Very niceCLSW wrote:
Thanks for modding!
Most of parts fixed and remapped. http://puu.sh/2B2eD
Updating it this afternoon
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Whitetail - Pinkie Pie Theme [CatchTheBeat|Osu|Taiko]
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Updating it this afternoon
oh well
[Inori]
00:06:281 (5,6) - k d
00:07:481 (9,10) - k d
00:10:031 (20,21) - d k
00:10:781 (26,27,28) - ddk, dkd is awkward to play and doesn't fit well.
00:20:981 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddk kkk
00:29:081 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - On what are you mapped here? This part sounds more to use a Slider to tap to 1/4 (or you can make this part as real Stream).
00:34:181 (204,205,206) - ddk
00:35:081 (212,213,214) - kkd?
(I've copied these things from the previous Mod, if you already made them, fine)
01:10:181 (57,58,59,60,61) - This would work better if you remove 01:10:331 (58) and move (59,60,61) to this position.
01:12:281 (70,71,72) - This is.. weird. And imo a Flow breaker, the Big Dons/Kats aren't really presentating this part good. Please try something new here.
01:17:081 (106,107,108) - ^
01:19:781 (124,127) - k to emphasize the Music.
01:30:281 (191,193) - Uh didn't you add here a Finish too?
Ohwait..
02:48:206 - Please remove this Line. such short Kiai Breaks aren't really wished to see.
Good Luck with the Mapset.
[Inori]
00:06:281 (5,6) - k d
00:07:481 (9,10) - k d
00:10:031 (20,21) - d k
00:10:781 (26,27,28) - ddk, dkd is awkward to play and doesn't fit well.
00:20:981 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddk kkk
00:29:081 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - On what are you mapped here? This part sounds more to use a Slider to tap to 1/4 (or you can make this part as real Stream).
00:34:181 (204,205,206) - ddk
00:35:081 (212,213,214) - kkd?
(I've copied these things from the previous Mod, if you already made them, fine)
01:10:181 (57,58,59,60,61) - This would work better if you remove 01:10:331 (58) and move (59,60,61) to this position.
01:12:281 (70,71,72) - This is.. weird. And imo a Flow breaker, the Big Dons/Kats aren't really presentating this part good. Please try something new here.
01:17:081 (106,107,108) - ^
01:19:781 (124,127) - k to emphasize the Music.
01:30:281 (191,193) - Uh didn't you add here a Finish too?
Click me for Suggestions
02:26:681 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - I want to see ddkk Player crying on this. 01:50:681 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - Uh.. you don't need to make it that long. 12-14 Circles in a row are enough. 
02:02:981 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - Same here.
02:02:981 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - Same here.
Ohwait..02:48:206 - Please remove this Line. such short Kiai Breaks aren't really wished to see.
Good Luck with the Mapset.
I may just remap the entire difficulty.Stefan wrote:
oh well
[Inori]
00:06:281 (5,6) - k d
00:07:481 (9,10) - k d
00:10:031 (20,21) - d k
00:10:781 (26,27,28) - ddk, dkd is awkward to play and doesn't fit well.
00:20:981 (99,100,101,102,103,104) - ddk kkk
00:29:081 (168,169,170,171,172,173,174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181) - On what are you mapped here? This part sounds more to use a Slider to tap to 1/4 (or you can make this part as real Stream).
00:34:181 (204,205,206) - ddk
00:35:081 (212,213,214) - kkd?
(I've copied these things from the previous Mod, if you already made them, fine)
01:10:181 (57,58,59,60,61) - This would work better if you remove 01:10:331 (58) and move (59,60,61) to this position.
01:12:281 (70,71,72) - This is.. weird. And imo a Flow breaker, the Big Dons/Kats aren't really presentating this part good. Please try something new here.
01:17:081 (106,107,108) - ^
01:19:781 (124,127) - k to emphasize the Music.
01:30:281 (191,193) - Uh didn't you add here a Finish too?Click me for Suggestions02:26:681 (124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140) - I want to see ddkk Player crying on this.01:50:681 (243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279,280,281,282,283,284,285,286,287,288,289,290,291,292,293,294,295,296,297,298,299,300,301,302,303,304,305,306,307) - Uh.. you don't need to make it that long. 12-14 Circles in a row are enough.
02:02:981 (322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344,345,346,347,348,349,350,351,352,353,354,355,356,357,358,359,360,361,362,363,364,365,366,367,368) - Same here.
02:48:206 - Please remove this Line. such short Kiai Breaks aren't really wished to see.
Good Luck with the Mapset.
Ever since this map I've improved my mapping style immensely.
Here is my late mod4mod X_X sorry
Fluttershy:
00:24:281 (1,2) - this kind of stacking is ugly in my opinion, so try something else maybe?
example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/714951 - this way you don't have to change the position of (2) and distance is fine, but it's just an example
01:10:481 (1) - this sounds very weird here, and it's a bit early after the spinner, I think you should remove it, or at least place it on the big beats in the backgroun, so here 01:10:781 -
01:12:881 (2) - you placed this on the wrong tick, it should be on the red tick, it really sounds off like this, thus it is harder for players, because they hear the sound but you placed the beat NOT on the sound, so I suggest you something similar to this - http://puu.sh/2EcJL.jpg
01:15:281 (1) - same here, it should be like this - http://puu.sh/2EcPj.jpg
01:17:081 (1) - I don't understand why the slider ends here, because both the melody and the beats in the song are placed differently X_X so this - http://puu.sh/2EcSu.jpg - should be fine (of course you can try playing hit circles or one slider too, I'm just basically showing how it would fit the song)
01:22:481 (2) - same as mentioned before
01:24:881 (1) - ^
01:27:281 (2) - ^
03:05:756 - why did you put an inherited section here? it seems unnecessary for me, but you might have had a reason
Rarity:
Well I think this difficulty is too hard for a Normal, so I will treat it as a Hard diff...
00:35:081 (5,6) - this is confusing, in the melody I can still hear something, yet the repeat ends, moreover the next hit objects start in the opposite direction which makes it more confusing, so I think you should add one more repeat OR place the next slider in a different way, but you could also make 2 sliders out of one repeat slider...etc.
00:39:881 (5,6) - ^
00:45:881 (1,2) - this pattern could be nicer imo, but not necessary to change, maybe something like this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/715017 - so make it a blanket?
00:45:881 (1) - also, this shape would be nicer if you placed the second point of it a little bit downwards, so from this - http://puu.sh/2EdtC.jpg - to this --> http://puu.sh/2EdtY.jpg
01:11:081 (1,2) - same about the shape
01:17:081 (1,2) - please try to change this, the pattern itself is not nice in my opinion and you used to make them easily readable with nice blankets and better distance, so try to think of something else, or at least stack them properly, so move 01:17:531 (2) - one grid up
01:21:881 (1,2) - this is kind of ugly too, well it is alright, but you could make a better flow like this - http://puu.sh/2EdAC.jpg - because (1) would lead right into (2) and the sliders wouldn't be so close to each other, so it might look nicer
from 01:32:081 (1) until 01:50:681 - why not use soft sounds? it would sound better imo
02:32:681 (5,6) - same as mentioned at the beginning
02:37:481 (5,6) - ^
02:56:381 (4) - you should move this upwards because it doesn't look nice, since it's not stacked entirely
02:58:481 (2) - stack this properly (so move down one grid)
Rainbow Dash:
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - please try to avoid this, (3) is almost entirely hidden by the previous sliders and it doesn't look good, and it is also a bit confusing when playing
01:17:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:931 (2) - place this a little further from (1) to make it nicer, and you could just make a nice blanket here - http://puu.sh/2Ee0A.jpg
01:21:881 (1,2) - same as above
from 01:31:481 (1) - until 01:50:081 - use soft sounds?
