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What a cute little song.

Easy:
1:13:182 - You may want to avoid putting a note on the end of a slider in an easy difficulty. It can be very disorienting for people who aren't used to it.

Normal:
0:54:263 - I find myself really wanting to hit this note a half beat after the slider rather than a whole beat. Same with the one at 0:57:065. I don't know if that's a legitimate rhythm issue or just me being a spazz, but I think it's because the music is stronger on its 2's and 4's than its 1's and 3's, during that part. Probably also because that's how the slider at 0:33:066 was timed.
1:11:080 - This part of the combo feels a bit awkward because slider three bounces you away from the next one, where all the previous combos have flowed smoothly.
1:21:766 - Likewise, the order and position of this combo feels awfully counterintuitive for a normal difficulty.

Hard:
1:13:708 - The triples here and at 1:15:810 feel artificial to me; like they don't really evolve naturally from the music.

I think that's all I can crticize.

RINRINRIN

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Thanks! I changed some Stuff again. But i dont know about the spacing you said in the beginning. I left it as it is but if it is really such a problem ill change it later

I almost remade hard difficulty. Everything should be better now

Hey Hanyuu, wanna hold me like a princess?

O_o

[Easy]:
00:30:08 (4) - Have you tried putting a Finish here instead?

[Normal]:
Cool~

[Hard]:
00:38:15 (4,5,1,2) - Just look at that trap~ :O
00:47:26 (6) - Add whistle?
00:53:21 (8) - New combo~
00:54:27 (11) - Why not put this guy somewhere like the center of the triangle?
00:56:71 (6) - Move this so it's a horizontal flip of (1).
00:58:81 (6) - Intentional? Perhaps consider a new combo?
01:05:48 (1,2) - Move one of these to make a horizontal flip of the other.
01:15:81 (6,7) - Optional, but perhaps stack this to where (3) was?

Nothing much I can see that is wrong though. :3

Star~

All done except the optional.. i think its OK

Thank you very much. helped

starred

Easy:

-00:37:621 (4) Suggestion: Shorten this slider by 2 ticks and add one more reverse arrow and add circle to 00:39:197

Normal:

About spacing, maybe you could shorten the biggest jumps a little 'cause I got a bit confused after some jumps and then pressed too early the next circles :S

Hard:

-01:22:467 (2.3) Suggestion: Shorten these sliders by 2 ticks and put circles to the ends of the sliders. Your sliders here sounds okay and I'm not sure if mine sounds better or not, but try it out

Good map, good song
Starred~

Hard:
00:26:76 (6) - No whistles in this slider
00:30:43 (7) - Un-combo
00:30:78 (8) - New combo
00:33:59 (11) - New combo
00:33:94 (1) - Un-combo this one
00:39:19 (4) - New combo
00:39:54 (1) - Un-combo
00:48:83 (4) - Un-combo
00:50:409 - Inherit all these timing sections
00:58:81 (6) - This slider should have nomal hitsounds looking at the part before it.
01:04:423 - Place a beat here, move the spinner one tick forward on the timeline and be sure it ends @ 01:05:124
01:07:399 ~ 01:09:851 - The whistles here are really hurting my ears, remove the whistles or turn down the volume at this part.
01:20:37 (1) - Un-combo
01:25:44 (4) - add whistle in the slider path
01:26:14 (5) - Whistle?
01:26:84 (7) - New combo

Normal:
00:25:18 (1~7) - whistles?
00:33:59 (4) - New combo
00:33:59 ~ 00:36:044 - this would sound better with soft hitsounds
[NOTE] You can also try this on hard, but on hard you placed it in a different way wich also sounds ok to me.
00:36:04 (1) - Un-combo
00:36:39 (11) - new combo
00:39:548 ~ 00:41:650 - ^^^
00:36:39 ~ 00:36:39 - ^
00:36:39 ~ 00:59:518 - whistles?
01:00:39 (4) - New combo
01:01:62 (5) - New combo
01:07:40 (1) - New combo
01:20:014 ~ 01:23:868 - No claps anymore?
01:20:36 (2) - New combo
01:24:92 (4) - New combo
01:25:79 (4) - Un-combo
01:27:54 (7) - New combo

