Renard - TU4AR · forum

P o M u T a

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-11T16:32:57+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2013年12月9日 at 16:39:48

Artist: Renard
Title: TU4AR
Tags: BECAUSE MAYBE! lapfox Niva hibarirailwayz Trauma Nivalis pomuta
BPM: 240
Filesize: 4038kb
Play Time: 02:14
Difficulties Available:

Extra (4.86 stars, 563 notes)
Hard (4.8 stars, 263 notes)
Hibari's Normal (3.1 stars, 132 notes)
Niva's Insane (5 stars, 372 notes)

Download: Renard - TU4AR
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ranked
Normal...100% by Hibarirailwayz
Hard...100%
Insane...100% by Niva
Extra...100%
http://lapfox.bandcamp.com/album/because-maybe ← source

Last edited by P o M u T a 2014-01-12T11:13:21+00:00, edited 101 times in total.

Nessuka

259 posts

Joined June 2012

Nessuka 2013-03-11T16:38:01+00:00

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[Luanny]

8,248 posts

Joined April 2011

[Luanny] 2013-03-11T16:42:23+00:00

01:42:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol'd.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-11T17:37:23+00:00

Ijah wrote:
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[Luanny] wrote:
01:42:187 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - lol'd.

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Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-03-17T04:17:12+00:00

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Renard-TU4AR(188.138.9.30).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 102187
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: -2356,-610,20108,23865,24106,24347,90562
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:TU4AR
TitleUnicode:TU4AR
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:P o M u T a
Version:Niva's Hard
Source:
Tags:BECAUSE MAYBE! lapfox
BeatmapID:230114
BeatmapSetID:82802

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Here you go~ Please use this drum-hitclap.wav -> http://up.ppy.sh/files/drum-hitclap.zip

btw on your Insane diff : 02:08:687 (7) - this is off-screen in 4:3 resolution ._.

P o M u T a

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Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-17T05:33:44+00:00

Niva wrote:

SPOILER

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35,82,88187,6,0,B|85:91|121:60|121:60|172:61,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,118,88562,2,0,P|307:133|363:97,1,140
289,53,88937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
311,215,89187,2,0,L|327:358,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,384,89562,2,0,P|320:363|247:370,1,140
93,283,89937,2,0,L|169:283,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,198,90187,6,0,P|316:202|388:181,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,247,90562,2,0,L|424:104,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,29,90937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
261,60,91187,2,0,B|225:68|191:52|191:52|158:36|123:43,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,180,91562,2,0,B|61:171|95:187|95:187|128:203|163:196,1,140
146,120,91937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
146,120,92062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
132,276,92187,6,0,B|182:281|214:257|214:257|281:258,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,299,92562,2,0,P|408:312|464:273,1,140
390,231,92937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
416,65,93187,2,0,B|364:65|364:65|343:108|296:117,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
213,117,93562,2,0,B|167:108|146:65|146:65|94:65,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,12,93937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
252,12,94062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
213,117,94187,6,0,L|229:263,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
178,324,94562,2,0,P|237:288|314:291,1,140
387,307,94937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
512,192,95187,2,0,L|371:192,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,127,95562,2,0,B|299:149|256:159|256:159|219:145|184:153,1,140
143,239,95937,2,0,L|213:239,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,351,96187,6,0,B|299:329|256:319|256:319|219:333|184:325,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
111,361,96562,2,0,P|43:375|-9:333,1,140
1,250,96937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
18,28,97187,2,0,L|31:174,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,250,97562,2,8,B|45:263|81:239|81:239|162:240,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,286,97937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
257,286,98062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
374,239,98187,6,0,B|431:239|431:239|467:263|511:250,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,167,98562,2,0,L|494:28,1,140
494,27,98937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
320,79,99187,2,0,P|254:102|184:75,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
138,14,99562,2,0,L|155:168,1,140
186,297,99937,2,0,L|198:208,1,70,10|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,363,100187,5,4,0:2:0:0:
254,363,102187,6,0,B|297:363|297:363|349:350|349:350|393:350,3,140,4|10|0|10,0:2|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
154,245,103187,2,0,B|154:289|154:289|167:341|167:341|167:384,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
259,149,104187,6,0,B|215:149|215:149|163:162|163:162|120:162,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,105187,2,0,B|360:224|360:224|347:172|347:172|347:129,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,296,106187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
360,268,106437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,277,106687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,311,106937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
141,384,107187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
158,288,107437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
135,195,107687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
0,63,108187,6,0,P|75:71|135:42,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,109187,2,0,P|242:123|175:123,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
298,76,110187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
307,162,110437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
317,252,110687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
327,338,110937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
189,384,111187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
193,293,111437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
196,199,111687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
200,107,111937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
137,38,112187,6,0,P|206:63|271:48,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,147,112687,2,0,L|337:146,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,237,113187,2,0,L|175:238,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
375,346,113687,2,0,P|306:321|242:335,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,381,114187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
376,345,114437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
340,265,114687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
348,181,114937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
414,124,115187,5,0,0:0:0:0:
322,154,115437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
224,144,115687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
147,83,115937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
108,3,116187,6,0,L|85:151,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,264,117187,2,0,L|3:116,3,140,0|10|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,347,118187,6,0,B|46:357|80:334|80:334|151:335,1,140,4|2,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
214,367,118562,2,0,P|285:379|344:343,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
374,269,118937,2,0,L|360:192,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
411,131,119187,6,0,P|354:169|274:154,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
203,144,119562,2,0,B|149:145|149:145|107:166|63:142,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,72,119937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
179,227,120187,6,0,B|236:227|236:227|271:253|317:251,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,325,120562,2,0,L|366:148,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
365,39,121187,6,0,B|318:39|318:39|269:61|229:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
62,253,122187,6,0,P|71:336|114:371,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,290,122562,2,0,B|189:291|189:291|232:313|276:289,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
230,218,122937,2,0,L|241:133,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,112,123187,6,0,P|242:116|186:78,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,14,123562,2,0,L|159:174,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,211,123937,2,0,L|76:136,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
14,246,124187,6,0,P|77:239|156:278,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
483,143,125937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
483,143,126187,6,0,L|472:285,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
250,297,127187,6,0,P|181:310|111:273,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,347,127562,2,0,L|90:192,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
165,134,128187,6,0,P|234:147|304:115,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
339,53,128562,2,0,L|327:203,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,256,128937,2,0,L|411:187,1,70,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
233,355,129562,2,0,P|170:374|103:332,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
37,192,129937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
37,192,130187,6,0,L|189:191,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,130562,2,0,P|209:197|239:119,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
305,84,130937,2,0,L|306:14,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
378,128,131187,6,0,P|401:198|379:257,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,321,131562,2,0,P|373:287|303:297,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
231,256,131937,2,0,L|156:256,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,302,132187,6,0,P|25:317|-34:267,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,234,132562,2,0,B|63:168|63:168|39:98,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
103,1,132937,2,0,L|125:67,1,70,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,138,133187,6,0,P|257:160|324:137,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
367,70,133562,2,0,L|353:232,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
429,269,133937,2,0,L|438:191,2,70,10|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:

