This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009-07-27 at 11:47

Artist: Ayaka Hirahara
Title: Reset
Source: okami
Tags: okami ayaka hirahara iNiS style
BPM: 80
Filesize: 8380kb
Play Time: 03:45
Difficulties Available:

1. Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan (2.75 stars, 204 notes)
2. Kakan ni Okami Dan (1.39 stars, 137 notes)
3. Karei ni Okami Dan (3.72 stars, 253 notes)

Download: Ayaka Hirahara - Reset
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5-31-2009: ANYONE WHO DOWNLOADED BEFORE THIS DATE, PLEASE RE-DOWNLOAD. GOT A BETTER MP3.

Ouendan-style for the win.

I used Distance Snap of 0.7x...

...also, sorry for the imperfect curves. I'm not David Bowie m980 for crying out loud.

Also, Gijinka Amaterasu = OMG... *faints*

EDIT: Files fixed... hopefully. I'll see how large the actually .osz is now.

Anyway, comments pl0x. I love this song.

2009-05-13 11:16: Few fixes.
2009-05-29 00:55: An'ed.
2009-05-31 19:54: Changed media. Fixed up the Breaks, too.
2009-06-05 09:28: Added An's difficulty, but it sounds vague. Could someone please nazi it?
2009-06-05 09:36: Some timing discrimination...
2009 06-05 18:37: A fex fiwes. ALso removed An's difficulty.
2009-07-10 10:20: Removed video. Hitsound re-arrangement.
2009-07-27 11:31: A few fixes

Hi Zekira!

Kakari
is ok

Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan
00:38:995 - pwede ka naman magstart ng slider dito tapos i-end mo siya dito 00:39:558 para may "piii~shiiing" effect rofl
00:40:30 (1) - hitsounds like Karei ni Okami Dan XD

Karei ni Okami Dan
00:22:30 (1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) -1 tiny grid paleft
00:42:55 (8,8) - pwede ibaba mo to kunti para magka-align sa last note
00:57:55 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - hindi naka align ung combo sa previous note
00:39:558 - add a note with whistle and clap.. mas maganda XD
00:40:30 (1,5) - pati ito lagyan mo ng hitsounds mas mapapasunod ka sa rhythm xD
00:48:55 (8) - or maybe lagyan mo ng finish, both ends ng slider except ung reverse arrow
ang daming break!
^ SUGGESTIONS LANG!

[Kakan ni Okami Dan]
No bid mistake, i think, but this giant sliders don't look nice. And it's only my opinion.

[Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan]
Hmm... Maybe too much finish beat.
01:18:558 (7) - Move on 1 grid to the right.
01:20:43 (8,9) - Maybe you should move it on 1 grid to the right?
01:30:558 (7) - Move on 1 grid to the left
01:32:433 - Maybe you should move it on 1 grid to the left?

Hmm...
*Press "Star this map" button*

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Zomg. you a right, sorry.

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Modding attempt: I don't see a reason for this being not rankable.

Though, I personally rather like difficulties that don't resemble too much. Also I guess you don't really need the video due to the awsome BG image.

Stray Bead Star for you.

Agh.... My ears are picking up a certain something..... Is this a rip? It doesn't sound as...pure. If I provided you with an mp3 from the soundtrack (it's beautiful and crystal clear)....would you use it?


As for the map itself, it's very nice. I like how it flows, though it feels like...something's missing. You wouldn't mind if, oh, I dunno, maybe if I made a difficulty or something like that?


Kanan ni Okami Dan
Only thing I noticed was spacing towards the end of this map.
03:23:05 (5,6,1) - Spacing here bothered me a bit, just because it looked so uneven.
03:27:55 (1,2,3) - Spacing is uneven here and bothered me about ten times more.
03:35:05 (5,6,1) - Same as the first although I probably didn't take as much notic as 3:23.

Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan
03:30:18 (4,5,1) - Jump here's kinda...eh. Seems a little much, you know?

Karei ni Okami Dan
I love your jumps. Even though they're just like what I pointed out in Gekiretsu, they seem more fitting and really get you moving around.

Now allow me to throw some stars around.

Besides that, you don't mind if I add this to the list of Okami maps being worked on in my topic, do you?

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I'll be waiting for An to give me the MP3. I'll fix up those stuff, too.

EDIT: MP3 fixed.

Okay, here it is, and I went and fixed for the new offset as well. I'm pretty sure all the timing is spot-on. Some parts were a bit tricky to work with though so someone else checking would probably be a good idea. Feel free to do with the name as you like, Zekira.

