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Hanae - Kamisama Hajimemashita (TV Size)

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Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose
SPOILER

tutuhaha wrote:

[Collab]
00:10:412 (8) - move to x300 y48 play will be more fun
00:11:439 (2) - ^ then move to X300 y48
00:13:699 (5,6) - dont really like this overlap
00:18:836 (1) - maybe use more big space will play more fun, try to move it to X384 y64
00:21:508 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:19:658 (3) - move to x120 y252, now play looks too close with 2，then try to make parallel with 00:20:480 (1)
00:23:768 (7) - NC
00:23:768 (7,8) - use big space will be better
00:28:699 (6) - NC need begin here I think
00:36:097 (3,4) - toooo close, hard to read
00:44:316 (X) - add note
00:48:836 (X) - ^
00:57:466 (1,2) - I think those two sliders space need bigger than 00:56:645 (1,2) -
00:57:877 (2,3) - not really like this design
01:04:247 (2) - move to x272 y132
01:22:124 (3) - move down litter bit, touch HP now

[Hard]
00:16:165 (4,5) - doesnt agree use this way, too hard to read with low AR then looks ugly........
00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - listen music，you will see this part need easy than 00:18:014 (5,6) - this part, but now is not
00:19:658 (3,4) - can not understand why use too big space
00:28:699 (4) - NC begin here
00:50:069 (1) - litter bit weird for this spinner, because there has very clear rhythm, try to use note and slider to instead it

[Normal]
00:36:713 (2,3) - space，make it look same like 00:38:151 (4,5) -

love this anime and this song
just so cute

thank you, fixed most~
Tari
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined July 2012
Tari
Hi~

Long Mod
[General]

  1. Hi~ , you added op into tags, which is short for opening I suppose, you should add opening too, because I don't think two letter words are searchable when you type it in, and its not a bad thing to have some extra tags. or you can just remove the op and add opening to the tags , oh and add couple to the tags while your at it
  2. Default clap works fine, but I think you should try this clap : http://puu.sh/2sdei , its a nice alternative to the fugly default clap your using , (JK) use it if you want .
  3. Please consider adding a light pinkish color, it goes really well with all the light combo colors you have in your map and goes well with the rose blossom petals in the bg
  4. You have skin elements in your map, nothing wrong with that, Just wanted to remind to make sure you have everything needed in the skin (I thought you need all these elements in order to actually put the skin in the map)
  5. You need to label who mapped what part of the song in the collab , You can either create a lyric SB ( Label it in the map directly in playing) or you can do the latter , and label it in Creator Words (The Little Text Box you can put stuff in when you submit) , Putting it in creator words is much easier.
[Easy]

  1. The claps in the start of the song don't really fit to be honest, It'd be better if you replace it with whistles because they sound better to me generally and don't sound terribly abusive with the music and they are a nice calm start to this relaxing song.
  2. 00:05:686 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - What I mean by the above is that there shouldn't be any claps in all these parts rather use whistle
  3. 00:22:124 (1) - Don't worry about so much about if an hitsound starts in the progress of the slider, You can just add a sound to the tick, seriously if you want to do this then you should copy your current clap sound for the map and rename the copied file to "soft-slidetick2", Just go to timing section and add a hitsound line (green line) and go to SC2: and the slider tick sound will be that, just revert back once the "clap" sound you wanted for that tick is done.
  4. 00:25:412 (1) - You have room to make this slider note blanket the previous note, so you should do it, if you don't get what I mean heres a visual : http://puu.sh/2sedg , as you can see the note blankets the previous note and makes it look slightly cleaner , please when you have the chance to blanket, blanket some notes, but do not abuse it please.
  5. 00:28:288 (5) - Finish doesn't really give the note the feeling here, Finishes are intended to strengthen already strong beats and are not suppose to be really heard, they are suppose to mix with the music sound in a way, The normal hitfinish would fit here way better , since it does just that. But if you want you can just remove the finish all together.
  6. 00:36:919 (2) - Please try this shape : http://puu.sh/2selL , Your current slider shape seems randomly shaped and not very nice looking,
  7. 00:53:357 (2) - I don't like this as well, Please try this : http://puu.sh/2setU
  8. 00:56:645 (1) - For these strong beats, you can add whistle, because finishes on all these beats (there are many) can get very noisy and whistle is a nice substitute for finish in this case,
  9. 00:55:001 (4) - Same as above.
  10. 01:04:864 (1) - No need for new combo here because the vocals are still going on , even though the finish signals the need for new combo, it really isn't needed (tbh I don't really like short combo's unless its for effect)
  11. 01:11:439 (1) - The same thing as the above
  12. 01:11:850 (2) - Please , oh please do not try to blanket like this, If you can blanket two notes, then don't blanket at all because there are other ways to do this, asdzxcu (sorry, being overly dramatic) Just make this straight slider , and flip it vertically because the notes after this get overlapped in a way because you make this slider face down
  13. 01:23:768 (2) - Lower volume down to the start of this also, because you did it to the rest of this section.
  14. 01:02:398 (4) - Remove the extra uneeded slider point in the slider please.
[Normal]

  1. 00:15:549 (1) - Unneeded new combo here, it ruins your consistency because you didn't add it here 00:07:740 (6) - and your showing that these have the same rhythm, so just remove it.
  2. 00:20:480 (1) - Same as above
  3. Same note on easy about the hitsounds on this diff, please us whistle instead till you reach that certain part D8
  4. 00:27:877 (2,3) - There something missing in between these two, I guess the best fix is to replace it with the slider, so that the beat there so that vocal point can actually be kinda mentioned
  5. 00:38:562 (5) - Whistle in the start please.
  6. 00:36:919 (3) - This is where the default clap actually sounds nice in the whole song really, In the other parts it doesn't really fit in with the music , but goes with the music anyway (bleh wth)
  7. 00:41:850 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Clap abuse must be here, because it hurts my ears D8, remove some claps or reduce the volume pleaseeee, it sounds atrocious (really bad)
  8. 00:55:001 (1) - There another unneeded new combo here as well, don't start new combo's unless there a new start on vocals please.
  9. 00:58:699 (4,5,6) - This seems like an overmap for an normal diff, There really not much beats to really emphasize here, so there no need for such clicking D8, I think you should replace it with a reverse slider ? Something like this http://puu.sh/2siIk
  10. 01:01:576 (3) - Whistle or some kind of hitsound here please.
  11. 01:06:508 (1) - Please try this : http://puu.sh/2siMd , you need to put a slider path in a way where its more visible and less blocked
  12. 01:21:302 (1) - I understand what your trying to do here, but if you want to make this pattern better, then please remove this slider and copy this slider : 01:22:946 (2) - and reverse it verically and reverse selction , blah here what it should look like http://puu.sh/2siU8 and distance snap is weirrddd here
[Hard]

