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I wouldn't use any claps until after the music picks up at 00:13:684 - Right now they don't fit the song much at all.
Also in general, the clap usage feels very mechanical. It's almost all beats 2 and 4 no matter what. Try to accent important parts of the song with the claps instead of just following every snare hit in the song.
00:04:154 (2,4) - These beats feel unneeded. Remember, this is a really slow part to the song, and this is a Normal. You don't have to be hitting the beat every possible moment.
00:08:037 (5) - New combo should be here
00:10:860 (5) - ^
Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
The rhythm work also feels a bit plain. You get it at times, then you break into a plain metronome beat. I remapped a bit of the first kiai 01:11:390 - to help give you some ideas for rhythms to use and hitsounds to try.
See if you can get the map out of the slump it's in.
[Apple]
Look through your new combo use. It changes around a lot and feels inconsistent. Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
00:12:448 (1) - I don't get why this is a slider. It feels unnatural to play that when it's so slow with so many vocal rhythms on top of it.
01:21:272 (9,1) - This circle to slider jump doesn't flow too well. If it was a slider into the next object, it would play and read much better.
01:39:801 - Why are you using normal set during the bridge, but the chorus doesn't have it? It's just as powerful if not more so during the chorus...
01:58:860 (8,9) - These unsnapped slider ends are poorly placed.
02:09:801 (1,2) - ^
02:36:272 (1) - Don't use .25x
02:44:566 (5,6,7,8) - Compare this to 02:56:037 (5,6) - At least use your jumps consistently when the same part of the music comes up again.
03:02:566 (5,6) - This jump doesn't make sense
03:42:625 (1) - Nooooo after all those jumps a super-slow slider doesn't fit at all D:
04:20:743 (5,6,7,8) - More poorly used unsnapped slider ends.
04:22:154 (1) - And again with a weird super-slow slider after jumps. It generally doesn't play well when you alter the velocity like that when the intensity of the music doesn't reciprocate.
04:23:831 (1,1,2,1) - Please don't new combo spam
This is mostly okay, but it still has some weird spots. The hitsounds also feel underwhelming, but they're better than the Normal at least. q:
I wouldn't use any claps until after the music picks up at 00:13:684 - Right now they don't fit the song much at all.
Also in general, the clap usage feels very mechanical. It's almost all beats 2 and 4 no matter what. Try to accent important parts of the song with the claps instead of just following every snare hit in the song.
00:04:154 (2,4) - These beats feel unneeded. Remember, this is a really slow part to the song, and this is a Normal. You don't have to be hitting the beat every possible moment.
00:08:037 (5) - New combo should be here
00:10:860 (5) - ^
Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
The rhythm work also feels a bit plain. You get it at times, then you break into a plain metronome beat. I remapped a bit of the first kiai 01:11:390 - to help give you some ideas for rhythms to use and hitsounds to try.
See if you can get the map out of the slump it's in.
SPOILER
osu file format v13
[General]
AudioFilename: Romeo and Cinderella.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1504
PreviewTime: 70154
Countdown: 0
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Romeo and Cinderella
TitleUnicode:ロミオとシンデレラ
Artist:doriko
ArtistUnicode:doriko
Creator:Accel World
Version:Garven's Normal Remap
Source:
Tags:VOCALOID 初音ミク Hatsune Miku きりたんP kiritan-P apple niconico Sharlo weiren rui Troogle Twice Kurokami Weice
BeatmapID:340285
BeatmapSetID:-1
[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
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OverallDifficulty:4
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[Apple]
Look through your new combo use. It changes around a lot and feels inconsistent. Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
00:12:448 (1) - I don't get why this is a slider. It feels unnatural to play that when it's so slow with so many vocal rhythms on top of it.
01:21:272 (9,1) - This circle to slider jump doesn't flow too well. If it was a slider into the next object, it would play and read much better.
01:39:801 - Why are you using normal set during the bridge, but the chorus doesn't have it? It's just as powerful if not more so during the chorus...
01:58:860 (8,9) - These unsnapped slider ends are poorly placed.
02:09:801 (1,2) - ^
02:36:272 (1) - Don't use .25x
02:44:566 (5,6,7,8) - Compare this to 02:56:037 (5,6) - At least use your jumps consistently when the same part of the music comes up again.
03:02:566 (5,6) - This jump doesn't make sense
03:42:625 (1) - Nooooo after all those jumps a super-slow slider doesn't fit at all D:
04:20:743 (5,6,7,8) - More poorly used unsnapped slider ends.
04:22:154 (1) - And again with a weird super-slow slider after jumps. It generally doesn't play well when you alter the velocity like that when the intensity of the music doesn't reciprocate.
04:23:831 (1,1,2,1) - Please don't new combo spam
This is mostly okay, but it still has some weird spots. The hitsounds also feel underwhelming, but they're better than the Normal at least. q:
I forgot change color 04:22:154 (1) -
http://puu.sh/aTcGB.zip update plz
http://puu.sh/aTcGB.zip update plz
好图 Star
Hey Accel, I never checked back since you didn't reply to the mods. Satellite wants to check on this, but we're wondering what's going on with your end of things. Please reply and he will continue where I left off with this set.
=w=Garven wrote:
Satellite wants to check on this
i was supposed to check this too ><
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了
Accel World
OMG projonathanlfj wrote:
i was supposed to check this too ><
把Garven说的mod reply搞定之后我和Satellite应该就能帮你把这个rank掉了
normal
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11:27 -Google-: ._.
11:27 Sellenite: .-.？
11:29 -Google-: 内个0 0求问能有空扫一眼一个Normal么._.
11:30 -Google-: 看看有没有什么脑残错> <
11:30 Sellenite: 好
11:31 Sellenite: link
11:31 *-Google- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/340285 doriko - Romeo and Cinderella [Troogle's Normal]]
11:31 -Google-: 主要是昨晚remap过了._.
11:31 -Google-: 不知道有没有什么疏忽的
11:31 -Google-: http://puu.sh/bwNbn/a1d6fc6244.osu
11:32 Sellenite: 不过这是v+的歌，我只能粗略看一下
11:34 -Google-: 麻烦啦> <
11:34 Sellenite: 00:24:978 (1) -
11:34 Sellenite: 滑条头N的fin
11:35 Sellenite: 主要是你的滑条速度太快了...
11:35 Sellenite: spread可能会有问题
11:36 -Google-: ._.诶
11:36 -Google-: 但是星级还是很低哦0 0
11:36 Sellenite: 0.0
11:37 Sellenite: 00:52:684 (1,2) -
11:37 Sellenite: switch NC
11:38 -Google-: k
11:38 -Google-: 主要是这种滑条。。有点纠结
11:38 -Google-: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:38 -Google-: 这种情况下
11:38 -Google-: NC下载那里。。
11:38 -Google-: *在
11:38 Sellenite: dabaixianba
11:38 Sellenite: 大白线吧
11:39 Sellenite: normal整齐点好
11:39 Sellenite: 都是大白线NC
11:39 -Google-: 但是有的地方会有点丑._.