Easy:
I think this difficulty is a bit hard because the slider velocity is just as fast as in hard and many patterns overlap wich could be hard for nubs. Think about it.
[NOTE] If you lower the slider velocity you may have to remap easy because everything is messed up right right after you've lowered it. Save before you tweak on it. You can change it @ the timing tab
00:33:59 ~ 00:36:044 - this would sound better with soft hitsounds
00:39:548 ~ 00:41:650 - ^
00:36:39 ~ 00:36:39 - ^
00:54:78 (2) - this slider point is off, try something else here.
00:57:59 (4) - New combo
01:00:39 (4) - New combo
01:18:61 (1) - New combo

:3

Mianki wrote:

Easy:

-00:37:621 (4) Suggestion: Shorten this slider by 2 ticks and add one more reverse arrow and add circle to 00:39:197
Think its cool as it is

Normal:

About spacing, maybe you could shorten the biggest jumps a little 'cause I got a bit confused after some jumps and then pressed too early the next circles :S
Yes the spacing gets out of control at the end . I made it a bit easier

Hard:

-01:22:467 (2.3) Suggestion: Shorten these sliders by 2 ticks and put circles to the ends of the sliders. Your sliders here sounds okay and I'm not sure if mine sounds better or not, but try it out
Hm i could do that but i like the long curved ones more. They look more beautiful

Good map, good song
Starred~

Thank you very much

The whistles here are really hurting my ears

I love whistles

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Hello again~
Small fixes.

- Easy:
00:51:10 (6) - New combo.

- Normal:
00:22:38 (3) - New combo.
00:57:59 (3) - New combo.

Dokidokidoki

Cute new background

Normal was a bit hard to read, well some parts anyway.
Hard was fun~

Starred` for you~

Cheery wrote:

Dokidokidoki

Cute new background

Normal was a bit hard to read, well some parts anyway.
Hard was fun~

Starred` for you~

dokidokidoki

good map and song
i make a soundlab for you
most of your hitsound pattens are good
so i just follow them
if you accept those change
rename this sounlab to Normal
and use those pattens in your hard

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Soundlab].osu

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Soundlab Hard].osu

~Easy~

Fine.

~Normal~

Fine imo.

~Hard~

00:22:380 - (1)~(2)
00:23:606 - (5)~(6)
00:24:832 - (7)~(1)
00:34:468 - (4)~(5)
00:35:168 - (6)~(7)
00:38:322 - (5)~(1)
00:39:197 - (1)~(2)
00:49:708 - (6)~(7)~(1)
00:57:942 - (2)~(6)
01:11:781 - (6)~(8)
01:22:993 - (2)~(4)
Spacings are different from others.

00:57:066 - (1)
01:13:008 - (9)
Remove new combo and add new combo on next circle.

01:06:526 - (3)
01:18:614 - (3)
Add new combo.


+Star

DJPop`s points are like the picture
some spacings are different
pn fact
i can beat all of them
you can set some new combos or fix the spacing

Thank you

AAaaaag~ hate spacing. Did spacing on hard again

ah great. i'm bored with miku after all xD

shooot~

Aha

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Very nice map and song. ^^
Maybe try Slider Tick Rate - 2? Becouse of lyrics.

[Easy]
00:29:38 (3) - Don't look nice with that 00:30:78 (1) slider.
00:33:592 (Break) - You realy need this break?
00:42:00 (1) - If I click on this note earlier time, I get soft hitsound instead normal hitsounds.
00:44:803 (Break) - You realy need this break?
01:13:88 (1) ~ 01:15:28 (4) - Too many claps.
01:25:09 (1) - Maybe... Place there note here 01:25:27 and add note here 01:24:920

[Normal]
There's some nazi "mistakes", but I don't want nazi you and your map.