Here you go~ Please use this drum-hitclap.wav -> http://up.ppy.sh/files/drum-hitclap.zip

btw on your Insane diff : 02:08:687 (7) - this is off-screen in 4:3 resolution ._.

fixed and update :3

Guy

Former osu! Champion: 2014

2,049 posts

Joined March 2009

Guy 2013-03-24T13:35:55+00:00

Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]

書かなくてもわかると思いますがtagにGuest参加の方の名前を入れましょう。

[Insane]

OD-1? かなり難しい難易度なのでOD9は厳しいと思いました。
00:03:937 (8) - Ctrl+Gして、00:02:687 (3,4) - こっち側みたいにワイルドにしましょう。
00:12:187 (1,2) - プレイ画面だとこのnotesが少し被っているのが気になりました。00:12:187 (1,3) - この２つが対称なので解消するのは難しいかもしれませんが・・・
00:58:812 (2,3,4,5) - 少し歪な形をしていたので、他の単発配置のように丸みをつけるのはどうでしょうか？
SPOILER
01:10:187 (1,2) - ずれているように見えたので揃えてみては？
SPOILER
01:13:562 (6) - Ctrl+Jした方のスライダーの方が個人的には好きです。あくまで主観なので変える必要はないです。
SPOILER

[Niva's Hard]

sorry, i can't find else. beautiful diff.

[Hibari's Normal]

01:14:187 (5) - 以前からのパターンと長くなりすぎてしまうといった理由でNCしましょう。
01:22:187 (5) - ^
01:23:187 (1) - NC削除
他にも似たような箇所がありました。
01:58:187 (1) - 綺麗な円なので対称的にしたいです。このCodeを使用してみてください。
```
188,76,118187,6,0,P|256:228|324:76,1,419.999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
```

以上です～頑張ってください！

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-24T13:46:35+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[Hibari's Normal]
01:14:187 (5) - 以前からのパターンと長くなりすぎてしまうといった理由でNCしましょう。　ここはミスでしたども！
01:22:187 (5) - ^　ＯＫ
01:23:187 (1) - NC削除ＯＫ
他にも似たような箇所がありました。　上二つと同じようなNCの取り方をしました！
01:58:187 (1) - 綺麗な円なので対称的にしたいです。このCodeを使用してみてください。
188,76,118187,6,0,P|256:228|324:76,1,419.999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
他の同様のスライダーにも適応しました。
以上です～頑張ってください！

modding感謝です！
最新版はSkypeで

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-24T14:23:45+00:00

Guy wrote:
Hi!

Red : You must be fix.
Blue : You should be fix.
Black : Just suggestion.

[General]
書かなくてもわかると思いますがtagにGuest参加の方の名前を入れましょう。

[Insane]
OD-1? かなり難しい難易度なのでOD9は厳しいと思いました。逆に簡単な難易度でOD9も厳しいのであえて９にして難易度を上げています。一応keepで行きます～
00:03:937 (8) - Ctrl+Gして、00:02:687 (3,4) - こっち側みたいにワイルドにしましょう。
00:12:187 (1,2) - プレイ画面だとこのnotesが少し被っているのが気になりました。00:12:187 (1,3) - この２つが対称なので解消するのは難しいかもしれませんが・・・
00:58:812 (2,3,4,5) - 少し歪な形をしていたので、他の単発配置のように丸みをつけるのはどうでしょうか？
SPOILER
01:10:187 (1,2) - ずれているように見えたので揃えてみては？
SPOILER
01:13:562 (6) - Ctrl+Jした方のスライダーの方が個人的には好きです。あくまで主観なので変える必要はないです。
SPOILER
以上です～頑張ってください！

上記１点以外は全てfixedです！
mod & starありがとうございました！

69653863

1,818 posts

Joined January 2012

69653863 2013-03-24T15:14:02+00:00

i wanna take u4 a ride

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-24T15:15:32+00:00

inverness wrote:
i wanna take u4 a ride

:3

Kodora

Kodora 2013-03-25T22:25:04+00:00

[General]

Hm, via playing this i noticed that i cant disable map's hitsound. Most likely it is a new bug.

