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nice map!
star~
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Yoku dekimashita! very nice map ^^ i like it one star from me 
BPM:140.00
Offset:2152
Resnap all notes by 1/4 divisors
Also you need check all timing lines(green lines) because the BPM is changed
<Relaxing>
Circle size -1 can make this diff a bit easy lol
02:54:break time here
All good
<tobe>
00:37:28 (3) - No plz
02:17:35 (1) - ^
03:03:34:16 (1) - 05:56 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i like this part but i don`t think it`s rankable
03:34:16 (1) - I think it`s OK
Those sliders are self-overlapped so you need to change it
Cute map <3
Offset:2152
Resnap all notes by 1/4 divisors
Also you need check all timing lines(green lines) because the BPM is changed
<Relaxing>
Circle size -1 can make this diff a bit easy lol
02:54:break time here
All good
<tobe>
00:37:28 (3) - No plz
02:17:35 (1) - ^
03:03:34:16 (1) - 05:56 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - i like this part but i don`t think it`s rankable
03:34:16 (1) - I think it`s OK
Those sliders are self-overlapped so you need to change it
Cute map <3
Star for now
Cool song. Starr'd
A really great map, shoot a star!
EDIT: After a check, it's ok for me to bubble!
EDIT: After a check, it's ok for me to bubble!
This map is so cool
Hold this
^ Currently pending changes Alace, tobe and I discussed in irc.
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Topic Starter
>Hanyuu
thx star
>Takuma & Alace
your advice is fixed ｘD
& Gabi's Advice is fixed bit.
thx star
>Takuma & Alace
your advice is fixed ｘD
& Gabi's Advice is fixed bit.
Nice fix!! Bubbled again!
[relaxing]
00:39:86 (1) - half hidden
01:30:86 - kiai for fountaining isnt rankable anymore
03:34:29 - ^
also theres an awful lot of kiai in here
[tobe]
01:03:43 (1) - note too soon after the spinner (imo)
01:09:86 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - cluttered
also remove the excess kiai fountains plz
01:54:65 (2) - half hidden
01:56:36 (2) - ^
02:25:72 (1) - too soon after spinner
02:53:15 (1) - weird bpm change
03:34:18 (1) - ^
also still a bit too much kiai time...its like half the map o.o
00:39:86 (1) - half hidden
01:30:86 - kiai for fountaining isnt rankable anymore
03:34:29 - ^
also theres an awful lot of kiai in here
[tobe]
01:03:43 (1) - note too soon after the spinner (imo)
01:09:86 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - cluttered
also remove the excess kiai fountains plz
01:54:65 (2) - half hidden
01:56:36 (2) - ^
02:25:72 (1) - too soon after spinner
02:53:15 (1) - weird bpm change
03:34:18 (1) - ^
also still a bit too much kiai time...its like half the map o.o
LEAVE THE MAP ALONE ITS FINE
I play this map and forgot the star before. XD
star this now <3
tobetobe~~
star this now <3
tobetobe~~
Takuma, no.
Sorry, but I'm popping this bubble.
Relaxing:
tobe Style:
Sorry, but I'm popping this bubble.
Relaxing:
SPOILER
-00:27:33 (3) - Replace the Finish with either a Clap or no hitsound. This is not the ending that calls for that sort of emphasis.
-00:41:04 (3) - ^
-01:30:86 - Random place for kiai IMO. Feels too distracting and clunky.
-02:03:33 (3) - The Finish feels out of place when you have a part with 3 straight Finishes right afterwards. The terse end to the vocals feels like it calls for no hitsound or for a Clap.
-02:53:580 - Kiai just for a fountain again. It honestly looks better if you just end the kiai time after that slider, not add its own fountain.
-03:16:93 (3) - Remove the Finish, that section doesn't need that sort of conclusion.
-03:23:79 (2) - Remove the Finish from the endpoint.
