tiper wrote:

[Insane]

1. As I said I don't sure about 9AR. Hard has AR8, so I kinda had to use 9 here.
2. 00:56:946 (3) - I think you have to put note right here yea
3. 01:25:235 (1,2,3) - This pattern isn't flows and looks as well. Sadly, but I can't do it better :< dicussed iw with some people, we think it's a flow. very strange one, but readable and kinda cool flow o3o
4. 01:38:787 (2,3,4) - ^ ^~
5. 01:53:863 (3) - Note? sure

[Hard]

applied everything

Normal and Easy seems fine to me :>. Good luck!

Kodora wrote:

just quick look on it

[Easy]

00:31:706 (1,2) - не нравится мне эта обводка, но это имхо она читабельна, проверено

[Normal]

01:18:629 (3) - delete note? why? :V I feel like it fits with vocals perfectly

[Hard]

00:41:870 (2) - a bit down please for better flow why? I don't really want to change it because flow here is just a regular pattern :V

kinda reworked comboing in first half of the map

[Insane]

00:04:942 (5) - nc but it follows my pattern and vocals! I'd like to keep it the way it is now, sorry :<
00:06:127 (8) - nc begins here ^
00:13:073 (3) - ^ (also why finish?) because it's here in music :V
00:31:283 (3) - delete note, it sounds weird for me no way, there's a beat and I want to follow music!
00:31:960 (6) - ^ it's here for consistency with previous suggestion. if someone else will say - i remove it, tho
00:34:162 - 00:34:162 - pls dont leave empty holes on insane diffs trust me, after streams players need some rest D:
00:40:599 - delete note I'm not sure about this one. will keep it for now
00:43:479 - add note I can't hear any beats in music and it doesn't feel so needed here, sorry ;_;
00:51:017 (1) - too far for me this one is quite hard, yeah. In fact, i've got my own way of using jumps. (to be short <x2.0 for Hard / <x3.0 for Insanes)
00:52:118 - add note confirmed by some friends, we don't really need this cirle here. It'll be kinda overmap o3o
00:52:965 - ^ ^
00:57:115 - delete note but it has such a loud beat!
01:16:427 (6,7,8) - not sure about triple Maaaaagic, you knoooow <3
01:20:492 (3) - nc please it'll be too much NC spam here, don't you think so?
01:24:134 - add note not sure abouth this one, if someone else will point out it - i'll fix
01:33:027 (4) - forgotten clap supposed to have whistle here o3o

also better add spinner at the end disagree with you here. I dn't feel like i's necessary o3o

stupid mod, stupid modder, i should look more carefully on it

Gabe wrote:

BrujoAzul wrote:

Those things on the background, they look really like washing machines :I

HAAHHAHAHA, I approve.

BrujoAzul wrote:

Someone approves me, look, I'm cool now (?)

Kodora wrote:

congratz -Bakari- with first approval!

jkjk haha

also edit

[Easy]

01:28:623 (2) - keep logic in hs. if you begin with claps, so ceep with it. Clap here, not whistle. sure

[Insane]

00:38:990 - я же говорил, не оставляй дырок в инсе, ноту сюда нет! см. ниже
00:39:329 - и сюда нет! тут эе нечего поставить + явно идет по ритму тут!

sorry for too sharped, i just worry about this a little bit

Sonnyc wrote:

HAI HAI HAI

Easy:

-- Imo, Tick Rate 1 seems better since this is an Easy. but it will ruin consisstency in Slider Tck Rate between diffs!

00:33:061 (1) - Start at 00:33:400 to fit the lyric. but it fits with vocals quite alright "so" starts here
01:20:831 (2) - You've not placing Whistle around here, so delete here as well. she places it here to follow music, I guess it fits with music, sorry

Normal:

00:33:061 (1) - Start at 00:33:400. same reason as normal. we're doing it for consistency!
01:47:934 (4) - Well.. you've blanketed 01:46:918 (2), which lead to an inconsistent spacing. So, I suggest to delete NC at 01:46:579 (1), and add NC at 01:47:257 (3). I've fixed spacing here!