Add "trauma" to tags since it is album name.
And i think it will be nice idea add to tags names of songs what was used as a samples here.

[Hibari's Normal]

00:08:187 (3,4) - maybe fix this overlap?
01:34:937 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]

01:40:187 (9,1) - please add break between this notes because you use high drain here - it very eggpain with hard rock
02:05:187 (1) - Ctrl+G please. It very hard to read, and with reversed selections it will make better flow.
02:14:187 (1) - how about move this note avay from this slider? Riht now it confusing, maybe better create jump using it?

[Niva's Hard]

OD+1 for better balance?

01:16:062 (7) - unstack? this note confusing me first time when i play
01:40:187 (1,1) - add break between this notes too?
02:12:937 (3) - overlaps hp-bar a little, so i suggest move it down a little bit

Very well made map, really not so much to see. Good luck!

Last edited by Kodora 2013-03-25T23:38:54+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-25T22:59:33+00:00

Kodora wrote:
[General]

Hm, via playing this i noticed that i cant disable map's hitsound. Most likely it is a new bug.

Add "trauma" to tags since it is album name.
And i think it will be nice idea add to tags names of songs what was used as a samples here.
add Trauma all diff~

[Insane]

01:40:187 (9,1) - please add break between this notes because you use high drain here - it very eggpain with hard rock okay
02:05:187 (1) - Ctrl+G please. It very hard to read, and with reversed selections it will make better flow. umm,stack more confused ...
02:14:187 (1) - how about move this note avay from this slider? Riht now it confusing, maybe better create jump using it? keep for now. but, i will chenge or not.

Very well made map, really not so much to dee. Good luck!

ty Kodora

Loooctav

1,070 posts

Joined January 2012

Loooctav 2013-03-26T02:33:49+00:00

No Mod Your map.. Why.. is perfect ;w;

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T04:54:40+00:00

ThoomyyxD wrote:
No Mod Your map.. Why.. is perfect ;w;

roger.. thanks check

Rare

1,118 posts

Joined August 2010

Rare 2013-03-26T07:12:50+00:00

m4m

[Normal]
00:26:187 (1) - 終点のwhistleを削除
00:30:187 (1) - ^
01:00:187 (4,5) - 折り返しのwhistleを削除
01:04:187 (4,5) - ^
01:54:187 (1) - こういったスライダーで形を作るのは綺麗で面白いと思いますがNormalで使うのはあまり好ましく思いません。
01:58:187 (1) - finishとclapの同時使用は避けたほうがいいです。どうしても使うのならば音量をもっと下げてください。
02:10:187 (2) - same as 01:54:187 (1) -

[Hard]
00:09:187 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/2obU4
00:17:062 - add note?
00:25:937 (1,2,3) - stack is better because seems like stream.
02:09:937 (3) - move up to 2 or 3 grid?

[Insane]
00:03:687 (7,8) - 少し気になったのでこういう配置とかどうですか。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673157
00:09:687 (7,8) - 1/2スライダーに分けてみてはどうですか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673160
00:15:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - たぶんコンガの音をとってると思うのですが、音取りが少し変かなと思ったので僕が聞き取れた範囲で載
せますね。 http://puu.sh/2oaOT
00:16:187 (1,2) - あえてシンメトリーしてないとは思いますが少し見た目が気になります。僕ならシンメトリーにします。 http://puu.sh/2oaZT
00:17:687 (8,9,1) - 提案 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673174
00:30:937 (4,5,6) - ここにも同じ音付けにした方が統一感が出ると思うので、それぞれ終点にwhistleをつけて(5)の始点にあるwhistleを消しましょう。
00:37:187 (1) - 綺麗な3角形のほうが見栄えがいいので揃えましょう。 http://puu.sh/2obh1
00:38:187 (1,2) - 個人的にはシンメトリー派ですが気に入らなければこのままで。http://puu.sh/2oblB
00:50:687 (3,4) - ここは1/2刻みなのに00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - ここが連打刻みにしたのはなぜでしょう。曲調に変化はないのでどちらかに統一した
ほうがいいと思います。
00:54:187 (1) - 424/288
00:57:187 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 聞き取れた範囲で載せます http://puu.sh/2obyZ
02:14:187 (1) - 音量を下げたclapのほうが音にあってると思います。

Niva

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Niva 2013-03-26T08:54:16+00:00

Rare wrote:
[Hard]
00:09:187 (4) - how about this? http://puu.sh/2obU4
00:17:062 - add note? I followed vocals on these two~
00:25:937 (1,2,3) - stack is better because seems like stream. Done
02:09:937 (3) - move up to 2 or 3 grid? Oh... Yep this should be in ~y:192, fixed

Kodora wrote:
[Niva's Hard]

OD+1 for better balance? Sure :3

01:16:062 (7) - unstack? this note confusing me first time when i play Ah, I don't think it's that hard to read o.o
01:40:187 (1,1) - add break between this notes too? Already tried, osu! automatically deletes it when I went to test mode orz ._.
02:12:937 (3) - overlaps hp-bar a little, so i suggest move it down a little bit Done~

Thanks both for mod (:

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472,360,73937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
472,360,74062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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512,62,74562,2,0,P|473:121|403:134,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,116,74937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
106,229,75187,2,0,B|152:229|152:229|192:265|245:253,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,115,75562,2,0,B|280:115|280:115|240:79|187:91,1,140
217,173,75937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
238,255,76062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,332,76187,6,0,B|282:332|282:332|239:356|192:330,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
297,255,76562,2,0,B|343:255|343:255|386:231|433:257,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,194,76937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
319,58,77187,2,0,P|257:83|191:53,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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222,269,78187,6,0,B|183:274|150:299|150:299|77:299,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
291,312,78562,2,0,P|247:268|257:182,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,114,78937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
397,276,79187,2,0,P|399:202|355:158,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
323,236,79562,2,0,B|281:236|281:236|230:221|230:221|185:221,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,250,79937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
25,223,80062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
160,319,80187,6,0,P|95:337|33:306,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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49,9,80937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
194,93,81187,2,0,P|263:101|328:68,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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11,298,82937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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133,19,83562,2,0,P|171:71|250:68,1,140
321,19,83937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
321,120,84062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
511,20,84187,6,0,P|473:72|403:74,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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350,348,84937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
184,319,85187,2,0,P|116:315|51:343,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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300,172,87937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
235,118,88062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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146,120,91937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
146,120,92062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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390,231,92937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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252,12,94062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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178,324,94562,2,0,P|237:288|314:291,1,140
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318,351,96187,6,0,B|299:329|256:319|256:319|219:333|184:325,1,140,0|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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257,286,97937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
257,286,98062,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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360,268,106437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
272,277,106687,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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158,288,107437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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110,72,120062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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406,112,120937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
449,39,121062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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254,131,121562,2,0,B|216:128|188:110|188:110|106:111,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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145,349,124562,2,0,P|171:285|231:245,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,162,124937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
203,78,125062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
151,11,125187,6,0,P|213:46|288:38,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,17,125562,2,0,B|408:17|408:17|458:40|501:17,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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511,361,126562,2,0,P|462:314|389:307,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
318,344,126937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
326,260,127062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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63,97,127937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
63,97,128062,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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443,329,129187,6,0,B|386:351|350:318|350:318|293:318,1,140,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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EDIT : (hibarirailwayz) here's the code to improve your current heart-shaped slider as P o M u T a asked, feel free to modify it though (:

SPOILER

379,352,130187,2,0,B|311:332|257:280|257:280|213:224|99:203|68:123|81:33|179:-14|222:22|252:47|257:46|257:46|262:47|287:24|353:-9|422:34|438:124|398:213|294:224|257:280|257:280|207:331|131:354,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T11:48:29+00:00

Rare wrote:
m4m

[Insane]
00:03:687 (7,8) - 少し気になったのでこういう配置とかどうですか。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673157
00:09:687 (7,8) - 1/2スライダーに分けてみてはどうですか http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673160 vocalで手前もとってるのでkeep.
00:15:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - たぶんコンガの音をとってると思うのですが、音取りが少し変かなと思ったので僕が聞き取れた範囲で載
せますね。 http://puu.sh/2oaOT 一旦保留で他の人からも指摘があれば検討していきます。
00:16:187 (1,2) - あえてシンメトリーしてないとは思いますが少し見た目が気になります。僕ならシンメトリーにします。 http://puu.sh/2oaZT
00:17:687 (8,9,1) - 提案 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/673174 好きな配置なのでkeep
00:30:937 (4,5,6) - ここにも同じ音付けにした方が統一感が出ると思うので、それぞれ終点にwhistleをつけて(5)の始点にあるwhistleを消しましょう。
00:37:187 (1) - 綺麗な3角形のほうが見栄えがいいので揃えましょう。 http://puu.sh/2obh1
00:38:187 (1,2) - 個人的にはシンメトリー派ですが気に入らなければこのままで。http://puu.sh/2oblB
00:50:687 (3,4) - ここは1/2刻みなのに00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - ここが連打刻みにしたのはなぜでしょう。曲調に変化はないのでどちらかに統一した
ほうがいいと思います。個人的には違和感は感じていません。ここも保留で。
00:54:187 (1) - 424/288
00:57:187 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - 聞き取れた範囲で載せます http://puu.sh/2obyZ
02:14:187 (1) - 音量を下げたclapのほうが音にあってると思います。

掻かれていないところは全て修正
ty ~

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-26T11:59:06+00:00

Kodora wrote:
[Hibari's Normal]

00:08:187 (3,4) - maybe fix this overlap? This is not problem, I think. Sorry. If this part is modded by more modder, I will fix it.
01:34:937 (3,4) - ^ This is not problem, I think. Sorry. If this part is modded by more modder, I will fix it.

Very well made map, really not so much to see. Good luck!

Rare wrote:
m4m

[Normal]
00:26:187 (1) - 終点のwhistleを削除 ok
00:30:187 (1) - ^ok
01:00:187 (4,5) - 折り返しのwhistleを削除ok
01:04:187 (4,5) - ^ok
01:54:187 (1) - こういったスライダーで形を作るのは綺麗で面白いと思いますがNormalで使うのはあまり好ましく思いません。面白いならありなんじゃないかなと。あと、このあたりのスライダーを普通のノートに変えると、難易度が跳ね上がるので取り合えず保留で
01:58:187 (1) - finishとclapの同時使用は避けたほうがいいです。どうしても使うのならば音量をもっと下げてください。　ok
02:10:187 (2) - same as 01:54:187 (1) - 　上に同じくです。

Thanks for modding!!

Kyouren

5,657 posts

Joined October 2012

Kyouren 2013-03-26T12:03:46+00:00

can i for guest diff (taiko diff+bg)

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T12:05:26+00:00

gokugohan12468 wrote:
can i for guest diff (taiko diff+bg)

not need taiko. sorry!

