This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年8月7日 at 上午 12:44:06

Artist: Tamaki Nami
Title: Realize
BPM: 136.15
Filesize: 4331kb
Play Time: 03:06
Difficulties Available:

1. Genesis (4.83 stars, 648 notes)
2. Melody's Easy (1.65 stars, 174 notes)
3. Normal (4.42 stars, 296 notes)
4. v2b's Hard (4.79 stars, 438 notes)

Download: Tamaki Nami - Realize
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy:by melody321 and deepsea
Normal:by deepsea
Hard:by v2b
Genesis(Insane):by deepsea

A_A

Finally all done.

Thanks melody and v2b for a difficulty, ign james and cyclone for timing.

And thanks every testers and modders.

Tadoritsuku basho saemo wakaranai
Todoku to shinjite ima
Omoi o hashiraseruyo

i mapped a tv size of this before, so lemme map one difficulty if its ok with you lol

James wrote:

Tadoritsuku basho saemo wakaranai
Todoku to shinjite ima
Omoi o hashiraseruyo

i mapped a tv size of this before, so lemme map one difficulty if its ok with you lol

sure lol

goooooooo

[Easy]

00:12:58 (1) - 1 square right.
00:44:08 (x) - Add a note maybe?
01:40:70 (1) - Add a finish.

[Hard]
00:15:66 (1) - 1 square right.
01:40:70 (1) - Add a finish.
02:19:92 (3) - Move this here -> 02:09:81 -> Sounds really good -> And fix spacing.
03:05:96 (1) - Add a finish.

[Genesis]
00:54:11 (4,5,6,8,7,9,10) - This spacing is too hard imo.
00:55:76 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - ^
00:54:44 (8) - Remove 8 - Sound at the same moment of 7.
03:06:18 (1) - Add a finish.

Anyway this diff have much jumps, and i don't like much
And, adjust breaks
Anyway, awesome map, STARRED.

Love the song, love the map
Starred

Hello,


~Comments here are not final decisions, you can always decide by yourself~


[Easy]

00:37:91 (3) - spacing.
00:56:64 (1) - you might want to change these for a different slider design or somthing else, so it doesnt get repetitive.
01:10:08 (1) - put on top of fading two, d.snap following beats.
01:20:87 (3) - allign with fading (3)
01:27:48 (1,2,3,4,5) - Compared to the patterns before, this one is a bit hard.
01:31:89 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Stacks on easy, if you are doing this, try making the pattern easier.
01:36:96 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can already see the tears of noob players with this pattern.


[Normal]

00:09:05 (4) - New combo, put on top of fading (1), d.snap following beats
00:18:52 (6) - allign with 00:17:86 (5)'s end
00:19:63 (1) - allign with fading (7)
00:36:37 (2) - allign with 00:35:49 (1)'s end
00:45:84 (1,2,3) - Start on top of fading (1)
01:11:40 (5) - i feel this should be like 01:10:74 (4) - and (6) like (5)
01:22:86 (5) - new combo
01:35:19 (6) - new combo, 01:35:41 (1) - undo new combo
02:01:85 (2) - allign with 02:01:41 (1)'s end
02:29:83 (1) - move this so it doesnt overlap (3)
02:36:00 (5) - allign with 02:35:34 (4)'s end. That should allign it with following (6)
02:37:98 (1) - this hits the returning arrow a bit too fast, but i guess it's ok.
02:45:69 (4) - new combo, 02:45:91 (1) - undo new combo
02:59:79 (4) - new combo


[Genesis]

