1. you need to volume down to 60%

1. 00:22:342 (2) - remove clap first slider
2. 00:32:265 (1,1) - try this rhythem!
3. 00:48:188 (1) - delete this and add slider here 00:47:958~00:48:188
4. 01:29:265 (5) - move to (256,312) make triangle~
5. 01:32:958 (1) - clap on first slider
6. 01:39:881 (1) - finish?
7. 01:52:342 (3) - return back maybe confuse Easy Player..move to (160,344)
8. 01:54:650 (2) - clap on tail slider
9. 01:59:727 (2,3) - clap on (2) and (3) replace clap to whistle

1. 00:04:342 (5) - NC
2. 00:18:188 (1) - remove NC
3. 00:18:650 (2) - NC
4. 00:33:111 (3) - move to 00:33:188 and end white tick 00:33:419
5. 00:47:035 (4) - remove finish
6. 01:13:804 (7) - NC
7. 01:30:419 (1,1) - those may make confuse Normal Player..spin end here 01:31:573
8. 01:48:188 (3) - perfectly overlap on (465,145)
9. 02:24:188 (6) - finish?
10. 02:29:727 (3) - NC

Legenda wrote:

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→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[in General...]
The Combo colours feels a bit same among themselves. Make them better by applying this code at all diffs:

[Colours]
Combo1 : 250,78,3
Combo2 : 255,255,183
Combo3 : 255,176,98
Combo4 : 237,139,220

[easy]
00:09:188 (2) - Make a better blanket: ► Moving middle point to x:96 y:0 and ► the last dot (tail) to x:176 y:40.
00:14:958 (2) - To a slightly better pattern: ►Move 1 grid right
00:16:111 (3) - To safe spacing: ► Move 1 grid right
00:16:573 (4) - To safe spacing: ► Move just the head point by 1 grid up.
00:18:188 (1) - To better flow: ► Move to x:24 y:208.
00:20:958 (4) - To better flow and blanket: ► Move to x:368 y:248.
00:31:573 (2) - Move to x:448 y:32, and...
00:32:265 (3) - ...move to x:448 y:240, and...
00:33:419 (4) - ...move to x:96 y:240 to safer spacing (to the eyes too).
* About the last mod: I tested a slider here too, but it didn't look cool imo ): so just kept the notes, only moving them as I said.
00:48:650 (2,3) - Pattern suggestion → http://puu.sh/2RnHr.jpg
00:53:265 (1) - TOO close from the last! It's an Anti-jump, which is allowed at Insanes (and some Hards) only. Solve this by moving to x:136 y:80.
00:54:188 (2) - Move 3 grid right for safer spacing and to keep it a bit more onscreen (:
01:00:650 (1) - Move 1 grid right better pattern.
01:01:573 (2) - Move 1 grid up, same reason.
01:02:496 (3) - Move to x:32 y:336, same reason.
01:02:958 (1) - Move to x:32 y:192 and the 3rd dot to x:312 y:168, and...
01:04:342 (2) - ...move to x:408 y:72, and...
01:04:804 (3) - ...move to x:440 y:208 to a slightly kinder pattern.
01:11:727 (3,4) - Move them by 2 grid left better blanket and patterns.
01:14:035 (6) - I feel there is room for a 1/1 repeating slider instrad of this note here (: just like this → http://puu.sh/2RGmN.jpg → and if you follow this line, remember to set 01:15:881 (1) to x:80 y:104, 01:16:804 (1) to x:256 y:320 and 01:17:727 (2) to x:80 y:104 to keep spacing safe.
01:26:958 (2,3) - Could make a better blanket here by ► set the 3rd dot of 01:26:958 (2) to x:168 y:48, and 01:28:342 (3) to x:208 y:168, and 01:28:804 (4) to x:144 y:280 and 01:29:265 (5) to x:272 y:280.
01:40:342 (2) - Move the 3rd dot to x:376 y:72, better blanket

