This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 24. oktober 2009 at 14:46:35

Artist: Baracuda
Title: I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit)
BPM: 142
Filesize: 8182kb
Play Time: 03:09
Difficulties Available:

1. Dead (5 stars, 474 notes)
2. Leaving The World (5 stars, 450 notes)
3. Normal (4,48 stars, 320 notes)
4. SFG Easy (1,14 stars, 112 notes)

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit)
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Go.

here it is like promised

>Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [x3ns0r difficulty].osu

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Don't do pink mod posts ^ ewww

[Normal]
00:26:44 (4) - Please move this down like... the width of a slider under 3. This overlapping slider thing is just mean for a normal difficulty. See Screenshot (I don't know what distance snap you are using so move it appropriate to your spacing, screenshot is just an example)
00:34:89 (6,7) - has anyone mentioned this? stack 6 and 7 and move the bottom anchor point accordingly
00:39:12 (2) - new combo
00:57:50 (1,1,1) - ... ninja spinners. kill these and just add one spinner
01:48:83 - Either add some breaks between these spinners, or add one long break and kill the spinners, or add something between the spinners.
01:59:08 (10) - wtf. make this a spin or something. There is nothing in the music to support this
02:11:44 (1) - you can't tell what direction this slider is going. Spread out the beginning and end more (separate them)

Honestly, normal is more like hard and it's very sloppy. I suggest going through and checking your stacks and arranging everything a little more cleanly. Also, 1 less overall difficulty.

[Rena] This difficulty seems a lot like a copy paste with added junk. I suggest changing the whole spacing format. If you make this cleaner, it's going to be that much more enjoyable.
01:38:69 (8) - noooooo. unstack
Bring slider tick down on this difficulty. It's just needlessly increasing score. Take down to 2 or 1

I highly recommend re spacing both of this difficulties. Don't concentrate on making things confusing with overlapping sliders and stuff like that. Maps can be hard without being confusing! Space these so I can see what's coming!

Someone decide if the background on this is appropriate!

Updated version of my difficulty

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [x3ns0r's Normal].osu

Put the hitsounds in your song folder along with the osu file.
My difficulty.
Its fun
http://www.mediafire.com/?3xziikmtvlj

animask wrote:

Put the hitsounds in your song folder along with the osu file.
My difficulty.
Its fun
http://www.mediafire.com/?3xziikmtvlj

Ooooooh, nice. :3

wow intresting map cant wait when its ranked

Rena-Chan, i'm only suggesting these modifications. If you do not wish to use them, then dont.

Modding Normal:

00:19:68 (1) - Align with end of 6 from prev. combo
00:21:37 (5) - Horizontal align with 3
00:22:22 (1) - Put on 3 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
00:26:87 (1) - Align with 2 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
00:57:29 (1) - Align with 6 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
01:14:82 (9) - Finish sound (add)
01:15:24 (11) - Finish sound (add)
01:45:92 (4) - Align with 3 from same combo
01:49:68 (1) - Align with 2 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
01:50:31 (2) - Align with end of 1
02:05:74 (1) - Align horizontal with 7 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
02:09:96 (1) - Align with 5 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
02:11:23 (1) - Align with 5 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
02:22:64 (1) - Align with 3 from previous combo
02:26:86 - Put break here (it is too far away)
02:52:64 (1) - Put on end of 1 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)
02:53:69 (1) - Align horizontal with 3 from previous combo (align the rest of the combo if you change this)

I dont think i got all the errors, but i might make the map look better.

I really had fun playing the normal mode ^^ Starrystarrrr

Rena diff:

00:20:52 (1) - align vertically to 00:20:10 (1) -
00:20:95 (1) - align vertically to 00:19:68 (1) -
00:39:96 (4) - up1 - horizontal to 00:39:54 (3) -
00:54:12 (3) - down1
00:58:13 (3) - the stack here seems a bit odd. if you were trying to go by the lyrics here
01:01:09 (1) - align vertically with 01:00:24 (2) -
01:09:96 (1) - i personally would move this a bit to the left
01:56:02 (1) - spacing to 6-7-8-9
02:12:07 (1) - align horizontally to 02:11:65 (10) -
02:14:82 (7) - horizontal to 5
02:15:88 (1) - to 7
02:16:72 (1) - the symetry is a bit of for a couple circles after this. look into it
02:24:33 (1) - i would move this one a bit to the right
02:25:17 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - align

OLLLLLLD version with hitsounds.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [Rena difficulty !].osu

Even moar fun~!
I got all 300's on the big stack...so its good lol cuz I suck at getting 300's all the way in big stacks

