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[Luanny]
01:42:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol'd.
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P o M u T a

Ijah wrote:

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[Luanny] wrote:

01:42:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol'd.
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Here you go~ Please use this drum-hitclap.wav -> http://up.ppy.sh/files/drum-hitclap.zip

btw on your Insane diff : 02:08:687 (7) - this is off-screen in 4:3 resolution ._.
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Niva wrote:

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132,276,92187,6,0,B|182:281|214:257|214:257|281:258,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,299,92562,2,0,P|408:312|464:273,1,140
390,231,92937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,65,93187,2,0,B|364:65|364:65|343:108|296:117,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,117,93562,2,0,B|167:108|146:65|146:65|94:65,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,12,93937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,12,94062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,117,94187,6,0,L|229:263,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,324,94562,2,0,P|237:288|314:291,1,140
387,307,94937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,192,95187,2,0,L|371:192,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,127,95562,2,0,B|299:149|256:159|256:159|219:145|184:153,1,140
143,239,95937,2,0,L|213:239,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,351,96187,6,0,B|299:329|256:319|256:319|219:333|184:325,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,361,96562,2,0,P|43:375|-9:333,1,140
1,250,96937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
18,28,97187,2,0,L|31:174,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,250,97562,2,8,B|45:263|81:239|81:239|162:240,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,286,97937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
257,286,98062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
374,239,98187,6,0,B|431:239|431:239|467:263|511:250,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,167,98562,2,0,L|494:28,1,140
494,27,98937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,79,99187,2,0,P|254:102|184:75,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,14,99562,2,0,L|155:168,1,140
186,297,99937,2,0,L|198:208,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,363,100187,5,4,0:2:0:0:
254,363,102187,6,0,B|297:363|297:363|349:350|349:350|393:350,3,140,4|10|0|10,0:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,245,103187,2,0,B|154:289|154:289|167:341|167:341|167:384,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,149,104187,6,0,B|215:149|215:149|163:162|163:162|120:162,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,105187,2,0,B|360:224|360:224|347:172|347:172|347:129,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,296,106187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,106437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,277,106687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,311,106937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
141,384,107187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,288,107437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
135,195,107687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
0,63,108187,6,0,P|75:71|135:42,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,109187,2,0,P|242:123|175:123,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,76,110187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,110437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
317,252,110687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,338,110937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
189,384,111187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,293,111437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,199,111687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,111937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
137,38,112187,6,0,P|206:63|271:48,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,147,112687,2,0,L|337:146,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,237,113187,2,0,L|175:238,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,113687,2,0,P|306:321|242:335,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,345,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,3,116187,6,0,L|85:151,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,347,118187,6,0,B|46:357|80:334|80:334|151:335,1,140,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,120562,2,0,L|366:148,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,218,122937,2,0,L|241:133,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,112,123187,6,0,P|242:116|186:78,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,14,123562,2,0,L|159:174,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,211,123937,2,0,L|76:136,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,246,124187,6,0,P|77:239|156:278,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,143,125937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
483,143,126187,6,0,L|472:285,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,297,127187,6,0,P|181:310|111:273,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,347,127562,2,0,L|90:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,134,128187,6,0,P|234:147|304:115,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,53,128562,2,0,L|327:203,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,256,128937,2,0,L|411:187,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,355,129562,2,0,P|170:374|103:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,192,129937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
37,192,130187,6,0,L|189:191,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,130562,2,0,P|209:197|239:119,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,84,130937,2,0,L|306:14,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,128,131187,6,0,P|401:198|379:257,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,321,131562,2,0,P|373:287|303:297,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,131937,2,0,L|156:256,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,302,132187,6,0,P|25:317|-34:267,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,234,132562,2,0,B|63:168|63:168|39:98,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,1,132937,2,0,L|125:67,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,138,133187,6,0,P|257:160|324:137,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,70,133562,2,0,L|353:232,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,269,133937,2,0,L|438:191,2,70,10|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

Here you go~ Please use this drum-hitclap.wav -> http://up.ppy.sh/files/drum-hitclap.zip

btw on your Insane diff : 02:08:687 (7) - this is off-screen in 4:3 resolution ._.
fixed and update :3
Guy
Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 書かなくてもわかると思いますがtagにGuest参加の方の名前を入れましょう。

[Insane]
  1. OD-1? かなり難しい難易度なのでOD9は厳しいと思いました。
  2. 00:03:937 (8) - Ctrl+Gして、00:02:687 (3,4) - こっち側みたいにワイルドにしましょう。
  3. 00:12:187 (1,2) - プレイ画面だとこのnotesが少し被っているのが気になりました。00:12:187 (1,3) - この2つが対称なので解消するのは難しいかもしれませんが・・・
  4. 00:58:812 (2,3,4,5) - 少し歪な形をしていたので、他の単発配置のように丸みをつけるのはどうでしょうか?
  5. 01:10:187 (1,2) - ずれているように見えたので揃えてみては?
  6. 01:13:562 (6) - Ctrl+Jした方のスライダーの方が個人的には好きです。あくまで主観なので変える必要はないです。

[Niva's Hard]
  1. sorry, i can't find else. beautiful diff.

[Hibari's Normal]
  1. 01:14:187 (5) - 以前からのパターンと長くなりすぎてしまうといった理由でNCしましょう。
  2. 01:22:187 (5) - ^
  3. 01:23:187 (1) - NC削除
    他にも似たような箇所がありました。
  4. 01:58:187 (1) - 綺麗な円なので対称的にしたいです。このCodeを使用してみてください。
    188,76,118187,6,0,P|256:228|324:76,1,419.999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
以上です~頑張ってください! ;)
hibarirailwayz

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Hibari's Normal]
  1. 01:14:187 (5) - 以前からのパターンと長くなりすぎてしまうといった理由でNCしましょう。 ここはミスでしたども!
  2. 01:22:187 (5) - ^ OK
  3. 01:23:187 (1) - NC削除OK
    他にも似たような箇所がありました。 上二つと同じようなNCの取り方をしました!
  4. 01:58:187 (1) - 綺麗な円なので対称的にしたいです。このCodeを使用してみてください。
    188,76,118187,6,0,P|256:228|324:76,1,419.999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    他の同様のスライダーにも適応しました。
以上です~頑張ってください! ;)
modding感謝です!
最新版はSkypeで
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Guy wrote:

Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.


[General]
  1. 書かなくてもわかると思いますがtagにGuest参加の方の名前を入れましょう。

[Insane]
  1. OD-1? かなり難しい難易度なのでOD9は厳しいと思いました。 逆に簡単な難易度でOD9も厳しいのであえて9にして難易度を上げています。一応keepで行きます~
  2. 00:03:937 (8) - Ctrl+Gして、00:02:687 (3,4) - こっち側みたいにワイルドにしましょう。
  3. 00:12:187 (1,2) - プレイ画面だとこのnotesが少し被っているのが気になりました。00:12:187 (1,3) - この2つが対称なので解消するのは難しいかもしれませんが・・・
  4. 00:58:812 (2,3,4,5) - 少し歪な形をしていたので、他の単発配置のように丸みをつけるのはどうでしょうか?
  5. 01:10:187 (1,2) - ずれているように見えたので揃えてみては?
  6. 01:13:562 (6) - Ctrl+Jした方のスライダーの方が個人的には好きです。あくまで主観なので変える必要はないです。
以上です~頑張ってください! ;)
上記1点以外は全てfixedです!
mod & starありがとうございました! :)
69653863
i wanna take u4 a ride
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

inverness wrote:

i wanna take u4 a ride
:3
Kodora
[General]

Hm, via playing this i noticed that i cant disable map's hitsound. Most likely it is a new bug.

Add "trauma" to tags since it is album name.
And i think it will be nice idea add to tags names of songs what was used as a samples here.

[Hibari's Normal]

00:08:187 (3,4) - maybe fix this overlap?
01:34:937 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]

01:40:187 (9,1) - please add break between this notes because you use high drain here - it very eggpain with hard rock
02:05:187 (1) - Ctrl+G please. It very hard to read, and with reversed selections it will make better flow.
02:14:187 (1) - how about move this note avay from this slider? Riht now it confusing, maybe better create jump using it?

[Niva's Hard]

OD+1 for better balance?

01:16:062 (7) - unstack? this note confusing me first time when i play
01:40:187 (1,1) - add break between this notes too?
02:12:937 (3) - overlaps hp-bar a little, so i suggest move it down a little bit

Very well made map, really not so much to see. Good luck!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Kodora wrote:

[General]

Hm, via playing this i noticed that i cant disable map's hitsound. Most likely it is a new bug.

Add "trauma" to tags since it is album name.
And i think it will be nice idea add to tags names of songs what was used as a samples here.
add Trauma all diff~

[Insane]

01:40:187 (9,1) - please add break between this notes because you use high drain here - it very eggpain with hard rock okay
02:05:187 (1) - Ctrl+G please. It very hard to read, and with reversed selections it will make better flow. umm,stack more confused ...
02:14:187 (1) - how about move this note avay from this slider? Riht now it confusing, maybe better create jump using it? keep for now. but, i will chenge or not.

