This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, October 05, 2009 at 6:32:40 PM

Artist: SoundTeMP
Title: Purity of Your Smile
Source: Ragnarok
Tags: Ragnarok sohuhard SoundTeMP
BPM: 132
Filesize: 7676kb
Play Time: 02:26
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (4.74 stars, 402 notes)
2. Normal (3.83 stars, 225 notes)
3. sohuhard (4.73 stars, 382 notes)

Download: SoundTeMP - Purity of Your Smile
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Changelog/ Modders
+DawnII's Timing
+Remaked some parts in Hard
+Decreased overall difficulty
+Alace Fixes. <3
+Kiou2 and JJJ Fixes.
+info added in SB
+thanks ztrot
+remaked some part
+Henkie fixes.
+happy30 & Lesjuh mods
+SB finished.
+v0xtrot mod
+SFG, Vytalibus, m980, awp, Cyclone, Takuma mods
+Hanyuu, osuplayer111, DJP, proseyu, mtrn,
+Gabi, Metroid, JIn, mods
+thanks Alace! the hitsounds are awesome!
+added sohuhard's diff and also added SB~ =)
+Uber Thanks to Matma for the lesser reso.
+modded(finally)
+Followed m980 and Symbolic's mods
+Followed sesito71's mod
+star2 reduced
+Tieff's Love Check =3
+lots of mod done ~
+Change 1/4 notes to slider~
+followed some of peppy's mod,
+THANKS TO -SIN- for the Sakura template- love love =3
+renewed the SB!! yay!
+Uber thanks to m980 <3
<3 sohuhard would like to thank the ff people:
WyndII(lol)
Alace
osu_CN_yaya
leimiliya
Crazy Jay
Mystearica
abalee

offset 1838
Overrall normal 5
hard 7
I will check spacing after you fix those stuffs
Nice map~

hey Alace! =D
I change offset. Nothing change at all xD. I mean no resnaps.
I decreased overall.

<All diff>
From 02:26 i think bpm is slow done do ypu feel that your notes are faster than music
maybe need one pro to time this section and i think soft hitsounds more fit the song

<Normal>
00:34:33 (4) down a bit
00:35:01 (5) more far from (4) plz
00:59:11 (1) hard to read (slider is too short)
01:32:51 )2) (3) and 01:33:20 (1) (2) i missed here (spacing)
I suggest change the spacing from 01:31:83 (1)~ 01:32:74 (2)
01:45:92 (1) oh no XDDDDDD (super long slider)
<Hard>
00:11:49 (1) move to the red line 00:11:61 and fix the spacing for (1)~(5)
00:48:20~00:48:88(2) spacing
00:52:74 (2) spacing
00:57:06 (4) maybe new combo
01:04:22 (2) move to the red line 01:04:338 and fix the spacing for (2)~(6)
01:55:19 (4) more far from (3)

The same i did not be nazi
Nice job <3

I think the offset can use -4ms? Not a big deal though.

Like Alace said, it slows down at the very end. Not for very long, however, but it doesn't hurt to add another section.
65 BPM/146,394 Offset

Thanks DawnII for the BPM
Te hee Thanks Alace for calling Dawn

Thanks DawnII`s timing It is really hard to time

I got a new timing for you
but it is still off IMO
need a pro anyway

BPM Offset divisor
65.00 146394 1/8
58.00 148470 1/6
50.00 149159 1/8 (1) (2) 1/6 (3)~(5)
40.00 151524
I up a .osu

<Hard>
spacing fix (look at picture)



Download: SoundTemp - Purity of your smile (WyndII) [TIMING].osu

Im done!

fixing!

Some modding in irc is done.

timing need double check.

star it.

It's a good map

Nice song

Shoot star

ok here your mod hope you like it
Normal
00:12:29 (2) - put this under 00:11:38 (5) - unlock grid snap if you have to
00:12:74 (3) - put this under 00:11:83 (1) - ^ so it looks nice and neat
00:16:38 (1) - make the start and the return 00:17:747 lvled nice and neat
00:19:33 (2) - move this over to the left a little so that's it even with00:19:79 (3)
01:07:06 (2) - move over to the right a little so that is even with the end of 01:06:38 (1)
01:16:15 (2) - ^but the end of 01:14:56 (1)
01:42:74 (6) - line it up with 01:42:52 (5)
from01:52:74 (1) - to01:58:20 (1) - do like 00:12:29 and make it neat
i'll get back to you on hard so wait for me i might have it posted before you get back
Z's last word's Very nice with the timing. I like this map! A big star for you!

You are epic win for mapping an RO song. Even more instant because this is one of the most awesome songs from it.

Normal
00:34:021 (3) Move back 1/8 beat.

Hard
00:34:118 (1) Move back 1/8 beat.

