This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on mercoledì 13 maggio 2009 at 0.30.01

Artist: Yiruma
Title: River Flows In You (Paul John's Remix)
BPM: 140
Filesize: 6042kb
Play Time: 03:24
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (0,55 stars, 174 notes)
2. Hard (4,8 stars, 526 notes)
3. Normal (2,4 stars, 291 notes)

Download: Yiruma - River Flows In You (Paul John's Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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this is my first beatmap, I hope you'll enjoy it!

well I didn't have time to mod atm, but woah .... I can't get it over me head that this is ur first map liar
I did play hard and it did look good, lots of 300s with the offset I used,

Offset - 4,277

Easy~

1. 01:23:99 (4,5,6) - Move a little farther from 1,2,3.

Normal~

1. 01:24:84 (3) - Move 1 tick to the right for even spacing.
2. 02:12:41 (4) - Move 1 tick down.

Hard~

1. 01:09:41 (1) - Move 1 tick to the left.
2. 01:09:41 (1,2,3) - Make this evenly spaced.
3. 01:19:06 (2,3,4) - Stack right on top of 1's endpoint.
4. 03:01:70 (1) - Move a tad closer to 2.

Try an offset of 4,290, then resnap.
The current one is too early ~_^

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A suggestion: on hard at points such as 1:17:361, and those 3.
Move them slightly away from the slider? Because right now from how it looks it seems like there should be another note in there which there isn't, if you know what i mean by that.

not bad for you first map

[Hard]
00:40:29 (5) - Align with 3?
01:03:86 (13) - Align with 10?
02:28:93 (5) - I remember someone telling me that these kind of sliders aren't good....
03:04:07 (9) - ^
03:40:71 (1) - Add a Note Here?

[Normal]
Try to remove the new combos and make longer combos.
There is also some spots where you should add hitsounds.
01:09:00 (1) - Align with 1?
01:09:00 (1) - Align with the blue 2? ---> 03:07:29 (2)

[Easy]
Try to remove the new combos and make longer combos.
02:18:86 (2,3) - Align with 4 and 3?
02:51:43 (3) - Align with 2
03:12:86 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Align the 3's
03:19:71 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Align the 1's

These are mostly suggestions though.

Soothing song. Not bad for your first map~

[Easy]:
00:18:00 (5) - New combo?
02:51:43 (3,4,5) - Move 1 to the left on Grid Level 3. (nazziii)

[Normal]:
00:18:00 (3) - New combo.
01:40:28 (3) - This beat kind of ends early. Maybe you can extend repeat by one and add break?
03:17:14 (2) - If you want to REALLY picky, then just turn off Grid Snap and move this a teensy bit to the right. o.o

[Hard]:
00:46:71 (4,5) - Inconsistent spacing. Move farther away from eachother.
01:01:93 (7) - (Optional) New combo?
01:36:00 (1) - You should probably space this a little more to the left so then people will realize the gap and all.
02:53:46 (6,7) - Consider spacing this out more.
03:24:43 (2) - Remove 1 repeat.

I noticed that the use of sliders and its cleverness got higher as you went up in the difficulties, at least it felt like that to me. You might want to add some hitsounds at the beginning.

Star...XD

some mod over irc and done.

Anyway , star it.

(So you finally found out how kudos work? xD no need to thank me )
Okay here is my mod (I will have to nazi >:D):
Working in grid 3

[Easy]
00:32:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The distance between these notes differ from the next combo (screenshot below), make the distance 1 square bigger
I moved the previous combo next to the current, to make the distance "error" visible
01:11:36 (1) - Start this spinner 1/4 earlier
01:17:14 (1,2,3 , 4,5,6) - The distance between these notes differ from the next combo's, make the distance 1 square bigger
02:46:29 (1,2,3 , 4,5,6) - ^
02:58:29 (1,2,3 1,2,3) - ^
03:12:86 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]
01:27:43 (1,2) - Use distance snap 0,8 here, so (2) will stack (3) of previous combo
01:34:29 (5,6,7) - Move all this notes 1 square up, to allign with (4)
02:52:71 (4,1) - move (1) 1 square to the right, this distance isn't right (remember to do this with the following notes too)
02:59:57 (4,1) - ^

[Hard]
PERFETTO

These are just suggestions, it notices me at first sight.
Starred~

Bravo fury per essere la tua prima map va benissimo.
STARRED^^

Hard:
02:28:93 (5) - That slider is kinda stupid, it's hard to see where it goes, at least in this case.
02:56:36 (1) - That looks like a single note, since it's end is hidden by the other slider. Meeean. change it.
03:04:07 (9) - Eh, I'm not a fan of this slider either.