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-26T12:24:47+00:00

Niva wrote:
EDIT : (hibarirailwayz) here's the code to improve your current heart-shaped slider as P o M u T a asked, feel free to modify it though (:

SPOILER
379,352,130187,2,0,B|311:332|257:280|257:280|213:224|99:203|68:123|81:33|179:-14|222:22|252:47|257:46|257:46|262:47|287:24|353:-9|422:34|438:124|398:213|294:224|257:280|257:280|207:331|131:354,1,1120,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

cool! I accepted!!

wendao

1,638 posts

Joined August 2012

wendao 2013-03-26T12:56:58+00:00

D: easy one Renard?

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T13:08:18+00:00

Harez wrote:
D: easy one Renard?

no need easy diff :p Normal diff seems Easily Normal. and star rate balance good now~.

Yuki-kun

568 posts

Joined December 2010

Yuki-kun 2013-03-26T15:32:57+00:00

Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

My Mod

[Niva's Hard]
Fine~

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ?

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120

Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3

P o M u T a

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Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T16:12:48+00:00

Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~
M4M ~ :3

General

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Hibari's Normal] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:09:937
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Insane] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:50:187
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187

- [Niva's Hard] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:34:187, ends on 00:49:937
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:09:187, ends on 01:10:187
Kiai #3: Starts on 01:42:187, ends on 01:57:937
Kiai #4: Starts on 01:58:187, ends on 02:14:187
Fixed Insane Kiai~.
My Mod

[Insane]
OD - 1. OD 9 is really hell @@ haha, but, i like OD9 this map
00:44:437 (2) - Inverse it (Ctrl + G) ? sorry, i like it

Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3

thanks Yuki-kun

Cancel

956 posts

Joined August 2012

Cancel 2013-03-26T16:48:00+00:00

Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good.

[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there.
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap.

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;

[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete??

Good luck (too bad i got rejected for making a gd ;w;)

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

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Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-26T17:20:35+00:00

Cancel wrote:
Ok M4M!! (sorta)

And favorite for Renard!

[General]

Better BG imo: http://puu.sh/2omrc
If you don't like this one, search for a other one, because the current one is not that good. not need

[Insane]

sorry for skipping your diff, but i can't mod insanes ;w;

ty
Edit: 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",1,1 → 0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",0,0 (all diff)
update please

dosyeru

431 posts

Joined August 2010

dosyeru 2013-03-26T22:25:55+00:00

Insane
hi

00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。
00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう？
00:15:437 (4) - ^
00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。

即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか？
　
SPOILER
　(3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加
00:36:124 - ノート追加
00:36:187 - Finish削除
ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう？
00:40:062 - ^
00:44:062 - ^
00:48:062 - ^

00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。　私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。
00:52:187 - パーカッション（ボンゴ？）の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう？
　
01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
　
SPOILER
　x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。
02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。
奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは４つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう？

ODを９にするか８にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD９というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD９を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。

Niva's Hard
hi

I have nothing to say to this diff;)

If I had to say about this diff, I would say this diff could be Insane due to high BPM. But this diff is well-designed for players who usually play insane. but still inexperienced. This diff is a good practice one for those players.

Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ

00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。
01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。
SPOILER
01:33:937 (1) - ＾
01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう？
会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
SPOILER

このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。

一日も早いランクト応援してます

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-26T23:54:31+00:00

Yuki-kun wrote:
Hi~
M4M ~ :3

[Hibari's Normal]
00:31:687 (3) - Move to x:64 y:120
ok

Sr if my mod is useless. Your mapset is really good xD
Good luck~ <3

Cancel wrote:
[Hibari's Normal]

The most part of the beatmap contains sliders... 00:10:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Maybe change some sliders with notes for the variation.
at 01:10:187 : It follows the same beat for too long, and it becomes boring after playing for a long time. Umm.I don't think so, and other parts are little difficult and exciting instead of this easy part.

00:48:187 (4) - Change this to a better (more fitting) spot, but don't keep it there ok
00:49:187 (1) - Really short spinner, and so, normal players can't reach 1000 points. Idk if that is still unrankable. But maybe change with a slider?ok
01:06:187 (1) - Delete this one, and start break there. need not
01:54:187 (1) - What slider is this? Maybe remap. Renard's "R" iwant keep it!

dosyeru wrote:
Hibari's Normal
こんにちわ
00:17:187 (4) - リーバススライダーに置き換え
1回目のフレーズと違い00:17:947には音があるので、ノートで隙間を埋めることが可能だと思います。ですね。
01:25:937 (1) - 音を3つとも拾おうとしてリバーススライダーを入れるよりは、単発のノートひとつだけにして次の小節の頭から以前と同じパターンのスライダーで始めるほうが初心者には優しい気がします。　リズムに変化が欲しかったため、このままで。多少難易度の高いリズムと鳴ってはいますが、以前のパートとのスライダーとサークルの順序違いでしかないので、流れでいけるんじゃないかと。
SPOILER
01:33:937 (1) - ＾　
01:54:187 (1) - 前半と後半のスライダー同士の重なりを完全にさけるため、下図でいう赤丸で囲った赤点を3グリッドほどさげてみてはどうでしょう？
会わせて終点のX座標も始点のそれとあわせればより綺麗になると思います。
SPOILER
　離せるのであれば、離した方が無難ですな。

このBPMでレート3.0以下という条件のなかよく作られた譜面だと感じました。 01:25:937などの箇所はそのような状況の中工夫をしようという試みが感じられたのですが、指摘したとおり混乱の原因になるのではと個人的に感じました。他の方の意見も合わせて参考にしてみてください。

一日も早いランクト応援してます

Thanks for modding!!