11:39 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:39 Sellenite: 01:04:507 (2) -
11:39 Sellenite: switch
11:40 Sellenite: 容易读
11:40 Sellenite: 重音NC就够了
11:40 -Google-: 好
11:40 Sellenite: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:40 Sellenite: 01:22:684 (1,2) -
11:41 -Google-: 嗯啊。。我琢磨琢磨NC
11:42 Sellenite: 02:18:801 (1,2) -
11:42 Sellenite: 02:33:801 (1) - 我觉得这个转盘
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 在这里开始比较好
11:43 -Google-: 0.0
11:43 -Google-: 33801?
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 -
11:43 -Google-: 01:07:507 (1) -
11:44 -Google-: 但是这里不也是挤这的嘛;w;
11:44 -Google-: 那我这里也改掉
11:44 Sellenite: dui
11:44 Sellenite: 对
11:44 Sellenite: 也是一样
11:45 Sellenite: 02:48:801 (1,2) -
11:45 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:54:448 (1,2) - 虽然节奏变了但还是统一一下吧
11:46 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:56:742 (1) - 取消NC
11:46 Sellenite: 02:57:448 (3) - NC
11:47 Sellenite: 03:24:272 (4) -
11:47 Sellenite: 让他停在蓝线上
11:48 -Google-: 。。。
11:48 -Google-: 我错了
11:48 -Google-: 应该在红线上的
11:48 Sellenite: 恩
11:49 Sellenite: 03:32:037 (2) -
11:49 Sellenite: 03:31:860 - 滑条从这里开始吧
11:49 Sellenite: 1/2听上去有点怪
11:49 Sellenite: 因为你这段都是跟歌词的
11:50 -Google-: 好的
11:50 -Google-: 这段我再下一下节奏
11:50 Sellenite: 03:42:625 (4,5) - 这个可以合成一个奇葩滑条ww。或者转盘
11:50 Sellenite: 你这样节奏就断了
11:51 Sellenite: 03:47:742 (1,2) - switch
11:51 Sellenite: 03:51:095 (9) - NC
11:52 Sellenite: 04:02:389 (8) -
11:52 Sellenite: NC
11:53 Sellenite: 04:07:860 (1,2) - switch
11:53 Sellenite: 04:10:331 (1,2) - ^
11:53 Sellenite: 04:13:684 (8) - NC
11:54 Sellenite: 04:24:978 (3,1) - swicth
11:54 -Google-: 啊。。等等
11:54 -Google-: 刚chongxiajiezoude
11:54 -Google-: 重下节奏的
11:54 Sellenite: 0.0
11:54 -Google-: 那个。。什么叫做断了？
11:55 Sellenite: 你听背景音
11:55 Sellenite: 满速
11:55 Sellenite: 那是一段连续的，但你分成两个部分了
11:55 -Google-: 嗯。。。
11:56 -Google-: 但是我强调最后一拍qwq
11:56 -Google-: *想
11:56 Sellenite: 你喜欢就行
11:56 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:56 Sellenite: 这没什么大的问题，只是个人看法
11:57 Sellenite: 恩应该没什么东西了
11:57 Sellenite: 主要还是滑条太快加tick太多..我觉得好难
11:59 -Google-: qwq
11:59 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:59 -Google-: 谢谢啦
11:59 -Google-: 你可以po一个IRC log www
12:00 -Google-: 主要是简单hard也不简单啦
12:00 Sellenite: 恩，不过你有些地方一会跟歌词一会跟鼓
12:00 -Google-: 所以说这个做的应该不会有spread的问题
12:00 -Google-: 对。。
12:00 Sellenite: 嘛总体应该没问题吧ww
11:27 Sellenite: .-.？
11:29 -Google-: 内个0 0求问能有空扫一眼一个Normal么._.
11:30 -Google-: 看看有没有什么脑残错> <
11:30 Sellenite: 好
11:31 Sellenite: link
11:31 *-Google- is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/340285 doriko - Romeo and Cinderella [Troogle's Normal]]
11:31 -Google-: 主要是昨晚remap过了._.
11:31 -Google-: 不知道有没有什么疏忽的
11:31 -Google-: http://puu.sh/bwNbn/a1d6fc6244.osu
11:32 Sellenite: 不过这是v+的歌，我只能粗略看一下
11:34 -Google-: 麻烦啦> <
11:34 Sellenite: 00:24:978 (1) -
11:34 Sellenite: 滑条头N的fin
11:35 Sellenite: 主要是你的滑条速度太快了...
11:35 Sellenite: spread可能会有问题
11:36 -Google-: ._.诶
11:36 -Google-: 但是星级还是很低哦0 0
11:36 Sellenite: 0.0
11:37 Sellenite: 00:52:684 (1,2) -
11:37 Sellenite: switch NC
11:38 -Google-: k
11:38 -Google-: 主要是这种滑条。。有点纠结
11:38 -Google-: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:38 -Google-: 这种情况下
11:38 -Google-: NC下载那里。。
11:38 -Google-: *在
11:38 Sellenite: dabaixianba
11:38 Sellenite: 大白线吧
11:39 Sellenite: normal整齐点好
11:39 Sellenite: 都是大白线NC
11:39 -Google-: 但是有的地方会有点丑._.
11:39 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:39 Sellenite: 01:04:507 (2) -
11:39 Sellenite: switch
11:40 Sellenite: 容易读
11:40 Sellenite: 重音NC就够了
11:40 -Google-: 好
11:40 Sellenite: 01:17:037 (1,2) -
11:40 Sellenite: 01:22:684 (1,2) -
11:41 -Google-: 嗯啊。。我琢磨琢磨NC
11:42 Sellenite: 02:18:801 (1,2) -
11:42 Sellenite: 02:33:801 (1) - 我觉得这个转盘
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 在这里开始比较好
11:43 -Google-: 0.0
11:43 -Google-: 33801?