[Normal]
* I feel this dif could be remapped but... let's go
00:02:958 (2) - To a better pattern and solve spacing, move to x:264 y:40 and...
00:03:419 (3) - ...move to x:384 y:88 and...
00:03:650 (4) - ...move to x:424 y:144.
00:24:650 (6) - For better flow move it to x:232 y:80 and...
00:24:881 (7) - ...move to x:304 y:64.
00:32:727 (2) - For same reason, move to x:232 y:304 and....
00:33:188 (3) - ...move to x:344 y:224
00:44:265 (1,2,3,4) - Pattern suggestion → http://puu.sh/2S0X9.jpg and http://puu.sh/2S0ZL.jpg
00:47:958 (5) - Add NC, shorten it to 00:48:188 and make like this → http://puu.sh/2S28N.jpg
00:55:342 (1) - JUMP! Please make Ctrl-< and move to x:120 y:240 for better spacing.
00:56:035 (2) - Move it 1 grid down for better square.
01:10:111 (1) - JUMP! Please move to x:280 y:32.
01:10:804 (2,3,4,5) - For a better pattern, move (2) to x:376 y:184, (3) to 272 y:280, (4) to x:136 y:246 and (5) to x:64 y:144.
01:13:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - and possibly some further notes -- This part seems to me it could more like being remapped but... it's important see other's ranked maps. You could see the pimpG ranked maps (see the [Normal] diffs on each) to have an idea.

[Hard]
* Feel this is a bit better than Normal diff.
00:02:381 (2) - Move to x:72 y:88 to better little stream.
00:04:342 (1) - Better blankets: move the slider to x:488 y:296, the 2nd dot to x:400 y:344 and last dot to x:312 y:296
00:04:342 (1,2,3) - Better pattern → http://puu.sh/2S2RV.jpg
01:01:919 (5) - Move to x:112 y:168, better triplet.
01:40:688 (2,3,4) - Unsnapped notes! Please snap (3) to 01:40:804 and (4) to 01:40:919 and don't forget to set 01:41:035 (1) to x:436 y:208 where feels look better here.
01:49:418 (8,9,10) - These notes Feels unsnapped, and one of them seem to being an extra note than the song tells us.
♥ There is a nice blanket here 01:58:342 (4,5) ♥ Just I hope you get Pro at simplest forms as they are basis for the more complex ones (:
02:10:227 (3) - Move to x:340 y:312 better triplet.
02:19:804 (1) - Move 1 grid up, better square.
02:23:381 (2) - Move 1 grid right and...
02:23:496 (3) - ...move 1 grid left and...
02:23:611 (4) - ...move 1 grid left too, for better quintuplet stream

1. offset +20
2. remove the osb file in the folder since you are not using storyboard
3. inconsistency in combo colors. why are you using only 2 combo colors anyways? 4 colors is the recomended, also the combo colors blend with the background a bit.
4. use claps following the drums ( that logic: http://puu.sh/Bfe3 ). if you want to follow vocal use whistle
5. kiai is inconsistent between the diffs, thats not right since you made all diffs and mapped the same parts

1. 00:16:573 (4,2) - make them not overlap this is the diff for begginners. placing this sliders like that affecta the readability of the notes. for exemple they would hit 2 before 1 because its closer to 4's end. its not how it should be seen, i know. but newbies are not used to the game and all...
2. 00:18:650 - finish at slider start
3. 00:33:188 - finish at slider end
4. 01:14:035 - finish at start
5. 01:16:804 - finish
6. 01:29:727 (1) - make spinner end at 01:31:573 - because kiai starts at 01:32:496 - and i think a circle should be there. so moving the spinner end one beat earlier will give enough time to hit the circle
7. 01:47:265 - finish at start

