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irc部分搞完了Banana wrote:
Hi~ M4M
[Omoi]
00:23:799 - 建议是提前1/4跟vocal 因为是慢歌 fixed
00:27:490 - 同样跟vocal则修改 fixed
00:28:918 (5) - 个人偏好和下一个滑条stack stack了不怎么好看,vocal感觉也是原样比较好
00:29:633 (1,2,3) - 排列啊排列..参考 fixed
00:32:014 (3,4,1) - 由于后面还有跳 这边小跳显得有点多余 另外后面大跳摆正三角形不行吗参考 fixed
00:41:418 - 其实我想说vocal是这里的 没特意跟vocal,所以也只是开头加了whistle之后的部分irc记录雪贰 12:51:04
02:19:514 (2) - 角度突然变了 为什么呢
雪贰 12:51:09
理解不能
雪贰 12:51:27
02:19:871 (3,6) - 整体往下移
鬼くん 12:52:18
就是无意识的放的……
鬼くん 12:52:23
其他已改
雪贰 12:52:43
02:23:085 - vocal在这里
鬼くん 12:53:26
开25%听其实是在黄线……待我想想
雪贰 12:53:34
ara
雪贰 12:53:50
02:22:252 (5) - 强迫症犯了 差一像素
雪贰 12:54:00
(无视我就好
鬼くん 12:54:39
移了下之前的slider尾巴锚点,ok
雪贰 12:54:54
居然改了 我十分感动
雪贰 12:55:42
02:24:156 (4) - 这边ds了有点无聊
鬼くん 12:57:16
放远了点
雪贰 12:57:27
(只是放远..好嘛
雪贰 12:58:02
鬼くん 12:58:06
想不粗能做啥梗
雪贰 12:58:09
02:23:918 (3) -
雪贰 12:59:08
02:24:156 - 刚才还试着摆了一个这里1/2直线上去的梗
雪贰 13:00:09
02:25:823 (3,4) - 要我说这两个也是往下弯了
雪贰 13:00:54
02:29:395 (7) - stack啊 stack
鬼くん 13:03:01
跨越了这么久还stack……痕迹消失了
雪贰 13:03:03
02:33:918 (4) - 根据目测距离这边再左一点
鬼くん 13:03:38
好
雪贰 13:03:38
记坐标也好选中切回去也好总之强迫症会死
雪贰 13:04:22
02:32:252 (4) - (1)(2)到这边可以考虑注意ds
雪贰 13:05:22
02:36:299 (4,5) - 这种若有若无的curve删了算了...
雪贰 13:05:40
要么复制粘贴中心对称
鬼くん 13:05:53
嗯
鬼くん 13:06:40
noooo
雪贰 13:06:43
02:35:109 (8,1) - 02:34:871 (7,2) - 两组间距尽量相同
雪贰 13:06:56
那还两个都是目测的
雪贰 13:07:02
快复制粘贴中心对称
雪贰 13:07:33
诶 好像是对称了的
鬼くん 13:07:39
雪贰 13:07:46
ctrl+g了没认出来
雪贰 13:08:04
不早讲
雪贰 13:08:41
02:38:204 (5) - 考虑向下弯
鬼くん 13:09:28
看起来似乎好看了一点所以改了
雪贰 13:09:49
傲娇语气
雪贰 13:09:51
02:38:918 (1,2,3,4) -
雪贰 13:09:54
修pattern
鬼くん 13:10:51
~休息脖子时间~
雪贰 13:11:02
脖子
雪贰 13:11:25
雪贰 13:11:34
有人中枪了
鬼くん 13:12:18
这里的1234你以为是菱形的梗的吗……?
雪贰 13:12:28
?
鬼くん 13:12:43
雪贰 13:12:53
那是啥
鬼くん 13:13:10
梯形!(slap
雪贰 13:13:29
うさけんな
雪贰 13:14:19
最后一个combo找个地方断一下?
