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Shulin wrote:

[General]

1. Make sure your red timing sections are the same for all difficulties! DONE
2. Try to keep kiai the same on all diffs! DONE
3. The difficulty names don't really tell me anything, it's hard to tell which is which.
4. Remove countdown and letterbox for taiko diffs. DONE
5. I think the ctb skin makes it really hard to play, I can barely tell when the hyperdash fruits are coming. It might just be me thought because I suck at ctb.
6. Your folder size is huge and it doesn't even have a video. You can convert "9Ozeivu".png to Jpeg because you don't need a 1.1mb BG. Also remove some of those combobursts, I don't think you need 15 of them. DONE
7. Comboburst-8, 13 and 15 are facing the wrong way, flip them horizontally. Comboburst-9 is just outright strange and doesn't work well, I'd just remove it. DONE
8. I find the skin very distracting, it's hard to look at especially doing kiai.
9. The SB pulse is pretty pointless imo and doesn't really add anything. Also delete pulsation_f from the main folder. DONE
10. Your slider tick is barely audible. Perhaps make it louder / use another. DONE
11. 01:32:679 - to 01:50:379 - Soft hitsounds fit best, the drum beat sounds weird on this part.

[Fluttershy]

1. Use slider tick rate 1? You can't even see some of the ticks with the present tick rate. DONE
2. A lot of these patterns are very linear, maybe try to think of some others?

DONE

00:21:881 (1,2,3,4) - Put this in the centre of the grid to make this pattern look better with the previous one? DONE
01:32:679 (1) - to 02:04:479 (3) - The constant 1/1 rhythm isn't very interesting here and the beat you use doesn't fit that well. I think it'd be better to follow the melody. DONE
03:00:279 (1) - This spinner feels too short for easy. Also you should use soft for it. DONE
03:02:679 (1,2,3) - Honestly, this part feels kinda pointless and doesn't follow much of a rhythm. I'd just remove it and maybe have a break. DONE

[Rarity]

1. The 1/2 slider overlaps are kinda ugly, especially things like 00:27:581 (4,5) - DONE
2. A lot of these patterns look very messy, sections like 01:09:881 - to 01:27:581 - for example look very messy you might want to try and tidy it up.

00:34:781 (4,5) - This looks ugly, I think it'd be better if you reverse selection and respaced. DONE
00:35:681 (6) - The extra return is kinda unexpected. DONE
01:27:881 (1) - The end is not snapped. DONE
02:32:679 (5,6) - This overlap is ugly and the extra return on 02:33:279 (6) - is kind of unexpected. DONE
02:43:479 (1,2) - Spacing? Too close. DONE
03:02:979 (1,2,3) - Like I said on the previous diff, this is kinda pointless. DONE

[KazukiSinx's Twilight Sparkle]

1. For some reason AIBat claims 01:31:479 - is unsnapped, you might want to resnap just to be sure.

01:39:579 (293,294,295) - This rhythm sounds really strange, 01:39:579 (293) - isn't following anything and it plays weird.
03:00:579 (1) - End earlier and have a note at 03:02:681 -

[Rainbow Dash]

1. The 100% volume on the kiai parts is way too loud. It started to give me a headache.
2. This one is kinda similar to your Rarity, you overlap 1/2s in the same way and even use the same patterns at times! I think it would be better to try and have more variation.

00:18:281 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hmm, I don't like this pattern, I don't think it plays very good. Seems you've used it a lot though. DONE
00:19:631 (1) - Remove NC DONE
00:39:881 (1,2,3) - This was confusing because the approach circles were kinda hard to read. I think it'd be better if you didn't stack this and spaced them apart so the player can read it. DONE
00:50:081 (6) - You could make a pattern instead of having so many returns here. DONE
01:19:481 (1,2,3,4) - This overlap is very ugly. Can you think of something else. DONE
01:21:881 (1,2,3) - ^ DONE
02:37:479 (1,2,3) - I think it would be better to space this. DONE


[Inori's Vinyl Scratch]

1. For some reason AIBat claims 01:31:479 - is unsnapped, you might want to resnap just to be sure.

Well a lot of the streams don't seem to fit to me, for example 00:18:881 (80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88) - but I can't really play this diff very well to judge.

