Hi, modding from popner's queue O: Sorry for shitty english!
Easy00:08:076 (4,5) - Usually, stacks in easy diffs are confusing for newbie players, I suggest you to change it
00:08:510 (5,1) - Make a blanket with them
00:11:554 (4,5) - The same about stack
00:14:163 (1,1) - This overlap is a bit ugly...
00:22:858 (1,3) - The same, move (3) a bit
00:32:858 (3,4) - This stack, you know. I suggest you to put the (4) in 84|80
00:44:163 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a better square with these, you should put the notes here:
(1) - move to 192|96
(2) - move to 372|116
(3) - move to 352|296
(4) - move to 172|276
(5) - move to 192|96
This will flow better and it is more nice to see!
01:00:684 (4,1) - A blanket?
01:02:532 (1) - This spinner is too short. Replace it with a slider, but if you fix, start it on the red tick, in 01:02:641 !!
01:04:380 (1,2) - You can make these better!
01:07:423 (3,4) - I don't like how they overlap... It's really ugly
01:08:945 - I'd add a note here
01:14:597 (3) - This is covered by the previous slider, I think it's unrankable. Unfortunately I don't know how to fix it
01:15:032 (1) - Please move the final point to 320|236. If you do this, make a pattern like this
Normal00:11:771 (5) - The repeat is partially covered by the previous slider and I think it's unrankable, you should move it like this:
00:35:249 (3,1) - You can make a better blanket with these
00:40:902 (2,3) - They are too near in my opinion, it's hard to read them in a Normal
00:43:728 (1) - This too. I'd make an unique long slider instead of a 3 repeat slider
01:04:380 (1) - Put the final sliderpoint to 361|168 for a perfect simmetry
01:11:554 (1) - This is asymmetric, unfortunately I don't know how to fix...
01:18:619 - Here you can start a spinner and end it here: 01:23:728
Hard00:02:858 (2,4) - Try to use ctrl+g on these sliders
00:08:076 (4) - Ctrl+g
00:11:336 (2) - Spacing error. Move this 1 grid left
00:14:597 (2) - move to 320|228 for a better pattern
00:17:206 (5) - 252|128
00:19:380 (6) - 200|80 for a better flow
00:32:641 (3,4,5,6) - A pattern like this? (6 is stacked under 3)
00:37:858 (4) - Why isn't this curved like others? It also overlaps with two sliders!
00:40:467 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these sliders
00:44:597 (4,1) - Overlap... Maybe try to curve (1) like other sliders
00:46:336 (3,5) - Another overlap, this time try to curve (5)
00:53:076 (7) - Try ctrl+g
01:08:293 (4,5,6) - I don't like how you stacked these, try to make a triangle or something...
Tari's Kichigai00:02:967 (4) - Move to 205|81
00:11:336 (3) - This is a bit ugly... You can surely improve it
00:31:554 (4,5) - Please blanket these notes, it would be more funny to play
00:34:380 (3) - Move final sliderpoint to 180|65 to make this perfectly parallel with the following slider
01:15:467 (2,3) - They have different spacing. Make the spacing like these 01:15:032 (1,2)
01:18:619 - I'd add a longer spinner here (end it in 01:23:728)
Sakurasou00:00:250 (1,2) - These have different spacing compared to 00:00:684 (2,3) - Please fix!
00:03:728 (1) - move to 256|284 for a better flow
00:08:293 (5,6,7,8,9) - You can surely make a better square and then a better pattern.
(5) - Put this in 376|176
(6,7,8) - Put these three notes in 308|196
(9) - Put this in 320|272
00:19:597 (1,2,3) - Overlap...
00:20:902 (5,6,7) - Another overlap. Put (6) in 256|36. Sometimes you have to ignore spacing in order to make better patterns!
00:24:163 (6,1) - Move to 256|120
00:30:902 (3) - This is not symmetrical with the center... I'm not an expert and I don't know how to fix it, sorry
00:34:815 (4) - Curve this and make a blanket
00:35:684 (1) - I think you should remove whstle from here, it's inaudible
00:43:728 (2,3,4) - Select the whole pattern and put it two grids down
00:44:815 (2,3,4) - The same, select the whole pattern and put it two grids up! (This is for spacing)
01:04:815 (4,7) - Ctrl+g on these sliders
01:07:858 (2,3) - Curve the slider and make a blanket
01:10:902 (6,7) - Move these 2 or 3 grid down
01:11:771 (2,4) - Ctrl+g on these?
01:18:619 - Add a final spinner. End it in 01:23:728
Well, I hope this helps. This map needs some work but I'm sure you can do it
I'll star it because you starred my map