Normal is fine

Easy:
01:34:71 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The new combos in this section are pretty weird. Redo?


Good job for a first map~

your 1st map is not bad ..
the song is nice ..

Star it :3

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Starred awaiting your response to Andrea's modding! It's pretty much bubblable, but there's a pretty long break in there and that will be frustrating in such a long and slow song.

[Hard]
00:27:64 (2,3,4) - try to fit it with 00:28:07 (5) like 00:28:29 (6,7,8)
00:57:21 (1,2) - why are both of them so far apart?
01:11:14 (6) - move it one level 3 grid to the right
01:19:50 (5,6,7) - all of them 1 level 3 grid to the right (looks better i'd say ).
02:48:00 (1) - move this one 1 level 3 grid up and 1 to the left
02:51:43 (1,2) - these sliders doesnt fit. use 2 stacked circles instead
02:53:14 (5,6) - .^
[Normal]
01:34:28 (5,6,7) - move them one lvl 3 grid up
03:05:14 (1) - move this one one lvl 3 grid down
03:05:14 (1,2,3) - put these 3 one lvl 3 grid down
[Easy]
03:05:14 (1) - move these fellas one level 3 grid down
02:56:57 (1,2) - one level 3 grid up

Thats it
Good luck with your map and take my star

Oh Nice Workd mene hehe <3

ok i've fixed all your things ty so much

Hello,

Offset + timing = ok


[Easy]

00:55:71 (3) - spacing, to fix it make it a new combo
01:10:71 (4,5,6) - i wouldn't use stacks on easy
01:20:57 (7) - new combo
01:34:71 (10) - new combo
01:37:71 (3) - new combo, 01:38:57 (1) - undo new combo, 01:39:43 (2) - new combo
01:41:14 (4,5,6) - once again, i wouldn't use stacks on easy, but if you are still doing so, new combo here: 01:42:00 (6) - and then undo new combo here: 01:42:43 (1) -
02:04:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this whole pattern needs some sound effects, my advice: use claps on these beats here: 02:05:14 (2,4,6) - and use a finish sound on this: 02:10:29 (8) - Oh and if you want, new combo this 02:07:71 (5)
02:24:86 (3) - spacing, to fix it make it a new combo
02:26:36 (4,5) - i guess i'm ok with this because you have time to see they are coming.
02:35:14 (1) - i don't think this beat should start here. It feels weird.
02:48:00 (4) - new combo
02:48:86 (6) - new combo, 02:49:71 (1) - undo new combo
02:51:43 (3) - new combo
02:55:71 (3) - new combo, 02:56:57 (1) - undo new combo
02:57:43 (2) - re-put it on top of the beat
03:14:57 (1) - spacing. Too close to previous beat
03:23:14 (1) - spacing. Too close to previous beat



[Normal]

In the following combo pattern you have two options:
The first is to do this: 01:08:14 (1) - undo new combo, 01:09:86 (1) - undo new combo
Or the second one is just to new combo this: 01:06:43 (4) -
Your choice.
01:34:28 (5,6,7) - you made this on purpose? otherwise align it
01:37:71 (3) - new combo, 01:38:57 (1) - undo new combo, 01:39:43 (2) - new combo
02:00:86 (3) - spacing. I suggest putting this beat to the left, diagonally down of the previous (2) and then the (4) to the right. You even give the beatmap more movement by doing this and fix the spacing too.
Do the same with the next pattern.
02:46:29 (2) - new combo, 02:47:57 (1) - undo new combo, 02:48:00 (5) - new combo, 02:49:71 (5) - new combo, 02:50:57 (1) - undo new combo
02:55:71 (3) - new combo, 02:56:57 (1) - undo new combo
03:07:71 (3) - spacing
03:13:71 (2) - re-put on top of slider's end
03:15:43 (2) - re-put on top of slider's end



[hard]