Very well made map, really not so much to dee. Good luck!
ty Kodora :D
Loooctav
No Mod Your map.. Why.. is perfect ;w;
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

ThoomyyxD wrote:

No Mod Your map.. Why.. is perfect ;w;
roger.. thanks check :D
Rare
m4m

[Normal]
00:26:187 (1) - 終点のwhistleを削除
00:30:187 (1) - ^
01:00:187 (4,5) - 折り返しのwhistleを削除
01:04:187 (4,5) - ^
01:54:187 (1) - こういったスライダーで形を作るのは綺麗で面白いと思いますがNormalで使うのはあまり好ましく思いません。
01:58:187 (1) - finishとclapの同時使用は避けたほうがいいです。どうしても使うのならば音量をもっと下げてください。
02:10:187 (2) - same as 01:54:187 (1) -

[Hard]
00:09:187 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/2obU4
00:17:062 - add note?
00:25:937 (1,2,3) - stack is better because seems like stream.
02:09:937 (3) - move up to 2 or 3 grid?

[Insane]
00:03:687 (7,8) - 少し気になったのでこういう配置とかどうですか。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673157
00:09:687 (7,8) - 1/2スライダーに分けてみてはどうですか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673160
00:15:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - たぶんコンガの音をとってると思うのですが、音取りが少し変かなと思ったので僕が聞き取れた範囲で載
せますね。 http://puu.sh/2oaOT
00:16:187 (1,2) - あえてシンメトリーしてないとは思いますが少し見た目が気になります。僕ならシンメトリーにします。 http://puu.sh/2oaZT
00:17:687 (8,9,1) - 提案 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673174
00:30:937 (4,5,6) - ここにも同じ音付けにした方が統一感が出ると思うので、それぞれ終点にwhistleをつけて(5)の始点にあるwhistleを消しましょう。
00:37:187 (1) - 綺麗な3角形のほうが見栄えがいいので揃えましょう。 http://puu.sh/2obh1
00:38:187 (1,2) - 個人的にはシンメトリー派ですが気に入らなければこのままで。http://puu.sh/2oblB
00:50:687 (3,4) - ここは1/2刻みなのに00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - ここが連打刻みにしたのはなぜでしょう。曲調に変化はないのでどちらかに統一した
ほうがいいと思います。
00:54:187 (1) - 424/288
00:57:187 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 聞き取れた範囲で載せます http://puu.sh/2obyZ
02:14:187 (1) - 音量を下げたclapのほうが音にあってると思います。
Niva

Rare wrote:

[Hard]
00:09:187 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/2obU4
00:17:062 - add note? I followed vocals on these two~
00:25:937 (1,2,3) - stack is better because seems like stream. Done
02:09:937 (3) - move up to 2 or 3 grid? Oh... Yep this should be in ~y:192, fixed

Kodora wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

OD+1 for better balance? Sure :3

01:16:062 (7) - unstack? this note confusing me first time when i play Ah, I don't think it's that hard to read o.o
01:40:187 (1,1) - add break between this notes too? Already tried, osu! automatically deletes it when I went to test mode orz ._.
02:12:937 (3) - overlaps hp-bar a little, so i suggest move it down a little bit Done~
Thanks both for mod (:

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Renard-TU4AR(188.138.9.30).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 102187
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: -2356,-610,20108,23865,24106,24347,90562
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:TU4AR
TitleUnicode:TU4AR
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:P o M u T a
Version:Niva's Hard
Source:
Tags:BECAUSE MAYBE! lapfox Niva hibarirailwayz Trauma
BeatmapID:230114
BeatmapSetID:82802

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
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2,50187,57437
2,66262,68437
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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25,223,80562,2,0,B|34:171|34:171|68:143|63:93,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
49,9,80937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
194,93,81187,2,0,P|263:101|328:68,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
371,3,81562,2,0,L|357:142,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,288,81937,2,0,L|314:214,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,330,82187,6,8,P|324:317|262:350,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
186,375,82562,2,0,B|146:375|146:375|97:398|48:372,1,140
11,298,82937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
41,132,83187,2,0,P|112:139|168:89,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
133,19,83562,2,0,P|171:71|250:68,1,140
321,19,83937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
321,120,84062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
511,20,84187,6,0,P|473:72|403:74,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
321,120,84562,2,0,L|320:270,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
350,348,84937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,319,85187,2,0,P|116:315|51:343,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,272,85562,2,0,B|38:249|64:240|64:240|64:155,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,88,85937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
12,7,86062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
233,16,86187,6,0,B|181:15|181:15|144:38|96:23,1,140,4|10,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,99,86562,2,0,B|252:100|252:100|290:76|337:92,1,140
300,172,86937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,272,87187,2,0,B|441:272|441:272|379:235,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
382,160,87562,2,0,P|362:233|307:257,1,140
300,172,87937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
235,118,88062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
35,82,88187,6,0,B|85:91|121:60|121:60|172:61,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,118,88562,2,0,P|307:133|363:97,1,140
289,53,88937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
311,215,89187,2,0,L|327:358,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,384,89562,2,0,P|320:363|247:370,1,140
93,283,89937,2,0,L|169:283,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,198,90187,6,0,P|316:202|388:181,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,247,90562,2,0,L|424:104,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,29,90937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
261,60,91187,2,0,B|225:68|191:52|191:52|158:36|123:43,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,180,91562,2,0,B|61:171|95:187|95:187|128:203|163:196,1,140
146,120,91937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
146,120,92062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,276,92187,6,0,B|182:281|214:257|214:257|281:258,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,299,92562,2,0,P|408:312|464:273,1,140
390,231,92937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,65,93187,2,0,B|364:65|364:65|343:108|296:117,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,117,93562,2,0,B|167:108|146:65|146:65|94:65,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,12,93937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,12,94062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,117,94187,6,0,L|229:263,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,324,94562,2,0,P|237:288|314:291,1,140
387,307,94937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,192,95187,2,0,L|371:192,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,127,95562,2,0,B|299:149|256:159|256:159|219:145|184:153,1,140
143,239,95937,2,0,L|213:239,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,351,96187,6,0,B|299:329|256:319|256:319|219:333|184:325,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,361,96562,2,0,P|43:375|-9:333,1,140
1,250,96937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
18,28,97187,2,0,L|31:174,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,250,97562,2,8,B|45:263|81:239|81:239|162:240,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,286,97937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
257,286,98062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
374,239,98187,6,0,B|431:239|431:239|467:263|511:250,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,167,98562,2,0,L|494:28,1,140
494,27,98937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,79,99187,2,0,P|254:102|184:75,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,14,99562,2,0,L|155:168,1,140
186,297,99937,2,0,L|198:208,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,363,100187,5,4,0:2:0:0:
254,363,102187,6,0,B|297:363|297:363|349:350|349:350|393:350,3,140,4|10|0|10,0:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,245,103187,2,0,B|154:289|154:289|167:341|167:341|167:384,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,149,104187,6,0,B|215:149|215:149|163:162|163:162|120:162,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,105187,2,0,B|360:224|360:224|347:172|347:172|347:129,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,296,106187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,106437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,277,106687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,311,106937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
141,384,107187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,288,107437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
135,195,107687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
0,63,108187,6,0,P|75:71|135:42,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,109187,2,0,P|242:123|175:123,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,76,110187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,110437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
317,252,110687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,338,110937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
189,384,111187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,293,111437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,199,111687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,111937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
137,38,112187,6,0,P|206:63|271:48,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,147,112687,2,0,L|337:146,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,237,113187,2,0,L|175:238,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,113687,2,0,P|306:321|242:335,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,345,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,3,116187,6,0,L|85:151,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,347,118187,6,0,B|46:357|80:334|80:334|151:335,1,140,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,120562,2,0,L|366:148,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,218,122937,2,0,L|241:133,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,112,123187,6,0,P|242:116|186:78,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,14,123562,2,0,L|159:174,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,211,123937,2,0,L|76:136,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,246,124187,6,0,P|77:239|156:278,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,143,125937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
483,143,126187,6,0,L|472:285,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,297,127187,6,0,P|181:310|111:273,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,347,127562,2,0,L|90:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,134,128187,6,0,P|234:147|304:115,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,53,128562,2,0,L|327:203,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,256,128937,2,0,L|411:187,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,355,129562,2,0,P|170:374|103:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,192,129937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
38,192,130187,6,0,L|181:192,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,130562,2,0,P|209:197|239:119,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,84,130937,2,0,L|306:14,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,128,131187,6,0,P|401:198|379:257,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,321,131562,2,0,P|373:287|303:297,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,131937,2,0,L|156:256,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,302,132187,6,0,P|25:317|-34:267,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,234,132562,2,0,B|63:168|63:168|39:98,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,3,132937,2,0,L|126:69,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,139,133187,6,0,P|256:161|323:138,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,71,133562,2,0,L|352:233,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,270,133937,2,0,L|437:192,2,70,10|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

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EDIT : (hibarirailwayz) here's the code to improve your current heart-shaped slider as P o M u T a asked, feel free to modify it though (:


379,352,130187,2,0,B|311:332|257:280|257:280|213:224|99:203|68:123|81:33|179:-14|222:22|252:47|257:46|257:46|262:47|287:24|353:-9|422:34|438:124|398:213|294:224|257:280|257:280|207:331|131:354,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Rare wrote:

m4m

[Insane]
00:03:687 (7,8) - 少し気になったのでこういう配置とかどうですか。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673157
00:09:687 (7,8) - 1/2スライダーに分けてみてはどうですか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673160 vocalで手前もとってるのでkeep.
00:15:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - たぶんコンガの音をとってると思うのですが、音取りが少し変かなと思ったので僕が聞き取れた範囲で載
せますね。 http://puu.sh/2oaOT 一旦保留で他の人からも指摘があれば検討していきます
00:16:187 (1,2) - あえてシンメトリーしてないとは思いますが少し見た目が気になります。僕ならシンメトリーにします。 http://puu.sh/2oaZT
00:17:687 (8,9,1) - 提案 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673174 好きな配置なのでkeep
00:30:937 (4,5,6) - ここにも同じ音付けにした方が統一感が出ると思うので、それぞれ終点にwhistleをつけて(5)の始点にあるwhistleを消しましょう。
00:37:187 (1) - 綺麗な3角形のほうが見栄えがいいので揃えましょう。 http://puu.sh/2obh1
00:38:187 (1,2) - 個人的にはシンメトリー派ですが気に入らなければこのままで。http://puu.sh/2oblB
00:50:687 (3,4) - ここは1/2刻みなのに00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - ここが連打刻みにしたのはなぜでしょう。曲調に変化はないのでどちらかに統一した
ほうがいいと思います。個人的には違和感は感じていません。ここも保留で。
00:54:187 (1) - 424/288
00:57:187 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 聞き取れた範囲で載せます http://puu.sh/2obyZ
02:14:187 (1) - 音量を下げたclapのほうが音にあってると思います。
掻かれていないところは全て修正
ty ~
hibarirailwayz

Kodora wrote:

[Hibari's Normal]

00:08:187 (3,4) - maybe fix this overlap? This is not problem, I think. Sorry. If this part is modded by more modder, I will fix it.
01:34:937 (3,4) - ^ This is not problem, I think. Sorry. If this part is modded by more modder, I will fix it.

Very well made map, really not so much to see. Good luck!

Rare wrote:

m4m

[Normal]
00:26:187 (1) - 終点のwhistleを削除 ok
00:30:187 (1) - ^ok
01:00:187 (4,5) - 折り返しのwhistleを削除ok
01:04:187 (4,5) - ^ok
01:54:187 (1) - こういったスライダーで形を作るのは綺麗で面白いと思いますがNormalで使うのはあまり好ましく思いません。 面白いならありなんじゃないかなと。あと、このあたりのスライダーを普通のノートに変えると、難易度が跳ね上がるので取り合えず保留で
01:58:187 (1) - finishとclapの同時使用は避けたほうがいいです。どうしても使うのならば音量をもっと下げてください。 ok
02:10:187 (2) - same as 01:54:187 (1) -  上に同じくです。
Thanks for modding!! :)
Kyouren
can i for guest diff (taiko diff+bg)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

gokugohan12468 wrote:

can i for guest diff (taiko diff+bg)
not need taiko. sorry!
hibarirailwayz

Niva wrote:

EDIT : (hibarirailwayz) here's the code to improve your current heart-shaped slider as P o M u T a asked, feel free to modify it though (:


379,352,130187,2,0,B|311:332|257:280|257:280|213:224|99:203|68:123|81:33|179:-14|222:22|252:47|257:46|257:46|262:47|287:24|353:-9|422:34|438:124|398:213|294:224|257:280|257:280|207:331|131:354,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
cool! I accepted!!
wendao
D: easy one Renard?
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Harez wrote:

D: easy one Renard?
no need easy diff :p Normal diff seems Easily Normal. and star rate balance good now~.
Yuki-kun
Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

My Mod

[Niva's Hard]
Fine~

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ?

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120


Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187
Fixed Insane Kiai~.
My Mod

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@ haha, but, i like OD9 this map :D
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ? sorry, i like it :D


Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3
thanks Yuki-kun :)
Cancel
Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good.

[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there.
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap.

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;

[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete??

Good luck (too bad i got rejected for making a gd ;w;)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Cancel wrote:

Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good. not need

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;
ty
Edit: 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",1,1 → 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",0,0 (all diff)
update please :D
dosyeru
Insane
hi
  1. 00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。
  2. 00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう?
  3. 00:15:437 (4) - ^
  4. 00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。

    即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか?
      (3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
  5. 00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加
  6. 00:36:124 - ノート追加
  7. 00:36:187 - Finish削除
    ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう?
  8. 00:40:062 - ^
  9. 00:44:062 - ^
  10. 00:48:062 - ^

    00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。 私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。
  11. 00:52:187 - パーカッション(ボンゴ?)の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう?
     
  12. 01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
      x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。
  13. 02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。
    奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは4つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう?
ODを9にするか8にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD9というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD9を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。


Niva's Hard
hi :)
  1. I have nothing to say to this diff;)
If I had to say about this diff, I would say this diff could be Insane due to high BPM. But this diff is well-designed for players who usually play insane. but still inexperienced. This diff is a good practice one for those players.

Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ
  1. 00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
    1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。
  2. 01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。
  3. 01:33:937 (1) - ^
  4. 01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう?
    会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。



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hibarirailwayz

Yuki-kun wrote:

Hi~
M4M ~ :3

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120
ok

Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3

Cancel wrote:

[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time. Umm.I don't think so, and other parts are little difficult and exciting instead of this easy part.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there ok
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?ok
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there. need not
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap. Renard's "R" iwant keep it!

dosyeru wrote:

Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ
  1. 00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
    1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。ですね。
  2. 01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。 リズムに変化が欲しかったため、このままで。多少難易度の高いリズムと鳴ってはいますが、以前のパートとのスライダーとサークルの順序違いでしかないので、流れでいけるんじゃないかと。
  3. 01:33:937 (1) - ^ 
  4. 01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう?
    会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
 離せるのであれば、離した方が無難ですな。

このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。

一日も早いランクト応援してます
Thanks for modding!! :)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

dosyeru wrote:

Insane
hi
  1. 00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。1.2,1.0のDSを使用してfix
  2. 00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう?神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神
  3. 00:15:437 (4) - ^ GODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGOD
  4. 00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。vocal音でココは取りたいと生まれる時から決めたので今回はkeepで行かせていただきます。折角の提案申し訳ない。

    即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか?
      (3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
  5. 00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加 ok
  6. 00:36:124 - ノート追加 タブン配置等変えないと酷いことになりそうだし、今のままでも十分いいかなと思ったのでkeep
  7. 00:36:187 - Finish削除 ok
    ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう?
  8. 00:40:062 - ^
  9. 00:44:062 - ^ fixed
  10. 00:48:062 - ^
    うむ。。ここのKiaiは連打を入れないでいこうと思ったつもりでした。一応1つだけ入れておきましたが試験的にです。
    あと配置的に入れると色々面倒になる点もあったので、そこまで入れる必要も感じなかったのでとりあえず1つだけ修正です。

    00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。 私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。了解です
  11. 00:52:187 - パーカッション(ボンゴ?)の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう?気持ちとしてはkeepで行きたいです。前にも1回指摘されましたがもう少し保留でいきます。
     
  12. 01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
      x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。 うーん、現在に違和感を感じず結構お気に入りなので申し訳ないですがこのままで逝ってみます。
  13. 02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。 chatより・・
    奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは4つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう?
ODを9にするか8にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD9というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD9を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。 了解です

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ModとStarありがとうございます!
Niva

Cancel wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^ These two is intentional~
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete?? My intention here is to let 00:25:937 (1) - be emphasized more by the slow part before... I increased volume here a bit though via inherit section, hope it blends with the music more now (:
Thanks for the mod xD

SPOILER
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Totoro
Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change?

Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^

Insane

AR-1

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!! thanks

Insane

AR-1 why....

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY
wait other quote
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Niva

-iCo- wrote:

Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time Ah, not really imo (because this is to emphasize the song here actually), plus about the stack it has used mostly in Reiji-RJ/IceBeam's map and it looks good (:

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^ Ah, about these three this is intentional (including why it isn't stacked) :3

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked Done

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two Rearranged this so (5) isn't overlapped...

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^ Fixed all
Thanks for mod (:

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hibarirailwayz

-iCo- wrote:

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change? oh!this is my error
Thax! :)
CPLs
queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937?
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway)
00:45:937 add note?
01:06:437 add a break?
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)


sorry only normal :o
hibarirailwayz

copolah123 wrote:

queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937? There is the storng drum sound at 00:17:937 and, the rhythem you say is little difficult. I'd like to skip
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit There are the pattern clearly, so I don't think I need not fixed. S-S c c S-S S-S/S-S c c S-S (S-S)→c(in order to fit the sound more).Do you understand pattern?
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway) same as this=00:38:187 (1).
00:45:937 add note? If I add a note on the place you suggest, suggestion note and 00:46:187 (1) become double circle in 1/1. I'd like to avoid it!
01:06:437 add a break? need not I think.
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too Sorry, I don't would like to slider's shape change very much.
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern I can't understand what you want to say. The catching sound between previous and present pattern are different.
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)
Umm. your idea is too basic. I want different catching sound. In this part, I catch the voice sound. I think this is not too difficult for normal diff.

sorry only normal :o
Thanks for modding, but I'm sorry I can't accept more than 1 map.
GugUCorn
[Hibari's normal]

  1. 00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
  2. 00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
  3. 00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
  4. 00:48:187 (4) - ^
  5. 01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
  6. 01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
  7. 01:35:937 (5) - clap
[Niva's Hard]