[Pinkie Pie]

1. The 100% volume on the kiai parts is way too loud.
2. The spacing is very inconsistent, jumps like 00:37:481 (1) - seem to come out of nowhere and the slowdown spacing of parts like 00:38:681 DONE(1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - is strange. I also didn't like parts like 00:40:631 (5,6) - and 00:45:431 (6,7) - where it feels counter intuitive and doesn't play very well.
3. I think you could also work on trying to keep the patterns from being too linear. Things like 01:23:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - feel too angular and don't play well imo. DONE
4. I also think you overlap way to often and in a way that makes the map look ugly, for example 00:39:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - with this and the kiai flashing in my face coupled with the skin makes the map really annoying to play. DONE
5. I'd also recommend trying to vary the patterns slightly, you use the back and forth pattern like 01:11:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - too often imo. DONE
6. The section at 01:31:481 - to 02:09:879 - definitely feels overmapped and the normal sliderslide and volume just sounds plain bad. DONE

Well that's all. Sorry for the general mod, the song was really starting to grate. I hope some of it was helpful and good luck with this!

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1. AR should be (aka must, lol) the same as OD. Please change that and for questions refer to the Catch the Beat Rules/Guidelines
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2. 00:41:381 (3,5,6,7,8,1) - I personally dislike the huge distance between these fruits. Maybe lower them a bit and move them a bit closer to each other? It's just that it feels while playing a bit forced and outside of the flow imo (especially forward-back-forward of 7,8,1), just make it a bit softer/smoother to play. Kind of what LC said ._.
3. 01:08:681 (1,2,3,4) - Call it nutpicking if you want, but I enjoy this jump more if all notes are moved one to the middle (so 2,4 left; 1,3 right).
4. 01:14:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again I'd suggest to lower the distance a bit somehow bcs I dislike the jump from to 7, it feels so... uhm... "harsh". I mean, it's catchable and all but you don't need to bruteforce some jumps so they just play difficulty D:
5. 01:21:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This feels a bit outa place to play imo, especially the 8 - 9 - 10 jump feels... awkward (and to catch the sliders afterwards....mehh). I suggest to lower the distance (a bit).
6. 01:27:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - ... No, just no. Since the first time I played this, I disliked it very much and when I saw you changed even smth... noooooo, I defenetly don't like it. See by yourself what you want to apply:
   
   1. 01:27:881 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - These slider jumps... are boring, sry. I can understand two-circle slider jumps.. but four? They're just boring and the hyper dashes after them when you increase the distance.. just kill me of. It annoys me, as you can see^^"
   2. 01:29:156 (1,2,1,2) - To be discret I mean these hyper dashes @.@
   3. 01:30:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - I dislike these straight sliders... too.
      So, what do I suggest now? To make it all more curvey. Mostly I dislike the straightness of the sliders and how the jumps play imo. With a bit of curves you can make this much more smoother and (for me and prolly others as well, dunnw) more enjoyable to play. Otherwise it could be as well that it's just not my type of mapstyle on this, I like but others do, I just wanted to give you my opinion on this
7. 02:36:881 (4,5,6) - Mehh, lower the distance (imo) q,q ... so the 5 a bit to the right.
   
   That shall be it for now. I think I pointed out the most uncomfortable parts for me to play and I hope you'll use some of them as an inspiration. In general I can say about this map that you made a good job, but sometimes the balance between "easy, relaxing - oh my gawd" for an Overdose is a bit weird and off. Sometimes it's easy and you just relax a bit while playing and in the next moment you miss bcs the change is so fast (if you understand what I want to say). Anyways, I'm gonna see forward to see this ranked ^^

CLSW wrote:

Thanks for modding!