02:27:881 (1) - use soft sampleset on this, because the sounds aren't loud, so normal hitsound doesn't fit so well
02:48:581 (2,3,4) - this was very confusing when I played, because the hitbursts hid the sliders, so I think you should try to place them differently, mainly these 02:48:881 (3,4) -
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - use soft sounds, since the song is not so loud anymore
Pinkie Pie:
00:09:881 (1) - to be honest the coundown was really annoying here, because it made it hard to see the note X_X
00:35:831 (6) - very small things, but why not rotate this a bit? - http://puu.sh/2Ees4.jpg - the pattern might look nicer like this imo :3
00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - try to put them a bit further, so that they won't stack, like this - http://puu.sh/2Eeu3.jpg
this doesn't look nice - http://puu.sh/2EewI.jpg - so please stack them properly or, maybe try this? - http://puu.sh/2EeAO.jpg - it might look nicer
00:48:731 (3,4) - why does the distance change here? it is suddenly smaller than before, so put (4) a bit further
01:02:681 (1,2) - place these a little bit to the left, so (2) won't reach (3)
01:15:581 (3) - try to place this differently, it can be hardly seen
01:17:981 (3) - similar to the previous, it can be seen properly, but it doesn't look nice imo
01:52:481 - add hit circle? because of the melody, and because the upcoming 2 hit circles sound a bit random like this
01:54:881 - same as above
01:55:481 (1) - what about trying this? - http://puu.sh/2EeJr.jpg
02:33:431 (6) - I mentioned this before, rotate it?
and the things I mentioned afterwards, since it's copy pasted, not gonna mention again
02:51:881 (1,2,3,4) - place these further? so that they won't reach
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - try to use soft sampleset
Also, I would suggest you to add a Normal difficulty, because Rarity is too hard in my opinion, and look at this difficulty spread:
But try to ask others' opinion too.
Overall nice mapset, but this kind of song is not really my taste xD Good Luck!
Fluttershy:
00:24:281 (1,2) - this kind of stacking is ugly in my opinion, so try something else maybe?
example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/714951 - this way you don't have to change the position of (2) and distance is fine, but it's just an example
01:10:481 (1) - this sounds very weird here, and it's a bit early after the spinner, I think you should remove it, or at least place it on the big beats in the backgroun, so here 01:10:781 -
01:12:881 (2) - you placed this on the wrong tick, it should be on the red tick, it really sounds off like this, thus it is harder for players, because they hear the sound but you placed the beat NOT on the sound, so I suggest you something similar to this - http://puu.sh/2EcJL.jpg
01:15:281 (1) - same here, it should be like this - http://puu.sh/2EcPj.jpg
01:17:081 (1) - I don't understand why the slider ends here, because both the melody and the beats in the song are placed differently X_X so this - http://puu.sh/2EcSu.jpg - should be fine (of course you can try playing hit circles or one slider too, I'm just basically showing how it would fit the song)
01:22:481 (2) - same as mentioned before
01:24:881 (1) - ^
01:27:281 (2) - ^
03:05:756 - why did you put an inherited section here? it seems unnecessary for me, but you might have had a reason
Rarity:
Well I think this difficulty is too hard for a Normal, so I will treat it as a Hard diff...
00:35:081 (5,6) - this is confusing, in the melody I can still hear something, yet the repeat ends, moreover the next hit objects start in the opposite direction which makes it more confusing, so I think you should add one more repeat OR place the next slider in a different way, but you could also make 2 sliders out of one repeat slider...etc.
00:39:881 (5,6) - ^
00:45:881 (1,2) - this pattern could be nicer imo, but not necessary to change, maybe something like this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/715017 - so make it a blanket?
00:45:881 (1) - also, this shape would be nicer if you placed the second point of it a little bit downwards, so from this - http://puu.sh/2EdtC.jpg - to this --> http://puu.sh/2EdtY.jpg
01:11:081 (1,2) - same about the shape
01:17:081 (1,2) - please try to change this, the pattern itself is not nice in my opinion and you used to make them easily readable with nice blankets and better distance, so try to think of something else, or at least stack them properly, so move 01:17:531 (2) - one grid up
01:21:881 (1,2) - this is kind of ugly too, well it is alright, but you could make a better flow like this - http://puu.sh/2EdAC.jpg - because (1) would lead right into (2) and the sliders wouldn't be so close to each other, so it might look nicer
from 01:32:081 (1) until 01:50:681 - why not use soft sounds? it would sound better imo
02:32:681 (5,6) - same as mentioned at the beginning
02:37:481 (5,6) - ^
02:56:381 (4) - you should move this upwards because it doesn't look nice, since it's not stacked entirely
02:58:481 (2) - stack this properly (so move down one grid)
Rainbow Dash:
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - please try to avoid this, (3) is almost entirely hidden by the previous sliders and it doesn't look good, and it is also a bit confusing when playing
01:17:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:931 (2) - place this a little further from (1) to make it nicer, and you could just make a nice blanket here - http://puu.sh/2Ee0A.jpg
01:21:881 (1,2) - same as above
from 01:31:481 (1) - until 01:50:081 - use soft sounds?
02:27:881 (1) - use soft sampleset on this, because the sounds aren't loud, so normal hitsound doesn't fit so well
02:48:581 (2,3,4) - this was very confusing when I played, because the hitbursts hid the sliders, so I think you should try to place them differently, mainly these 02:48:881 (3,4) -
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - use soft sounds, since the song is not so loud anymore
Pinkie Pie:
00:09:881 (1) - to be honest the coundown was really annoying here, because it made it hard to see the note X_X
00:35:831 (6) - very small things, but why not rotate this a bit? - http://puu.sh/2Ees4.jpg - the pattern might look nicer like this imo :3
00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - try to put them a bit further, so that they won't stack, like this - http://puu.sh/2Eeu3.jpg
this doesn't look nice - http://puu.sh/2EewI.jpg - so please stack them properly or, maybe try this? - http://puu.sh/2EeAO.jpg - it might look nicer
00:48:731 (3,4) - why does the distance change here? it is suddenly smaller than before, so put (4) a bit further
01:02:681 (1,2) - place these a little bit to the left, so (2) won't reach (3)
01:15:581 (3) - try to place this differently, it can be hardly seen
01:17:981 (3) - similar to the previous, it can be seen properly, but it doesn't look nice imo
01:52:481 - add hit circle? because of the melody, and because the upcoming 2 hit circles sound a bit random like this
01:54:881 - same as above
01:55:481 (1) - what about trying this? - http://puu.sh/2EeJr.jpg
02:33:431 (6) - I mentioned this before, rotate it?
and the things I mentioned afterwards, since it's copy pasted, not gonna mention again
02:51:881 (1,2,3,4) - place these further? so that they won't reach
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - try to use soft sampleset
Also, I would suggest you to add a Normal difficulty, because Rarity is too hard in my opinion, and look at this difficulty spread:
But try to ask others' opinion too.