Heh, that's odd, the one thing I find in both difficulties is basically the same note. This map is great, and definitely needs more attention. Star for you!

modded hard in irc

Lower HP Drain on both difficulties slightly.

Normal:

00:37:29 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:48:65 (2) - Back by 1/8.
00:51:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:24 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:06 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,3,1) - Confusing pattern, and way too many combo markers.
01:00:02 (2) - New combo.
01:07:74 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:16:83 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:30:24 (1) - Remove new combo, unoverlap it.
01:32:17 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:45:92 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:48:65 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
01:53:65 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:55:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:57:29 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:58:20 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:14:79 (1,1) - Remove new combo.
02:21:15 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
02:24:11 (1) - Remove new combo.
Boring and anticlimatic ending.

Hard:

00:04:56 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:10:02 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:13:65 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:17:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:02 (6) - Add new combo.
00:21:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:23:65 (4) - Add new combo.
00:32:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:35:47 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:38:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:39:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:40:70 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:43:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:44:56 (10) - Add new combo.
00:50:02 (1,1,1) - Remove new combo.
00:51:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:52:97 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:53:42 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:33 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:54:79 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:55:24 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:57:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:02:29 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:07:74 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:10:47 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:31:83 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:15 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:36:61 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:37:06 (1) - Remove new combo.
I modded the rest, but I refreshed and lost it by mistake. It was just removing new combos, you can take guesses where they go from the above modding.

I wonder how long it took to storyboard all that snow.

*stars*

lol, It was just removing combos.

Behonkiss wrote:

I wonder how long it took to storyboard all that snow.

*stars*

lol. I used design to SB. O.O

Those are not snows, those are xherry blossoms glowing >.< it doesn't snow in amatsu... -___- but whatever snow snow snow~

Good map after a little test. stard

Here's my small mod, there wasn't much to do, so i had to look very critically. These are just suggestions on how the map will look better in my eyes, it's not necessary to change (everything).

Normal:
00:29:11 (5) - Move this note slightly up so it lines the end of slider (4) horizontally
00:52:29 (2) - Put this in line with the previous note
00:53:65 (4) - ^
00:54:33 (1,2,3,4,5) - If this stream is meant to go slightly down, it's ok (but than you should place 5 like 1 mm lower) and else put them in 1 horizontal line
01:07:29 (3) - Stack this on the end of slider (1) so it's vertically lined with (2)
01:17:74 (6) - Put this in a vertical line with the previous note (just sliiiightly to the right)
01:24:56 (1) - Maybe put this note slightly up, so it stacks with (3) of the previous combo (01:23:20)
01:34:56 (4) - Looks better if you move this a bit to the right, so you will have a cube of (1,2,3,4)
01:42:29 (4,5,6) - Put these 3 notes in a straight vertical line (and try distance snap, i get a different spacing)
01:48:65 (2) - Move this slider slightly down so it's horizontally lined with (1)
01:54:56 (1) - Stack this note on (3) of the previous combo, and do the same with following notes
02:26:39 (5) - Move this slightly to the right so it's lined vertically with (4)
Tip: you can also use grid snap everywhere, just an idea

Hard:
00:21:83 (3) - Move this slider slightly to the right it's lined with (2) vertically
00:23:65 (1) - Slightly up, for horizontal.. lining (I keep using that word, but I don't know an other word for it sorry )
00:38:87 (4,5) - Line these two vertically with the previous 3 notes
00:40:01 (7,8...12) - Check this stream again, It's tilting to the left
01:01:83 (5) - Maybe 1 cube to the left so it lines (1)? [grid 3]
01:24:90 (3) - Slightly to the right, so it lines (2) vertically
01:33:19 (8) - Slightly to the left, so it lines (9) vertically
01:51:83 (5) - Slightly up, lining again, now with (4)
Same tip as Normal

The rest si good enough lol, these isn't much more to mod than note placing, so I had to do it once again
You deserve a star (even if you didn't change anything of my mod xD)

Hope it get's ranked soon, I like it *o*

I change this part 01:00:697 ~ 01:03:197 coz abalee commented that she/he can not see a note because of the skinz.

Thanks Henkie.

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Download: SakuraHana_irc-20110810-113915.osu

Good map, here is some critism to help you improve the map.
This is what I got after playing Hard:
- In the section where you start using normal sounds, some clap sounds sounded pretty random to me or just not fitting. Also, lower the sample volume a bit because the samples sound too hard for the song.
01:29:334 - this section needs some soft whistles
01:55:015 (4) - Place this one ON (3), the pattern looks pretty ugly and I hit it too early because it was too close to (3).
02:11:379 - Ugly stack
02:11:834 - This section needs some clap sounds on the beat.
02:26:394 - Use a closer distance spacing here. It makes it easier to notice the BPM slows down.

Try to improve it in some way looking at these points. Good luck, have a star

That's one cool storyboard.