Most of parts fixed and remapped. http://puu.sh/2B2eD

Stefan wrote:

oh well

[Inori]

00:06:281 (5,6) - k d
00:07:481 (9,10) - k d
00:10:031 (20,21) - d k
00:10:781 (26,27,28) - ddk, dkd is awkward to play and doesn't fit well.
00:20:981 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddk kkk
00:29:081 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - On what are you mapped here? This part sounds more to use a Slider to tap to 1/4 (or you can make this part as real Stream).
00:34:181 (204,205,206) - ddk
00:35:081 (212,213,214) - kkd?

(I've copied these things from the previous Mod, if you already made them, fine)

01:10:181 (57,58,59,60,61) - This would work better if you remove 01:10:331 (58) and move (59,60,61) to this position.
01:12:281 (70,71,72) - This is.. weird. And imo a Flow breaker, the Big Dons/Kats aren't really presentating this part good. Please try something new here.
01:17:081 (106,107,108) - ^
01:19:781 (124,127) - k to emphasize the Music.
01:30:281 (191,193) - Uh didn't you add here a Finish too?

Click me for Suggestions

01:50:681 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - Uh.. you don't need to make it that long. 12-14 Circles in a row are enough.
02:02:981 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - Same here.

02:26:681 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - I want to see ddkk Player crying on this. Ohwait..
02:48:206 - Please remove this Line. such short Kiai Breaks aren't really wished to see.

Good Luck with the Mapset.

Mystyk wrote:

Here is my late mod4mod X_X sorry

Fluttershy:
00:24:281 (1,2) - this kind of stacking is ugly in my opinion, so try something else maybe?
example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/714951 - this way you don't have to change the position of (2) and distance is fine, but it's just an example -DONE
01:10:481 (1) - this sounds very weird here, and it's a bit early after the spinner, I think you should remove it, or at least place it on the big beats in the backgroun, so here 01:10:781 - -DONE
01:12:881 (2) - you placed this on the wrong tick, it should be on the red tick, it really sounds off like this, thus it is harder for players, because they hear the sound but you placed the beat NOT on the sound, so I suggest you something similar to this - http://puu.sh/2EcJL.jpg
01:15:281 (1) - same here, it should be like this - http://puu.sh/2EcPj.jpg
01:17:081 (1) - I don't understand why the slider ends here, because both the melody and the beats in the song are placed differently X_X so this - http://puu.sh/2EcSu.jpg - should be fine (of course you can try playing hit circles or one slider too, I'm just basically showing how it would fit the song)
01:22:481 (2) - same as mentioned before
01:24:881 (1) - ^
01:27:281 (2) - ^
03:05:756 - why did you put an inherited section here? it seems unnecessary for me, but you might have had a reason

Rarity:
Well I think this difficulty is too hard for a Normal, so I will treat it as a Hard diff...
00:35:081 (5,6) - this is confusing, in the melody I can still hear something, yet the repeat ends, moreover the next hit objects start in the opposite direction which makes it more confusing, so I think you should add one more repeat OR place the next slider in a different way, but you could also make 2 sliders out of one repeat slider...etc. -DONE
00:39:881 (5,6) - ^
00:45:881 (1,2) - this pattern could be nicer imo, but not necessary to change, maybe something like this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/715017 - so make it a blanket? -DONE
00:45:881 (1) - also, this shape would be nicer if you placed the second point of it a little bit downwards, so from this - http://puu.sh/2EdtC.jpg - to this --> http://puu.sh/2EdtY.jpg
01:11:081 (1,2) - same about the shape -DONE
01:17:081 (1,2) - please try to change this, the pattern itself is not nice in my opinion and you used to make them easily readable with nice blankets and better distance, so try to think of something else, or at least stack them properly, so move 01:17:531 (2) - one grid up -DONE
01:21:881 (1,2) - this is kind of ugly too, well it is alright, but you could make a better flow like this - http://puu.sh/2EdAC.jpg - because (1) would lead right into (2) and the sliders wouldn't be so close to each other, so it might look nicer -DONE
from 01:32:081 (1) until 01:50:681 - why not use soft sounds? it would sound better imo
02:32:681 (5,6) - same as mentioned at the beginning
02:37:481 (5,6) - ^
02:56:381 (4) - you should move this upwards because it doesn't look nice, since it's not stacked entirely
02:58:481 (2) - stack this properly (so move down one grid) -DONE

