KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

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新人试着做一下m4m。。希望能帮到忙
[Normal]
我实在找不出什么问题

[omoi]
01:54:871 这里的1/4拍的滑条打起来有点奇怪。为什么不和01:47:252 以及 01:51:061 保持一致呢？ 虽然在之前由其他modder提到了…………

希望好歌早日rank~
这种程度的mod，m4m不了吧 你不看rule就在queue里随意post，我本来都打算ignore了……原本kd都不打算给……但是既然mod有帮助，所以还是给了

HabiHolic wrote:

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Hello~ From My Queues~



[Normal]

00:49:156 (1) - This part .. I think the spinners do not get suitable fixed
00:59:156 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:09:871 (1) - ^ no change
01:16:061 (4) - Normal less difficulty in overlapping circles I do not want to recommend something ...
01:47:609 (2) - Rhythm is difficult for beginners I guess you can not do.
01:51:418 (2) - ^ no change
02:12:490 (1) - Elsewhere Sort fixed
02:33:204 (1) - Remove Nc fixed
02:35:347 (4) - NC fixed

[Omoi]
00:49:395 (1) - Spinner 00:51:061 - Here to the end no change
01:54:871 (1) - Distance check fixed

Nice Dff Map~

Good Luck~!

zweiii wrote:

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[General]
图做的越来越好了
这音乐不错有挺多想表现的地方的 都有点想做GD了。。。

[Normal]

[节奏]
感觉有些地方的快慢节奏的衔接不是很好 我也不太好下手改。
三拍子的那种回滑条 还有连续四分一的节奏 二拍子的回滑条。。。
或许整体缺乏一种统一的规律性 so sad...

00:49:156 加个note 转盘往后移一拍
01:57:966 (1) - 。。。。。
02:09:156 note
02:09:395 (1) - 开始结束位置？
02:24:871 (2,3,4,1) - 换点别的节奏
02:36:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -

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[排列]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 对称到右边去好点 no
00:38:680 (2) - 加弧度 k
01:47:609 (2) - 加弧度 k
02:20:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 摆法感觉对应不上音乐 打起来也没什么感觉 no
我也摆不出太好的 节奏对称你可以考虑对称来摆

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[打击音]
00:26:776 (3) - finish
00:30:585 finish
00:42:014 finish
00:45:823 ↑
00:53:442 ↑ 有些加了有些没加，感觉是加了会突兀
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - 会不会有点单调 来点变化？sr涨的太快了
01:06:776 finish no
01:16:537 去掉whistle 跟vocal
01:16:776 减点音量
01:17:014 whistle
01:18:204 whistle
01:19:156 ↑
后面的看着改吧。。偷懒

[Omoi]

[节奏]
00:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变成这样?

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或者

00:49:395 (1) - 这个转盘接的有点怪 考虑换成别的节奏不用转盘了？ 你前三个带起了节奏这里一下就转盘了不太好
00:55:228 (8) - 移到这里会不会好点 00:55:109 (7,9) - 这两个的组合感觉上是挺好的 刚好这里00:55:347是新的重音起 停顿同处起感觉不错
01:54:752 (1,2) - 改成

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或者

感觉第二种接近点你的原意
01:57:966 (1) - 同上
02:02:966 (4) - 去掉？ 给你一种节奏的参考
02:09:871 (1) - 这结束在哪里？02:12:014这好点？

[排列]
00:53:442 (1,2) - ctrl+G？
00:54:871 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这样如何？

SPOILER

00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个我理解的节奏是 底底大底 放成大概下下上下的感觉会不会好点？大概这样？

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01:08:680 (1,2,3,4) - 或许两个一样的pattern？：
01:09:395 (3) - ctrl+G？大概就这感觉 要改的话注意保留这个01:10:585 (8) - 的感觉
弄个反跳或者远端往回走什么的
01:17:252 (4) - 这个强调感觉不够 想办法强调下 我没考虑前后随便摆了个

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01:18:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - 锯齿跳不太适合这儿
我理解的5678大概是这感觉 后面我还加成了连打 01:19:990不过这样后面节奏衔接不上
我主要是强调下5678那感觉就没了 您自己想办法搞搞吧