雪贰 13:14:48
02:41:776 (12) - 菱形歪了
鬼くん 13:15:25
嗯
雪贰 13:15:51
以上
雪贰 13:16:11
还有个难度不看了
雪贰 13:16:25
不喜欢摸ez
鬼くん 13:16:29
灰常感谢~
雪贰 13:16:35
阿门
Natsu wrote:
SPOILERHi! o3o
Normal:
00:23:442 missing whistle add it
00:24:395 ^
00:26:776 ^ fixed
00:36:776 this is the easy diff of the map imo this so away from center of previows spinner not so serious
00:38:680 (1,2,1) - distance error fixed
01:07:252 (5,1) - this look bad imo fixed
01:18:680 (1,2) - make they symetrical Current placing looks good
01:30:109 (2,3) - stack they perfect fixed
Omoi:
00:27:252 Remove whistle form slider body sound weird and remove it from tail too just let it in the head fixed
spinner should end here 02:12:014 In fact it ends as the vocal ends, so no change
02:12:252 remove this circle is not following nothing music start here again 02:12:490 ‘cuz vocal starts here, no change
02:19:156 (1) - this touch hp bar plz mov it to other place fixed
Thx for you mod ~
Thx for your mod ~leon1341414 wrote:
replyHi~ M4M
I am new for modding , so it's some suggestion.
Normal
01:00:109 - 可以試試這個
01:01:061 - 建議結束在 01:02:966 , 然後 01:03:442 - 01:03:918 加個slider
01:17:996 - slider加個迴轉如何?
01:25:109 - try this?
01:52:252 - 加個note?
02:08:680 - 改成slider到 02:09:156 ?
02:30:585 - 感覺可以做成像02:28:680這樣的slider
02:25:585 和 02:26:537 加個note , 然後02:25:823 - 02:26:299改成slider?
对Normal的建议都蛮好的,不过限于Star rate,没法增加太多note,略微修改了几处
Omoi
00:17:252 - 其實我不確定spinner可不可以從紅線前面開始lol 我也不大确定……
00:19:157 - 後面的Break去掉吧
00:21:061 - ^ no change
Good luck~
yanlu wrote:
SPOILERM4M ></感覺跟上次看的map進步好多~[Omoi]
00:21:061 (1) - 這個note斷開2個break感覺沒甚麼意義..試試別的開頭吧o.o? 就这么放也没关系吧……
00:27:728 (3) - 跟2不stack或許比較好 fixed
00:44:395 (6) - 跟5一樣做有弧度的?(雖然知道你是做對稱...可是後面3不太明顯>< fixed
^00:45:347 (3,4) - 而且我覺得這兩個 應該節奏交換一下比較好..(先note再slider~ no change
00:48:204 (2) - slider結束在紅線?(然後看要不要00:48:561 - +note作連打)>< 感觉不大舒服,no change
00:49:395 (1) - spin結束在00:51:061 - ? no change
00:58:442 (4) - 下移2~3格吧 fixed
00:59:156 (1) - stack在00:59:633 (3) - 上 然後5移開點? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/630162 特意摆的梗,no change
01:01:061 (1) - 這樣有點趕...何不結束在01:02:966 - >~< 一点都不赶啊,spinner时间足够转满
01:09:156 (2,4) - 如果完全stack不太好分出是藍線 我觉得大概不会,前面也有过几个蓝线节奏
01:12:966 (3) - 跟5做同種slider? fixed
01:18:204 (1,4) - change nc fixed
01:21:299 (2) - x128/y272 特意的遮挡梗
01:24:276 (4) - x316/y292 或其他的... 觉得还行……
01:24:276 (4) - 左2上1 ???
01:27:252 (4,5,1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/630167 ? 梗,no change……orz
01:30:823 (3) - x184/y144 稍微修整了这边的排列,fixed
01:32:490 (4,5) - 交換節奏?(note+slider 排列变动会太大,so no change
01:34:633 (2) - 尾巴的點下移幾格 做有點跟3平行? fixed
01:34:990 (3) - 改成藍線note+slider? fixed
01:35:466 (1) - 在sampleset那邊改成soft更適合~ fixed
01:44:871 (1) - finish? 调高了10%,不过感觉区别不大……fixed
01:54:871 (1) - 跟2的snap近些 我觉得差不多……
01:57:728 (5) - 改成slider到01:57:966 - ? 没必要……
