1. поздравляшка появляется очень быстро, сделай фейд ин штоле (если это тебе что-нибудь объяснит)
2. имхо у тебя большой белый тик на киаях сбивается о3о с начала первого киая сними галку
3. удали DJ THT meets Scarlet - Live to Dance (Nightcore Mix) (-Bakari-).osb потому что нутыпонел
4. collab в теги потому что изя это коллаб :о
5. как насчет сделать киаи фонтан (завершить первый на 00:44:919 и потом начать на 00:46:274 ) ?

1. HP+1 (1-4-6-7 это как-то несбалансировано)
2. вай тикрейт 2 :U насколько я знаю 1 в изе не анранк, плюс они НУ ОЧЕНЬ шумные и выглядят ниочень

1. 00:04:603 and 00:05:958 - эти места должны быть замапаны :< спокойная часть, а мало битов только тут, потом идет сплошное 1/2
2. 00:15:783 - <фореверэлон_клап.жпег> почему здесь только один клап, а потом вистлы? или отсюда сноси клап или дальше сделай вместо вистлов клапы

1. 00:26:963 (4) - why repeat :< it fits nice but it's easy and for such a high BPM le repeats is hard + it's the only one slider with repeat :U
2. 00:32:045 (2) - how about doing a blanket with (1)?

1. 01:54:033 - le note here maybe? if yes then begin le spinner at 01:54:371 (1) -

1. имхо св слишком быстрая :с
2. 00:13:411 (1,2) - нк поменяй местами ((1) слишком рано)
3. 00:20:526 (2) - как насчет изогнуть его в другую сторону? http://puu.sh/2d6Xy
4. 00:44:241 (1) - драм клап на конец? если нет, то финиш (в изе и харде финиш есть)
5. 00:52:034 (6) - клап пропустил? о3о
6. 00:54:744 (4) - ^
7. 01:29:640 (5) - клап на конец вместо начала
8. 01:34:044 (4) - клап опять пропущен о3о
9. 01:34:383 (1,2) - нк поменять местами :<
10. 01:37:093 (1,2) - ^
11. 01:39:803 (1) - удали нк :с
12. 01:40:481 (3) - сюда его
13. 01:42:514 (1,3) - нк поменять местами
14. 01:43:869 (1) - отсюда снести его (нк эти поправить ты должен, потому что у тебя на киаях сбивается большой белый тик, и если ты его пофиксишь, то все мои комбо получатся по большому белому тику \о3о/)

1. OD-1, баланс и все дела (сейчас у тебя 1-3-7-8)
2. 00:11:040 (3) - изогни его в другую сторону! имхо это добавит +100 к флоу :< http://puu.sh/2dwQT
3. 00:14:428 (6) - нк (у тебя очень длинная тут часть без нк + тут другая часть уже начинается в музыке)
4. 00:46:952 (1) - вистл не нужен на репите
5. 01:11:345 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ууу, рандом комбоинг эвривеар ;_; нк должно быть здесь на каждом втором белом тике :<
6. 01:27:607 (1,3) - как насчет Ctrl+G на каждом?

1. 00:32:553 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1) - как насче на всем этом сделать постепенное увеличение громкости? о3о
2. 00:36:110 (2) - с такой высокой SV этот слайдер лежит очень близко, на грида 3 его вверх
3. 01:15:410 (3) - эээ что он там делает? о3о дистанс снап 1.0 и двигай его на x:468 y:92
4. 01:22:525 (6) - клап пропущен?
5. 01:53:355 (1,2) - на этих двоих софт самплсет

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ -Bakari- ~

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Need to consider
Purple : Just suggestions

[Insane]

1. 00:05:280 (6) - More better rhythm,like this. I disagree with you here, I feel like this slider perfectly follows vocals and makes my flow better!
   
2. 01:53:863 - Try change to triple notes to here,sound much better. Disagree with you! What's more it helps me to keep patterns consistent, so I'll keep it, sorry.

