1. Hard (4.51 stars, 290 notes)
2. Normal (2.52 stars, 191 notes)

1. This needs a Storyboard with glowing stars in it ~ ^^
   
   
2. Just a tip, when fixing sliders, I recommend you not to use Grid Snap.

1. 00:29:425 (1,5) - Why not a beat blanket out of these circles? Same thing with 00:31:593 (3,4). It'll improve the gameplay much better if you'll fix it. Try the pattern I suggested below:
   
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   Follow the code below this image if you like it.
   
   

   80,276,30147,6,0,B|128:240|128:240|160:268|200:270|235:253,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   256,324,31232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,261,31593,2,0,B|311:270|352:268|384:240|384:240|432:276,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
   316,180,33039,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   384,152,33400,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   
   
2. 01:05:926 (4) - I would add one reverse for this slider to emphasize the last syllable the the singer is singing. But since there's a spinner on 01:06:649, you're gonna have to make the spinner start on 01:07:011 instead.
   
   
3. 01:23:996 (1) - Don't abuse the new combo. One new combo is enough in my enough. So therefore, please remove the new combo for this circle.
   
   
4. 01:33:031 (5,6,7) - This slider could make a better blanket the current one in my opinion. Try the image below:
   
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   212,196,93031,2,0,P|184:256|104:264,1,150,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   
   
5. 01:34:838 ~ 01:35:923 - Why do you have to lower the volume to 50% in this part? I couldn't hear the claps loudly anymore on 01:35:200 because of this. Is there a reason why?
   
   
6. 02:02:305 (3) - Add a new combo for this circle to maintain the new combo consistency on this part of the difficulty. Same thing with the circle on 02:11:340 (4).
   
   
7. 02:30:133 (5) - Another one of your beat blanket errors. Fix them please.
   
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   224,188,150133,2,0,P|140:211|125:273,1,150,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   
   
8. 02:39:168 (1) - This new combo is not really necessary. Please remove it instead.
   
   
9. I would highly recommend you reduce your Circle Size by 1 tick. This is to make a better spread with the Hard difficulty. And to avoid the overlaps between almost all of your circles. They don't really look a bit good when the edge of the circles are overlapping.

1. 01:00:686 (6) - Another one of my beat blanket suggestions:
   
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   108,120,60686,2,0,B|139:118|169:152|172:184|172:184|216:184,1,127.5

   
   
   
2. 01:01:951 (8,9,1) - Why aren't these circles symmetrical? You should place them in the center so they'll play a lot better and they'll look good to play.
   
   
3. 01:50:017 (4) - I think if adding a clap in the slider's tail will make a better emphasis with the song and the spinner in my opinion. Try them out yourself and see if you think it's okay. ^^
   
   
4. 02:03:028 (2,4) - Can you place them exactly at the X-axis instead? They'll play and look better in my opinion.
   
   
5. 02:31:579 (1) - Here's another beat blanket suggestion! ^^
   
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   240,132,151579,6,0,P|316:132|358:207,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

   
   
   
6. 02:35:193 (1,2,3) - Meh, not suitable for Hard difficulty in my opinion. Since the spacing is kind of unexpected. How 'bout something like below?:
   
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   226,222,155434,2,0,L|209:244,1,28.3333333333333

   
   
   
7. 03:00:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - Using this kind of pattern is okay as long as you decrease the spacing between 3,4 and 5,6. Else, this will be a very questionable pattern. Although I suggest you use a consistent spacing in this part instead.
   
   
8. Overall Difficulty set to 6 would create a much better spread throughout the whole mapset in my opinion. Bump it down by 1 tick.

1. Reduce HP, OD and AR by 1 tick at least, it's way too high for the easiest difficulty of the mapset.

1. 00:10:632 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.
2. 00:43:519 (1) - Same as above for the same reason.
3. 00:47:495 (1,2,3,4) - Overlapping stuff on the easiest difficulty of the mapset is never a good idea, it might be confusing for beginners.
4. 01:18:575 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
5. 01:23:635 (1,1,1) - Remove this new combo spam, it feels really random to me.
6. 01:33:031 (5,6,7) - Once again, don't use overlaps on the easiest difficulty of the mapset.
7. 02:08:449 (1,2,3) - Same as above for the same reason.
8. 02:16:400 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.
9. 02:30:133 (5) - New combo due to the new stanza and music change.
10. 02:35:193 (1) - Add a finish at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the strong part of the music.
11. 02:39:168 (1) - Remove this single combo from here, it's not needed.
12. 03:05:550 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.

1. 00:10:812 (1) - This finish feels a bit too loud, try to reduce the volume here a bit.
2. 00:25:630 (5) - This circle is touching the HP Bar, try to move it down a bit if possible.
3. 00:43:700 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.
4. 01:17:130 (3,4) - These claps sounds pretty weird compared to the rest of the difficulty.
5. 01:20:021 (3,4) - Same as above for the same reason, I don't like how you've placed them.
6. 01:55:438 (3) - CTRL+G on this slider for better flow.
7. 02:11:882 (3) - The tick on this slider is kinda annoying to hear, silence it a bit.
8. 02:14:954 (1) - Add a finish at the begin of this slider and remove the whistle.
9. 02:16:400 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.
10. 02:35:193 (1,2,3) - They are too far each other, try to space them closer please.
11. 03:00:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - This sudden spacing change might be hard to read at first sight for players.
12. 03:04:105 (1) - Add a finish on this circle and remove the clap.
13. 03:05:550 (1) - Add a whistle at the end of this spinner to emphasize with the piano.

