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Itachi_Uchiha
Take this star k? k!
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
thanks a lot. And thanks everyone who starred it, i appreciate it really much :3
ryuu
нян :3
2013-04-15 19:36 ryuu: давай
2013-04-15 19:36 ryuu: ирц
2013-04-15 19:36 Louis Cyphre: А, черт с ним, давай
2013-04-15 19:37 ryuu: короче айбат говорит про линии, знаешь, да?
2013-04-15 19:38 Louis Cyphre: нету смысла ставить ровно на тик
2013-04-15 19:38 ryuu: во всех 4х диффах тр-
2013-04-15 19:38 ryuu: окей
2013-04-15 19:38 Louis Cyphre: мне лень остальным объяснить
2013-04-15 19:38 Louis Cyphre: ять*
2013-04-15 19:38 Louis Cyphre: или ить, плевать в общем
2013-04-15 19:38 Louis Cyphre: xD
2013-04-15 19:40 ryuu: 00:11:925 (3) - ты же не изменишь его форму? ;_;
2013-04-15 19:41 Louis Cyphre: дифка?
2013-04-15 19:41 Louis Cyphre: эм, а зачем?
2013-04-15 19:41 Louis Cyphre: я понял что изя
2013-04-15 19:41 ryuu: ну он
2013-04-15 19:41 ryuu: некрасивый ;_;
2013-04-15 19:41 ryuu: второй конец
2013-04-15 19:41 ryuu: я не люблю, когда один прямой, а другой нет
2013-04-15 19:41 ryuu: ну пофиг
2013-04-15 19:42 Louis Cyphre: http://puu.sh/2AClm
2013-04-15 19:42 Louis Cyphre: так норм?
2013-04-15 19:42 ryuu: 00:48:786 (3) - опусти левый конец немного ниже. что ли. милее будет. я считаю
2013-04-15 19:42 ryuu: ой, ща гляну
2013-04-15 19:43 Louis Cyphre: и оке
2013-04-15 19:43 Louis Cyphre: сделал
2013-04-15 19:43 ryuu: да :3
2013-04-15 19:43 ryuu: милее :333
2013-04-15 19:43 Louis Cyphre: :4
2013-04-15 19:43 Louis Cyphre: :3*
2013-04-15 19:44 ryuu: 01:20:998 (3) - ??
2013-04-15 19:44 ryuu: а зачем оверлап
2013-04-15 19:44 ryuu: и опять же форма
2013-04-15 19:45 Louis Cyphre: вот это уже реальная ошибка
2013-04-15 19:45 Louis Cyphre: ща исправлю
2013-04-15 19:45 Louis Cyphre: оке сделанно
2013-04-15 19:45 ryuu: далее. нормал
2013-04-15 19:46 Louis Cyphre: Уже автоматически твой мод считается лучшим из всех моддингов, ты единстванная, так скажем, обнаружевшая ошибку)
2013-04-15 19:46 Louis Cyphre: оке
2013-04-15 19:47 ryuu: 00:06:612 (3) - мне кажется, или можно немного ещё выгнуть? о.о если нет, то нет лол. но на глаз мне кажется он чуть-чуть..невыгнутый лол
2013-04-15 19:47 ryuu: 00:11:925 (3) - а этот нельзя поднять? а то я не люблю, когда низко. но опять же, если нет, то нет
2013-04-15 19:47 Louis Cyphre: можно на пару гридов
2013-04-15 19:48 ryuu: 00:21:224 (3) - ну и этот слишком левый. но вообще пофиг
2013-04-15 19:48 Louis Cyphre: поднял немного
2013-04-15 19:48 ryuu: 00:37:993 (3) - подвести ниже? ну..чтобы слайдер вокруг был
2013-04-15 19:48 Louis Cyphre: ну, так должно бьiть
2013-04-15 19:49 ryuu: ну
2013-04-15 19:49 ryuu: хорошо :о
2013-04-15 19:49 Louis Cyphre: оке
2013-04-15 19:49 Louis Cyphre: сделанно
2013-04-15 19:49 ryuu: 00:54:099 (4) - ну опять ;_; (но опять же, на твоё усмотрение)
2013-04-15 19:50 Louis Cyphre: а че там?