Rainbow Dash:
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - please try to avoid this, (3) is almost entirely hidden by the previous sliders and it doesn't look good, and it is also a bit confusing when playing -DONE
01:17:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:931 (2) - place this a little further from (1) to make it nicer, and you could just make a nice blanket here - http://puu.sh/2Ee0A.jpg -DONE
01:21:881 (1,2) - same as above -DONE
from 01:31:481 (1) - until 01:50:081 - use soft sounds?
02:27:881 (1) - use soft sampleset on this, because the sounds aren't loud, so normal hitsound doesn't fit so well
02:48:581 (2,3,4) - this was very confusing when I played, because the hitbursts hid the sliders, so I think you should try to place them differently, mainly these 02:48:881 (3,4) - -DONE
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - use soft sounds, since the song is not so loud anymore

Pinkie Pie:
00:09:881 (1) - to be honest the coundown was really annoying here, because it made it hard to see the note X_X -DONE
00:35:831 (6) - very small things, but why not rotate this a bit? - http://puu.sh/2Ees4.jpg - the pattern might look nicer like this imo :3 -DONE
00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - try to put them a bit further, so that they won't stack, like this - http://puu.sh/2Eeu3.jpg -DONE
this doesn't look nice - http://puu.sh/2EewI.jpg - so please stack them properly or, maybe try this? - http://puu.sh/2EeAO.jpg - it might look nicer
00:48:731 (3,4) - why does the distance change here? it is suddenly smaller than before, so put (4) a bit further -DONE
01:02:681 (1,2) - place these a little bit to the left, so (2) won't reach (3) -DONE
01:15:581 (3) - try to place this differently, it can be hardly seen -DONE
01:17:981 (3) - similar to the previous, it can be seen properly, but it doesn't look nice imo -DONE
01:52:481 - add hit circle? because of the melody, and because the upcoming 2 hit circles sound a bit random like this -DONE
01:54:881 - same as above -DONE
01:55:481 (1) - what about trying this? - http://puu.sh/2EeJr.jpg
02:33:431 (6) - I mentioned this before, rotate it? -DONE
and the things I mentioned afterwards, since it's copy pasted, not gonna mention again
02:51:881 (1,2,3,4) - place these further? so that they won't reach -DONE
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - try to use soft sampleset

Also, I would suggest you to add a Normal difficulty, because Rarity is too hard in my opinion, and look at this difficulty spread:


But try to ask others' opinion too.

Overall nice mapset, but this kind of song is not really my taste xD Good Luck!

1. I only mod standard so I skip Taiko and CTB .__.
2. 00:09:806 - this line should be at 00:09:881 in all difficulties; hard misses this line and insane has the correct one.

1. I treat this difficulty as Easy.
2. First of all, you seem like symmetry when making sliders, but most of the resultant sliders are not symmetric when I try to CTRL+H/J them. So, I think you may need to remake those sliders just using three points in order to make them symmetric.
   
   examples

   00:09:881 (1)
   00:14:681 (1,2) - pattern is not symmetric. You can try it using CTRL+H
   00:17:081 (3)
   01:51:881 (1)
   There are a lot more examples and you can figure them out yourself
3. 01:12:881 (2) - seems weird for me because there is no downbeat here but instead there are two at 01:12:731 and 01:13:181 respectively. So my suggestion is to put circles on these two timepoints or create a reversed slider like this.
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 01:15:281 (1) - this circle is quite weird too imo, there are six beats there from 01:14:981 to 01:15:731. And I don’t know why you choose this position to place a circle -x-
   My suggestion is as follows, the reason why I put like this is to resonance all downbeats there. This can decrease the difficulty too because newbies can follow the sliders more easily when there is no space in between compared a circle on the white tick.
   