SPOILER

01:27:252 (4,5,1) - 这是不是换个转向好点？（顺逆时针）
4完了5大概到你后面黄色的1那里
02:01:299 (6,7) - ctrl+G？
02:02:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥 不适合这
02:04:871 (1,2,3,4) - 同上面问题 可以想点不同的表现方法
上下上下也比两个stack好点
02:05:823 (1,2,3) - 02:07:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 路线有点单调
02:19:871 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥！
02:24:395 (4) - ctrl+G再往左边移点？
02:36:776 (5) - ctrl+G？

[打击音]
试试加入drum （还有clap）
00:23:799 whistle？
00:26:776 小点音量的finish？
00:29:633 (1,2,3) - 这三个都同音量的whistle不太好 你可以尝试音量弄点变化
00:39:395 00:41:299这些位置可以试试用drum的音 就是音乐里低音懂的鼓点
00:42:014 (5) - finish？
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - 这三个可以试试懂懂怕 drum drum clap（soft？）
有挺多地方用drum的组合起来感觉不错
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 懂懂怕懂？
00:59:156 (1,3,5,6) - 懂大 懂懂大？
01:08:680 01:09:395 finish
01:18:323 (2) - 去掉whistle
01:20:466 去掉whistle
01:28:680 (2,3,4) - 打击音改为01:28:680 01:29:156 whistle 01:29:633 finish
01:29:990 (5) - 音效略突出 小点声
01:30:585 (2,3,4,5) - 懂懂大懂
01:31:537 drum finish
01:32:014 去掉音效
01:32:490 whiste 该强调的地方没音效？
01:35:347 finish
02:13:204 (5,6) - 去掉 whistle
02:14:871 这个音效不太好 和前后衔接不好 具体没想到怎么改
02:15:347 finish
02:19:156 强调下
02:25:109去掉
02:38:204 finish

Gloria Guard wrote:

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Hi qkenan (:3」_)=3 Hi~

From my queue

[Normal]

00:23:442 (2) 4 grid down? http://puu.sh/2a1Fe seems it touched the score bar so moved a little down

00:36:537 (1) Spinner and the distance is too far away not so far, no change

00:43:561 (2,1,2,3) For the formation of the pattern a little bit better shape.. fixed
I think this pattern feels better shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a1Zs

00:52:966 add note? unnecessary, no change

00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) Please make a neat rectangular shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a21n I like them being slant

01:11:537 (4) Ctrl+G? fixed

01:15:704 (2,3,4,1) distances don't fit. change please -> http://puu.sh/2a2nu fixed

01:30:109 (2) remove note Delay it by 1/2 beat

01:46:776 (1) Please keep notes audible when the song isn't totally silenced, increase the volume to at least 20%. fixed

01:47:252 The sound here is too small. this is part sound 40% up please fixed

02:00:109 (1) spinner next note is difficult, spinner end 02:00:109 please fixed

02:12:490 (1,2,3) Think about it a different beat than the beat. -> http://puu.sh/2a2Y5 no change

02:14:395 (1,2,3) ^ too changed some way

02:15:823 (1,2,3,4,5,1) Not a good pattern of flow changed


[Omoi]

00:19:157 remove break time fixed

00:21:061 ^ too

00:23:799 (3,4,5) Flow pattern of bad, would you change? -> http://puu.sh/2a3AT I cant see where it's bad

00:25:585 (3,4) ^ too ^

00:29:633 (1,2,3,4,) could be improved a little bit more. http://puu.sh/2a3FZ This is my pattern, no change

00:32:728 (1,2,3) i can't understand, why is the jump?.. there's 1 beat between the notes, why not jump?
I want to reduce the distance

00:40:109 (1,2,3) ^ too Seems to be difficult for many players. even added DT mod It's still very easy

00:44:871 (6,1,2,3) The flow pattern is bad. no change

00:51:061 (1,1) Same Normal no change

01:04:276 (3,4,5) Flow is very bad. -> http://puu.sh/2a3QI no change

01:06:537 (4,5,6,1) omg .. Jump here why? Please reduce the distance I think it's fine now

01:25:347 (4) Ctrl+G? no change

01:56:299 (1,2,3,4,5) why is big jump..? as above

02:07:728 (4,5,1) specing

02:12:014 (1) spin mistake

02:14:395 (2,3,4) specing ^^seems all unnecessary to change


P.S : More in need of improvement this map and The appearance of some of the patterns is not good.