-03:25:83 (1) - Add a Finish, it gives that section a sense of conclusion.
-03:34:080 - The ending isn't a good place to stick kiai, it feels just plain wrong. Please remove it.
-03:34:29 (1) - This section doesn't feel like it has a strong enough conclusion for the end of the map. It needs to have that sort of "YAY I'M AT THE END~!" sort of feel, and it doesn't, hitsound-wise. The generic way to give this sort of feel would be to have a Finish on the last note.
-00:41:04 (3) - ^
-01:30:86 - Random place for kiai IMO. Feels too distracting and clunky.
-02:03:33 (3) - The Finish feels out of place when you have a part with 3 straight Finishes right afterwards. The terse end to the vocals feels like it calls for no hitsound or for a Clap.
-02:53:580 - Kiai just for a fountain again. It honestly looks better if you just end the kiai time after that slider, not add its own fountain.
-03:16:93 (3) - Remove the Finish, that section doesn't need that sort of conclusion.
-03:23:79 (2) - Remove the Finish from the endpoint.
-03:25:83 (1) - Add a Finish, it gives that section a sense of conclusion.
-03:34:080 - The ending isn't a good place to stick kiai, it feels just plain wrong. Please remove it.
-03:34:29 (1) - This section doesn't feel like it has a strong enough conclusion for the end of the map. It needs to have that sort of "YAY I'M AT THE END~!" sort of feel, and it doesn't, hitsound-wise. The generic way to give this sort of feel would be to have a Finish on the last note.
tobe Style:
SPOILER
-00:27:33 (1) - Is it me or does this Finish sound like a normal beat? When I remove the Finish, I hear nothing, but when I put it back on, it sounds like a normal beat. Eww.
-00:27:65 (2) - This would be much better without the Finish unless you did something like the next point I'm going to mention.
-00:41:04 (1,2) - I'm actually going to say that this is how you should always pull off parts like this in this map. The Finishes aren't too loud, meaning they do not sound too conclusive. Make every part like this in the vein of this.
-01:01:99 (1) - This should extend 1 beat, removing that 1. That note feels unnecessary when this spinner can fulfill that role just fine.
-01:15:65 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. It feels far too random to have a New Combo right at the end of the phrase at a place that truly doesn't make sense IMO.
-01:17:15 (1) - ^
-01:27:86 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. You just had a New Combo mark the beat before, when the phrase started. It's just random and makes no sense. .-.
-01:29:36 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. Random, random, random place for one.
-01:30:86 (1) - ^
-01:30:812 - Random, clunky kiai, be gone.
-01:49:61 (1,2) - Remember how I said to handle these sections earlier? Do that.
-02:03:33 (1,2) - ^
-02:24:27 (1) - Spinner could extend for another beat. That clicked beat after the spinner is unnecessary IMO.
-02:39:43 (1) - Random New Combo mark, remove it.
-02:53:15 (1) - ^
-02:53:15 (1) - Weird BPM change. I personally would've found it better to just use the same BPM, just doing a 1/8 slider.
-02:53:15 - Remove the kiai, it's random and bleh.
-03:07:93 (1) - Remove the Finish. First beat emphasis = ewww.
-03:10:50 (1) - ^
-03:12:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. It's random.
-03:13:93 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-03:14:79 (1) - ^
-03:18:22 (1) - Remove the random New Combo mark.
-03:20:57 (1) - ^
-03:33:116 - Random BPM change much?
-03:34:134 - ^. Also remove the kiai here.
-The ending needs more of a conclusive sound to it. Seriously, the ending needs to sound more like an ending.
-00:27:65 (2) - This would be much better without the Finish unless you did something like the next point I'm going to mention.
-00:41:04 (1,2) - I'm actually going to say that this is how you should always pull off parts like this in this map. The Finishes aren't too loud, meaning they do not sound too conclusive. Make every part like this in the vein of this.
