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Neru - Ningen Shikkaku

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Ulysses
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Ulysses
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年6月15日 at 20:24:31

Artist: Neru
Title: Ningen Shikkaku
Tags: No Longer Human Kagamine Rin Kagamine Len kill worthless die bye 898 vocaloid happy623 Foreverends Sun Rainbow
BPM: 135
Filesize: 14732kb
Play Time: 04:47
Difficulties Available:
  1. 623's Easy (1.95 stars, 290 notes)
  2. Ends' Hard (4.73 stars, 639 notes)
  3. Insane (4.93 stars, 875 notes)
  4. Normal (4.08 stars, 396 notes)
  5. Posthumous (5 stars, 1113 notes)
Download: Neru - Ningen Shikkaku
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「我只是想當個普通人，過著平凡的生活，我不想要經歷動亂、冒險或是推理劇，我討厭痛苦、哀傷、淒苦的感覺」

生而在世，我很抱歉。

生まれてきてごめんなさい 。

I am sorry for being born.

我的耳邊似乎時常有一個聲音在問：「你究竟算不算一個人？」----我在破爛的供桌前禱告著：「神啊，請指示給我，我究竟是不是一個人呢？」---我自己終於解決了這個問題。我說：「像這樣怎麼能夠算做一個人呢？這豈不太污辱了這個神聖的字嗎？」於是我明白我並不是一個人
--巴金《狗》

EXCELLENT Storyborad by Sun Rainbow!!!!!
[Posthumous] ----> Extra by nold_1702
[Insane] ---->Insane by nold_1702
[Ends'Hard] ---->Hard by Foreverends
[Normal] ---->Normal by nold_1702
[623's Easy] ---->Easy by happy623
Last edited by Ulysses , edited 105 times in total.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2011
Flask
We discussed via IRC, change some whistle parts, some distance problem for jumping, and do a better flow in some patterns.

This map is pretty awesome! Here's the log:
SPOILER
22:34 nold_1702: 小鋒鋒
22:34 Flask: nold
22:34 nold_1702: 幫我看看圖給給意見lol沒做好
22:34 nold_1702: 我想知道有什麼不足
22:34 nold_1702: irc lol
22:35 nold_1702: ><""
22:35 Flask: 來link吧~
22:35 nold_1702: http://puu.sh/2uk0s
22:35 nold_1702: 謝神mapper
22:35 Flask: 我一點都不神;__;
22:36 Flask: 好多紅線啊
22:37 nold_1702: lol
22:39 Flask: 神音效;__;
22:39 nold_1702: ;_;
22:40 Flask: 00:18:714 - 我覺得可以點個whistle
22:40 nold_1702: lol
22:40 nold_1702: okay
22:43 Flask: 00:48:939 (5,1) - 這個距離能再開一點
22:43 nold_1702: 最盡了orz
22:43 Flask: 至少要比00:48:783 (4,5) - 開 聽聽vocal就能聽出差別
22:43 nold_1702: okay
22:43 nold_1702: done
22:43 Flask: 疊在00:48:471 (1) - 這個下面也不錯:3
22:43 Flask: 好
22:45 nold_1702: 不夠位置233
22:45 Flask: 01:10:658 (4) - 這個ctrl+g怎麼樣呢 :3
22:45 nold_1702: 我看來現在的樣子比較好看..
22:45 nold_1702: 不知道為什麼的xpp
22:46 Flask: 恩 只是小nazi orz
22:46 nold_1702: 看完1/3 part之後跟我說說
22:46 nold_1702: 之後我問個問題
22:46 Flask: 01:17:533 (2) - 怎麼突然變1/1不是2/3了
22:46 Flask: ?!
22:46 nold_1702: 因為xppp
22:47 nold_1702: 我忘了xp
22:47 Flask: Dx
22:47 Flask: 01:24:408 (2) - 這好醜啊 直線比較好看
22:48 nold_1702: ok
22:48 nold_1702: 看完1/3 part了?
22:48 Flask: 01:31:283 - 故意不whistle嗎
22:48 Flask: 恩 o.o
22:48 nold_1702: 嗯故意的
22:49 nold_1702: 1/3 part怪嗎
22:49 Flask: 不會啊 挺好玩的 :P
22:49 nold_1702: 說個秘密
22:49 nold_1702: 其實是1/2歌
22:49 nold_1702: 我map 1/3= =
22:50 Flask: 01:33:783 (1) - clap
22:50 Flask: :o
22:50 nold_1702: noo
22:50 nold_1702: 這裡不用clap'
22:50 Flask: 好吧我聽出漸層了 233
22:51 Flask: 01:34:408 (1,2,1) - 等距如何
22:51 Flask: 01:44:721 - 然後break從這邊開始 owo
22:51 nold_1702: 這個constant的話好難排233
22:51 nold_1702: ohhh
22:52 nold_1702: 忘1
22:52 nold_1702: 謝謝你
22:52 Flask: 01:34:721 (1,2) - 選在一起然後擺在x:264, y:64就好了吧 :O
22:53 nold_1702: okay 233
22:54 Flask: 01:57:064 (4) - 這個可以在上去一點
22:54 Flask: 就是 你懂 爽一點 (??
22:54 nold_1702: ok
22:56 Flask: 02:47:846 - 這是漏whistle嗎
22:57 nold_1702: 不是'
22:57 Flask: 好
22:58 Flask: 03:14:721 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - 感覺都可以上finish或者whistle或啥反正就不要空著
22:58 Flask: Ndefault的whistle也很好聽
22:59 Flask: 其他沒了
22:59 Flask: /_\ 被催了
22:59 nold_1702: ' /__\
22:59 nold_1702: 謝謝係2
22:59 nold_1702: 你*
22:59 Flask: 又神圖 /_\