Good luck

lkx_Shore wrote:

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[General]
整体音量可以提高10~20%
[Omoi]
00:30:347 (4,1) - (4) - ctrl+>+> x216 y84 00:31:061 (1) - ctrl+h x284 y40
00:33:799 (5) - ctrl+h x344 y236
00:39:633 (3,4,1) - 00:39:633 (3) - x428 y320 00:39:871 (4) - x496 y264 00:40:109 (1) - x332 y232
00:57:728 (2) - x304 y84
01:04:395 (4) - x208 y68
01:27:252 (4,5) - 转完前面的三角以后觉得这挺绕的.-.
01:27:252 (4,5) - ctrl+g ctrl+h x132 y116
02:18:442 (5,6) - ctrl+g 02:18:918 (7) - x120 y24
总体来说有的改了有的没改……不过大多不顺手的pattern都做了调整
[Normal]
HP-1 fixed

[Other]
insane和normal之间要有一个hard...(biegaosuwo"Omoi"shihard)
最低难度要几星来着？忘了

Goodluck

1. 00:34:395 (1) - add note at 00:34:395 and start this spinner at 00:34:514, ending position do not need change.
2. 00:41:061 (3,4) - 3/4 vocal is here and if you need consistence, you'd better do the same with 00:25:823 (4).
3. 00:49:395, 00:49:633 - add notes and start spinner at 00:49:752, no change to the ending point.
4. 00:55:109 (7,8,9) - not the right place for triple. remove 8 and consider add note at 00:55:704.
5. 01:01:061 - add note and change the start point of the spinner to 01:01:180, no change to the ending point.
6. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - how about make the order slider-note-note
7. 01:18:204 (1) - about the rhythm here, suggest you move this to 01:18:085 and adjust it's location, and other things such as new combo and spacing.
8. 01:49:633 (3) - cancel the whistle on sliderbody.
9. 01:51:061 (1) - ^
10. 01:54:871 (1) - ^
11. 01:57:966, 01:58:204 - add notes and change the start position to 01:58:323, let the ending point stay the same.
12. 02:09:871 (1) - start this at 02:09:752. ending point still at 02:12:014.
13. 02:12:252 (1) - new combo

1. AR-1
2. 00:38:680 (2) - cancel the whistle on the sliderbody, when adding whistles to circles on sliders, you should select every single of them and do the thing.
3. 00:41:061 (5) - ^
4. 00:46:776 (2) - ^
5. 00:56:299 (3) - ^
6. 01:08:680 (3) - ^
7. 01:31:537 (1) - ^
8. 01:33:204 (4) - ^
9. 01:49:633 (1) - ^
10. 01:53:442 (2) - ^
11. 02:02:014 (1) - ^
12. 02:04:871 (5) - ^
13. 02:05:823 (1) - ^
14. 02:17:252 (1) - ^
15. 02:21:061 (3) - ^
16. 02:22:966 (3) - ^
17. 02:24:871 (2) - ^
18. 02:26:776 (4) - ^
19. 02:28:680 (2) - ^
20. 02:34:395 (6) - ^
21. 02:40:109 (1) - ^
22. 02:41:537 (3) - ^
23. 02:00:585 (1) - new combo
24. 00:34:395 (1,1) - the note is too far from the center of playground.
25. 01:11:537 (4) - move this farther from the HP bar

Colin Hou wrote:

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[Omoi]