-01:01:99 (1) - This should extend 1 beat, removing that 1. That note feels unnecessary when this spinner can fulfill that role just fine.
-01:15:65 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. It feels far too random to have a New Combo right at the end of the phrase at a place that truly doesn't make sense IMO.
-01:17:15 (1) - ^
-01:27:86 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. You just had a New Combo mark the beat before, when the phrase started. It's just random and makes no sense. .-.
-01:29:36 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. Random, random, random place for one.
-01:30:86 (1) - ^
-01:30:812 - Random, clunky kiai, be gone.
-01:49:61 (1,2) - Remember how I said to handle these sections earlier? Do that.
-02:03:33 (1,2) - ^
-02:24:27 (1) - Spinner could extend for another beat. That clicked beat after the spinner is unnecessary IMO.
-02:39:43 (1) - Random New Combo mark, remove it.
-02:53:15 (1) - ^
-02:53:15 (1) - Weird BPM change. I personally would've found it better to just use the same BPM, just doing a 1/8 slider.
-02:53:15 - Remove the kiai, it's random and bleh.
-03:07:93 (1) - Remove the Finish. First beat emphasis = ewww.
-03:10:50 (1) - ^
-03:12:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. It's random.
-03:13:93 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-03:14:79 (1) - ^
-03:18:22 (1) - Remove the random New Combo mark.
-03:20:57 (1) - ^
-03:33:116 - Random BPM change much?
-03:34:134 - ^. Also remove the kiai here.
-The ending needs more of a conclusive sound to it. Seriously, the ending needs to sound more like an ending.
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you should let mapper think by himself
I DON`T HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH THIS MAP
let`s see
star for now
I DON`T HAVE ANY PROBLEM WITH THIS MAP
let`s see
star for now
^
To. Each. Their. Own.
That's all I have to say to you two.
That's all I have to say to you two.
Relaxing:
01:16:08 (8) - New COmbo?
02:38:36 (2) - ^
02:53:15 (1) - Stretch that slider out, it looks really weird...
03:19:50 (2) - New Combo?
Also, I'm not a fan of the Kiai at the end of every chorus, I understand why you put it, but it looks stupid, Please remove it >:|
01:16:08 (8) - New COmbo?
02:38:36 (2) - ^
02:53:15 (1) - Stretch that slider out, it looks really weird...
03:19:50 (2) - New Combo?
Also, I'm not a fan of the Kiai at the end of every chorus, I understand why you put it, but it looks stupid, Please remove it >:|
Topic Starter
quintitem & leimi
thx Star : )
SFG & Mogs & Larto
thx advice
)
>SFG
[relaxing]
all fixed
[tobe]
01:09:86 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - cluttered
a bit fixed
also remove the excess kiai fountains plz
01:54:65 (2) - half hidden
01:56:36 (2) - ^
fixed
02:53:15 (1) - weird bpm change
fixed
01:03:43 (1) - note too soon after the spinner (imo)
02:25:72 (1) - too soon after spinner
03:34:18 (1) -
>Mog
relaxnig
-00:27:33 (3) - Replace the Finish with either a Clap or no hitsound. This is not the ending that calls for that sort of emphasis.
-00:41:04 (3) - ^
remove normal finish.
-01:30:86 - Random place for kiai IMO. Feels too distracting and clunky.
delete kiai fountai
n
-02:03:33 (3) - The Finish feels out of place when you have a part with 3 straight Finishes right afterwards. The terse end to the vocals feels like it calls for no hitsound or for a Clap.
remove finish
-02:53:580 - Kiai just for a fountain again. It honestly looks better if you just end the kiai time after that slider, not add its own fountain.
delete it
-03:16:93 (3) - Remove the Finish, that section doesn't need that sort of conclusion.