Overall nice mapset, but this kind of song is not really my taste xD Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Mystyk wrote:
Here is my late mod4mod X_X sorry
Fluttershy:
00:24:281 (1,2) - this kind of stacking is ugly in my opinion, so try something else maybe?
example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/714951 - this way you don't have to change the position of (2) and distance is fine, but it's just an example -DONE
01:10:481 (1) - this sounds very weird here, and it's a bit early after the spinner, I think you should remove it, or at least place it on the big beats in the backgroun, so here 01:10:781 - -DONE
01:12:881 (2) - you placed this on the wrong tick, it should be on the red tick, it really sounds off like this, thus it is harder for players, because they hear the sound but you placed the beat NOT on the sound, so I suggest you something similar to this - http://puu.sh/2EcJL.jpg
01:15:281 (1) - same here, it should be like this - http://puu.sh/2EcPj.jpg
01:17:081 (1) - I don't understand why the slider ends here, because both the melody and the beats in the song are placed differently X_X so this - http://puu.sh/2EcSu.jpg - should be fine (of course you can try playing hit circles or one slider too, I'm just basically showing how it would fit the song)
01:22:481 (2) - same as mentioned before
01:24:881 (1) - ^
01:27:281 (2) - ^
03:05:756 - why did you put an inherited section here? it seems unnecessary for me, but you might have had a reason
Rarity:
Well I think this difficulty is too hard for a Normal, so I will treat it as a Hard diff...
00:35:081 (5,6) - this is confusing, in the melody I can still hear something, yet the repeat ends, moreover the next hit objects start in the opposite direction which makes it more confusing, so I think you should add one more repeat OR place the next slider in a different way, but you could also make 2 sliders out of one repeat slider...etc. -DONE
00:39:881 (5,6) - ^
00:45:881 (1,2) - this pattern could be nicer imo, but not necessary to change, maybe something like this? - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/715017 - so make it a blanket? -DONE
00:45:881 (1) - also, this shape would be nicer if you placed the second point of it a little bit downwards, so from this - http://puu.sh/2EdtC.jpg - to this --> http://puu.sh/2EdtY.jpg
01:11:081 (1,2) - same about the shape
01:17:081 (1,2) - please try to change this, the pattern itself is not nice in my opinion and you used to make them easily readable with nice blankets and better distance, so try to think of something else, or at least stack them properly, so move 01:17:531 (2) - one grid up -DONE
01:21:881 (1,2) - this is kind of ugly too, well it is alright, but you could make a better flow like this - http://puu.sh/2EdAC.jpg - because (1) would lead right into (2) and the sliders wouldn't be so close to each other, so it might look nicer
from 01:32:081 (1) until 01:50:681 - why not use soft sounds? it would sound better imo
02:32:681 (5,6) - same as mentioned at the beginning
02:37:481 (5,6) - ^
02:56:381 (4) - you should move this upwards because it doesn't look nice, since it's not stacked entirely
02:58:481 (2) - stack this properly (so move down one grid) -DONE
Rainbow Dash:
01:14:681 (1,2,3) - please try to avoid this, (3) is almost entirely hidden by the previous sliders and it doesn't look good, and it is also a bit confusing when playing -DONE
01:17:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:19:931 (2) - place this a little further from (1) to make it nicer, and you could just make a nice blanket here - http://puu.sh/2Ee0A.jpg -DONE
01:21:881 (1,2) - same as above -DONE
from 01:31:481 (1) - until 01:50:081 - use soft sounds?
02:27:881 (1) - use soft sampleset on this, because the sounds aren't loud, so normal hitsound doesn't fit so well
02:48:581 (2,3,4) - this was very confusing when I played, because the hitbursts hid the sliders, so I think you should try to place them differently, mainly these 02:48:881 (3,4) - -DONE
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - use soft sounds, since the song is not so loud anymore
Pinkie Pie:
00:09:881 (1) - to be honest the coundown was really annoying here, because it made it hard to see the note X_X -DONE
00:35:831 (6) - very small things, but why not rotate this a bit? - http://puu.sh/2Ees4.jpg - the pattern might look nicer like this imo :3 -DONE
00:45:881 (1,2,3,4) - try to put them a bit further, so that they won't stack, like this - http://puu.sh/2Eeu3.jpg -DONE
this doesn't look nice - http://puu.sh/2EewI.jpg - so please stack them properly or, maybe try this? - http://puu.sh/2EeAO.jpg - it might look nicer
00:48:731 (3,4) - why does the distance change here? it is suddenly smaller than before, so put (4) a bit further -DONE
01:02:681 (1,2) - place these a little bit to the left, so (2) won't reach (3) -DONE
01:15:581 (3) - try to place this differently, it can be hardly seen -DONE
01:17:981 (3) - similar to the previous, it can be seen properly, but it doesn't look nice imo -DONE
01:52:481 - add hit circle? because of the melody, and because the upcoming 2 hit circles sound a bit random like this -DONE
01:54:881 - same as above -DONE
01:55:481 (1) - what about trying this? - http://puu.sh/2EeJr.jpg
02:33:431 (6) - I mentioned this before, rotate it? -DONE
and the things I mentioned afterwards, since it's copy pasted, not gonna mention again
02:51:881 (1,2,3,4) - place these further? so that they won't reach -DONE
03:02:981 (1,2,3) - try to use soft sampleset
Also, I would suggest you to add a Normal difficulty, because Rarity is too hard in my opinion, and look at this difficulty spread:
But try to ask others' opinion too.
Overall nice mapset, but this kind of song is not really my taste xD Good Luck!
Sorry for my late reply ._.
[General]
[General]
- I only mod standard so I skip Taiko and CTB .__.
- 00:09:806 - this line should be at 00:09:881 in all difficulties; hard misses this line and insane has the correct one.
- I treat this difficulty as Easy.
- First of all, you seem like symmetry when making sliders, but most of the resultant sliders are not symmetric when I try to CTRL+H/J them. So, I think you may need to remake those sliders just using three points in order to make them symmetric.examples00:09:881 (1)
00:14:681 (1,2) - pattern is not symmetric. You can try it using CTRL+H
00:17:081 (3)
01:51:881 (1)
There are a lot more examples and you can figure them out yourself
- 01:12:881 (2) - seems weird for me because there is no downbeat here but instead there are two at 01:12:731 and 01:13:181 respectively. So my suggestion is to put circles on these two timepoints or create a reversed slider like this.
- 01:15:281 (1) - this circle is quite weird too imo, there are six beats there from 01:14:981 to 01:15:731. And I don’t know why you choose this position to place a circle -x-
My suggestion is as follows, the reason why I put like this is to resonance all downbeats there. This can decrease the difficulty too because newbies can follow the sliders more easily when there is no space in between compared a circle on the white tick. - 01:19:481 (4,1) - same here too. I think moving those sliders towards and adding an additional slider and circle fits the music more imo and also NC because it is big white tick there. Here is my idea:
- 01:22:481 (2) - same as 01:12:881 (2). So as the suggestion.
- 01:24:881 (1) - similar to 01:19:481 (4,1)’s reason.
- 01:27:281 (2) - same as 01:12:881 (2) and 01:22:481 (2)
- 01:40:481 (5) - spacing changes within a combo color?
- 01:41:681 (2) - ^
- 01:42:281 (3,4,5) - Well, I suppose changing in slider velocity does not exist in easy difficulty -x- Newbies may easily miss these three sliders. But it fits the slowing-down music as before. So, I think this is okay
- 01:51:881 (1) - symmetric?
- 01:57:281 (3,4) - blanket?
- 02:35:681 (3,5) - ^
- 02:37:481 (6) - how about moving this to have same y-coordinates with 02:35:081 (2)? 02:35:081 (2,3,4,5,6) looks like an irregular pentagon and it looks ugly imo..
- 02:42:281 (5,6,1) - move these three guys to the centre of the field because your whole map style is symmetry.