1. 00:34:395 (1) - add note at 00:34:395 and start this spinner at 00:34:514, ending position do not need change.
2. 00:41:061 (3,4) - 3/4 vocal is here and if you need consistence, you'd better do the same with 00:25:823 (4).
3. 00:49:395, 00:49:633 - add notes and start spinner at 00:49:752, no change to the ending point.
4. 00:55:109 (7,8,9) - not the right place for triple. remove 8 and consider add note at 00:55:704.
5. 01:01:061 - add note and change the start point of the spinner to 01:01:180, no change to the ending point.
6. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - how about make the order slider-note-note
7. 01:18:204 (1) - about the rhythm here, suggest you move this to 01:18:085 and adjust it's location, and other things such as new combo and spacing.
8. 01:49:633 (3) - cancel the whistle on sliderbody.
9. 01:51:061 (1) - ^
10. 01:54:871 (1) - ^
11. 01:57:966, 01:58:204 - add notes and change the start position to 01:58:323, let the ending point stay the same.
12. 02:09:871 (1) - start this at 02:09:752. ending point still at 02:12:014.
13. 02:12:252 (1) - new combo

[Normal]

1. AR-1
2. 00:38:680 (2) - cancel the whistle on the sliderbody, when adding whistles to circles on sliders, you should select every single of them and do the thing.
3. 00:41:061 (5) - ^
4. 00:46:776 (2) - ^
5. 00:56:299 (3) - ^
6. 01:08:680 (3) - ^
7. 01:31:537 (1) - ^
8. 01:33:204 (4) - ^
9. 01:49:633 (1) - ^
10. 01:53:442 (2) - ^
11. 02:02:014 (1) - ^
12. 02:04:871 (5) - ^
13. 02:05:823 (1) - ^
14. 02:17:252 (1) - ^
15. 02:21:061 (3) - ^
16. 02:22:966 (3) - ^
17. 02:24:871 (2) - ^
18. 02:26:776 (4) - ^
19. 02:28:680 (2) - ^
20. 02:34:395 (6) - ^
21. 02:40:109 (1) - ^
22. 02:41:537 (3) - ^
23. 02:00:585 (1) - new combo
24. 00:34:395 (1,1) - the note is too far from the center of playground.
25. 01:11:537 (4) - move this farther from the HP bar

All fixed

这歌你都剪 GG

Sherry wrote:

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[General]
02:19:871 : SBの歌詞がすぐ消えすぎて次の歌詞が早く入りすぎています。これを見つけてありがとう！fixed

[Normal]
00:22:966 (1) ： まっすぐ上よりはちょっと右にずれているので、きれいにまっすぐ上にするためにx256 y88に移動してみてはどうでしょうか fixed

00:27:252 (1,2,3,1) : リズムのパターンがこれでひとつになっているので00:28:680 (1)でNCは少しおかしい感じがします。 00:27:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) のパターンを変えるかNCの位置を変えましょう このままでいいと思います
00:30:109 (4) : 曲的にくるっと回るスライダーよりははじめにあがって後は下がり最後にあがる印象があります。以下のような形なんてどうでしょうか？ fixed

SPOILER

00:39:633 (3) :曲げましょう fixed
00:40:585 (4) : 00:39:633 (3)が終わった方向に飛ぶようにしましょう fixed

SPOILER

00:42:966 (2) ： 曲線が少し汚いです。 00:42:014 (1) をコピーしてCtrl+<を押して配置したほうがいいでしょう fixed

00:47:728 (3) : 00:46:299 (1) と位置がずれています。 00:46:299 (1) をコピーしてCtrl + Hで配置しなおしてください
00:49:156 (6) :^ fixed

01:14:395 (1) : add finish? fixed

01:48:204 (3) : 次が上方向なのに01:47:609 (2)の終端の下に来るのはあまりよいとは思えません。 01:47:609 (2)の終端方向にしたほうがいいかもしれません。 x288 y252 ? fixed

01:47:609 (2,2,2) :ナンバーが見えなくなるほど重なっているのは少し汚く見えます。直せるなら直したほうがいいかもしれません(難しいかなぁ) 多分大丈夫だと思いますから

02:30:585 (4) : add finish? fixed

[Omoi]
00:40:109 (1,2,3) :ジャンプしすぎて空間が寂しくなっている気がします。　ジャンプしても難しくならない上に、遠いジャンプを期待している場所ではない気がするので少し近づけてはどうでしょうか？

01:18:085 (6) : remove
01:18:204 : add no change

01:35:109 (4) : 連打のほうがいいかも？menu -> Compose -> convert slider to Stream ...いいえ、このままのほうがいい感じです。

yurunneram wrote:

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Okay~ Lets go! >w<

General
Good thing that you did a story board. But if you can try making it move a bit and start at diff locations for the starting part or ppl will want to skip it. And nice colours~ I'm considering about it

Normal
00:44:871 (3) - Why don't you make it like 00:41:061 (5) (like in terms of how long it lasts and when it repeats) cuz rhythm wise it'll sound pretty good It wouldnt be suitable for the vocal or music.
01:10:585 (3) - make it like 01:08:680 (3) (again for da rhythm) As above, no change
02:00:585 (1,2,3) - Make it in a straight line maybe? If so the ①circle would be too far from centre...and may change many placings of following notes.. so no change

It was mapped very well. I thank you for not letting this be crap ^^

Omoi
00:44:395 (6) - Flip it vertically? seems unnecessary and current placing better

Not much. I enjoyed playing this one a lot Great job! Good luck for the mod!

You have been modded out by Yurun Neram

Frans Niko wrote:

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from my queue

General
Looks good

Normal
uhm
01:04:871 - New Combo for suggestion seems unnecessary
01:53:442 - can't get the rythme with 1/4 please change the slider fixed
02:13:918 - New combo (but same colour with the next note) to follow the vocal so no change

Omoi~
01:04:971 - New Combo (but same colour with the next note) seems unnecessary

omg all looks good

don't kudosu if this mod not help

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

稍微再提一点想法。

Normal

1. 00:46:776 （2）往上移动一格 没必要
2. 01:22:014 （2）听起来有点奇怪。是不是跟后面的slider交换一下，再改一下位置？ 原来的也无不妥，改后也没多大差别……所以没动
3. 02:07:728（2）向上移动一格
4. 02:09:156 （4）往上移动到（132，120）一到两格？保持距离一致 这边几个重新调整了下

Omoi

1. 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗？ 嘛……说随意的确有点，当初的想法主要是1/4的节奏要加，然后一些比较重的vocal会跟着加一点。
2. 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点？ 看起来没什么必要

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

另外normal里面单点的距离在1.01- 0.98之间浮动。不过应该算不上什么大问题吧？

qkenan wrote:

KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:

稍微再提一点想法。

Omoi

1. 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗？ 嘛……说随意的确有点，当初的想法主要是1/4的节奏要加，然后一些比较重的vocal会跟着加一点。
2. 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点？ 看起来没什么必要

- t e n n y a - wrote:

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Same song www

Anyway I'll do m4m at your queue c:

[General]

1. There's a lot unused transparency at your Lyrics picture and it's unrankable, please crop them u.u

[Normal]

1. 00:31:061 (1,2)- : I do suggest to make this slider straightly curved. like move last (1) slider point 2 grid up and last (2) slider point 2 grid up would nice. fixed
2. 00:36:776 (1)- : Too fast for Normal diff >u<. at least there's 1 beat range between a spinner with new note on Normal diff :O I suggest to shorten the Spinner or Remove the Circle at here seems not so difficult ? kept for now
3. 00:57:252 (1)- : add finish on slider head? fixed
4. 01:29:156 (3)- : add finish on slider tail? unnecessary
5. 02:00:585 (1)- : Same as 00:36:776- as above
6. 02:05:823 (1)- : rather than Whistle, I suggest to add Finish here fixed
7. 02:15:347 (2)- : add finish on slider head? fixed
8. 02:22:966 (3)- : ^ fixed
9. 02:28:680 (2)- : ^ fixed
10. 02:38:204 (5)- : ^ fixed

[Omoi]

1. 00:41:061 (3)- : Whistle on slider reverse, remove clap at there >< not fit imo when I changed the ryhthm I just forgot the hit sound ><
2. 01:35:109 (4)- : add finish on slider tail? fixed

That's all I can find, good luck! Nice song and map c:

mercury2004 wrote:

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M4M

Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion

General
In the lyric SB part. Crop the unused transparency part.
Strange that i could see this bookmark flap out. fixed

Normal
00:22:966 (1) - sounds better if you mute this note
00:28:204 (3) - missing head whistle? fixed
00:41:061 (5) - form perfect triangle? like this?[/color] fixed