  1. 00:11:028 (1,2) - Current position is bad, because it suddenly changes the direction of the cursor, I think you shall try this , so it makes a little square http://puu.sh/2sj22 hopefully you can see that square.
  2. 00:19:658 (3) - For a better jump to the next note, i'd suggest you do curve the note more (Well idk if it affects the jump, but the slider will look better curved)
  3. 00:21:919 (4) - On this whole combo / pattern you were trying to make an X like jump, meaning note 1 in combo moved diagonal to note 2, but you didn't do it for note 3 and 4 , note 3 doesn't jump diagonally to note 4, i'd suggest you do that to make this whole pattern work with , reposition it so it works, here how : http://puu.sh/2sjdY P.S the current position for note 4 doesn't look good either
  4. 00:25:412 (1) - Making this curve slider kinda ruins the pattern, I think your trying to make the pattern appeal more than the slider, because your trying to form a triangle with these sliders and making them face away from each other correct?, If so it's best to just make this slider straight, so the pattern can be more shown overall and be more simple and nice , Like this http://puu.sh/2sjlu
  5. 00:27:877 (2) - Please flip this slider horizontally, the notes seem all clambered together here.
  6. 00:30:343 (1) - This jump is pretty tough for hard, when I mean tough , I mean that it "stands" out with the rest of the spacing and is overly difficult, ahh you know what I mean (ramble ramble ramble). Try this please : http://puu.sh/2sjtI or try a whole new pattern
  7. 00:44:932 (1,2) - Re position both of these please something like this : http://puu.sh/2sjza this whole pattern is just wack, the pattern could of been possible symmetry, making each of the sliders hit the circle in the opposite direction, but oh well
  8. 00:07:329 (1) - Unneeded new combo, retain from such small combo's (more strict on short combo's for hard than easy because hard makes much more notes to form a combo)
  9. 00:28:699 (1) - Do the above, you should do this well for consistency
  10. 00:39:590 (1) - Not to sure, but new combo shouldn't be here
  11. 00:40:206 (3) - New combo should be here because that's where the repeat of the previous vocals is, only do this if you do the above suggestion, or else it be fuqed up combo
  12. 01:08:151 (1) - Again , unneeded new combo imo
  13. 01:16:165 (1) - Reverse selection, to make the jumps consistent.


[Collab]

  1. 00:24:179 (8,9) - Move 8 to the left a little bit more, so note 9 can be blanketed, like this http://puu.sh/2sjYD , would suffice , (better than previous)
  2. 00:34:453 (2) - I'm not a big fan of such major super jumps like these , They are just waaay hard to reach, even for the hardest diff of the mapset, The best fix is to think of something else ( I don't want to limit your creativity on this)
  3. 00:44:932 (1) - What the poof is up with this, this slider should be moved to the next white tick, (In fact if you did this the jump to this note would actually feel pretty nice because there a real strong beat in the white tick)
  4. 01:11:028 (6) - Flip this slider vertically, it'll make an mirror image of this whole pattern , which seems to be better anyway (why can't I say it just looks nicer lol)
  5. 01:11:439 (1) - Another major jump in the map , please reduce spacing so its around 2.00 QAQ
  6. 01:13:083 (2) - The reverse is kinda hidden by comboburst by this note : 01:12:672 (5) - , anyways its not good idea to do this because it can be possibly hard to see the reverse and make gameplay really bad
  7. 01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd recommend not to make a jump on this section / part because its suppose to be the calm -relaxing part, telling players to slowdown and take it easy , and the jumps don't help
  8. 00:12:261 (4) - Oh and make this note be blanketed by previous slider too please
  9. 00:58:494 (3) - Just reposition this please e_e
  10. I don't want to be too nitpicky here, but this diff is good (better than the rest lol)

Map needs more improvement.

Good luck!
Ayesha Altugle
3,052 posts
Joined October 2011
Ayesha Altugle
[Normal]
01:21:371 (1,2) - unsnapped slider and note, if you use 1/6 snap divisor then move it one left from its position
[Hard]
01:21:371 (1,2,3) - same as normal
[Insane]
01:21:371 (1,2,3,4) - same as normal and hard
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose
thank you! But after careful listening I believe the unsnapped sliders fit the vocals a bit better D:
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
LET'S GET TO THIS AS SLOW AS HUMANELY POSSIBLE.

NICE IDEA CDFA.

Insane:
00:11:850 (3) - Flip horizontally to make an easier transition into (4)?
00:16:782 (5) - It'd be cool if this was parallel to (4)
00:20:891 (2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern is not symmetrically star-esque. I think 5 and 6 are the issue, but I'm no shape master.
00:32:603 (3,4,5) - Why
00:45:138 (1) - Bring this back to the red tick to fit the vocals.
01:10:412 (4) - Why
01:13:699 (3) - ^

Hard:
00:28:699 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this pattern more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698392 (Ignore the NC)

Normal:
00:33:631 (6) - Make this curve much more notable, it's not notable at all and looks silly.
Sometimes I'd wish you'd use less 1/2, but I don't see a

Easy:
It's a bit 1/1y but it looks pretty ok.

Sorry it took so long, and sorry it's not the best mod, I've been out of the modding thing for a while D:.
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

CDFA wrote:

LET'S GET TO THIS AS SLOW AS HUMANELY POSSIBLE.

NICE IDEA CDFA. omg i nearly forgot that i even asked you to mod huehue it's been that long

Insane:
00:11:850 (3) - Flip horizontally to make an easier transition into (4)? looks a bit odd
00:16:782 (5) - It'd be cool if this was parallel to (4) looks odd parallel, made it 180 instead (b'-')b
00:20:891 (2,3,4,5,6) - This star pattern is not symmetrically star-esque. I think 5 and 6 are the issue, but I'm no shape master. i cannot make stars ;A; fixed
00:32:603 (3,4,5) - Why because i cannn, will change if it bothers more people
00:45:138 (1) - Bring this back to the red tick to fit the vocals. not sure if I want to do this, still unsure as to whether i want this slider to fit the drums or the vocals :/
01:10:412 (4) - Why yeaaaa i'm in the middle of remapping, and i stopped there ish
01:13:699 (3) - ^ ^
i'm actually in the middle of remapping insane D:! thanks though! ^__^

Hard:
00:28:699 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this pattern more like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/698392 (Ignore the NC) fixed, made it more curvy though

Normal:
00:33:631 (6) - Make this curve much more notable, it's not notable at all and looks silly. fixed
Sometimes I'd wish you'd use less 1/2, but I don't see a )):

Easy:
It's a bit 1/1y but it looks pretty ok. eh, i'll fix some other time... eventaullyyy

Sorry it took so long, and sorry it's not the best mod, I've been out of the modding thing for a while D:. that is ok, you did excellent >:D
HabiHolic
5,410 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
Hi~ Form My M4M Queue~


[Basic]

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.


[general]

  1. Rename your background. 'BG' or just 'background'

[Easy]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:562 (4) - I think we need y'all out separately.
  2. 01:18:014 (1) - Remove NC

    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~ Good Map~

[Normal]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:13:083 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:12:261 (7) - New Combo
  3. 00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - Normal seem to be too difficult to hit.
  4. 00:31:782 (2) - This 00:31:987 (3) - I would overlap and the head.
  5. 00:34:453 (1) - Remove NC
  6. 01:05:686 (2,3,4) - To delete 01:05:686 - Of short repeated in this section to create a slider?



    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~


[Hard]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:57:055 (2,3) - Change the position after the
  2. 01:16:165 (1) - Ctrl + g
  3. 01:22:946 (1) - Remove NC

    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  4. 01:24:590 (1) - Add at the end of the finish?


[Insane]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:329 (1) - Remove NC
  2. 00:44:932 - Add Note
  3. 00:55:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The line jump distance, may take Better we need are overmapping rules


    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~

The first map?The first map is good?We wish you Rank the ~
Good Luck~ Star +1
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

HabiHolic wrote:

Hi~ Form My M4M Queue~


[Basic]

red is unrankable issue.
blue is recommended to fix.
 Black is just suggestion.


