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Aqua - Barbie Girl

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Andrea
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martedì 7 luglio 2009 at 15:52:10

Artist: Aqua
Title: Barbie Girl
BPM: 130
Filesize: 9477kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,77 stars, 397 notes)
  2. Normal (4,08 stars, 279 notes)
Download: Aqua - Barbie Girl
Download: Aqua - Barbie Girl (no video)
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My 22th beatmap. I hope you like it :3 <3.

24/04/09 : Added [Easy (Short Version)] & [Hard]
26/04/09 : eee's and JarJarJacob fix. Thanks!
26/04/09 : Agent_Spin_Here fix. Thanks!
26/04/09 : Changed [Easy] To [Normal]
13/05/09 : Lowered volume on [Normal] and [Hard] on normal hitsounds.
31/05/09 : Added new mp3. Better quality.
Last edited by Andrea , edited 15 times in total.
Jarby
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Jarby
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eee
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eee
here: offset is pretty bad for this vid, but it's cool http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPoZ5Gg_pxA <---this doens't mean anything

yup, you need a background

[All Difficulties]
how about move both of your samplesets to the halfway mark, to the middle.

[Easy (Short Version)]
01:02:68 (1) - this spinner may be too short for the sake of Easy
01:07:41 (2) - (naz-eee mod) you want to move this down a grid

[Hard]
first: fix all your breaks, they begin too early
second: I think the new combos JarJar mentioned are fine, you don't have to change anything
02:33:95 (3,4) - move this one level 3 grid to the right and one up
02:34:87 (1) - this is too close, some would hit it too early
02:44:10 (5) - stack this to the endpoint of (4)

[Video]
Bald guy is kinda wierd looking

eeestar*
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks for modding eee and Jar.

Updated!
Mashley
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Mashley
Needs background as a requirement.

Easy
00:16:64 (1) - Ugly slider
00:17:56 (2) - Line the end of this up with the start
00:19:41 (2) - Line up with (1)
00:41:33 (3) - Line the end of this up with the start
00:43:41 (3) - Line up with (2)
00:44:80 (2,3,4) - Uneven spacing

Hard

Way to many whistles in the chorus. Remove some or make some claps.

00:52:41 (7) - 1 Grid to the left.
01:02:56 (3) - 1 Grid right.
01:04:41 (3) - I don't like how this appears under 2.


This is... Ok. I guess. Make sure you add a background though.
Andrea
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Andrea
Done. Anyway you forgot to star the map :(
Diasios
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Diasios
Italian:

La canzone è bella, ma non mi piace come l'hai mappata, sorry :P
Comunque...
1) rinomina la "Easy short version" in "Normal short version"
2) lucio mette troppi clap, tu metti troppi fischi X.X puoi modificare gli hitsounds?
3) gli sliders... XD
4) Normal short version:
- 00:24:261 (2) = 1/2 indietro
- 00:24:723 (3) = ^
- 00:42:030 (...) = aggiungi un cerchio
- 00:42:953 (...) = ^
- 00:57:953 (2) = porta lo slider 1/2 indietro
- 00:58:415 (...) = aggiungi un cerchio
- 1:21:030 (...) = ^

Modifica TUTTO (o almeno solo quelle piccole cose nella Normal).

starred
Andrea
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Andrea
Changed easy to normal.
fufe
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fufe
you pick fun maps to play/mod

hard
00:51:95 (4,5,6) - spacing check.
00:53:33 (10) - ^
00:53:80 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ these are a tiny bit too close if u care. Not really a problem i guess..
00:59:33 (4,5,6,7) - move up to align?
01:04:41 (3) - slightly offcentered from 1,2
01:29:338 missing hit? refer to [01:25:64 (3) - ]
01:36:723 ^
01:49:18 (4,5) - offcenter
03:08:56 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing is slightly different from 1,2 and 3,4

normal
00:24:492 put this note back in? it sounds wierd especially if you map the second and third syllable of one word [ev-"vry"-"where"]
01:10:18 (1,2,3) - fill in the gaps and make this sound like 01:12:03 (1,2,3) stacked notes are still easy enough for normal difficulty?
01:19:18 (1,2) - inconsistent space
01:29:80 (4) - cut in half and repeat 1?
01:37:18 (4) - ^
02:27:72 (4,5,6) - inconsistent spacing

normal i think you can map out a little more to fit the difficulty since it seems it used to be mapped to be an easy before. weeeestars
Andrea
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Andrea
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Andrea
BumP
Rolled
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Rolled
lolsong.

Loud hitsounds are a bit overpowering in both difficulties. Try lowering the volume a bit so they don't mask the song. Also, the ending in both difficulties is a bit anti-climactic. Mapping the "come on barbie let's go party" would be a good idea so it's not like break, 5 notes, break, 5 notes, break 5 notes, ending. I have to say that hard gets to be a bit of mindless clicking after a while too; not all that much of a challenge.

As far as the map goes, nothing really wrong with it, I'd just like to see more spice. Whistles may be a bit out of place at times as well, like JJJ said.