1. 00:02:681 (4,5,6,7) - Create a symmetry on (4,5,6) here and put (7) centered? You might need to turn off dist. snap for this one but it won't be hard to catch:
   
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2. 00:09:186 (6) - Add repeat here and start the following spinner 1/4 after? 00:10:632 definitely needs something with whistle imo...
3. 00:27:979 (3) - Is this slider's end intentionally placed higher than the slider's start? Feels weird imo considering you're going for symmetry on (1,2,3,4,5) here o.o
4. 00:37:014 (4) - This slider's shape flows a bit weird imo, I think standard red point slider looks better this way:
   

   164,220,37014,2,0,B|173:181|173:181|159:140,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

5. 00:38:098 (6,7,1) - It's possible to get a perfect circle here if you used a test circle like this actually:
   
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6. 00:40:990 (3,4,5) - Umm, I'd sacrifice a bit of spacing consistency here to gain perfect encircle instead (using the help of (4)'s approachcircle) - it won't be hard to catch at all though:
   
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7. 00:46:049 (1) - Addition : Drum here maybe?
8. 01:02:312 (6,1) - Try to make these two doesn't touch each other here? You only need to adjust (8,1) as following:
   

   42,84,63035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   80,148,63396,6,0,B|80:220|80:220|96:260|156:264,1,150,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

9. 01:06:649 (1) - I personally think it would be better if you keep mapping on here and start the spinner on 01:07:191 (1) instead (following the instrument) o.o
10. 01:23:635 (1,1) - Umm, I don't think such new combo'ing is required here, I suggest to remove the NC on second (1) or combine these two into a slider though (so the NC on 01:24:358 (1) makes more sense)
11. 01:35:923 (1,2,3) - Would be better if you can put (2) in the center and do a symmetry afterwards:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:46:042 (4,5) - Umm idk... I'd use two 1/2 sliders here personally as it follows the vocals more, but it's up to you though
13. 01:47:488 (1,2,3,4) - Err, I don't really like how this plays before the spinner personally, if you can stack (2,4) like this it'll look more dramatic imo:
    
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14. 01:56:884 (1) - Add a bezier waypoint in between perhaps? It's quite weird for me having a sudden fully linear slider after 01:53:993 (1,2)'s smooth flow ._.
15. 02:09:533 (2) - Put this note in ~x:207 y:120, so (2,3) will look better in play mode? (this is due to stacking's nature (2) doesn't look really good with (1)'s encircle though)
16. 02:14:231 (1,2,3) - As this appeared before the spinner I'd use symmetry again here personally, your current one looks placed a bit random and doesn't appeal really well before the spinner imo:
    
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17. 02:30:133 (1,2,3) - I like the concept here, but arranging (3) to the opposite direction (to make it look like a wave) looks a lot more interesting though xD
    
    SPOILER

    
18. 02:39:168 (1) - Again here, this NC isn't needed imo (but this one's 2-1-1 makes more sense compared to the previous 1-1-1 actually)
19. 02:52:540 (3) - Add a variation like this here? Looks cute imo (:
    

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20. 03:11:333 (1) - Same as what I wrote in Hard here

1. 00:06:295 (1,2,3,4) - Rather than a straight line, an arc flows really graceful with the piano here imo (:
   
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2. 00:10:812 (1) - Whistle + finish here? (not only cymbals appearing here but also the synth~)
3. 00:22:197 (1,2,3,4) - Apply a slight gradual volume decrease here maybe to fit the synth?
4. 00:33:400 (8) - Minor stuff, but if you want to keep this pattern it should be in ~x:362 y:262 (freeze your editor in 00:33:189 to make it clear btw)
5. 00:34:846 (10,11,1) - Umm, why don't you just make these three symmetrical like this? Looks more structural imo xD
   
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6. 00:41:712 (4,5,6,7) - Consider tilting the square a bit so you can put (7) in the center like this? (works fabulous before the spinner :3)
   
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7. 00:50:025 (2,3) - Do a center symmetry on (3) here perhaps? (2) will carry out (1)'s flow better though imo:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:53:277 (1) - I highly recommend to move this down a bit (~y:332) so it doesn't overlap (2) in play mode
9. 01:03:035 (9) - Placing it a bit lower (~y:217) looks fancier imo because 01:01:951 (8,9,1) won't look too linear xD
10. 01:06:649 (x) - The vocals continues here, add note here and start spinner 1/4 after perhaps? Continuing your previous pattern won't be hard though:
    
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11. 01:22:732 (3,5) - Try using Sampleset:Normal on (3)'s end and (5) here? Really, it sounds groovy~
12. 01:33:031 (3) - Umm, shouldn't this be rotated by -6° selection centre to fan (4) o.o...
13. 01:35:923 (3,4,5) - I don't think stacking (5) under (3) works really well here, try this instead?
    
