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The Brothers Chaps - Too Many Knives

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Mashley
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Mashley
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 03 June 2009 at 09:19:43

Artist: The Brothers Chaps
Title: Too Many Knives
Source: Homestar Runner
Tags: Crack Stuntman an importan rap song poo
BPM: 99
Filesize: 9328kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. 2 Many (4.8 stars, 158 notes)
  2. Not E-Nuff (2.65 stars, 80 notes)
Download: The Brothers Chaps - Too Many Knives
Download: The Brothers Chaps - Too Many Knives (no video)
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CRACK STUNTMAN KEEPS DA BASS PUMPINNNNN'!
Last edited by Mashley , edited 13 times in total.
tieff
Featured Artist
2,254 posts
Joined March 2009
tieff
Don't see any mistakes(

*Press "Star this map!" button*
Nachy
807 posts
Joined April 2009
Nachy
Hong Meiling agrees with Crack Stuntman's campaign with this, don't play with too many knives.
Anyways, Not E-Nuff mode is pretty perfectly done already, it's easy and fun.
2 Many mode is very frantic and fast paced, which is good, it's really enjoyable, syncing is pretty good and sliders and spinners are pretty well made now, all I can suggest are more unique notes, but isn't necessary, it's really pretty well made now.

Also I can see my video conversion is successful.
Shinde
osu! Alumni
707 posts
Joined April 2009
Shinde

I saw absolutely nothing wrong with the timing of the notes or placement/sliders. I'd change the circle colors to something other than default, maybe dark yellow/blue/green, but everything seems fine really, I don't see anything major stopping it from getting ranked.

On a sidenote, try changing the offset to 12,120 and seeing if that works better, just as a comparision. I may have just been hitting the notes late at 12,100 since it is 3am, but that seemed to go better with the song for me. So try it out if you'd like and maybe get a second opinion.
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K2J
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K2J
This is wonderful, I'm thinking about spending Kudosu to get this up. Seriously.

The only issue would be the speed-up at the end of [2 Many], though that can be excused due to the difficulty of the map anyway (with the sliders at 00:27:85 as collateral).

If anything, there should be the Commandos singing "Download all our number one jams!" as the applause.wav.

Star.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley

K2J wrote:

If anything, there should be the Commandos singing "Download all our number one jams!" as the applause.wav.
Yeah, maybe.
Cheat Commandos... Riggidy Roll!
K2J
872 posts
Here since the beginning
K2J
Heheh, why not storyboard the old motto and the new motto as passing and failing, respectively, at the end?
DeathxShinigami
1,176 posts
Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
/me used Swift!
Derekku
COOL DUDE
7,270 posts
Joined March 2009
Derekku
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley

K2J wrote:

Heheh, why not storyboard the old motto and the new motto as passing and failing, respectively, at the end?
But my storyboarding is fail T_T
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[Not E-Nuff]

00:15:43 (2) - 1 square up
00:44:22 (2,3) - This is hard for an easy difficulty. Try to change it.
00:55:12 (1) - This spinner is too short for an easy difficulty. Extend it.
01:20:88 (1,2) - This is hard for an easy difficulty. Try to change it.

[2 Many]

01:01:64 (6,7,8) - Incosistent spacing from (5). Insert new combo on (6) Or adjust spacing.


Anyway i don't find much problems, maps is nearly perfect. Starred
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
+60 to offset then resnap. (12,160)

Not E-Nuff~
Redo the break.

That is all.
mrtn
osu! Alumni
1,065 posts
Joined March 2008
mrtn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Takuma
osu! Alumni
1,704 posts
Joined October 2008
Takuma
lolsong.

- Not E-Nuff
No problems.

- 2 Many:
Needs a SB for the x2 part?
01:01:22 (5,1) - Uh, what do you think of this? To me it's confusing and inconsistent. Not many tricks like this in the map so yeah. I don't think people will pick up on it, but that's just me.
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
- Not E-Nuff
00:53:35 (1) - Make this mirroring both sides.
00:55:16 (1) - Too short for a Easy difficulty and the next hitcircles appear before the spinner.
01:05:47 (1,2) - Center this to the whole screen for looks or keep as is.
01:20:92 (1,2) - Make the audible please...

- 2 Many
00:37:44 (3) - Not spaced to the end of the 2 slider.
00:38:04 (5) - Not spaced, this is a little nazish.
00:50:01 (1) - Center this between the left and right origins of the grid please. Also don't make this a new combo.
00:55:16 (1) - This is a little too short and the next combo starts to appear just when the spinner starts.
00:56:38 (1) - Don't make this start a new combo and leave the green 1 all alone.
01:01:68 (1,2,3) - Out of spacing to the last combo beforehand.
01:20:92 (1,2) - Please make them audible.