01:58:204 (1) - ^(如果前面有改)要延後開始的地方 然後同前面的00:49:395 (1) - 結束在01:59:633 - ? _(:з」∠)_
02:09:871 (1) - o_o結束在02:11:776 - or 02:12:014 - ? Vocal就是结束在这的吧……
02:15:228 (6) - x108/y100? fixed
02:19:514 (2) - 或許轉一點方向><.. fixed
02:31:299 (1) - 改成note+note比較適合>< fixed
02:41:537 (3,4) - 改成slider? 现在这样也不错
[Normal]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 建議不stack? 感觉还成
00:38:204 (3,1) - 00:40:585 (1,3) - 00:43:918 (1) - NC都對調一下~ fixed
00:49:395 (1) - O_O spin好像慢了一點..往前拉到白線?(+finish~ fixed
00:53:442 (1) - 如果要降低難度 這個可以改成不折返的slider 现在正好3.24~lol
00:55:347 (3) - nc fixed
00:57:252 (1,2,3) - 如果節奏做跟00:53:442 (1,2,3) - 一貫比較好 no change
01:01:061 (1,1) - clap? fixed
01:07:490 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這段是星難度比較高的原因之一~ 同上~
01:13:204 (2) - 排的圓弧點好(1跟3也可以近些~) fixed
01:15:823 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/28CsY 這樣呢><? 比较麻烦所以没动……
01:23:918 (5) - 移到220/348?(或其他位置...這裡stack真的不好" fixed
01:25:347 (2,3) - 改成slider? fixed
01:30:109 (2,3) - x.x.... 改了改了……
01:35:347 (1) - soft finish(同前一個難度~) fixed
01:51:418 (2) - normal diff不要出現藍線的比較好吧p_q
01:47:609 (2) - ^
01:55:228 (2) - ^ 低bpm,况且也没几个……不然就太单调了
02:04:871 (1,2) - change nc
第一個kiai後的nc略亂...orz 基本是按着歌词来的吧……我都是凭感觉下NC欸~~其實我比較想做個GD lol
這歌真的很好聽>w< 是呢~
good luck~
谢谢mod~
谢谢mod~Zweib wrote:
SPOILERHi~
[Normal]
star difficulty还应该再压低一点,现在是3.24.这难度后面半截(01:47:252 开始)还是不要用slider压蓝线了 sr可是我精打细算过的
或者这bpm其实做个easy也挺快的XD
00:28:680 (1,2,3) - 这三个你加了whistle,感觉不错(其实(4)的滑条头也可以加)。那么00:32:014 (2,3,4) - 00:46:776 (2,3,4) - 等这几乐句都对称的,考虑下要不要也加上去 fixed
00:49:395 (1) - 你想跟vocal?效果不好,建议把这个spinner拉到00:52:104
02:09:395 (1) - 拉到02:12:104 …………
pattern我就不怎么挑你啦,反正一般作者也都不会改233.
低难度图怎么好看怎么摆就好
01:15:109 (2) - 这个不太好看 fixed
[Omoi]
感觉音效下的不是很统一,不如就2/4白线whistle为主就好了233。很多3白线的whistle音不是很必要 凭感觉下的orz
00:27:252 (1,2,3) - (1)的尾巴加whistle,(3)的whistle去掉 fixed
01:06:776 (1) - 这里不是whistle而是finish fixed
01:29:633 (4) - ^ fixed
01:27:728 (1) - finish fixed
你很多whistle音效都是直接加在滑条上的,这样其实除了头尾有soft whistle音,滑条上还会有soft sliderwhistle音,一般是不会注意到啦这么小的声音,但不知道会不会被mat/bat挑 音量比较低,大概不要紧吧233
1/2以及更长的slider都修正了音效,1/4的就不管了……yanlu wrote:
:o 雖然音量是低的,可是會影響到太鼓遊玩喔!所以還是要set好吧><
不過我忘記說...其實可以再提高一點綠線的聲音..現在真的有點小聲...:3"
Edit: starrr
Anyway,Thx for your modKaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:
SPOILER新人试着做一下m4m。。希望能帮到忙
[Normal]
我实在找不出什么问题
[omoi]
01:54:871 这里的1/4拍的滑条打起来有点奇怪。为什么不和01:47:252 以及 01:51:061 保持一致呢? 虽然在之前由其他modder提到了…………
希望好歌早日rank~
这种程度的mod,m4m不了吧 你不看rule就在queue里随意post,我本来都打算ignore了……原本kd都不打算给……但是既然mod有帮助,所以还是给了
Thx for your mod~HabiHolic wrote:
SPOILERHello~ From My Queues~
[Normal]
00:49:156 (1) - This part .. I think the spinners do not get suitable fixed
00:59:156 (1) - Remove Nc?
01:09:871 (1) - ^ no change
01:16:061 (4) - Normal less difficulty in overlapping circles I do not want to recommend something ...
01:47:609 (2) - Rhythm is difficult for beginners I guess you can not do.