- 02:45:281 (4) - ^
- 02:54:881 (3,4,5) - 02:54:881 (3) - x=336, y=328; 02:55:481 (4) - x=336, y= 168; 02:56:081 (5) - x=256, y=40 so that (5) is on the central axis and position of 02:56:681 (1) remains unchanged
- I treat this difficulty as Noraml.
- AR=6? 5 is enough to match that high BPM and SV imoRequirements of normalHP Drain Rate: 5 or below
Circle Size: 3 or 4
Approach Rate: 5 or below
Overall Difficulty: 5 or below - 00:19:931 (1) - there is no downbeat at the slider’s start. In fact, 00:19:931 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) all these should move 1/2 towards.
- 00:27:881 (5) - I suppose this slider is far too difficult for a normal difficulty.. They won’t know when the slider is stopped because the silder is too short and blue ticks are seldom used in easy and normal difficulties.
- 00:31:781 (1) - no space left between spinner and the next note. It is quite hard when players are still using mouse to play. They do not know where their cursors are after finishing the spinner.
- 00:39:881 (5) - delete the extra node in between and make it perpendicular to 00:40:481 (6). The flow would be better imo.
- 00:46:481 (2) - a same direction as 00:45:881 (1) seems better-looking. You can do this by CTRL+H
- 01:09:881 (1,2,3) - first spacing problem. Second rhythm problem. There is a downbeat at 01:09:881 and several repeated 1/2 beats starting from 01:10:181 to 01:12:131. And now these three guys do not match the music. My suggestion is as follows:
- 01:11:081 (1) needs to remove NC
- 01:12:281 (1,2,3) - please do not change spacing all of a sudden because this is just a normal difficulty D:
- 01:14:681 (1,2,3) - the sliders do not match the music and my suggestion:
- 01:17:081 (1,2,3) - spacing
- 01:19:481 (1,2,3) - ^ Also, doesn’t fit the music too. The solution is the same as that of 01:14:681 (1,2,3).
- 01:21:881 (1,2,3) - spacing
- 01:24:281 (1,2,3) - ^ Also, doesn’t fit the music too. The solution is the same as that of 01:14:681 (1,2,3).
- 02:24:281 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - CTRL+H not symmetric and 02:25:181 (4,1) not on the central axis
- 01:26:681 (1,2,3) - spacing
- 02:29:381 (1) - same as 00:31:781 (1)
- 02:30:881 (4,5) - spacing
- 02:50:681 (1) - stack with 02:49:181 (3) for more tidy pattern
- 02:53:081 (1) - ^
- 02:56:681 (5,6,1,2,1,2) - spacing
- I treat this difficulty as Hard.
- NC is quite confused when compared to easy and normal imo. Try to have consistency among all difficulties.examples00:22:781 (11) - combo number as high as 11 or 00:23:681 (2) - as low as 2 only
01:29:981 (11)
How about solving this problem by unifying the beat number when you change combo? - 00:17:981 (2) - the flow is not good enough imo. I think something like this is better:
- 00:19:931 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - here u mix up the downbeats. They are all on the white tick but not red tick. So, move them 1/2 beat towards by clicking J twice in the editor.
- 00:26:381 (8,1) - spacing
- 01:09:881 (1) - not fit the music and is weird now. Suggestions:
- 01:12:281 (1,2,3) - ^
- 01:57:281 (2) - spacing
- 02:21:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - can use more circles like 02:19:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) so that the pace goes the same.
- 03:00:281 (1) - ends the slider at 03:02:381 and add a circle at 03:02:681.
- I treat this difficulty as Insane.
- 00:14:681 (1) to 00:16:781 - they do not match music here. Suggestions:
- 00:19:481 (1,2,3,4,5) - the downbeat is on white ticks and sliders’ heads can better resonance this instead of sliders’ ends. So, moving the circle at 00:19:481 (1) to 00:20:681 and move those sliders towards like this:
- 00:21:881 (8,1,2,3,4) - same problem and suggestion as the above one.
- 00:23:231 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same but the suggestion here is like this:
- 00:25:181 (6,7,8,9) - this sounds weird and the downbeat is on 00:25:481. Triplets are not suitable here. Suggestion:
- 00:25:631 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Normally, sliders won’t start on red tick but white tick. So, you can consider changing this by deleting
- 00:25:481 (9) and moving them towards and add a circle at 00:26:681.
- 01:36:281 - claps do not match here imo. And normally, they are placed at the 2nd and 4th white tick within a beat, but not red tick. So, 01:37:631 (5) and 01:43:031 (8)‘s clap is weird imo.
- 01:48:281 (7) - spacing and not symmetric enough (CTRL+J)
01:54:281 (4,5) - switching these two’s position. Slider starts on red tick is definitely not good enough. That clap placing at the slider’s start is also weird. - 02:01:481 (4,5) - ^
- 02:03:881 (4,5) - ^
- 02:07:481 (4) - using a long slider is better to fit the music here than using just a circle.
- 02:51:281 (5,2) - stack the circle and the slider’s end together.
- 03:00:281 (1) - ends the slider at 03:02:381 and add a circle at 03:02:681.
[General]
comboburst should be rename like comboburst-0 comboburst-1 etc, your current file name starts from 6 and end to 15 orz
most of the cursortrail.png size are 51*51, current one is 56 56 I am not sure if this bothers but maybe better to fix it
ehh I am sorry but I think the CTB skin is not good because it's little awkward in reading patterns while playing. besides, seems the fruit images are cutted off on the edge, that really feel weird imo
spinner-approachcircle.png should be 390*390,current one is 410 410
[Fluttershy]
00:09:881 (1) - try to make the slider perfectly Symmetric?
00:17:081 (3) - right 1 grid down 1 grid looks better
01:51:881 (1) - try to make the slider perfectly Symmetric?
[Rarity]
01:19:931 (2,3) - try to make this spacing same with others?
hmm almost same in other diffs, most of the things are fine, however the slidershapes can still be better, and the spacing are not neat and clean enough.
And maybe try to not put objects to nearer to each other. maybe just me though but 01:37:481 (3,4,5,6) - like this kinda of too crowd and not very beautiful. use slider+note or sliders can solve things like this a little bit.
well map is pretty good for a new mapper however I would like to see if this map can still be better in the future so I think I will not mod in details this time. have some stars from me for support
comboburst should be rename like comboburst-0 comboburst-1 etc, your current file name starts from 6 and end to 15 orz
most of the cursortrail.png size are 51*51, current one is 56 56 I am not sure if this bothers but maybe better to fix it
ehh I am sorry but I think the CTB skin is not good because it's little awkward in reading patterns while playing. besides, seems the fruit images are cutted off on the edge, that really feel weird imo
spinner-approachcircle.png should be 390*390,current one is 410 410
[Fluttershy]
00:09:881 (1) - try to make the slider perfectly Symmetric?
00:17:081 (3) - right 1 grid down 1 grid looks better
01:51:881 (1) - try to make the slider perfectly Symmetric?
[Rarity]
01:19:931 (2,3) - try to make this spacing same with others?
hmm almost same in other diffs, most of the things are fine, however the slidershapes can still be better, and the spacing are not neat and clean enough.
And maybe try to not put objects to nearer to each other. maybe just me though but 01:37:481 (3,4,5,6) - like this kinda of too crowd and not very beautiful. use slider+note or sliders can solve things like this a little bit.
well map is pretty good for a new mapper however I would like to see if this map can still be better in the future so I think I will not mod in details this time. have some stars from me for support
Hello, I'll try to mod this, I hope this helps
Sorry if it doesn't, feel free to object
I can only mod osu standard sorry
Anyway, good luck
Sorry if it doesn't, feel free to object
I can only mod osu standard sorry
- General
- All timings are on beats and it's perfect
- Very nice pattern here and there, I like it
- Very good map, the song is addicting lol
- Fluttershy
- well at first I couldn't find anything to mod here, but after some repeats I found 01:16:481 (3) - Move the slider end to x:116 y:140, more linear with the (4) slider afterward
- Rarity
- 01:22:331 (2) - move it to x:192 y:208 to stack with the 3 maybe?