St~a~a~rred. ^^

Thanks everyone

I applied most of! Good advice! ... But some stuff im not sure about

The ending part at easy. I think i put one more clap there instead of a lot of finish and whistles.
And the 2 long sliders at easy sound not so well to me with the hitsounds suggested. I changed the second slider there and added a circle, maybe its better now.
The beginning part of easy is very silent but i still could hear the sound. I still changed it as wanted

v2b wrote:

Aha

tieff wrote:

Very nice map and song. ^^
Maybe try Slider Tick Rate - 2? Becouse of lyrics.
Thanks!
[Easy]
00:29:38 (3) - Don't look nice with that 00:30:78 (1) slider.
Thank you i made it more beautiful
00:33:592 (Break) - You realy need this break?
I dont know! Not sure but it looks stupid to see the health bar drop when there is nothing
00:42:00 (1) - If I click on this note earlier time, I get soft hitsound instead normal hitsounds.
Thanks i did not know i have to make the timing section earlier! I will have to do this for all my difficulties now. Will do it later for the rest
00:44:803 (Break) - You realy need this break?
I dont know! Not sure but it looks stupid to see the health bar drop when there is nothing
01:13:88 (1) ~ 01:15:28 (4) - Too many claps.
Done
01:25:09 (1) - Maybe... Place there note here 01:25:27 and add note here 01:24:920
Thanks but if i do that the spacing will be very bad and this beautiful slider would be impossible. I keep it simple

[Normal]
There's some nazi "mistakes", but I don't want nazi you and your map.
Ok!
St~a~a~rred. ^^

Thank you !

I don't have problems with this.
fumoffu star :3

Also, kudosu star.

great map


stärr

tieff wrote:

Also, kudosu star.

Wow! Thank you

Gabi wrote:

great map


stärr

Thank you !

done XD

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Hard].osu

nice map you got there,

Princesses in boxes are worth a star

Thank you very much !!

Alace wrote:

done XD

This is yummy

[Easy]
immediate impression: why is there a whistle on every note, and the rhythm is so...constant. oh well
00:31:48 (2) - use a different hitsound?
00:32:01 (3) - finish the end
00:37:62 (4) - ^
00:44:10 (6) - ^ and isnt this combo a little fast for an Easy?
00:56:71 (3) - try a different hitsound
01:17:03 (5) - finish?
01:25:09 (1) - feels awkward
01:29:29 (5,6) - do something to make 6 more distinctly the end
this still seems a little hard/fast for an Easy imo but w/e


[Normal]
00:19:92 (2) - repeating a few too many times; kinda boring
also whistles again, dont use them on every note
00:48:83 (4) - is this intended to be symmetrical?
00:58:81 (1,2,3) - the clap pattern sounds strange here
01:03:19 (3) - remove whistle
01:05:82 (6) - ^
01:12:65 (3,4,5) - remove whistles (or use a different hitsound...thats always an option)
01:15:81 (1) - finish
01:20:01 (6) - remove whistle
youre overusing whistle a bit in here, otherwise this is a very nice map


[Hard]
whistles in soft sections are out of control
01:03:55 (10) - try a different hitsound
01:11:25 (6,7) - sounds awkward
01:29:29 (7) - finish end
youre overusing normal AND soft whistles
01:37:35 (8) - try a different hitsound
01:40:16 (8) - ^
01:57:32 (2) - make this parallel to 1 maybe?
02:00:48 (1) - finish
02:29:91 (1) - hitsound maybe
02:33:94 (1) - kinda an evil jump imo
02:45:15 (1) - maybe make this more distinctly the end?

good job its a pretty map :3

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
immediate impression: why is there a whistle on every note, and the rhythm is so...constant. oh well
00:31:48 (2) - use a different hitsound?
00:32:01 (3) - finish the end
00:37:62 (4) - ^
00:44:10 (6) - ^ and isnt this combo a little fast for an Easy?
00:56:71 (3) - try a different hitsound
01:17:03 (5) - finish?
01:25:09 (1) - feels awkward
01:29:29 (5,6) - do something to make 6 more distinctly the end
this still seems a little hard/fast for an Easy imo but w/e