  1. 00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ?
  2. 00:08:187 (1) - clap on head
  3. 00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 :?: but not need to change
  4. 00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219)
  5. 00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1)
irc mod
00:26 P o M u T a: so, mod please >>
00:26 P o M u T a: ><
00:27 *P o M u T a is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232639 Renard - TU4AR]
00:28 [Pisces]: downloading~
00:28 P o M u T a: okay :D
00:28 P o M u T a: irc mod okay ;D
00:31 [Pisces]: 00:03:687 (7) - how about indicating on (112,136)
00:32 P o M u T a: all hidden is i don't like ;_; keep now ._.
00:33 [Pisces]: 00:47:062 (4) - stack on 00:47:187 (1) head?
00:34 P o M u T a: fmm, stoping, but, not bad flow now~. because side flow :D
00:35 [Pisces]: :( ok;
00:35 P o M u T a: sorru ;_;
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:437 -
00:37 [Pisces]: breaktime start here
00:37 [Pisces]: ah no
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:499 -
00:37 [Pisces]: here
00:38 P o M u T a: fmm, i think good now. because, note end D:
00:41 [Pisces]: XD
00:41 [Pisces]: flawless;
00:41 P o M u T a: :D
00:41 P o M u T a: sorry not change ._.
hmm..that's all..
short mod.... :(
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

copolah123 wrote:

queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide) keep for now. if other people , need say.. i'll change.

sorry only normal :o
ty mod
hibarirailwayz

[Pisces] wrote:

[Hibari's normal]

  1. 00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
  2. 00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
  3. 00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
  4. 00:48:187 (4) - ^
  5. 01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
  6. 01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
  7. 01:35:937 (5) - clap
short mod.... :(
All fixed! thanks :)
remy11
from M4M in gave chat

[General]


[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
           交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting :o
00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing :D
Niko-nyan
lol
so pro
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle 表のリズムを今回利用してて、ノートは十分かなと思ったのでkeepとさせていただきます、申し訳ねぇ!

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing :D
thanks modding ~!!
hibarirailwayz

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat


[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ このままのほうが、ルート取りが面白いので、保留
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi 
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
           交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました う~ん。そうですね、同じ向きで続くのも、なんとなく面白いので保留で
なかなか、いい提案なのですが、採用できなくてごめんなさい。今の状態が結構気に入っているので・・・
modding感謝! :) :) :)
Niva

[Pisces] wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

  1. 00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ? It's intentional~
  2. 00:08:187 (1) - clap on head Oh I never noticed this before, nice catch :3
  3. 00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 :?: but not need to change It won't hurt, changed anyway~
  4. 00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219) Another nice catch, fixed~
  5. 00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1) Done

remy11 wrote:

from M4M in gave chat

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting :o Talked to P o M u T a, we decided to revert OD to 6...
00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt Agree, fixed~
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~ Umm, keeping this one as this comes from the previous mod
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down It's not actually -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/678233 xD
Thanks for mod both (:

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MillhioreF
[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps.
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too.

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.

It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM :P
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

MillhioreF wrote:

[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps. roger. but, Drum sampleset is small sound._. so, i changed 90→80% :3
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine. i hope this parts fine._.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too. fmm, this is harder jump part. but, It is not difficult if I catch flow, and enjoy part :D

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.
thanks you :D
It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM :P
thanks testplay and suggestion :D
Satellite
こんにちは
From My queue

your request normal only :D

[Hibari's Normal]
01:34:562 (2,3) - リズムがとりづらいと思いました。2,3のnoteを1つのスライダーに変更することをお勧めします

lol

awesome diff~ no kudosu plz!
rank go~ ></
Kitsuneko
domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

General



  1. ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ない いらなければ消しちゃおう

Hibari's Normal


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Nice
Mapping

  1. 00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも
  2. 01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかな カーブにしてみては
  3. 02:10:187 (2) - Good job

Niva's Hard


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. GOOD
Mapping

  1. 00:03:687 (6) - out of screen
  2. 00:13:937 (7) - 1grid down, try check to use Ctrl+J.
  3. 00:24:187 (1) - out of screen
  4. 00:30:187 (1) - move down a little
  5. 00:34:562 (2,3) - out of screen
  6. 00:40:062 (7) - out of screen
  7. 00:47:562 (6) - out of screen, down a little
  8. 01:01:937 (8) - out of screen
  9. 01:03:562 (8,9,1) - out of screen
  10. 01:05:937 (8) - out of screen
  11. 01:21:562 (5) - ^
  12. 01:22:562 (2) - out of screen
  13. 01:26:062 (7) - out of screen
  14. 01:29:562 (5) - out of screen
  15. 01:43:187 (2) - out of screen
  16. 01:47:187 (1) - out of screen
  17. 01:51:187 (1) - out of screen
  18. 01:54:187 (1) - out of screen
  19. 01:56:187 (1) - out of screen
  20. 02:12:937 (3) - out of screen

    checked notes out from Edit screen, I could not be overlooked that.
    (I try check with other screen resolution but same. Or rule was changed? I heard it is Unrankable.)
    However, it easily fix since you're nice mapping style. just move some grids.
    your map is pretty fun. Good job!

Insane


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね
  2. 02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ
Mapping

  1. Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok

ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Kitsuneko wrote:

domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

General



  1. ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ない いらなければ消しちゃおう 削除しました・・
 

Insane


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. 00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね 最初はそうだったのですが、指摘されて現在に至っています。厳密な音取りをすると1テンポ遅れたfinishが入ると思うので変更は無しです。ただ、このようなFinishがプレイヤーを混乱させる原因になるなら、変更を考えます。
  2. 02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ fixed


Mapping

  1. Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok roger


ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
thanks modding!
hibarirailwayz
Satelliteさんの意見は採用させていただきました!ドモです!! 8-) 8-) 8-)

Kitsuneko wrote:

domodomo
modding from \( 'ω')/Kitsuneko's Modding Queue\('ω' )/

Hibari's Normal


  • Setting

  1. Clear
Hitsounding

  1. Nice
Mapping

  1. 00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも そっちのほうが綺麗ですね!
  2. 01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかな カーブにしてみては Rの形を変えたくないので、保留で。
  3. 02:10:187 (2) - Good job  Yeah! Nivaさんに感謝!!


Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues
Marcin
What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Marcin wrote:

What kind of mix is that? Just asking, because original song sounds different, and even though, you use the same name.
http://lapfox.bandcamp.com/album/because-maybe
source.
this name correct
Marcin
Oh well, my bad :P Sorry
Niva
Umm, about the objects...

I'm using 4:3 (800x600) currently, and there's no objects off the screen when I played it/on the Test mode >_< - I know they *may* look off-screen in edit mode, but actually it's not when you play it~ (I also have some ranked maps/GDs with objects placed on ~y:384 btw)

Fixed some and that 1 grid down issue though, thanks for mod :3

SPOILER
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Sieg
Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays better
OD+1 since this is normal
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd
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Niva's Hard:
this was soooooo awesome until I saw 01:42:187 (1,2,1,2) - eh, such an disappointment Niva. Maybe change this 2 repeat sliders in something... or just add circles instead of second repeat, think about this please, this plays really not so fun as it can be.
01:48:187 (1,2) - ^
01:56:187 (1,2) - ^

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe?
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me
masterpiece

Good Luck!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Sieg wrote:

Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music... fmm,i keep this. if people same opinion, i'll change this.

Insane:
00:27:062 (1,2,3) - this is sudden jump, reduce a little to 1.5x DS maybe? maybe ok ._.
01:59:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - seems a little random placement to me yeah,bit random, but harder part good fit.
masterpiece

Good Luck!
thanks modding and star :D
hibarirailwayz

Sieg wrote:

Hello :3

General:
I don't get why you kiai on 01:09:187 (0) - this is not chorus and not the strongest part in music...

Hibari's Normal:
AR+1 since this is not easy and 240bpm, (if you afraid about star rating its not a big deal 3.05 or 3.1) but with AR5 this plays betterok
OD+1 since this is normal Umm, I'd like to be easy this map's OD
01:31:187 (3,4) - this, I suggest you to do this http://puu.sh/2tCF6 because this is better way imo to jump from vocal back on music I completly catch the drum sound, and now is exciting I think.
01:54:187 (1) - why why why, lets make this nicer http://puu.sh/2tCJP http://puu.sh/2tCK1 annnnd finally http://puu.sh/2tCKt OK
02:10:187 (2) - take my heart <3 http://puu.sh/2tCQd
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Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..


