yuca wrote:

こんにちは！遅くなってごめんなさい(´；ｪ；｀)

NM

00:08:247 (3) - - 00:08:089 ここからｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰを始めるほうが曲にあってると思いました！
00:13:300 (3) - 上と一緒
00:18:352 (3) - ＾
00:23:405 (3) - ＾

HD

hitsoundはHD diffのを参照にしてみてください！
00:46:773 (1) - ここからclapの音がnormal clapとsoft clap使っていてすごくまとまりがなく聞こえます(´；ｪ；｀)
どちらかに統一してみてはどうでしょうか！
01:08:721 (5) - remove?


HD

00:46:773 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの後ろにclap
00:49:300 (1) - 上と一緒です！
00:50:563 (1) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの折り返しにclap
00:51:826 (1) - ここのｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの後ろにclap
00:53:089 (1) - 同上
00:53:563 (2) - normal sound使う
00:53:721 (3) - normal sound remove
00:53:721 (3) - 終点にclap
00:54:352 (1) - 同上
00:54:826 (2) - clap remove
00:54:826 (2) - ｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰの頭にnormal sound
00:55:300 (3) - clap
00:55:615 (1,2) - whistleのかわりにnormal sound使ってみてはどうでしょうか！
01:08:405 (3) - リピートなしのｽﾗｲﾀﾞｰのほうが曲にあってると思います！ここはそのまま置いときます。流れが切れらてしまうのではないかとおもいました。。
01:12:510 (2) - 同上
全体的にソフトﾎｲｯｽﾙをもう少し活用してもいいかなと思いました！

EZ diffとNM diffは気合ﾀｲﾑが2箇所あるので、どっちかにあわせたほうがいいと思いました！
頑張ってください(・∀・)ﾉ

HelloSCV wrote:

PM request

General

1. 키아이 타임 일치시켜주세요

EZ

딱히 잡을껀 없네요

NM

00:43:615 (5) - , 00:44:563 (2,4) - 여기 클랩 일부러 빼두신건가요? 글쎄요;; 저도 제가 왜 이렇게 넣었는지 잘 모르겠어요
01:11:405 (4) - 클랩

MX

00:54:036 (9) - 소프트 샘플셋 일부러 쓰신건가요?　거기뿐만아니라 거의 다 그랬었는데 노말이랑 소프트가 섞여있어서 뒤죽박죽이였던것같아요
01:03:194 (5) - NC
01:15:194 (1) - 뉴콤보는 불필요해 보이네요 ( 단순 디스탠스 때문에 넣으신거라면 00:34:773 (4,7,10) - 이런곳에도 넣어주시길 ) 뺐어요
01:18:984 (7) - 살짝 겹친게 좀 그런거 같네요 조금만 위로?

HD

1. 전체적으로 힛사가 좀 덜들어간? 느낌이네요 빠진 부분도 있고 ( 일부러 그러셧는지는 모르지만요 ) 추가 해 주심이?

00:39:668 (2,3,4) - 완전히 겹쳐져서 자칫하면 슬라이더를 놓칠수도 있을꺼같아요, 약간 빗겨나게 배치하시는것도 좋을꺼같아요
00:41:089 (5) - 클랩
00:53:721 (3) - 앞쪽에 소프트 샘플셋 쓰시고 00:53:563 (2) - 여기에 노말 샘플셋 쓰셔야할듯
01:03:668 (2,3) - ^
01:28:773 (7,8,9) - 이부분이 좀 허전한거 같은데 적어도 http://puu.sh/2Ge0A.jpg 이런식으로 하심이?

jonathanlfj wrote:

well here is mod
sensing incomming troll...

Black is suggestion
Blue is highly recommended
Red is unrankable

[General]
peppy need to fix the bg glitches
0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1 --> 0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
consider adding "dnb" to tags (drum'n bass)
oh and kiai time should be consistent across all diffs, should fix that

[EZ]
missing some of claps in this diff...e.g. 00:37:300 (2) 00:39:826 (2) should go through the diff and check them
00:15:036 (2) - this plays better if u started it at 00:14:878 due to the heavy piano beat there
00:16:457 (1) - add finish to slider head
00:48:036 (2) - the shape on the curve can look better (adjust the second node up a bit)
01:27:194 (1,2) - it would be cool if u can blanket this like 01:29:721 (1,2)