11:43 Sellenite: 02:33:801 -
11:43 -Google-: 01:07:507 (1) -
11:44 -Google-: 但是这里不也是挤这的嘛;w;
11:44 -Google-: 那我这里也改掉
11:44 Sellenite: dui
11:44 Sellenite: 对
11:44 Sellenite: 也是一样
11:45 Sellenite: 02:48:801 (1,2) -
11:45 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:54:448 (1,2) - 虽然节奏变了但还是统一一下吧
11:46 Sellenite: switch
11:46 Sellenite: 02:56:742 (1) - 取消NC
11:46 Sellenite: 02:57:448 (3) - NC
11:47 Sellenite: 03:24:272 (4) -
11:47 Sellenite: 让他停在蓝线上
11:48 -Google-: 。。。
11:48 -Google-: 我错了
11:48 -Google-: 应该在红线上的
11:48 Sellenite: 恩
11:49 Sellenite: 03:32:037 (2) -
11:49 Sellenite: 03:31:860 - 滑条从这里开始吧
11:49 Sellenite: 1/2听上去有点怪
11:49 Sellenite: 因为你这段都是跟歌词的
11:50 -Google-: 好的
11:50 -Google-: 这段我再下一下节奏
11:50 Sellenite: 03:42:625 (4,5) - 这个可以合成一个奇葩滑条ww。或者转盘
11:50 Sellenite: 你这样节奏就断了
11:51 Sellenite: 03:47:742 (1,2) - switch
11:51 Sellenite: 03:51:095 (9) - NC
11:52 Sellenite: 04:02:389 (8) -
11:52 Sellenite: NC
11:53 Sellenite: 04:07:860 (1,2) - switch
11:53 Sellenite: 04:10:331 (1,2) - ^
11:53 Sellenite: 04:13:684 (8) - NC
11:54 Sellenite: 04:24:978 (3,1) - swicth
11:54 -Google-: 啊。。等等
11:54 -Google-: 刚chongxiajiezoude
11:54 -Google-: 重下节奏的
11:54 Sellenite: 0.0
11:54 -Google-: 那个。。什么叫做断了？
11:55 Sellenite: 你听背景音
11:55 Sellenite: 满速
11:55 Sellenite: 那是一段连续的，但你分成两个部分了
11:55 -Google-: 嗯。。。
11:56 -Google-: 但是我强调最后一拍qwq
11:56 -Google-: *想
11:56 Sellenite: 你喜欢就行
11:56 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:56 Sellenite: 这没什么大的问题，只是个人看法
11:57 Sellenite: 恩应该没什么东西了
11:57 Sellenite: 主要还是滑条太快加tick太多..我觉得好难
11:59 -Google-: qwq
11:59 -Google-: 嗯呐
11:59 -Google-: 谢谢啦
11:59 -Google-: 你可以po一个IRC log www
12:00 -Google-: 主要是简单hard也不简单啦
12:00 Sellenite: 恩，不过你有些地方一会跟歌词一会跟鼓
12:00 -Google-: 所以说这个做的应该不会有spread的问题
12:00 -Google-: 对。。
12:00 Sellenite: 嘛总体应该没问题吧ww
Also I find some mods towards the new-versioned normal. Hopefully it reached the RC rules about the mods.Garven wrote:
[Normal]
I wouldn't use any claps until after the music picks up at 00:13:684 - Right now they don't fit the song much at all.
Also in general, the clap usage feels very mechanical. It's almost all beats 2 and 4 no matter what. Try to accent important parts of the song with the claps instead of just following every snare hit in the song.
00:04:154 (2,4) - These beats feel unneeded. Remember, this is a really slow part to the song, and this is a Normal. You don't have to be hitting the beat every possible moment.
00:08:037 (5) - New combo should be here
00:10:860 (5) - ^
Try to set up your new combos for every two tall white ticks. That will fit the musical phrasing well for this song.
The rhythm work also feels a bit plain. You get it at times, then you break into a plain metronome beat. I remapped a bit of the first kiai 01:11:390 - to help give you some ideas for rhythms to use and hitsounds to try.
See if you can get the map out of the slump it's in.
I have remapped the most of the kiai and also the hitsound..hopefully it's better now
Code
osu file format v13
[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 1504
PreviewTime: 70154
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
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[Editor]
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[Metadata]
Title:Romeo and Cinderella
TitleUnicode:ロミオとシンデレラ
Artist:doriko
ArtistUnicode:doriko
Creator:Accel World
Version:Troogle's Normal
Source:
Tags:VOCALOID 初音ミク Hatsune Miku きりたんP kiritan-P apple niconico Sharlo weiren rui Troogle Twice Kurokami Weice
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[Difficulty]
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200,312,142154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
200,312,142507,2,0,P|190:181|312:84,1,280,8|6,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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20,236,175860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,339,184507,6,0,P|171:298|154:215,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,192,202860,5,6,0:0:0:0:
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337,51,203742,2,0,P|342:111|329:159,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
356,202,204272,2,0,P|432:164|511:189,1,168,2|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,276,205154,1,8,0:1:0:0:
340,328,205507,1,8,0:1:0:0:
284,320,205684,6,0,L|156:284,1,112,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,260,206213,2,0,P|109:209|118:154,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,84,206919,2,0,L|268:80,1,56,8|2,0:1|1:2,0:0:0:0:
368,116,207448,2,0,L|376:176,1,56,0|8,1:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
312,260,207978,1,12,0:1:0:0:
256,100,208507,5,4,0:0:0:0:
148,72,208860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,92,209037,2,0,P|51:128|15:176,1,112,0|6,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
60,276,209742,2,0,L|96:320,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,247,210272,2,0,P|259:213|341:223,1,168,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
436,284,211154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,240,211331,6,0,P|480:185|462:132,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,108,211860,2,0,P|356:104|307:77,1,112,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
196,56,212566,2,0,L|140:84,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,192,213095,2,0,L|174:166,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,76,213625,1,2,0:2:0:0:
76,44,214154,5,2,0:2:0:0:
120,148,214507,2,0,L|176:148,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,228,215037,1,2,0:2:0:0:
192,320,215390,2,0,L|132:320,1,56,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
36,272,215919,2,0,P|52:192|122:149,1,168,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
176,156,216625,2,0,P|227:174|278:153,1,112,8|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
372,96,217331,6,0,P|384:152|372:212,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,304,218036,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,316,218389,2,0,P|128:296|79:229,1,168,2|2,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
188,204,219272,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,48,219801,5,12,0:0:0:0:
354,95,220154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
378,203,220507,1,8,0:0:0:0:
309,288,220860,1,8,0:0:0:0:
199,288,221213,1,12,0:0:0:0:
131,201,221566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,92,221919,2,0,P|183:44|240:26,1,112,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,137,222625,6,0,P|366:135|438:227,1,224,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,358,224036,1,12,0:0:0:0:
92,64,225095,5,8,0:0:0:0:
44,164,225448,1,4,0:0:0:0:
76,272,225801,2,0,L|48:328,2,56,8|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,260,226507,2,0,P|232:292|300:304,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,192,227213,2,0,P|304:140|360:120,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,132,227742,2,0,L|452:172,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,276,228272,6,0,P|436:308|376:300,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,288,228978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
216,304,229154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,280,229507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
60,248,229684,2,0,P|29:173|57:97,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,84,230566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,108,230742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,84,231095,6,0,P|372:52|432:52,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,160,231801,2,0,L|476:228,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,296,232331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
360,256,232507,2,0,P|312:230|249:234,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,272,233037,2,0,P|167:300|112:309,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,220,233742,2,0,L|1:256,2,56,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,108,234448,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,116,236742,6,0,P|243:94|184:101,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,152,237448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
108,264,237801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
220,292,238154,2,0,L|282:292,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,348,238507,2,0,L|324:348,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,276,239037,2,0,L|464:276,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,284,239566,6,0,P|312:328|256:336,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,292,240272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,216,240625,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,104,240978,2,0,P|176:48|88:36,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,112,241860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
0,160,242037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
4,272,242389,6,0,P|76:308|161:293,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,336,243272,1,0,0:0:0:0:
312,308,243448,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,260,243801,2,0,L|484:261,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,300,244154,2,0,L|448:298,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,184,244684,2,0,L|473:119,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,184,245213,6,0,P|377:104|306:64,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,169,246095,2,0,L|234:170,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
287,225,246625,2,0,P|243:293|162:310,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,244,247507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,140,247860,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,104,248037,6,0,P|194:67|260:58,1,112,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,136,248742,2,0,L|372:100,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,249272,2,0,P|377:225|401:287,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,332,249801,2,0,L|344:332,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,344,250331,2,0,P|187:311|164:260,1,112,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,208,250860,6,0,P|112:128|35:97,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
40,208,251742,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,260,251919,1,8,0:0:0:0:
156,324,252272,2,0,P|236:340|304:295,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,212,253154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,196,253331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,92,253684,6,0,P|422:60|367:49,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,76,254389,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,112,254742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
72,188,255095,2,0,P|126:248|203:285,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,208,255978,2,0,L|319:161,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,140,256507,6,0,P|456:217|427:294,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,308,257389,2,0,L|256:300,1,56,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,280,257919,2,0,P|73:245|48:168,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,68,258801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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332,180,259683,2,0,L|307:230,1,56,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,212,260213,2,0,L|166:259,2,56,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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56,220,261448,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,312,261801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
228,280,262154,6,0,P|332:255|364:153,1,224,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,48,263213,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,112,263566,6,0,L|148:102,2,84,4|4|4,0:2|0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
288,112,264272,2,0,L|370:96,2,84,8|4|8,0:3|0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,156,264978,1,4,0:0:0:0:
232,264,265331,5,8,0:0:0:0:
328,204,265684,2,0,L|344:144,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,266389,2,0,P|404:328|464:316,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,204,267095,2,0,L|492:148,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
363,204,267801,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,108,268154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,112,268507,2,0,L|140:132,1,56,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,156,268860,2,0,P|128:194|180:211,1,112,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,228,269566,5,8,0:0:0:0:
388,172,269919,2,0,L|368:116,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
484,232,270625,2,0,P|502:284|484:336,1,112,4|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,268,271331,2,0,L|396:212,2,56,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,340,272037,6,0,P|289:288|308:236,1,112,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,272742,2,0,L|444:140,2,56,0|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,273448,12,4,275389,2:0:0:0:
所以什么时候能rank
你说着“好的”但是缺没有去reply嘉文最后一个mod，什么都不改的话至少把理由回一下，这样ignore mods两个多月算什么? 别说你自己也不想rank吧。回复完了去“主动”找Satellite/jonathanlfj 就行，不要辜负他们的好心。永远这样今年明年后年也rank不了...
Accel World
[Easy]
Looks Weice's Hard and Apple and rui's Insane are fine to me. (I do mod by the next check!)
- 00:35:566 (3) - The sound of the down beat should respond. So let's do reverse already once.
- 00:40:507 (4) - When you do it blanket becomes better more neatly.
- 00:42:625 (2) - If it is symmetric placement,please do fix this place.
- 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please.
- 00:53:213 (1,2) - Same as above.
- 01:04:507 (1) - add Finish add whistle and Addition : S. You forget to perform it.
- 01:05:566 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - 01:05:566 (3,4) - Stack at this place is unfavorable. and 01:10:154 - Make 1/1 slider too fit this place. Try this code from 01:05:566 (3) - ~ 01:12:625 -
172,52,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,108,65919,2,0,B|76:176|136:224|136:224|124:276,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,67331,6,0,P|256:352|312:328,1,120
386,271,68390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,271,68742,2,0,B|376:224|376:224|436:176|416:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,70154,6,0,B|308:76|324:136|324:136|296:124|260:128,1,180
172,92,71566,6,0,B|144:148|172:220|172:220|138:253,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:21:448 (2,1) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. and 01:21:448 (2) - add Finish on slider head and end. I think fit try this.
- 01:24:272 (2,1) - You must not disturb distance snap to make symmetric placement.
- 01:32:742 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Same as part 01:21:448 (2) - this one ?
- 01:51:095 (1,2,1,2) - e.eh? Why do you not use distance snap? about x1.6
- 02:01:683 (2,3,1) - This stack is very dangerous. Try an arrange like this.
- 02:10:860 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery.
- 02:17:919 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - here.
- 02:26:389 (1) - No need New Combo. Remove it.
- 02:35:566 (5,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.
- 02:47:566 (2) - add Finish on slider end.
- 03:34:154 (1) - add Finish better.
- 03:38:389 (1) - Same as above.
- 03:45:448 (1,2) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here.
- 04:26:390 - Same as above.
- 00:13:684 (1) - Why do you start spinner at this place? I think that it does not fit it to put spinner here. Try an arrange like this.
- 00:34:154 (2) - I think that it is a slider of strange form. Try this ? If you are changed. Please correct the later part by yourself.
220,24,34154,6,0,B|132:70|173:168|173:168|68:181|74:276,1,336
- 00:45:448 (1) - This is too too short spinner. It is not preferable in the Normal diff. Please change it in this way.
- 00:53:213 (1) - Cool pattern, but the flow feels a bit blah. Try an arrange like this.
- 00:55:507 (5) - Not too fond of the straight flow here. and More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.
- 00:59:742 (2) - Not too fond of the straight flow too here. Let's bend a little for flow !
- 01:01:154 (4,2) - Same as above.
- 01:21:448 (4) - add Finish on slider head. and additions : S ?
- 01:21:978 (5,6) - This spacing is really awkward. Try this rhythm.
- 01:25:154 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - It is the suggestion of many flows. Try this code.
8,312,85154,5,0,0:0:0:0:
40,360,85331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,344,85684,6,0,P|201:277|278:246,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,328,86566,1,0,0:0:0:0:
412,340,86742,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,252,87095,2,0,P|478:170|420:111,1,168,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,140,87978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
260,120,88154,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,88,88507,6,0,P|93:145|95:227,1,168,4|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0: - 01:33:625 (2) - Changed this rhythm.
- 01:38:389 (1,2,3) - more better flow.
- 02:01:684 (4) - Overlap. You must be changed another pattern.
- 02:09:095 (2) - Please distance check.
- 02:28:684 (2) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this
- 02:47:566 (3) - add Finish on slider head. and additions : S ?
- 02:50:213 (3,4) - Changed this rhythm.
- 02:56:742 (5) - Move 02:56:566 - here.
- 03:00:095 - add note
- 03:00:625 (2,3) - more better flow
- 03:27:978 (5,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Try this.
- 03:39:625 - add note
- 03:33:625 (5) - Overlap. Changed another patterm.
- 03:36:625 (6,1) - more better rhythm.
- 03:56:213 (5) - more better flow.
- 03:58:154 (4,5,6,1) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me and Overlap. Try this rhythm.
- 04:03:801 (4,5) - Overlap. please changed another pattern.
- 04:19:154 - add note
Looks Weice's Hard and Apple and rui's Insane are fine to me. (I do mod by the next check!)
Accel World
Satellite wrote:
[Easy]fixed
- 00:35:566 (3) - The sound of the down beat should respond. So let's do reverse already once.