Hard:

00:40:853 (5,6) - At least, making these distance around 1.1 would be necessary. checked the whole part. fixed spacing
01:09:989 (1) - Delete whistle to emphasize more on 01:10:667 (3)?
01:18:798 (3) - Whistle sounds loud here. Delete it? I'd keep both this and previous whistles because they are ok to me :V
01:19:137 (1) - Start at 01:19:475. but it fits with vocals even here. so, i'm keeping it! sorry

Insane:

00:51:017 (1) - ctrl+G will be a better flow, and more easier to hit imo I'd like to keep it this way! In my opinion it's easy to read and gives flow here a bit more enjoyable
01:19:222 (7,9) - Consider Deleting these? Well, the stream felt quite overmapped but besides that, this way may emphasize the lyric in 01:19:306 better. You may want to start NC there, also. disagree with NC, fixed notes, tho

Kodora wrote:

/me slaps -Bakari- don't you just enjoy hurting me? ;_;/

[Hard]
00:05:450 (6) - whistle to beginning? feels kinda weird here, for me

Strawberry wrote:

umm before bubble.. b-b-bubble? O/////O
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1. the offset on the first timing section should be 3579. as i heard during test the current sounds really a bit delayed..(the second timing should be also reduced 8ms on offset imo.. that would be 35425. Did -9 because it sounds better to me!
2. can't find out any reason about why you'd like to use tick rate 2 in Easy & Normal diffs. the hitsounds on slider ticks really noisy to me.. anyway i strongly recommend to use tick rate 1 since it's totally enough..No way! That's my style, I always use same tickrate for all diffs. So, sliders follow music closer and I think it feels better here!

　
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1. 01:37:093 (4) - the shape looks bad.. how about that? -> http://puu.sh/2xhtB I'd say that current shape is easier and it looks neater to me, sorry
2. 01:43:868 - during this section, can you try to aviod whistle+finish on N:C1 plz? they're such nettlesome and totally same on my heard however the volume is diploid.. would be much more comfortable if you remove all finishes or all whistles then we would have only kept one kind on them. I'd like to keep it for now, this [part is kiai and it supoosed to be EPIC and LOUD AND WITH RAINBOWS UNICORNS and other epic things. So, I'm keeping it!

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can't sure some points so once you did these changes call me back then, i hope to discuss something further about details on these diffs.

-Bakari- wrote:

next time you'l see any missed claps, slap me

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

Andrea wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

I see what you did there.

Andrea wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

I see what you did there.

Aleks719 wrote:

General

^ how irony huehuehue
why different sizes of sb names :< that's my bad, sorry
why miku on bg? why not? What's so wrong with using muku as BG picures? She's cute.
better add some words where is a collab in this map. other diffs were made by you? there is also no info about it. I guess this explains everything. As for [Easy], we have SB names

Hard
00:46:604 - missed downbeat makes me sad it is here on purpose. I start mapping when vocals start. So, i don't feel like changing it.

Normal
00:57:276 - eww, that useless inis http://puu.sh/2AamX (this comment also goes to Easy) ]inis? lol
01:16:078 (2) - missed finish (this comment also goes to all diffs, cuz you missed it everywhere) didn't feel like adding it. so, let's use whistles here, instead!
01:30:308 (1) - raising/decreasing volume by sections is useless, since both spinner hitsounds are silenced. remove sections plz (this comment also goes to Hard and Insane) indeed

Easy
00:55:073 (1) - same about different volume on spinner yeaaa

poke me when you'll finish with stuff above

Kodora wrote:

Congratz, baka!

Kodora wrote:

Congratz, baka!

gokugohan12468 wrote:

and HAPPY BRRITHDAY, GABE!!!!!

BounceBabe wrote:

I always understand "Clubbing's masturbation on the floor" lol