[NM]
4.25 stars whoa, try remove one or two notes or HP-1 to bring the display down to 4 stars
00:43:615 (5) - clap on slider head
00:50:563 (2,3,4,1) - should be like this

SPOILER

01:00:668 (2,3,4,1) - similar setup as above
01:46:142 (4) - clap on slider end

[HD]
00:06:826 (3) - whistle on slider head
00:09:352 (3) - ^
00:39:826 (4) - perfectly overlapped sliders...thats borderline rankable, would pose alot of problems reading the map so u should reposition it
00:51:510 (2,3) - these two notes makes more sense if moved ahead to 00:51:352 (2) and 00:51:510 (3), respectively

[MX]
add some whistles in the intro similar to the hitsounding pattern in HD
00:06:352 (1) - add finish to slider head
00:32:878 (8) - add NC here and some combos after to prevent large combo counts
00:42:352 (3) - dat curve >< i mistakend it as an extra circle due to the very dark colour, so might want to uncurve that (or make the purple lighter so its easier to read aganist the black)
01:06:036 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - would play better if u can change into something like this:

SPOILER

01:15:510 (1,2,3) - the jump from 01:15:668 (2) to 01:15:826 (3) feels too sudden, maybe place 01:15:826 (3) above 01:16:142 (1) instead to lessen the jumpiness yeah. + changed NCs in other way
01:43:615 (8) - NC to mark jump
01:46:142 (6) - ^
it got all streamy and impossible at the end orz

Great mapset, good luck in ranking~

fixed! thanks for a mod

ykcarrot wrote:

죄송하지만 개인적인 이유로 별만 드리고 갑니다.

Reat wrote:

Hello!

[General]

NM과 HD의 SV차이가 0.5나 납니다. 너무 나는건 아닌지 모르겠네요.

스레드 메인을 참조해주세요 딱히 리맵요소가 되진 않는다고봐요

[EZ]

Nope

[NM]

01:06:984 (1) - 완전히 겹치실 의도셨다면 (170,248)로
01:24:668 (1) - ^ (458,141)
00:14:563 (2,3,5,6) - ^ (318,91)
00:23:247 (3) - blanket 모양을 좀더 예쁘게 해주기 위해 슬라이더의 2번째 포인트를 (356,176) 3번째 슬라이더 포인트를 (440,172)
그리고00:24:036 (1) - 을 여기로 (404,272)
그에 따른 00:25:300 (4) - 를 y축 272으로 내려주고, 00:26:563 (1) - (400,264) 00:27:194 (2) - (348,64) 00:28:457 (4) - (348,64)로 옮겨주시면 됩니다.
이부분을 수렴하지 않으시거나, 수정하기 귀찮으신경우 수정안하셔도 됩니다.
-> 약간 모딩에 대해 오해를 하시고 계신 것 같으신데 '수정하기 귀찮으니까' 수정 하지 않는다는것은 모딩을 받는 사람으로써 가질 자세가 아닌것 같아요.
그리고 '수렴하지 않으시거나' 에 대해서도 약간 오해를 하고 계신 것 같은데, 모딩은 모딩을 받는 사람이 직접 확인해보고 고칠까 말까를 정하는거지 꼭 고쳐야 된다 그런식으로 얘기하시면 안된다고 봐요. 다른사람이 봐도 비슷한 의미로 해석할 것 같아서 얘기한거지 절대 Reat님한테 앙심 품고 이러는 것 아니니 이해 해주세요 (_ _) 이 부분은 Reat님 제안에 맞춰서 일부 변경 했고 나머지 스페이싱 이슈가 될만한 노트들은 제가 다시 배치했어요
01:24:668 (1) - (458,141)

[HD]

00:44:247 - 이곳에 서클을 추가하거나 00:44:089 (10) - 를 슬라이더로 바꿔주세요. 00:30:036 (3,1) - 여기서도 놔뒀기 때문에 일관성 유지를 위해 그대로 놔둘게요
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - (148,223)
01:15:826 (5) - (373,217)

[MX]

