Hi there! Wow 75 SP is alot already!
[General]
Sometimes it seems a bit off.. i would help you, but I think i would make it worse actually >< I try to ask some people for their opinions.
Delete unnecessary green / red lines please.
Rest seems fine!
[Insane]
Gameplay: Oh, it plays fine for me! But I think i can give you some suggestions about the rhythm itself, it's the only thing that bothers me actually
As you can see, you used very much this pattern: slider, circle, slider, circle in some parts. This can get boring! But i'm here to help you now o3o Nice pattern btw!
00:02:998 (2) - Hmm, the blanket between 1 and 2 aren't that great. Try this code once: (make sure you saved your things before!)
suggestion116,246,445,2,0,P|174:285|200:282,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,195,809,2,0,P|193:182|232:143,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
338,170,1174,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,308,1539,1,2,0:0:0:0:
293,281,1721,2,0,P|332:242|332:197,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,130,2086,6,0,P|261:133|192:173,2,140,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,215,2998,2,0,P|296:267|263:301,1,70,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
But it's up to you, of course
00:03:362 (1,2,3,4,5) - And i don't know how you feel, but wouldn't it be great to get a slower beginning of the song? The vocals are a bit slow, and smooth, i don't think this circle spam really fits. (i know, you mapped to the piano) consider changing them with some sliders. If you do things like this later in the map, it would fit much more! But try it yourself
00:23:004 (1) - That's the part i metnioned above (not only this circle, obviously) Why don't you try to get some more rhythm in it? I mean, instead of a slider and circle pattern, you could use a reversed slider circle combination, or 2 circles after a slider. If you need further help with that, ask me, but i wanna let you try first
(if you leave it, it's okay)
00:36:627 (2,3,4,5,6) - Personally, i would replace this part with some circles, it fits the rhythm you created before, and you could also put in some variety in your map. (circle 00:36:627 (2) - 00:36:809 (3) - 00:36:990 (4) - 00:37:171 (5) - 00:37:353 (6) - )
00:54:989 - The red lines IN the spinner are unnecessary, delete them please.
00:51:175 (5) - I think this reversed slider would fit better starting from here: 00:51:175 -
01:01:533 (5,6,7,8,1) - Try to get a nicer shaped polygon here, remmeber to use 'create polygon' in these times!
01:02:804 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I think here, you should have definetly mapped the vocals, it will bring some nice 'breaks' in your patterns, and brings some tension in it as well.
Like!
[Ixxm's Insane]
00:07:905 (2) - It would look better, if you move this slider a bit down to create a nice-looking blanket with 00:07:725 (1) -
00:16:804 (2) - mhh.. double reverse? this will break many combos, believe me xDD Try changing it ^^
00:26:624 (3,4,1) - Try to get a better shape here, it should have looked like a bow i guess? Well currently it doesn't look very good.
00:28:812 (1) - blanket, i know, i'm a blanket nazi o3o but they are little things, making a map better.
00:30:271 (1) - ^
00:34:634 (1) - Why are the hitsounds suddenly more quiet..? o.o I don't really like that.. it sounds a bit weird, i think going on with 70% is fine.
01:05:161 (1) - Why that sudden anti-jump? Please fix that DS. It looks a bit nosense o.o
Well, my personal opinion about this map isn't that bad
It would be nice though if you go through the map again and check the rhythm sometimes.. well, but as I said, that's my personal opinion. I like to map to the vocals, that's why i mention it. But the way you did it isn't bad!
[Hard]
00:07:725 (1,2,3,4) - Hm, i even get confused by things like this in Insane. I think if a player on 'hard'-level would play this, he would probably miss. Could you please space that out?
Btw, i mentioned the rhythm in insane right? You did a great job here, in this part. Try to get some ideas!
00:44:428 (4,5,6,7) - I don't really get that part.. what is it mapped to? I mean, of course there is the piano and stuff who allows you to place it there, without getting overmapped but .. hm. Try to follow spomething specific!
00:57:711 (4) - If you move the last point of the slider a bit you'll get a better blanket. Just aesthetics
Cool rhythm here!
[Normal]
00:02:633 (4) - Stacking is always a bit problematic in normal / easy. Try find another place please, I'm sure you can find something with DS.
00:41:522 (2) - If you look closely, you can see the stacking isn't made perfect here. (with 00:39:709 (3) - ) fix pls
01:01:897 (4,4) - Stacking again, it should be perfectly stacked!
Modding normal isn't my strength xD Looks good though
[Easy]
00:06:271 (1) - I'm a fan of using shift while placing a circle / slider in easy. Try pressing shift, so you get a line straight on with the slider.
looks fine , didn't find something to worry about
Good luck for rank, it will be ready soon i hope!!