04 rui: もちろんワザとなんだけど、やっぱやりにくいよね
12:05 Satellite: いや、音あるしいいとは思うんだけど
12:05 Satellite: やっぱり読みづらいのは確か
12:05 rui: ボーカルが独立してるから目押しパート的な感じで作ったのよ猫子
12:05 rui: ねここ
12:06 rui: まあいいや直そう
12:07 Satellite: わかってるとはおもうけど、03:13:595 (1) - ここはめっちゃむずかしいとおもうｗ
12:07 rui: ここは変えない
12:08 rui: 音はあると思うんだ
12:08 Satellite: あるよ！
12:08 Satellite: drumがあるね
12:09 Satellite: あー
12:09 Satellite: Apple diffも
12:09 Satellite: ここつくらせるか
12:09 Satellite: Break TimeはいってるからSD低いのかもねえ
12:10 rui: それもあるだろうね
12:12 rui: SDさがらねｗｗｗ
12:12 Satellite: まあ大丈夫よ
12:12 Satellite: appleをあげるからなんとかなるっしょ
12:12 Satellite: あ、あと
12:12 Satellite: od7でお願い
12:13 rui: ホントありがとうね
12:13 rui: あ、はい
12:13 Satellite: ８だとAppleと同じになっちゃうから
12:13 Satellite: ちょっと差別化！
12:13 rui: ok

sorry late

　Call me back. I'll full mod again.

Last edited by Satellite 2014-11-20T04:03:50+00:00, edited 5 times in total.

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-18T09:58:16+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Recheck

[Easy]
Changed CS : 3
00:09:448 (1) - Remove New combo. not need New combo here.
00:33:448 (2) - add finish on slider end ?
00:41:919 (1) - Distance snapped missing. Check this
00:44:742 (1) - Overlap this slider. please changed this ?
img
01:59:213 (5,1,2,1,2) - Same as above. Try this code
104,252,119213,5,8,0:0:0:0:
104,252,119566,6,0,P|120:300|308:240,1,280,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,136,121331,2,0,B|226:63|135:106|135:106|148:140|148:176,1,240,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,236,122742,6,0,P|112:260|152:264,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,208,123448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
02:23:919 (2,3) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try this pattern?
img
02:34:860 (3) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. Try this ?
img
03:02:390 (4) - Try "Ctrl + G" ? :3
03:32:742 (3,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. code is "03:32:742 (1,2,1,2) - "this place.

suggestion
148,52,212742,6,0,P|176:100|168:164,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,240,213625,2,0,P|284:228|344:244,1,120,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,292,214507,6,0,P|436:256|384:156,1,160
356,64,215566,2,0,L|180:64,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:49:684 (3) - add finish on slider head.
03:53:919 (1) - remove finish on slider head.
03:55:331 (3) - add finish on slider end.
03:56:213 (4) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah.
img
04:17:919 (3,4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.
04:17:919 - finish 04:18:448 - finish 04:18:801 - whistle 04:19:154 - whistle

suggestion
224,136,257919,6,0,L|376:136,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,160,258801,2,0,P|420:196|388:220,1,80,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
04:34:507 (1,2) - Why did you use the pattern different in only here? Try this rhythm.
ALL fixed, Nice mod!

Nepu

211 posts

Joined September 2013

Nepu 2014-11-18T13:10:51+00:00

Satellite wrote:
01:06:448 (5,6) - I think that this is very dangerous. Try changed this pattern ?
img
392,168,66448,6,0,P|367:118|372:63,2,112,2|8|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,180,67331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:25:154 (1) - Remove New combo here. I think not need New combo.
Stupid mistake...Fixed
02:34:154 (2) - Try "Ctrl + G" ?
02:59:742 (4,5,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
03:01:684 (4) - add New combo. because please check first kiai time 01:35:566 (1) -
03:27:978 (5,1) - *sorry re mod suggestion. Do you not switch to a slider? Because a sound is prolonged.
03:33:625 (5,1) - Same ask above.
03:39:272 (4) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.