-03:23:79 (2) - Remove the Finish from the endpoint.
delete it
-03:25:83 (1) - Add a Finish, it gives that section a sense of conclusion.
add it
-03:34:080 - The ending isn't a good place to stick kiai, it feels just plain wrong. Please remove it.
delete kiai fountain
-03:34:29 (1) - This section doesn't feel like it has a strong enough conclusion for the end of the map. It needs to have that sort of "YAY I'M AT THE END~!" sort of feel, and it doesn't, hitsound-wise. The generic way to give this sort of feel would be to have a Finish on the last note.
not fixed.because I intend to have expressed the sound such as the last fish-shaped wooden drum of this music in itself
tobe
-00:27:33 (1) - Is it me or does this Finish sound like a normal beat? When I remove the Finish, I hear nothing, but when I put it back on, it sounds like a normal beat. Eww.
-00:27:65 (2) - This would be much better without the Finish unless you did something like the next point I'm going to mention.
-00:41:04 (1,2) - I'm actually going to say that this is how you should always pull off parts like this in this map. The Finishes aren't too loud, meaning they do not sound too conclusive. Make every part like this in the vein of this.
-01:49:61 (1,2) - Remember how I said to handle these sections earlier? Do that.
-02:03:33 (1,2) - ^
normal finish sound volume is fixed
-01:01:99 (1) - This should extend 1 beat, removing that 1. That note feels unnecessary when this spinner can fulfill that role just fine.
-02:24:27 (1) - Spinner could extend for another beat. That clicked beat after the spinner is unnecessary IMO.
fixed....probably
-01:15:65 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. It feels far too random to have a New Combo right at the end of the phrase at a place that truly doesn't make sense IMO.
-01:17:15 (1) - ^
-01:27:86 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. You just had a New Combo mark the beat before, when the phrase started. It's just random and makes no sense. .-.
-01:29:36 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. Random, random, random place for one.
-01:30:86 (1) - ^
-02:39:43 (1) - Random New Combo mark, remove it.
-03:12:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. It's random.
-02:53:15 (1) - ^
-03:18:22 (1) - Remove the random New Combo mark.
-03:20:57 (1) - ^
not fixed,i made i thought it is easy to judge add New combo mark than same colors.
If it becomes the gyve, I am sad
-01:30:812 - Random, clunky kiai, be gone
-02:53:15 (1) - Weird BPM change. I personally would've found it better to just use the same BPM, just doing a 1/8 slider.
-02:53:15 - Remove the kiai, it's random and bleh.
-03:07:93 (1) - Remove the Finish. First beat emphasis = ewww.
-03:10:50 (1) - ^
-03:13:93 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-03:14:79 (1) - ^
fixed
-03:33:116 - Random BPM change much?
yes
-03:34:134 - ^. Also remove the kiai here.
fixed
-The ending needs more of a conclusive sound to it. Seriously, the ending needs to sound more like an ending.
i wrote relaxing.
>Larto
all fixed
thx Star : )
SFG & Mogs & Larto
thx advice
)>SFG
[relaxing]
all fixed
[tobe]
01:09:86 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - cluttered
a bit fixed
also remove the excess kiai fountains plz
01:54:65 (2) - half hidden
01:56:36 (2) - ^
fixed
02:53:15 (1) - weird bpm change
fixed
01:03:43 (1) - note too soon after the spinner (imo)
02:25:72 (1) - too soon after spinner
03:34:18 (1) -
>Mog
relaxnig
-00:27:33 (3) - Replace the Finish with either a Clap or no hitsound. This is not the ending that calls for that sort of emphasis.
-00:41:04 (3) - ^
remove normal finish.
-01:30:86 - Random place for kiai IMO. Feels too distracting and clunky.
delete kiai fountai
n
-02:03:33 (3) - The Finish feels out of place when you have a part with 3 straight Finishes right afterwards. The terse end to the vocals feels like it calls for no hitsound or for a Clap.
remove finish
-02:53:580 - Kiai just for a fountain again. It honestly looks better if you just end the kiai time after that slider, not add its own fountain.
delete it
-03:16:93 (3) - Remove the Finish, that section doesn't need that sort of conclusion.