[general]

  1. Rename your background. 'BG' or just 'background' fixed

[Easy]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:08:562 (4) - I think we need y'all out separately. i think it's fine stacked :D
  2. 01:18:014 (1) - Remove NC fixed

    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~ Good Map~

[Normal]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:13:083 (1) - Remove NC fix
  2. 00:12:261 (7) - New Combo fix
  3. 00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - Normal seem to be too difficult to hit. took out stuff
  4. 00:31:782 (2) - This 00:31:987 (3) - I would overlap and the head. maybe not D:
  5. 00:34:453 (1) - Remove NC fix
  6. 01:05:686 (2,3,4) - To delete 01:05:686 - Of short repeated in this section to create a slider? kayy



    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~


[Hard]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:57:055 (2,3) - Change the position after the mmm no D:
  2. 01:16:165 (1) - Ctrl + g fix
  3. 01:22:946 (1) - Remove NC fix

    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  4. 01:24:590 (1) - Add at the end of the finish? it's a really calm and soft part, i think the finish will sound off D:



[Insane]

  • mapping
    (These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:329 (1) - Remove NC okayy
  2. 00:44:932 - Add Note added
  3. 00:55:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The line jump distance, may take Better we need are overmapping rules will fix if someone else points it out~


    Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
    None~

The first map?The first map is good?We wish you Rank the ~
Good Luck~ Star +1 thank you so much i love you ;A;
Drianel
38 posts
Joined July 2011
Drianel
Hello from my mod queue ^^

overall is really good so i didn't change lot of things, but here we go :)

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:24:795 - Add circle (10)
00:24:590 (9,1,2) - Move due to the new pattern. Something like this:
SPOILER
00:28:597 - Add circle (4)
01:02:706 - Add circle here?
01:02:809 (5) - move to adjust to the new pattern
SPOILER

>>>> HARD <<<<

01:19:247 - Add circle with finish
01:19:247 (1) - move spinner to 01:19:453
01:25:412 - Add circle with finish
01:25:309 (1) - move spinner to 01:25:617 (same change as before)

>>>> NORMAL <<<<

00:08:562 (6) - NC
00:08:973 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:138 (6) - NC
00:26:234 (3) - Look at the grid snap here, move a little to the left
SPOILER
01:25:412 (1) - This spinner need to start in 01:25:412 and end in 01:27:055


That's all, i can't mod more cause this map is almost perfect :) but i enjoyed playing and modding this one. Good luck ;)

- Drianel -
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

Drianel wrote:

Hello from my mod queue ^^

overall is really good so i didn't change lot of things, but here we go :)

>>>> INSANE <<<<

00:24:795 - Add circle (10) i don't hear a beat here D:
00:24:590 (9,1,2) - Move due to the new pattern. Something like this: well i did move the circles :D
SPOILER
00:28:597 - Add circle (4) ok :)
01:02:706 - Add circle here? added
01:02:809 (5) - move to adjust to the new pattern done :D
SPOILER

>>>> HARD <<<<

01:19:247 - Add circle with finish i think the spinner is fine where it is :D but i understand your intentions
01:19:247 (1) - move spinner to 01:19:453 ^
01:25:412 - Add circle with finish ^
01:25:309 (1) - move spinner to 01:25:617 (same change as before) ^

>>>> NORMAL <<<<

00:08:562 (6) - NC i think (1) is the beginning of the new stanza, so I'll leave the NC how it is~
00:08:973 (1) - Remove NC ^
00:15:138 (6) - NC nah :)
00:26:234 (3) - Look at the grid snap here, move a little to the left right, fixed~
SPOILER
01:25:412 (1) - This spinner need to start in 01:25:412 and end in 01:27:055 vocals start there though D:


That's all, i can't mod more cause this map is almost perfect :) but i enjoyed playing and modding this one. Good luck ;) hehe thankyou!

- Drianel -
eveless
2,080 posts
Joined April 2009
eveless
Request from eveless's normal queue

[general]

  1. Fill ハナエ in Artist, 神様はじめました in title like that
    SPOILER
    Or check this at the .osu(use txt to open it)
    SPOILER
  2. check this on your all .osu files: change all your 
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1”
    to

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0”

[Insane]

  1. 00:09:795 (5) - This wasn’t stacked well, move this note to x:366 y:214 to do it better.
  2. 00:12:877 (1) - according to the lyric “akai” (the lyric means red in English), move this new combo to 00:12:261 (4).
  3. 00:34:453 (1) – Since there is no vocal at this part, so I’d like to move this newcombo to 00:34:042 (8) - instead of here.
  4. 00:35:275 (1,2,3) – The spacing between these notes is irregular, same problem at next bar,I mean 00:36:919 (2,3,4), adjust to an even one please o.o

[Hard]
  1. 00:51:713 (1,2,3,4) – The transition from 1 to 2 is really unflow for me, I hope you can replace these :<
  2. 00:12:261 (5) – same problem with Insane, I really don’t like to mention Newcombo problem in my mod but you should fix this cuz the newcombo doesn’t make sense at all.
  3. 01:01:576 (5) -
    SPOILER
    It doesnt stacked well

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:028 (5) – Missing a whistle in the beginning
  2. 00:54:179 (5) –Missing a clap in the beginning.
  3. 00:56:234 (7) -^same problem
  4. 00:58:699 (4,5) – and these
  5. 01:04:042 (3,4) – Missing a clap in these beginning
  6. 01:11:439 (1) – and this.

[Easy]
  1. 00:15:138 (4) – Nazi spacing, from 0,9x to 1.0x.
  2. 00:40:206 (2) – remove all the clap like this, I mean the clap you added at the first beat per bar. It doesn’t make sense at all, try use whistile or finish instead of them.

It seems like the newcombo is really random in your mapset, make a check for them please.
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

goodbye wrote:

Request from eveless's normal queue

[general]

  1. Fill ハナエ in Artist, 神様はじめました in title like that
    SPOILER
    Or check this at the .osu(use txt to open it)
    SPOILER
  2. check this on your all .osu files: change all your 
    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",1,1”
    to

    [Events]
    //Background and Video events
    0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0”

[Insane]

  1. 00:09:795 (5) - This wasn’t stacked well, move this note to x:366 y:214 to do it better.
  2. 00:12:877 (1) - according to the lyric “akai” (the lyric means red in English), move this new combo to 00:12:261 (4).
  3. 00:34:453 (1) – Since there is no vocal at this part, so I’d like to move this newcombo to 00:34:042 (8) - instead of here.
  4. 00:35:275 (1,2,3) – The spacing between these notes is irregular, same problem at next bar,I mean 00:36:919 (2,3,4), adjust to an even one please o.o

[Hard]
  1. 00:51:713 (1,2,3,4) – The transition from 1 to 2 is really unflow for me, I hope you can replace these :<
  2. 00:12:261 (5) – same problem with Insane, I really don’t like to mention Newcombo problem in my mod but you should fix this cuz the newcombo doesn’t make sense at all.
  3. 01:01:576 (5) -
    SPOILER
    It doesnt stacked well

[Normal]
  1. 00:11:028 (5) – Missing a whistle in the beginning
  2. 00:54:179 (5) –Missing a clap in the beginning.
  3. 00:56:234 (7) -^same problem
  4. 00:58:699 (4,5) – and these
  5. 01:04:042 (3,4) – Missing a clap in these beginning
  6. 01:11:439 (1) – and this.

[Easy]
  1. 00:15:138 (4) – Nazi spacing, from 0,9x to 1.0x.
  2. 00:40:206 (2) – remove all the clap like this, I mean the clap you added at the first beat per bar. It doesn’t make sense at all, try use whistile or finish instead of them.