00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - 한번에 0.5x로 슬라이더 배속을 바꾸지 않고 0.9 0.8 0.6 0.5 이렇게 점차 느리게 바꾸는건 어떨까요? 이 부분에 노래의 강약조절이 있다면 그렇게 했을텐데 0.5로 충분한 것 같아요. 그리고 가급적이면 비트매핑 가이드라인을 한개라도 더 지키고싶네요 (안지킨게 많을 것 같아서)
00:17:405 (4,1) - (325,95)
00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - 위와 마찬가지
01:16:931 (6) - (392,296)으로 보내주는건 어떨까요?? 이부분 리딩이 힘든 배치이고 좀더 자연스러운 동선을 만들어줄수 있을듯 합니다. 이부분도 생각을 해 봤는데 지금처럼 스택 처리 하는게 더 나을 것 같아요
01:21:036 (5,6) - (403,132)

나머지 좌표모딩들은 다 수정 했기때문에 따로 고쳤다고 쓰지 않았어요

나쁘진 않은 맵입니다. 아직 한참 멀었다고 생각햇는데 그렇게 봐주셔서 감사합니다 ㅜㅜ

Good Luck!

neonat wrote:

Nice song, all I can suggest right now is that for [Hard]
00:44:089 (10) - use 1/8 beat snap divisor and replace this note with a repeat slider, repeat 5 times until 00:44:247 to fully get that ringing sound in the music

SPOILER

sKZy wrote:

IRC mod

00:38 sKZy: 음
00:38 *sKZy is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241431 M2U - Nightmare]
00:39 sKZy: 귀가없고
00:39 sKZy: 눈이없어서
00:39 sKZy: 지적할게 아주 주관적인 배치밖에없음
00:40 *Kloyd is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/187639 Skrillex - First Of The Year (Equinox) [ND1]]
00:40 Kloyd: 미쳤다
00:40 sKZy: 놀드 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
00:41 sKZy: 엥
00:42 Kloyd: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/241429&m=0 다 kloyd로 나와있셈
00:42 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:42 sKZy: 01:01:142 (4,5,6,7,8,9) -
00:42 sKZy: 나 이거 솔직히
00:42 sKZy: 바꿨으면좋겠는데
00:43 sKZy: 01:08:563 (4) -
00:43 sKZy: 이거 4를
00:43 sKZy: 슬라랑 좀 간격 비슷하게 하면
00:43 sKZy: 더 이쁠거같음
00:43 Kloyd: 그런거 포스팅 하셈 쿠도스 퍼드림
00:44 sKZy: 아얄로할거
00:44 sKZy: 귀찮
00:44 Kloyd: 어차피 포스팅 해야됨
00:44 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
00:44 sKZy: 그게더편함
00:45 sKZy: 진짜못잡겠다 mx는
00:45 Kloyd: 걍 여러맵 조금씩 조금씩 완성해야지
00:45 *Kloyd is editing M2U X ESTi - Obelisque [Dedicated to jieusieu]
00:46 sKZy: 하드리맵함?
00:46 Kloyd: ?어떤거
00:46 *sKZy is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/241430 M2U - Nightmare [HD]]
00:46 sKZy: 디스턴스 많이바뀐거같은데
00:47 Kloyd: ? ㄱㄷ
00:47 sKZy: 아니
00:47 sKZy: 많이좋아진거같다는말임
00:47 Kloyd: 스페이싱은 1.2가 기본인데 여전히
00:47 sKZy: 뭐지
00:47 sKZy: 더깔끔해진거같은데
00:48 sKZy: 나
00:48 sKZy: 01:36:668 (8) -
00:48 sKZy: 여기빼고못찾겠음
00:48 Kloyd: 다들 어려워하던데 솔직히 나 이거 히하 첫카풀콤함
00:48 sKZy: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/730893
00:48 Kloyd: 일직선으로 나열한거라 치기 되게시움
00:48 sKZy: 이런식으로해봐요
00:48 sKZy: 스택하지말고
00:48 sKZy: 형은쉬울거같은데
00:49 sKZy: 전까지 디스턴스 변화 거의 없다가
00:49 sKZy: 갑자기 아래로 확내려갔다가 슬라가위로 올라감
00:49 sKZy: 나라면 바꿀듯
00:49 Kloyd: 저거 원래
00:49 Kloyd: 2번반복하는슬라였는데 지적와서 고친거임
00:50 sKZy: 디스턴스 솔직히
00:50 sKZy: 갑자기 너무 벙뜨는 느낌인거같은데
00:50 sKZy: 개인의견임
00:50 sKZy: 무시해도댐
00:50 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K84U.jpg
00:51 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 나는 그렇게할거같음
00:52 sKZy: ㅈㅅ
00:52 Kloyd: 슬라를 두개로 해버릴까 서클을지우고
00:52 sKZy: sp못올려드릴듯
00:52 sKZy: 못찾겠다
00:53 Kloyd: 이런건 어떰? http://puu.sh/2K896.jpg
00:54 sKZy: ㅇㅇ 괜찮을듯
00:54 sKZy: 근데 솔직히
00:54 sKZy: 리버스쓰는게 더 깔끔해보이기는함
00:55 sKZy: 못하겠다
00:55 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8dW.jpg
00:56 sKZy: 음;
00:56 sKZy: 이건잘모르겠음
00:57 sKZy: 8을 좀 덜굽혀봐도될듯
00:58 Kloyd: http://puu.sh/2K8ix.jpg
00:58 sKZy: 모양은이쁜데
00:58 sKZy: 치기 편하려나
00:59 sKZy: 그래도 아까거보다는
01:00 sKZy: 훨씬나은거같은데
01:00 Kloyd: 에라이 http://puu.sh/2K8mh.jpg
01:00 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ
01:00 Kloyd: 됫다
01:00 sKZy: ㅇㅇ
01:01 Kloyd: 가장 간단한 해결책을놔두고
01:01 Kloyd: 너무 비비꼬아생각했네
01:01 sKZy: ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