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14. 01:38:091 (6) - If you do above, this can be moved easily to ~x:324 y:50 without ruining flow xD
15. 01:42:428 (3) - Move to ~x:440 to avoid touching (4) here?
16. 01:47:126 (1) - Ah, why no whistle here - the vocals are obviously fitting here orz
17. 01:49:475 (2,3,4) - Umm, how about adding a small jump like this before the spinner for power?
    
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18. 01:56:884 (1) - Move to ~x:180 y:304 to perfectly encircle (2) here? Not really sure about this though
19. 02:05:919 (2) - How about moving this to ~x:316, so there'll be an 'arc' consisting of (1,2,3)'s path? :3
20. 02:10:256 (5) - Again, why no whistle for the vocals here?
21. 02:12:966 (4,5) - I don't really like how (5) touches (2) personally here, it can be easily solved by rearranging (4,5) as below though:
    
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    467,72,132966,2,0,L|499:44,2,42.5
    393,49,133509,2,0,P|314:53|263:135,1,170,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

22. 02:30:133 (5) - I don't think you should keep the spacing consistency here though, I'd go with the perfect encircle instead:
    

    95,177,150133,2,0,P|155:124|256:144,1,170,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

23. 02:38:084 (9,1) - Same thing goes here, this one should be much more easier though:
    
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24. 02:48:926 (5,7) - Would be fun if you CTRL+G these two one by one I think, circular flow xD
25. 03:00:310 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Just offering one variation to your current pattern though:
    
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26. 03:11:333 (1) - How about adding a note here (with whistle, preferably a quieter one) then start spinner 1/4 after? I really, REALLY recommend this to get a dramatic ending (:

1. 160 kbps mp3? I think there's a 192 kbps one... Using the average allowed bitrate feels jarring, you know...
2. To be honest, I'm really confused by the combo pattern. Sometimes an NC is applied not on the beginning of a stanza. Sometimes an NC is applied every stanza, but some other times it's applied every two stanzas. Make them consistent, seriously.
3. Just use the usual hitsound pattern throughout the song. I don't see any reason why you should refrain from using it, especially on the verses.

1. 00:01:235 (3,1) - Inconsistent spacing.
2. 01:53:993 - 02:15:677 - Add claps every beat (1/1)? No, seriously, it sounds way better like that, you know... There's just something wrong without them.

1. 00:36:111 (2,3) - It will go better with the vocal if you combine them into a 1/4 slider that repeats once.
2. 00:40:267 (1,3) - Swap NC? I think it's obvious why.
3. 00:48:760 (6,7) - Combine them into a 1/4 slider? Goes better with the vocal.
4. 00:52:916 (6,1) - Swap NC?
5. 00:59:240 (2,3) - Same as 00:36:111 (2,3).
6. 01:05:565 (5,6,7) - Uh, inconsistent spacing?
7. 01:20:382 - The clap sounds weird here... Add whistle too?
8. 01:23:996 (1) - Feels really awkward to have a slowed slider end at the beginning of a kiai time, especially when the next object is 1/2 beats after it... I think you can find another rhythm that feels less weird.
9. 01:35:200 - Add whistle too here?
10. 01:38:453 (1,2) - Swap NC?
11. 01:50:198 - The clap is unnecessary, seriously. You should remove it, IMO.
12. 02:35:193 (1,2,3) - I swear, these 1/6 jumps are too hard for a Hard dif. Just combine them into a 1/6 repeating slider, or just make a 5/6 slider if you want.
13. 02:39:168 (1) - Same as 01:23:996 (1).
14. 02:48:565 (4,5,6,7) - Not sure about these 1/4 jumps actually...
15. 02:50:733 (1,3) - Swap NC?
16. 02:56:877 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whoa. These 1/4 star jumps come too sudden, don't you think?

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HeatKai wrote:

thank you updated!
I love you setsurei hahahaha

1. 00:25:811 (6) - Uh, make it linear or increase the curve, like that doesn't make much sense.
2. 00:48:760 (6,7) - I'd CTRL+G them
3. 01:03:035 (9) - Move to x:256 y:212 (remember to fix spacing)
4. 02:35:193 (1,2,3) - Confusing to sightread x.x
5. 02:39:168 (1) - Why such a good slowdown forever alone in that corner? :c try to put that slowdown in the middle
6. 02:50:733 (9) - NC?
7. 02:51:094 (1) - Remove NC?
8. 03:00:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - Bad pattern to see and play, try to change it.

1. 00:51:470 (6) - x:320 y:76
2. 01:03:035 (8) - I'd delete this note.
3. 01:35:561 (8) - x:312 y:328 plays better x.x

Frostmourne wrote:

Hey HeatKai

first thing before actual mod is coming.

BPM : 83.000
Offset : 510

Make sure you resnapped all notes, green lines, preview points and etc.
fix this and I will start modding