- 00:40:507 (4) - When you do it blanket becomes better more neatly. fixed
- 00:42:625 (2) - If it is symmetric placement,please do fix this place. fixed
- 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. I say this because it could confuse players, it would be better to fix it please. fixed
- 00:53:213 (1,2) - Same as above. change the rhythm
- 01:04:507 (1) - add Finish add whistle and Addition : S. You forget to perform it. fixed
- 01:05:566 (3,4,1,2,3,1) - 01:05:566 (3,4) - Stack at this place is unfavorable. and 01:10:154 - Make 1/1 slider too fit this place. fixedTry this code from 01:05:566 (3) - ~ 01:12:625 -
172,52,65566,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,108,65919,2,0,B|76:176|136:224|136:224|124:276,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,328,67331,6,0,P|256:352|312:328,1,120
386,271,68390,1,0,0:0:0:0:
386,271,68742,2,0,B|376:224|376:224|436:176|416:108,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,70154,6,0,B|308:76|324:136|324:136|296:124|260:128,1,180
172,92,71566,6,0,B|144:148|172:220|172:220|138:253,1,180,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:- 01:21:448 (2,1) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. and 01:21:448 (2) - add Finish on slider head and end. I think fit try this.fixed
- 01:24:272 (2,1) - You must not disturb distance snap to make symmetric placement. fixed
- 01:32:742 (3) - This rhythm is kind of questionable for me. Same as part 01:21:448 (2) - this one ? fixed
- 01:51:095 (1,2,1,2) - e.eh? Why do you not use distance snap? about x1.6 fixed
- 02:01:683 (2,3,1) - This stack is very dangerous. Try an arrange like this. fixed
- 02:10:860 (1,1) - Too soon after a spinner. It definitely doesn't give players enough recovery. ummmm...no change
- 02:17:919 (2,3,1) - Same as 00:51:801 (2,3,4) - here.fixed
- 02:26:389 (1) - No need New Combo. Remove it.fixed
- 02:35:566 (5,1) - More better rhythm,follow with lyrics,like this. Try an arrange like this.fixed
- 02:47:566 (2) - add Finish on slider end.fixed
- 03:34:154 (1) - add Finish better.fixed
- 03:38:389 (1) - Same as above.fixed
- 03:45:448 (1,2) - Distance snap fails. Please remake here. sorry, no change
- 04:26:390 - Same as above.
Sorry Late. and Sorry. Easy and Troogle's Normal needs more work. (please gets 3~5mod)
Looks Weice's Hard and Apple and rui's Insane are fine to me. (I do mod by the next check!)
and sorry. Easy diff Can you changed slider velocity 0.6 is too low. please change 0.8. because Normal diff SV1.12 for mapset balance...
Accel World
Probably Easy slider velocity 0.6 -> Normal slider velocity 1.12 is diffspread very large imo.Accel World wrote:
oh..... Looks like I need to remap again...? If I change to 0.8.Satellite wrote:
and sorry. Easy diff Can you changed slider velocity 0.6 is too low. please change 0.8. because Normal diff SV1.12 for mapset balance...
It is possible even to change SV of Normal diff. Please call me once again if you do not want to change it
Accel World
ez:
00:50:389 (1) - 我觉得不要叠起来比较好吧 拉开就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2209028
01:10:154 (4) - new combo呀
02:08:742 (2) - 不好看 重新拉一下
clap不好听 最好换个custom音效
00:50:389 (1) - 我觉得不要叠起来比较好吧 拉开就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2209028
01:10:154 (4) - new combo呀
02:08:742 (2) - 不好看 重新拉一下
clap不好听 最好换个custom音效
Accel World
伤心啊，不知道用什么音效[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:
ez:
00:50:389 (1) - 我觉得不要叠起来比较好吧 拉开就行了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2209028 可是ds不允许怎么办
01:10:154 (4) - new combo呀 fixed
02:08:742 (2) - 不好看 重新拉一下 fixed
clap不好听 最好换个custom音效
I难度的PreviewTime改成70154
[Easy]
00:25:683 (2) - not snapped
00:37:683 (3) - ^
02:13:683 (1) - ^
00:41:919 (1) -
01:22:860 (1) - 包得好看一点
01:27:095 (3) - ^
03:28:860 (2) - ^
03:36:978 (1) - ^
02:22:154 (1) -
这样浪漫一点
360,252,142154,6,0,B|336:324|251:321|251:321|187:267|218:197,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
音效方面，soft-clap和soft-slidertick的声音太轻了，建议换一个；这首歌用24Clap就可以了，SB闪光的地方加Finish
Accel World
thou bad wrote:
I难度的PreviewTime改成70154
[Easy]
00:25:683 (2) - not snapped fixed
00:37:683 (3) - ^ fixed
02:13:683 (1) - ^ fixed
00:41:919 (1) -
01:22:860 (1) - 包得好看一点 fixed
01:27:095 (3) - ^ fixed
03:28:860 (2) - ^ fixed
03:36:978 (1) - ^ fixed
02:22:154 (1) -
这样浪漫一点 fixed360,252,142154,6,0,B|336:324|251:321|251:321|187:267|218:197,1,280,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
音效方面，soft-clap和soft-slidertick的声音太轻了，建议换一个；这首歌用24Clap就可以了，SB闪光的地方加Finish
Hi Accel! ~m4m~
Thanks for the m4m
Easy
00:02:390 - Why didn't you map this part?
00:28:154 (2,3) - I think stacks like this are hard for beginners to read properly, and it's an easy diff, so I recommend removing the stack and distance snapping normally.
00:29:919 (4,5) - ^
00:33:095 (1,2) - ^
00:38:742 (4,1) - ^
00:47:566 (1,2,1) - It's better if you lengthen all three of these sliders by a white tick. So the sliders end on 00:48:625 - 00:50:037 - and 00:51:448 - I don't really like how so many white ticks are skipped. It sounds like they are somewhat important notes to map
00:53:213 (1,2) - ^
00:58:860 (3,4,1) - ^
01:05:919 (3) - It feels better if the red anchor in this slider lined up with the clap
01:07:331 - This ryhthm fits better: http://puu.sh/cGjrg/aff3b26e86.jpg
01:10:154 (1,1) - Stack can be confusing for an easy
01:23:919 (2,3) - Ya you might want to double check with someone else if these stacks are ok in an easy, because I'm not sure
01:51:095 (1,2) - Sliders kinda ugly, i think you can make them look better
02:13:331 - Same idea as earlier with this part. I would prefer if not so many white ticks were skipped.
02:30:625 (1) - The music doesn't really call for a long slider like this
03:28:507 (1,2) - Can blanket better
04:13:331 (4) - Is this the correct clap hitsound?
04:13:331 (4) - I would consider just ending the map here
00:02:390 - Why didn't you map this part?
00:28:154 (2,3) - I think stacks like this are hard for beginners to read properly, and it's an easy diff, so I recommend removing the stack and distance snapping normally.
00:29:919 (4,5) - ^
00:33:095 (1,2) - ^
00:38:742 (4,1) - ^
00:47:566 (1,2,1) - It's better if you lengthen all three of these sliders by a white tick. So the sliders end on 00:48:625 - 00:50:037 - and 00:51:448 - I don't really like how so many white ticks are skipped. It sounds like they are somewhat important notes to map
00:53:213 (1,2) - ^
00:58:860 (3,4,1) - ^
01:05:919 (3) - It feels better if the red anchor in this slider lined up with the clap
01:07:331 - This ryhthm fits better: http://puu.sh/cGjrg/aff3b26e86.jpg
01:10:154 (1,1) - Stack can be confusing for an easy
01:23:919 (2,3) - Ya you might want to double check with someone else if these stacks are ok in an easy, because I'm not sure
01:51:095 (1,2) - Sliders kinda ugly, i think you can make them look better
02:13:331 - Same idea as earlier with this part. I would prefer if not so many white ticks were skipped.
