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Mianki wrote:
Easy:
-00:37:621 (4) Suggestion: Shorten this slider by 2 ticks and add one more reverse arrow and add circle to 00:39:197
Think its cool as it is
Normal:
About spacing, maybe you could shorten the biggest jumps a little 'cause I got a bit confused after some jumps and then pressed too early the next circles :S
Yes the spacing gets out of control at the end . I made it a bit easier
Hard:
-01:22:467 (2.3) Suggestion: Shorten these sliders by 2 ticks and put circles to the ends of the sliders. Your sliders here sounds okay and I'm not sure if mine sounds better or not, but try it out
Hm i could do that but i like the long curved ones more. They look more beautiful
Good map, good song
Starred~
The whistles here are really hurting my earsI love whistles
dokidokidokiCheery wrote:
Dokidokidoki
Cute new background
Normal was a bit hard to read, well some parts anyway.
Hard was fun~
Starred` for you~
v2b wrote:
Aha
Thank you !tieff wrote:
Very nice map and song. ^^
Maybe try Slider Tick Rate - 2? Becouse of lyrics.
Thanks!
[Easy]
00:29:38 (3) - Don't look nice with that 00:30:78 (1) slider.
Thank you i made it more beautiful
00:33:592 (Break) - You realy need this break?
I dont know! Not sure but it looks stupid to see the health bar drop when there is nothing
00:42:00 (1) - If I click on this note earlier time, I get soft hitsound instead normal hitsounds.
Thanks i did not know i have to make the timing section earlier! I will have to do this for all my difficulties now. Will do it later for the rest
00:44:803 (Break) - You realy need this break?
I dont know! Not sure but it looks stupid to see the health bar drop when there is nothing
01:13:88 (1) ~ 01:15:28 (4) - Too many claps.
Done
01:25:09 (1) - Maybe... Place there note here 01:25:27 and add note here 01:24:920
Thanks but if i do that the spacing will be very bad and this beautiful slider would be impossible. I keep it simple
[Normal]
There's some nazi "mistakes", but I don't want nazi you and your map.
Ok!
St~a~a~rred. ^^
Wow! Thank youtieff wrote:
Also, kudosu star.
Thank you !Gabi wrote:
great map
stärr
This is yummyAlace wrote:
done XD
Thank! But i just like whistle sounds and its fitting the songSaturos-fangirl wrote:
[Easy]
immediate impression: why is there a whistle on every note, and the rhythm is so...constant. oh well
00:31:48 (2) - use a different hitsound?
00:32:01 (3) - finish the end
00:37:62 (4) - ^
00:44:10 (6) - ^ and isnt this combo a little fast for an Easy?
00:56:71 (3) - try a different hitsound
01:17:03 (5) - finish?
01:25:09 (1) - feels awkward
01:29:29 (5,6) - do something to make 6 more distinctly the end
this still seems a little hard/fast for an Easy imo but w/e
[Normal]
00:19:92 (2) - repeating a few too many times; kinda boring
also whistles again, dont use them on every note
00:48:83 (4) - is this intended to be symmetrical?
00:58:81 (1,2,3) - the clap pattern sounds strange here
01:03:19 (3) - remove whistle
01:05:82 (6) - ^
01:12:65 (3,4,5) - remove whistles (or use a different hitsound...thats always an option)
01:15:81 (1) - finish
01:20:01 (6) - remove whistle
youre overusing whistle a bit in here, otherwise this is a very nice map
[Hard]
whistles in soft sections are out of control
01:03:55 (10) - try a different hitsound
01:11:25 (6,7) - sounds awkward
01:29:29 (7) - finish end
youre overusing normal AND soft whistles
01:37:35 (8) - try a different hitsound
01:40:16 (8) - ^
01:57:32 (2) - make this parallel to 1 maybe?
02:00:48 (1) - finish
02:29:91 (1) - hitsound maybe
02:33:94 (1) - kinda an evil jump imo
02:45:15 (1) - maybe make this more distinctly the end?
good job its a pretty map :3
Thank you Alace i will do it later in the evening now. Have to go for birthday party nowAlace wrote:
change something in hard (my part)
IMO
normal finish doesn`t fit the music
i tried to use it
Anyway
It`s Hanyuu`s beatmap
Hanyuu has to make the final decision by him(herself)
Here
my extra star for you
Thank you !!ignorethis wrote:
nice song and nice map@ @. a few spacing may seem not good, but they are perfect for me. besides this, no other problems.
star'd.
thanks for looking i only changed a few things ! i will ask ignorethis for the slider section you dont like - i can play it without problems but i think circle pattern will fit better here, but if he doesnt want to change i will not change aswellstrager wrote:
Hard
Hit sounds are fine but could be better. Look at ignore's Insane: many hit sounds are used to accent parts of the song.
Soft whistle gets old after a while. For example, 00:53:20 (1,2,3) (and the patterns like this) works well with Finish instead. 01:46:10 (2,3,4,5,1) could all have Finishes (or maybe not (1)), and parts like it like 02:22:54 (1,2,3,4,5). 01:49:26 (1) - This combo could have a different hit sound style than the part before and after. 01:54:86 (1) too, etc.
Disclaimer: My skin has sucky clap sounds so I may be missing those. =X
the hitsound are ok i think. i add alot of extra hitsound to ignore's difficulty because it had almost none. its hard to add sounds to it because the difficulty is alot different mapped than my style of mapping. im not going to add finish sounds on my hard it does not fit the music
I'm not a fan of those spinners. They are short and interrupt the gameplay. They're pretty much "passable" (Auto 2000) ninja spinners. Most can be replaced by a slider or a short break.
the spinners are ok. its not a big difficulty! im not doing a break or a slider instead lol
01:24:20 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing. the spacing is ok. double check the combo spacing if you think its not correct
01:56:96 (1,2) - Would look better perpendicular to 01:56:09 (4). this is ok too
02:28:15 (4,1) - Stack. i dont see what is wrong sorry
ignore's Insane
Hit sounds are a bit quiet IMO.i can hear the hitsound without a problem. the first soft section is a bit lower volume. the other section are maximum volume level
00:46:02 (8,9,10,11,12,13) - I'm not a big fan of etna used like this. i dont know it looks OK. i will talk with ignore about this
00:51:97 (1,3,4,6) - Some hit sound for these to match lyrics? i dont know - the hitsound to underline the lycric start next combo
00:56:00 (1,2) - Finishes. this is not part of the hitsound pattern. 00:53:20 (1) - only has a finish for a lead in into this section. 00:56:00 (1) - does not need a finish - check the other finish sounds i placed to understand this pattern section
01:03:53 (9,10,11,12,13) - Hard to read. is ok
01:05:99 (6) - New combo? this is ok too
02:06:07 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Hit sounds somewhere? added hitsounds(clap intro for next section)
02:32:53 (11) - New combo? added combo at 8
02:43:91 (5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe replace with a spinner? Would be a better finish IMO compared to the end of the first part. Sorry i disagree - it is not fitting for me
Thank you very much that is a nice commentPaulo8624 wrote:
This is a beautiful map! I like it!
You get a star for the over-kawaiiness!
+Star~