1. 00:23:496 (3,4,5,6) - placement can be a bit confusing http://puu.sh/2WBWc.jpg also check the spacing
2. 00:26:496 (2,3,4,5) - place them like that instead of forcing that overlap http://puu.sh/2WC65.jpg will need to rearrrange the next notes a bit
3. 01:17:727 (1) - make the repeat in the white tick, blue tick feels annoying. will need to remake the next slider, i sugest making it a 1/1 beat slider at 01:20:035 - or a half beat slider with repeat
4. 01:28:111 (1) - make a cleaner curve for aesthetic
5. 01:53:958 (1,2) - blanket does not looks good here
6. 02:06:188 (1,2,3) - strange arrangement , try something like that http://puu.sh/2WCwB.jpg
7. 02:12:188 (5,1) - this pattern is kinda unfitting, its because you are following both vocal and instruments, the rhythm is a bit confuse. i sugest you try this for instruments http://puu.sh/2WCI4.jpg or this for vocal http://puu.sh/2WCKG.jpg
8. 02:20:958 (1,2,3) - shape should be more consistent. anyways cleaner curves would look much better

1. 00:32:265 (1,2,3,4) - untijump is not correctly used. stack 1 to previous slider end. and use the ds 1,1x for the other notes http://puu.sh/2WD3w.jpg
2. 00:48:188 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - increase the distance between the notes by degrees. will look really nice
3. 00:55:342 (2,3,4,5,1) - same as above
4. 02:18:881 (5) - weird
5. 02:24:881 (1) - ^
6. 02:29:958 (7) - ^

1. consider changing SV in different diffs?
2. use normal sampleset instead of soft in Kiai seems better
3. your starting point of Normal diff and Hard diff are 00:02:055, but 00:03:901 in Easy diff, consider making them consistent
4. try to make some delicious sliders ? XD

1. there are some useless inherited points, consider deleting them.
   
   useless inherited points

   00:02:285
   00:44:265
   00:47:747
   02:32:055
2. 00:09:208 (2) - put the middle control point of the slider at x:96 y:0 will be neater
3. 00:10:593 (1) - x:108 y:168 to be a nice blanket, remember to snap 00:11:978 (2) after changing it
4. 00:14:516 (1,2) - this note changed from 1/2 ticks to 1/1 ticks, it seems to be weird to the music, suggest that move them to 00:14:285 and the slider 2 end at 00:15:670.
5. 01:00:670 (1) - remove NC
6. 01:08:055 (1) - ^
7. 01:20:516 (2,1) - try not to overlap each other
8. 01:32:516 - I think there should be a note here, end the spinner at 01:31:593 and add a note and 01:32:516
9. 01:51:901 (2,3) - they are overlapped, try to separate them?
10. 02:00:208 (3,1) - please do not stack any notes or sliders in Easy diff, it will confuse new player
11. 02:03:901 (1) - remove NC
12. 02:06:208 (1,2,3) - same with the overlap issues

1. 00:18:439 (1) - remove NC
2. 00:44:285 (1,2,3,4) - IMO, I think these sliders will confuse players
3. 00:47:747 (5) - useless inherited point
4. 00:57:439 (5) - NC
5. 01:06:670 (6) - NC, if you take this suggestion, please remove NC in 01:07:131 (1)
6. there are many unsnapped objects at the slider's tail from 01:17:747 to 01:30:439, please check it in advance
7. 01:32:978 (2) - unsnapped
8. 01:34:131 (4,5,6) - ^
9. 01:38:055 (5,6) - ^
10. 01:39:439 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:43:593 (1) - ^
12. 01:50:516 (1) - ^
13. 01:55:131 (3) - ^
14. 01:57:901 (1) - add a clap at white tick, remove the clap in red tick
15. 01:58:824 (3) - unsnapped
16. 02:05:516 (1) - remove NC
17. 02:32:055 - useless inherited point
18. there should be more unsnapped objects, please recheck it with Aimod (Ctrl+Shift+A)