- 01:26:381 (4) - move it to x: 228 y:56 to avoid blanketing with the (2) slider afterward, it also makes another pattern with the previous circles lol
- 02:40:781 (7) - move it to x:64 y:148 to make it more symmetrical
- 02:48:881 (1) - move it to x:336 y:80 to stack with the (5) circle afterwards
- Rainbow Dash
- well, nice difficulties. Can't find anything to mod, but I guess this can help 00:23:231 (5) - move it to x:232 y:208 to make it stack with the previous (3) circle
- Pinkie Pie
- sorry I can't really mod insane difficulties but I hope this can help, 00:40:931 (6) - move it to x:256 y:240 to make it stack with (3) circle afterwards and make the jump less confusing
Anyway, good luck
Topic Starter
Nazish Mods are still the best mods xDAnreFM wrote:
Hello, I'll try to mod this, I hope this helps
Sorry if it doesn't, feel free to object
I can only mod osu standard sorry
- General
- All timings are on beats and it's perfect
- Very nice pattern here and there, I like it
- Very good map, the song is addicting lol
- Fluttershy
- well at first I couldn't find anything to mod here, but after some repeats I found 01:16:481 (3) - Move the slider end to x:116 y:140, more linear with the (4) slider afterward
- Rarity
- 01:22:331 (2) - move it to x:192 y:208 to stack with the 3 maybe?
- 01:26:381 (4) - move it to x: 228 y:56 to avoid blanketing with the (2) slider afterward, it also makes another pattern with the previous circles lol
- 02:40:781 (7) - move it to x:64 y:148 to make it more symmetrical
- 02:48:881 (1) - move it to x:336 y:80 to stack with the (5) circle afterwards
- Rainbow Dash
- well, nice difficulties. Can't find anything to mod, but I guess this can help 00:23:231 (5) - move it to x:232 y:208 to make it stack with the previous (3) circle
- Pinkie Pie
Well, I guess that's all, I hope it helps you, and I'm sorry if it doesn't
- sorry I can't really mod insane difficulties
Anyway, good luck
Thanks anyway^^
General
Skin have not full sliderball pack
Filesize 11.5 mb without video O.O at lease you can reduce size pictures.
Fluttershy
00:38:081 (3) - 1 grid right
01:11:681 (2,3) - wrong distance snap so check it please (3)
Rarity
Please check your sliders because Sliders not symmetric
01:17:081 (1,2) - Hard to catch
Sorry I cannot motivation this song. So no more
Skin have not full sliderball pack
Filesize 11.5 mb without video O.O at lease you can reduce size pictures.
Fluttershy
00:38:081 (3) - 1 grid right
01:11:681 (2,3) - wrong distance snap so check it please (3)
Rarity
Please check your sliders because Sliders not symmetric
01:17:081 (1,2) - Hard to catch
Sorry I cannot motivation this song. So no more
This is my first little mod Sorry for bad english
Blue = Suggestions;
Red = Fixes;
General
Cool skin
Drops barely visible. Make a brighter probably.
Rarity
00:26:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - Circles too closely located to each other. I think it would look better like this: http://puu.sh/2K9nG.JPG
02:53:981 (4) - And you can just leave, but I think it's better http://puu.sh/2K9Y9.JPG
00:38:681 (1,2,3,4) - 02:36:281 (1,2,3,4) - I think it is better to do 1-4 circles symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2Kauv.JPG
Rainbow Dash
01:39:881 (7) - NC
01:27:881 (1) - the same
01:29:081 (1) - NC
Pinkie Pie
Looks nice
00:38:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Correct these two polygons. http://puu.sh/2KcsJ.JPG
01:08:381 (7) - NC
Crystal's Applejack
Cute
Here all is well.
____________________
Good luck
Sorry for bad english Blue = Suggestions;
Red = Fixes;
General
Drops barely visible. Make a brighter probably.
Rarity
00:26:681 (1,2,3,4,5) - Circles too closely located to each other. I think it would look better like this: http://puu.sh/2K9nG.JPG
02:53:981 (4) - And you can just leave, but I think it's better http://puu.sh/2K9Y9.JPG
00:38:681 (1,2,3,4) - 02:36:281 (1,2,3,4) - I think it is better to do 1-4 circles symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2Kauv.JPG
Rainbow Dash
01:39:881 (7) - NC
01:27:881 (1) - the same
01:29:081 (1) - NC
Pinkie Pie
Looks nice
00:38:681 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Correct these two polygons. http://puu.sh/2KcsJ.JPG
01:08:381 (7) - NC
Crystal's Applejack
Cute
Here all is well.
____________________
Good luck
I can only mod osu standard. Since this is my first time modding a map, these are just small suggestions and it's up to you to decide whether or not to use them
(There are so many mods! I can barely find something to say lol)
[General]
(in fact I didn't find anything wrong specificly, apart from the sliders )
[Rainbowdash]
(I'm tired
)
(There are so many mods! I can barely find something to say lol)
[General]
- Timing is perfect to me.
Nice skin
Also,hitsounds are really nice.
But I think many sliders don't seem natural, especially the s-shaped ones. Generally you use only 4 points to create a s-shaped slider, when it's a large slider, the shape seems awkward.
Here is an exemple of my slider:
http://puu.sh/2K9Sc.jpg108,356,125081,6,0,B|192:320|200:192|124:192|48:192|56:64|140:28,1,400,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
(in Pinkie Pie diff, replacing 02:05:081 (1) - )
which I think is better, and is also perfectly symetric.
(in fact I didn't find anything wrong specificly, apart from the sliders
)[Rainbowdash]
- Rythmn is good~
- 01:51:881 (3,4) - 01:54:281 (3,4) - ...
Those sliders are too close to me, and i think short sliders should be less twisted then that..
Overall it's pretty good.
- You can fix the countdown by putting the first green line (inherited section) on the second note, like this:
http://puu.sh/2Keti.png - 00:34:781 (4) - this is too offscreen, not having the same distance with 00:33:881 (1,3) - , and not parallel. In this case you should copy and paste the previous sliders.
- 02:32:381 (4) - ^
- 02:26:681 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream is not smooth, i suggest that you use:
256,308,146681,5,0,0:0:0:0:
to replace them.
212,284,146756,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,239,146831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
212,193,146906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,146981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
298,143,147056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,98,147131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,52,147206,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,28,147281,5,0,0:0:0:0:
211,52,147356,1,0,0:0:0:0:
194,98,147431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
213,143,147506,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,168,147581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,193,147656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,239,147731,1,0,0:0:0:0:
299,284,147806,1,0,0:0:0:0:
Effect: http://puu.sh/2Kgez.jpg - 02:38:681 (1) - I think this new combo note is too far away... you can start from the left
- 01:26:681 (1,2,3) - This is banal...can you think of a new way to place them?
- In this diff the purple combo color is too close to the background color, I can barely see the approche circle..
- My general opinion towards this diff is: you should try harder to put things apart, like this 02:48:431 (2) - and also try to make things more relevant to each other
(I'm tired
)
DeletedUser_1574070
Oh my god waht the SP..
anyway I'll check since you've requested me via in-game PM
Why don't you make Audio Lead In same through opening your osu file in notepad?