[Hard]

1. 00:34:925 (2) - Remove this circle,sound much better. it follows vocals here, so I'm keeping it

[Normal]

1. 01:19:306 (1) - The spinner start on 01:19:475 - is much better. actually, it isn't! There're some vocals at 01:19:306 -

[Easy]

1. AR,HP,OD+1 for better diff spread. no way, I really don't understand why do you want me to raise AR/HP/OD! It will be too much stress for beginners, and will ruin my balance! :<

OK ~ Hope this can help you ~

Good luck with rank ~

BrujoAzul wrote:

Those things on the background, they look really like washing machines :I

Sieg wrote:

Insane:
00:39:160 (3) - 180:276 http://puu.sh/2vyvu fits better imo but it will ruin my triangle pattern! >3</
01:15:410 (3) - http://puu.sh/2vyCa ? thisfile is empty :V

-Bakari- wrote:

01:15:410 (3) - http://puu.sh/2vyCa ? thisfile is empty :V

1. As I said I don't sure about 9AR.
2. 00:56:946 (3) - I think you have to put note right here
3. 01:25:235 (1,2,3) - This pattern isn't flows and looks as well. Sadly, but I can't do it better :<
4. 01:38:787 (2,3,4) - ^
5. 01:53:863 (3) - Note?

1. 01:11:344 (5) - Why did you miss music beats?(middle of the slider? There's no vocal!
2. 01:33:027 (2) - ^
3. 01:38:109 (3) - ^

tiper wrote:

[Insane]

1. As I said I don't sure about 9AR. Hard has AR8, so I kinda had to use 9 here.
2. 00:56:946 (3) - I think you have to put note right here yea
3. 01:25:235 (1,2,3) - This pattern isn't flows and looks as well. Sadly, but I can't do it better :< dicussed iw with some people, we think it's a flow. very strange one, but readable and kinda cool flow o3o
4. 01:38:787 (2,3,4) - ^ ^~
5. 01:53:863 (3) - Note? sure

[Hard]

applied everything

Normal and Easy seems fine to me :>. Good luck!

Kodora wrote:

just quick look on it

[Easy]

00:31:706 (1,2) - не нравится мне эта обводка, но это имхо она читабельна, проверено

[Normal]

01:18:629 (3) - delete note? why? :V I feel like it fits with vocals perfectly

[Hard]

00:41:870 (2) - a bit down please for better flow why? I don't really want to change it because flow here is just a regular pattern :V

kinda reworked comboing in first half of the map

[Insane]

00:04:942 (5) - nc but it follows my pattern and vocals! I'd like to keep it the way it is now, sorry :<
00:06:127 (8) - nc begins here ^
00:13:073 (3) - ^ (also why finish?) because it's here in music :V
00:31:283 (3) - delete note, it sounds weird for me no way, there's a beat and I want to follow music!
00:31:960 (6) - ^ it's here for consistency with previous suggestion. if someone else will say - i remove it, tho
00:34:162 - 00:34:162 - pls dont leave empty holes on insane diffs trust me, after streams players need some rest D:
00:40:599 - delete note I'm not sure about this one. will keep it for now
00:43:479 - add note I can't hear any beats in music and it doesn't feel so needed here, sorry ;_;
00:51:017 (1) - too far for me this one is quite hard, yeah. In fact, i've got my own way of using jumps. (to be short <x2.0 for Hard / <x3.0 for Insanes)
00:52:118 - add note confirmed by some friends, we don't really need this cirle here. It'll be kinda overmap o3o
00:52:965 - ^ ^
00:57:115 - delete note but it has such a loud beat!
01:16:427 (6,7,8) - not sure about triple Maaaaagic, you knoooow <3
01:20:492 (3) - nc please it'll be too much NC spam here, don't you think so?
01:24:134 - add note not sure abouth this one, if someone else will point out it - i'll fix
01:33:027 (4) - forgotten clap supposed to have whistle here o3o

also better add spinner at the end disagree with you here. I dn't feel like i's necessary o3o

stupid mod, stupid modder, i should look more carefully on it

Gabe wrote:

BrujoAzul wrote:

Those things on the background, they look really like washing machines :I

HAAHHAHAHA, I approve.