1. imo, the jumps should fit the music, there are some jumps. For example, 00:44:285, music in this part is soft, it is not needed to use 1.5x sv, using 1.5x sv in this part is quite weird, use 1.0x seems better
2. 00:47:978 (1,2,5,6) - I was confused in the first time to play this diff QwQ, put an NC in 00:48:670 (3) will be clear.
3. 01:17:747 (1) - after u changed the sv, snap most of the notes seems better, I think this part was quite hard to read maybe it was just my skills worse XD
4. 02:32:055 - useless inherited point

Legenda wrote:

→ Unrankable things, must fix
→ My human doubts, things to consider
→ Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods

[General]
* Slider Vel. 1.4 is perfect for [Hard] imo.
but Slider Vel. 1.4 for [Easy] is too high. I could suggest SV of 0.8 for [Easy].
and Slider Vel. 1.4 for [Normal] is a bit higher than should be. I could suggest SV of 1.0~1.2 for [Normal].
* Obviously, after adjusting the Slider Vel., you must recalc. slider lengths and mighty resnap notes.

[Easy]
00:48:670 (2,3) - Could make like this → http://puu.sh/310Nd.jpg
01:05:285 (1,2,3) - Could make like this → http://puu.sh/310V1.jpg → with 01:07:131 (3) at x:184 y:176
01:08:978 (2) - Move to x:280 y:288

[Normal]
01:24:901 (1) - Extend it to 01:25:824 so it'll fit better the song imo.
01:26:285 (3) - Extend it to 01:26:516 (the next white tick)
01:26:747 (4) - Move it 1 grid down, so the spacing with prior note will be regularised.
01:26:747 (4) - Extend it to 01:27:670, fits better the song imo.
01:28:131 (1) - Extend it to 01:28:593, same reason.
01:29:516 (4) - Extend it to 01:30:208, same reason

[Hard]
HP-1 - seems a bit higher than it could be imo
02:03:670 (4) - Extend it to 02:03:901, same reason as pointed at [Normal]

1. 00:02:055 (1) - Move the third point two grid left for something more symetrical.
2. 00:20:516 (3) - Move the end point one grid down for a better blanket.
3. 00:24:208 (3,4,1) - Why not this:
   
   
4. 00:31:131 (2) - Move the end point 2 grids up for a better blanket.
5. 00:49:593 (2,3) - Well, i won't point out the bad blankets anymore.You should really recheck all your diffs and try to do your blanket nicer because a big majority of them aren't good. And when a blanket isn't good with a Grid Level 3 we can see it while playing and it's not very beautiful..... Take example on your GD.
6. 01:10:362 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use Compose > Create polygon circle for a nice pentagon. Because we can clearly see you make it blindly. Look at the difference:
   
   
   At left -> yours
   At right -> a good one
7. 01:18:670 (1,2,3,4) - You should remove some clap here. There are too many of them. 01:25:131 (1,2,3,4) is more quit and more pleasant for example.
8. 01:31:593 (1) - I thin you'd better remove it and end the spinner here.
   It's really weird how in some part of your diff the blanket are ALL good and in other part they are ALL bad.... It looks like a collab XD
9. 01:44:055 (1,2) - Why is the spacing between the two notes so low? It's x0.87 where it should ba x1.
10. 02:13:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 01:10:362 (1,2,3,4,5) even if this one is way better than the previous one.
11. 02:28:824 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^

1. 00:16:131 (1,2,3) - Maybe move somewhere near x=171 y=376. I think it palys more smoothly this way and you havn't this weird angle between the three.
2. 00:18:208 (1) - Clap?
3. 00:18:670 (1) - Finish on the head?
4. 00:51:439 (5) - Split it into two note or turn it into a one beat long slider? I don't see why you want to put something on the red tick. It doesn't seems to follow the song.
5. 02:01:824 - Add a note?
6. 02:02:055 (1) - Finish on the end?