01:51:418 (2) - ^ no change
02:12:490 (1) - Elsewhere Sort fixed
02:33:204 (1) - Remove Nc fixed
02:35:347 (4) - NC fixed
[Omoi]
00:49:395 (1) - Spinner 00:51:061 - Here to the end no change
01:54:871 (1) - Distance check fixed
Nice Dff Map~
Good Luck~!
zweiii wrote:
mod[General]
图做的越来越好了
这音乐不错有挺多想表现的地方的 都有点想做GD了。。。
[Normal]
[节奏]
感觉有些地方的快慢节奏的衔接不是很好 我也不太好下手改。
三拍子的那种回滑条 还有连续四分一的节奏 二拍子的回滑条。。。
或许整体缺乏一种统一的规律性 so sad...
00:49:156 加个note 转盘往后移一拍
01:57:966 (1) - 。。。。。
02:09:156 note
02:09:395 (1) - 开始结束位置?
02:24:871 (2,3,4,1) - 换点别的节奏
02:36:299 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -
[排列]
00:28:204 (3,1) - 对称到右边去好点 no
00:38:680 (2) - 加弧度 k
01:47:609 (2) - 加弧度 k
02:20:109 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 摆法感觉对应不上音乐 打起来也没什么感觉 no
我也摆不出太好的 节奏对称你可以考虑对称来摆
[打击音]
00:26:776 (3) - finish
00:30:585 finish
00:42:014 finish
00:45:823 ↑
00:53:442 ↑ 有些加了有些没加,感觉是加了会突兀
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - 会不会有点单调 来点变化?sr涨的太快了
01:06:776 finish no
01:16:537 去掉whistle 跟vocal
01:16:776 减点音量
01:17:014 whistle
01:18:204 whistle
01:19:156 ↑
后面的看着改吧。。偷懒
[Omoi]
[节奏]
00:36:776 (1,2,3,4,5) - 变成这样?SPOILER00:49:395 (1) - 这个转盘接的有点怪 考虑换成别的节奏不用转盘了? 你前三个带起了节奏这里一下就转盘了不太好或者
00:55:228 (8) - 移到这里会不会好点 00:55:109 (7,9) - 这两个的组合感觉上是挺好的 刚好这里00:55:347是新的重音起 停顿同处起感觉不错
01:54:752 (1,2) - 改成SPOILER感觉第二种接近点你的原意或者
01:57:966 (1) - 同上
02:02:966 (4) - 去掉? 给你一种节奏的参考
02:09:871 (1) - 这结束在哪里?02:12:014这好点?
[排列]
00:53:442 (1,2) - ctrl+G?
00:54:871 (6,7,8,9,10) - 这样如何?
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个我理解的节奏是 底底大底 放成大概下下上下的感觉会不会好点?大概这样?
01:08:680 (1,2,3,4) - 或许两个一样的pattern?:
01:09:395 (3) - ctrl+G?大概就这感觉 要改的话注意保留这个01:10:585 (8) - 的感觉
弄个反跳或者远端往回走什么的
01:17:252 (4) - 这个强调感觉不够 想办法强调下 我没考虑前后随便摆了个
01:18:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - 锯齿跳不太适合这儿
我理解的5678大概是这感觉 后面我还加成了连打 01:19:990不过这样后面节奏衔接不上
我主要是强调下5678那感觉就没了 您自己想办法搞搞吧
01:27:252 (4,5,1) - 这是不是换个转向好点?(顺逆时针)
4完了5大概到你后面黄色的1那里
02:01:299 (6,7) - ctrl+G?
02:02:490 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥 不适合这
02:04:871 (1,2,3,4) - 同上面问题 可以想点不同的表现方法
上下上下也比两个stack好点
02:05:823 (1,2,3) - 02:07:728 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 路线有点单调
02:19:871 (3,4,5,6,7) - 不妥!
02:24:395 (4) - ctrl+G再往左边移点?
02:36:776 (5) - ctrl+G?
[打击音]
试试加入drum (还有clap)
00:23:799 whistle?
00:26:776 小点音量的finish?
00:29:633 (1,2,3) - 这三个都同音量的whistle不太好 你可以尝试音量弄点变化
00:39:395 00:41:299这些位置可以试试用drum的音 就是音乐里低音懂的鼓点
00:42:014 (5) - finish?
00:48:680 (3,4,5) - 这三个可以试试懂懂怕 drum drum clap(soft?)
有挺多地方用drum的组合起来感觉不错
00:56:299 (1,2,3,4) - 懂懂怕懂?