Good Luck!
Thanks for modding! :) :)
Sieg

hibarirailwayz wrote:

Sorry, Sorry, Sorry...This slider is made by Niva. I'd like to use his. sorry..
Eh.. :( okay
[Luanny]
:o
hi

[Hibari's Normal]

00:34:187 (1) - softl finish
00:42:187 (1) - ^
01:02:687 (2) - whistle here isn't sounding good imo, remove it?
01:35:562 - whistle to be consistent
01:54:187 (1) - LOL
02:10:187 (2) - nice heart

[Niva's Hard]

This diff is absolutely perfect

00:26:687 (4) - make this blanket with (5)?
01:09:937 (3) - was this intentional? :o

tfw hard is 5 stars while insane is 4,96 lol

[Insane]

00:03:187 (5,6,7) - sorry, this is a no no. The overlap is really weird and I personally don't like the stack
Try this
SPOILER

(7)'s end is stacked with 00:01:937 (3) -
00:12:687 (3) - Rotate 9°
00:12:937 (4) - ^fix the angle if you did this
00:57:874 - add note here, there is a 1/4
01:09:437 (5,1) - this jump is too aggressive imo o_O. select 01:09:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - and ctrl g?
01:09:937 (1) - remove nc and ^if you didn't fix this, put ir between 01:09:812 (5) - and 01:10:187 (1) - using spacing
01:22:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make all the jumps with the same spacing? something more circular like this
SPOILER

use the polygon tool
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream starts too early, there's no 1/4 here 01:39:749 (2) -
01:54:187 (1) - this part is so epic ;_____; why spinner? map it pls
02:02:437 (2) - ctrl g?
02:02:937 (4) - ^?
02:14:187 (1) - normal finish

I hope I could help
good luck o3o
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

[Luanny] wrote:

:o
hi

[Insane]

00:03:187 (5,6,7) - sorry, this is a no no. The overlap is really weird and I personally don't like the stack no, this overlap good. no problem!
Try this
SPOILER

(7)'s end is stacked with 00:01:937 (3) -
00:12:687 (3) - Rotate 9° Edit: Finally Done
00:12:937 (4) - ^fix the angle if you did this ^
00:57:874 - add note here, there is a 1/4 fmm, but keep is good sound i feel.
01:09:437 (5,1) - this jump is too aggressive imo o_O. select 01:09:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - and ctrl g? Edit: easily done.
01:09:937 (1) - remove nc and ^if you didn't fix this, put ir between 01:09:812 (5) - and 01:10:187 (1) - using spacing spacing is no problem.
01:22:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make all the jumps with the same spacing? something more circular like this sorry, i like little jump. if, other people same opinion.. i'll change this.
SPOILER

use the polygon tool
01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - the stream starts too early, there's no 1/4 here 01:39:749 (2) - playable and i heard this sound. no probmlem.
01:54:187 (1) - this part is so epic ;_____; why spinner? map it pls rest and feel no problem spinner part.
02:02:437 (2) - ctrl g? finnaly done
02:02:937 (4) - ^
02:14:187 (1) - normal finish ok

I hope I could help
good luck o3o
sorry, almost not change, but, Is great; referred to it. Thanks modding!
Niva

[Luanny] wrote:

[Niva's Hard]

This diff is absolutely perfect

00:26:687 (4) - make this blanket with (5)? Ah, I can't make this fully blanketed here, moved the waypoint a bit upper btw~
01:09:937 (3) - was this intentional? :o Yep (:

tfw hard is 5 stars while insane is 4,96 lol
Sieg : Umm, I agree that four 2x repeating slider in a row looks a bit boring, however two (01:48:187 (1,2) - for example) plays fine for me though... Remapped that first part you mentioned though, yep it's a lot better now :3

Thanks both xD

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hibarirailwayz

[Luanny] wrote:

:o
hi

[Hibari's Normal]

00:34:187 (1) - softl finish ok
00:42:187 (1) - ^
01:02:687 (2) - whistle here isn't sounding good imo, remove it? fixed
01:35:562 - whistle to be consistent I think, I can save consistent...
01:54:187 (1) - LOL Yeah!
02:10:187 (2) - nice heart Thax

I hope I could help
good luck o3o
Thanks modding!! :) :)
IchiGUN
こんにちは P o M u T a-さん ;)
m4m, so let's go :3

  • General
    ● OK
===========================
  • Hibari's Normal
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 01:28:187 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:28:562 (2) ?
    ● 01:31:937 (4) - add NC remove on 01:32:187 (1) ?
    ● 01:35:937 (4) - ^
    ● 01:38:937 (2) - maybe change a little slider form? looks more accuracy
    ---->
    ● 01:54:187 (1) - I think it's too hight for score bar...please down it :3

    >Hitsounds
    ● Sounds good
    __________________
    Pretty nice, but in taiko looks at Hard :?
===========================
  • Niva's Hard
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 00:34:562 (2,3) - y:0 it's too hight, please down it :3
    ● 00:47:562 (6) - ^ y:4 =.=
    ● 01:26:062 (7) - again score bar overlaps
    ● 01:33:937 (6,7) - ^
    ● 01:56:187 (1) - ^
    ● 02:12:937 (3) - ^
    >Hitsounds
    ● Sounds good
    ___________________
    Hm, good diff's...but looks like Insane :? so many jumps
===========================
  • Insane

    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● Good
    >Hitsounds
    ● Good
    ___________________
    Really nice insane, i can't find any problem ;)
===========================

So, all it's just suggestion, i hope it's help you :)
hibarirailwayz

IchiGUN wrote:

===========================
  • Hibari's Normal
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 01:28:187 (1) - remove NC and add on 01:28:562 (2) ? There are pattearn, sorry..
    ● 01:31:937 (4) - add NC remove on 01:32:187 (1) ? ^
    ● 01:35:937 (4) - ^^
    ● 01:38:937 (2) - maybe change a little slider form? looks more accuracy ok
    ---->
    ● 01:54:187 (1) - I think it's too hight for score bar...please down it :3 ok

    >Hitsounds
    ● Sounds good
    __________________
    Pretty nice, but in taiko looks at Hard :?
Thanks modding!!
:) :) :)
Niva

IchiGUN wrote:

===========================
  • Niva's Hard
    >Settings
    ● Good
    >Mapping
    ● 00:34:562 (2,3) - y:0 it's too hight, please down it :3 Done~
    ● 00:47:562 (6) - ^ y:4 =.= Done~
    ● 01:26:062 (7) - again score bar overlaps ...it's not in play mode? I'm really sure about this one... I fixed the slider's tiny grid error though
    ● 01:33:937 (6,7) - ^ Ah, I want to keep the encircle here ._.
    ● 01:56:187 (1) - ^ orz, it's intentional o.o
    ● 02:12:937 (3) - ^ Moved down a bit
    >Hitsounds
    ● Sounds good
    ___________________
    Hm, good diff's...but looks like Insane :? so many jumps
Thank you for mod (:

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Tshemmp
[Insane]
  1. 00:11:937 (10) - ctrl+g on this one? Because 00:10:687 (3,4) - are going in opposite directions, so I feel like (9,10) should aswell. Or do ctrl+g on 00:10:937 (4) - .
  2. 00:13:937 (8) - ^
  3. 00:34:187 (1) - add NC here?
  4. 00:55:437 (6,7) - mh, the rhythm is a bit awkward here imo, what about this instead, it would fit the music better imo:
  5. second kiai time should end at 01:10:187 - ? (also to make it consistent among all diffs)
  6. 01:12:937 (3,4) - hm, can't really explain why, but I don't like this stack. Maybe put (4) on (5) instead?
  7. 01:26:187 (1) - combos with only one note in in look bad most of the times imo, so maybe remove the NC here?
  8. 02:03:937 (6,7) - I would do an 1/2 slider instead here, makes the transition into the triplets easier, right now it is really hard imo ._. (then again I suck, so maybe you shouldn't listen to me here)
This map rocks!

[Niva's Hard]
  1. uhm, to be honest, this is an Insane o.o
  2. 00:31:937 (6) - I really don't like the position of this circle, it comes rather unexpected and totally kills the flow imo, I would just stack it on (7)
  3. 01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo you could use jumps here, this is kinda the climax of the song, this low spacing doesn't fit too much imo. Goes for 01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too, of course. At least use 1,0x spacing. x_x
[Hibari's Normal]
  1. Slider tick rate 1 maybe. I know, it is recommended to have the same tick rate in all diffs, but come on, tick rate 2 just looks plain ugly in this diff.
  2. 02:02:187 (1) - ctrl+g maybe. Makes it a little bit more interesting imo but you can aswell leave it so.
I have to say the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal is pretty huge imo, mainly because the Hard is more like an Insane (and while we are at it the Insane is an Extra of course). Great mapset nonetheless, all diffs are really well made, I would even say flawless. 3 stars.
hibarirailwayz

Tshemmp wrote:

[Hibari's Normal]
  1. Slider tick rate 1 maybe. I know, it is recommended to have the same tick rate in all diffs, but come on, tick rate 2 just looks plain ugly in this diff.ok
  2. 02:02:187 (1) - ctrl+g maybe. Makes it a little bit more interesting imo but you can aswell leave it so. for the spacing, I'd like to skip your request... sorry
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Tshemmp wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:11:937 (10) - ctrl+g on this one? Because 00:10:687 (3,4) - are going in opposite directions, so I feel like (9,10) should aswell. Or do ctrl+g on 00:10:937 (4) - . you're right. but, i like this pettern. sorry keep for now.
  2. 00:13:937 (8) - ^ same
  3. 00:34:187 (1) - add NC here? oh, thanks :D
  4. 00:55:437 (6,7) - mh, the rhythm is a bit awkward here imo, what about this instead, it would fit the music better imo:
    umm, no problem i think np now, but, nice suggestion, I will use that as reference next time.
  5. second kiai time should end at 01:10:187 - ? (also to make it consistent among all diffs) i'll fix this.all diff
  6. 01:12:937 (3,4) - hm, can't really explain why, but I don't like this stack. Maybe put (4) on (5) instead? another pettern fixed
  7. 01:26:187 (1) - combos with only one note in in look bad most of the times imo, so maybe remove the NC here? I use a regularity. And the NC prevents confusion.
  8. 02:03:937 (6,7) - I would do an 1/2 slider instead here, makes the transition into the triplets easier, right now it is really hard imo ._. (then again I suck, so maybe you shouldn't listen to me here) yes, so, bit harder, but, no problem feel.
This map rocks!