   SPOILER

   
5. 01:19:481 (4,1) - same here too. I think moving those sliders towards and adding an additional slider and circle fits the music more imo and also NC because it is big white tick there. Here is my idea:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:22:481 (2) - same as 01:12:881 (2). So as the suggestion.
7. 01:24:881 (1) - similar to 01:19:481 (4,1)’s reason.
8. 01:27:281 (2) - same as 01:12:881 (2) and 01:22:481 (2)
9. 01:40:481 (5) - spacing changes within a combo color?
10. 01:41:681 (2) - ^
11. 01:42:281 (3,4,5) - Well, I suppose changing in slider velocity does not exist in easy difficulty -x- Newbies may easily miss these three sliders. But it fits the slowing-down music as before. So, I think this is okay
12. 01:51:881 (1) - symmetric?
13. 01:57:281 (3,4) - blanket?
14. 02:35:681 (3,5) - ^
15. 02:37:481 (6) - how about moving this to have same y-coordinates with 02:35:081 (2)? 02:35:081 (2,3,4,5,6) looks like an irregular pentagon and it looks ugly imo..
16. 02:42:281 (5,6,1) - move these three guys to the centre of the field because your whole map style is symmetry.
17. 02:45:281 (4) - ^
18. 02:54:881 (3,4,5) - 02:54:881 (3) - x=336, y=328; 02:55:481 (4) - x=336, y= 168; 02:56:081 (5) - x=256, y=40 so that (5) is on the central axis and position of 02:56:681 (1) remains unchanged

1. I treat this difficulty as Noraml.
2. AR=6? 5 is enough to match that high BPM and SV imo
   
   Requirements of normal

   HP Drain Rate: 5 or below
   Circle Size: 3 or 4
   Approach Rate: 5 or below
   Overall Difficulty: 5 or below
3. 00:19:931 (1) - there is no downbeat at the slider’s start. In fact, 00:19:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) all these should move 1/2 towards.
4. 00:27:881 (5) - I suppose this slider is far too difficult for a normal difficulty.. They won’t know when the slider is stopped because the silder is too short and blue ticks are seldom used in easy and normal difficulties.
5. 00:31:781 (1) - no space left between spinner and the next note. It is quite hard when players are still using mouse to play. They do not know where their cursors are after finishing the spinner.
6. 00:39:881 (5) - delete the extra node in between and make it perpendicular to 00:40:481 (6). The flow would be better imo.
7. 00:46:481 (2) - a same direction as 00:45:881 (1) seems better-looking. You can do this by CTRL+H
8. 01:09:881 (1,2,3) - first spacing problem. Second rhythm problem. There is a downbeat at 01:09:881 and several repeated 1/2 beats starting from 01:10:181 to 01:12:131. And now these three guys do not match the music. My suggestion is as follows:
9. 01:11:081 (1) needs to remove NC
   
   SPOILER

   
10. 01:12:281 (1,2,3) - please do not change spacing all of a sudden because this is just a normal difficulty D:
11. 01:14:681 (1,2,3) - the sliders do not match the music and my suggestion:
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:17:081 (1,2,3) - spacing
13. 01:19:481 (1,2,3) - ^ Also, doesn’t fit the music too. The solution is the same as that of 01:14:681 (1,2,3).
14. 01:21:881 (1,2,3) - spacing
15. 01:24:281 (1,2,3) - ^ Also, doesn’t fit the music too. The solution is the same as that of 01:14:681 (1,2,3).
16. 02:24:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - CTRL+H not symmetric and 02:25:181 (4,1) not on the central axis
17. 01:26:681 (1,2,3) - spacing
18. 02:29:381 (1) - same as 00:31:781 (1)
19. 02:30:881 (4,5) - spacing
20. 02:50:681 (1) - stack with 02:49:181 (3) for more tidy pattern
21. 02:53:081 (1) - ^
22. 02:56:681 (5,6,1,2,1,2) - spacing