Have a priority star since it's all I can do with this new system atm.
Andrea
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Ok Thanks rolled i try to lower the volume on normal hitsounds :3

Done.

I mapped final parts ;) Thanks again Rolled <3
Paulo8624
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Paulo8624
You'll get this little star because of the awesomeness of the video.

+Star
Andrea
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Andrea
Thanks, Rolled please check this map :( Or another BAT !
Takuma
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Takuma
Haha, Barbie Girl. XD

- All:
Redo the breaks.

- Hard:
00:55:44 (6) - New combo.
00:56:36 (9) - New combo.
00:57:29 (1) - Remove new combo.

- Normal:
00:57:29 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:58:21 (3) - New combo.
02:57:98 (1) - Just letting you know that this isn't congruent to 02:57:06 (1). Move this 1 level 3 grid to the right.

Starred.
Andrea
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Andrea
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Takuma
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Larto
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Larto
Normal:
02:35:36 (6) - This slider is weird, I'm sure you see what I mean. Stretch it out.

That's all.
Andrea
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Fixed, waiting for mtmcl's difficulty, and next Larto re-check it <3
deepsea
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popi
DJPop
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DJPop
Just suggestions.

~Hard~
00:17:36 (3,4) - looks weird, make them smoothly -_- (line the end of slider with starting point)

~Normal~
00:17:36 (2) - ^
01:14:60 (2) - ^


+Star
Crazy Jay
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Crazy Jay
nice map :)
Could you wait for my difficuly? :D
+star
Crazy Jay
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Crazy Jay
oops X_X
My teacher said final exam is two weeks later,so I have to review...
I haven't enough time to do my difficulty.sorry :(
Andrea
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Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
00:16:44 (1) - remove starting whistle
00:17:36 (2) - whistle the slidertrack as well as the two ends
00:21:06 (4) - finish the end
00:22:44 (1) - remove whistle
you're really overusing normal whistle here, it sounds raucious
00:39:52 (4) - try a different hitsound
01:30:06 (5) - stacking
02:31:90 (6) - im sure theres a better place for this note than covering the next slider


[Hard]
00:23:60 (1,2) - is there a reason youre putting the whistles on the weak hit instead of the strong hit (this is an example, it happens throughout the section in both diffs)
00:32:13 (3) - try a finish instead
00:39:52 (4) - ^
02:01:44 (5) - move the start out from under the previous slider


i would really prefer it if you replaced/deleted about half of your normal whistles in both diffs but its up to you. the only edit i will not rank if you do not perform is the last one on Hard. popping for now...
Andrea
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Andrea
Fixed, thank you :D
Sleep Powder
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Sleep Powder
[Normal]
00:23:60 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Start the whistle no whistle pattern starting from 2 ( take out whistle at 1)
00:25:44 (7) - Add a whistle here too?
00:39:52 (4) - Whistle instead...
00:54:98 (3) - Clap the beginning too?
00:56:83 (5) - Clap here too?
00:58:67 (3) - Add a finish at the start of this?
01:13:21 (4) - Whistle the end of this?
01:20:83 (6) - Whistle this too
01:39:06 (4) - Finish the end of this instead
01:39:52 (5) - Whistle?
02:33:06 (1) - No Whistle
02:33:52 (2,3) - Whistle,Whistle
03:06:75 (3) - Make this in the middle of 1,2 (take out grid snap) [not a nazi modi...just your average beatmap maid service]
03:08:83 (3) - Finish?
03:09:29 (4) - Finish the end of this
03:09:75 (5) - Take out the finish on this...hmm...maybe not...idk up to you


[Hard]
00:17:36 (3) - Take out whistle at the end and add it to 4?

I don't think I should hitsound mod this too much
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
still too many whistles in the beginning and the kiai time doesnt fit at all
01:24:75 (1) - is the only reasonable place for kiai i can see


[Hard]
same comments as Normal
Andrea
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Andrea

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
still too many whistles in the beginning and the kiai time doesnt fit at all For the kiai time: I don't want to change it, sorry. I removed some whistles on beginning.
01:24:75 (1) - is the only reasonable place for kiai i can see I don't like it sorry :<


[Hard]
same comments as Normal Look normal.

Rank it please :(
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
[Normal]
01:30:06 (5) - stacking
01:36:98 (4) - clap the second hit
01:59:13 (3) - new combo
02:06:52 (5) - ^
02:30:75 (4) - try a finish
02:32:13 (7) - ^ on the end
etc.


[Hard]
02:03:29 (3) - move the finish to the start
Andrea
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Andrea
Another kudos for SFG :D

ALL FIXED!!

You can rank it, please? T_T
Yuukari-Banteki
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Yuukari-Banteki
i cant rank it, it isnt bubbled -_- i CAN bubble it

[Normal]
mmm i still dont like it but its rankable


[Hard]
as above
Andrea
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Andrea
Oh sorry SFG, i saw wrong :P Thank you anyway!
tieff
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tieff
Yay, it's bubbled!
pouer
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O_0
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