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-27T01:50:49+00:00

dosyeru wrote:
Insane
hi
00:01:187 - DSを1倍へ、またはそれ以上とってもいいと感じました。1.2,1.0のDSを使用してfix
00:07:437 (8) - ここにもホイッスルを追加したほうがリズム感がでると思います。どうでしょう？神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神神
00:15:437 (4) - ^ GODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGODGOD
00:08:187 (1,2,3,4) - 直前の00:06:187のような音取りのほうがより納得しやすい音取りのように思います。vocal音でココは取りたいと生まれる時から決めたので今回はkeepで行かせていただきます。折角の提案申し訳ない。

即席の案で恐縮ですが以下のような配置はどうでしょうか？
　
SPOILER
　(3,4)はともに(7)の終点にスタックさせてあります。
00:36:062 - soft-Finish追加 ok
00:36:124 - ノート追加ﾀﾌﾞﾝ配置等変えないと酷いことになりそうだし、今のままでも十分いいかなと思ったのでkeep
00:36:187 - Finish削除 ok
ヴォーカルのリズムを参考にFinishを追加していると思うのですが、ここもヴォーカルにあわせてみてもいいと思います。青線上にノートを追加することでFinishが半拍早くくる意外性も軽減できるし、なによりこの気合タイム中のリズムの種類が増えることでより楽しく叩けるようになると思うのですがどうでしょう？
00:40:062 - ^
00:44:062 - ^ fixed
00:48:062 - ^
うむ。。ここのKiaiは連打を入れないでいこうと思ったつもりでした。一応１つだけ入れておきましたが試験的にです。
あと配置的に入れると色々面倒になる点もあったので、そこまで入れる必要も感じなかったのでとりあえず１つだけ修正です。
00:42:062 - 上に書いたばっかりですが、ここだけほかと違うんですよね。。。　私はここは無視しちゃっても良いと思います。了解です
00:52:187 - パーカッション（ボンゴ？）の音を拾っているのだと思いますが、強く耳に入ってくるシンセとキックの音をとる以下のようなリズムはどうでしょう？気持ちとしてはkeepで行きたいです。前にも１回指摘されましたがもう少し保留でいきます。
　
01:39:687 - 個人的にはプレイ中気にならないのですが、まっすぐならまっすぐで、曲線ならもう少し全体に統一性を持たせた丸みを帯びさせても良いと思いました。
　
SPOILER
　x=256、DSは0.8倍で(5)が中心にくる様に落とした例です。うーん、現在に違和感を感じず結構お気に入りなので申し訳ないですがこのままで逝ってみます。
02:12:187 - BPM240の曲のラストに3連打4連発はなかなかタフな構成かと思います。 chatより・・
奇数か偶数個目のどちらか、もしくは４つすべての3連打をリバーススライダーに置き換えてみてはどうでしょう？
ODを９にするか８にするか悩ましいところですが、現状の譜面内の連打数をみると8でも十二分につらい構成だと思います。
ただOD９というのもそれはそれで辛口の面白い譜面になると思うので、私はOD９を支持します。
他の方やXATの意見も合わせてぜひ参考にしてください。　了解です

一日も早いランクト応援してます

ModとStarありがとうございます!

Niva

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Niva 2013-03-27T06:33:51+00:00

Cancel wrote:
[Niva's Hard]

00:10:687 (3) - Maybe place under slider end??
00:14:687 (3) - ^ These two is intentional~
00:22:187 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why this part?? It doesn't fit that well, so maybe delete?? My intention here is to let 00:25:937 (1) - be emphasized more by the slow part before... I increased volume here a bit though via inherit section, hope it blends with the music more now (:

Thanks for the mod xD

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Renard-TU4AR(188.138.9.30).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 3000
PreviewTime: 102187
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: None
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: -2356,-610,20108,23865,24106,24347,90562
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:TU4AR
TitleUnicode:TU4AR
Artist:Renard
ArtistUnicode:Renard
Creator:P o M u T a
Version:Niva's Hard
Source:
Tags:BECAUSE MAYBE! lapfox Niva hibarirailwayz Trauma
BeatmapID:230114
BeatmapSetID:82802

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"new_Renard_Ref_by_squeedgemonster.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,18387,21437
2,50187,57437
2,66262,68437
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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117937,-100,4,3,1,70,0,0
118187,-100,4,3,1,70,0,1
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,128,64
Combo2 : 255,0,0
Combo3 : 128,64,64

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Totoro

77 posts

Joined November 2012

Totoro 2013-03-28T00:28:22+00:00

Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change?

Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^

Insane

AR-1

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-28T02:23:44+00:00

-iCo- wrote:
Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!! thanks

Insane

AR-1 why....

DAMMMNNN SUCH A GOOD DIFFICULTY

wait other quote
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Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-03-28T08:14:47+00:00

-iCo- wrote:
Niva's Hard

00:01:562 (2,3,1) - this is a awkward jump. Also, you should try stacking because it might confuse the player while reading it for the first time Ah, not really imo (because this is to emphasize the song here actually), plus about the stack it has used mostly in Reiji-RJ/IceBeam's map and it looks good (:

00:04:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard for Hard difficulty in this map especially because bpm is 240. maybe add 1 slider

00:10:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two

00:14:187 (1,3) - ^ Ah, about these three this is intentional (including why it isn't stacked) :3

00:45:562 (13,3) - not perfectly stacked Done

01:02:187 (1,3) - might as well stack these two Rearranged this so (5) isn't overlapped...