00:59:156 (1,3,5,6) - 懂大 懂懂大?
01:08:680 01:09:395 finish
01:18:323 (2) - 去掉whistle
01:20:466 去掉whistle
01:28:680 (2,3,4) - 打击音改为01:28:680 01:29:156 whistle 01:29:633 finish
01:29:990 (5) - 音效略突出 小点声
01:30:585 (2,3,4,5) - 懂懂大懂
01:31:537 drum finish
01:32:014 去掉音效
01:32:490 whiste 该强调的地方没音效?
01:35:347 finish
02:13:204 (5,6) - 去掉 whistle
02:14:871 这个音效不太好 和前后衔接不好 具体没想到怎么改
02:15:347 finish
02:19:156 强调下
02:25:109去掉
02:38:204 finish
Thx for your modGloria Guard wrote:
SPOILERHi qkenan (:3」_)=3 Hi~
From my queue
[Normal]
00:23:442 (2) 4 grid down? http://puu.sh/2a1Fe seems it touched the score bar so moved a little down
00:36:537 (1) Spinner and the distance is too far away not so far, no change
00:43:561 (2,1,2,3) For the formation of the pattern a little bit better shape.. fixed
I think this pattern feels better shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a1Zs
00:52:966 add note? unnecessary, no change
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) Please make a neat rectangular shape. -> http://puu.sh/2a21n I like them being slant
01:11:537 (4) Ctrl+G? fixed
01:15:704 (2,3,4,1) distances don't fit. change please -> http://puu.sh/2a2nu fixed
01:30:109 (2) remove note Delay it by 1/2 beat
01:46:776 (1) Please keep notes audible when the song isn't totally silenced, increase the volume to at least 20%. fixed
01:47:252 The sound here is too small. this is part sound 40% up please fixed
02:00:109 (1) spinner next note is difficult, spinner end 02:00:109 please fixed
02:12:490 (1,2,3) Think about it a different beat than the beat. -> http://puu.sh/2a2Y5 no change
02:14:395 (1,2,3) ^ too changed some way
02:15:823 (1,2,3,4,5,1) Not a good pattern of flow changed
[Omoi]
00:19:157 remove break time fixed
00:21:061 ^ too
00:23:799 (3,4,5) Flow pattern of bad, would you change? -> http://puu.sh/2a3AT I cant see where it's bad
00:25:585 (3,4) ^ too ^
00:29:633 (1,2,3,4,) could be improved a little bit more. http://puu.sh/2a3FZ This is my pattern, no change
00:32:728 (1,2,3) i can't understand, why is the jump?.. there's 1 beat between the notes, why not jump?
I want to reduce the distance
00:40:109 (1,2,3) ^ too Seems to be difficult for many players. even added DT mod It's still very easy
00:44:871 (6,1,2,3) The flow pattern is bad. no change
00:51:061 (1,1) Same Normal no change
01:04:276 (3,4,5) Flow is very bad. -> http://puu.sh/2a3QI no change
01:06:537 (4,5,6,1) omg .. Jump here why? Please reduce the distance I think it's fine now
01:25:347 (4) Ctrl+G? no change
01:56:299 (1,2,3,4,5) why is big jump..? as above
02:07:728 (4,5,1) specing
02:12:014 (1) spin mistake
02:14:395 (2,3,4) specing ^^seems all unnecessary to change
P.S : More in need of improvement this map and The appearance of some of the patterns is not good.
Good luck
Thx for your mod ~lkx_Shore wrote:
SPOILER[General]
整体音量可以提高10~20%
[Omoi]
00:30:347 (4,1) - (4) - ctrl+>+> x216 y84 00:31:061 (1) - ctrl+h x284 y40
00:33:799 (5) - ctrl+h x344 y236
00:39:633 (3,4,1) - 00:39:633 (3) - x428 y320 00:39:871 (4) - x496 y264 00:40:109 (1) - x332 y232
00:57:728 (2) - x304 y84
01:04:395 (4) - x208 y68
01:27:252 (4,5) - 转完前面的三角以后觉得这挺绕的.-.
01:27:252 (4,5) - ctrl+g ctrl+h x132 y116
02:18:442 (5,6) - ctrl+g 02:18:918 (7) - x120 y24
总体来说有的改了有的没改……不过大多不顺手的pattern都做了调整
[Normal]
HP-1 fixed
[Other]
insane和normal之间要有一个hard...(biegaosuwo"Omoi"shihard)
最低难度要几星来着?忘了
Goodluck
Thx for your mod~Colin Hou wrote:
SPOILER[Omoi][Normal]
- 00:34:395 (1) - add note at 00:34:395 and start this spinner at 00:34:514, ending position do not need change.