2013-04-15 19:50 ryuu: ну
2013-04-15 19:50 ryuu: слишком
2013-04-15 19:50 ryuu: левый
2013-04-15 19:50 Louis Cyphre: О_о?
2013-04-15 19:50 ryuu: ну
2013-04-15 19:50 ryuu: он выходит
2013-04-15 19:51 ryuu: просто у меня такой экран
2013-04-15 19:51 ryuu: что всё, что за сеткой
2013-04-15 19:51 ryuu: у меня не видно
2013-04-15 19:51 ryuu: когда играю
2013-04-15 19:51 Louis Cyphre: э
2013-04-15 19:52 Louis Cyphre: а как ты играешь мапки которые имеют 1366 х 1024 разрешение?
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: ну
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: у меня всё в 1024х768 о.о
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: стандарт
2013-04-15 19:52 Louis Cyphre: мама родная
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: сеточки
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: ну не говори так!
2013-04-15 19:52 ryuu: мне норм
2013-04-15 19:53 ryuu: 00:25:873 (2) - форму можно милее
2013-04-15 19:53 ryuu: ^ хард пошел, угу
2013-04-15 19:53 Louis Cyphre: исправил короче
2013-04-15 19:54 Louis Cyphre: сделанно
2013-04-15 19:54 Louis Cyphre: едим дальше
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: 01:25:149 (1,4) - а можно это..мм..ну..чтобы не прямо стояло?
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: а то просто
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: когда вижу все эти прямые линии
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: сразу старые карты вспоминаю
2013-04-15 19:55 Louis Cyphre: сделал)
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: няша
2013-04-15 19:55 ryuu: спасибо
2013-04-15 19:55 Louis Cyphre: да тебе спасибо)
2013-04-15 19:56 Louis Cyphre: давай ещё инсейн)
2013-04-15 19:56 Louis Cyphre: Самое интересное, собственно, инсейн и есть то, как я вижу эту песню
2013-04-15 19:57 ryuu: 00:39:322 (4,2) - ну тут яснопонятно /me runs
2013-04-15 19:57 ryuu: 00:40:650 (4) -
2013-04-15 19:57 ryuu: просто
2013-04-15 19:57 ryuu: мне либо оба конца выгуть
2013-04-15 19:58 ryuu: либо оба оставить прмямыми
2013-04-15 19:58 Louis Cyphre: поменял)
2013-04-15 19:58 Louis Cyphre: мне такие как ты советуешь больше нравится
2013-04-15 19:58 Louis Cyphre: нравятся*
2013-04-15 19:58 ryuu: 00:56:092 (1) -
2013-04-15 19:58 ryuu: aaaaawwwww
2013-04-15 19:58 ryuu: я рада
2013-04-15 19:58 ryuu: 01:05:224 (1) -
2013-04-15 19:59 Louis Cyphre: сделал)
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: о боже
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: какой он няша
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: я люблю твои джампы
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: и хс
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: я всё
2013-04-15 19:59 Louis Cyphre: Спасибо Насть)
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: луис умничка
2013-04-15 19:59 ryuu: не за что :3
2013-04-15 19:59 Louis Cyphre: :3
Reiji-RJ
А У МЕНЯ ЕСТЬ МОД ДЛЯ ВАС