1. I treat this difficulty as Hard.
2. NC is quite confused when compared to easy and normal imo. Try to have consistency among all difficulties.
   
   examples

   00:22:781 (11) - combo number as high as 11 or 00:23:681 (2) - as low as 2 only
   01:29:981 (11)
   How about solving this problem by unifying the beat number when you change combo?
3. 00:17:981 (2) - the flow is not good enough imo. I think something like this is better:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:19:931 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here u mix up the downbeats. They are all on the white tick but not red tick. So, move them 1/2 beat towards by clicking J twice in the editor.
5. 00:26:381 (8,1) - spacing
6. 01:09:881 (1) - not fit the music and is weird now. Suggestions:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 01:12:281 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 01:57:281 (2) - spacing
9. 02:21:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can use more circles like 02:19:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) so that the pace goes the same.
10. 03:00:281 (1) - ends the slider at 03:02:381 and add a circle at 03:02:681.

1. I treat this difficulty as Insane.
2. 00:14:681 (1) to 00:16:781 - they do not match music here. Suggestions:
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:19:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - the downbeat is on white ticks and sliders’ heads can better resonance this instead of sliders’ ends. So, moving the circle at 00:19:481 (1) to 00:20:681 and move those sliders towards like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:21:881 (8,1,2,3,4) - same problem and suggestion as the above one.
5. 00:23:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same but the suggestion here is like this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:25:181 (6,7,8,9) - this sounds weird and the downbeat is on 00:25:481. Triplets are not suitable here. Suggestion:
   
   SPOILER

   
7. 00:25:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Normally, sliders won’t start on red tick but white tick. So, you can consider changing this by deleting
8. 00:25:481 (9) and moving them towards and add a circle at 00:26:681.
9. 01:36:281 - claps do not match here imo. And normally, they are placed at the 2nd and 4th white tick within a beat, but not red tick. So, 01:37:631 (5) and 01:43:031 (8)‘s clap is weird imo.
10. 01:48:281 (7) - spacing and not symmetric enough (CTRL+J)
    01:54:281 (4,5) - switching these two’s position. Slider starts on red tick is definitely not good enough. That clap placing at the slider’s start is also weird.
11. 02:01:481 (4,5) - ^
12. 02:03:881 (4,5) - ^
13. 02:07:481 (4) - using a long slider is better to fit the music here than using just a circle.
14. 02:51:281 (5,2) - stack the circle and the slider’s end together.
15. 03:00:281 (1) - ends the slider at 03:02:381 and add a circle at 03:02:681.

• General

1. All timings are on beats and it's perfect
2. Very nice pattern here and there, I like it
3. Very good map, the song is addicting lol

• Fluttershy

1. well at first I couldn't find anything to mod here, but after some repeats I found 01:16:481 (3) - Move the slider end to x:116 y:140, more linear with the (4) slider afterward

• Rarity

1. 01:22:331 (2) - move it to x:192 y:208 to stack with the 3 maybe?
2. 01:26:381 (4) - move it to x: 228 y:56 to avoid blanketing with the (2) slider afterward, it also makes another pattern with the previous circles lol
3. 02:40:781 (7) - move it to x:64 y:148 to make it more symmetrical
4. 02:48:881 (1) - move it to x:336 y:80 to stack with the (5) circle afterwards

• Rainbow Dash

1. well, nice difficulties. Can't find anything to mod, but I guess this can help 00:23:231 (5) - move it to x:232 y:208 to make it stack with the previous (3) circle

• Pinkie Pie

1. sorry I can't really mod insane difficulties but I hope this can help, 00:40:931 (6) - move it to x:256 y:240 to make it stack with (3) circle afterwards and make the jump less confusing

