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ZUN - Phantom Ensemble

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Zerostarry
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July 4, 2009 at 2:26:28 AM

Artist: ZUN
Title: Phantom Ensemble
Source: Perfect Cherry Blossom OST
BPM: 156
Filesize: 4303kb
Play Time: 03:57
Difficulties Available:
  1. Lunatic (5 stars, 715 notes)
Download: ZUN - Phantom Ensemble
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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To be Approved, not ranked.
lukewarmholiday
Oh joy another approved only touhou map :eyeroll:
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
Graving Reviving this cause i feel like it >:( :)
YellowerYoshi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
3 things

Notes aren't snapped
Offset needs to be -15 from what it is anyways
00:59:99 (1) - i feel as though this has 1 too many repeats.
Cyclone
One thing i forgot to mention. You should add a fade out of the mp3. If you can't, let me know and i'll do it. It may take a slight readjustment of the offset though.
Skyripper
background thing

02:58:82 (1,2) - move this over a little ... it's getting overlapped by the slider slightly

fun mappp!
how do you bubble an approved map anyway? I have no idea. lmk when you get the background thing fixed and you want this relooked over (after you move to pending)
Rolled

Skyripper wrote:

fun mappp!

Pretty awesome. I have absolutely no problems with it and I'm for approving it 100%. May this be the first out of 3 required bubbles for approval (I think that's how it works)

edit: Apparently this is pending cyclone's fade-out for the mp3 so consider this bubble live after the mp3 is updated (I will forget otherwise)
Cyclone
http://up.ppy.sh/files/09.phantomensemble.mp3

And i'm killing Rolled's bubble until he checks the timing for the new mp3.

EDIT: Also... if you WANT, i can give you a preview of my skin i'm making which is heavily PCB and SWR based, and you can use what you want for this map. I'll have to see if i can bug dumpster to make the countdown for me before i send it to you, since i've decided to use the prismriver sisters as the countdown.
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyclone
I have issues with this spinner:
03:07:95 (1) -

And if i happened to have given you an MP3 that is too loud, let me know(i may just have my headphones up really loud or something though)
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
Took out the spinner. I hate blank spaces >:

Lowered the volume and timed again. orz. Approve pls.
lukewarmholiday
01:24:91 (1) - small over space, I don't know if its because you spaced the 1/4ths a bit further but It messed me up consistently
01:37:22 (1) - ^
03:07:51 (1) - Stacking makes this off when playing, just an aesthetic nitpick.

it think you have small jumps elsewhere but those are what combo broke me
Topic Starter
Zerostarry

lukewarmholiday wrote:

01:24:91 (1) - small over space, I don't know if its because you spaced the 1/4ths a bit further but It messed me up consistently I overspaced it a tad so it would be symmetrical
01:37:22 (1) - ^
03:07:51 (1) - Stacking makes this off when playing, just an aesthetic nitpick. Eh..it doesnt bother me that much

it think you have small jumps elsewhere but those are what combo broke me
Kumiho

Cyclone wrote:

http://up.ppy.sh/files/09.phantomensemble.mp3

And i'm killing Rolled's bubble until he checks the timing for the new mp3.

EDIT: Also... if you WANT, i can give you a preview of my skin i'm making which is heavily PCB and SWR based, and you can use what you want for this map. I'll have to see if i can bug dumpster to make the countdown for me before i send it to you, since i've decided to use the prismriver sisters as the countdown.
wait....is it the skin i requested? o_O
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
Gonna grave this until Cyclone's countdown arrives
Cyclone
Are you sure? I have no estimate on when it'll be complete.
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
Revived, approve pls.
Mafiamaster
I have a suggestion though!
02:42:80 (1) through 03:04:53 (5) - Maybe flip all of this horizontally since it's the exact same thing as the beginning?
Great map btw
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Gabi

Zerostarry wrote:

I guess it wouldn't hurt..

Flipped
lol....
Skyripper
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mogsy
Popping because updating will pop it anyways. Tell me when you're done fixing it so I can give you your bubble back.

-00:45:11 (8) - New Combo mark.
-00:46:07 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-00:46:64 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:13:38 (1,2) - Whistles on these.
-01:13:76 (3) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:17:034 - This is a more appropriate place to start the Kiai Time.
-01:26:26 (8) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:27:41 (14) - Remove the Finish.
-Place a beat 1/4 after 14 . The way you ended it before sounds far too abrupt.
-01:27:61 (1) - End in the same place, start 1/4 later.
-01:38:57 (8) - New Combo mark goes here.
-01:39:919 - Same deal, beat goes here.
-01:39:91 (1) - Start 1/4 later, end in the same place.
-01:53:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This feels really weird.
-02:04:72 (1) - Add in a Finish and a soft inherit timing section.
-02:21:64 (7,8) - Remove the Whistles from these beats, it's mapped to nothing and thus sounds atrocious when you accent them like this.
-02:29:34 (1) - Add a Finish.
-02:42:99 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-02:43:18 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-02:45:11 (6) - ^
*-02:52:03 (4,5) - I dunno why, but I'm not a fan of how this flows.
-02:53:95 (1) - Add a Finish.
-03:02:03 (8) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:02:99 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:03:57 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:15:30 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:15:49 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:20:11 (1) - Add a Finish.
-03:27:61 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:27:80 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:32:41 (1) - Finish goes here.
-03:33:957 - Kiai Time should start here.
-03:38:57 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:39:34 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:40:11 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:41:45 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:41:64 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:43:18 (11) - ^
-03:43:95 (15) - Add a Whistle and a Finish to this.
-03:44:14 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:46:265 - Kiai Time should start here.
-03:50:88 (9) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:51:64 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:52:41 (5) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:53:76 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:53:95 (2) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:55:49 (11) - New Combo mark goes here.
-03:56:26 (15) - Add a Finish.
-03:56:45 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
-03:57:03 (1) - Add a Finish.

Structurally, there were a very small number of iffy parts. Number-wise, I needed to make corrections. Hitsound-wise, I needed to make some corrections. I still like the map, though, very fun to play.
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mogsy
I'll just upload the old one. Sorry for being a tad confusing.
Download: ZUN - Phantom Ensemble (Zerostarry) [Lunatic].osu

EDIT: Changes made successfully this time, bubbled!
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Zerostarry
Update: +5 ms. Bubble popped
Cyclone
It's dangerous to go alone.

Take this!
tieff
Mogsy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
Yuukari-Banteki
ok your hitsounds need serious work

1. there shouldnt be a chain of more than 20 notes without any hitsounding in there
2. six whistles in a row is bad, that is NOT how whistles were intended to be used
00:27:61 (4) - this should be up a little bit to line up with 3 ^_^
fix ur break
02:44:53 (4) - move down a tad
ok the middle and end was actually ok for hitsounds, its just the opening and when the opening repeats that needs work

also what, why cant i BATstar this o0 sorry i WANT to give it priority but my stars wont fly right now...
Cyclone
Because it's already approved
Larto
I ninja'd her.


...By 30 minutes.
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