Easy

00:04:952 (4) - Направь среднюю точку в противоположную сторону
01:17:179 (1,2,3,4) - Может сделаешь так?
Normal

00:29:193 (3) - конец х348 у292

Hard

00:43:805 (1) - финиш софт
00:46:628 (1) - финиш нормал сюда
00:46:628 (1) - ^
00:55:760 (1,2) - ^ на началах
00:57:254 (1) - ^ на начале
01:14:522 (1) - финиш софт на начало же

Insane

00:10:929 (2) - тут нормал вистл вместо софт D:
00:22:718 (1) - 2 грида вверх и 2 грида налево (нази)
00:26:537 (1) - на грид вниз
01:27:141 (6) - нк!
Roxas
As I told, here's the mod \:D/

[Easy]

00:58:416 (3) - Make like this?
SPOILER

245,106,58416,2,0,B|159:108|90:165,1,170
01:25:149 (1) - Change slidershape?
SPOILER

348,84,85149,6,4,B|394:76|394:76|419:58|419:58|467:47,2,127.5
01:23:820 (1) - Remove NC?

[Normal]

00:03:125 (2) - Why this is 1.2x from (1)? Make 1.1x :D
01:03:730 (1) - Remove NC?
01:27:141 (1) - In Easy there isn't NC here, maybe it's better to remove :P

[Hard]

01:01:073 (4) - Here add NC or remove in previous pattern xD
01:03:730 (4) - ^
01:06:884 (2) - Add NC cause end of kiai

[Insane]

I came ehm I haven't found errors really gj :D and gl lol take a star ;D
silencedays
Here's my mod

[size=150Easy][/size]
00:25:374 (1,1,1) - Like this? three of them lining up to form a wing...

Hard
00:39:156 - Add a beat?
00:39:820 - Add a beat?
01:23:488 (4) - doesn't sound right IMO, should extend 01:22:990 (3) ?

Insane
00:27:865 (6,7,1) - sorry, but i personally dislike this pattern, only this...
mercury2004
M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
00:14:748 - 00:25:374 increase hitsound theis part by 20%?

Easy
change all kick slider too single beat?
00:38:658 (1) - copy paste this note. rotate clockwise 180 replace and this 00:36:665 (2) -. move 00:36:001 (1) - up a bit ?
00:40:650 (2) - change clap to whistle?
00:43:805 (1) - slider tail ^?
01:27:307 (1) - change to soft whistle?


Normal
00:20:891 (2) - put this in the middle of both silder?
00:46:628 (1,3) - curve these slider?
00:59:911 (1) - ^

01:20:832 (1,2) - a bit confusing
01:13:858 (4,1) - soft whistle both end?
01:27:307 (1) - change to soft whistle?


Hard
00:58:416 (1,2,3) - a bit confusing
put it like this?01:27:307 (1) - change to soft whistle?

Insane
00:00:635 (4) - soft whistle?
00:13:752 (1,2) - swap. feels flow better
00:21:556 (1,2,3) - a bit confusing anti jump. change spacing might fix

00:59:080 (1,2,3) - antijump and jump feel weird 00:59:745 (3) - nc this?
01:27:307 (1) - change to soft whistle?


Comment : mapset itself is already very good. kudo for you. this beatmap deserve it.
ask m4m with titan. really hard to find modding point
HabiHolic
From Your M4M queue

[Easy]

  1. 00:11:925 (3) - Try This?

  2. 00:43:805 (1) - ^



00:29:193 (3) -

[Normal]


  1. 00:29:193 (3) - Spasing

Good Luck~
Irreversible
hey louis,

sorry for that delay but i'll mod it in the next 4 hours, this time i promise

EDIT:

ok let's start with the mod, i'm near dying but w/e

[General]

01:22:492 - wanna add a kiai fountain here? o.o
01:10:039 (2) - on the slider ticks on the sliders which look similar like this: add a little hitsound? very quiet though

[Easy]

00:04:454 (3) - Are you sure you want to do something confusing in an Easy? Well it's not confusing if you're a pro player.. xD maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/2Bopy it sounds kinda the same and is easy as well.
00:16:574 (1,3,4) - They are all straight, what is a bit boring. Maybe make one slider going upwards, downwards, (maybe curvy, dunno if you want)
00:25:374 (1,1,1,1) - Maybe i'm the only one, but ..did you do this bcuz of lazyness? /me runsConsider changing every second big reverse slider with something different, or at least place them different,
00:49:284 (1,2) - Don't like the placing of them.. -thinking of something else- e.e
00:50:446 (3) - OKKKK i love this slider
00:51:941 (1,1,1) - Same problem as mentioned above
01:07:382 (2,3,2,2) - wow good job here! this slider fits to the background really hard oO