Fluttershy
00:09:881 (1) - end (392 : 104) to give more symmetry
00:12:281 (3) - same on here (120 : 280)
01:33:881 (3,4) - make these same
01:47:081 (2) - repeating twice is bit difficult for noobs I think.
01:47:081 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/732672 ?
Rarity
00:22:331 (2,6) - stack
00:45:881 (1,2) - make these same
00:47:081 (3,4) - ^
01:32:681 (2) - spacing?
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ah so sleepy I'm gonna finish moddingt this tomorrow so no kds yet
anyway I'll check since you've requested me via in-game PM
Why don't you make Audio Lead In same through opening your osu file in notepad?
Fluttershy
00:09:881 (1) - end (392 : 104) to give more symmetry
00:12:281 (3) - same on here (120 : 280)
01:33:881 (3,4) - make these same
01:47:081 (2) - repeating twice is bit difficult for noobs I think.
01:47:081 (2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/732672 ?
Rarity
00:22:331 (2,6) - stack
00:45:881 (1,2) - make these same
00:47:081 (3,4) - ^
01:32:681 (2) - spacing?
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ah so sleepy I'm gonna finish moddingt this tomorrow so no kds yet
Topic Starter
Now you got me - Remapping whole mapsetNymph wrote:
well map is pretty good for a new mapper however I would like to see if this map can still be better in the future so I think I will not mod in details this time. have some stars from me for support
IRC mod <3
23:43 Irreversible: 00:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - verstehe nicht wieso die hitsounds hier leiser sind
23:43 Irreversible: nein es geht nur darum das der skin mich jedes mal tierisch aufregt
23:43 Irreversible: ich find es sieht voll schick und farbig aus ohne diesen hitcircle
23:44 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Da werden die hitsounds lauter
23:44 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:10:177 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - da werden die leiser
23:44 Irreversible: ich würd sie direkt wieder ganz laut machen
23:44 Irreversible: weil iwie ist es nicht logisch das es da leise bleibt
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: nöh... mit nem lauter-leiser übergang isses schöner
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: weil die flöte die im hintergrund is ja auch net reintrötet als gäbds keinen morgen
23:45 Irreversible: 00:30:277 (1) - bin mir nicht sicher aber
23:46 Irreversible: startet der spinner nicht 00:30:277 - ?
23:46 Irreversible: 00:50:677 (1) - MOAR DISTANCE SNAP
23:46 Irreversible: MOARRR
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: fixed
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: also
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: der slider
23:47 Irreversible: 01:24:277 (1,2,3) -
23:47 Irreversible: warte
23:47 Irreversible: 01:24:277 (1,2,3) -
23:47 Irreversible: = http://puu.sh/2QOWH.jpg
23:47 Irreversible: irgendso ein pattern
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: das wellen pattern is doch auch schön
23:48 Irreversible: nö
23:48 Irreversible: xD
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:50:677 (1) - hab da 1.5 benutzt
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: is doch genug oder?
23:48 Irreversible: ja
23:48 Irreversible: MEHR
23:48 Irreversible: mehr nach unten
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: bist matsche im kopf? das is en 1/2 sprung den mach ich net mit 2.0
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: xD
23:49 Irreversible: mach mal
23:49 Irreversible: xDD
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: nene
23:49 Irreversible: hast dir richtig mühe gegeben mit der map
23:49 Irreversible: sieht gut aus
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: ich lass das erstma so
23:49 Irreversible: NE
23:49 Irreversible: DU PLACED DAS JEZ MEHR BOTTOM
23:49 Irreversible: Xdd
23:49 Irreversible: xDD*
23:50 Irreversible: 03:03:659 - map das wieder oo
23:50 Irreversible: die map ist einfach zu schwer das ich noch was anfügen könnte
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: mit 2.0 is der genau 5 grids weiter unten
23:50 Irreversible: sieht aber schick aus :O
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: xD
23:50 Irreversible: DANN MACH DISTANCE SNAP AUS
23:50 Irreversible: xDD
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: dann wird gemeckert
23:51 Irreversible: die hitswounds sind iwie generell zu leise
23:51 Irreversible: iwie
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: is 80% bei 100 hamse gemeckert
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: und 80 und 80 is fast kein unterschied
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: *90
23:52 Irreversible: ich würd 100 machen
23:52 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226137 Whitetail - Pinkie Pie Theme [Rainbow Dash]]
23:52 Irreversible: 00:11:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - avoid circle spam plz
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: wie findest eig. das placing der hitsounds?
23:53 Itachi_Uchiha: die andern brauchst net zu machen
23:53 Irreversible: achso
23:53 Itachi_Uchiha: die werden noch geremappt
23:53 Irreversible: oki
23:53 Irreversible: ehm ja ist gut
23:53 Irreversible: allerdings
23:53 Irreversible: iwie würd ich ein anders clap muster mahen
23:53 Irreversible: bzw finish
23:54 Irreversible: verwirrt
23:54 Irreversible: xD
23:55 Irreversible: 00:20:827 (1,2,3,4) - :
23:55 Irreversible: 1= finsih
23:55 Irreversible: 2= nix
23:55 Irreversible: 3+4= clap
23:56 Irreversible: aber beim hitsounden bin ich der falsche u.u
23:57 Itachi_Uchiha: hab das extra random gemacht weil pinkie pie einfach der randomste character is der je developed wurde
23:58 Irreversible: hm
23:58 Irreversible: gutes argument aber naja XDD
23:43 Irreversible: nein es geht nur darum das der skin mich jedes mal tierisch aufregt
23:43 Irreversible: ich find es sieht voll schick und farbig aus ohne diesen hitcircle
23:44 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:12:277 (1,2,3,4) - Da werden die hitsounds lauter
23:44 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:10:177 (2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - da werden die leiser
23:44 Irreversible: ich würd sie direkt wieder ganz laut machen
23:44 Irreversible: weil iwie ist es nicht logisch das es da leise bleibt
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: nöh... mit nem lauter-leiser übergang isses schöner
23:45 Itachi_Uchiha: weil die flöte die im hintergrund is ja auch net reintrötet als gäbds keinen morgen
23:45 Irreversible: 00:30:277 (1) - bin mir nicht sicher aber
23:46 Irreversible: startet der spinner nicht 00:30:277 - ?
23:46 Irreversible: 00:50:677 (1) - MOAR DISTANCE SNAP
23:46 Irreversible: MOARRR
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: fixed
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: also
23:47 Itachi_Uchiha: der slider
23:47 Irreversible: 01:24:277 (1,2,3) -
23:47 Irreversible: warte
23:47 Irreversible: 01:24:277 (1,2,3) -
23:47 Irreversible: = http://puu.sh/2QOWH.jpg
23:47 Irreversible: irgendso ein pattern
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: das wellen pattern is doch auch schön
23:48 Irreversible: nö
23:48 Irreversible: xD
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: 00:50:677 (1) - hab da 1.5 benutzt
23:48 Itachi_Uchiha: is doch genug oder?