BrujoAzul wrote:

Someone approves me, look, I'm cool now (?)

Kodora wrote:

congratz -Bakari- with first approval!

jkjk haha

also edit

[Easy]

01:28:623 (2) - keep logic in hs. if you begin with claps, so ceep with it. Clap here, not whistle. sure

[Insane]

00:38:990 - я же говорил, не оставляй дырок в инсе, ноту сюда нет! см. ниже
00:39:329 - и сюда нет! тут эе нечего поставить + явно идет по ритму тут!

sorry for too sharped, i just worry about this a little bit

Sonnyc wrote:

HAI HAI HAI

Easy:

-- Imo, Tick Rate 1 seems better since this is an Easy. but it will ruin consisstency in Slider Tck Rate between diffs!

00:33:061 (1) - Start at 00:33:400 to fit the lyric. but it fits with vocals quite alright "so" starts here
01:20:831 (2) - You've not placing Whistle around here, so delete here as well. she places it here to follow music, I guess it fits with music, sorry

Normal:

00:33:061 (1) - Start at 00:33:400. same reason as normal. we're doing it for consistency!
01:47:934 (4) - Well.. you've blanketed 01:46:918 (2), which lead to an inconsistent spacing. So, I suggest to delete NC at 01:46:579 (1), and add NC at 01:47:257 (3). I've fixed spacing here!

Hard:

00:40:853 (5,6) - At least, making these distance around 1.1 would be necessary. checked the whole part. fixed spacing
01:09:989 (1) - Delete whistle to emphasize more on 01:10:667 (3)?
01:18:798 (3) - Whistle sounds loud here. Delete it? I'd keep both this and previous whistles because they are ok to me :V
01:19:137 (1) - Start at 01:19:475. but it fits with vocals even here. so, i'm keeping it! sorry

Insane:

00:51:017 (1) - ctrl+G will be a better flow, and more easier to hit imo I'd like to keep it this way! In my opinion it's easy to read and gives flow here a bit more enjoyable
01:19:222 (7,9) - Consider Deleting these? Well, the stream felt quite overmapped but besides that, this way may emphasize the lyric in 01:19:306 better. You may want to start NC there, also. disagree with NC, fixed notes, tho

Kodora wrote:

/me slaps -Bakari- don't you just enjoy hurting me? ;_;/

[Hard]
00:05:450 (6) - whistle to beginning? feels kinda weird here, for me

Strawberry wrote:

umm before bubble.. b-b-bubble? O/////O
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1. the offset on the first timing section should be 3579. as i heard during test the current sounds really a bit delayed..(the second timing should be also reduced 8ms on offset imo.. that would be 35425. Did -9 because it sounds better to me!
2. can't find out any reason about why you'd like to use tick rate 2 in Easy & Normal diffs. the hitsounds on slider ticks really noisy to me.. anyway i strongly recommend to use tick rate 1 since it's totally enough..No way! That's my style, I always use same tickrate for all diffs. So, sliders follow music closer and I think it feels better here!

　
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1. 01:37:093 (4) - the shape looks bad.. how about that? -> http://puu.sh/2xhtB I'd say that current shape is easier and it looks neater to me, sorry
2. 01:43:868 - during this section, can you try to aviod whistle+finish on N:C1 plz? they're such nettlesome and totally same on my heard however the volume is diploid.. would be much more comfortable if you remove all finishes or all whistles then we would have only kept one kind on them. I'd like to keep it for now, this [part is kiai and it supoosed to be EPIC and LOUD AND WITH RAINBOWS UNICORNS and other epic things. So, I'm keeping it!

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can't sure some points so once you did these changes call me back then, i hope to discuss something further about details on these diffs.

-Bakari- wrote:

next time you'l see any missed claps, slap me

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

Andrea wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

I see what you did there.

Andrea wrote:

Gabe wrote:

Ranked

I see what you did there.