Good luck >w<!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
irc timing log
2013-04-04 15:34 nold_1702: hello~~
2013-04-04 15:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: world~~
2013-04-04 15:34 nold_1702: .lol
2013-04-04 15:34 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
2013-04-04 15:34 nold_1702: 233
2013-04-04 15:35 nold_1702: 可以幫忙測bpm 嗎
2013-04-04 15:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0,0 什么歌
2013-04-04 15:35 nold_1702: 鏡音
2013-04-04 15:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0,0 目测220
2013-04-04 15:35 nold_1702: =
2013-04-04 15:35 nold_1702: = =
2013-04-04 15:35 nold_1702: 幫一下><"
2013-04-04 15:35 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: en
2013-04-04 15:36 nold_1702: ,,
2013-04-04 15:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0,0
2013-04-04 15:36 nold_1702: 0.0 可以嗎
2013-04-04 15:36 nold_1702: 233
2013-04-04 15:36 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 可以啊234
2013-04-04 15:37 nold_1702: http://puu.sh/2tBse
2013-04-04 15:37 nold_1702: 謝謝喔
2013-04-04 15:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好
2013-04-04 15:37 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: no longer human
2013-04-04 15:38 nold_1702: 應該有...2個bpm
2013-04-04 15:38 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 0,0 哦..
2013-04-04 15:38 nold_1702: 0.0
2013-04-04 15:39 nold_1702: 裝萌 0.0
2013-04-04 15:39 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: mold_1702
2013-04-04 15:39 nold_1702: 0.0
2013-04-04 15:41 nold_1702: moe_1702
2013-04-04 15:41 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 233
2013-04-04 15:41 nold_1702: lol
2013-04-04 15:41 nold_1702: 提醒一下..
2013-04-04 15:41 nold_1702: 最好恐怖 有心理準 = =
2013-04-04 15:42 nold_1702: 最寢
2013-04-04 15:42 nold_1702: 最後*
2013-04-04 15:42 nold_1702: 我狂打錯字了23
2013-04-04 15:42 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: o.o
2013-04-04 15:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 没啊o.o
2013-04-04 15:43 nold_1702: 最後一下我第一次聽下到了 ww
2013-04-04 15:43 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: o.o 我没吓到
2013-04-04 15:44 nold_1702: ><
2013-04-04 15:49 nold_1702: 會不會有很多bpm= =
2013-04-04 15:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: bpm:90 offset:1996/bpm:192 offset:22216
2013-04-04 15:51 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 好像就可以了..
2013-04-04 15:53 nold_1702: 謝謝喔
2013-04-04 15:53 nold_1702: ><"
2013-04-04 15:53 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 嗯o.o
2013-04-04 15:57 nold_1702: 90bpm 好像不正確o.o
2013-04-04 15:57 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: o.o 哦
2013-04-04 15:57 nold_1702: .
2013-04-04 15:57 nold_1702: 我set錯了
2013-04-04 15:57 nold_1702: 我set了91= =
2013-04-04 15:58 [CSGA]Ar3sgice: 最后有点慢下来了, 要不多加几个红线
Shiro
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Shiro
Provided (apparently final) timing (for the beginning). .osu is here http://puu.sh/2tCW9
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
神图不解释
Foreverends
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Foreverends