It seems like the newcombo is really random in your mapset, make a check for them please.
all fixed, i'll take a look at the new combos.. i'm not very good at them >< thank you!
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,804 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi; modding for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>Easy
  1. 00:19:658 (2) - Whistle? The song clearly "demands" it.
  2. 00:22:946 - 00:34:453 - Add whistles every two white ticks here? It sounds really empty here currently without them.
  3. 00:38:562 - Whistle?
  4. 00:41:850 - ^
  5. 00:53:357 - 01:16:371 - Add a whistle every tall white tick (the beginning of a new stanza)? Seriously, those notes on the music sound weird unhitsounded.
  6. 00:55:001 (4) - Actually, if you want to apply an NC every two stanzas, this is the wrong way. You're supposed to set the beginning of the combo from the beginning of the kiai time (aka the end of 00:50:069 (1)), so you should NC this, de-NC 00:56:645 (1), NC 00:58:288 (3), de-NC 00:59:932 (1), and so on until the end of the kiai time. (Consider my hitsound suggestions on harder diffs too.)
>Normal
  1. The combo pattern on the kiai time is inconsistent. Sometimes you apply an NC every stanza, but sometimes you do it every two of them instead. Fix this please.
  2. 00:06:919 (3,4) - Spacing inconsistency?
  3. 00:33:631 (4) - ...This slider looks weird. Move the second anchor point/node to (192,84)?
>Hard
  1. To be honest, I'm confused with the combo pattern. Until the kiai time, you're mostly applying NCs every two stanzas, but once it went to the kiai, you're applying them every stanza. Make them consistent?
  2. 01:08:151 (5) - Since it seems you're applying an NC every stanza here, NC?
  3. 01:11:439 (5) - ^
>Insane
  1. Same combo problems as Hard. Nothing really went wrong here though, I guess.
Okay, that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
Hi ~
From Our Queue ~ ♥

[Easy]
00:15:549 (1,2) - make this slider same shape for better?
00:17:603 (3) - little curved same as 00:18:836 (1) - ?
00:21:302 (5) - make curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719826
00:24:590 (4) - curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719826
00:38:151 (1) - curved like 00:39:384 (1) - ?
00:40:617 - remove whistle?
00:53:357 (2) - 1 grid left better imo
00:56:645 (1) - curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719854
01:21:302 (1) - make in center because after spin it's little hard to newbie.. hmm i guess https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719860
01:03:220 (1) - curved same as 01:04:042 (2) - .. not sure but i try make like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719873 ?
01:06:508 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719887 ?
01:08:973 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719903?

[Normal]
00:06:919 (3) - spacing issue (1,08x)
00:13:083 (2) - make same with 00:12:261 (1) - better imo
00:18:631 (3) - 1 grid left?
00:30:138 (2) - ^
00:26:028 (2) - x:156 y:52?
00:32:603 (2,3) - i think this position better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719924
00:33:631 (4) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719927 ?
00:35:275 (1) - spacing issue (1,19x)
00:36:713 (2) - spacing issue (1,09x)
00:42:466 (2) - remove clap?
00:44:727 (3) - x:168 y:308 for better?
01:11:439 (4) - ctrl+H? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719940
01:14:521 (5) - x:476 y:208 for avoid jump too?
01:15:960 (5) - x:132 y:140 for one line with 01:15:549 (3) -

[Hard]
HP+1?
00:08:562 (8) - x:160 y:56 for consistency spacing?
00:11:028 (6) - spacing issue (1,12x)
00:15:343 (7) - spacing issue 1,28x
00:21:919 (9) - spacing issue 1,10x
00:25:823 (2) - x:240 y:260 better imo

sorry i not really like with music ><
and can't mod insane well

Good Luck :D
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose
Hinsvar

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi; modding for M4M.

*Bolded = Unrankable or strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems.

>Easy
  1. 00:19:658 (2) - Whistle? The song clearly "demands" it. fix
  2. 00:22:946 - 00:34:453 - Add whistles every two white ticks here? It sounds really empty here currently without them. fix
  3. 00:38:562 - Whistle? fix
  4. 00:41:850 - ^ fix
  5. 00:53:357 - 01:16:371 - Add a whistle every tall white tick (the beginning of a new stanza)? Seriously, those notes on the music sound weird unhitsounded. fix
  6. 00:55:001 (4) - Actually, if you want to apply an NC every two stanzas, this is the wrong way. You're supposed to set the beginning of the combo from the beginning of the kiai time (aka the end of 00:50:069 (1)), so you should NC this, de-NC 00:56:645 (1), NC 00:58:288 (3), de-NC 00:59:932 (1), and so on until the end of the kiai time. (Consider my hitsound suggestions on harder diffs too.) fix
>Normal
  1. The combo pattern on the kiai time is inconsistent. Sometimes you apply an NC every stanza, but sometimes you do it every two of them instead. Fix this please. fix, changed to every 2
  2. 00:06:919 (3,4) - Spacing inconsistency? fix
  3. 00:33:631 (4) - ...This slider looks weird. Move the second anchor point/node to (192,84)? fix, changed to a regular 'ol curve
>Hard
  1. To be honest, I'm confused with the combo pattern. Until the kiai time, you're mostly applying NCs every two stanzas, but once it went to the kiai, you're applying them every stanza. Make them consistent? fix, changed to every other stanza
  2. 01:08:151 (5) - Since it seems you're applying an NC every stanza here, NC? see above
  3. 01:11:439 (5) - ^ ^
>Insane
  1. Same combo problems as Hard. Nothing really went wrong here though, I guess. fix, thanks
Okay, that's it.

Good luck on the way 8-) thank you~

Xinely

Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
From Our Queue ~ ♥

[Easy]
00:15:549 (1,2) - make this slider same shape for better? used the same shape but flipped it horizontally
00:17:603 (3) - little curved same as 00:18:836 (1) - ? not exactly the same but i curved it
00:21:302 (5) - make curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719826 fix
00:24:590 (4) - curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719826 same screenshot! lulz, but fixed
00:38:151 (1) - curved like 00:39:384 (1) - ? fix
00:40:617 - remove whistle? no i think i like it there :D
00:53:357 (2) - 1 grid left better imo i think it's fine D:
00:56:645 (1) - curved? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719854 fix
01:21:302 (1) - make in center because after spin it's little hard to newbie.. hmm i guess https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719860 fix
01:03:220 (1) - curved same as 01:04:042 (2) - .. not sure but i try make like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719873 ? fix
01:06:508 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719887 ? fix
01:08:973 (4) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719903? fix

[Normal]
00:06:919 (3) - spacing issue (1,08x) fix
00:13:083 (2) - make same with 00:12:261 (1) - better imo fix
00:18:631 (3) - 1 grid left? i think it's ok
00:30:138 (2) - ^ i think it's ok
00:26:028 (2) - x:156 y:52? fix
00:32:603 (2,3) - i think this position better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719924 fix
00:33:631 (4) - try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719927 ? changed to a regular curve
00:35:275 (1) - spacing issue (1,19x) fix
00:36:713 (2) - spacing issue (1,09x) fix
00:42:466 (2) - remove clap? no, there's drums in the bg
00:44:727 (3) - x:168 y:308 for better? moved to nearby location instead
01:11:439 (4) - ctrl+H? like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/719940 fix
01:14:521 (5) - x:476 y:208 for avoid jump too?think it's fine
01:15:960 (5) - x:132 y:140 for one line with 01:15:549 (3) - i think it's ok :D