00:14:56 (9) - new combo
00:18:97 (11) - new combo, 00:19:63 (1) - undo new combo, 00:19:85 (5) - new combo, 00:20:51 (1) - undo new combo.
00:26:24 (1) - allign with 00:26:02 (11) -
00:26:68 (1) - allign with fading (11)
00:27:12 (1) - put on top of fading (11)
00:28:44 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - start this on top of fading (1), then snap/allign the following beats.
00:36:81 (5) - new combo.
00:40:56 (7) - new combo.
00:44:08 (8) - new combo.
00:48:71 (7) - new combo.
00:49:15 (4) - spacing.
00:50:91 (5) - new combo.
00:59:06 (3) - this will confuse a lot of players, try putting it on top of fading (1) so it follows the previous combo pattern.
01:08:10 (6) - new combo.
01:08:98 (7) - new combo.
01:09:86 (7) - new combo.
01:11:62 (7) - new combo.
01:12:28 (6) - new combo.
01:22:86 (7) - new combo.
01:26:60 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - allign with 01:26:16 (1)'s end.
01:27:48 (1,2,3,4,5) - allign with fading (7)
01:27:48 (1,2,3,4,5) - allign with 01:29:69 (5)'s end.
01:30:13 (6) - new combo.
01:31:01 (1) - if you want you can new combo this, but you can also leave the previous combo end the pattern.
01:36:08 (1,2) - I say nono to this. Delete this beat 01:36:08 (1) - and leave 01:36:30 (2) -
01:36:96 (4) - new combo.
01:39:82 (7) - new combo.
02:01:41 (4) - new combo, 02:01:85 (1) - undo new combo
02:04:50 (5) - out on top of fading (3)
02:05:16 (6) - new combo.
02:08:68 (5) - new combo, 02:08:90 (1) - undo new combo.
02:10:44 (5) - new combo.
02:15:51 (5) - new combo, 02:15:95 (1) - undo new combo.
02:17:49 (6) - new combo, 02:17:71 (1) - undo new combo.
02:19:26 (6) - new combo, 02:19:48 (1) - undo new combo.
02:22:78 (6) - new combo, 02:23:00 (1) - undo new combo.
02:24:54 (7) - new combo, 02:24:98 (1) - undo new combo
02:24:98 (3,1,1,1) - ok lets say we dont change this and let it be... then pls do somthing about this: 02:26:75 (1,2,3,4,5)
because it comes right after the slider's jump and it doesn't even have an "easy to follow pattern"
If you want an opinion then i would say make this whole pattern: 02:26:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - follow an anti-clockwise order.
02:28:95 (1) - undo new combo.
02:30:71 (1) - undo new combo.
02:31:37 (4) - new combo.
02:32:70 (6) - new combo.
02:36:00 (1) - reverse selection to play the 3 sliders smoothly.
02:43:49 (2,3) - allign diagonally with 02:43:05 (1) -
02:45:25 (2,3,4) - allign (2)-(3) diagonally with 02:44:81 (1) -
02:45:69 (4) - new combo.
02:47:24 (12) - new combo.
02:47:68 (1) - allign it with the rest of the beats.
02:54:73 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this feels awkward, maybe spacing is too low.
02:55:61 (7) - new combo.
03:05:30 (4) - new combo.

Nice song and cool beatmap, good job.

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Sorry for put it for long time.

Fixed as some suggestions, thank you guys.

-10 to -20 offset dunno shrug w/e lol

[Melody]
00:10:80 (1) - finish
00:17:85 (1) - ^
00:36:36 (3,1,3,1...) - make sure the 3 lines up with the 1 so it looks continuous
00:49:58 (1) - finish
you need hitsounds in here
01:04:12 (2) - move 1/4 earlier
01:04:56 (3) - move 1/2 earlier
same for the next set of three
01:08:97 (2) - stack under 1
01:10:73 (1,2) - use belzier curve type
01:14:26 (1) - finish
01:18:12 (2,3) - set this up like 01:04 set and extend 3 by 1/2
01:28:36 (1) - end 1/2 earlier and finish
01:31:89 (1) - use belzier curve type and then restack 2
01:33:65 (3,4) - ^
01:40:70 (1) - no jumps in the easiest diff
01:42:46 (1) - finish
please try to add another pattern or two to keep it interesting and hitsound this


[Easy]
00:18:51 (1) - remove new combo
00:31:95 (1) - delete and replace break
00:58:73 (2) - ^
01:17:79 (1) - finish
the beginning needs more hitsounds but otherwise nice map :3


[Hard]
00:14:33 (4) - finish
00:58:73 (5) - delete and replace break
01:17:79 (1) - try putting a kiai section here
01:22:85 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - hitsounds plz
01:24:84 (7,8) - stacking
01:30:12 (1) - finish
02:21:24 (1) - ^
02:38:87 (1) - ^


[Genesis]
01:16:02 (1) - finish
01:16:90 (3) - ^
01:42:02 (2) - finish the end
01:43:13 (6) - finish the start
01:43:57 (7) - finish the end
03:00:91 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - put these all on the same line
03:01:79 (1,1) - can you merge the two spinners?


have a nice pretty star

melody和easy 先略过

关于hard 我的建议是把一些note密度较高 难度较大的地方改掉 把这个难度作为normal处理 再重做一个hard
你现在的这个hard难度不平衡 大部分都是normal的级别 所以最好再做一个不是死跟歌词的hard

应你的要求我就nazi了
Genesis:
00:31:95 (1) - 00:33:06 (11) 与之前的pattern重复了 可以排成一个下凹的弧形
00:45:17 (3) - 00:45:84 (8) 不好看 其实这地方可以稍微无视一下ds
00:54:54 (9) 歪了 对齐
00:56:30 (9) ^
01:31:01 (7) new combo 取消下一个new combo
02:55:18 (4) - 02:55:84 (9) 这里也是 不是一定要遵守DS 而且你那么排 打起来很不顺