1. Actually blanket and pentagons are good in this diff.... I don't even....
2. 00:16:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make everything symetrical?
3. 00:21:670 (3,4) - Make them parallel?
4. 00:51:670 (3) - CTRL+G? The flow isn't good....
5. 01:06:670 (1,2,3) - Make them symmetrical? like this:
   
   
6. 01:21:208 (1) - Move the end point to x=340 y=92 for a better blanket.
7. 01:30:439 (4,5) - Move 4 to x=224 y=292 and 5 to x=308 y=280 for a better w-shape.
8. 01:52:593 (1) - Move it to x=276 y=384 for a better blanket with 01:52:131 (3) (And the blanket 01:53:055 (2) stay good)

1. Your SV is 2.7 through most of the map. It's..... unusual.... Yeah! Let's say this.
2. 00:27:188 (4) - Try doing smoother curves. It looks way better. like this:
   
   
   For a diff based on long slider you should know better how to make nice curve with them......
3. 00:47:727 (10) - This finish doesn't really fit withvthe music.... But if you want to keep it lower the volume because it's way too loud.
4. 00:47:265 (8,10,2) - They overlap.
5. 01:28:342 (1) - You barely find this kind of thing in insane diff because it's useless and more boring to play than a spinner. Split in 1/4-beat lon slider with two arrows like this (for example):
   
   
6. 01:39:650 (2,3) - The overlapping isn't really beautiful.
7. 01:45:419 (3,4,5) - Unrankable.
8. 01:51:650 (2,3) - What is it supposed to follow in the music?
9. 02:02:035 - Why do you have slow sliders in the kiai! When the music iis the most intense?
10. 02:30:650 (1) - You already have 3 spinners in this diff. This one seems completly useless. Besides nobody use any spinner here in the other diff.... It just doesn't fit the music.

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

[Dekaane's Normal]

• 
  /*Oops, synchronized with AnreFM's diffs.

1. 00:16:131 (1,2,3) - Maybe move somewhere near x=171 y=376. I think it palys more smoothly this way and you havn't this weird angle between the three. /*Made something here.
2. 00:18:208 (1) - Clap? /*Done
3. 00:18:670 (1) - Finish on the head? /*Done
4. 00:51:439 (5) - Split it into two note or turn it into a one beat long slider? I don't see why you want to put something on the red tick. It doesn't seems to follow the song. /*I want to give a bit of variety to the diff, it fits for vocals.
5. 02:01:824 - Add a note? /*I really want to keep that tiny break, and adding notes in offbeat there may be confusing for a player.
6. 02:02:055 (1) - Finish on the end? /*Done

~Good Luck~

DakeDekaane wrote:

I really don't get why it looks plain

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, M4m here~ (I hope this was the map I was supposed to mod...)

Okamiratsu's Insane:

00:11:034 (2) - clap should go on end, not on start done
00:12:650 - add note with clap?done
00:27:188 (4) - this curve could maybe look a bit nicer http://puu.sh/3soiA.jpgdone
00:44:265 - hitsound volume -10%? seems a bit loud IMO done
00:44:265 - 0.75x slowdown may fit here too, just my opinion though no change
00:47:727 (10) - 100% is a bit too loud here, especially with the quiet part before it >< maybe put 60% or 70% volume?done
00:55:111 (10) - IMO finishes like this sound a bit weird, and would sound a bit better at the start of the next measure. well it's up to you to change it I guess (there's other ones like this too, if you agree just go through the map and change it)done
01:17:496 (7) - finish on enddone
01:23:034 (5) - http://puu.sh/3snpp.jpg ? current rhythm with ending on 1/4 seems a bit weird done
01:24:188 (8) - remove finish and put finish on 01:25:111 (1) - instead?done
01:30:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too many claps in a row like this sounds weird >< I think normal hit-normal is enough heredone
01:17:727 ~ 01:30:650 - this whole part needs more hitsounds, there's none at all .-. I think adding soft-hitwhistle here would sound nice~done
01:28:342 (1) - http://puu.sh/3sofp.jpg something like that? would be way more interesting to play IMO :3 done
01:41:265 - add note with clap? no change
01:47:265 - add kiai fountain like the other diffs?done
01:50:611 (10,11) - just the clap on (9) is enough, remove these claps?done
01:50:496 (9) - http://puu.sh/3snBx.jpg ? the 1/4s don't fit the song very well done
01:54:304 (2,3) - remove clap?done
02:02:727 (3) - slowdown isn't necessary here, the song goes at the same pace as before o.odone
02:07:573 (4) - hidden repeatdone
02:08:496 (6) - http://puu.sh/3snEq.jpg instead? might be more interesting to play than just a 1/4 slider no change
02:11:958 (10) - remove clap? just keep the current rhythm going sounds fine here~done
02:12:765 (2) - ^done
02:12:650 (1,4) - switch NCs? the measure starts at (4)done
02:15:188 (2) - same as 02:08:496 (6) - no change
02:16:804 - add kiai fountain like the other diffs?done
02:16:804 (8,1) - switch NCs? same idea as beforedone
02:25:111 (2) - same as 02:08:496 (6) - or since this is a different section you could put a stream here instead to do something different :3 no change
02:28:111 (2) - http://puu.sh/3snJh.jpg ? sounds weird not using a clap and keeping the rhythmdone


that's it, hope it helps good luck~~

pieguy1372 wrote:

hi, M4m here~ (I hope this was the map I was supposed to mod...)

Hard:

01:10:593 (2,3,4,5) - is this pattern really OK in hard diff? o.ouhh why not?o.o
01:28:131 (1) - http://puu.sh/3snUq.jpg do this and continue using whistles like before?done
02:29:978 (1) - 02:30:901 (3,4) - add whistle on the start of each one? it might follow the sound in the background better ><yeah


that's it, hope it helps good luck~~

rezoons wrote:

Hi ,

M4M:

(It's forbidden to give kudo for post where the Guest differ update his GD. It's only for modders and those who helps with timing, SB, mp3 this kind of things... I'm talking about 3 post above me.)Uhh I guess it's not forbidden since i saw many people did that and it IS helping to have someone make a GD for you so.. the kd's is theirs^^

[Hard]

1. Actually blanket and pentagons are good in this diff.... I don't even....uhh.. thanks?
2. 00:16:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make everything symetrical?lol forget that little bit. fixed
3. 00:21:670 (3,4) - Make them parallel?done
4. 00:51:670 (3) - CTRL+G? The flow isn't good....done
5. 01:06:670 (1,2,3) - Make them symmetrical? like this:
   
   
   no i'd like to keep the 01:06:670 (1) - shape connected with the previous slider, if it is straight symmetrical like the pic, it won't look at least a bit connected
6. 01:21:208 (1) - Move the end point to x=340 y=92 for a better blanket.moved to y76 instead
7. 01:30:439 (4,5) - Move 4 to x=224 y=292 and 5 to x=308 y=280 for a better w-shape.done
8. 01:52:593 (1) - Move it to x=276 y=384 for a better blanket with 01:52:131 (3) (And the blanket 01:53:055 (2) stay good)done

~Good Luck~

CDFA wrote:

Doin this mod4mod. In the future, PM me telling me what map you want me to mod .

Insane:
Biggest issue I see with this is that a lot of patterns aren't very coherent. You have cool sliders but they're not working together to make anything.
Oh and also the 1.5x SV section makes this so fast, way faster than it should be. This song is meant to kind of have a cool groove to it and you're having an SV like it's supposed to be high paced action. I kind of want to keep it that way for the sake of insane diff
00:04:111 (1) - Make this the same shape as (8)? done
00:07:573 (2,3) - Same as I said before, this isn't really making anything, it's just kind of theredone
00:14:957 (3,4) - Try avoiding overlaps with (1) and (2)?done
00:24:419 (7) - Have this stack to (5)? (Or have (5) stack on this slider's end)done
00:25:804 (2) - Avoid overlapsdone
00:44:265 (1) - The endpoint in a ~ should never be higher than the beginning. It should be somewhat lower.done
01:33:650 (4) - This note is kind of really hiddendone
01:40:573 (3) - Try making this not overlapdone
01:45:881 (4,5) - ^. It's confusing to not know where the slider ends and stuffdone
01:48:881 (6) - Make this curve more notabledone
01:49:804 (8) - ^done