SPOILER

00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - change it to the otherside? In newbie eye they would see 300s instead of hit notes changed the placings of a few notes
01:06:299 (4) - finish/whistle tail?
01:18:680 - add note? unnecessary, no change
01:29:156 (3) - finish tail? ^
02:18:204 (2,3,4) - form perfect triangle? fixed
02:28:680 (2) - add finish/whistle?
02:38:204 (5) - add finish/whistle?[/color] these two done


Omoi
00:22:966 (1) - delete NC here and NC here 00:23:442 (2) - ?
00:28:204 (5) - This note kinda against the flow reverse it not so bad
00:32:490 (1,2,3) - jump kinda too big for slow pace song reduce to 1.8x
00:54:871 (1) - NC? fixed
01:06:537 (5,6,1) - move it closer to 01:07:252 (2) - ?[/color] fixed
01:18:085 (6,1) - a little bit confusing removed
02:20:823 (7) - move it to x204 y 328?
02:21:776 (3,4,5) - reverse this selection?[/color] no change
02:30:585 (6,7,1,2) - a bit confusing this ryhthm sounds better, kept for now
02:40:109 (1) - NC here? and del NC here? 02:40:823 (1) - fixed
Kudo or no kudo your choice.

Zhengster wrote:

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M4M
newbie modder alert !

[Normal]

00:48:100 - Add note to fit the vocals?
00:49:633 - Vocals start at 00:49:395, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:01:061 - Vocals start at 01:00:823, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:11:537 (4) - have the slider repeat twice
01:57:966 - Vocals start at 01:57:966, so move the slider there and end at the original time
02:14:395 (1) - have the slider repeat twice
02:24:871 (2) - ^
Sorry but considering that it's Normal so all rejected due to difficulty
All these are suggestions ><

Zero__wind wrote:

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你好，我来干嘛的 你好，我来干嘛的

General
02:42:014 (1) - 建议30%音量normal finish 减低了音量，不过还是soft finish适合一些

Normal
HP+1
00:30:109 (4) - 弄得这么行为艺术还不包一下 http://puu.sh/2dt4F fixed
00:56:299 (3,1,2) - 没包好吧 感觉差不多……
00:59:156 (1) - 弄到正下方吧 这样可以保持和00:57:252 (1,2) - 相同的结构 你只需要把后面的1234一起逆时针转一点角度然后挪一挪就好 感觉差不多……
01:15:823 (3) - （151,209）【E和N里面最好不要违背DS+-0.03 fixed
01:17:014 (2) - （202,332） fixed
01:31:537 (1,2) - 倾向于拽着它俩一起挪到（396,328） fixed
01:44:871 (1) - 音量30%吧 +5%
01:53:442 (2,3,4) - j加whistle？【(4)的头】:arrow: fixed
02:15:347 (2) - 闹哪样 fixed
02:23:918 (1) - 包前一个滑条的跟随圈吧 还有就是和后面的那个note隔得略远了一点点 没动
02:26:776 (4) - spacing 好好好
02:35:347 (1) - ^ 好好好

Hard
00:57:966 (3) - http://puu.sh/2dtj1 上去了一点
00:58:918 (5) - 无理大间距 感觉没什么，整体右边移了一点
01:04:395 (4,5) - CTRL+G fixed
01:27:728 (1,2,3,4,1) - 等距 fixed
01:32:490 (4,5,6) - 这样半迁半就的真的好看么0.0 建议这样 http://puu.sh/2dtsZ no no no
01:47:609 (2) - 拉开点儿包跟随圈吧 就算不拉远弧度也要差不多是那么回事儿啊 no no no
01:51:418 (2) - ^ no no no
02:05:347 (3) - 加whistle fixed
02:22:014 (4,5) - CTRL+G 虽然我自己觉得不是很顺……但是你是第二个提了我就改掉吧
02:25:823 (3,4,5) - 随便弄了个形状转角度还不如都包跟随圈 个人感觉 我就喜欢这样w
02:42:014 (1) - 咋不先note再spinner了 当然 这个随意

差不多这样，嗯

Zweib wrote:

加油喔www
star

对modder的建议也不必给太高的采纳率、因为有些mod也许可能比较敷衍wwww。mod带来的提升毕竟有限，主要还是本身的质量要有——比如音效是否有下错，图形是否摆歪了一小格，blanket有没做整齐。所谓怎样摆好看些、换什么节奏更好些其实都无关紧要，不要听太多建议把原来挺好的图改得面目全非。现在看hard感觉很好(移动路径、spacing对我胃口233)，normal感觉就差一些（这还是要以好看为主）。修改pattern的时候注意下整体感和前后consistency

以上只是想起以前做图和mod时候的一点感想，没有针对www

1. 00:23:918 (3,1) - 大面積遮蓋。。不好看。

1. 01:18:323 (1) - 。。。。這個真坑。。試試在01:18:204 - 放個1/4slider。。。現在這樣有點。orz
   
   1. 或者01:17:728 - 這裡放一個note。。。然後把這個位置的slider往後移1/2。。。orz
2. 00:23:442 (1) - 試試放的稍微平一點。。。0。0好看>_>。。你後面的擺的都蠻平的。。。

Athena Tennos wrote:

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[N]

1. 00:23:918 (3,1) - 大面積遮蓋。。不好看。:arrow: 我觉得还成

[OMI]

1. 01:18:323 (1) - 。。。。這個真坑。。試試在01:18:204 - 放個1/4slider。。。現在這樣有點。orz
   
   1. 或者01:17:728 - 這裡放一個note。。。然後把這個位置的slider往後移1/2。。。orz 现在这样最贴合vocal，而且只不过是有个提前的1/4而已，不能算啥很难的梗吧？so no change
2. 00:23:442 (1) - 試試放的稍微平一點。。。0。0好看>_>。。你後面的擺的都蠻平的。。。fixed

感覺可以再去做一個I。。。更有趣點=w=~
我意已决，专著Hard不动摇_(:з」∠)_
☆~

qkenan wrote:

Athena Tennos wrote:

感覺可以再去做一個I。。。更有趣點=w=~
我意已决，专著Hard不动摇_(:з」∠)_

1. Fine.

• OD+1
  
  01:18:918 (3,4,5,6) - 咱感觉这样打起来感觉不错
  
  
  02:20:585 (6,7,1) - flow不好，建议7往上挪

Rotte wrote:

哦，对了，还有一点，现在至少要一个spread，也就是说必须要3个diff才可以，
ENH或者NHI

Rotte wrote:

SPOILER

现在的人做图水平真的好高啊，哭哭

From PM

[General]

Timing

Offset 必须向前退，在17252下红线 fixed


[Normal]

1. Fine.

[Omoi]

• OD+1
  
  01:18:918 (3,4,5,6) - 咱感觉这样打起来感觉不错 方向按着建议，然后形状做了个五角星
  
  
  02:20:585 (6,7,1) - flow不好，建议7往上挪 fixed

图不错啊
咱渣渣，啥都看不出来
SB*1 mapset*1

Normal:

Omoi:

1. 节奏不错,排版可以再花点心思
2. 感觉spinner加太多了
3. 00:49:395 (6) - whistle加在slider开头
4. 00:57:252 (1) - 开头finish
5. 01:04:871 (6) - 这里跟歌词没NC我懂，可是后面为什么又变回按小节NC了……我觉得有必要统一一下。
6. 01:05:228 (x) - 加note然后重排吧，我感觉你后面也有跟vocal加没道理这里不加吧
7. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - 听起来非常别扭，感觉删了7然后把6延长到7的位置比较好点，就跟01:09:395 (3,4) 一样
8. 01:33:204 (6,7,8) - 虽然这么放也问题不大……可是这样显得有点乱. 建议删了7，然后6改成3/4 slider,原来结束的地方放个note
9. 01:48:680 (1,2) - 建议都改成3/4,vocal毕竟并没有在1/2的地方结束，没必要切断vocal，或者直接改成1/1
10. 01:52:490 (4) - ^
11. 02:31:180 (1) - 前移1/4
12. 02:42:133 (1) - 结尾加finish