Download: Ayaka Hirahara - Reset (Zekira) [Ani].osu

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[Kakan ni Okami Dan]

01:36:75 (1) - Too close from 01:36:00 (3)
01:41:633 - Break too long.
02:12:75 (1) - Remove the clap.
02:39:75 (1) - Too close from 02:39:00 (3)
03:45:75 (1) - Remove clap.

[Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan]

01:00:75 (9) - Add on 01:01:508 finish.
01:41:633 - Break too long.
02:41:63 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Karei ni Okami Dan]

01:41:633 - Break too long.

[Kirei 'Ani' ne Okami Dan]

00:16:60 (2) - Sounds bad.
00:43:13 (8) - New combo.
01:31:97 (5,6) - Sounds bad.
01:40:32 (11) - New combo.
01:41:633 - Break too long.
02:27:75 (1) - Finish spinner here -> 02:29:258 - Sounds better.

Recheck much notes, are placed really bad and on blue lines...

Good map, STAR!

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Zatoichi wrote:

Its funny, this was actually good before you remade it.

Uh, define please? Maybe you meant the 4th difficulty... because I never remade the 1st 3. Also, the 4th diff. isn't mine though.

...I should probably PM An to manage this. If she doesn't reply within a few more days, I may be forced to remove her difficulty.

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Download: Ayaka Hirahara - Reset (Zekira) [Kirei 'Ani' ne Okami Dan].osu

this map is a bit to repetitive on all difficulties so no star from me

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Actually my target audience here would be those used to Ouendan-styled maps, hence why it seems so... 'boring', as you put it, lol. The things I'll be looking out for from your post would be the hitsound issue and spacings. I'll fix some things in lien with your suggestions, though.

Kakan Ni.
Excessive breaks. Mebbe a bit more mapping.
00:36:75 (3) - Off screen a bit. Move up.
00:54:75 (6) - Shorten by 1 Tick.
03:35:25 (5,6) - Move this to the right to correct spacing between 1 and 6.
03:23:25 (5,6) - ^^

Gikeretsu Ni.
00:25:88 (2,3) - Spacing between 2 and 3.
00:31:88 (2,3) - ^^
01:42:008 Wow... This is one Looooooooong Break. Enough to make me exit the map.
03:30:38 (4,5) - Replace this with a slider. Really. Just try it.

Karei Ni
Looks good.
I take it the extra timing sections are for offset?

Star.

Know what, I only applied two of those. Lol...

...well, I guess a lot of people don't really appreciate my take at an Ouendan-styled map

I love this song. And it's good map.
Chourds... It's very emotional part, so I suggest you use normal hitsounds on chourds.

[Kakan ni Okami Dan]
Something strange happend... All note should be 1/4 earlier.
00:28:32 (1,2) - Jump on easiest diff?
00:31:69 (6) - Whsitle.
00:33:57 (1,2) - ^
02:27:57 (2) - Hitsound?
02:57:758 - Decrease sample volume here?
03:33:57 (3) - Finish on start?

[Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan]
Again. All note should be 1/4 earlier.
00:30:57 (1,2) - Nazi, but... Spacing?
01:20:63 (x) - Note here?
01:23:82 (3) - Finish?
01:34:32 (3) - Whistle/Finish.
01:35:82 (3) - ^
02:37:32 (3) - ^
02:38:82 (3) - ^

[Karei ni Okami Dan]
Cool hitsounds.
Heh... All note 1/4 earlier.
00:38:258 ~ 00:40:133 - Cruel with high drain.
00:45:38 (2) - Add note with whistle?

First, you apparently forgot to re-Full DL. Hehe.

Second... I didn't take most of the suggestions D: Well, I changed the sample volume on the second timing points since I do like it a bit more silent there, then adjusted that one jump on Kakan, but most of your hitsound suggestions doesn't really click to me. Still Kudosu since you noticed that jump. Lol.

All Fine to me, Good song. Starred!

This map is great, the only thing I can say is that some more hitsounds could be added in Karei ni Okami Dan, but that's up to personal preference, really.
Some places I'd recommend are:
01:02:258 - Finish: The slider reverses before and after this beat have finish on them. To me it sounds better with 3 finishes rather than loud soft loud.
01:19:508 & 01:20:258 - Finish: pretty much same story.
01:31:508 & 01:32:258 - Finish:^ Again
02:22:508 & 02:23:258 - Finish:^ And Again
02:34:508 & 02:35:258 - Finish:^ *whistles*

I think these timings follow a bit of a pattern, so I'll leave the rest to you

Keep up the excellent work! Starred.

Though I'm not too much into hitsounds, kudosu for the above. Lol.

Great~~! More Okami!