WTF cool SB. I don't have the patience for such an effect T_T
However, please change the start of the .osb's filename to SoundTemp instead of Park Jin-Bae.

Normal

01:16:38 (3) - Align to the slider.

Also, last spinner is unnecessary.

Hard

01:55:02 (4) - My suggestion - make a jump, yes, but one that is further from 3 and NOT so far from the next combo.
02:31:52 (1) - Shorten to 02:33:39. Add a finish hitsound if you would like.

Bubble popped. Apologies. Star is given.

Ok.

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This song is CONSTANT BPM. Remove all non-inheriting sections and use:

BPM 132
Offset 1831

Also reduce the size of your star2.png or remove it altogether. It is way too big.

My storyboarding tips...

1. Reduce the file size for the text.

2100x2100 PNG images are a tad large, aren't they? Reduce this file's file size if you can, I doubt we need anything too big anyway.

2. Redesign your introduction and use fade-outs.

The text as it is now is weird. I suggest you redesign the introduction text, and do a centralised fade-out and enlarge scale at the same time, giving it that POOF effect. If you want an example, you can refer to my SMAP - Dear Woman storyboard, and look at the code.

3. Introduce a story of sorts to your SB.

I mean, I seriously don't mind a bit of E-drama in RO, and it should be quite easy to obtain sprites for use, no? Add a few character sprites and weave a love story out of the tune. =3

4. Change your .osb's filename.

I mentioned this last post so I wonder why it hasn't been done. Or .osz may be screwing with me and I'm blissfully unaware.

2100x2100 is unrankable.
aim for <640px in either dimension.

I removed the last part because the timing is really off. I did some SBing and I dunno, it's undefinable. And I got the pix in google. . Man, I suck at photoshop too I added some notes.

I also reduce the size of star2.

oh, almost forgot. There's a poring in the end.

[Normal]
01:42:29 (4,5,6) - Fix your spacing here.

<Storyboard>
The images on near 00:38:20 are pretty annoying and head-aching to look at. Don't scroll them too fast. I suggest you scroll them only half-way, towards the center, with the fade out so it'll look slow and nostalgic.
Poring image needs to be scaled WAY DOWN.

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Star'd. Just plain amazing. I don't even want to mod this map. Really good job.

This SB has officially been me-enhanced ;D The love story was a concept, but like all things art concepts can still withstand a few changes as long as the general theme (love) is kept to.

However, this is only star-able quality still. I noticed a few things in the mapping (now that we're done about SB).

Btw, the gal Priest at 01:45:92 is posing in a much-too-sensual way... lol. Puppy love (like chibi-style lovey-lovey thingies) is fine; this rather H pose seems to be carrying the theme a tad too far ;x You might want to consider changing that image for something else. Also, the image at 01:48:42() is more like an action pose, to make it more precise this is coming from Lee Myung-Jin sensei's manhwa. Again, puppy love will do just fine, try deviantArt if Google fails you.

For the map, I suggest a titlecard, like the one I attached below. Do your own tweaks with this titlecard, and forgo the one you had at the end of your SB.



Question - I didn't see why this tune is 3/4. I suggest moving it back to 4/4. Also offset at 1835.

Normal
00:44:56() - After this, shouldn't there be a break?
01:07:74 (1,2) - Okay, this is a bit picky, but to me it's quite obvious. Can you move this 1 so it fits the spot where the previous slider-start from the previous combo was? Adjust the rest of the patterns after this one.
01:24:11 (5,1) - Shift this pattern, such that after 5, 1 fits the spot where the previous combo's 3 was at. I suggest moving both beats concurrently and do minute adjustments from there WITHOUT THE USE OF GRID SNAP.
01:27:29() - Break after here.
01:39:56 (3) - I think you might wanna make this straighter. When adjusting this slider you should adjust until you see only a single, straight line on your editor.
01:54:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Yea, the whole combo is a bit kinked. As above, if you want notes that keep repeating, click into the previous circle or slider start/end points directly in the timeline.
01:58:20() - And after this, there should be a break. It's... gone.