01:10:562 (2,5) - not perfectly stacked

01:11:937 (6,2) - ^

01:53:687 (4,2) - ^ Fixed all

Thanks for mod (:

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hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-28T08:45:03+00:00

-iCo- wrote:
Yo! From my modding Queue~

General

Fantastic map, and lousy song XD I couldn't find many mistakes because the mapset was Uh-maze-ing :3 Go Go Rank!!

Hibari's Normal

01:21:187 (4,1) - why sudden distance change? oh!this is my error

Thax!

CPLs

351 posts

Joined April 2012

CPLs 2013-03-28T10:58:54+00:00

queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937?
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway)
00:45:937 add note?
01:06:437 add a break?
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)

sorry only normal

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-28T14:18:02+00:00

copolah123 wrote:
queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide)

[Normal]
00:17:562 remove the reverse without note or add circle on 00:17:937? There is the storng drum sound at 00:17:937 and, the rhythem you say is little difficult. I'd like to skip
00:31:187 change to slider maybe? previous one is slider so I though its fit There are the pattern clearly, so I don't think I need not fixed. S-S c c S-S S-S/S-S c c S-S (S-S)→c(in order to fit the sound more).Do you understand pattern?
00:42:687 move to 00:42:562 is better (I dont follow the vocal, its all your choice anyway) same as this=00:38:187 (1).
00:45:937 add note? If I add a note on the place you suggest, suggestion note and 00:46:187 (1) become double circle in 1/1. I'd like to avoid it!
01:06:437 add a break? need not I think.
01:16:187 and 01:17:187 reverse this slider since your previous one is like this too Sorry, I don't would like to slider's shape change very much.
01:30:187 follow your previous pattern I can't understand what you want to say. The catching sound between previous and present pattern are different.
01:38:187 make something like this (my opinion)
Umm. your idea is too basic. I want different catching sound. In this part, I catch the voice sound. I think this is not too difficult for normal diff.

sorry only normal

Thanks for modding, but I'm sorry I can't accept more than 1 map.

GugUCorn

936 posts

Joined October 2011

GugUCorn 2013-03-28T16:09:51+00:00

[Hibari's normal]

00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
00:48:187 (4) - ^
01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
01:35:937 (5) - clap

[Niva's Hard]

00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ?
00:08:187 (1) - clap on head
00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 but not need to change
00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219)
00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1)

irc mod

00:26 P o M u T a: so, mod please >>
00:26 P o M u T a: ><
00:27 *P o M u T a is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/232639 Renard - TU4AR]
00:28 [Pisces]: downloading~
00:28 P o M u T a: okay

00:28 P o M u T a: irc mod okay ;D
00:31 [Pisces]: 00:03:687 (7) - how about indicating on (112,136)
00:32 P o M u T a: all hidden is i don't like ;_; keep now ._.
00:33 [Pisces]: 00:47:062 (4) - stack on 00:47:187 (1) head?
00:34 P o M u T a: fmm, stoping, but, not bad flow now~. because side flow

00:35 [Pisces]:

ok;
00:35 P o M u T a: sorru ;_;
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:437 -
00:37 [Pisces]: breaktime start here
00:37 [Pisces]: ah no
00:37 [Pisces]: 01:06:499 -
00:37 [Pisces]: here
00:38 P o M u T a: fmm, i think good now. because, note end D:
00:41 [Pisces]: XD
00:41 [Pisces]: flawless;
00:41 P o M u T a:

00:41 P o M u T a: sorry not change ._.

hmm..that's all..
short mod....

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-28T16:19:03+00:00

copolah123 wrote:
queue
all suggest
sorry if no useful

[General]
silence the sliderslide? (using soft sliderslide) keep for now. if other people , need say.. i'll change.

sorry only normal

ty mod

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-28T16:26:34+00:00

[Pisces] wrote:
[Hibari's normal]

00:37:187 (4) - add clap on 00:37:187
00:39:187 (2) - add clap on 00:39:928
00:40:187 (3) - clap on head
00:48:187 (4) - ^
01:06:437 ~ 01:09:187 - put breaktime
01:25:937 (1) - add finish (S:Default)
01:35:937 (5) - clap
short mod....

All fixed! thanks

remy11

309 posts

Joined May 2010

remy11 2013-03-29T03:51:28+00:00

from M4M in gave chat

[General]

[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
　　　　　　　　　　　交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting

00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing

Niko-nyan

1,990 posts

Joined June 2011

Niko-nyan 2013-03-29T04:21:53+00:00

lol
so pro

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-29T04:27:42+00:00

remy11 wrote:
from M4M in gave chat

[Insane]
00:57:874 - add circle 表のリズムを今回利用してて、ノートは十分かなと思ったのでkeepとさせていただきます、申し訳ねぇ！

Insane is very nice map~
I was able to say nothing

thanks modding ~!!

hibarirailwayz

446 posts

Joined June 2011

hibarirailwayz 2013-03-29T05:24:44+00:00

remy11 wrote:
from M4M in gave chat

[Normal]
00:09:187 (4) - 逆向きのほうが良いです http://puu.sh/2pUiJ　このままのほうが、ルート取りが面白いので、保留
01:19:187 (2) - 逆側に移動 http://puu.sh/2pUxi　
01:21:187 (4) - 逆向きに http://puu.sh/2pUxH
　　　　　　　　　　　交互のほうが形が綺麗かなと思いました　う～ん。そうですね、同じ向きで続くのも、なんとなく面白いので保留で