poor mod D: sorry

By the way, nice map have a star

• 
  fine

1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。

1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
   Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
   00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
   00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
   Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。

1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)

1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220

• 
  Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one

1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?

1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV
2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread
   Great diff, good job!

Leader wrote:

Hello, m4m :3

[EZ]

1. 00:06:352 (1,2,1) - Try something like this, it plays better http://puu.sh/2MVXQ.jpg
2. 00:12:352 (2) - Like this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/738474
3. 00:18:352 (3) - Move to x:184 y:24
4. 00:44:247 (1) - This will be much easier for beginners, move slider like that
5. 01:12:036 (1) - Move second slider point to x:324 y:312
6. 01:16:142 (2,3) - Like this flows better for beginners (remember to fix spacing!)

[NM]

1. 00:30:352 (2,3,1) - This should flow better
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:56:563 (4) - Stack on 00:56:878 (1) - ?
3. 00:51:352 (3,4) - They shouldn't be covered by slider, they are a bit hard to hit from Normal players and it will be worse.
4. 01:01:457 (3,4) - ^
5. 01:41:089 (3) - x:252 y:220

[HD]

• 
  Gap between NM and HD is a bit high, try to reduce difficulty on this one

1. 00:44:405 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Whistle spam?
2. 01:08:878 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739304
3. 01:12:984 (3) - Move to the same line of (2)? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/739305
4. 01:45:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Whistle spam?

[MX]

1. 00:10:142 (1,2,3,4) - This slowdown doesn't fit with song, map it with 1.0 SV for shape and for its tempo, I think I should keep this.
2. 00:20:247 (1,2,3,4) - ^
3. 01:06:352 (3,4,5,6,7) - Use the same spacing or at least make a progressive line, it's confusing to sightread I didnt fix this cuz I wanted to express the sound there
   Great diff, good job!

1. The repeat arrow is now performing as white color on the light grey combo, which may cause a sight-reading problem on repeat sliders. I would suggest to adjust a lighter color here, please apply this code to every difficulty:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 128,0,128
   Combo2 : 255,0,0
   Combo3 : 202,202,202

   SPOILER

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292,320,50563,2,0,L|403:348,2,110,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,276,51352,2,0,L|224:232,1,55
292,144,51826,6,0,B|232:152|192:100|192:100|124:120,2,165,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,196,53089,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,53405,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,56,53721,2,0,P|280:24|292:0,2,55
216,152,54352,6,0,P|196:204|152:236,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,280,54984,2,0,P|83:322|136:352,1,110,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,344,55615,2,0,B|304:344|304:344|352:360|352:360|420:360,1,165,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Nemis wrote:

[MX]
00:10:773 (3) - I suggest to reverse selection here and 00:11:089 (4) - here too (so the sliders go up)
00:14:878 (4,1) - I suggest to reverse their positions since the pattern flows better
00:16:142 (4,1) - Make a blanket here
For sliders like 00:21:984 (3) - this one I suggest to do the first and the last part with the same inclination:

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00:27:826 (6,7,8) - Increase this spacing
00:29:089 (1) - I suggest to stack this slider under 00:28:300 (7) - 's end
00:30:194 (7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Increase this pattern's spacing
00:34:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Here you did a nice flowing, but not 00:35:721 (9,10,11,12) - here. It flows horrible, I really suggest to fix it so it will be better to play
00:48:036 (4) - I suggest to reverse the selection, it flows a lot
00:53:089 (6,7,8) - I suggest to change it to the pattern in this screenshot:

SPOILER

01:00:668 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - I suggest to change the rhythm as in this screenshot:

SPOILER

01:03:194 (5,6,7,8) - This pattern doesn't flow so good, I suggest to change it in something else I thought again and again but I found no way to replace these.....
01:06:826 (8,1) - Unstack them, I suggest to move 01:06:826 (8) - at x:124 y:280 for example
01:16:931 (6) - I suggest to move this circle on 01:16:457 (4) - 's head, the pattern would be really better
01:18:668 (6) - Move this slider at x:276 y:228, testplay it and you'll understand my suggestion
01:24:352 (8,9,1) - Fix this blanket
01:36:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I suggest to use 01:32:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this stream's spacing here too
I like this difficulty!

[HD]
Please, put OD6 or OD7, OD5 is awful here D: HP6 too
00:13:142 (6,1) - I suggest to make a blanket here
00:18:194 (5,1,2,3) - I suggest to make a blanket here too
00:44:247 (11) - I suggest to add a note here
00:50:247 (3,4,1) - This stack under 00:49:300 (1) - this slider is not a good idea, if you play it you see an awful stack
00:55:615 (1) - Here is missing a clap I think (on his end)
01:03:194 (1,2,3) - Fix this blanket
01:11:405 (4,5,1) - Same as above
01:14:563 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as above again
01:27:194 (1,2) - ^
01:29:721 (1) - I suggest to move this slider to x:404 y:72 to create a triangle 01:29:089 (8,9,1) - here
01:38:247 (5) - I suggest to move this slider a bit down to create a blanket 01:37:931 (4,5) - here and a triangle 01:37:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - here
01:44:878 (5) - I suggest to add a note here

[NM]
Nothing important to say, I only suggest to put HP4

[EZ]
00:03:194 (1) - Start this spinner 00:01:615 (1) - here 'cause the vocals start here and 00:03:194 (1) - here there is anything. I suggest to decrease his end's volume

I hope this map will get ranked I like it!

litoluna wrote:

こんにちは~
ModRequestありがとうございます
[General]

• 
  fine

全て提案です！

[EZ]

1. 00:45:510 (3) - Sliderで00:45:826 - まで伸ばして配置してみてはどうでしょうか。00:45:826 -の音もとれて00:46:142 (4,5) - にもつなぎやすくなると思いました。

[NM]

1. 00:07:773 (2,3) - 音取りの提案です。
   Back音で取っている(2)の音が00:08:089 - まで伸びてるためSliderを使って伸ばしたほうが合っていると思いました。
2. 00:12:826 (2,3) - ^
3. 00:17:878 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:22:931 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:44:563 (2,3,4) - HitSoundの提案です。
   00:44:563 (2) - 始端のclapをremoveしリバース部分にclap
   00:45:510 (3) - 始端にclap
   Backの音が00:46:773 (1) - に向かってじょじょに大きくなってきているので音付けの変化をつけてもいいと思いました。

HDとMXは自分の技量では指摘できなかったです

short mod sorry (ﾉω･､)
Good Luck~ヾ(o･д･)ﾉ

いえいえ＾＾　ありがとうございました！！

1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314 1312) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes

00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing

Pokie wrote:

[General]

1. オフセットちょっと早かったのかな・・・Offset+12 (1314) Please resnap all notes+timing sections after changes

[NM]
00:08:878 (1) - Not yet fixed

00:08:089 (3,1) - Uh oh, mistake? These two objects should be placed with 1.00x spacing

[MX]
01:41:405 (8,11) - Unsnapped slider's end

(´・ω・｀)