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [tieff's difficulty].osu

Nice BG, that's gonna be a hell of a distraction. >_>

Normal
Try to keep combos at 4 to around 14 total.
1st offset - lower down the volume to make it sound better.
00:15:03 (1) - Make it so only 2nd white ticks have claps to fit the music.
00:19:68(1) - out of spacing from the 6 slider.
00:24:33 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Not much of good combing here.
01:10:38 (1,2) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
01:15:66 (13) - i think this should end 01:17:461 and then the spinner starts on the next tick to fit the 1/4 then 1/8 drum roll.
01:31:09 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1) - Bad comboing.
01:39:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - Same as^.
01:45:45 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this 1 whole combo.
01:52:21 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this into 2 separate combos.
02:17:99 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this 1 whole combo.
02:43:34 (1,2,1,2,3) - Same as ^.
02:53:69 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - Make this 1 whole combo.
02:58:13 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1) - I don't have to spell this out about it's combo.

tieff's Difficulty
01:46:30 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.

animask Difficuly (rename to animask's Difficulty)
01:00:66 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
01:03:62 (1) - Same as ^.
01:08:27 (1) - Same as ^.
01:12:07 (1,2,3) - Same as ^.
01:39:54 (1) - Same as^.
02:17:14 (1,2) - Same as^.
02:21:79 (1,1,1,1,2,3) - Make this a combo in itself.
02:49:26 (1) - 1 - Please make this part of the combo beforehand, and 2 - it's a erid place to stop for a break.
03:02:444 -Weird place to stop the whole map.

RokoDON's Taiko
Fine to me. DA-DON!

Rena! Difficulty.
00:19:68 (1,1,1,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
00:26:86 (1,1,1,1) - Same as ^.
00:32:14 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand.
00:37:43 (1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
01:01:09 (1,1,1) - Same as ^.
01:06:16 (1,1,1,1,1) - Same as^.
01:12:92 (1,1,1,1) - Same as ^.
01:31:51 (1,1) - Please make this part of the combo beforehand.
01:34:47 (1,1,1,1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
01:39:12 (1,2) - Please make this part of the combo beforehand.
02:07:85 (1,1) - Make this 1 whole combo please.
02:16:51 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - I'm not a big fan on how it's combos.
1 combo then a combo of only 3 1/4 beats? - it doesn't feel right.
Note weird combing through out the map.
03:08:346 - Weird place to end the song.

starred for it's music.

[Normal]
00:42:92 (1) - delete and replace break
why are 1/2 of the notes claps? thats overdoing it a bit
02:15:03 (1) - finish


[tieff]
00:26:44 (1) - finish the last hit
01:11:97 (10,11,12) - confusing
01:22:64 (1,2,etd) - stack the endpoints
02:27:71() - delete break


[animask]
01:05:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - stack endpoints
01:09:96 (2,3,4) - ^
02:21:79 (1) - increase hitvolume a tick i feel like i just went deaf


[Rokodo (taiko)]
sounds fine, i lol at how you made it entirely impossible to play standard


[Rena]
00:33:83 (3) - hidden
00:43:76 (5) - delete and replace break
01:34:47 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - clapspam
02:02:35 (1,2,3) - i would not rank this. too hard to read
02:54:33 (2) - hidden


except for [Rena] this is a very good map. [Rena] doesnt flow very well, overuses claps, and does some illegal stuff....

opps forgot to star this shoulda done it ages ago

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [Normal].osu

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

Yeah.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [tieff's Beat].osu

[tieff]
looks good


[animask]
eh its decent...the streams of claps are a bit ugh but oh well


[Rena]
00:33:20 (2) - spacing
01:04:89 (9,10) - hitsounds
01:18:52 (1) - finish
02:01:93 (2) - try the finish on the other side
02:06:58 (1) - finish
02:20:52 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - needs more hitsounds
02:56:33 (2) - finish on offbeat sounds really disconcerting

[Rena]
deh. hitsounds are a mess but at least they dont quite finish killing my soul anymore. everything else is good

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Normal
I personally think that Normal is abit too hard for the easiest difficulty in the pack.

Animask's Difficulty
02:21:79 (1,1,1) - These are pretty ugly

tieff's beat
00:42:28 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing between 3 and 4 is pretty messed up.
00:58:97 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't get it..
01:02:35 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
01:15:24 (1,2,3) - These 3 beats are TERRIBLE to place here. Replace the first 2 with a slider, get rid of (3), and move the 1/4 sliders after this earlier (left on the timeline) 1/4.

Rena Difficulty !
Okay..
00:50:10 (1,2) - These two beats feel awkward
00:55:81 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These sliders are a DX move
01:14:61 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - ^
This difficulty is pretty boring IMO. It's pretty much just 1/2 with a few triplets chucked in. Not to mention half the notes don't fit in with the music.
2.60 slider velocity doesn't help.

Rena Difficulty ! and Normal
These seem to end awkwardly.
Try to end these difficulties either..
03:22:64 -
or atleast..
03:09:12 -

BG seems pretty um.. weird.. Also Thumbnail and BG don't match.