I have to say the difficulty gap between Hard and Normal is pretty huge imo, mainly because the Hard is more like an Insane (and while we are at it the Insane is an Extra of course). Great mapset nonetheless, all diffs are really well made, I would even say flawless. 3 stars.
thanks modding and three stars :D!!
Niva

Tshemmp wrote:

[Niva's Hard]
  1. uhm, to be honest, this is an Insane o.o
  2. 00:31:937 (6) - I really don't like the position of this circle, it comes rather unexpected and totally kills the flow imo, I would just stack it on (7) Agree with this one, changed~
  3. 01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - imo you could use jumps here, this is kinda the climax of the song, this low spacing doesn't fit too much imo. Goes for 01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - and 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too, of course. At least use 1,0x spacing. x_x ...ah, I liked this slow section personally though >_< - also 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4)'s concept is second combo's spacing is sparser than the first one actually (:
Thanks Tshemmp :3

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HeatKai
GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

HeatKai wrote:

GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!
thanks HeatKai :3/
hibarirailwayz

HeatKai wrote:

GOGO P O M U T A,Hibarirailwayz and Niva XD!
Thank you ~♪
those
[General]
  1. Letterboxing during breaks cuts off the background pretty strangely. I'd suggest you uncheck that box.
  2. Something about the diff spread irks me. There's something missing between the two easier difficulties. Grab a few more opinions on this; it would help.
[Insane]
  1. 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this spacing, but if you want to keep it, perhaps reversing these 10 circles will be more comfortable even though spacing will be the same; if it's reversed the centre will be more of a focal point, and the spacing to 01:09:937 (1) - will be better.
  2. 01:16:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is over simplified, and so is everything until the break. A more intricate rhythm can be found here. Additionally, there lacks a good transition to hint at the new rhythm found at 01:22:187 (1) - ; a player shouldn't have to rely on the approach circles to guess what the rhythm is going to be.
  3. 01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - Awkward break. Appears to play without break.
  4. 01:38:187 (1,1) - Awkward break here, too.
  5. 02:00:687 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These just appear to be sliders converted into streams. While symmetrical sliders work nicely, circles aren't the same because there isn't as much leniency. These should be repositioned in their own pattern.
  6. 02:03:187 (1) - Drum sampleset?
[Hard]
  1. 00:03:562 (5) - Because of 00:01:562 (2,3) - , the spacing here is really awkward. Much better is if you have 00:05:062 (6,7) - first to introduce this rhythm pattern, since this is much more clear with just circles.
  2. 01:42:187 - 01:57:937 - Arguably, inappropriate Kiai usage. While the music suggests a high point, the mapping does not reflect the same. A group of simple 1/1 rhythm, compared to the more intricate 1/2 rhythms throughout the map does not warrant Kiai.
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

those wrote:

[General]
  1. Letterboxing during breaks cuts off the background pretty strangely. I'd suggest you uncheck that box. ok.
  2. Something about the diff spread irks me. There's something missing between the two easier difficulties. Grab a few more opinions on this; it would help. i think no problem. I think that the revision of the degree of difficulty is not born so much even if I add simple mapset between.
[Insane]
  1. 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I don't really like this spacing, but if you want to keep it, perhaps reversing these 10 circles will be more comfortable even though spacing will be the same; if it's reversed the centre will be more of a focal point, and the spacing to 01:09:937 (1) - will be better. sorry, this mapping i like. keep for now. However, I examine it if there is a good plan.place etc...
  2. 01:16:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is over simplified, and so is everything until the break. A more intricate rhythm can be found here. Additionally, there lacks a good transition to hint at the new rhythm found at 01:22:187 (1) - ; a player shouldn't have to rely on the approach circles to guess what the rhythm is going to be. umm, this map easily part. so, simply rhythm is fit. keep. and, 01:20:187 (1) same place, so, people not confused (1).
  3. 01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - Awkward break. Appears to play without break. why? no. vocal fit. and,not confused this.
  4. 01:38:187 (1,1) - Awkward break here, too. ^
  5. 02:00:687 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - These just appear to be sliders converted into streams. While symmetrical sliders work nicely, circles aren't the same because there isn't as much leniency. These should be repositioned in their own pattern. yes, sliders converted into streams. but, i feel good now.if, nice suggestion find, i'll change this.
  6. 02:03:187 (1) - Drum sampleset? you right fix
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Niva

those wrote:

[Hard]
  1. 00:03:562 (5) - Because of 00:01:562 (2,3) - , the spacing here is really awkward. Much better is if you have 00:05:062 (6,7) - first to introduce this rhythm pattern, since this is much more clear with just circles. Done
  2. 01:42:187 - 01:57:937 - Arguably, inappropriate Kiai usage. While the music suggests a high point, the mapping does not reflect the same. A group of simple 1/1 rhythm, compared to the more intricate 1/2 rhythms throughout the map does not warrant Kiai. ...I don't even remember why there's a kiai time there orz ._. - Removed
Thanks for mod~

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Saten
hi o.o

[General]
There's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. Most likely because Hard isn't a Hard imo

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5,6,7) - I find this part somewhat unpredictable. Can you make the slider-head more visible?
00:25:937 (1,2,1) - any reason why you have NC here? it looks confusing imo
00:31:437 (6) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) this maybe? It would become more interesting imo
00:31:687 (7) - ^
01:37:187 - skipping a heavy beat?
00:40:062 (4,5,1) - on the previous part, you had the soft-finish where you heard that vocal thing in the background which is on (4)
00:44:062 (4,1) - same as above
00:48:062 (6,1) - as above as well
02:02:437 (2) - reverse this
02:02:937 (4) - reverse this as well, feels awkward when the slider goes at the opposite direction when the next object is right behind it
02:05:187 (1) - can't you move it to a more natural spot instead of placing the tail on the previous stack? try moving the tail here instead 02:04:687 (7,8,9) -

[Niva]
Damn, this looks like an Insane lol. Keep in mind that this is 240bpm~
00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is not single-tap friendly for the current difficulty choice ><
00:45:062 (11,12) - jumps like this doesn't really fit in a Hard
This difficulty would be good as an Insane, and the current Insane would be an Extra

[Hibari]
It's a shame that you can't skip the pointless silent intro because of your chosen approach rate lol
I think you're better off with those drum-hitfinishes. It sounds so strange
02:05:187 (3,1) - letting (1) overlap (3)'s tail looks much better, but you might have to sacrifice a bit distance for that
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It's not really notable for anyone though


This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and Hard Insane

Good luck!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Saten wrote:

hi o.o

[General]
There's a huge gap between Normal and Hard. Most likely because Hard isn't a Hard imo ;w;

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5,6,7) - I find this part somewhat unpredictable. Can you make the slider-head more visible? i think no problem this. It is slightly ugly, but achieves good placement.
00:25:937 (1,2,1) - any reason why you have NC here? it looks confusing imo okay!
00:31:437 (6) - Reverse (Ctrl+G) this maybe? It would become more interesting imo fixed
00:31:687 (7) - ^ ^
01:37:187 - skipping a heavy beat? umm, i want vocal beat only this. keep for now.
00:40:062 (4,5,1) - on the previous part, you had the soft-finish where you heard that vocal thing in the background which is on (4) add finish.
00:44:062 (4,1) - same as above add finish
00:48:062 (6,1) - as above as well add finish
02:02:437 (2) - reverse this fixed
02:02:937 (4) - reverse this as well, feels awkward when the slider goes at the opposite direction when the next object is right behind it fixed
02:05:187 (1) - can't you move it to a more natural spot instead of placing the tail on the previous stack? try moving the tail here instead 02:04:687 (7,8,9) -
talk irc

This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and Hard Insane

Good luck!
ty mod Saten!
Niva

Saten wrote:

[Niva]
Damn, this looks like an Insane lol. Keep in mind that this is 240bpm~
00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is not single-tap friendly for the current difficulty choice >< Fixed
00:45:062 (11,12) - jumps like this doesn't really fit in a Hard I did something easier here but not really pleased at how it look atm, may alter this again in the future though >_<
This difficulty would be good as an Insane, and the current Insane would be an Extra I'll leave this to P o M u T a if he wants to change the diff name
Thanks Saten, I'm running out of pattern ideas atm though talked to P o M u T a and should give a better diff spread now (:

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hibarirailwayz

Saten wrote:

hi o.o


[Hibari]
It's a shame that you can't skip the pointless silent intro because of your chosen approach rate lol
I think you're better off with those drum-hitfinishes. It sounds so strange This is my way of setting hitsounds. if you specifically suggest example, it's became easy for me to understand what you want say. for the distance, I decide to skip.
02:05:187 (3,1) - letting (1) overlap (3)'s tail looks much better, but you might have to sacrifice a bit distance for that
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It's not really notable for anyone though


This is all for now. I hope you'll add something in-between Normal and Hard Insane

Good luck!
thanks modding! :)
Jenny
This is a sped up version, should be in title, should it not.
Marcin

Jenny wrote:

This is a sped up version, should be in title, should it not.
I already mentioned it, check my previous mod post in this topic.
p/2218195
Topic Starter
P o M u T a
yes, i keep title anyway!
and, Hard diff difficult little reduced.
Silverboxer
Sorry if this was already mentioned but the big R slider in the normal diff looks a bit sloppy. I think it would look better by turning the red anchors into normal white anchors and adjusting them:
Awesome maps though I hope this gets ranked soon :D
hibarirailwayz

silverboxer wrote:

Sorry if this was already mentioned but the big R slider in the normal diff looks a bit sloppy. I think it would look better by turning the red anchors into normal white anchors and adjusting them:
Awesome maps though I hope this gets ranked soon :D
Thanks suggestion, but the present slider's shape is my favorite. sorry .
Xinely
Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Hibari's Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - x:256 y:80 for avoid overlap with 00:08:187 (3) - ? if yes 00:10:187 (1) - x:48 y:156
00:14:187 (1) - x:284 y:60 for stacked with 00:12:187 (3) - ? better imo. if yes 00:15:187 (2) - x:32 y:144
00:30:187 - change finish better imo
00:42:687 (2) - x:428 y:240.better flow imo
01:03:187 (3) - for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/745912
01:38:937 (2) - ctrl+J?
01:45:187 (6) - x:304 y:344 better imo. if yes 01:46:187 (1) - x:96 y:160
01:57:937 - remove green point

[Niva's Hard]
00:18:187 (7) - NC for consistency
00:26:687 (4) - start from 00:26:562 - to follow vocal?
00:30:187 - change with finish?
00:39:562 (6) - 1 grid up for avoid spacing 1,14x?
01:03:312 (6) - spacing 1,14x?
01:05:562 (6) - spacing 1,13x?
01:18:187 (1) - ctrl+G better imo. you are cruel :P
01:20:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
01:26:937 (3) - spacing 1,26x is it itentional?
01:42:187 - remove green point
01:57:937 - remove green point
02:01:937 (3,1) - stacked?
02:04:562 (2) - x:148 y:352 for avoid spacing 1,14x too?
02:08:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
02:12:187 (1) - ^
02:10:937 (3) - ctrl+G?

[Insane]
00:31:187 (5) - NC?
seems fine ~

Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Insane]
00:31:187 (5) - NC? fixed!
seems fine ~

Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~
thanks m4m!
Niva

Xinely wrote:

[Niva's Hard]
00:18:187 (7) - NC for consistency Oh nice one, fixed (:
00:26:687 (4) - start from 00:26:562 - to follow vocal? Err, I think it's obvious enough I'm following the instrument here o.o
00:30:187 - change with finish? I used finish only on section starts and before the break actually, won't be fitting if I added there (:
00:39:562 (6) - 1 grid up for avoid spacing 1,14x? Err, in fact it should be moved a bit downward actually o.o
01:03:312 (6) - spacing 1,14x?
01:05:562 (6) - spacing 1,13x?
01:18:187 (1) - ctrl+G better imo. you are cruel :P Done~
01:20:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x?
01:26:937 (3) - spacing 1,26x is it itentional?
01:42:187 - remove green point
01:57:937 - remove green point Not really necessary actually, but fixed both
02:01:937 (3,1) - stacked? a... Yes it's stacked already, I don't see a problem with this o.o
02:04:562 (2) - x:148 y:352 for avoid spacing 1,14x too?
02:08:562 (2) - spacing 1,14x? Oh, agree with this one, fixed~
02:12:187 (1) - ^
02:10:937 (3) - ctrl+G? Oh, I prefer as is
About spacing : I'm not really following the spacing 100% on some parts though, sometimes I sacrificed it a bit to get better aesthetics (00:48:062 (7,9) for example) - yep, it looks similar anyway and still very intuitive in any way while playing, thanks for modding though (:

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EDIT : I got cool suggestions from grumd via in-game PM, thanks grumd~ I still doesn't feel really right with the 1/2 suggestion you gave on the rest part though >_< but still great suggestions anyway (:

P o M u T a : My update below~

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hibarirailwayz

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
from m4m in my queue

[Hibari's Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - x:256 y:80 for avoid overlap with 00:08:187 (3) - ? if yes 00:10:187 (1) - x:48 y:156 there is Regularity of setting. sorry..
00:14:187 (1) - x:284 y:60 for stacked with 00:12:187 (3) - ? better imo. if yes 00:15:187 (2) - x:32 y:144 ok
00:30:187 - change finish better imo ok
00:42:687 (2) - x:428 y:240.better flow imo ok
01:03:187 (3) - for better flow? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/745912 Umm, this is not so beautiful too. sorry
01:38:937 (2) - ctrl+J? ^
01:45:187 (6) - x:304 y:344 better imo. if yes 01:46:187 (1) - x:96 y:160 ok
01:57:937 - remove green pointok


Nice map
sorry for poor mod orz
good luck ~
Thanks for modding! these are very useful! :)
CrystilonZ
Hi M4m from my queue
too fast BPM :( I can't mod much

General
Letterbox during brake pls. You didn't have storyboard

Hibari's Normal
Nothing to say :D

Insane
reduce 1/4 pls
BPM is 240 so 1/4 stream is too hard, I think

Niva's Hard
Reduce the jump, It is too hard for this diff.
Broccoly
hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5) - Ctrl + g? To make a jump to convey the musical stresses (that zappy bass sound) on the first notes of each stanza. imo they fit the music better + fun to play
For example:
00:04:187 (1) - ctrl + g
00:08:187 (1) - ctrl + g

00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend using circles in front and using repeat slider afterwards like this↙

(better readability without ruining the rhythm + plays well even for the first play)

01:03:687 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (nazi) try making this stream look better (you can uncheck grid snap to make it smoother)
01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I felt really uncomfortable moving from the first stack to the next one. I recommend placing them vertically, maybe like this ↓


01:18:187 (1,1) - (nazi) make them sexier hehe

(something like that..)

01:28:187 (1,2,1,2) - This overlap might be dangerous.. a bit hard to read. This might be better.


01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - These are fine, but this sudden emptiness might confuse the players. Try to think of some other ideas if possible.. maybe place them further apart?

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play really well. Although I like this kind of pattern, it feels uncomfortable when playing. Maybe try reducing the spacing between slider couples. Try placing them like this too: 02:10:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - cuz these play well.

I'll come back and mod hard and normal some time this day.

[niva's hard]
00:02:687 (3,4) // 00:06:687 (3,4) - This sudden jump was really hard to read, even after I played it multiple times. I suggest refraining from jumps until the players learn how the song goes. (i.e. place jumps on latter parts of the song)
00:08:687 (3,4) - And since these are placed similar to the above jumps, it confuses the players.
00:16:687 (3,4) - ^similar situation. Try moving 4,5,6 a bit up alltogether
01:16:062 (7) - this overlap may be dangerous
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too easy suddenly, compared to the complex rhythm patterns before. How about making polygons with a little bit more distance snap? (Squares.etc)
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^

[hibari's normal]
01:54:187 (1) - (nazi) add some white control points in between to make it more natural and look good

02:10:187 (2) - (nazi) pefect symmetry please.
nice normal


Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map :)
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Broccoly wrote:

hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[Insane]
00:03:187 (5) - Ctrl + g? To make a jump to convey the musical stresses (that zappy bass sound) on the first notes of each stanza. imo they fit the music better + fun to play umm, DS use bettter for me.
For example:
00:04:187 (1) - ctrl + g ^
00:08:187 (1) - ctrl + g ^

00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - I recommend using circles in front and using repeat slider afterwards like this sorry, keep for now. keep better.

(better readability without ruining the rhythm + plays well even for the first play)

01:03:687 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - (nazi) try making this stream look better (you can uncheck grid snap to make it smoother) umm, idk how to fix
01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - I felt really uncomfortable moving from the first stack to the next one. I recommend placing them vertically, maybe like this ↓
No.

01:18:187 (1,1) - (nazi) make them sexier hehe i don't like many use point slider.

(something like that..)

01:28:187 (1,2,1,2) - This overlap might be dangerous.. a bit hard to read. This might be better. No problem, i hope perfect stack. but, hard read. so, i slipp bit.


01:36:937 (1,2,1,2) - These are fine, but this sudden emptiness might confuse the players. Try to think of some other ideas if possible.. maybe place them further apart? umm, i cover from NC.no problem part.

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This part doesn't play really well. Although I like this kind of pattern, it feels uncomfortable when playing. Maybe try reducing the spacing between slider couples. Try placing them like this too: 02:10:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - cuz these play well. Both No,not big DS. this is harder part. and very good flow

I'll come back and mod hard and normal some time this day.

Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map :)
thanks~
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

CrystilonZ wrote:

Hi M4m from my queue
too fast BPM :( I can't mod much

General
Letterbox during brake pls. You didn't have storyboard i know. but, no change this.

Insane
reduce 1/4 pls
BPM is 240 so 1/4 stream is too hard, I think this is Insane. no problem this.
thanks~
hibarirailwayz

Broccoly wrote:

hi.......... m4m............... sorry.. i was modding this for over an hour but an error occurred and my chrome just disappeared ....
so I-I-I...am very depressed....... please understand if my mod sounds curt. I usually explain reasons well.. It was really nice before.... haaa...... i'mma cry now..
Since the map is really good, most of my mods will be suggestions.