02:30:625 (1) - The music doesn't really call for a long slider like this
03:28:507 (1,2) - Can blanket better
04:13:331 (4) - Is this the correct clap hitsound?
04:13:331 (4) - I would consider just ending the map here
Normal
00:26:390 (3,3) - I don't really like these reverse sliders. I would just change them to 2/1 sliders http://puu.sh/cGkB7/fd98384cba.jpg
00:49:860 (4) - Remove this note
01:18:096 (2,3,5,6) - Double like there are kinda difficult for a normal
02:00:272 (2,4) - It could be an issue that slider 2 is covering the reverse arrow of 4.
02:52:507 (2,3) - Can blanket better
04:26:037 - I don't really like these clap hitsounds that start here. Consider changing them to a custom hitsound
I think this diff needs a little work on slider placement. Try to make more intersted combos
Good luck with your map!00:26:390 (3,3) - I don't really like these reverse sliders. I would just change them to 2/1 sliders http://puu.sh/cGkB7/fd98384cba.jpg
00:49:860 (4) - Remove this note
01:18:096 (2,3,5,6) - Double like there are kinda difficult for a normal
02:00:272 (2,4) - It could be an issue that slider 2 is covering the reverse arrow of 4.
02:52:507 (2,3) - Can blanket better
04:26:037 - I don't really like these clap hitsounds that start here. Consider changing them to a custom hitsound
I think this diff needs a little work on slider placement. Try to make more intersted combos
Thanks for the m4m
Accel World
[ Joey ] wrote:
Hi Accel! ~m4m~EasyAre you sure????
00:02:390 - Why didn't you map this part?
00:28:154 (2,3) - I think stacks like this are hard for beginners to read properly, and it's an easy diff, so I recommend removing the stack and distance snapping normally. no change
00:29:919 (4,5) - ^ no change
00:33:095 (1,2) - ^ no change
00:38:742 (4,1) - ^ no change
00:47:566 (1,2,1) - It's better if you lengthen all three of these sliders by a white tick. So the sliders end on 00:48:625 - 00:50:037 - and 00:51:448 - I don't really like how so many white ticks are skipped. It sounds like they are somewhat important notes to map
00:53:213 (1,2) - ^ fixed
00:58:860 (3,4,1) - ^ fixed
01:05:919 (3) - It feels better if the red anchor in this slider lined up with the clap
01:07:331 - This ryhthm fits better: http://puu.sh/cGjrg/aff3b26e86.jpg no change
01:10:154 (1,1) - Stack can be confusing for an easy no change
01:23:919 (2,3) - Ya you might want to double check with someone else if these stacks are ok in an easy, because I'm not sure
01:51:095 (1,2) - Sliders kinda ugly, i think you can make them look better fixed
02:13:331 - Same idea as earlier with this part. I would prefer if not so many white ticks were skipped. fixed
02:30:625 (1) - The music doesn't really call for a long slider like this no change
03:28:507 (1,2) - Can blanket better fixed
04:13:331 (4) - Is this the correct clap hitsound? fixed
04:13:331 (4) - I would consider just ending the map here
Good luck with your map!
Thanks for the m4m
thank you!As request.
看卫星的意思好像是Normal也需要找mpd？
Easy
- Close Widescreen Support.
- Inherited Points:
offset 8478 Should this one be a S:C1 Sample?
offset 253331 Extra green line - 01:02:742 (4,1) - blanket
- 01:10:154 (1,1) - Maybe a bit hard for a Easy diff lol But, well if BAT suppose it is not a big issue.
- 01:16:860 (4) - add circle here. When I mod the previous part I feel that your rhythm is Concentrated which make this Empty beat be weird.
- 02:22:154 (1) - finish on the tail
- 04:22:154 (1) - finish
Nice for me.
[Easy]
[Normal]
- 01:15:801 (3) - End of slider next white line
- 01:53:919 (1,2) - This overlap is not good in Easy. It is suggestion of the placement.
296,60,113919,6,0,P|259:128|276:205,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,42,115331,2,0,P|448:77|479:149,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,340,116742,5,2,0:0:0:0: - 02:16:507 (1) - (nazi) a little overlap. flip horizontal? http://puu.sh/cHLOm.jpg
- 02:30:625 (1) - How about this Rhythm http://puu.sh/cHMqY.jpg
- 03:28:860 (2) - (nazi) sloppy this slider.
- 03:30:978 (X) - add note?
- 03:32:390 (X) - ^
- 04:11:919 (2) - stack is better
[Normal]
- There are too too many spins this diff. You should delete some spins imo.
- 00:10:154 (3) - http://puu.sh/cHSqY.jpg
- 00:34:154 (2) - How about rhythm? bcz want to follow big sound in 00:34:684. http://puu.sh/cHSL1.jpg
- 00:51:801 (4) - end of slider before red line and add note 00:52:331 http://puu.sh/cHSZs.jpg
- 00:56:036 (1) - delete this spin? and how is the rhythm? http://puu.sh/cHTjT.jpg
- 01:03:095 (3) - same as 00:51:801 (4)
- 01:06:448 (5) - How about this? http://puu.sh/cHTA2.jpg
- 01:07:684 (1) - delete this spin? not match music this spin imo. and how is the rhythm http://puu.sh/cIesu.jpg
- 01:12:801 (3) - change reverse slider http://puu.sh/cHTRf.jpg
- 01:29:919 (3) - end of slider before white line and add note 01:30:448
- 01:30:801 (4,1,2) - feel it slightly rhythm. how about this? http://puu.sh/cHUc5.jpg
- 02:32:742 (5) - move to before red line and add note 02:33:448
- 02:33:801 (1) - same as 01:07:684
- 02:38:742 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeDQ.jpg
- 02:50:213 (3,4) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIeMC.jpg
- 02:54:625 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this part feel strange. How about this? http://puu.sh/cIeYH.jpg
- 03:18:095 (3) - http://puu.sh/cIfbt.jpg
- 03:26:919 (3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/cIfh2.jpg
- 03:28:860 (2,3,4,5,6) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfxC.jpg
- 03:45:801 (3,4,5) - How about this rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfIp.jpg
- 03:48:272 (1,2,3,4) - How about rhythm? http://puu.sh/cIfOm.jpg
Accel World
Thanks for mod~Sharlo wrote:
As request.看卫星的意思好像是Normal也需要找mpd？是...