- 00:41:061 (3,4) - 3/4 vocal is here and if you need consistence, you'd better do the same with 00:25:823 (4).
- 00:49:395, 00:49:633 - add notes and start spinner at 00:49:752, no change to the ending point.
- 00:55:109 (7,8,9) - not the right place for triple. remove 8 and consider add note at 00:55:704.
- 01:01:061 - add note and change the start point of the spinner to 01:01:180, no change to the ending point.
- 01:10:347 (6,7,8) - how about make the order slider-note-note
- 01:18:204 (1) - about the rhythm here, suggest you move this to 01:18:085 and adjust it's location, and other things such as new combo and spacing.
- 01:49:633 (3) - cancel the whistle on sliderbody.
- 01:51:061 (1) - ^
- 01:54:871 (1) - ^
- 01:57:966, 01:58:204 - add notes and change the start position to 01:58:323, let the ending point stay the same.
- 02:09:871 (1) - start this at 02:09:752. ending point still at 02:12:014.
- 02:12:252 (1) - new combo
All fixed
- AR-1
- 00:38:680 (2) - cancel the whistle on the sliderbody, when adding whistles to circles on sliders, you should select every single of them and do the thing.
- 00:41:061 (5) - ^
- 00:46:776 (2) - ^
- 00:56:299 (3) - ^
- 01:08:680 (3) - ^
- 01:31:537 (1) - ^
- 01:33:204 (4) - ^
- 01:49:633 (1) - ^
- 01:53:442 (2) - ^
- 02:02:014 (1) - ^
- 02:04:871 (5) - ^
- 02:05:823 (1) - ^
- 02:17:252 (1) - ^
- 02:21:061 (3) - ^
- 02:22:966 (3) - ^
- 02:24:871 (2) - ^
- 02:26:776 (4) - ^
- 02:28:680 (2) - ^
- 02:34:395 (6) - ^
- 02:40:109 (1) - ^
- 02:41:537 (3) - ^
- 02:00:585 (1) - new combo
- 00:34:395 (1,1) - the note is too far from the center of playground.
- 01:11:537 (4) - move this farther from the HP bar
这歌你都剪 GG
Modしてくれてありがとうございます!Sherry wrote:
mod[General]
02:19:871 : SBの歌詞がすぐ消えすぎて次の歌詞が早く入りすぎています。これを見つけてありがとう!fixed
[Normal]
00:22:966 (1) : まっすぐ上よりはちょっと右にずれているので、きれいにまっすぐ上にするためにx256 y88に移動してみてはどうでしょうか fixed
00:27:252 (1,2,3,1) : リズムのパターンがこれでひとつになっているので00:28:680 (1)でNCは少しおかしい感じがします。 00:27:252 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) のパターンを変えるかNCの位置を変えましょう このままでいいと思います
00:30:109 (4) : 曲的にくるっと回るスライダーよりははじめにあがって後は下がり最後にあがる印象があります。以下のような形なんてどうでしょうか? fixed
00:39:633 (3) :曲げましょう fixed
00:40:585 (4) : 00:39:633 (3)が終わった方向に飛ぶようにしましょう fixed
00:42:966 (2) : 曲線が少し汚いです。 00:42:014 (1) をコピーしてCtrl+<を押して配置したほうがいいでしょう fixed
00:47:728 (3) : 00:46:299 (1) と位置がずれています。 00:46:299 (1) をコピーしてCtrl + Hで配置しなおしてください
00:49:156 (6) :^ fixed
01:14:395 (1) : add finish? fixed
01:48:204 (3) : 次が上方向なのに01:47:609 (2)の終端の下に来るのはあまりよいとは思えません。 01:47:609 (2)の終端方向にしたほうがいいかもしれません。 x288 y252 ? fixed
01:47:609 (2,2,2) :ナンバーが見えなくなるほど重なっているのは少し汚く見えます。直せるなら直したほうがいいかもしれません(難しいかなぁ) 多分大丈夫だと思いますから
02:30:585 (4) : add finish? fixed
[Omoi]
00:40:109 (1,2,3) :ジャンプしすぎて空間が寂しくなっている気がします。 ジャンプしても難しくならない上に、遠いジャンプを期待している場所ではない気がするので少し近づけてはどうでしょうか?