I don't think the video is necessary, IMO. It's a distraction, low quality, and is a lot of MB. It's kinda boring just watching Ammy walk around with Issun's spazztastic hopping, especially if one hasn't played the game. Kinda spoilerish?

And uhh I haven't played Ouendan before so if I make some mistake then ignore it? So that means you have to inherit everything into the other difficulties, right? xP

[Kakan ni Okami Dan]

Fine hit sound work. ^^

You need to inherit the timing sections if you're just lowering the volume, and it seems you don't need any custom override... so un-check that?

I'm not such a fan of the ginormous sliders. Try and break them up or make more interesting shapes?

01:36:75 (1) - nazi move this around a little to make it more symmetrical
01:41:45 (break) - massive break, it's typically not the part you would put a break in... maybe fill in and break when it's off vocal? otherwise, it's pretty boring.
03:42:75 (3) - I love this slider xD but it sounds off. Maybe you need to snap it to a 1/6 or 1/8 at the end? I dunno, not sure about this

[Gekiretsu ni Okami Dan]

Same deal.. inherit timing... breaks... or end earlier.. sliders...

A lot of the finishes irk me as it overrides the actual song. Lower volume? Or replace them with claps. I suggested some.

00:28:50 (1,2,3,4,5) - this looks like a mess, arrange it better?
00:42:75 (6) - kill finishes! maybe add clap to end?
00:45:75 (x) - add note? and then finish
00:48:75 (6) - same deal as above 2
00:51:38 (x) - ^
00:51:75 (x) - ^
00:54:75 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these sound horrible x.x
00:58:50 (3) - clap and whistle instead of finish?
01:00:00 (7) - ^
01:15:75 (3) - reverse the hit sounds (end hit sounds at beginning and vice versa)
01:17:25 (5) - ^

There are a lot of hit sound problems and I'm too lazy to nitpick at it all, so try and find them ^w^ There are many misplaced hit sounds and many places where hit sounds would be nice.

02:11:07 (5) - move it diagonally down-left so (4) is in the middle of (5)
03:30:75 (1) - remove new combo

[Karei ni Okami Dan] - quick modding this one

Same deal.. inherit timing... breaks... sliders... hit sounds... a lot are actually a little better, except the same things you did in the other difficulties I've mentioned.

01:39:75 (1) - remove finish at end
02:09:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's this again...

I don't think the video is necessary

You know what, I don't either. Lol, fine, I'm removing that thing.

Concerning the offsets, well, that part had a bit of 'offset' to it that it doesn't follow the main beat (if it's inherited, the notes go a bit too early)

Concerning that Kami slider -- if 1/16 actually existed then it could be on timing, since 1/8 after is actually a bit late! O_O

Sadly these insane CPs are a bit evident on the DS, especially the chorus ones -- the chorus of many iNiS maps just have the same mapping with a few flips.

Also, custom sampleset is because the Soft-Finish on the Okami skin is a bit bugged (well on my part anyway) so I had to put in the actual sounds from the templateskin first.

I didn't do anything in Kakan yet (but I might consider purging that large slider on the choruses), but your Gekiretsu/Karei hitsounds suggestions were awesome and I altered a lot more than that. I guess I suck too much at hitsounds. Lol...

At Karei ni Okami Dan, the circles should appear earlier: it's off. I also think there are a bit too much breaks... Try adding a spinner.Ofcourse it needs a more difficult map as well... But that can wait. Starred.

Well, I have to say, nicely done pulling it off EBA/Ouendan style. And that's from just playing one difficulty(the easiest one).

And I've never played/seen Okami, but this one has the same name as mine. ^^ And it's two spots down, I just feel like I have to mod it.

[Kakan]
Nothing too much, just the usual things I check. :\
02:42:383 - Reinsert break.
03:21:75 (3) - New combo? Or will it mess the patterns up? I don't like how it's spaced, even if it's EBA/OTO styled.

[Gekiretsu]
02:42:383 - Fix the break.

[Karei]
02:42:383 - The break, fix it! ^,^

Other than those, it's great! Star!

Fixed that note on Kakan by making 2 nearer to 3 instead.

Also, what's the problem with the breaks...? NVM I'm re-inserting... D:

Nothing wrong.

This is a suggestion in the strictest sense.

Karei ni Okami Dan
03:03:77 (1) - maybe flip this and everything after this(till the break) vertically? Falls a little unnecessarily close to the beat beforehand even though I think enough lead in time is there. This is just a really big nitpick but I kind of like how it mirrors if you flip it and everything afterward vertically.

Oh better mp3 and everything? Bubbled. I'll check back in case you change anything.

Ranked!