Easy
- Close Widescreen Support. fixed
- Inherited Points:
offset 8478 Should this one be a S:C1 Sample? fixed
offset 253331 Extra green line there is no green line....- 01:02:742 (4,1) - blanket fixed
- 01:10:154 (1,1) - Maybe a bit hard for a Easy diff lol But, well if BAT suppose it is not a big issue. ummmm, no change
- 01:16:860 (4) - add circle here. When I mod the previous part I feel that your rhythm is Concentrated which make this Empty beat be weird. fixed
- 02:22:154 (1) - finish on the tail fixed
- 04:22:154 (1) - finish fixed
Nice for me.
rui wrote:
[Easy]fixed
- 01:15:801 (3) - End of slider next white line fixed
- 01:53:919 (1,2) - This overlap is not good in Easy. It is suggestion of the placement. fixed
296,60,113919,6,0,P|259:128|276:205,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,42,115331,2,0,P|448:77|479:149,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,340,116742,5,2,0:0:0:0:- 02:16:507 (1) - (nazi) a little overlap. flip horizontal? http://puu.sh/cHLOm.jpg fixed
- 02:30:625 (1) - How about this Rhythm http://puu.sh/cHMqY.jpg fixed
- 03:28:860 (2) - (nazi) sloppy this slider. what is sloppy....?
- 03:30:978 (X) - add note? fixed
- 03:32:390 (X) - ^ fixed
- 04:11:919 (2) - stack is better
Good Easy diff
Kodora
Modding easiest diffs as requested
[Easy]
*Biggest circle size isn't really recommended for anything, and such huge circle size doesn't fit calm pace of map. Please consider raising it by 1 tick (CS3)
*Raise AR by 1 tick to improve readability - 2 feels too slow, considering note density here.
*This diff have so many 1/1 stacks - they aren't recommended as for easiest difficulty, considering how fast BPM is. Althought they are consistent, i afraid that they might be too hard as for the easiest diff - can you please re-consider their usage here? >.<
[Troogle's Normal]
*Shouldn't it be -Google-'s Normal due to username change? (If no, fix the storyboard cuz it wrotes "Beatmap by -Google-")
*CS3 feels really big & unfitting to the overral calm pace of map - can you please raise it by 1 tick? 4 would look here much better, imo
[Easy]
*Biggest circle size isn't really recommended for anything, and such huge circle size doesn't fit calm pace of map. Please consider raising it by 1 tick (CS3)
*Raise AR by 1 tick to improve readability - 2 feels too slow, considering note density here.
*This diff have so many 1/1 stacks - they aren't recommended as for easiest difficulty, considering how fast BPM is. Althought they are consistent, i afraid that they might be too hard as for the easiest diff - can you please re-consider their usage here? >.<
- 00:02:390 (1) - Add whistle to tail follow vocals
- 00:02:390 (1,3) - Can you please re-space them a bit please here to avoid this overlap? It didn't looks well here
- 00:04:507 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals
- 00:06:978 (4) - I'd remove whistle from here & add it to head of next slider
- 00:08:037 (1) - Whistle to head of slider
- 00:10:860 (1) - I'd remove clap from here & leave just hitnormal - sounds better for me
- 00:28:507 (3) - Add whistle to the head of slider follow vocals
- 00:29:919 (4) - Whistle
- 00:30:272 (5) - Finish to tail
- 00:33:448 (2) - I don't think that this 4/1 repeat-slider is really works well with music - making long sliders for dropping difficulty isn't really works well, and makes this part sounds plain. Try to correlate this part with music more, something like this:
- 00:37:684 (3) - Whistle to head
- 00:39:095 (1) - ^
- 00:41:919 (1) - Missed finish on head
- 00:42:625 (2) - Missed whistle on repeat
- 00:44:742 (1) - This spinner feels too fast for easiest diff - beginners needs time to react on spinners, so making it such short isn't really works well for Easy. How about replace it with slider?
- 00:52:507 (4) - Missed finish on head
- 00:58:860 (3) - Lol, old linear slider XD Hovewer, i think it'd flows much better as just regular curved one.
- 01:00:272 (1) - and make this one just simple liear - for better flow:
- 01:10:154 (1,1) - Such slider overlaps are too confusing for beginners to be used at easiest diff - they would be very hard to read, especially considering low AR. Try to make it more clean here, for example something like this:
- 01:14:390 (1,3) - Re-space them please to avoid overlap
- 01:15:801 (3) - Here should be finish on head too, for consistency
- 01:18:272 (2) - This semi-hiden note might be confusing for beginners. Try to re-arrange placement a bit so it'd be more clean:
- 01:18:625 (3) - Finish follow vocals
- 01:20:037 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle
- 01:22:331 - Sounds very empty without a note here :<
- 01:27:095 (3) - Finish to head follow vocals
- 01:29:919 (3,1) - ^ (to both)
- 01:31:331 (1) - ^
- 01:53:919 (1,2) - Finishes instead of whistles sounds much better for me
- 01:56:742 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
- 01:59:566 (1) - Same as 00:33:448 (2) -
- 02:03:801 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals
- 02:06:625 (3) - ^
- 02:08:037 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
- 02:10:154 (4) - Whistle follow vocals
- 02:18:625 (3) - Missed finish on head
- 02:19:331 (1,3) - Such overlaps are too hard to read for beginners; fully hidden notes shouldn't be used on Easiest diffs. Can you please move it a bit down so it'd be more visible?
- 02:24:272 (3) - Needs whistle on head
- 02:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head
- 02:33:448 (3) - Missed finish
- 02:34:860 (3) - Remove finish and leave just hitnormal - it doesn't fits here
- 02:46:154 (1) - Needs finish on head follow vocals
- 02:47:566 (3) - end this slider at 02:48:625 - and add clap to tail so it'd mach music better
- 02:53:213 (3) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals
- 02:57:448 (1) - ^
- 03:29:919 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals
- 03:31:331 (1) - ^
- 03:32:742 (3) - ^
- 03:33:801 - Feels empty without note here
- 03:35:566 (3) - Needs whistle to head follow vocals
- 03:36:978 (1) - ^
- 03:38:390 (3) - ^
- 03:53:919 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle
- 04:02:390 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle
- 04:05:213 (1) - ^
- 04:08:742 (2,3) - This 1/2 feels so random, considering that you followed drums here all the time. Make it regular 1/1 as you did it before
- 04:12:272 (3) - Needs finish
- 04:16:507 (1) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals
- 04:18:978 (4,1) - This feels kinda counter-flow - how about ctrl+g at 04:19:331 (1) - and re-arrange placement for the next note?
- 04:26:390 (1,1,1,1,2) - This was so empty ;_; Usually end of map should be most powerful & challenging part - in your case it looks very empty, which is just unfitting song :< Can you please make it harder a bit?
[Troogle's Normal]
*Shouldn't it be -Google-'s Normal due to username change? (If no, fix the storyboard cuz it wrotes "Beatmap by -Google-")
*CS3 feels really big & unfitting to the overral calm pace of map - can you please raise it by 1 tick? 4 would look here much better, imo
- 00:13:684 (1) - Nah, this spinner comes totally out of place & doesn't even follows song well. Just unify breaks with other diffs please.
- 00:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head
- 00:45:448 (1) - This spinner is too short for a Normal - even auto barely gets 4000, that'd be simple too hard for beginners. Just replace it with slider please.