23:48 Irreversible: ja
23:48 Irreversible: MEHR
23:48 Irreversible: mehr nach unten
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: bist matsche im kopf? das is en 1/2 sprung den mach ich net mit 2.0
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: xD
23:49 Irreversible: mach mal
23:49 Irreversible: xDD
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: nene
23:49 Irreversible: hast dir richtig mühe gegeben mit der map
23:49 Irreversible: sieht gut aus
23:49 Itachi_Uchiha: ich lass das erstma so
23:49 Irreversible: NE
23:49 Irreversible: DU PLACED DAS JEZ MEHR BOTTOM
23:49 Irreversible: Xdd
23:49 Irreversible: xDD*
23:50 Irreversible: 03:03:659 - map das wieder oo
23:50 Irreversible: die map ist einfach zu schwer das ich noch was anfügen könnte
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: mit 2.0 is der genau 5 grids weiter unten
23:50 Irreversible: sieht aber schick aus :O
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: xD
23:50 Irreversible: DANN MACH DISTANCE SNAP AUS
23:50 Irreversible: xDD
23:50 Itachi_Uchiha: dann wird gemeckert
23:51 Irreversible: die hitswounds sind iwie generell zu leise
23:51 Irreversible: iwie
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: is 80% bei 100 hamse gemeckert
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: und 80 und 80 is fast kein unterschied
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: *90
23:52 Irreversible: ich würd 100 machen
23:52 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/226137 Whitetail - Pinkie Pie Theme [Rainbow Dash]]
23:52 Irreversible: 00:11:381 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - avoid circle spam plz
23:52 Itachi_Uchiha: wie findest eig. das placing der hitsounds?
23:53 Itachi_Uchiha: die andern brauchst net zu machen
23:53 Irreversible: achso
23:53 Itachi_Uchiha: die werden noch geremappt
23:53 Irreversible: oki
23:53 Irreversible: ehm ja ist gut
23:53 Irreversible: allerdings
23:53 Irreversible: iwie würd ich ein anders clap muster mahen
23:53 Irreversible: bzw finish
23:54 Irreversible: verwirrt
23:54 Irreversible: xD
23:55 Irreversible: 00:20:827 (1,2,3,4) - :
23:55 Irreversible: 1= finsih
23:55 Irreversible: 2= nix
23:55 Irreversible: 3+4= clap
23:56 Irreversible: aber beim hitsounden bin ich der falsche u.u
23:57 Itachi_Uchiha: hab das extra random gemacht weil pinkie pie einfach der randomste character is der je developed wurde
23:58 Irreversible: hm
23:58 Irreversible: gutes argument aber naja XDD
sorry I am busy with school work these days and can't get to here. I will try my best to remod this one in several days. thanks for understanding
AWWW YEAHHHH GREAT JUMPS AND STREAMS 
AWESOME JOB MAN!
AWESOME JOB MAN!
[CTB]
hp drain -> 6 (some moments are very failable)
00:18:281 - move to x=480 (to make it a bit harder but still passable though)
00:28:331 - x=160
00:28:556 - x=120
00:44:831; 00:45:131 - x=56 (hypers are more suitable here)
map is really impressive but skin ispretty unplayable got used to it
hp drain -> 6 (some moments are very failable)
00:18:281 - move to x=480 (to make it a bit harder but still passable though)
00:28:331 - x=160
00:28:556 - x=120
00:44:831; 00:45:131 - x=56 (hypers are more suitable here)
map is really impressive but skin is
Thx a lot krabby :3Don Omar wrote:
[CTB]
hp drain -> 6 (some moments are very failable)
00:18:281 - move to x=480 (to make it a bit harder but still passable though) fixed
00:28:331 - x=160
00:28:556 - x=120
00:44:831; 00:45:131 - x=56 (hypers are more suitable here) fixed
map is really impressive but skin ispretty unplayablegot used to it
Topic Starter
So sick of it
NVM
Gonna finish this
alter, gib nicht auf, meine erste map brauchte doppelt so lang wie deine und du willst jetzt schon aufgeben? :O wenn du ständig nur über deine maps QQ'st dann verkauf dich entweder besser, oder mach sie besser, falls sie dir selber nicht gefällt, gib ihnen gründe warum sie Aufmerksamkeit verdient hat..
I'm gonna agree with Irreversible (I had to use google to understand that lol) and also add something: For new mappers ("new") like you or me, it certainly becomes hard to have our maps modded, because we aren't really known around here and maybe we lack some friends, but I think we have to be patient, It may take long to have our maps ranked but hey, this doesn't has a time limit! So just be patient, ask for mods when you can, and you will get your map ranked. Mine has 10 months I think but I do not plan on giving up, not after all that I have been through.
Good luck!
Good luck!
Shohei Ohtani
Nigga it's been three months that ain't no time at all.
My Newest full mapset has been hanging in pending since October 2012, and I'm by no means a new mapper lol.
Anyways for the mod. It took me way too long to get to this
Overall:
Am I the only one bothered by the fact that you have 6 diffs but only have 5 of the mane 6 in the diff names. Although I'm kind of against having any other characters besides Pinkie Pie in the backgrounds. You know, because it's Pinkie Pie's theme and all.
As an offhand note, I know I'm always one to be copy-pasting my choruses and stuff, but it kinda sucks at the end of a map to just be doing a copy-pasted section from earlier. Usually if I map a song with 2 chrouses, I'll have them both be original. It would only be in times of 3 chorus maps that I'd copy-paste the first chorus into the second one.
SB:
I UNDERSTAND YOU'RE TRYING TO PUT THE PULSES ON THE BASS DRUM BUT MY MIND WANTS TO PUT THEM ON THE CLAPS (Although for easy it's fine to have it like this. It's just normal and insane that there's more emphasis on 2 and 4 than 1 and 3 so it seems better to put it on those.
Midsection SBing is ok but like it doesn't really seem that fitting. I'm also bothered by the fact that when they walk away and stuff, Applejack is kind of floating in the air. It's cool that you like have her standing on the hill and stuff but she's like floating in the air when she walks away.
Skin:
Your sliderball doesn't spin o-o. Which I guess is ok since I have kind of an issue with spinning balls that spin too fast, but still it just looks weird
Insane:
I'm being generous today and not complaining about the 1.5x spacing that's through the entire map, because it's not entirely bad atm. Just be careful with some of the patterns. Especially since your custom comboburst isn't very transparent, your stacked patterns are MUCH harder to read and might even be hidden. I've tried pointing some out, but my mind is under the assumption of the standard skin, so some things might have slipped my mind.
00:11:152 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd imagine this would be really hard to play, since players won't be able to actually hear if they're getting the notes right or not. I know I've had trouble getting one of my maps ranked in the past for doing this exact thing. Audible soft hitsounds should work just fine.
00:16:177 (1,1,1,2,3) - ^
00:19:477 (1,2,3) - In music phrasing, it'd be better if the sliders were moved down a red tick, and a note is added on the blank space created. This is so the trilled notes will be in their own sliders, instead of being in the space between the end and beginning of two sliders. You can also get rid of that icky (3) in the next pattern)
00:31:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can totally make more interesting patterns than this. I'm being nice for some reason and I'm not bitching about the spacing but like patterns just going on top of each other for this long are awkward to play and don't look very nice
00:35:827 (6,7,8) - This would be cooler as a kickslider so (9) can fit in the pattern
00:47:227 (2,4,6) - If these made a coherent pattern this wouldn't bother me, but it doesn't so it does
01:01:402 (5) - WELL HI THERE JUMP It'd be cool if you actually fit in.
01:09:277 (3) - This note breaks to phrasing of the notes. I'd rather (4) start where this is and have this note be in the blank space created by moving (4)
01:17:527 (2) - This being hidden kind of really bothers me. It's not like, completely hidden, but it's still notable
01:24:727 (2) - Avoid this overlap
01:37:477 (4) - Claps seem a bit unfitting
01:51:577 (2,3,4,5) - Whistles seem like the better hitsounds for parts like these
02:53:677 (5) - y this jump like it doesn't even fit
03:00:277 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner.