-03:23:79 (2) - Remove the Finish from the endpoint.
delete it
-03:25:83 (1) - Add a Finish, it gives that section a sense of conclusion.
add it
-03:34:080 - The ending isn't a good place to stick kiai, it feels just plain wrong. Please remove it.
delete kiai fountain
-03:34:29 (1) - This section doesn't feel like it has a strong enough conclusion for the end of the map. It needs to have that sort of "YAY I'M AT THE END~!" sort of feel, and it doesn't, hitsound-wise. The generic way to give this sort of feel would be to have a Finish on the last note.
not fixed.because I intend to have expressed the sound such as the last fish-shaped wooden drum of this music in itself
tobe
-00:27:33 (1) - Is it me or does this Finish sound like a normal beat? When I remove the Finish, I hear nothing, but when I put it back on, it sounds like a normal beat. Eww.
-00:27:65 (2) - This would be much better without the Finish unless you did something like the next point I'm going to mention.
-00:41:04 (1,2) - I'm actually going to say that this is how you should always pull off parts like this in this map. The Finishes aren't too loud, meaning they do not sound too conclusive. Make every part like this in the vein of this.
-01:49:61 (1,2) - Remember how I said to handle these sections earlier? Do that.
-02:03:33 (1,2) - ^
normal finish sound volume is fixed
-01:01:99 (1) - This should extend 1 beat, removing that 1. That note feels unnecessary when this spinner can fulfill that role just fine.
-02:24:27 (1) - Spinner could extend for another beat. That clicked beat after the spinner is unnecessary IMO.
fixed....probably
-01:15:65 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. It feels far too random to have a New Combo right at the end of the phrase at a place that truly doesn't make sense IMO.
-01:17:15 (1) - ^
-01:27:86 (1) - Remove this New Combo mark. You just had a New Combo mark the beat before, when the phrase started. It's just random and makes no sense. .-.
-01:29:36 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. Random, random, random place for one.
-01:30:86 (1) - ^
-02:39:43 (1) - Random New Combo mark, remove it.
-03:12:22 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. It's random.
-02:53:15 (1) - ^
-03:18:22 (1) - Remove the random New Combo mark.
-03:20:57 (1) - ^
not fixed,i made i thought it is easy to judge add New combo mark than same colors.
If it becomes the gyve, I am sad
-01:30:812 - Random, clunky kiai, be gone
-02:53:15 (1) - Weird BPM change. I personally would've found it better to just use the same BPM, just doing a 1/8 slider.
-02:53:15 - Remove the kiai, it's random and bleh.
-03:07:93 (1) - Remove the Finish. First beat emphasis = ewww.
-03:10:50 (1) - ^
-03:13:93 (1) - Remove the Finish.
-03:14:79 (1) - ^
fixed
-03:33:116 - Random BPM change much?
yes
-03:34:134 - ^. Also remove the kiai here.
fixed
-The ending needs more of a conclusive sound to it. Seriously, the ending needs to sound more like an ending.
i wrote relaxing.
>Larto
all fixed
Bubbled!
Gogogo
life is game
life is game
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yay
Topic Starter
>DxS & supergarlic.
thx~!!
>Takuma & Alace & other BAT & other modder.
thx your help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thx~!!
>Takuma & Alace & other BAT & other modder.
thx your help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Congrats tobe, this map is really fun and colorful :D
I love your slider art, teach me please >A<
Looking forward to your next map~
I love your slider art, teach me please >A<
Looking forward to your next map~
Teach me how to do slider art tobe sensei ~ >A< kiou
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lol
i like those sliders <3
i like those sliders <3
Topic Starter
>MegaManEXE
thx~,im happy !!
>S & A & T
teach me a making beatmap ;_;
thx~,im happy
!!>S & A & T
teach me a making beatmap ;_;
noooo SAT
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Topic Starter
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