01:18:085 (6) : remove
01:18:204 : add no change
01:35:109 (4) : 連打のほうがいいかも?menu -> Compose -> convert slider to Stream ...いいえ、このままのほうがいい感じです。
Thx for your mod~yurunneram wrote:
SPOILEROkay~ Lets go! >w<
General
Good thing that you did a story board. But if you can try making it move a bit and start at diff locations for the starting part or ppl will want to skip it. And nice colours~ I'm considering about it
Normal
00:44:871 (3) - Why don't you make it like 00:41:061 (5) (like in terms of how long it lasts and when it repeats) cuz rhythm wise it'll sound pretty good It wouldnt be suitable for the vocal or music.
01:10:585 (3) - make it like 01:08:680 (3) (again for da rhythm) As above, no change
02:00:585 (1,2,3) - Make it in a straight line maybe? If so the ①circle would be too far from centre...and may change many placings of following notes.. so no change
It was mapped very well. I thank you for not letting this be crap ^^
Omoi
00:44:395 (6) - Flip it vertically? seems unnecessary and current placing better
Not much. I enjoyed playing this one a lot Great job! Good luck for the mod!
You have been modded out by Yurun Neram
Thx for your mod~Frans Niko wrote:
SPOILERfrom my queue
General
Looks good
Normal
uhm
01:04:871 - New Combo for suggestion seems unnecessary
01:53:442 - can't get the rythme with 1/4 please change the slider fixed
02:13:918 - New combo (but same colour with the next note) to follow the vocal so no change
Omoi~
01:04:971 - New Combo (but same colour with the next note) seems unnecessary
omg all looks good
don't kudosu if this mod not help
KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:
稍微再提一点想法。Normal
- 00:46:776 (2)往上移动一格 没必要
- 01:22:014 (2)听起来有点奇怪。是不是跟后面的slider交换一下,再改一下位置? 原来的也无不妥,改后也没多大差别……所以没动
- 02:07:728(2)向上移动一格
- 02:09:156 (4)往上移动到(132,120)一到两格?保持距离一致 这边几个重新调整了下
Omoi
- 副歌部分同样的排列whistle的位置加的很随意。是故意这样的吗? 嘛……说随意的确有点,当初的想法主要是1/4的节奏要加,然后一些比较重的vocal会跟着加一点。
- 00:49:395 和01:57:966 用1/2速度的长slide代替spin感觉更贴切一点? 看起来没什么必要
因为我没有关掉Grid Snap,所以会有一点ds的误差。通常来说比如以1.0x来map的,偶尔有在0.9x~1.1x都是可接受的KaNe[YYK]YoMe wrote:
另外normal里面单点的距离在1.01- 0.98之间浮动。不过应该算不上什么大问题吧?
Thx for your mod~- t e n n y a - wrote:
SPOILERSame song www
Anyway I'll do m4m at your queue c:
[General][Normal]
- There's a lot unused transparency at your Lyrics picture and it's unrankable, please crop them u.u
[Omoi]
- 00:31:061 (1,2)- : I do suggest to make this slider straightly curved. like move last (1) slider point 2 grid up and last (2) slider point 2 grid up would nice. fixed
- 00:36:776 (1)- : Too fast for Normal diff >u<. at least there's 1 beat range between a spinner with new note on Normal diff :O I suggest to shorten the Spinner or Remove the Circle at here seems not so difficult ? kept for now
- 00:57:252 (1)- : add finish on slider head? fixed
- 01:29:156 (3)- : add finish on slider tail? unnecessary
- 02:00:585 (1)- : Same as 00:36:776- as above
- 02:05:823 (1)- : rather than Whistle, I suggest to add Finish here fixed
- 02:15:347 (2)- : add finish on slider head? fixed
- 02:22:966 (3)- : ^ fixed
- 02:28:680 (2)- : ^ fixed
- 02:38:204 (5)- : ^ fixed
That's all I can find, good luck! Nice song and map c:
- 00:41:061 (3)- : Whistle on slider reverse, remove clap at there >< not fit imo when I changed the ryhthm I just forgot the hit sound ><
- 01:35:109 (4)- : add finish on slider tail? fixed
Also thx for your mod~mercury2004 wrote:
modM4M
Color Guide
Red : Change it please
Purple : Highly recommended
Orange : Suggestion
General
In the lyric SB part. Crop the unused transparency part.