For these three..you see that 03:21:801 (5) - here we don't need to extand the slider...So I think that the current note-note should be fine...Also this note->slider change break the NC...With DS this change make the map quite ugly too...But since you insisted...I will fix.
03:43:684 - add note ?
03:55:331 (3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. I think a melody to respond.
04:07:507 (4,5) - same as 03:27:978 (5,1) -
04:10:860 (1) - add finish on slider head.
04:18:801 (4,5,1) - This spacing is really awkward. please changed slider pattern?
04:20:742 (4) - add Nc. and 04:22:154 (1) - remove Nc. please check first kiai time 01:35:566 (1,5) -

Fixed all of them, Really thx for the mod > <
[]
To Accel World: I like Troogle's Normal more to the -Google-'s Normal(I have rejected Kodora's mod), Also I think this is rankable diff name, plz do not change without inform me ;_; Thx

updated

osu file format v13

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AudioFilename: Romeo and Cinderella.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1504
PreviewTime: 70154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

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Title:Romeo and Cinderella
TitleUnicode:ロミオとシンデレラ
Artist:doriko
ArtistUnicode:doriko
Creator:Accel World
Version:Troogle's Normal
Source:
Tags:VOCALOID 初音ミク Hatsune Miku きりたんP kiritan-P apple niconico Sharlo weiren rui Troogle Twice Kurokami Weice
BeatmapID:340285
BeatmapSetID:92179