[Normal]
00:19:92 (2) - repeating a few too many times; kinda boring
also whistles again, dont use them on every note
00:48:83 (4) - is this intended to be symmetrical?
00:58:81 (1,2,3) - the clap pattern sounds strange here
01:03:19 (3) - remove whistle
01:05:82 (6) - ^
01:12:65 (3,4,5) - remove whistles (or use a different hitsound...thats always an option)
01:15:81 (1) - finish
01:20:01 (6) - remove whistle
youre overusing whistle a bit in here, otherwise this is a very nice map


[Hard]
whistles in soft sections are out of control
01:03:55 (10) - try a different hitsound
01:11:25 (6,7) - sounds awkward
01:29:29 (7) - finish end
youre overusing normal AND soft whistles
01:37:35 (8) - try a different hitsound
01:40:16 (8) - ^
01:57:32 (2) - make this parallel to 1 maybe?
02:00:48 (1) - finish
02:29:91 (1) - hitsound maybe
02:33:94 (1) - kinda an evil jump imo
02:45:15 (1) - maybe make this more distinctly the end?

good job its a pretty map :3

Thank! But i just like whistle sounds and its fitting the song
I changed mostly suggest. I forgot to take notes lol. The jump is only hard first play
Thank you for your star

change something in hard (my part)

IMO
normal finish doesn`t fit the music
i tried to use it
Anyway
It`s Hanyuu`s beatmap
Hanyuu has to make the final decision by him(herself)
Here
my extra star for you

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [Hard].osu

Alace wrote:

change something in hard (my part)

IMO
normal finish doesn`t fit the music
i tried to use it
Anyway
It`s Hanyuu`s beatmap
Hanyuu has to make the final decision by him(herself)
Here
my extra star for you

Thank you Alace i will do it later in the evening now. Have to go for birthday party now

nice song and nice map@ @. a few spacing may seem not good, but they are perfect for me. besides this, no other problems.

star'd.

Download: Kagamine Rin - Hold Me Like A Princess (Hanyuu) [ignore's Relaxing].osu

ignorethis wrote:

nice song and nice map@ @. a few spacing may seem not good, but they are perfect for me. besides this, no other problems.

star'd.

Thank you !!

Hard:
00:22:73 (2) - New Combo
00:56:36 (5) - ^
01:08:80 (4) - ^
01:13:00 (9,1) - Those are some weird placed combos. I'd make 9 a new combo and remove the new combo from the note after 9.
01:13:70 (3) - And I'd add a new combo here.
01:17:73 (2,3) - 1 Level 3 grid to the right for the sake of symmetry
01:28:07 (5) - New Combo
02:18:70 (6) - New Combo MAYBE

ignore:
01:22:46 (10) - New Combo
02:21:67 (1) - Spinner too short o.o
02:26:93 (5) - New Combo
02:38:14 (5) - ^

Normal:
00:51:11 (5) - New Combo

Easy:
okay

[Timing]

BPM and offset fine.

[Easy]

00:33:929 - Maybe you can remove this break.
00:48:82 (4,5) - Double speed notes on easy are not good imo.
01:08:26 (2,3) - ^
01:09:66 (2,3) - ^
01:20:35 (1) - Remove new combo.

[Normal]

Fine.

[ignore's Insane]

00:51:97 (11) - New combo.
01:57:58 (16) - Remove the finish here because on next note the sound change. Or maybe add finish on (15).
02:29:37 (1) - Too close from 02:28:85 (5)

[Hard]

01:22:45 (2) - New combo due to space change.
02:45:14 (1) - Finish here.