[Hard]
HP+1? fix
00:08:562 (8) - x:160 y:56 for consistency spacing? fix
00:11:028 (6) - spacing issue (1,12x) fix
00:15:343 (7) - spacing issue 1,28x fix
00:21:919 (9) - spacing issue 1,10x fix
00:25:823 (2) - x:240 y:260 better imo fix

sorry i not really like with music >< aww :(
and can't mod insane well

Good Luck :D thank you~
Oyatsu
1,909 posts
Joined December 2012
Oyatsu
hi,
[Normal]
01:00:549 (5,6) - - When moving the mouse will quite difficult. Why don't you change the place of (6)
01:17:192 (6,7) - Change repeat slider
00:49:658 (2,3) - Change into a slider stars 00:49:453 - to 00:49:658 - and repeat
[Hard]
00:11:131 - Add circle (sensible with vocal)

Perfect map! Let rank :D
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

Loki-san wrote:

hi,
[Normal]
01:00:549 (5,6) - - When moving the mouse will quite difficult. Why don't you change the place of (6) sure
01:17:192 (6,7) - Change repeat slider think it's ok D:
00:49:658 (2,3) - Change into a slider stars 00:49:453 - to 00:49:658 - and repeat okk
[Hard]
00:11:131 - Add circle (sensible with vocal) eh, i don't hear anything here D:

Perfect map! Let rank :D ty! :D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
From my que
this song www

[General/All diffs]
source should be Kamisama Hajimemashita this anime's title is the same with the theme's title
01:24:590 (1) - end this at 01:25:309 and delete the spinner is better imo
01:04:864 set a fountain here?

[Easy]
I think tick 1 for easy diff is enough
ok

[Normal]
00:15:138 (6) - whistle in the beginning?
00:39:384 (2) - I guess you fogot a clap in the beginning
01:09:384 (3) - clap
neat diff ww nice

[Hard]
00:15:138 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - something like this?
some part is too jump.such as 00:12:261 (1,2) - 00:19:658 (3,4,5,1) - 00:22:740 (2,3,4,5,1) - ,which makes this diff a little like hard+.Except for this,the whole diff is OK

[Insane]
00:06:302 (2) - I would place this at 224,80 for a better flow
00:09:795 (3,4,5,6,1) - Using Creat Polygon Circles to make a star is better imo.
00:11:850 (4,1) - 3/4 don't fit here i think.I would change it to 1/2 and rotate 00:11:028 (2) - by 120° twice for a triangle
00:18:836 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not add some clap to follow the drums?
00:49:966 add a note is better
00:50:994 (6,7) - remove them is better imo
00:58:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm plays not so good.try another pattern?
good enough diff for a newbie mapper.but I don't think such high SV fits well in this song.keep trying next time

nice enough to get a bubble imo.try to ask a BAT for mod
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

No_Gu wrote:

From my que
this song www wwwww

[General/All diffs]
source should be Kamisama Hajimemashita this anime's title is the same with the theme's title ok, i was using english title, but i'll use japanese instead :D
01:24:590 (1) - end this at 01:25:309 and delete the spinner is better imo i think i'll keep the spinner actually, there's some nice pleasant sound thing at the very end where the spinner is
01:04:864 set a fountain here? ok

[Easy]
I think tick 1 for easy diff is enough uhh will consider
ok

[Normal]
00:15:138 (6) - whistle in the beginning?
00:39:384 (2) - I guess you fogot a clap in the beginning
01:09:384 (3) - clap
neat diff ww nice thanks, fixed all hitsounds :)

[Hard]
00:15:138 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - something like this? ? D:
some part is too jump.such as 00:12:261 (1,2) - 00:19:658 (3,4,5,1) - 00:22:740 (2,3,4,5,1) - ,which makes this diff a little like hard+.Except for this,the whole diff is OK fixed some, but not all :P

[Insane]
00:06:302 (2) - I would place this at 224,80 for a better flow ok
00:09:795 (3,4,5,6,1) - Using Creat Polygon Circles to make a star is better imo. not exactly a star, but did adjust a little
00:11:850 (4,1) - 3/4 don't fit here i think.I would change it to 1/2 and rotate 00:11:028 (2) - by 120° twice for a triangle ok
00:18:836 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - why not add some clap to follow the drums? done
00:49:966 add a note is better yeaa
00:50:994 (6,7) - remove them is better imo but she goes neighhh~ and the vibration I think suits the triple
00:58:494 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm plays not so good.try another pattern? eh, i'll do something
good enough diff for a newbie mapper.but I don't think such high SV fits well in this song.keep trying next time when I originally got this from a guest mapper, it was in 2.00 velocity, and when I remapped it, I was too lazy to change it :P

nice enough to get a bubble imo.try to ask a BAT for mod will try, thank you :D
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
I love this song so much. *faints*



Tomoe is hot.

Easy


General: HP +1, OD +1

[Real Deal]

Actually I can't find very much. So i just go arrange-nazi and all.

00:07:329 (3) - maybe change this slider's position to x:132 y:140. It looks better in my opinion.
00:18:836 (1) - change position to 324/264
00:25:412 (1) - change to 432/228
00:26:645 (2) - the bow should be in the other direction. Like this
01:08:562 (1) - change position to 312/56
01:09:795 - make that slider round, maybe?
01:21:302 (1) - I don't think that slider fits very well to the beat... Consider changing the beat into something like this

That's all.

Okay next one.

Normal


00:07:329 (4,5) - Looks messy. Consider changing it.
00:06:508 (2) - seems out of place. Think about changing position to 360/112
00:19:658 (2) - I would follow the guitar here. It's a nice bossa nova at the beginning, why not exaggerate that?

Yeah that's all. ...

Hard


I don't want to change hard and Insane. I love both. Here, take a star.
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

ChivaCookie wrote:

I love this song so much. *faints*



Tomoe is hot. yessss *w*

Easy


General: HP +1, OD +1 I think it's fine the way it is now xD i'll change it if someone else suggests it

[Real Deal]

Actually I can't find very much. So i just go arrange-nazi and all.

00:07:329 (3) - maybe change this slider's position to x:132 y:140. It looks better in my opinion. hmm, it does look nice, but to me it looks a bit high up @_@ moved it down and changed it to a straight slider lol
00:18:836 (1) - change position to 324/264 good idea, but moved it more down haha
00:25:412 (1) - change to 432/228 i like it blanketing 4 though :P
00:26:645 (2) - the bow should be in the other direction. Like this fixed
01:08:562 (1) - change position to 312/56 looks a bit odd, made it stack on the slider instead
01:09:795 - make that slider round, maybe? yup! well not exactly round like a circle though
01:21:302 (1) - I don't think that slider fits very well to the beat... Consider changing the beat into something like this I kinda want the end to be pretty easy and relaxing :)

That's all.

Okay next one.

Normal


00:07:329 (4,5) - Looks messy. Consider changing it. will consider :D
00:06:508 (2) - seems out of place. Think about changing position to 360/112 fixed
00:19:658 (2) - I would follow the guitar here. It's a nice bossa nova at the beginning, why not exaggerate that? don't want it to be too hard xD

Yeah that's all. ...

Hard


I don't want to change hard and Insane. I love both. Here, take a star. thank you ;A;
Alarido
1,744 posts
Joined September 2012
Alarido
M4M From My Queue (:
Thank you for very very helpful mod!