AnreFM wrote:

Hello, I'll try to mod this, I hope this helps
Sorry if it doesn't, feel free to object
I can only mod osu standard sorry

• General

1. All timings are on beats and it's perfect
2. Very nice pattern here and there, I like it
3. Very good map, the song is addicting lol

• Fluttershy

1. well at first I couldn't find anything to mod here, but after some repeats I found 01:16:481 (3) - Move the slider end to x:116 y:140, more linear with the (4) slider afterward

• Rarity

1. 01:22:331 (2) - move it to x:192 y:208 to stack with the 3 maybe?
2. 01:26:381 (4) - move it to x: 228 y:56 to avoid blanketing with the (2) slider afterward, it also makes another pattern with the previous circles lol
3. 02:40:781 (7) - move it to x:64 y:148 to make it more symmetrical
4. 02:48:881 (1) - move it to x:336 y:80 to stack with the (5) circle afterwards

• Rainbow Dash

1. well, nice difficulties. Can't find anything to mod, but I guess this can help 00:23:231 (5) - move it to x:232 y:208 to make it stack with the previous (3) circle

• Pinkie Pie

1. sorry I can't really mod insane difficulties but I hope this can help, 00:40:931 (6) - move it to x:256 y:240 to make it stack with (3) circle afterwards and make the jump less confusing

Well, I guess that's all, I hope it helps you, and I'm sorry if it doesn't
Anyway, good luck

• Timing is perfect to me.
  Nice skin
  Also,hitsounds are really nice.
  But I think many sliders don't seem natural, especially the s-shaped ones. Generally you use only 4 points to create a s-shaped slider, when it's a large slider, the shape seems awkward.
  Here is an exemple of my slider:
  http://puu.sh/2K9Sc.jpg
  

  108,356,125081,6,0,B|192:320|200:192|124:192|48:192|56:64|140:28,1,400,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

  (in Pinkie Pie diff, replacing 02:05:081 (1) - )
  which I think is better, and is also perfectly symetric.

• Rythmn is good~

1. 01:51:881 (3,4) - 01:54:281 (3,4) - ...
   Those sliders are too close to me, and i think short sliders should be less twisted then that..
   Overall it's pretty good.

1. You can fix the countdown by putting the first green line (inherited section) on the second note, like this:
   http://puu.sh/2Keti.png
2. 00:34:781 (4) - this is too offscreen, not having the same distance with 00:33:881 (1,3) - , and not parallel. In this case you should copy and paste the previous sliders.
3. 02:32:381 (4) - ^
4. 02:26:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is not smooth, i suggest that you use:
   

   256,308,146681,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   212,284,146756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   194,239,146831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   212,193,146906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,168,146981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   298,143,147056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   317,98,147131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   300,52,147206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,28,147281,5,0,0:0:0:0:
   211,52,147356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   194,98,147431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   213,143,147506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   256,168,147581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   299,193,147656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   317,239,147731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
   299,284,147806,1,0,0:0:0:0:

   to replace them.
   Effect: http://puu.sh/2Kgez.jpg
5. 02:38:681 (1) - I think this new combo note is too far away... you can start from the left
6. 01:26:681 (1,2,3) - This is banal...can you think of a new way to place them?
7. In this diff the purple combo color is too close to the background color, I can barely see the approche circle..
8. My general opinion towards this diff is: you should try harder to put things apart, like this 02:48:431 (2) - and also try to make things more relevant to each other

Nymph wrote:

well map is pretty good for a new mapper however I would like to see if this map can still be better in the future so I think I will not mod in details this time. have some stars from me for support

Don Omar wrote:

[CTB]

hp drain -> 6 (some moments are very failable)
00:18:281 - move to x=480 (to make it a bit harder but still passable though) fixed
00:28:331 - x=160
00:28:556 - x=120
00:44:831; 00:45:131 - x=56 (hypers are more suitable here) fixed

map is really impressive but skin is pretty unplayable got used to it