Sun Rainbow wrote:

神图不解释
- Tu -
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- Tu -

Foreverends wrote:

Sun Rainbow wrote:

神图不解释
Lan wings
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Lan wings
留名
Ulysses
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Topic Starter
Ulysses

Lan wings wrote:

留名
We discussed via IRC.
SPOILER
00:07 nold_1702: 藍翼,可以test下我的圖嗎><
00:07 Lan wings: np
00:07 *nold_1702 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/237848 Neru - Ningen Shikkaku [Posthumous]]
00:07 Lan wings: 鬼畜向嗎
00:08 nold_1702: 一點
00:08 Lan wings: 看來是很鬼畜了
00:08 nold_1702: orz  早知說不
00:08 Lan wings: 我懂的
00:09 Lan wings: 額
00:09 Lan wings: 4分鐘
00:09 nold_1702: okayy
00:09 Lan wings: 沒速度
00:13 Lan wings: 可以了
00:13 nold_1702: okayy
00:13 nold_1702: :pp 謝謝你喔><
00:13 nold_1702: 很感謝你><""
00:14 Lan wings: 我去個ｗｃ先
00:16 Lan wings: sb瞎了點;_;
00:16 nold_1702: ;__;
00:16 nold_1702: 我見你沒開sb
00:19 Lan wings: 應該是你這邊關了
00:19 nold_1702: lol
00:22 Lan wings: 唔
00:22 nold_1702:  :v
00:22 Lan wings: 最後那下鋼琴可以加個假note
00:22 nold_1702: 加了
00:22 Lan wings: 還是說已經加了我刪SB沒看到
00:22 Lan wings: 唔
00:22 nold_1702: 你應該del了sb所以沒看到
00:22 Lan wings: 沒del
00:22 nold_1702: haha
00:22 nold_1702: 在我這邊我看到假note
00:23 Lan wings: 只是下面那菜單里刪了
00:23 nold_1702: 應該是因為這所以..orz
00:23 Lan wings: 那是因為你那邊沒有關閉
00:23 Lan wings: 有加瞎眼提示么?
00:23 Lan wings: 開始好像沒見到
00:23 nold_1702: 啊
00:23 nold_1702: 忘了xp
00:23 Lan wings: 這種情況算比較閃的了
00:23 nold_1702: 謝謝你喔  藍翼
00:24 nold_1702: 很感謝你
00:24 Lan wings: 我的話多打打fc沒問題
00:24 nold_1702: 很觸
00:24 Lan wings: 不過有個三連好像打了兩次都掉了
00:24 Lan wings: 我去瞄瞄
00:24 Lan wings: 00:33:627 (2,3,4) - 
00:24 Lan wings: 估計位置有點靠右
00:25 nold_1702: hmm
00:25 nold_1702: okayy
00:25 Lan wings: 我換窗口玩玩看
00:26 nold_1702: 我上傳了
00:26 Lan wings: 玩崩了
00:26 nold_1702: 為什麼flower跟伙2
00:26 nold_1702: 你*
00:26 nold_1702: 是一起上線跟下線的orz
00:26 Lan wings: ?
00:26 Lan wings: 我osu崩了
00:26 nold_1702: okayy
00:27 nold_1702: 上傳><"
00:27 nold_1702: update
00:29 Lan wings: 減速slider好像不太容易分辨
00:29 nold_1702: Okayy
00:30 Lan wings: 就是這種
00:32 Lan wings: 對了
00:32 nold_1702: 是??
00:32 Lan wings: 假note可以加個miss音效<.<
00:32 nold_1702: ..
00:32 nold_1702: 這樣很..
00:32 nold_1702: 很2
00:33 Lan wings: 跟鋼琴音應該會挺配
00:33 nold_1702: 我跟rainbow說說
00:33 nold_1702: 這應該要加sb音效orz
00:33 Lan wings: 嗯　sb音效不算難搞
00:33 nold_1702: 謝謝你喔藍翼;w;
00:33 nold_1702: 但是慢slider不太會fix..
00:33 Lan wings: 01:24:252 (1,2,3) - 
00:34 Lan wings: 這裡flow不太好
00:34 Lan wings: 慢slider不算什麽大問題
00:34 Lan wings: 頂多1PC被坑下
00:34 Lan wings: 打多幾遍就知道了
00:35 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/694997
00:35 Lan wings: 類似這樣效果挺好
00:35 nold_1702: okayy
00:35 nold_1702: 做好了><"