Note: This diff is sometimes really nice, sometimes not. Sometimes not means: All the straight part sliders are a bit.. boring, yeah. i would change them :/ i think you're enough creative! XD

[Normal]

00:08:937 (2) - Rotate by like 10°?
00:17:903 (2) - move this one a li'l bit downwards, really, just a little bit
00:53:103 (3) - tihs is not curvy enough xD

sorry for dat mod, orz
but it's already so good :c

[Hard]

00:03:291 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2Bp0V ?just for more variety
sorry that i won't write a big text, but i really feel dizzy! @@
00:11:261 (2) - move 2-3 grids to the left, i don't like it that near to the slider
00:34:507 (4) - move to x:284 y:124 because it will have the same .. 'space' from circle 1
01:07:382 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2Bp9H ? :D I like this combo more, than the the current one

Nice job, i have to say o:

[Insane]

First impression: i failed <.< but the second time i passed :3 XD Was a bit confused because you suddenly lowered the DS between the streams, i would think about changing this. Also i would increase the stacking of the stackings which have 1/1 by 0.1

00:03:125 (2,3) - This is too near to the circle, move it away
00:08:605 (1) - i missed this one first, this jump is really unexpected, i wouldn't use a jump here anyway, i think NC is enough, or if you want that jump remove NC ? xD confused :3
00:22:718 (1,2) - let 1 look the same like 1? or backwards, because the mix doesn't look so good
00:40:539 (3,4) - it gets more tension here, i feel a bigger jump. move this more to the left
00:41:148 (1) - also, this should be more curvy, i can not stand something which is a curve, but straight.. but still a curve ¬¬XD
00:43:141 (4,5,1) - this is the stacking i mentioned abve
00:51:609 (5) - MOAR DS LOUIS, MOAR
00:55:926 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/2Bpwo ? :3 or this http://puu.sh/2Bpz8 xD the second one is kinda cool o,o
01:27:307 (1) - dat gong on the spinner end lol xD

I'm out of suggestions :c

i hope there are some good suggestions in it, bye louis :3
good lucku, i'll leave a star
Snepif
Eh, guess you won't reply to such a high amount of mods, let alone mine.
Irreversible
b-but I wanna have a reply :c xD
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
If you want a reply then just say, I prefer to not respond, unless someone wants
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
[General]

01:22:492 - wanna add a kiai fountain here? o.o
Hmm, i want.
01:10:039 (2) - on the slider ticks on the sliders which look similar like this: add a little hitsound? very quiet though
Idk, if someone mentions this again, i'll probably just increase the volume.

[Insane]

00:03:125 (2,3) - This is too near to the circle, move it away
00:08:605 (1) - i missed this one first, this jump is really unexpected, i wouldn't use a jump here anyway, i think NC is enough, or if you want that jump remove NC ? xD confused :3
Fixed

00:22:718 (1,2) - let 1 look the same like 1? or backwards, because the mix doesn't look so good
Well, okay

00:40:539 (3,4) - it gets more tension here, i feel a bigger jump. move this more to the left
This is 1/3, let is be like this. 1/3 is something what is hard to read

00:41:148 (1) - also, this should be more curvy, i can not stand something which is a curve, but straight.. but still a curve ¬¬XD
I'm a huge fan of such litttttttle curvy sliders.

00:43:141 (4,5,1) - this is the stacking i mentioned abve
It's okay.

00:51:609 (5) - MOAR DS LOUIS, MOAR
I don't see any reason to increase spacing.