00:28:29 (6) - new combo, 00:29:57 (1) - undo new combo, 00:30:00 (2) - new combo
00:36:64 (9) - spacing and new combo. Also the music tells me you should make this slider one tick longer.
00:39:86 (4) - new combo, maybe add two more beats after (6) to end with the music before the next combo.
00:48:21 (8) - new combo, 00:48:64 (1) - undo new combo
00:53:36 (1,2,3) - spacing here differs with 00:55:07 (1,2,3) -
01:06:86 (2,3,4,5) - this combo doesn't look too clean when playing. Scores hide the beats a bit. It's not bad, it just doesn't look too good.
01:07:28 (3) - new combo
01:09:00 (10) - new combo, 01:09:43 (1) - undo new combo, 01:10:71 (4) - new combo
01:21:86 (5) - new combo
01:29:14 (3) - new combo
01:30:43 (1) - undo new combo, 01:30:86 (10) - new combo
01:37:71 (6) - new combo
02:16:71 (2) - re-put this one top of slider's end
02:25:71 (1) - undo new combo and then new combo this 02:25:93 (2) -
02:53:14 (5) - new combo, 02:54:43 (1) - undo new combo, 02:54:86 (2) - new combo
02:56:36 (7) - new combo
03:09:43 (6) - new combo, 03:09:86 (1) - undo new combo, 03:11:14 (7) - new combo, 03:11:36 (1) - undo new combo.
03:38:57 (5) - move this slider to the left so it follows the pattern


I liked the song and beatmap style too, not bad for being your first, good job.

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Nice map fury

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Hello,

Few more fixes regarding spacing, new combos and aesthetics.



[Easy]

01:09:43 (3) - new combo
01:24:00 (4) - new combo
01:25:71 (7) - new combo, 01:26:57 (9) - new combo, 01:27:43 (1) - undo new combo
01:30:86 (4) - new combo
01:32:57 (7) - new combo
02:35:14 (1) - this beat shouldn't start here, move it to the top. Start from there. Besides, it doesn't even match the slider's end. It looks ugly when it appears.



[Normal]

00:14:57 (3) - new combo, 00:15:43 (1) - undo new combo
00:21:43 (3,4,5) - i see that you fixed that by moving it to the other side, but spacing is still wrong. Spacing shouldn't change in easy difficulties, it shouldn't change in normal difficulties either, and spacing changes on the same combo pattern is a nono. Maybe if it was insane difficulty and the change is obvious; otherwise don't do it. Your spacing change is really easy to follow, but the thing is that players expect a bigger spacing by judging the previous two beats here.
00:28:29 (3,4,5) - same with this
01:19:71 (5) - new combo, but might also stay there. your choice
01:26:57 (3) - new combo, 01:27:43 (1) - undo new combo.
02:04:28 (1) - i still think this beat shouldn't start here. it feels like if i need to move rather than staying there waiting for it.
you can fix this by starting this beat: 01:57:43 (1) - down, instead of up, then this 01:59:14 (2) - goes where (1) was and (3) where (2) and (4) where (3) was. Then you leave the rest where it is, and it will be perfect. This is just my opinion, you can also leave it as it is.
02:12:86 (5) - new combo. Beside going along with the music, you let the players know that the spacing/speed changes.
02:15:00 (2,3,4,5) - align all of these with the previous (1)
02:16:28 (5) - new combo, 02:16:71 (1) - undo new combo, 02:18:00 (5) - new combo
02:17:14 (4,5,6) - spacing here don't match the previous one. That is why (4) and the beat under it aren't aligned.
After fixing align the last slider as well.
02:39:75 (1,2) - i don't like this stack for normal.
02:49:29 (4) - new combo this so it works just as this one 02:47:57 (1) -
In this next combo pattern, you can do the same as the previous one by doing this: 02:52:71 (4) - new combo, 02:54:43 (4) - new combo. This way you obtain the same pattern design. Because if you listen closely, none of the beats i told you to new combo, have sound in the back.
02:59:57 (4) - here, you don't do new combo because it do sounds with the music.
03:13:71 (2) - this beat here, re-put in on top of the slider's end, it doesn't match.
03:15:43 (2) - same with this
03:17:14 (2) - same with this, and after fixing it, align the next beats with this too.
03:21:00 (4) - new combo
03:22:71 (4) - new combo



[Hard]

00:43:50 (1,2) - too close from the last combo
01:09:00 (1,2,3) - inconstant spacing
01:25:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Check spacing here, maybe it is correct, but the beats distance varies. Fix that for a better look.
02:13:71 (5) - i think this is a good place for a stack. Listen to the song. It's fine as it is though.
02:16:71 (2) - re-put this on top of slider's end so it matches correctly
02:22:50 (2,3,4) - align with slider's end if you want.
02:24:21 (2,3,4) - same here. And if you do so, don't forget to re-align the following beats.
02:46:29 (3) - new combo
02:52:71 (4) - new combo
02:54:43 (4) - new combo

Rename song to "River Flows In You (Paul John's Remix)". That's an ugly space right there.

EDIT: Title fixed. Bubbled.

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ty so much mtmcl and i'm sorry but u know ty again