00:36 Lan wings: 如果你需要講究點的話可以這樣
00:36 Lan wings: 01:24:252 (1) - 這裡指著前面那個3
00:36 Lan wings: 01:23:939 (3) - 的頭
00:36 nold_1702: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695000這樣?
00:36 Lan wings: 01:24:408 (2) - 然後後面這個複製前面的轉角度
00:36 nold_1702: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695000
00:37 Lan wings: 不是啦
00:37 Lan wings: 01:24:252 (1) - 
00:37 Lan wings: 這裡slider直線延伸過去到那個3的slider頭
00:38 nold_1702: 可以拍張圖來嗎;__;
00:38 Lan wings: 就剛才那個
00:38 Lan wings: 只要稍微往右拉一點就好
00:38 Lan wings: 01:24:408 (2) - 然後這個是複製前面的
00:38 Lan wings: 旋轉20°
00:39 Lan wings: 01:24:564 (3) - 3複製2旋轉20°
00:39 Lan wings: 20°好像有點大
00:39 Lan wings: 我試試小點的
00:40 Lan wings: 唔　差不多這樣
00:40 nold_1702: hmm
00:40 Lan wings: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/695009
00:40 Lan wings: 轉15°
00:41 nold_1702: okayy'
00:41 nold_1702: done :p
00:42 Lan wings: 01:59:096 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 好梗我喜歡
00:42 Lan wings: 不過有點難讀
00:43 Lan wings: 後面沒啥了
00:43 Lan wings: 好圖good luck
00:43 nold_1702: okayy
00:43 nold_1702: 謝謝你喔><"
00:43 nold_1702: 來留個言,給kd
00:43 Lan wings: 另外個人吐槽下
00:43 Lan wings: 鬼畜的圖不建議做瞎眼SB
00:43 nold_1702: xp SR做的
00:44 Lan wings: 雖然是能關掉 但是還是不太好
00:44 *Lan wings is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/237848 Neru - Ningen Shikkaku]
00:45 Lan wings: 之前崩了的沒了我就不貼了
00:45 Lan wings: 或者你post你貼irc
00:45 Lan wings: 我post*
00:45 nold_1702: okayy
Last edited by Ulysses , edited 1 time in total.
happy623
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happy623
WIP gd :arrow: http://puu.sh/2vNnE :o
Ulysses
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Joined September 2010
Topic Starter
Ulysses
Updated
happy623
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happy623
Easy DONE 8-) :arrow: http://puu.sh/2wUMI
(亂碼注意ww
Sun Rainbow
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Sun Rainbow
预计周六日可以交SB 还有我其实想做Taiko我会说？
Pokie
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Pokie
呀
Flask
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Flask
噠
Skystar
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Skystar
epic
On_WanWan
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On_WanWan
<3 :oops:
spboxer3
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spboxer3
蝌蚪別給
你的Hard的 unicode爆了阿 記得改
IamKwaN
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IamKwaN
噗
Nyquill
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Nyquill
hahahaha this map is fucking awesome
Jenny
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Jenny
do not like song :<
Skystar
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Skystar