Keep trying! /star

<General>
I hate the kiai timing on this map. Their sections are so out of place. I suggest you remove them.

[tieff's Beat]
00:59:19 (3,4) - Explain why there is an in-combo jump here, NOW.
01:02:57 (3,4) - Explain AGAIN.

[animask Difficulty]
02:13:13 (2) - I don't know if this is fine.

[Rena difficulty !]
00:50:10 (1,2,3) - Doesn't make sense.
00:55:81 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Change the hitsounds here, or just rearrange them.

Fixed and Modified.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

Worth a star

<3

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [tieff's Beat].osu

[Normal]
00:51:79 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - could you remove a few of these? its kinda both too hard and needless
01:31:09 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - again, rather too difficult for Normal
01:39:12 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
you really shouldnt be using this many blue ticks, ESPECIALLY not with hitcircles
03:01:51 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,1,1,1,2,1) - lower the difficulty of this a bit


[tieff]
00:28:93 - kiai time in a break? really?
00:55:81 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hitsounds plz
00:55:17 - wierd kiai
01:14:61 - ^
01:19:26 - you can move the previous section to here and itll feel a lot better if you dont wanna remove it entirely
also if youre going to use that many whistles...maybe try using a custom whistle cus the default sounds bad spammed like that


[animask]
Dx a bit of clapspam throughout, try to reduce it a bit
02:10:38 (7) - spacing is a tad wide
02:16:72 (5,6,7) - spacing .-.
02:20:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uh? it looked like you were going into 1/8 with a spacing crunch like that
03:00:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - sorry, this kind of kiai is no longer allowed. please remove it.


[Rena]
00:16:30 (1,2,3) - remove a finish
00:58:97 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - finishes go on every other white tick starting on 1
01:14:61 - weird time to start kiai
01:39:54 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) - hitsounds plz
02:43:55 (4,5) - sloppy
02:53:48 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6) - hitsounds plz
03:09:12 (1) - finish?

<3

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [tieff's Beat].osu

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
Dx a bit of clapspam throughout, try to reduce it a bit its not really spam...I would call it "the semi-default" hitsound I'll try to reduce some though. I removed the clap wherever I thought something else could go instead
02:10:38 (7) - spacing is a tad wide Fixed
02:16:72 (5,6,7) - spacing .-. Fixed
02:20:52 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uh? it looked like you were going into 1/8 with a spacing crunch like that I didn't want to make it a stack at the end...I don't like a stack in the middle of a stream...and I wanted it to go straight up
03:00:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - sorry, this kind of kiai is no longer allowed. please remove it. Removed

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

[Normal]
01:14:61 - the kiai looks really weird here...really...
01:56:44 (7,1,2,3,4) - too hard
still iffy >_>

[tieff]
looks good

[animask]
01:14:61 - the kiai still looks weird here
02:21:79 - this section feels too quiet
02:49:47 - why break in the middle of the lyrics? o.o;


[Rena]
02:55:38 (6) - finish
03:09:12 (1) - ^

address and i will bubble ^_^

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[animask]
01:14:61 - the kiai still looks weird here Removed
02:21:79 - this section feels too quiet Raised volume
02:49:47 - why break in the middle of the lyrics? o.o; Mapped where the break used to be.

Done.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

Ah.

Damn cool map!

Starred, Derp.

I know this already has 5 difficulties, but it could really use an easier one.

[Normal]
This map is absolute score-whoring. With 1/8 repeating sliders and a tick rate of 4, this map is not worth the 5 million that it gives. Decrease tick rate to 2, for starters.
00:30:24 (1) - I don't really like how the 1/8 slider is used here.
00:55:17 - Terrible use of kiai.
01:15:66 (13) - Add another hitcircle so the slider starts on the white tick, and shorten the slider so it ends on the red tick before the spinner.
01:15:72 - Kiai time starting on an 1/8 snap? Nuh uh. Not happening.
01:56:97 (8) - Awkward slider start point.
03:04:05 (1) - I don't really like how long this slider lasts.

[tieff's Beat]
01:10:59 (8,9,1,2,3) - Awkward how the different pattern starts after the white tick.
01:15:77 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - All these sliders start on blue ticks. That's horrible to play, and the last part is messy too.

[Rokodo_[RL]'s Taiko]
I'm not very used to taiko, so I can't mod this fully.
I don't really like the 1/6 snaps...
00:55:17 - Terrible use of kiai.
01:14:19 - This kiai should be here instead.

[Rena difficulty !]
00:55:81 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ewww. This is messy and hard to read.
01:14:61 (1) - From this to the break, I find very confusing but yet it seems pretty fun. Maybe move the repeating slider so it makes more sense with the music?