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods
[easy]
♥ Nice diff ^^

00:05:686 (1) - This slider could flow better with further notes if you place it at x:484 y:136
00:31:576 (3,1) - Move both objects 1 grid down in order to get aligned with 00:30:343 (2) 's head
00:31:987 (1) - If you followed last mod, just move the 3rd dot of the slider by 1 grid up, keep spacing safe.
01:01:576 (1,2,3,4) - These are nice, but could be better as follows: ► move 01:01:576 (1) to x:268 y:236, ► move 01:02:398 (2) to x :176 y:156, ► move 01:03:220 (3) to x:304 y:44 and...
01:04:042 (4) - ...a better blanket here by moving the slider to x:360 y:208, and move the middle dot to x:364 y:260, and the last dot (tail) to x:336 y:308.
01:16:371 (3) - Move 1 grid right and 1 grid down, better blanket-like patterns.
01:23:768 (2) - Move to x:92 y:308, and move the middle dot to x:48 y:216, better blanket here (:

[Normal]
01:23:768 (2) - Could rotate a bit here... Make Ctrl-Shift-R, it'll open a window. Enter "8" (without the quotation marks) in the field and mark the options "Anti-Clockwise" and "Selection Centre", and hit OK. Reason: make better pattern with the last slider.
00:13:905 (3,4,5,6) - If you applied the last mod, just move them together by 1 grid left. Moving this is for keep spacing safe. (Yeah, I checked the pattern's distance consistency too)
00:15:549 (1) - If you applied the last mod just move it 1 grid up (: to keep spacing safe.
01:06:508 (3) - Move the middle point by 4 grid up, better blanket with (4).
01:17:603 (7) - Move to x:332 y:228, better pattern.
01:18:014 (1) - If you applied last mod, Move to x:280 y:160 to keep spacing safe.
01:21:302 (1) - For better mirrored pattern disable Grid Snap (temporarily) and move it to x:196 y:294.

[Hard]

01:02:809 (4) - Move the middle point by 1 grid left, and the last dot (tail) by 2 grid left to better "slider couple".
01:08:151 (1) - Move the middle point to x:356 y:184 and the last dot (tail) to x:356 y:236, better pattern of "Mary and Child" sliders ^^
01:09:795 (1) - Move the middle point to x:284 y:64 and the last dot (tail) to x:244 y:76, better slider patterns.
01:16:165 (1) - Move the middle point to x:272 y:72 to better blanket with the next slider's head.
01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Could make these patterns like → http://puu.sh/2QTkm.jpg and → http://puu.sh/2QTny.jpg and → http://puu.sh/2QTs8.jpg

[Insane]
00:31:576 (5) - Move to x:164 y:132 to better pattern (:
00:35:994 (2,3) - Move them together by 1 grid down to align with previous slider's tail.

♥ Really the most untouchable patterns live here imo


That's it ^^

and... AWESOME SONG ♥ I Love this kind of arrangements on the drums and other instruments <3 GOOD CHOICE IMO ♥

GO GO RANK!!! Let's Rank it soon, dear BATS!!! :D

Att.
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

Alarido wrote:

M4M From My Queue (:
Thank you for very very helpful mod!

Legenda wrote:

:!: → Unrankable things, must fix
:?: → My human doubts, things to consider
:idea: → Tips & Tricks to make your map better
* → Just comments, not mods
♥ → Greetings
Naked Lines → Mods
[easy]
♥ Nice diff ^^

00:05:686 (1) - This slider could flow better with further notes if you place it at x:484 y:136 done
00:31:576 (3,1) - Move both objects 1 grid down in order to get aligned with 00:30:343 (2) 's head moved 1 down a bit xD
00:31:987 (1) - If you followed last mod, just move the 3rd dot of the slider by 1 grid up, keep spacing safe. moved it my own way, thanks :D
01:01:576 (1,2,3,4) - These are nice, but could be better as follows: ► move 01:01:576 (1) to x:268 y:236, ► move 01:02:398 (2) to x :176 y:156, ► move 01:03:220 (3) to x:304 y:44 and... done, flows better now xD
01:04:042 (4) - ...a better blanket here by moving the slider to x:360 y:208, and move the middle dot to x:364 y:260, and the last dot (tail) to x:336 y:308. fixed
01:16:371 (3) - Move 1 grid right and 1 grid down, better blanket-like patterns. fix
01:23:768 (2) - Move to x:92 y:308, and move the middle dot to x:48 y:216, better blanket here (: fix

[Normal]
01:23:768 (2) - Could rotate a bit here... Make Ctrl-Shift-R, it'll open a window. Enter "8" (without the quotation marks) in the field and mark the options "Anti-Clockwise" and "Selection Centre", and hit OK. Reason: make better pattern with the last slider. done
00:13:905 (3,4,5,6) - If you applied the last mod, just move them together by 1 grid left. Moving this is for keep spacing safe. (Yeah, I checked the pattern's distance consistency too) i was confused at first cause I think you typed the wrong time there ^, but i understand now :) fix
00:15:549 (1) - If you applied the last mod just move it 1 grid up (: to keep spacing safe. fix
01:06:508 (3) - Move the middle point by 4 grid up, better blanket with (4). fix
01:17:603 (7) - Move to x:332 y:228, better pattern. fix
01:18:014 (1) - If you applied last mod, Move to x:280 y:160 to keep spacing safe. fix
01:21:302 (1) - For better mirrored pattern disable Grid Snap (temporarily) and move it to x:196 y:294. done

[Hard]

01:02:809 (4) - Move the middle point by 1 grid left, and the last dot (tail) by 2 grid left to better "slider couple". ok sure
01:08:151 (1) - Move the middle point to x:356 y:184 and the last dot (tail) to x:356 y:236, better pattern of "Mary and Child" sliders ^^ mary and child? XD never saw it that way til now, fix
01:09:795 (1) - Move the middle point to x:284 y:64 and the last dot (tail) to x:244 y:76, better slider patterns. done
01:16:165 (1) - Move the middle point to x:272 y:72 to better blanket with the next slider's head. done
01:21:302 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Could make these patterns like → http://puu.sh/2QTkm.jpg and → http://puu.sh/2QTny.jpg and → http://puu.sh/2QTs8.jpg
good idea, but I think i'll keep it how it is now :D
[Insane]
00:31:576 (5) - Move to x:164 y:132 to better pattern (: fixed
00:35:994 (2,3) - Move them together by 1 grid down to align with previous slider's tail. fixed

♥ Really the most untouchable patterns live here imo


That's it ^^

and... AWESOME SONG ♥ I Love this kind of arrangements on the drums and other instruments <3 GOOD CHOICE IMO ♥

GO GO RANK!!! Let's Rank it soon, dear BATS!!! :D thank you for your support and star and great mod ;A;

Att.
Snepif
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
Snepif
Hey, my part of the m4m.

[General]

Folder seems fine, and everything else too.

[Easy]

I felt that the SV was kinda too high but it's okay, I believe.
00:24:596 (4) - This looks better if it's straight like this imo:
SPOILER
00:32:815 (2,3) - Make a better blanket with these:
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01:04:870 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern :< this is better:
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01:07:335 (4) - Then copy (3) shape and mirror it for this slider
01:25:315 (1) - I know this spinner starts on the vocals but i feel like it could start at 01:24:801 (1) - or something to follow the background sound.

[Normal]

SV kinda high again :< try to use less in your next maps, specially if it's "calm"

00:08:973 (1,2,3) - Looks ugly, do this:
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00:12:261 (1,2) - Make them mirror each other so it doesn't look ugly.
00:15:549 (1) - Delete the whistle from the start, and add whistle in the return, to be consistent with your previous notes. Also delete whistle from the end.
00:16:782 (2) - Whistle
00:26:234 (3) - What about copying 00:25:001 (4) - and ctrl+h here? Like this:
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00:31:987 (1,2,3) - Move (2) a bit up:
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00:46:576 (x) - Add note or something?
00:53:357 (3,5) - Make these two equal and mirrored:
SPOILER

Less polite than easy but still good.