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.12
SliderTickRate:2

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352,264,159978,2,0,P|312:304|260:332,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,324,160507,6,0,P|156:304|116:200,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,104,161390,2,0,L|272:48,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,28,161919,2,0,P|379:80|392:161,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,136,162801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,216,163154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,172,163331,6,0,P|100:128|24:144,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
16,256,164213,2,0,L|53:297,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,300,164742,2,0,P|248:324|324:300,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,240,165625,2,0,P|376:200|323:184,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,188,166154,6,0,P|214:203|108:148,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,96,167037,2,0,P|263:94|310:65,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,68,167566,2,0,P|448:68|513:136,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,172,168448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,280,168801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,280,168978,6,0,P|352:332|312:364,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,260,169684,2,0,P|208:252|160:225,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,192,170213,2,0,P|81:147|66:87,2,112,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,171272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,164,171448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
237,274,171801,6,0,P|288:295|344:292,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,188,172507,2,0,P|360:180|412:200,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,296,173213,2,0,P|520:228|512:148,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,92,174095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,174448,6,0,P|300:160|272:180,1,56,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,100,174978,2,0,P|137:82|32:144,1,168,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
12,232,175860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
20,288,176037,2,0,P|55:331|105:354,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,332,176566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,312,176919,2,0,P|319:306|370:327,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,316,177448,6,0,P|456:238|429:160,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,100,178331,2,0,P|292:64|240:44,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,64,178860,2,0,P|128:128|128:208,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,168,179742,2,0,P|281:189|343:189,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,136,180272,5,4,0:2:0:0:
276,56,180625,2,0,L|220:76,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,120,181154,2,0,L|72:88,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,156,181684,5,0,0:0:0:0:
240,234,182037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
157,306,182390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
81,228,182742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
164,156,183095,2,0,P|270:143|334:229,1,224,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,184154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,339,184507,6,0,P|171:298|154:215,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
158,180,185213,2,0,L|171:95,2,84,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
109,207,185919,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,64,197213,5,4,0:1:0:0:
177,141,197566,2,0,L|177:197,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,160,198095,2,0,P|340:184|368:232,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,284,198625,1,4,0:3:0:0:
255,276,198978,2,0,L|186:275,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,275,199507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,162,199860,5,0,0:0:0:0:
86,162,200037,2,0,P|130:94|211:76,1,168,4|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,188,200919,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,140,201272,2,0,L|368:140,1,56,0|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
376,252,201801,2,0,P|313:305|231:301,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,192,202860,5,6,0:0:0:0:
184,116,203213,2,0,L|238:103,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,51,203742,2,0,P|342:111|329:159,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
356,202,204272,2,0,P|432:164|511:189,1,168,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,205154,1,8,0:1:0:0:
340,328,205507,1,8,0:1:0:0:
284,320,205684,6,0,L|156:284,1,112,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,260,206213,2,0,P|109:209|118:154,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,60,206919,1,8,0:1:0:0:
236,56,207095,2,0,P|316:72|364:152,1,168,2|8,1:2|0:1,0:0:0:0:
252,168,207978,2,0,P|168:148|84:168,1,168,12|4,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,260,208860,6,0,L|76:288,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,256,209390,2,0,P|239:248|298:278,1,112,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,312,209919,2,0,P|391:358|473:346,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,252,210801,1,2,0:2:0:0:
504,184,211154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,132,211331,6,0,P|461:79|420:41,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,72,211860,2,0,P|332:112|280:132,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,56,212566,2,0,L|140:84,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,192,213095,2,0,L|114:218,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
51,311,213625,2,0,P|3:246|15:164,1,168,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:2:0:0:
124,144,214507,6,0,L|180:144,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,215037,1,2,0:2:0:0:
312,324,215390,2,0,L|368:324,1,56,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
476,300,215919,2,0,P|433:230|353:214,1,168,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
300,200,216625,2,0,P|277:187|258:160,2,56,8|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
352,100,217331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
352,100,217507,6,0,P|307:66|253:52,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
200,68,218037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,120,218390,2,0,P|68:196|96:276,1,168,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
180,200,219272,2,0,L|228:99,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,48,219801,5,12,0:0:0:0:
354,95,220154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,203,220507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,288,220860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,288,221213,1,12,0:0:0:0:
131,201,221566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,92,221919,2,0,P|183:44|240:26,1,112,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,137,222625,6,0,P|365:148|425:248,1,224,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,336,223684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,356,224037,1,12,0:0:0:0:
92,64,225095,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,164,225448,1,4,0:0:0:0:
120,244,225801,2,0,P|76:280|52:344,2,112,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,260,226684,2,0,P|220:292|288:304,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,260,227213,2,0,L|344:212,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,132,227742,2,0,L|376:96,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,56,228272,6,0,P|220:35|165:39,2,112,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,229331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
92,116,229684,2,0,P|99:197|160:252,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,232,230566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,196,230742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,84,231095,6,0,P|372:52|432:52,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,231801,2,0,L|476:228,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,232331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,232507,2,0,P|312:230|249:234,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,233037,2,0,P|167:300|112:309,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,220,233742,2,0,P|28:236|1:256,2,56,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,152,234448,5,0,0:0:0:0:
80,52,234801,2,0,P|108:36|132:28,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,96,235331,2,0,P|268:64|329:58,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,44,235860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,136,236213,2,0,P|389:158|328:146,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,116,236742,6,0,P|243:94|184:101,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,237448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,264,237801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,292,238154,2,0,P|189:312|176:328,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,308,238684,2,0,P|329:324|384:320,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,284,239213,1,8,0:0:0:0:
476,184,239566,6,0,P|464:124|432:80,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,168,240272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,212,240625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,104,240978,2,0,P|176:48|88:36,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,241860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,160,242037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,272,242390,6,0,P|76:308|161:293,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,243272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,243448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
424,316,243801,2,0,L|476:368,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,244331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
456,152,244684,2,0,P|468:128|477:87,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,245213,6,0,P|382:72|311:32,1,168,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,137,246095,2,0,L|239:138,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,193,246625,2,0,P|248:261|167:278,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,216,247507,2,0,P|111:177|165:164,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,248037,6,0,P|265:119|296:73,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,248742,2,0,P|432:37|459:27,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,107,249272,2,0,P|414:160|396:224,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,268,249801,2,0,L|324:284,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,250331,2,0,P|187:311|164:260,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,250860,6,0,P|112:128|35:97,1,168,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,208,251742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,260,251919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,324,252272,2,0,P|236:340|304:295,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,212,253154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,253331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,92,253684,6,0,P|422:60|367:49,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,254390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,254742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,188,255095,2,0,P|126:248|203:285,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,255978,2,0,L|319:161,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,140,256507,6,0,P|456:217|427:294,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,308,257390,2,0,L|256:300,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,257919,2,0,P|73:245|48:168,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,68,258801,2,0,P|150:56|204:67,1,112
244,108,259331,5,4,0:0:0:0:
332,180,259684,2,0,L|307:230,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,212,260213,2,0,L|166:259,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,164,260742,5,0,0:0:0:0:
124,128,261095,1,8,0:0:0:0:
56,220,261448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,261801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,280,262154,2,0,P|332:255|364:153,1,224,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,263213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,263566,6,0,L|148:102,2,84,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,264272,2,0,L|370:96,2,84,8|4|8,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,264978,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,264,265331,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,265684,2,0,L|344:144,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,266390,2,0,P|404:328|464:316,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,204,267095,2,0,L|492:148,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,204,267801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,268154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,112,268507,2,0,L|140:132,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,268860,2,0,P|128:194|180:211,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,269566,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,172,269919,2,0,L|368:116,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,232,270625,2,0,P|502:284|484:336,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,268,271331,2,0,L|396:212,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,272037,6,0,P|289:288|308:236,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,272742,2,0,L|444:140,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273448,12,4,275390,2:0:0:0:

EnakoRin

EnakoRin 2014-11-19T15:30:47+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Recheck

[Weice's Hard]
HP Drain -1 for Harder this Hard and Mapset balance. Leave this to Twice
00:27:625 (9) - Move X 248 Y 200 ? I think that it is a better flow. OK
img
00:48:801 (6) - Distance snap mistake here. move x 76 y 112 OK
00:51:448 (1,2) - should be changed Ctrl + G too hard this place. OK
01:13:684 (8) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. OK, I used another rhythm
01:22:507 (8) - It is not preferable to use this jump in the Hard diff. please changed another pattern. OK
01:30:272 (4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this.OK, I used your rhythm
02:13:684 (1) - Remove New combo ? please check first place. OK
02:17:919 (4,5,6,7) - It is a too big jump. Please lower it a little more. OK
02:30:625 (2,3,4) - Try this rhythm. OK
02:34:154 (3,4,5,6) - Same as 01:22:507 (8) - OK
03:33:095 (6,7) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this. Wow sounds much better
03:36:801 (1,2) - Swap Nc here. so the NC is on the downbeat. It makes more sense to have it on the stronger beat, and ths is where the drums repeat as well. OK
03:39:272 (1) - Please listen here. I think this rhythm better. What's do you think ? YES!
Really awesome Hard. I think that consecutive circle is too difficult in Hard in last kiai time. Please change some Circle to Slider. fixed some

Thanks for your mod!
I've sent this diff to Accel World, she'll make a submit soon