Jenny wrote:

do not like song :<
genler
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genler

Jenny wrote:

do not like song :<
u wot m8

the song is daaamn catchy, and the beatmap is even superior!
[Mahua]
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[Mahua]
最后的两个假note的数字大了
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
我的耳邊似乎時常有一個聲音在問：「你究竟算不算一個人？」----我在破爛的供桌前禱告著：「神啊，請指示給我，我究竟是不是一個人呢？」---我自己終於解決了這個問題。我說：「像這樣怎麼能夠算做一個人呢？這豈不太污辱了這個神聖的字嗎？」於是我明白我並不是一個人, 而是一条人。
Chewin
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Chewin

Amamiya Yuko wrote:

epic
IamKwaN
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

我的耳邊似乎時常有一個聲音在問：「你究竟算不算一個人？」----我在破爛的供桌前禱告著：「神啊，請指示給我，我究竟是不是一個人呢？」---我自己終於解決了這個問題。我說：「像這樣怎麼能夠算做一個人呢？這豈不太污辱了這個神聖的字嗎？」於是我明白我並不是一個人, 而是一条人。
噗
al2e10
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al2e10
想做個diff都沒 D:
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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General

  1. 你加new combo太多了 一般10个左右都可以的 你这就没超过6个..
Insane

  1. 00:03:766 (2) - 可以听出来两次是不一样的, 这里ctrl+G反过来比较好
  2. 00:14:425 (2,3) - ^
  3. 00:05:766 - 停在这里 然后00:05:988 - 叠个note?
  4. 00:08:655 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798669
  5. 00:27:221 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798672 这样比较好吧..
  6. 00:52:221 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里打起来这么莫名
  7. 01:24:096 - 从这里就开始了啊.. 为什么空两格放
  8. 01:33:080 (2) - 感觉有点过了, x:356 y:72左右就可以了 这一段间距都这么近//
  9. 01:42:533 (2) - 为什么不是0.5 orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798691
  10. 02:52:689 (2) - ^
  11. 03:42:689 (2) - ^
  12. 04:22:689 (2) - ^
  13. 04:47:689 (2) - ^
  14. 02:00:759 - 大概是歌曲的原因我感觉这一段很不好抓..
  15. 02:04:564 (1) - 这里每次都出100啊 换成这样大概就舒服很多了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798698
  16. 02:38:314 (5) - 放这里.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798702
  17. 后面怎么这么闪
  18. 03:34:486 (7) - 这样就好了吧.. 太长不好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798710
  19. 04:04:096 (1,2,3,4) - 。。这怎么打
  20. 04:48:627 (1) - 数字太大了
Posthumous

  1. 00:03:766 (2) - ctrl+G 嗯
  2. 00:09:322 (2) - x:356 y:184
  3. 01:02:455 - 可以add note吗..
  4. 01:03:471 (7) - 这个用3/4感觉比较好 而且打起来都差不多..
  5. 01:30:814 (3) - 和2叠起来
  6. 01:39:642 (6) - 这个是故意的吗o.o 好鬼畜的样子
  7. 02:04:408 (3) - 来 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798749
  8. 03:06:225 - 我觉得这一段可以放点左右来回跳的梗 ww
  9. 04:04:539 - 这里的短滑条好喜感www
  10. 04:48:627 - 假note呢..
Ends' Hard

  1. 我没update ww
  2. 00:45:033 (2) - 既然是hard难度, 1/2拍的滑条就好了..
  3. 03:08:471 (1) - 滑条拉长点那个圈去掉..
  4. 04:09:721 (1) - ^
  5. 04:10:346 (4) - 这个的箭头挡住了
  6. 04:05:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 不好。。
  7. 04:27:299 (3) - remove
Normal

  1. 00:19:990 (3,4) - 这样没关系吗o.o
  2. 01:20:971 (1) - ^
  3. 03:14:408 (1,1,1,1,1) - taiduole..
  4. 03:57:221 (1,2) - blanket
  5. 04:07:846 (2,1) - ^
  6. 04:48:627 (1) - 不一样大的一下就发现了啊..
Easy

  1. 03:48:471 (6) - 这里的blanket做的有点不太好
  2. 03:53:471 (6) - ^
  3. 看上去还好吧 233
  4. 其实我觉得间距有点大..
是人

edit: 其实我觉得间距有点大的是normal 放错位了 23333
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Ulysses
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Topic Starter
Ulysses

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

tree


General

  1. 你加new combo太多了 一般10个左右都可以的 你这就没超过6个.. :arrow: I love NCs lol.
Insane

  1. 00:03:766 (2) - 可以听出来两次是不一样的, 这里ctrl+G反过来比较好 :arrow: okayy
  2. 00:14:425 (2,3) - ^ :arrow: okayy
  3. 00:05:766 - 停在这里 然后00:05:988 - 叠个note? :arrow: 不好,聽下去有點不知所措..
  4. 00:08:655 (1,2,3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798669
  5. 00:27:221 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798672 这样比较好吧..
  6. 00:52:221 (1,2,3) - 为什么这里打起来这么莫名
  7. 01:24:096 - 从这里就开始了啊.. 为什么空两格放
  8. 01:33:080 (2) - 感觉有点过了, x:356 y:72左右就可以了 这一段间距都这么近//
  9. 01:42:533 (2) - 为什么不是0.5 orz http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798691 :arrow: 其實因為我認為現在的RHYTHM聽起來很有勁...下面都一樣的
  10. 02:52:689 (2) - ^
  11. 03:42:689 (2) - ^
  12. 04:22:689 (2) - ^
  13. 04:47:689 (2) - ^
  14. 02:00:759 - 大概是歌曲的原因我感觉这一段很不好抓.. :arrow: :<
  15. 02:04:564 (1) - 这里每次都出100啊 换成这样大概就舒服很多了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798698
  16. 02:38:314 (5) - 放这里.. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798702 :arrow: 太遠了
  17. 后面怎么这么闪 :arrow: 請重dl
  18. 03:34:486 (7) - 这样就好了吧.. 太长不好看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798710 :arrow: good
  19. 04:04:096 (1,2,3,4) - 。。这怎么打 :arrow: 我打起來沒什麼問題@@
  20. 04:48:627 (1) - 数字太大了
Posthumous