[Hard]

00:15:549 (1) - This looks better and flows better:
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00:16:782 (4,1) - The jump from the slider to (1) is kinda insane-ish maybe?
00:28:494 (4) - Move it here to flow better with the slider shape:
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00:54:795 (4) - Make it equally spaced from (3) and (1), in other words, move it to x380 y316
01:18:014 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think overmapping this part is a good idea, specially 01:18:425 (2) - that note

[Insane]

00:30:138 (1) - I don't like how the return is in the big white tick, my suggestion:
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00:37:638 (2,3) - Move them like this to follow the slider shape:
SPOILER
00:41:439 (5,1) - Again, the slider should not be in the red tick, it feels weird, do this:
SPOILER
00:50:891 (5,6,7) - This triplet is really confusing and it doesn't follow anything.. there should be a single note at 00:50:891 (5) -

Looks like Kei already modded this... hmmmm I'll see what I can do

Good luck!
Raose
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Topic Starter
Raose

Snepif wrote:

Hey, my part of the m4m.

[General]

Folder seems fine, and everything else too.

[Easy]

I felt that the SV was kinda too high but it's okay, I believe.
00:24:596 (4) - This looks better if it's straight like this imo: fixed
SPOILER
00:32:815 (2,3) - Make a better blanket with these: fixed
SPOILER
01:04:870 (1,2,3) - I don't like this pattern :< this is better: fixed
SPOILER
01:07:335 (4) - Then copy (3) shape and mirror it for this slider fixed
01:25:315 (1) - I know this spinner starts on the vocals but i feel like it could start at 01:24:801 (1) - or something to follow the background sound. uhh I would do that, but it'd mess up my other diffs, because there's already notes there D:

[Normal]

SV kinda high again :< try to use less in your next maps, specially if it's "calm" I don't think it's too high ahah

00:08:973 (1,2,3) - Looks ugly, do this:
SPOILER
00:12:261 (1,2) - Make them mirror each other so it doesn't look ugly. fixed
00:15:549 (1) - Delete the whistle from the start, and add whistle in the return, to be consistent with your previous notes. Also delete whistle from the end. my mistake, fixed
00:16:782 (2) - Whistle fixed
00:26:234 (3) - What about copying 00:25:001 (4) - and ctrl+h here? Like this: fixed
SPOILER
00:31:987 (1,2,3) - Move (2) a bit up: 00:25:001 (4) -
SPOILER
00:46:576 (x) - Add note or something? nahh, don't want to make it too hard D:
00:53:357 (3,5) - Make these two equal and mirrored: fixed
SPOILER

Less polite than easy but still good.

[Hard]

00:15:549 (1) - This looks better and flows better: fixed
SPOILER
00:16:782 (4,1) - The jump from the slider to (1) is kinda insane-ish maybe? i'll try to do something
00:28:494 (4) - Move it here to flow better with the slider shape: fixed
SPOILER
00:54:795 (4) - Make it equally spaced from (3) and (1), in other words, move it to x380 y316
01:18:014 (1,2,3,4) - I don't think overmapping this part is a good idea, specially 01:18:425 (2) - that note changed to 1/1 sliders instead :P

[Insane]

00:30:138 (1) - I don't like how the return is in the big white tick, my suggestion: fixed
SPOILER
00:37:638 (2,3) - Move them like this to follow the slider shape: fixed
SPOILER
00:41:439 (5,1) - Again, the slider should not be in the red tick, it feels weird, do this: fixed
SPOILER
00:50:891 (5,6,7) - This triplet is really confusing and it doesn't follow anything.. there should be a single note at 00:50:891 (5) - fixed

Looks like Kei already modded this... hmmmm I'll see what I can do thanks ^____^ i actually contacted her to recheck the map lolol

Good luck!
Low
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Joined July 2011
Low
[General]
the audio must be removed from the video file to avoic excess filesize; here's a link to the version without audio
this nature of the song may require the map to have multiple timing sections. i'm working on it with someone right now and should get the correct timing for you soon.
01:19:247 (1) - in all diffs, silence the end of this spinner since there's no music at the end of it.
01:24:590 (1) - in all diffs, you should start the last spinner here since it sounds kinda weird to map the last vocal part due to it being slightly off beat. also, silence the end of it as well and end it at 01:26:234; sounds a lot better

[Easy]
00:16:371 (2) - remove the whistle from the end of this slider, it sounds odd and doesn't follow your hitsounds
00:17:603 (3) - remove the whistle from the repeat and add whistles to the start and end.
00:40:206 (2) - should have a clap at the end of it
01:06:508 (3) - same as above
01:09:795 (3) - add a node to this slider at the same place as the middle slidertick; it curves the slider just a bit more drastically and makes it look better.
01:25:103 (1) - this should start one tick later with the vocals.

[Normal]
00:22:946 (2,3) - the transition from (2) to (3) doesn't look or flow very well; try something like this
SPOILER
00:26:234 (3,4) - it looks silly for (4) to be near the reverse of the previous slider, nor does it flow well. consider rotating (3) for better flow:
SPOILER
00:41:850 (1) - remove the clap from the end of this slider. it doesn't sound right
00:45:138 (1) - really sloppy slider.. i'm sure you can fix this and make it look better
01:04:042 (5,6) - add claps to the ends of these sliders; it's in the music.

[Hard]
00:12:877 (2) - make this slider linear to match 00:13:699 (4)
00:16:782 (4) - ctrl+g this and it flows a lot better.

[Insane]
raise the OD to 8 to give players a bit more of a challenge.
00:11:028 (2) - should be a whistle at the start of this slider.
00:18:836 (1) - in this section starting here and ending at 00:21:713 (6), you used claps very nicely. why didn't you do it for the other diffs to match the music?
00:59:932 (1,3) - these almost overlap and are a bit too close together

solid mapset.
Raose
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Topic Starter
Raose
thaaaanks, fixed all ^_______^
Sync
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Sync
Hi Zhengster.

This is a relatively long mod and in fact, it's incomplete. However, before we can move on to other things such as flow and combo colors we need to get the beat placement down. Below contains a mod of mostly beat placement changes. It's kind of long but very important. Please go through it. Nothing is mandatory but I highly suggest following most of it. You have a good understanding of mapping already -- this is a very solid first map. Anyways, this is for the Insane.

00:07:329 (1) - this slider shouldn't be 1/1. the note at 00:07:535 needs to be stressed or else the player won't feel the vocals (likewise,they won't "hit" the note).

00:07:946 (2) - You don't want to end a slider on a beat that is heavier than the beginning. It doesn't play or listen as well as it would if the white-tick was stressed properly. More importantly, there isn't really anything on the red tick, other than the bass.

Here is a screenshot of how the beats should be layed out

00:38:151 (4) - The downbeat should be stressed properly -- ending a repeat slider doesn't do it any justice

00:44:932 (5,1) - The slider *needs* to start where (5) is instead. I realize that you wanted to map the drums here like you were doing but the vocals are way stronger at this point. So yeah, you'll want to switch these two elements around.

00:48:014 (4) - same as 00:38:151 (4)

00:49:453 (3,4,5,6,1) - I'm not liking this slider placement -- it's common to put 1/4 notes after a slider like this but it doesn't play as well as it could. Remove the slider and replace it with hit circles instead to allow for a smoother transition into the drum roll.

00:54:590 (5) - Rememeber what I was talking about earlier? Same thing applies here too, except there's an easy fix. Shorten the slider by 1/4 and put a hit circle on the downbeat.