1. 对于一个慢歌来说我觉得Normal星数略高了，其原因是节奏上个别地方的处理不当
2. 00:38:680 (2) 00:40:942 (5) - 比如这些完全可以不用3/4折返。其实后面也没用，这一段里面也就这里用了。建议改成3/2或者1/1
3. 01:07:490 (1,2,3) - 再比如这里，且不说3/4的问题，前面明明还跟着鼓呢这里突然就进vocal了，然后这边又变回了鼓。
4. 01:15:823 (3,4,1,2,3) - 而且塞这么满想不星数高都难
   
   其实对于一个normal来说，跟鼓也好跟vocal也好，最要会做的是概括性地下节奏。跟vocal不是死板的跟着每个歌词，跟鼓也不只是单纯下1/1。当然不管如何，最重要的是不乱，有整体感。

goodbye wrote:

SPOILER

Request from The Lazy Queue@がんばらない

[General]
其实我觉得前奏可以把BG搞个从暗到亮的渐变。 I'm working on it..
歌词放正中间有点无趣

[Hard]

1. 节奏不错,排版可以再花点心思
2. 感觉spinner加太多了 没太在意
3. 00:49:395 (6) - whistle加在slider开头 这里的vocal是比较平缓的，前面用的whistle突出的是顿促，所以没改
4. 00:57:252 (1) - 开头finish 改了
5. 01:04:871 (6) - 这里跟歌词没NC我懂，可是后面为什么又变回按小节NC了……我觉得有必要统一一下。 改了
6. 01:05:228 (x) - 加note然后重排吧，我感觉你后面也有跟vocal加没道理这里不加吧 改了
7. 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - 听起来非常别扭，感觉删了7然后把6延长到7的位置比较好点，就跟01:09:395 (3,4) 一样 重做了节奏
8. 01:33:204 (6,7,8) - 虽然这么放也问题不大……可是这样显得有点乱. 建议删了7，然后6改成3/4 slider,原来结束的地方放个note 我觉得这样挺干净的，也不算太靠近上面，左右虽然有一点贴着，打起来其实4的burst离着挺远的，没动
9. 01:48:680 (1,2) - 建议都改成3/4,vocal毕竟并没有在1/2的地方结束，没必要切断vocal，或者直接改成1/1 相较于前面，这里的歌词比较平顺，不需要特意弄成1/4做成紧凑的感觉
10. 01:52:490 (4) - ^ 同上
11. 02:31:180 (1) - 前移1/4 前一个slider已经是两个1/4接过来的，尾巴也接两个1/4我觉得不妥，而且目前这样的节奏感觉不错，没改
12. 02:42:133 (1) - 结尾加finish 改了

[Normal]

1. 对于一个慢歌来说我觉得Normal星数略高了，其原因是节奏上个别地方的处理不当
2. 00:38:680 (2) 00:40:942 (5) - 比如这些完全可以不用3/4折返。其实后面也没用，这一段里面也就这里用了。建议改成3/2或者1/1 听着很带感所以没改
3. 01:07:490 (1,2,3) - 再比如这里，且不说3/4的问题，前面明明还跟着鼓呢这里突然就进vocal了，然后这边又变回了鼓。 跟鼓会很无聊所以变成了vocal，感觉还行
4. 01:15:823 (3,4,1,2,3) - 而且塞这么满想不星数高都难 稍微化简了节奏
   
   其实对于一个normal来说，跟鼓也好跟vocal也好，最要会做的是概括性地下节奏。跟vocal不是死板的跟着每个歌词，跟鼓也不只是单纯下1/1。当然不管如何，最重要的是不乱，有整体感。 嗯，我会注意的

Mintice wrote:

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Hi I'm from M4M!
Unrankable
Strong suggestion
Normal suggestion

Normal
00:27:252 (1) - Overlaps with slider starts from 00:25:823 (2) thats too far..
01:09:871 (1) - Hard to read and may lead to slider-start-miss if played by beginners. added NC
01:22:013 (2,3) - Placement doesn't seem that good anything wrong with blanket ?
01:47:251 (1,2) - 1/4 interval in Normal difficulty? they are all sliders, and in such easy rhythm it's not big problem
01:51:061 (1,2) - ^
01:54:871 (1,2) - ^

Normal
00:34:394 (6,1) - Interval problem between circle and spinner. Consider making it as 1/2. that's fine 'cuz it's hard

Generally, this beatmap is very well mapped! Keep going!