なかなか、いい提案なのですが、採用できなくてごめんなさい。今の状態が結構気に入っているので・・・
modding感謝！

Niva

Global Moderator

3,190 posts

Joined November 2009

Niva 2013-03-29T07:08:30+00:00

[Pisces] wrote:
[Niva's Hard]

00:02:187 (1) - overlap on 00:01:937 (3) ? It's intentional~
00:08:187 (1) - clap on head Oh I never noticed this before, nice catch :3
00:21:937 - inherited point move to 00:22:187 but not need to change It won't hurt, changed anyway~
00:46:687 (3) - perfectly overlap plz..(353,219) Another nice catch, fixed~
00:49:187 (1) - kiai over point move to 00:49:187 (1) Done

remy11 wrote:
from M4M in gave chat

[Hard]
OD -1 or 2 This map is Hard diff, Your map is very difficult setting Talked to P o M u T a, we decided to revert OD to 6...
00:04:187 (1) - This slider should be reversal because the person is easy to look http://puu.sh/2pULt Agree, fixed~
00:25:937 (1,2) - It is difficult to play, Not stuck is good~ Umm, keeping this one as this comes from the previous mod
00:34:562 (2,3) - It is hit to HP Bar, Please grid down It's not actually -> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/678233 xD

Thanks for mod both (:

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360,268,106437,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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83,113,107937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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62,252,121937,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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MillhioreF

Pro Tester

5,004 posts

Joined July 2011

MillhioreF 2013-03-31T21:51:39+00:00

[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps.
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too.

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.

It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM

P o M u T a

2,284 posts

Joined December 2010

Topic Starter

P o M u T a 2013-03-31T22:39:19+00:00

MillhioreF wrote:
[Insane] testplay as requested in my queue~

Very solid map - readable throughout, fun patterns, good flow.

Major complaints:
* None, good job!

Minor complaints:
* The hitsound volume seems a bit high - I'd suggest reducing the hitsound volume of the whole map to about 70%. Could just be my settings, but it feels a bit out of whack compared to most maps. roger. but, Drum sampleset is small sound._. so, i changed 90→80% :3
* 00:52:687 (3,4,5,6,7) - This felt a bit awkward to play, but I'm not sure what you can do about it besides turning the repeat slider into more circles. For what it's worth, 01:33:687 (7,8,9) didn't bother me at all, so they're probably both fine. i hope this parts fine._.
* 01:09:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - This jump is awkwardly huge compared to the rest of the map - I understand it's supposed to be that way, but IMO it's still a bit much. I suggest you change it to something like this - it reduces the jump distance by about 20% while still looking nice, and I find it plays better too. fmm, this is harder jump part. but, It is not difficult if I catch flow, and enjoy part

Awesomeness:
* 01:14:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This pattern is really fun to play
* 01:42:187 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,etc.) - whoosh whoosh whoosh
* Pretty much everything after 01:58:187.
thanks you
It was a blast to play! Now I need to get better at streaming 240 BPM

thanks testplay and suggestion

Satellite

Beatmap Nominator

3,686 posts

Joined June 2012

Satellite 2013-04-02T22:48:47+00:00

こんにちは
From My queue

your request normal only

[Hibari's Normal]
01:34:562 (2,3) - リズムがとりづらいと思いました。２，３のnoteを１つのスライダーに変更することをお勧めします

lol

awesome diff~ no kudosu plz!
rank go~ ></

Kitsuneko

709 posts

Joined June 2010

Kitsuneko 2013-04-03T08:57:02+00:00

domodomo
modding from ＼( 'ω')／Kitsuneko's Modding Queue＼('ω' )／

General

ものすごい位置のブックマークが気になって仕方ないいらなければ消しちゃおう

Hibari's Normal

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

Nice

Mapping

00:16:187 (3,4,1) - (1)が中央で終わるように調整 00:15:187 (2)から動かす必要があるかも
01:54:187 (1) - 横直線部分が安直過ぎるかなカーブにしてみては
02:10:187 (2) - Good job

Niva's Hard

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

GOOD

Mapping

00:03:687 (6) - out of screen
00:13:937 (7) - 1grid down, try check to use Ctrl+J.
00:24:187 (1) - out of screen
00:30:187 (1) - move down a little
00:34:562 (2,3) - out of screen
00:40:062 (7) - out of screen
00:47:562 (6) - out of screen, down a little
01:01:937 (8) - out of screen
01:03:562 (8,9,1) - out of screen
01:05:937 (8) - out of screen
01:21:562 (5) - ^
01:22:562 (2) - out of screen
01:26:062 (7) - out of screen
01:29:562 (5) - out of screen
01:43:187 (2) - out of screen
01:47:187 (1) - out of screen
01:51:187 (1) - out of screen
01:54:187 (1) - out of screen
01:56:187 (1) - out of screen
02:12:937 (3) - out of screen

checked notes out from Edit screen, I could not be overlooked that.
(I try check with other screen resolution but same. Or rule was changed? I heard it is Unrankable.)
However, it easily fix since you're nice mapping style. just move some grids.
your map is pretty fun. Good job!

Insane

Setting

Clear

Hitsounding

00:36:062 (4) - Finishここじゃなくて00:36:187 (1) - だね
02:14:187 (1) - Soft finishのほうがいい感じ

Mapping

Unrankableなのは見つからなかったのでok

ひとまずこんなもんでした
Good luck

Black = suggestions. Does not mean that must be changed / Blue = recommend to change / Red = Unrankable issues

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