[animask difficulty]
00:24:33 (5,6,7) - This ends up getting stacked. Turns out ugly.
00:42:92 (1,2) - The second slider starts on a blue tick, which plays awkwardly.
01:46:72 (1) - Why?! This doesn't start on a good beat, and it's not fun or interesting.
03:00:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Not a very fulfilling sort of ending.

CheeseWarlock wrote:

I know this already has 5 difficulties, but it could really use an easier one.

[animask difficulty]
00:24:33 (5,6,7) - This ends up getting stacked. Turns out ugly. Fixed
00:42:92 (1,2) - The second slider starts on a blue tick, which plays awkwardly. Its timed correctly...
01:46:72 (1) - Why?! This doesn't start on a good beat, and it's not fun or interesting. Not changing.
03:00:66 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - Not a very fulfilling sort of ending. Changed to stack stream~

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [animask Difficulty].osu

Yup.

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [tieff's Beat].osu

Irc mod and a few fixes
Bubble. spacing is right I just ehh~

[Normal]
ugh...

[tieff]
k

[animask]
k

[Rokodo]
00:33:94 (1) - move 1/4 later

[Rena]
the hitsounds are fairly offensive but...

also

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [SFG Easy].osu

here have the whole diff with a couple modifications for intuitivity

Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [SFG Easy].osu

tieff's beat:
The silent part bugs me.. plus the whistles are a little annoying sometimes.

animask difficulty:
The hitsounds.. aren't so good imo. Mostly saying this because of that custom hitsound you have in - it's misused in parts. Also, for me this difficulty doesn't have the custom skin.
The ending seems a little odd to me, but, eh.. tis just my opinion.

Taiko:
Maybe its just me, but the kiai time looks really weird on this difficulty.

Rena's difficulty:
Hmm.. this difficulty doesn't have the skin for me either?_? Maybe if I'll redownload it'll fix - I'll tell you what happens after this mod.

Have a star (and I'm reaaally sorry for the delay).

Green = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Leave the World]
00:24:12 (1) - For some reason this sounds wierd to me. try shortening the slider so that the reverse lands on 24:33, and add a hitcircle at 00:24:75.
00:32:46 (5) - I don't think the beat fits well here. try removing it
01:19:37 - Reset Break here
02:27:71 - ^

No real problems found, Great job (I'ma have fun failing this)

Awesome job Rena. <3

[Leaving the World]
00:17:35 (3) - unintuitive bpm change
00:19:89 (6) - ^
00:22:64 (1) - if youre gonna hide it at least be neat about it
00:31:30 (3) - starts in a weird place, maybe move 1/2 earlier or later
00:35:10 (6) - no
00:36:79 (1,2) - wonky hitsounding
00:43:55 - nice break
00:50:31 (1,2) - why are you putting the more emphatic hitsound on the offbeat rather than the downbeat?
00:53:90 (2,3,4,5) - messy overlap
01:13:34 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,1) - the hitsounds make me flinch with their awfulness. The final finish in there sounds good, the previous however many finishes sound TERRIBLE


I think at this point i can safely say tl;dr Rena Difficulty is in far more rankable a state than this one.

I appear with a possible fix for that one part in Leaving The World.
Download: Baracuda - I Leave The World Today (Special D. Remix Edit) (Rena-chan) [Fixed your troll part].osu
Enjoy.
I'd star, but then I saw tieff's "beat", and it kinda cancelled out your awesomeness.

[Rena difficulty !]
Any reason for the space between "difficulty" and the exclamation mark?

I don't like your use of Kiai time. Kiai time is not to be used just for the streams of stars (Also, if there's no musical boom to go along with the streams, it doesn't work very well either). Either remove it or place it somewhere more appropriate, like 00:30:24 - 00:58:97 and 02:42:07 - 02:55:59 for example

Other than that, I find nothing wrong with this difficulty (aside from the fact that I can't pass it >.>)


[Rokodo [RL]'s Taiko]
01:46:29 - This BPM change really necessary?
02:55:59 - Move the Kiai start to here


[animask Difficulty]
00:28:55 - Kiai Time - Don't do this please
02:55:59 - Move Kiai start to here


[tieff's Beat]
00:26:44 (1) - Extend this 1/8 more to the next white tick


[Normal]
A little hard for a "Normal", but I guess that's what SFG's Easy is for
00:28:55 - Remove Kiai time
00:30:87 - The sfx here sounds messy, maybe push the inherited section back juuuuust a touch
00:37:00 (2,1) - Spaced too far apart
00:41:65 (5) - Extend so there are 5 bounceback arrows shown in the timeline
01:15:66 - Remove Kiai time
01:57:28 (9) - Extend 1/8 to the next white line


[SFG Easy]
Maybe "SFG Easy" -> "SFG's Easy"
02:28:55 - Start Kiai time

I just noticed something.

Resize your BG image. D:

Too much SFG stars. o_O

*I will not regret this*