00:55:926 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/2Bpwo ? :3 or this http://puu.sh/2Bpz8 xD the second one is kinda cool o,o
01:27:307 (1) - dat gong on the spinner end lol xD

[Hard]

00:11:261 (2) - move 2-3 grids to the left, i don't like it that near to the slider
1 grid is enough.

01:07:382 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/2Bp9H ? I like this combo more, than the the current one
I don't want to sacrifice spacing, i find it useless.

[Normal]

00:08:937 (2) - Rotate by like 10°?
I'll curve this 00:08:106 (1) instead
00:17:903 (2) - move this one a li'l bit downwards, really, just a little bit
i don't see any reason to do that.
00:53:103 (3) - tihs is not curvy enough xD
we have some curve standards in osu? x)


[Easy]

00:04:454 (3) - Are you sure you want to do something confusing in an Easy? Well it's not confusing if you're a pro player.. xD maybe make it like this http://puu.sh/2Bopy it sounds kinda the same and is easy as well.
What is confusing in this pattern?

00:16:574 (1,3,4) - They are all straight, what is a bit boring. Maybe make one slider going upwards, downwards, (maybe curvy, dunno if you want)
If it's something about design, then i don't really think, that it's SO ugly, it's just simple as it should be. I turn on simple mapping style when i map Normal/Easy (well, not always, rarely i like to turn on my creativety even on them) and i mix creative and simple styles when i do Hard difficulties. I express my whole emotions only on highest difficulties, that's why easiest difficulties are mapped simply for inexperienced players. I find this point of view correct.

00:49:284 (1,2) - Don't like the placing of them.. -thinking of something else- e.e
Done in another way.


Thank you for modding.



Thanks also everyone who modded his and starred!
Kodora
ok forgot to star
Drianel
Hello from my mod queue^^

1st of all: the song is nice, but i think you missed some notes on insane dif. I have some ideas to some sliders ok? here we go!

>> INSANE <<

00:02:295 (5) - Remove whistle
00:02:461 - Add circle and add whistle
00:05:118 - Add circle and add whistle (same reason as before)
00:38:326 (1,2,3,4) - hmmm this is ok but how about to change to this? (if you like it use whistle on (5) )
00:59:745 (3) - move to 00:59:579 like this:
01:03:564 - Add circle and add clap

>> HARD <<

I add some circles here because they are great with the song, just change and play it, you will love this changes as i did

00:02:461 - Add circle with whistle
00:07:608 (5) - how about to add (6) and (7) here?
00:09:933 (5) - remove whistle
00:10:431 - add circle with whistle
00:30:356 - Add circle
00:33:178 - Add circle
00:39:820 - Add circle
00:47:790 (1,2,3,4) - change the pattern here, i like this way:

00:56:922 - Add circle here!!!!

>> NORMAL <<

00:38:326 - Add circle (4)
...
...
... no more? nice map :)

that's all Louis, good luck with your map i love it ;)

-Drianel-
Mafiamaster
[Easy]
00:40:650 (2) - Add finishes to the start and the middle of this slider?
00:54:597 (1) - Finish at beginning.
01:09:541 (2) - This needs to be evenly spaced within this pattern.

[Normal]
00:51:941 (1) - Finish at beginning?
01:13:858 (4) - Whistle at end?
01:14:522 (1) - ^

[Insane]
00:12:922 (2) - I would suggest shortening this slider by 1/2 and adding a note on 00:13:420.
00:13:586 (3,1,2,1,2) - Whatever this is, I feel this needs to be changed because this is really confusing during gameplay. 00:13:586 (3,1) - This jump is huge during this pattern. I feel something like down below would work. It doesn't have to be exactly like this but something along this idea.
00:21:556 (1,2,3) - This spacing is confusing. I would have thought these were 1/2 notes.
01:18:341 (1) - Maybe you could move this a bit farther away from the previous slider?
01:27:141 (6) - I didn't really like this small 1/4 jump when the rest of this pattern didn't.