[hibari's normal]
01:54:187 (1) - (nazi) add some white control points in between to make it more natural and look goodok

02:10:187 (2) - (nazi) pefect symmetry please. It's looks perfect. I don't think it is a matter.
nice normal


Ok. Hope this helps..
This mod took me 2 days orz.. I need to start saving my mods while doing it...
good luck! good map :)
Thanks modding
Niva

Broccoly wrote:

[niva's hard]
00:02:687 (3,4) // 00:06:687 (3,4) - This sudden jump was really hard to read, even after I played it multiple times. I suggest refraining from jumps until the players learn how the song goes. (i.e. place jumps on latter parts of the song)
00:08:687 (3,4) - And since these are placed similar to the above jumps, it confuses the players. Uhm, I'm keeping as is...The jump is structured already imo + there's no complaints previously though~
00:16:687 (3,4) - ^similar situation. Try moving 4,5,6 a bit up alltogether Err, no jump here o.o - I altered (6) a bit though
01:16:062 (7) - this overlap may be dangerous Err, not really imo, fixed the imperfect stack though
01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - feels too easy suddenly, compared to the complex rhythm patterns before. How about making polygons with a little bit more distance snap? (Squares.etc)
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^
01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - ^ Err, it's intentional, the song gives constant 1/1 dominant bass sound here though (although there are fainting 1/2s but I can really barely hear ._.)
Thanks for mod (:

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454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,347,118187,6,0,B|46:357|80:334|80:334|151:335,1,140,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,120562,2,0,L|366:148,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,218,122937,2,0,L|241:133,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,112,123187,6,0,P|242:116|186:78,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,14,123562,2,0,L|159:174,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,211,123937,2,0,L|76:136,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,246,124187,6,0,P|77:239|156:278,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,143,125937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
483,143,126187,6,0,L|472:285,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,297,127187,6,0,P|181:310|111:273,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,347,127562,2,0,L|90:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,134,128187,6,0,P|234:147|304:115,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,52,128562,2,0,L|328:202,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,256,128937,2,0,L|411:187,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,355,129562,2,0,P|170:374|103:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
38,192,129937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
38,192,130187,6,0,L|181:192,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,130562,2,0,P|209:197|239:119,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,84,130937,2,0,L|306:14,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,128,131187,6,0,P|401:198|379:257,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,321,131562,2,0,P|373:287|303:297,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,131937,2,0,L|156:256,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,302,132187,6,0,P|25:317|-34:267,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,234,132562,2,0,B|63:168|63:168|39:98,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,4,132937,2,0,L|126:70,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,139,133187,6,0,P|256:161|323:138,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,71,133562,2,0,L|352:233,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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Alumetorz
modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[General]
  1. 01:42:187 - This needs Kia Time imo
[Hibari's Normal]
  1. I think the finishes are a little bit overused in this diff
  2. 00:34:187, 00:42:187, 00:50:187, 01:40:187, 01:58:187 and 02:14:187 - You used new timing points just to make a Soft Finish. In future try to use http://puu.sh/2U1eK.png (I don't think it's unrankable if you don't change it, but just want to point it out. It really saves a lot more time if you use this :D)
  3. 00:07:187 (2) - Whistle on end of the slider
  4. 00:17:187 (4) - Whistle on reverse
  5. 00:48:187 (4) - Whistle on end of the slider
  6. 01:02:687 (2) - Whistle (if you want to follow the pattern)
  7. 01:10:187 - Everything from here on is Soft Sample. Change to Drums?
  8. 01:35:187 (3) - Whistle
  9. 01:53:937 - Add Circle?
[Niva's Hard]
  1. 01:44:187 (1,2), 01:48:187 (1,2), 01:56:187 (1,2) - I think these sliders break the flow. Or it's just me, who doesn't like sliders which are reversed more often than once
    Couldn't find anything else... Really nice map!
[Insane]
  1. OD9 so hard with 240 bpm. I suggest reducing it by 1 D:
  2. Some parts in this diff also overuse finishes imo. It may be annoying to me, because my skin has loud finishes, just want to point this out. I'd suggest to add custom finishes, which fit to the music...
  3. Don't know if this was intentional or not, but your Insane Diff has only Default Drum Samples. I would change them to Custom1...
  4. 01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Place this in the center?
    Well that's all... Nice Diff. Very fun to play! :D
Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff! :D
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

Alumetorz wrote:

modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[General]
  1. 01:42:187 - This needs Kia Time imo i have many kiai times. so, keep for now :p
[Insane]
  1. OD9 so hard with 240 bpm. I suggest reducing it by 1 D: don't worry,i think good staff.
  2. Some parts in this diff also overuse finishes imo. It may be annoying to me, because my skin has loud finishes, just want to point this out. I'd suggest to add custom finishes, which fit to the music... oh.. if find, i will add.
  3. Don't know if this was intentional or not, but your Insane Diff has only Default Drum Samples. I would change them to Custom1... oops, fixed
  4. 01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Place this in the center? Overlaps before note ;w; keep!
    Well that's all... Nice Diff. Very fun to play! :D thanks!
Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff! :D
thanks modding!
Erisan
個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・`)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

MOD
-Normal-

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
ここの部分を

01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
ここのどちらか2つに合わせたほうがいいと思います。


01:54:187 (1) -
「R」の形をもうちょっと綺麗にしたほうがいいかもしれません。


-Insane-

00:11:937 (10) -
反転させるといいかもしれません

01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
形を整えたほうがいいかもしれません

完成度高くて驚きました(;゚Д゚)

いい譜面ですね!
応援してます!

目指せランクド!
Topic Starter
P o M u T a

eLy wrote:

個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・`)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

-Insane-

00:11:937 (10) -
反転させるといいかもしれません nice suggestionです!

01:39:687 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
形を整えたほうがいいかもしれません この連打カッコイイと思っているので現状保留でいきますw

完成度高くて驚きました(;゚Д゚)

いい譜面ですね!
応援してます!

目指せランクド!
modありがとうです!
hibarirailwayz

Alumetorz wrote:

modmdomdomdomdomdmddmomdomdmdomd

[Hibari's Normal]
  1. I think the finishes are a little bit overused in this diff
  2. 00:34:187, 00:42:187, 00:50:187, 01:40:187, 01:58:187 and 02:14:187 - You used new timing points just to make a Soft Finish. In future try to use http://puu.sh/2U1eK.png (I don't think it's unrankable if you don't change it, but just want to point it out. It really saves a lot more time if you use this :D)
    I want to be carefully next time.
  3. 00:07:187 (2) - Whistle on end of the slider
  4. 00:17:187 (4) - Whistle on reverse
  5. 00:48:187 (4) - Whistle on end of the slider
  6. 01:02:687 (2) - Whistle (if you want to follow the pattern)
  7. 01:10:187 - Everything from here on is Soft Sample. Change to Drums? Sound of the music is cleary changed. I want to change hit sound same as it.
  8. 01:35:187 (3) - Whistle
  9. 01:53:937 - Add Circle?need not, and will be more difficult.

Sorry, I might have been a bit lazy... D:
Nice stuff! :D

eLy wrote:

個人的なmodですので嫌なものは修正しなくて結構です(´・ω・`)

mod数的に指摘点が少なくなってしまいましたがご了承ください。

MOD
-Normal-

01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
ここの部分を

01:46:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:50:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
ここのどちらか2つに合わせたほうがいいと思います。
ごめんなさい。今まで同じような指摘を一度も受けていませんので、このままでも良いと思っています。段々盛り上がっていく感じ?ですかね。

01:54:187 (1) -
「R」の形をもうちょっと綺麗にしたほうがいいかもしれません。
前の形に戻しました。

完成度高くて驚きました(;゚Д゚)

いい譜面ですね!
応援してます!

目指せランクド!
Thanks for modding!!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
Asphyxia
Hey, you requested a mod with forum pm so here I am!

[General thoughts]

  1. Well, this mapset could use an easy difficulty to be more ''friendly'' I suppose but that's really up to you.
[Insane]

  1. Gotta agree, OD9 is pretty rough here with 240 bpm, consider lowering it by one tick :s
  2. This map has some overlaps that I dislike, gonna point out the overlaps while I'm going through it. Imo they're quite unnecessary so change if you want
  3. 00:03:187 (5,7) - ^
  4. 00:16:187 (1,2) - Make a proper blanket, abusing the DS isn't that dangerous to make a proper blanket, right?
  5. 00:28:437 (2,3) - Overlaps
  6. 00:32:187 (1,3) - ^
  7. 00:38:187 (1,2) - You could improve this blanket
  8. 00:44:062 (4,1) - Overlaps
  9. 00:57:812 (9,10) - ^
  10. 01:12:187 (1,2) - Not perfect blankets, could be improved
  11. 01:26:562 (2) - Overlaps, do something like this to prevent it?
  12. 02:01:687 (1,2) - Overlaps
  13. Fine otherwise
[Niva's Hard]

  1. Maybe +1 OD?
  2. 00:04:187 (1,3) - Overlap between these is very ugly, it even shows while playing, just for the suggestion I'd recommend to do an upcurve instead?
  3. 00:14:187 (1,3) - ^, but now do a downcurve ?
  4. 00:17:687 (6) - Why this overlap? I'd recommend doing something like this since it creates a cool blanket also
  5. 00:26:687 (4,5) - Incorrect blanket, move (4)'s slider's middlepoint 1 grid up to make a better one?
  6. 01:02:187 (1,3) - Again this overlap
  7. 01:49:187 (2,1) - IMO unnecessary overlap
  8. Loved this diff, great job :3
[Hibari's Normal]

  1. +1 OD if the creator of hard agrees to +1 OD aswell? It would make the diff spread more equal then.
  2. 01:54:187 (1) - This slider could and SHOULD be symmetrical, it just looks stupid now because it isn't
  3. Loved this diff, no problems for me atleast except the ^
That's all I could find, best of luck with this mapset =)

edit: 300th post lol
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