Hard
00:30:92 (3,4) - Not quite spaced like in 00:30:24 (1,2). Adjust 4 so it's more consistent with 1-2
00:33:65 (3) - Fit the 3 into the slider's end by clicking onto it.
00:33:99 (1) - Fit this better with 2's slider end by shifting it. Screw spacing here and turn DS off when adjusting this. I can't say for sure how you want to adjust this, but I suggest making a hitcircle at the spot in the timeline where the slider ends, then move the circle in the timeline into where this object was, effectively replacing it.
00:35:92 (4,5) - Please don't be a dick on a sweet map. I suggest using grid snap, at grid level 1, and move 4 and 5 exactly 4 squares right/left of the dead center.
00:39:78 (7) - New combo.
00:42:97 (3,4) - This is not quite the same as 1-2 and has indirectly affected the rest of this combo. Please adjust 4 so it's closer to 3. But if this is intentional... then it's fine
00:45:69 (3) - 1-2 is not = 2-3. Please adjust 3 closer to 2.
01:11:38 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - The spacing for this entire combo is inconsistent. Correct this.
01:14:56 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ^
01:24:33 (1,2,4,5) - Okay, I must say this. I don't mind if there's a spacing change on 1/2 for jumps, but for 1/4s it is extremely dick move-tastic. My suggestion is to push the 2 and 4 closer to the 1 and 5 respectively, so the only jump that needs to be tackled is 2-3-4.
01:35:47 (1) - Not behind the last combo's 14. Adjust this.
01:39:56 (1,2,3) - I'd do an equilateral triangle with this, not an isosceles. What this essentially means is that 2 and 3 should be spaced as far as 1 and 2 are. Adjust.
02:02:28 (4) - Click into 1.
02:24:78 (1,2,3) - Inconsistent spacing.
02:26:15 (4) - Click this into 2.

Right click the last break to make it disappear.

Starred.

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Normal
Being the easiest difficulty, I don't think there should be jumps/spacinginconsistencies in this
00:33:99 (3) - Move to the right
01:01:61 (2,3) - ^

Hard
00:08:65 (1) - UNSNAPPED SLIDER
00:34:33 (2) - Spacing Inconsistency

Well.. Yeah

SB is genius. Gogo Pasonia!

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m980 wrote:

Normal
Being the easiest difficulty, I don't think there should be jumps/spacinginconsistencies in this
00:33:99 (3) - Move to the right
01:01:61 (2,3) - ^

Hard
00:08:65 (1) - UNSNAPPED SLIDER sha-pu
00:34:33 (2) - Spacing Inconsistency

Well.. Yeah

SB is genius. Gogo Pasonia!

Done! So its ok that I don't need to star my map?



rankuuuuu

Since there were stuff you didn't understand at 01:31:83 (1,2,3,4)...
Download: SoundTemp - Purity of your smile (WyndII) [Normal].osu

DONE

I already gave my map a murasakihoshi. m980.. mod it xD

TEDI: Update

DONE

your map was fine and i coudln't really find anything wrong, but id like to point out one thing in hard

[Hard]
01:55:01 (4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move the 4 closer to the stream.

But thats up to you to decide, you might have it further cause of mapping style idk.

other then that, i like your map, nice SB

Starz*

Thanks Gabi!

Shouldn't the title of the song be properly capitalized? ("Purity of Your Smile")

Starred. I'll check back.

Title is now, fixed Thank you mtmcl!

Just some small things I noticed D;

00:34:33 (4) - I'd rather whistle on this over clap. Same thing with the clap you used on that sliders end on the blue tick (00:32:06 (1). I didn't like it, but you know, it's up to you. It just felt out of place.
00:36:38 (2) - Finish? ;o
00:50:92 (3) - I hate to mod placement but, please put this between 1 and 2.

Also, I really don't like the font, or the harsh fade-in/fade-out you used for your titlecard. Maybe do the appearance/disappearance softer while using a nicer font on the card itself? Just a suggestion though, not many people would really care. Also, it get's overridden on normal, so perhaps put it more to the left?

Anyway, I still love this map, and I'd star it more if I could. Good luck getting this ranked! ;D

On what diff?

It's on normal. Ok! I did what u said. Kudos fer ye

v0xtrot wrote:

Just some small things I noticed D;
Also, I really don't like the font, or the harsh fade-in/fade-out you used for your titlecard. Maybe do the appearance/disappearance softer while using a nicer font on the card itself? Also, it get's overridden on normal, so perhaps put it more to the left?

But I like the Font! T.T

Sorry for forgetting to tell you which difficulty I meant. >_> Once again, good luck with the map.

Nice song and accompanying storyboard - just clean up the "RAGNOROK" logo if you could.

[Normal]
I'm a bit reluctant to allow a "Normal" difficulty to have so many short, rapid sliders (almost impossible to sightread). Things such as 00:59:11 (5,1) - you would expect to see on Hard at the least. But I'm not gonna bust your balls on it because the beatmap is otherwise nice.
01:45:01 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20) - This combo should be broken up into smaller combos.

[Hard]
00:46:60 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not on my watch. You got some nasty slider overlap going on here; that 4 is pretty unreadable due to the score explosions.
01:20:23 (2,3,4) - move these down a bit imo - slider overlap under the R is a bit ugly.
01:35:46 (1) - This' gotta move; it's behind a score explosion and can't be read.
02:11:37 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - SO PRETTY

Thanks awp!! so much

Too much nazi, I don't think I'll find anymore stuff with my modding ability...

...but since I love the song, star anyway. lol.