(Replaced bad quality flv video with good quality avi video reducing file size by 10MB~)
Kurai
[Hard]
  1. 00:26:205 - I suggest you adding a note there, because there is one at all the similar patterns like 00:28:861 - 00:31:518 - 00:34:175 (3). And also because it sounds much more better to follow the vocals entirely.
  2. 00:40:982 - I'd add a circle here. It really feels like something is issing there. :/
  3. 00:47:956 (2,3) - I think the clap should rather be on (3).
  4. 00:58:582 (2,3) - ^
Mafiamaster
After a few more small hitsound suggestions, this map is now bubbled.
Kodora
Congratz, so close!
Kurai

Mafiamaster wrote:

After a few more small hitsound suggestions, this map is now bubbled ranked.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Yay, thanks guys ~
DaxMasterix
AWESOME Congratz :33
Irreversible
gz louis my trolling friend ;__; XD
Dangaard
Did you maybe forgot to set the audio preview point?
Kuria
omg it's ranked already, so fast *__*

congrast~

orz now i need to wait at least a week to make my version ranked
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
Did you maybe forgot to set the audio preview point?
No :o


And thanks everyone ~
Aka
OH
MY
GOD
SHINGEKI
NO
KYOJIN
HAVE
MY
BABIES


это вин <3
Lolicakey
was so fast~! Congratz o3ó!
Ibuki Suika
mana vayne
congratz louis :3/ and nice map
Snepif
lol
ryuu
поздравляю, луис :3/

с тебя печенье ещё, алсо :о
Cygnus
I've been looking at this map for hours not realizing the artist wasn't Linkin Park until I heard the song. x.x lol. Anyway, congrats Cyphreeeh! ~
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I know that feel, i was confusing this with Sound Horizon XD
Muffinilou
This Insane is so hard for me D:
eveless
I cant play this diff with ar8, it's really to slow to read.

I will try to learn how to play it with HR! good luck for me!
Muffinilou
On this song reached 6,666 Play Count. Is it a coincidence?
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
You're quiet late to say that, lol
meiikyuu
grats!
Roxas
Gratz <3
Kodora

goodbye wrote:

I cant play this diff with ar8, it's really to slow to read.

I will try to learn how to play it with HR! good luck for me!
Heh, agreed.

Also map is great anyway ^^
Metro
I'm very disappointed. The Insane diff (only one that matters to me) is very average and nothing special at all. I expected more from you.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I'm very disappointed. The Insane diff (only one that matters to me) is very average and nothing special at all. I expected more from you.
The reason i mapped this is that i liked animation a lot, and i decided to map an op. This map isn't a deep expression of my mapping style at all.
Thanks for honest opinion Metro.
Muffinilou
Very thanks for this map <3
Metro

Louis Cyphre wrote:

I'm very disappointed. The Insane diff (only one that matters to me) is very average and nothing special at all. I expected more from you.
The reason i mapped this is that i liked animation a lot, and i decided to map an op. This map isn't a deep expression of my mapping style at all.
Thanks for honest opinion Metro.
I still don't understand why you would want to express yourself like this. Never saw you as a fame hungry guy. You could've mapped this better and I believe you still can.
Topic Starter
Louis Cyphre
I still don't understand why you would want to express yourself like this. Never saw you as a fame hungry guy. You could've mapped this better and I believe you still can.
Ending seemed unmappable for me (maybe it is really mappable idk), just wanted to map something from this animation, so i took the op. That's all. For expressions go to Classical Insanity or Revolutionary Etude, they are full of 'special' things, different technics and etc.

And please, work on your own map!



Also thanks everyone for comments ~
Nostalgia
Aghh tingles down my spine!

Finally a Shingeki map! Can't wait to play it when I get this homework over with. >.>
Muffinilou
Good luck, because this map is great. Only the background could be better: 3
Silver Striver
easy~hard is OK,but i don't like Insane,WTF it is!?
moncar321
SNK again
fugioka
SNK is oki but like i can do easy and hard WHY NOT INSANE?!!cryin in da corner* :(
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