00:57:877 (5) - Same as 00:38:151 (4)

00:59:932 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - This whole section should be reworked. Having 1-beat sliders at 00:59:932 and 01:00:754 would follow the music much better. See this screenshot of the timeline: http://puu.sh/3adIg.jpg

01:02:706 (6) - Remove this 1/4. It doesn't follow the music very well.\

01:03:014 (1) - Similar to the other sliders ending on downbeats, this should be changed. Instead, replace the start with a hit circle and make a 1-beat slider starting on the downbeat. That way it follows both the percussion and the vocals effectively.

PM me if any of it is confusing.
Raose
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Topic Starter
Raose
fixed all and made changes beyond the mod, including a slower slider velocity and rearranging some objects so that the jumps aren't quite so large. Thanks for the helpful mod ^__^
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
As promised, here is your video http://puu.sh/3bDC1.avi
Alarido
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Alarido
Hi, Zhengster ^^

Please put an advice in the "Creator Words" for everyone re-download the map! I say it because the video wasn't loading until I deleted and re-downloaded the map.

Anyone told about variable timing... I testplayed the [Normal] and got SS, timing looks file (:

Att.

P.S.: for blissfulyoshi, I love your mapping style on BoA - Eien [Blissful's Normal]
Raose
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Topic Starter
Raose
omg i can't believe you came back thanks for telling me

and thanks blissfulyoshi for the videoooooooo ^__^
Magic_Pzha
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Magic_Pzha

Raose wrote:

SPOILER

tutuhaha wrote:

[Collab]
00:10:412 (8) - move to x300 y48 play will be more fun
00:11:439 (2) - ^ then move to X300 y48
00:13:699 (5,6) - dont really like this overlap
00:18:836 (1) - maybe use more big space will play more fun, try to move it to X384 y64
00:21:508 (5,6) - ctrl+g
00:19:658 (3) - move to x120 y252, now play looks too close with 2，then try to make parallel with 00:20:480 (1)
00:23:768 (7) - NC
00:23:768 (7,8) - use big space will be better
00:28:699 (6) - NC need begin here I think
00:36:097 (3,4) - toooo close, hard to read
00:44:316 (X) - add note
00:48:836 (X) - ^
00:57:466 (1,2) - I think those two sliders space need bigger than 00:56:645 (1,2) -
00:57:877 (2,3) - not really like this design
01:04:247 (2) - move to x272 y132
01:22:124 (3) - move down litter bit, touch HP now

[Hard]
00:16:165 (4,5) - doesnt agree use this way, too hard to read with low AR then looks ugly........
00:17:192 (1,2,3,4) - listen music，you will see this part need easy than 00:18:014 (5,6) - this part, but now is not
00:19:658 (3,4) - can not understand why use too big space
00:28:699 (4) - NC begin here
00:50:069 (1) - litter bit weird for this spinner, because there has very clear rhythm, try to use note and slider to instead it

[Normal]
00:36:713 (2,3) - space，make it look same like 00:38:151 (4,5) -

love this anime and this song
just so cute

thank you, fixed most~
Raose
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Raose
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Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • • I don't like your "comboburst-0.png", what about using only "comboburst-1.png"? The quality of the image is a lot better.

Easy

  • • 01:21:302 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy, try this:
    SPOILER
    • 01:23:768 (2,1) - End the slider and start the spinner both 1/4 later.
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later.

Normal

  • • 00:07:329 (4,5) - Try this spacing for a better flow:
    SPOILER
    • 00:35:275 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern:
    SPOILER
    • 00:42:466 (2,4) - Delete these circles, then start a slider at 00:42:466 and end it at 00:42:877.
    • 00:48:836 (x) - Add a circle.
    • 00:52:124 (x) - ^
    • 01:21:302 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it.
    • 01:24:179 (4) - Move this circle at x:424 y:264.
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later.

Hard

  • • 00:36:713 (3,4) - Try this pattern:
    SPOILER
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later.

Insane

  • • 00:30:754 (2) - Move this circle at x:270 y:129.
    • 00:44:110 (3,4) - Delete (4), end (3) 1/4 later and add a circle at 00:44:727.
    • 00:54:590 (5) - End this slider 1/4 earlier since it doesn't follow anything.
    • 00:56:645 (1) - ^
    • 01:06:508 (1) - ^
    • 01:13:083 (1) - ^
    • 01:13:905 (4) - ^
    • 01:23:768 (6) - Try this pattern:
    SPOILER

Nice map, check these suggestions and call me again for a recheck.
Raose
698 posts
Joined July 2012
Topic Starter
Raose

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

• Suggestion.
• You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

General

  • • I don't like your "comboburst-0.png", what about using only "comboburst-1.png"? The quality of the image is a lot better. sure, took out comboburst-0

Easy

  • • 01:21:302 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for an Easy, try this: changed
    SPOILER
    • 01:23:768 (2,1) - End the slider and start the spinner both 1/4 later. changed
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later. done

Normal

  • • 00:07:329 (4,5) - Try this spacing for a better flow: okay
    SPOILER
    • 00:35:275 (1,2,3) - Try this pattern: done
    SPOILER
    • 00:42:466 (2,4) - Delete these circles, then start a slider at 00:42:466 and end it at 00:42:877. good idea
    • 00:48:836 (x) - Add a circle. added
    • 00:52:124 (x) - ^ added
    • 01:21:302 (1) - There's no new combo mark here, add it. oops, forgot hehe, added
    • 01:24:179 (4) - Move this circle at x:424 y:264. sure, had to adjust the previous pattern so it doesn't violate distance snap
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later. kay

Hard

  • • 00:36:713 (3,4) - Try this pattern: changed
    SPOILER
    • 01:24:590 (1) - End this spinner 1/1 later. fixed

Insane

  • • 00:30:754 (2) - Move this circle at x:270 y:129. done
    • 00:44:110 (3,4) - Delete (4), end (3) 1/4 later and add a circle at 00:44:727. fixed
    • 00:54:590 (5) - End this slider 1/4 earlier since it doesn't follow anything. fixed
    • 00:56:645 (1) - ^ ^
    • 01:06:508 (1) - ^ ^
    • 01:13:083 (1) - ^ hope you don't mind, made it a 1/1 slider instead
    • 01:13:905 (4) - ^ ^
    • 01:23:768 (6) - Try this pattern: good idea, changed
    SPOILER

Nice map, check these suggestions and call me again for a recheck. thank you ;A;
Diasios
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(ノ ﾟДﾟ)ノ彡
Raose
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Thank you so much ^_________^ <33
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(ノ ﾟДﾟ)ノ彡
Oyatsu
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Oyatsu
Finally Ranked! Congratz!
Cloudchaser
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Cloudchaser
Oh god <3 this song is beautiful ~ congratz
Alarido
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Alarido
Aeeewww :3

RANKEEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOUUUUUU ^^

Congratulations!

I'm glad on one of the maps I modded got Ranked !

Let's share the glory
Let's enjoy the moment
'Coz life is short et amusant aussi ^^

Att.
mintong89
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omg yes <3
gratz!
UnitedWeSin
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UnitedWeSin
Gratz first rank!
Really nice mapset!
Raose
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Thanks so much guys! ^___^ <33 I didn't expect it to get ranked this fast after bubble :DD
jyu
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Congratz!! >.<
Dark_Ai
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Dark_Ai

AlpacaCokelat wrote:

Congratz!! >.<
HeatKai
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I want to become a naughty girl sometimes \o/
Kamisama Hajimemashita \o/
Lion8980
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Nanami so cute <3

Gratz!
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I LIke map
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hallo :oops:
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