Strange that i could see this bookmark flap out. fixed
Normal
00:22:966 (1) - sounds better if you mute this note
00:28:204 (3) - missing head whistle? fixed
00:41:061 (5) - form perfect triangle? like this?[/color] fixed
00:59:156 (1,2,3,4) - change it to the otherside? In newbie eye they would see 300s instead of hit notes changed the placings of a few notes
01:06:299 (4) - finish/whistle tail?
01:18:680 - add note? unnecessary, no change
01:29:156 (3) - finish tail? ^
02:18:204 (2,3,4) - form perfect triangle? fixed
02:28:680 (2) - add finish/whistle?
02:38:204 (5) - add finish/whistle?[/color] these two done
Omoi
00:22:966 (1) - delete NC here and NC here 00:23:442 (2) - ?
00:28:204 (5) - This note kinda against the flow reverse it not so bad
00:32:490 (1,2,3) - jump kinda too big for slow pace song reduce to 1.8x
00:54:871 (1) - NC? fixed
01:06:537 (5,6,1) - move it closer to 01:07:252 (2) - ?[/color] fixed
01:18:085 (6,1) - a little bit confusing removed
02:20:823 (7) - move it to x204 y 328?
02:21:776 (3,4,5) - reverse this selection?[/color] no change
02:30:585 (6,7,1,2) - a bit confusing this ryhthm sounds better, kept for now
02:40:109 (1) - NC here? and del NC here? 02:40:823 (1) - fixed
Kudo or no kudo your choice.
Anyway thx for your mod ~Zhengster wrote:
SPOILERM4M
newbie modder alert !
[Normal]
00:48:100 - Add note to fit the vocals?
00:49:633 - Vocals start at 00:49:395, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:01:061 - Vocals start at 01:00:823, so move the slider there and end at the original time
01:11:537 (4) - have the slider repeat twice
01:57:966 - Vocals start at 01:57:966, so move the slider there and end at the original time
02:14:395 (1) - have the slider repeat twice
02:24:871 (2) - ^
Sorry but considering that it's Normal so all rejected due to difficulty
All these are suggestions ><
Zero__wind wrote:
SPOILER你好,我来干嘛的 你好,我来干嘛的
General
02:42:014 (1) - 建议30%音量normal finish 减低了音量,不过还是soft finish适合一些
Normal
HP+1
00:30:109 (4) - 弄得这么行为艺术还不包一下 http://puu.sh/2dt4F fixed
00:56:299 (3,1,2) - 没包好吧 感觉差不多……
00:59:156 (1) - 弄到正下方吧 这样可以保持和00:57:252 (1,2) - 相同的结构 你只需要把后面的1234一起逆时针转一点角度然后挪一挪就好 感觉差不多……
01:15:823 (3) - (151,209)【E和N里面最好不要违背DS+-0.03 fixed
01:17:014 (2) - (202,332) fixed
01:31:537 (1,2) - 倾向于拽着它俩一起挪到(396,328) fixed
01:44:871 (1) - 音量30%吧 +5%
01:53:442 (2,3,4) - j加whistle?【(4)的头】:arrow: fixed
02:15:347 (2) - 闹哪样 fixed
02:23:918 (1) - 包前一个滑条的跟随圈吧 还有就是和后面的那个note隔得略远了一点点 没动
02:26:776 (4) - spacing 好好好
02:35:347 (1) - ^ 好好好
Hard
00:57:966 (3) - http://puu.sh/2dtj1 上去了一点
00:58:918 (5) - 无理大间距 感觉没什么,整体右边移了一点
01:04:395 (4,5) - CTRL+G fixed
01:27:728 (1,2,3,4,1) - 等距 fixed
01:32:490 (4,5,6) - 这样半迁半就的真的好看么0.0 建议这样 http://puu.sh/2dtsZ no no no
01:47:609 (2) - 拉开点儿包跟随圈吧 就算不拉远弧度也要差不多是那么回事儿啊 no no no
01:51:418 (2) - ^ no no no
02:05:347 (3) - 加whistle fixed
02:22:014 (4,5) - CTRL+G 虽然我自己觉得不是很顺……但是你是第二个提了我就改掉吧
02:25:823 (3,4,5) - 随便弄了个形状转角度还不如都包跟随圈 个人感觉 我就喜欢这样w
02:42:014 (1) - 咋不先note再spinner了 当然 这个随意
差不多这样,嗯
谢star~ 我会注意的~Zweib wrote:
加油喔www
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