你hard的HP drain rate比genesis还高 不知为什么 >_>

初步nazi也就这些 等你都做完了我再进一步nazi

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I fucking love Dipsy streams!

p

Download: Tamaki Nami - Realize (deepsea) [v2b's Hard].osu

+1

nazi mod

[Melody's Easy]
01:21:746 (2) - 1gird right
01:23:068 (1,2,3) - distance same as the front
01:34:967 (4) - 1gird left?
01:41:577 (3) - 1grid right

[Normal]
01:26:153 (1) - i think this spinner end of 01:27:035 better
02:18:155 (3) - 1tick left?
02:29:833 (1) - what this note?_?

[V2b's Hard]
awesome

[Genesis]
i love it >A<

Star'd

updated with fixes, thank you for stars and moddings.

Also combined [Melody] and [Easy] to [Melody's Easy], added [v2b's Hard].

@_@

[Melody's Easy]
00:53:10 (1) - Nazi. Left a bit.
03:04:42 (5) - Add whistles like 03:02:66 (3).

[Normal]
00:17:62 (4,5) - Nazi. Spacing.
01:00:15 - Redo break.
02:10:66 (2) - Clap one end.
02:11:32 (3) - Clap on return.
02:11:98 (4) - Clap on start.
02:19:80 (3,4) - Spacing.
02:37:98 (1) - No. Remove return, end slider here 02:38:42 and add note here 02:38:64.

[v2b's Hard]
All cool.

[Genesis]
It's rock!

Star, intresting map.

Done.

[Melody's Easy]
59:27 (3)-> Align with (1,2)

[v2b's hard]
1:18:11(2)-> Move down a bit.

[Genesis]
33:05(11)-> Need some slider/circles after this circle. I recommend adding a slider like 31:50(1).

Nice song~
Starred.


Edit:
+2.

minyeob wrote:

[Melody's Easy]
59:27 (3)-> Align with (1,2) I replaced this part.

[v2b's hard]
1:18:11(2)-> Move down a bit. Done

[Genesis]
33:05(11)-> Need some slider/circles after this circle. I recommend adding a slider like 31:50(1). I feel weird like this. >_>

Nice song~
Starred.

Kudosued

[Melody's Easy]

00:15:64 (1) - I don't think this needs to be a new combo.
00:21:37 (1) - ^
00:23:13 (1) - ^
00:24:89 (1) - ^
00:28:42 (1) - ^
00:30:18 (1) - ^
00:31:94 (1) - ^
01:35:40 (1) - Spacing is a little different from 4 but plays ok, up to you

Maybe use storyboard to tell who mapped which part~

[Normal]

00:31:94 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe move this to the center and use the same pattern as the other 2 before it? Consistency and I think it's a good pattern

01:16:45 (1)
01:16:89 (1)
01:17:33 (1)

^ I think they should be in the same combo

01:19:54 (1) - In my opinion using finish here sounds better and is more consistent
01:25:71 (9) - I think removing this slider and setting one circle under 8 is better, the rhythm feels a little rushed with that slider
01:36:06 (4) - You used whistles on the previous 2 patterns so maybe you can make it consistent here as well.
01:36:28 (5) - I think a finish is nice here.
02:12:64 (1) - I found this spinner's finish odd, maybe make it silent .-.

[v2b's Hard]

Nothing I could find o3o

[Genesis]

Rename this song into Justice to Realize @3@

I'd suggest lowering the normal hitsound volume, it feels really heavy in the beginning part since you have so many long streams.

00:26:21 (1,1,1,1,1) - I think these 5 can be in one combo.
00:53:98 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Funny shape D: nothing against it though.
02:00:08 (1,1,1) - Maybe same combo for these 3 jumps?
02:01:84 (1,1,1) - ^
02:07:13 (1,1,1) - ^
02:08:90 (1,1,1) - ^
02:11:76 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Rainbow! (｡･ω･｡) I'd say same combo but I really like how this looks with the colors, I think it's ok.
02:15:95 (1,1) - I think these 2 jumps can be in one combo too but this is up to you. Though I'd really like you to change the 3 jumps into the same combo.
02:36:00 (1,1) - Remove new combos maybe.
02:42:39 (1,1) - ^
02:44:15 (1,1) - ^

I like the song though I haven't heard it before xd, have a star.

Fixed most thing and keep few things, also adjist some new combos.

Thanks. @_@

Small fixes in irc then bubble!

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good~~~

Rank (after moving one single note so it's not offscreen. Nothing big)

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