Starred' for small amount of suggestions
anonymous_old
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anonymous_old
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blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Not E-Nuff:
00:14:56 (1) - no need for new combo
00:19:41 (4) - restack on the end of 3
00:50:32 (1) - no need for new combo
01:05:47 (1) - align with the end of 3
01:11:53 (3) - make this have the same relative position to 2 as 1 as 2 is to 1
01:19:41 (2) - make this a horizontal reflection of 1
01:20:92 (1,2) - barely audible (I probably would not map these)

2 Many:
I say this difficulty has too many combos, but I guess that is up to you. Personally, I would make it like Not E-Nuff's combos.
00:16:07 (1,1,1) - I really do not see the point for this many combos
00:27:89 (7,8) - make sure the endings are also stacked on top of each other
00:30:32 (5,6) - " "
00:31:53 (1,1,1,1) - I really do not see the point for this many combos
00:36:38 (1,2) - align with 5,3 respectively
might want a sign for the 2x bpm section
01:20:92 (1,2) - barely audible (I probably would not map these)

Your spacing seems to vary a bit in 2 Many like 00:37:74 (4,5) and 00:49:10 (2,3), but I am not going to press on this.
Interesting song and map. Star.
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
sry for late x_x;

[Not E-Nuff]
hit volume is a bit too high imo
also youre using too many hitsounds...like im hard-pressed to find a note without a hitsound on it
01:05:46 (1,2) - maybe use a different hitsound?
definitely cut down on the finishes a little...otherwise this is pretty good


[2 Many]
00:20:30 (2) - remove whistle
01:05:46 (1,2) - use a different hitsound?
youre still overusing hitsounds imo...and i set the hit volume down 1.5 ticks


also for both, i dont think kiai fits this map :(
have a nice star~ good job
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Agent L here... ready to mod!

Not-E-Stuff
[00:13:097] (2) finish here
[00:14:612] (3) clap ALL this slider!
[00:17:925] (2) another finish here..
[00:20:411] (4) ... and here (oh, and clap the previous slider!)
[00:26:119] (2) guess? Yes, another finish!
[00:26:654] for this blue series, a "rhythmical chart" like this could be fine:
Whistle-normal, Whistle-normal, Normal-clap
[01:05:460] (1, 2) clap or finish: choose!

2 many
Perfect! nothing else to be said...

I hope this can be useful... Star'd!
Rapidlslayer
48 posts
Joined August 2008
Rapidlslayer
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Jeffro
680 posts
Joined October 2008
Jeffro
It's perfect. Great job!
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
Offset: 12.153 works best for me


dat's it.
tieff
Featured Artist
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Joined March 2009
tieff
Yay, Larto starred it!
Cool.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
That's tit
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Topic Starter
Mashley
Got bubbled quickly. 16 days compared to 1 month for my 2 ranked maps.
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Gens
[Overall]
- Lower down the beat volume.
- I guess it's too late to ask if I can make a Normal :<

[Timing]
- I'd use Offset 2,449~

[All Difficulties]
01:20:93 (1,2) - Huh why muted? Just make the volume lower or something.

[Not E-Nuff]
00:12:14 (1,2,3) - Stacked is alot more confusing. Mind moving (1,2) around somewhere?
00:44:26 (2,3) - I wouldn't do this on an Easy diff. (Because this is Easy, right?)

[2 Many]
01:18:21 (1,1) - 2x... x_x D:

~ ~ ~

So yeah I guess that's it.
Since the suggestions I made are small, I'm going to star this~
Pipinlover
12 posts
Joined March 2009
Pipinlover
Well, It's kinda ok... But-

The first diff the spinners are too short to get a clear on them to me. and the 2nd diff some of the notes are to close to each other. But it's Worth a star because there isn't to many flaws.
Rolled
osu! Alumni
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Joined January 2008
Rolled

Pipinlover wrote:

The first diff the spinners are too short to get a clear on them to me.
This concerns me a bit, but I think the spinners are easy enough. Auto gets 5k which shouldn't be that hard for the majority of easy-level players to clear the spinner, at least with a 100.

Now that the background is back in the .osz this map deserves to be ranked. Well done, solid, and I like what you did with hard's claps :P
Chaos Anime X
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Chaos Anime X
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