Uguu

CDFA wrote:

Doin this mod4mod. In the future, PM me telling me what map you want me to mod .

Normal:
00:17:055 (3) - Try avoiding this overlap with (2)? /*Done
01:18:670 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - It may be a good idea to follow the vocals here instead. Like, I can read it, it plays fine, but it's just weird for a normal to not be following the leading melody /*I was a bit afraid of this part, I tried my best here to not making this too hard ;~;
02:06:208 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider There's a whistle and I'm using the Normal sampleset as claps ;~;
02:20:977 (1) - ^ /*^
02:21:670 (2) - Add clap on repeat /*Done
02:22:362 (3) - Add clap on end /*Done

Teara wrote:

Some clarification on kudosu.

Only give kudosu for mods which has been useful in some way, not guest difficulties. Even if you feel they deserve it, its not allowed since the GD is still part of the mapset as a whole.

Thanks.

CDFA wrote:

Doin this mod4mod. In the future, PM me telling me what map you want me to mod .

Overall:
The mp3 cuts out really suddenly.

Hard:
00:54:208 (5) - Add clap on beginning of sliderok
01:05:747 (7) - Turn off grid snap to stack this perfectlylol yeah
01:45:670 (4) - Add clap to end of sliderok

Easy:
01:07:131 (1) - Add clap on end of sliderok
01:17:747 - Why use 100% volume for this part? It sounds really out of placechanged

Uguu

1. Combo colours are hard to be distinguishable. Epecially, combo3 and conbo4 are too same orange colour

• 
  Good!

1. 00:11:978- add a note
2. 00:15:670- ^
3. 01:21:208 (1,2) - exchange them for a slider
4. 01:55:362 (2,3) - ^

1. 01:07:593 (3) - it is better to replace start with end
2. 01:38:055 (1,2,3,4,1) - How about making them regular pentagonal shape?
   
   SPOILER

   

   200,92,98055,6,0,P|237:88|280:64,1,75
   342,17,98516,1,8,0:0:0:0:
   416,68,98747,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   390,154,98978,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,156,99208,6,0,P|280:172|232:196,1,75,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

3. 02:19:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - it is better to make them regular pentagon, too

1. 00:03:419 (1) - NC
2. 02:00:188 (6) - move to x:176 y:297 (symmetric about 01:59:496 (4,5) - )
3. 02:12:881 (13) - finish is necessary?

RandomEffect wrote:

Hello
let me mod please~

[Dekaane's Normal]

1. 00:11:978- add a note /*Following the most catchy beats for guitar
2. 00:15:670- ^ /*^
3. 01:21:208 (1,2) - exchange them for a slider /*A long time with sliders separated by 1/2 beat all this part may be a long hard time for average players and bit boring imo, better to give some pauses.
4. 01:55:362 (2,3) - ^ /^

nice song and enjoyable map!
~Good Luck~

neonat wrote:

My m4m was closed though...


Insane

00:06:419 (14,15) - swap places, slider before circle done
00:07:342 (1,2) - ^ no change, following guitar
00:14:727 (2,3) - ^ done
00:22:111 (1,2) - ^ (according to vocals this is my suggestions) wasn't following vocals
01:23:034 (5) - slider end at 01:23:727 remapped this part
01:50:727 (10,1) - swap positions done
01:51:650 (2,3) - ^ done
01:55:342 (5,6) - ^ no change