rui

1,388 posts

Joined February 2009

rui 2014-11-20T04:41:00+00:00

fixed Satellite's irc mod

please update

http://puu.sh/cY3CB.zip

Accel World

Topic Starter

Accel World 2014-11-20T07:25:54+00:00

Satellite wrote:
Recheck

[Apple]
rui's Insane and Apple diff same AR8.5. Apple diff let's changed AR9 ? ok
I suggest some mod increasing Star Diff for custom diffname If you are use "Apple" Please think in various ways.
00:08:037 (1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. no change
00:13:684 (3) - I'm not sure. Why used strange slider ? Please changed this ok
00:27:978 (1) - Try move X:392 Y:272 ? ok
00:30:448 (8) - Try move X:172 Y:192 ? no change
img
172,192,30448,6,0,P|156:188|136:188,2,35,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:31:860 (5,6) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm. (little a overmap rhythm) and placement suggestion.
no change
suggestion
suggestion2
code 00:31:860 - ~ 00:33:272 -
412,124,31860,5,0,0:0:0:0:
440,104,31948,1,0,0:0:0:0:
476,100,32037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,192,32213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,148,32390,2,0,L|328:76,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
252,184,32742,2,0,L|252:114,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
176,220,33095,2,0,L|176:148,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
00:45:448 (3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this rhythm ? no change
00:48:978 (6) - Changed "CTRL + G" ? I think more better flow. no change
00:54:448 (4) - Try move X:220 Y;244 ? Because the sound of this place ( 00:54:625 - )is strong, I think that the one where I put a small jump fits it more fixed
01:01:684 (1,2,3) - mmm Do you not clean it more? fixed
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212,244,61684,6,0,B|168:244|168:244|128:192|128:192|96:192,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,363,62213,2,0,P|61:330|92:268,1,140,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
27,161,62742,2,0,P|19:195|32:228,1,70,8|6,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
01:03:978 (7,8,9,1,2,3) - This spacing is really awkward. Please changed this ? sry, no change
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code 01:04:154 - ~ 01:05:566 -
280,32,64154,6,0,P|312:24|348:28,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,104,64507,5,6,0:2:0:0:
176,184,64684,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,260,64860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,284,65037,2,0,P|356:256|428:256,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,260,65478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
452,264,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
01:07:154 (6,7,8) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. no change
01:12:272 (3) - Not much melody this jump. move this ?
suggestion
changed the other way
01:14:213 (1,2) - Swap, New combo here. fixed
01:15:448 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah Try this pattern ? no change
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code 01:15:448 - ~ 01:17:037 -
471,58,75448,6,0,L|404:40,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,232,75801,2,0,L|492:184,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,292,76331,2,0,P|436:232|408:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,160,76772,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,156,76860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
264,140,77037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
01:21:272 (9) - Should be use Distance snap *1.4 better. So, moved X:244 Y:80 better. fixed ds 1.4
01:21:448 (1) - add finish on slider head. and Additoons : Soft fixed
01:32:566 (5) - Move X:208 Y:272. Because the sound of this place ( 01:32:742 - )is strong, I think that the one where I put a small jump fits it more no change
01:35:566 (4) - Try this my suggestion. Because rhythm is too monotonous, do you not make it hard a little more? for star rating.
sry, no change
348,268,95566,6,0,P|276:272|200:264,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
132,204,96095,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,96448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,240,96625,2,0,L|256:128,1,105,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
01:38:037 (1) - Remove New combo. not need this place. fixed
01:43:684 (3) - Try move X:232 Y:352 ? 01:44:390 (5) - and this too. no change
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01:45:448 (6) - add New combo. you are pattern. fixed
01:56:037 - add note this. for rhythm. fixed
02:06:007 - add note ? for back melody. please listen this. no change
02:07:684 (9) - Try "Ctrl + G" more better flow. fixed
02:09:801 (1,2,3) - Try an arrange like this. no change
02:11:390 (5,6) - Move X:380 Y:68 please don't overlap on slider end. fixed
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02:15:007 - add note ? no change
02:17:566 (3,4,5,6) - Really nice pattern. But too jump not fit this place. Please changed another pattern. sry, no change
02:47:566 (10) - add finish and Additions : Soft on slider head. fixed
02:48:095 (11) - Same as above. fixed
03:02:478 - add note no change
03:02:742 (6) - Same as here 00:13:684 (3) - fixed
03:22:419 - add note fixed
03:49:684 (7) - Try "CTRL + G" no change
03:55:331 (7,8) - add finish and Additions : Soft on slider head. fixed
03:56:390 (1) - Remove New combo and 03:56:742 (5) - add New combo. you are pattern. fixed
03:59:213 (1,2) - Swap, New combo. fixed
04:08:742 (3,4) - Changed this rhythm. no change
04:15:095 (6) - Try "CTRL + G" I think more better flow. fixed
04:22:154 (1) - Try gets back melody. Because rhythm is too monotonous, do you not make it hard a little more? no change
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Satellite 2014-11-21T14:30:40+00:00

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