- 00:48:448 (2,3) - for all next doubles like these (00:49:860 (5,6) - 00:51:272 (2,3) - and all similiar ones though the map) - they better looks and plays as perfectly stacked, can you please stack them so they'd looks better?
- 01:12:625 (2,3) - Can you please stack this note with head? That'd make this part easier to catch.
- 01:14:389 (1,3) - Please don't to this at Normal diffs - such stacks would be pretty tricky for beginners, and there is high chance for them that they'd misread it. This can be solved easily; just unstack it tiny bit, so this note would be more visible - something like this:
- 01:30:978 (1) - Missed finish on tail
- 01:52:154 (2) - Incorrectly snapped slider: it should be snapped like this if you wants to follow drums properly:
- 01:54:978 (2) - Same as above
- 01:56:213 - Feels weird that you're ignoreing trong drums here, and it might confuse beginners as well - what about add short 1/2 slider to solve it? something like this:~
- 02:01:684 (4) - Repeat of this slider is almost hidden by hitburst from 02:00:272 (2) - which would be very confusing for beginners - can you please move it a bit away so it'd be move visible?
- 02:02:389 (1) - missed finish on head
- 02:47:566 (3) - Needs finish on head follow vocals
- 02:48:801 (5,1) - They plays better as stacked
- 02:54:448 (5,1) - how about make it as 1/2 slider instead of 2 notes so it'd be more beginner-friendly?
- 03:17:566 - 03:28:111 - Ah, this section sounds so empty almost without hitsounds - can you please add some soft-whistles follow vocals during this section?
- 03:37:331 (1) - This should be 1/2 slider to be consistent with your previous rhythm
- 04:05:213 (1) - Finish to head follow vocals
mistake 
Accel World
Thanks for mod, kodora #:3Kodora wrote:
Modding easiest diffs as requested
[Easy]
*Biggest circle size isn't really recommended for anything, and such huge circle size doesn't fit calm pace of map. Please consider raising it by 1 tick (CS3) fixed
*Raise AR by 1 tick to improve readability - 2 feels too slow, considering note density here. fixed
*This diff have so many 1/1 stacks - they aren't recommended as for easiest difficulty, considering how fast BPM is. Althought they are consistent, i afraid that they might be too hard as for the easiest diff - can you please re-consider their usage here? >.<
- 00:02:390 (1) - Add whistle to tail follow vocals fixed
- 00:02:390 (1,3) - Can you please re-space them a bit please here to avoid this overlap? It didn't looks well here fixed
- 00:04:507 (1) - Add whistle follow vocals fixed
- 00:06:978 (4) - I'd remove whistle from here & add it to head of next slider fixed
- 00:08:037 (1) - Whistle to head of slider fixed
- 00:10:860 (1) - I'd remove clap from here & leave just hitnormal - sounds better for me fixed
- 00:28:507 (3) - Add whistle to the head of slider follow vocals fixed
- 00:29:919 (4) - Whistle fixed
- 00:30:272 (5) - Finish to tail fixed
- 00:33:448 (2) - I don't think that this 4/1 repeat-slider is really works well with music - making long sliders for dropping difficulty isn't really works well, and makes this part sounds plain. Try to correlate this part with music more, something like this: fixed
- 00:37:684 (3) - Whistle to head fixed
- 00:39:095 (1) - ^ fixed
- 00:41:919 (1) - Missed finish on head fixed
- 00:42:625 (2) - Missed whistle on repeat fixed
- 00:44:742 (1) - This spinner feels too fast for easiest diff - beginners needs time to react on spinners, so making it such short isn't really works well for Easy. How about replace it with slider? fixed
- 00:52:507 (4) - Missed finish on head fixed
- 00:58:860 (3) - Lol, old linear slider XD Hovewer, i think it'd flows much better as just regular curved one. fixed
- 01:00:272 (1) - and make this one just simple liear - for better flow: fixed
- 01:10:154 (1,1) - Such slider overlaps are too confusing for beginners to be used at easiest diff - they would be very hard to read, especially considering low AR. Try to make it more clean here, for example something like this: fixed
- 01:14:390 (1,3) - Re-space them please to avoid overlap fixed
- 01:15:801 (3) - Here should be finish on head too, for consistency fixed
- 01:18:272 (2) - This semi-hiden note might be confusing for beginners. Try to re-arrange placement a bit so it'd be more clean: fixed
- 01:18:625 (3) - Finish follow vocals fixed
- 01:20:037 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle fixed
- 01:22:331 - Sounds very empty without a note here :<
- 01:27:095 (3) - Finish to head follow vocals fixed
- 01:29:919 (3,1) - ^ (to both) fixed
- 01:31:331 (1) - ^ fixed
- 01:53:919 (1,2) - Finishes instead of whistles sounds much better for me fixed
- 01:56:742 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
- 01:59:566 (1) - Same as 00:33:448 (2) - fixed
- 02:03:801 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals fixed
- 02:06:625 (3) - ^ fixed
- 02:08:037 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
- 02:10:154 (4) - Whistle follow vocals fixed
- 02:18:625 (3) - Missed finish on head fixed
- 02:19:331 (1,3) - Such overlaps are too hard to read for beginners; fully hidden notes shouldn't be used on Easiest diffs. Can you please move it a bit down so it'd be more visible?
- 02:24:272 (3) - Needs whistle on head fixed
- 02:30:625 (1) - Missed finish on head fixed
- 02:33:448 (3) - Missed finish fixed
- 02:34:860 (3) - Remove finish and leave just hitnormal - it doesn't fits here fixed
- 02:46:154 (1) - Needs finish on head follow vocals fixed
- 02:47:566 (3) - end this slider at 02:48:625 - and add clap to tail so it'd mach music better fixed
- 02:53:213 (3) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals fixed
- 02:57:448 (1) - ^ fixed
- 03:29:919 (3) - Whistle to head follow vocals fixed
- 03:31:331 (1) - ^ fixed
- 03:32:742 (3) - ^ fixed
- 03:33:801 - Feels empty without note here
- 03:35:566 (3) - Needs whistle to head follow vocals fixed
- 03:36:978 (1) - ^ fixed
- 03:38:390 (3) - ^ fixed
- 03:53:919 (1) - Finish to head instead of whistle fixed
- 04:02:390 (1) - Needs finish instead of whistle fixed
- 04:05:213 (1) - ^ fixed
- 04:08:742 (2,3) - This 1/2 feels so random, considering that you followed drums here all the time. Make it regular 1/1 as you did it before
- 04:12:272 (3) - Needs finish fixed
- 04:16:507 (1) - Finish instead of whistle follow vocals fixed
- 04:18:978 (4,1) - This feels kinda counter-flow - how about ctrl+g at 04:19:331 (1) - and re-arrange placement for the next note?
- 04:26:390 (1,1,1,1,2) - This was so empty ;_; Usually end of map should be most powerful & challenging part - in your case it looks very empty, which is just unfitting song :< Can you please make it harder a bit?
Overral needs more work at hitsounds and rhythm - too much 1/1 lthough whole map - try to bright more variety at rhythm to make it more interesting.
Good luck!
I'll recheck soon! sorry late ;_;
(Probably posting weekend)
(Probably posting weekend)