03:06:281 (1) - Nope. Like having that much blank space just to have one last slider is bad. Especially if a player isn't doing so well on the last part, they can potentially be killed by this blank space. Plus, I believe this part only exists so it can loop in-game/in-whatever this is from, so if you're not gonna loop it, no point in having it~.
Normal:
I have some concerns about this diff spread. Mostly that Insane is 2.0x SV with generally 1.5x spacing, while this diff is 1.1 SV with 0.8x spacing. I know this fits the star criteria of a hard, but it feels a lot like a normal. For song with a BPM of like 200+, this is a common issue, to have your Normal be a Hard and your Hard be an insane in terms of star priority. But if I were looking at this map in a BAT's shoes, I'd request that you make a hard / have someone make a hard before I'd look at bubbling this.
00:19:931 (2) - OOH THIS IS ROUGH. Like, players will definately miss this note. 100% garunteed. Because of the low SV, it doesn't look much different from the 1/1 notes, so I'm natually gonna wanna keep it the same. This entire pattern on the red ticks is rough in general. I know what you're following, but it might be easier to follow the main melody.
00:35:681 (6,7) - Slider trains usually aren't that successful or nice to play
00:38:381 (7) - Can you adjust this to avoid huge overlap?
Easy:
Very 1/1y (If this song was in 100 BPM.) in the choruses. I know the rhythm is hard to follow but newer players are going to get bored easily of metronome easies. You did it fine in the verses, so try doing it in the choruses too.
00:24:281 (1,2) - Rotate these to avoid overlap?
01:13:481 (4) - Curved sliders like this with the endpoint higher than the startpoint generally don't look good.
01:19:481 (1,2) - Make these into a slider? Even though easy players are used to the rhythm now, they might still struggle with hitting the note on the red tick, since it has the feel of a quarter note triplet
01:33:881 (3) - OOH GURL UM yeah I'd just redesign this slider.
01:38:681 (4) - ^. Parts like these are times where you can whip out your interesting curved shapes and stuff.
02:56:681 (1,1,1) - These curves are so unnotable that it just looks wrong
#2MonthsLate
My Newest full mapset has been hanging in pending since October 2012, and I'm by no means a new mapper lol.
Anyways for the mod. It took me way too long to get to this
Overall:
Am I the only one bothered by the fact that you have 6 diffs but only have 5 of the mane 6 in the diff names. Although I'm kind of against having any other characters besides Pinkie Pie in the backgrounds. You know, because it's Pinkie Pie's theme and all.
As an offhand note, I know I'm always one to be copy-pasting my choruses and stuff, but it kinda sucks at the end of a map to just be doing a copy-pasted section from earlier. Usually if I map a song with 2 chrouses, I'll have them both be original. It would only be in times of 3 chorus maps that I'd copy-paste the first chorus into the second one.
SB:
I UNDERSTAND YOU'RE TRYING TO PUT THE PULSES ON THE BASS DRUM BUT MY MIND WANTS TO PUT THEM ON THE CLAPS (Although for easy it's fine to have it like this. It's just normal and insane that there's more emphasis on 2 and 4 than 1 and 3 so it seems better to put it on those.
Midsection SBing is ok but like it doesn't really seem that fitting. I'm also bothered by the fact that when they walk away and stuff, Applejack is kind of floating in the air. It's cool that you like have her standing on the hill and stuff but she's like floating in the air when she walks away.
Skin:
Your sliderball doesn't spin o-o. Which I guess is ok since I have kind of an issue with spinning balls that spin too fast, but still it just looks weird
Insane:
I'm being generous today and not complaining about the 1.5x spacing that's through the entire map, because it's not entirely bad atm. Just be careful with some of the patterns. Especially since your custom comboburst isn't very transparent, your stacked patterns are MUCH harder to read and might even be hidden. I've tried pointing some out, but my mind is under the assumption of the standard skin, so some things might have slipped my mind.
00:11:152 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd imagine this would be really hard to play, since players won't be able to actually hear if they're getting the notes right or not. I know I've had trouble getting one of my maps ranked in the past for doing this exact thing. Audible soft hitsounds should work just fine.
00:16:177 (1,1,1,2,3) - ^
00:19:477 (1,2,3) - In music phrasing, it'd be better if the sliders were moved down a red tick, and a note is added on the blank space created. This is so the trilled notes will be in their own sliders, instead of being in the space between the end and beginning of two sliders. You can also get rid of that icky (3) in the next pattern)
00:31:477 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You can totally make more interesting patterns than this. I'm being nice for some reason and I'm not bitching about the spacing but like patterns just going on top of each other for this long are awkward to play and don't look very nice
00:35:827 (6,7,8) - This would be cooler as a kickslider so (9) can fit in the pattern
00:47:227 (2,4,6) - If these made a coherent pattern this wouldn't bother me, but it doesn't so it does
01:01:402 (5) - WELL HI THERE JUMP It'd be cool if you actually fit in.
01:09:277 (3) - This note breaks to phrasing of the notes. I'd rather (4) start where this is and have this note be in the blank space created by moving (4)
01:17:527 (2) - This being hidden kind of really bothers me. It's not like, completely hidden, but it's still notable
01:24:727 (2) - Avoid this overlap
01:37:477 (4) - Claps seem a bit unfitting
01:51:577 (2,3,4,5) - Whistles seem like the better hitsounds for parts like these
02:53:677 (5) - y this jump like it doesn't even fit
03:00:277 (1) - Add a finish on this spinner.
03:06:281 (1) - Nope. Like having that much blank space just to have one last slider is bad. Especially if a player isn't doing so well on the last part, they can potentially be killed by this blank space. Plus, I believe this part only exists so it can loop in-game/in-whatever this is from, so if you're not gonna loop it, no point in having it~.
Normal:
I have some concerns about this diff spread. Mostly that Insane is 2.0x SV with generally 1.5x spacing, while this diff is 1.1 SV with 0.8x spacing. I know this fits the star criteria of a hard, but it feels a lot like a normal. For song with a BPM of like 200+, this is a common issue, to have your Normal be a Hard and your Hard be an insane in terms of star priority. But if I were looking at this map in a BAT's shoes, I'd request that you make a hard / have someone make a hard before I'd look at bubbling this.
00:19:931 (2) - OOH THIS IS ROUGH. Like, players will definately miss this note. 100% garunteed. Because of the low SV, it doesn't look much different from the 1/1 notes, so I'm natually gonna wanna keep it the same. This entire pattern on the red ticks is rough in general. I know what you're following, but it might be easier to follow the main melody.
00:35:681 (6,7) - Slider trains usually aren't that successful or nice to play
00:38:381 (7) - Can you adjust this to avoid huge overlap?
Easy:
Very 1/1y (If this song was in 100 BPM.) in the choruses. I know the rhythm is hard to follow but newer players are going to get bored easily of metronome easies. You did it fine in the verses, so try doing it in the choruses too.
00:24:281 (1,2) - Rotate these to avoid overlap?
01:13:481 (4) - Curved sliders like this with the endpoint higher than the startpoint generally don't look good.
01:19:481 (1,2) - Make these into a slider? Even though easy players are used to the rhythm now, they might still struggle with hitting the note on the red tick, since it has the feel of a quarter note triplet
01:33:881 (3) - OOH GURL UM yeah I'd just redesign this slider.
01:38:681 (4) - ^. Parts like these are times where you can whip out your interesting curved shapes and stuff.
02:56:681 (1,1,1) - These curves are so unnotable that it just looks wrong
#2MonthsLate