  1. 00:03:766 (2) - ctrl+G 嗯 :arrow: 在這個難度我認為轉了頭尾會影響美觀
  2. 00:09:322 (2) - x:356 y:184 :arrow: noo..
  3. 01:02:455 - 可以add note吗.. :arrow: 因該不可以ww
  4. 01:03:471 (7) - 这个用3/4感觉比较好 而且打起来都差不多.. :arrow: 你太鬼畜了
  5. 01:30:814 (3) - 和2叠起来 :arrow: ..
  6. 01:39:642 (6) - 这个是故意的吗o.o 好鬼畜的样子 :arrow: 是!
  7. 02:04:408 (3) - 来 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/798749 :arrow:
  8. 03:06:225 - 我觉得这一段可以放点左右来回跳的梗 ww
  9. 04:04:539 - 这里的短滑条好喜感www
  10. 04:48:627 - 假note呢..
:arrow: 我都不知道為什麼突然消失了..

Ends' Hard

  1. 我没update ww
    :arrow: ends他用不到net,所以我代他fix好了
  2. 00:45:033 (2) - 既然是hard难度, 1/2拍的滑条就好了..
  3. 03:08:471 (1) - 滑条拉长点那个圈去掉..
  4. 04:09:721 (1) - ^
  5. 04:10:346 (4) - 这个的箭头挡住了
  6. 04:05:346 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 不好。。
  7. 04:27:299 (3) - remove
Normal

  1. 00:19:990 (3,4) - 这样没关系吗o.o
  2. 01:20:971 (1) - ^
  3. 03:14:408 (1,1,1,1,1) - taiduole..
  4. 03:57:221 (1,2) - blanket
  5. 04:07:846 (2,1) - ^
  6. 04:48:627 (1) - 不一样大的一下就发现了啊..


是人 :arrow: 狗
沒加 ":arrow: "的就是fix了

謝謝=]
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Easy

  1. 03:48:471 (6) - 这里的blanket做的有点不太好 fixed
  2. 03:53:471 (6) - ^ fixed
  3. 看上去还好吧 233 QwQ. . .
  4. 其实我觉得间距有点大.. 感覺還可以w
:arrow: http://puu.sh/3afju

mod 感謝w
kirinokirino
354 posts
Joined June 2011
kirinokirino
Sorry for my bad english
Posthumous
00:15:996 (2) - add whistle to sliders end instead of finish?
00:19:990 (1,2) - sounds noisy. Maybe whistle at sircle, nothing at sliders start and finish at sliders end?
01:08:054 (4,5,1,2,3) - not nice. Maybe something like this?
SPOILER
01:13:471 (1) - left anchor point 2 grid left and 2 grid down.
02:46:908 (5) - left anchor point 2 grid left.
02:50:658 (4) - aaaagrh! 1 gread right please! It intersects with slider.
04:20:658 (4) - left anchor point 1 grid left and central anchor point 1 grid right.
04:29:408 (2,1) - maybe make large jump there?

Insane
00:19:990 (6) - add whistle to sliders end instead of finish?
00:48:783 (2) - maybe x:488 y:256?
03:56:283 (2) - maybe whole slider 2 grid left?

Ends' Hard
00:51:283 (7) - hey !@#$%^
SPOILER
02:06:283 (6) - please, 2 grid right.
02:48:471 (4) - maybe whole slider 1 grid down and right?

623's Easy
01:31:596 (4) - right anchor point 1 grid right
01:36:283 (2) - 1 grid left and 01:36:908 (3) - 1 grid left and up.

Amazing map, thanks nold_1702, happy623, Foreverends and special thanks Sun Rainbow!
happy623
1,436 posts
Joined April 2010
happy623

andrei7 wrote:

Sorry for my bad english

623's Easy
01:31:596 (4) - right anchor point 1 grid right
01:36:283 (2) - 1 grid left and 01:36:908 (3) - 1 grid left and up.
all fixed, thanks :)
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