Ignorethis`s insane
HP drain 5 plz
Max scores will be 9.9M (cool)

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Hard
Hit sounds are fine but could be better. Look at ignore's Insane: many hit sounds are used to accent parts of the song.
Soft whistle gets old after a while. For example, 00:53:20 (1,2,3) (and the patterns like this) works well with Finish instead. 01:46:10 (2,3,4,5,1) could all have Finishes (or maybe not (1)), and parts like it like 02:22:54 (1,2,3,4,5). 01:49:26 (1) - This combo could have a different hit sound style than the part before and after. 01:54:86 (1) too, etc.
Disclaimer: My skin has sucky clap sounds so I may be missing those. =X

I'm not a fan of those spinners. They are short and interrupt the gameplay. They're pretty much "passable" (Auto 2000) ninja spinners. Most can be replaced by a slider or a short break.

01:24:20 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
01:56:96 (1,2) - Would look better perpendicular to 01:56:09 (4).
02:28:15 (4,1) - Stack.

ignore's Insane
Hit sounds are a bit quiet IMO.

00:46:02 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'm not a big fan of etna used like this.
00:51:97 (1,3,4,6) - Some hit sound for these to match lyrics?
00:56:00 (1,2) - Finishes.
01:03:53 (9,10,11,12,13) - Hard to read.
01:05:99 (6) - New combo?
02:06:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Hit sounds somewhere?
02:32:53 (11) - New combo?
02:43:91 (5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe replace with a spinner? Would be a better finish IMO compared to the end of the first part.

strager wrote:

Hard
Hit sounds are fine but could be better. Look at ignore's Insane: many hit sounds are used to accent parts of the song.
Soft whistle gets old after a while. For example, 00:53:20 (1,2,3) (and the patterns like this) works well with Finish instead. 01:46:10 (2,3,4,5,1) could all have Finishes (or maybe not (1)), and parts like it like 02:22:54 (1,2,3,4,5). 01:49:26 (1) - This combo could have a different hit sound style than the part before and after. 01:54:86 (1) too, etc.
Disclaimer: My skin has sucky clap sounds so I may be missing those. =X

the hitsound are ok i think. i add alot of extra hitsound to ignore's difficulty because it had almost none. its hard to add sounds to it because the difficulty is alot different mapped than my style of mapping. im not going to add finish sounds on my hard it does not fit the music

I'm not a fan of those spinners. They are short and interrupt the gameplay. They're pretty much "passable" (Auto 2000) ninja spinners. Most can be replaced by a slider or a short break.

the spinners are ok. its not a big difficulty! im not doing a break or a slider instead lol

01:24:20 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing. the spacing is ok. double check the combo spacing if you think its not correct
01:56:96 (1,2) - Would look better perpendicular to 01:56:09 (4). this is ok too
02:28:15 (4,1) - Stack. i dont see what is wrong sorry

ignore's Insane
Hit sounds are a bit quiet IMO.i can hear the hitsound without a problem. the first soft section is a bit lower volume. the other section are maximum volume level

00:46:02 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'm not a big fan of etna used like this. i dont know it looks OK. i will talk with ignore about this
00:51:97 (1,3,4,6) - Some hit sound for these to match lyrics? i dont know - the hitsound to underline the lycric start next combo
00:56:00 (1,2) - Finishes. this is not part of the hitsound pattern. 00:53:20 (1) - only has a finish for a lead in into this section. 00:56:00 (1) - does not need a finish - check the other finish sounds i placed to understand this pattern section
01:03:53 (9,10,11,12,13) - Hard to read. is ok
01:05:99 (6) - New combo? this is ok too
02:06:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Hit sounds somewhere? added hitsounds(clap intro for next section)
02:32:53 (11) - New combo? added combo at 8
02:43:91 (5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe replace with a spinner? Would be a better finish IMO compared to the end of the first part. Sorry i disagree - it is not fitting for me

thanks for looking i only changed a few things ! i will ask ignorethis for the slider section you dont like - i can play it without problems but i think circle pattern will fit better here, but if he doesnt want to change i will not change aswell

This is a beautiful map! I like it!

You get a star for the over-kawaiiness!

+Star~

Paulo8624 wrote:

This is a beautiful map! I like it!

You get a star for the over-kawaiiness!

+Star~

Thank you very much that is a nice comment